Just did the 7k for now. There's a good chance I'll come back for the 5k later.
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Given the intro section, with both LNs and a massive slowdown, OD 9 seems slightly harsh for this map. I would still keep the OD on the higher end, however, due to the rest of the map being largely rice.
Preview point not snapped to anything. Not sure if this is unrankable or not however, so ignore this if it's fine.
Notes Mod - I didn't look at these as hard as I probably should have, so there's probably several things that escaped my attention.
00:05:626 - add? similar to 00:06:254 -
00:08:139 - add? similar to 00:08:767 -
00:09:395 - ^
00:10:347 - remove?
00:15:834 - add? similar to 00:14:892 -
00:20:057 (20057|3,20102|4,20147|5) - maybe try placing this on 567 instead? (and moving the note below this as well in that case)
The above section mostly disregards pattern in these suggestions. Feel free to reject if you like your current pattern.
00:26:359 - / 00:26:396 - Fix snapping
01:06:652 - add? drum keeps going here
01:19:447 (79447|6) - note feels out of place by itself, even though I understand what you're trying to do here.
01:49:525 (109525|6,109552|5) - any particlar reason to switching the positions of these 2 notes?
03:44:107 (224107|4,224185|4,224264|4) - /03:46:620 (226620|6,226698|6,226777|6) - Given how calm this section is, these jacks really don't go along with the song. Note, I am not saying this for 03:49:133 (229133|4,229211|4,229290|4) - and future jacks, as the song begins audibly playing its own drumroll at this point.
In general, for this slow section of the song, it is strange how it has the highest note density in the song, given that it is also one of the slowest sections in the song. In addition, the slow scroll speed makes this section even more difficult to read.
SV Mods
00:25:706 - This is really really really slow. Almost painfully so. Especially as a transition to the next section.
In general, this first section, while appropriately slow, feels slightly TOO slow.
00:46:463 - While it does get noticeably faster, it feels rather insignifcant. You can afford to bump this up more (probably).
01:02:165 - Entering painfully slow territory again.
03:12:850 - Feels slightly weird for everything to just suddenly slow down like that. Maybe halt (nearly completely) and speed up again? Or possibly just slowdown from current speed. The direct jump is kinda jarring.
03:14:107 - This is faster than what is immediately before this. You should either make this the same, or make what comes before speed up to this scroll speed. (This is a suggestion, harsh wording sorry -_-. Not sure how else to say this.)
03:34:211 - You can probably start this section on a slightly higher scroll speed? Its already fine as is.
04:15:677 - I like.
I didn't look at the patterns too closely, but they felt somewhat arbitrary to me when I was playing through this. They might be perfectly fine though.
Given the intro section, with both LNs and a massive slowdown, OD 9 seems slightly harsh for this map. I would still keep the OD on the higher end, however, due to the rest of the map being largely rice.
Preview point not snapped to anything. Not sure if this is unrankable or not however, so ignore this if it's fine.
Notes Mod - I didn't look at these as hard as I probably should have, so there's probably several things that escaped my attention.
00:05:626 - add? similar to 00:06:254 -
00:08:139 - add? similar to 00:08:767 -
00:09:395 - ^
00:10:347 - remove?
00:15:834 - add? similar to 00:14:892 -
00:20:057 (20057|3,20102|4,20147|5) - maybe try placing this on 567 instead? (and moving the note below this as well in that case)
The above section mostly disregards pattern in these suggestions. Feel free to reject if you like your current pattern.
00:26:359 - / 00:26:396 - Fix snapping
01:06:652 - add? drum keeps going here
01:19:447 (79447|6) - note feels out of place by itself, even though I understand what you're trying to do here.
01:49:525 (109525|6,109552|5) - any particlar reason to switching the positions of these 2 notes?
03:44:107 (224107|4,224185|4,224264|4) - /03:46:620 (226620|6,226698|6,226777|6) - Given how calm this section is, these jacks really don't go along with the song. Note, I am not saying this for 03:49:133 (229133|4,229211|4,229290|4) - and future jacks, as the song begins audibly playing its own drumroll at this point.
In general, for this slow section of the song, it is strange how it has the highest note density in the song, given that it is also one of the slowest sections in the song. In addition, the slow scroll speed makes this section even more difficult to read.
SV Mods
00:25:706 - This is really really really slow. Almost painfully so. Especially as a transition to the next section.
In general, this first section, while appropriately slow, feels slightly TOO slow.
00:46:463 - While it does get noticeably faster, it feels rather insignifcant. You can afford to bump this up more (probably).
01:02:165 - Entering painfully slow territory again.
03:12:850 - Feels slightly weird for everything to just suddenly slow down like that. Maybe halt (nearly completely) and speed up again? Or possibly just slowdown from current speed. The direct jump is kinda jarring.
03:14:107 - This is faster than what is immediately before this. You should either make this the same, or make what comes before speed up to this scroll speed. (This is a suggestion, harsh wording sorry -_-. Not sure how else to say this.)
03:34:211 - You can probably start this section on a slightly higher scroll speed? Its already fine as is.
04:15:677 - I like.
I didn't look at the patterns too closely, but they felt somewhat arbitrary to me when I was playing through this. They might be perfectly fine though.