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It was fun, like really fun. I hardly play 5K at all and it's a shame there isn't more 5K mapper.

However...

The fuck is this from 03:44:228 - to 03:53:024 - ? If anything it just looks and feels like a filler pattern which does not follow the intensity of the song as opposed to the rest of the map.

There are also a few weird SVs but nothing game breaking (but for quality you should smooth them out, most notably during the part that starts at 03:12:814 - )

Ye just my 2 cents, no kd.

Fun map nonetheless, keep it up and go for rank!
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PyaKura wrote:

It was fun, like really fun. I hardly play 5K at all and it's a shame there isn't more 5K mapper.

However...

The fuck is this from 03:44:228 - to 03:53:024 - ? If anything it just looks and feels like a filler pattern which does not follow the intensity of the song as opposed to the rest of the map.
Some of the players that i ask them to testplay, seems fine to them, unlike the old pattern of this diff, which has mini-jacks that made some players failed or if they passed, their accuracy would go down. So I nerf it and it makes more sense imo. But for now, i''m just keeping them.

Also if you feel that it is a filler, not really imo.

PyaKura wrote:

There are also a few weird SVs but nothing game breaking (but for quality you should smooth them out, most notably during the part that starts at 03:12:814 - )

Ye just my 2 cents, no kd.

Fun map nonetheless, keep it up and go for rank!
Done.

I'm glad you like it :) Thanks.
Yeah I promise I'll get this rank someday.
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Hi James :)
oh i know this is already in my old queue xD sorry im too lazy with that old queue x..x

MOD READY


Mod by Request on



5K

[1|2|3|4|5]


[General]

Metadata/Song Setup
  1. add Cytus to the Tags since it's on Cytus too

[Alcyone]
01:02:819 (62819|4,62819|3) - maybe delete one of it since it just 1 kind of violin
01:22:081 (82081|0) - consider delete this since you didn;t layering hithat, the other part that 2 note is just when there's a kick and this one has no kick
01:28:207 - add 1 more note for the snare, it just... uhh.. the other snare is 3 note and now just 1
01:29:856 - 01:29:935 - 01:30:013 - if you hear it carefully there's a sound here
01:32:448 - missing note for kick, it's inconsisten since you layer it on 01:31:820 (91820|4) -
01:37:867 - missing note for the melody
01:38:181 (98181|3) - ghost note, delete please, there's no sound, not hithat or even synt
01:41:008 - there is a snare here, you must layer it since you are currently following the snare
01:45:327 - lol missing note for the synt please, if you know this then it's inconsisten since you layer the synt on 01:46:113 - this part
01:49:411 (109411|0,109464|1,109516|4,109568|0,109568|3,109621|2,109673|4,109725|3,109778|0,109830|1,109882|3,109882|4,109882|0) - consider Ctrl H this for hand balance, cuz 01:49:019 (109019|0,109097|1,109176|2,109254|0,109307|1,109359|2,109411|0,109464|1,109568|0) - this is ..... uhh !
02:09:673 - consider following 1/4 on this part for better play, also the piano on that part is replaced by those sound
02:30:249 (150249|4,150327|3) - what is this ? the guitar is start 02:30:406 - . 02:30:249 (150249|4,150327|3) - this is just an echo
02:30:642 (150642|2,150720|1,150799|2,150877|3,150956|2) - consider Ctrl H this. this work better for the pitch imo
02:33:862 (153862|4,154019|4) - move to 1st collumn for hand balance (02:33:312 (153312|4,153390|3,153547|3,153547|4,153704|4,153783|3,153862|4,154019|4) - )
02:33:547 (153547|4) - maybe move to 02:33:469 - bcs 02:33:547 - not loud enough for 3 note and 02:33:469 - there's a kick or you can move 02:33:547 (153547|4) - to 02:33:312 - since there's a snare
02:36:296 (156296|4,156532|0) - idk what sound that you follow, if you want to keep it then 02:36:375 - 02:36:453 - 02:36:610 - should be 2 ntoe since there's a kick
02:45:877 - add 1 more note for snare ?
02:46:270 - add 1 more note for the kick, there's a kick and piano plz
02:49:882 - you should layer the 1/8 jsut like 01:28:207 - this part but maybe just end on 02:50:040 -
02:50:197 - 02:51:139 - add 1 more note for the cymbal/impact and yeah since they're totally diffrent with 02:50:511 - 02:50:825 - so...
03:07:474 (187474|4,187474|3) - delete one of it, since there's no kick and 03:07:317 (187317|1,187317|2) - has a kick, so you can't make it same
03:09:045 - missing note plz, there's a kick and you must layer it
03:33:862 - 03:34:019 - consider add note for the kick
03:44:228 - this part is just overmapped for a calm part like this, consider remap this part, and i know you gonna reject what i say
04:07:945 - 04:08:102 - there's a 1/6 piano
04:35:903 - 04:36:060 - consider layering those tok tok sound xD
04:40:851 (280851|1,280851|3,280851|2,280851|4) - wrong snap, should be on 04:40:877 - please heat it carefully
04:41:244 (281244|1,281244|2,281244|4,281244|3) - wrong snap again, should be on 04:41:296 - please hear it more carefully
04:41:479 (281479|0,281479|3,281479|2,281479|1) - wong snap should be on 04:41:506 - hear it again please
04:42:186 (282186|1) - this one has no kick but 04:41:951 (281951|2,282029|0,282108|3,282265|4) - has a kick, so please delete 04:42:186 (282186|1) - or at least make them diffrent


ok Good Luck James =w=)b
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Shinzo- wrote:

Hi James :)
oh i know this is already in my old queue xD sorry im too lazy with that old queue x..x oh lol

MOD READY


Mod by Request on



5K

[1|2|3|4|5]


[General]

Metadata/Song Setup
  1. add Cytus to the Tags since it's on Cytus too

[Alcyone]
01:02:819 (62819|4,62819|3) - maybe delete one of it since it just 1 kind of violin actually it's 2
01:29:856 - 01:29:935 - 01:30:013 - if you hear it carefully there's a sound here It's intended to not add some notes since woosh SV is there
01:38:181 (98181|3) - ghost note, delete please, there's no sound, not hithat or even synt actually there's sound here so nope
01:41:008 - there is a snare here, you must layer it since you are currently following the snare well I intended to not add some since I follow piano
01:49:411 (109411|0,109464|1,109516|4,109568|0,109568|3,109621|2,109673|4,109725|3,109778|0,109830|1,109882|3,109882|4,109882|0) - consider Ctrl H this for hand balance, cuz 01:49:019 (109019|0,109097|1,109176|2,109254|0,109307|1,109359|2,109411|0,109464|1,109568|0) - this is ..... uhh ! I think it's balance enough.
02:09:673 - consider following 1/4 on this part for better play, also the piano on that part is replaced by those sound i don't wanna break it so i rather not
02:36:296 (156296|4,156532|0) - idk what sound that you follow, if you want to keep it then 02:36:375 - 02:36:453 - 02:36:610 - should be 2 ntoe since there's a kick not gonna add
02:45:877 - add 1 more note for snare ? ^
03:07:474 (187474|4,187474|3) - delete one of it, since there's no kick and 03:07:317 (187317|1,187317|2) - has a kick, so you can't make it same i hear another sound so nope
03:44:228 - this part is just overmapped for a calm part like this, consider remap this part, and i know you gonna reject what i say yep, see the bms file on this one

04:40:851 (280851|1,280851|3,280851|2,280851|4) - wrong snap, should be on 04:40:877 - please heat it carefully
04:41:244 (281244|1,281244|2,281244|4,281244|3) - wrong snap again, should be on 04:41:296 - please hear it more carefully
04:41:479 (281479|0,281479|3,281479|2,281479|1) - wong snap should be on 04:41:506 - hear it again please
Blame my headphones at that early times XD


04:42:186 (282186|1) - this one has no kick but 04:41:951 (281951|2,282029|0,282108|3,282265|4) - has a kick, so please delete 04:42:186 (282186|1) - or at least make them diffrent no thanks


ok Good Luck James =w=)b
The other parts that were not mentioned were applied (included the green one).

Thanks for the mod :)
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Hi, HappyJames :D
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01:27:579 - Start stream here.
01:38:416 (98416|1,98495|0,98574|2) - It's 1/6 actually.
01:48:194 (108194|3,108233|2,108273|1) - Maybe ctrl+h? Or better 01:47:841 (107841|3,107998|4) - 5-3? I dont like such a short gap between note and impulse stream start in same column (01:47:998 (107998|4,108155|4) - ), it seems uncomphortable.
01:49:882 (109882|0) - 3? Double is too tough considering high common density of pattern.
01:52:003 (112003|4) - I advise to end at 01:52:238 - . String not seems to interrupt there.
01:55:694 - I found it a bit uncomfortable and breaking pitch and accents (from next barline). Try this: http://puu.sh/mjteF/5208440f06.png.
01:58:600 (118600|3) - Can't hear piano here. Do you use this note for something else?
02:02:291 (122291|1,122369|3,122448|4) - Must be 1/6.
02:02:605 - Missed piano?
02:05:432 - ^
02:17:330 - Piano (1/8). Dunno whether you follow it here or nearest 2 notes are for drum, i'm letting you know just in case.
02:19:254 (139254|3) - Same with 02:18:626 (138626|0,138626|1) - but different note amount.
02:30:485 (150485|0) - Ghost?
02:51:139 (171139|2,171218|3,171296|4,171375|2,171453|3) - 1/6.
03:04:097 (184097|3) - Ghost? Even if you hear it clearly, better delete. Listen at 100% speed, interrupt in stream is needed there according to music.
03:10:537 (190537|3,190615|3) - Oh god, there's no any reason for 1/4 191 bpm double. They are not even equal in pitch.
03:11:244 (191244|4,191322|3,191401|2,191479|1,191558|0) - 1/6.
03:23:888 (203888|1,203966|0,204045|3,204123|2) - Try 4-2-3-4, seems a bit unbalanced and uncomfortable.
03:28:835 (208835|0) - Delete, sounds like single note.
03:35:275 (215275|4) - Maybe 3 for some comfort?
03:37:003 - Snaps are incorrect. Try: http://puu.sh/mjuPl/1efe2909b4.jpg. String is difficult to snap indeed, so i'm not completely sure. Ask some other experienced modders to pay attention on this bar.
03:38:888 (218888|4,219045|3) - Same as above, must be 1/4. Or they are not for string? Also, i'm not sure in 03:38:731 (218731|2) - , it seems to start a bit later.
03:42:029 (222029|4,222108|2,222186|1,222265|0,222343|1) - Hmm, seems like 1/3.
03:43:914 (223914|3,224071|4) - 1/4 for string.
03:56:401 - Accented chord, you could add one more note.
04:01:427 - ^ one or 2 notes.
04:49:647 (289647|3) - Better delete, same as before.
04:53:731 - 04:53:809 - I hear background piano. What do you think?
Btw, i think, you should increase offset in main section for ~10 ms.


Good luck! :)
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Kivicat wrote:

Hi, HappyJames :D
|1|2|3|4|5|

01:55:694 - I found it a bit uncomfortable and breaking pitch and accents (from next barline). Try this: http://puu.sh/mjteF/5208440f06.png. re-arrange for a bit
01:58:600 (118600|3) - Can't hear piano here. Do you use this note for something else? i can hear piano very well here so no
02:30:485 (150485|0) - Ghost? no
03:04:097 (184097|3) - Ghost? Even if you hear it clearly, better delete. Listen at 100% speed, interrupt in stream is needed there according to music. no, i don't want to break the streams here. Even in a BMS file, there's no interruption in streams.
03:28:835 (208835|0) - Delete, sounds like single note. i don't think so.
03:37:003 - Snaps are incorrect. Try: http://puu.sh/mjuPl/1efe2909b4.jpg. String is difficult to snap indeed, so i'm not completely sure. Ask some other experienced modders to pay attention on this bar. Actually this is accurate
03:38:888 (218888|4,219045|3) - Same as above, must be 1/4. Or they are not for string? Also, i'm not sure in 03:38:731 (218731|2) - , it seems to start a bit later. i'll just ask BN's to check this part
03:42:029 (222029|4,222108|2,222186|1,222265|0,222343|1) - Hmm, seems like 1/3. keep
03:43:914 (223914|3,224071|4) - 1/4 for string. ^
04:49:647 (289647|3) - Better delete, same as before. Same comment
04:53:731 - 04:53:809 - I hear background piano. What do you think? nah i don't wanna add anymore
Btw, i think, you should increase offset in main section for ~10 ms. i think it's accurate enough


Good luck! :)
The other mods that didn't mention = applied.

Thanks for the mod
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meow
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no 4k ? :"(
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sorry :(
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Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5

General


  1. Hmm, maybe you can find a suitable replacement for the BG, not that it doesn't work but i think there's something more suiting to this beautiful song
  2. I'd advise making this map HP 8.5
    [Alcyone]
  3. 00:06:567 (6567|2) - Move to w perhaps? that looks like a bad shape
  4. 00:06:567 (6567|2) - The map barely has any LNs so this is pointless to add to the overall structure, plus i think you're missing other short lns at the rest of the piano solo, consider making it regular notes
  5. 00:20:057 (20057|1,20102|2,20147|3) - Yeah i consider moving those to the right of the columns because it seems off playing in middle, or you can just move (3,4) only and keep the 2
  6. 00:21:502 (21502|4) - Yeah like i said about it, either make it like regular notes or add more of this, up to you because i want this to be consistent to use, remember a good map must have reason for every note or pattern
  7. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - Add note? because 00:33:888 (33888|2) - so add for consistency
  8. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - same here
  9. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - anyways i think it's fine making two notes for it in my opinion
  10. 00:46:453 - until 00:48:966 - Why not add notes for that sound in the background? i think would make this as a warm up to what's coming (well mediocre atleast)
  11. 00:52:422 (52422|2) - Maybe move this to 2 while 00:52:579 (52579|3) - to 4
  12. 01:08:417 - Why don't you follow the sound in the background? i think would make it more interesting and also i think you should nerf the SV a little
  13. 01:11:087 - Maybe make it like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326379
  14. 01:11:872 - Was thinking of making it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326386
  15. 01:21:924 - Eh, i think you can reshape this pattern to flow more because packing it into 2-3 cols is kinda prevent flow for the map
  16. 01:28:129 - Maybe would be better sorting this pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326397
  17. 01:29:464 - I think you can add some sort of LN here, but that's up to you if you wanna nerf the SV
  18. 01:46:191 (106191|2,106348|2,106506|2,106663|2,106820|2,106977|2,107134|2,107291|2) - Not only this is an anchor but it's on the thumb aswell, anchors in general are what you should avoid if it's not anchor oriented, it just ruins the bursts completely i suggest changing the pattern pattern suggestion : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326420
  19. 01:52:081 - Maybe do like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326429
  20. 01:55:930 (115930|2) - Move to 5 for it to not encounter the LN?
  21. 01:59:935 - Maybe add an LN here i'm not sure, i think it would give it a nice feel
  22. 02:02:919 (122919|3) - To 5 02:02:998 (122998|4) - To 4 02:03:076 (123076|3) - To 3
  23. 02:07:081 - This can be changed to play out more nicely than what you used, i would give you a pattern suggestion but i want you to learn to make good patterns so experiment
  24. 02:14:856 - Add a note?
  25. 02:19:411 - You're kinda missing some notes for the loud kicks
  26. 02:26:793 (146793|1,146951|1,147108|1,147265|1,147422|1,147579|1,147736|1) - Avoid doing these anchors please
  27. 02:41:872 (161872|2) - Consider moving to 1
  28. 03:43:835 (223835|2,223992|2,224149|2,224307|2) - Hmm, maybe swap around the LNs to prevent this anchor on col 3
  29. 03:58:521 - There is 1 note or 2 that you haven't added a chord for the loud drum yet, maybe add it
  30. 04:12:108 (252108|2,252265|2,252422|2,252579|2,252736|2,253050|2,253207|2,253364|2,253521|2,253678|2,253835|2,253992|2,254149|2,254307|2) - Theres alot of ways you can improve this bursts pattern, i suggest asking a mod from verify-chan or skalim for it
  31. 04:36:060 - Yeah maybe make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326489
  32. 04:36:689 - I would suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326495
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I will look at this later. Been busy reviewing for my finals in Uni.
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Soul Evans wrote:

Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5

General


  1. Hmm, maybe you can find a suitable replacement for the BG, not that it doesn't work but i think there's something more suiting to this beautiful song
  2. I'd advise making this map HP 8.5
    [Alcyone]
  3. 00:06:567 (6567|2) - The map barely has any LNs so this is pointless to add to the overall structure, plus i think you're missing other short lns at the rest of the piano solo, consider making it regular notes wrong time stamp?

  4. 00:20:057 (20057|1,20102|2,20147|3) - Yeah i consider moving those to the right of the columns because it seems off playing in middle, or you can just move (3,4) only and keep the 2 no change here
  5. 00:21:502 (21502|4) - Yeah like i said about it, either make it like regular notes or add more of this, up to you because i want this to be consistent to use, remember a good map must have reason for every note or pattern
  6. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - Add note? because 00:33:888 (33888|2) - so add for consistency
  7. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - same here
  8. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - anyways i think it's fine making two notes for it in my opinion
    Again, wrong time stamp?
  9. 00:46:453 - until 00:48:966 - Why not add notes for that sound in the background? i think would make this as a warm up to what's coming (well mediocre atleast) intended because i want to focus more on violin
  10. 00:52:422 (52422|2) - Maybe move this to 2 while 00:52:579 (52579|3) - to 4
    pitch
  11. 01:08:417 - Why don't you follow the sound in the background? i think would make it more interesting and also i think you should nerf the SV a little
    Same comment as above in 00:46:453
  12. 01:11:872 - Was thinking of making it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326386
    i'll just keep the current pattern
  13. 01:21:924 - Eh, i think you can reshape this pattern to flow more because packing it into 2-3 cols is kinda prevent flow for the map
    rearrange a bit
  14. 01:29:464 - I think you can add some sort of LN here, but that's up to you if you wanna nerf the SV
    i rather not
  15. 01:46:191 (106191|2,106348|2,106506|2,106663|2,106820|2,106977|2,107134|2,107291|2) - Not only this is an anchor but it's on the thumb aswell, anchors in general are what you should avoid if it's not anchor oriented, it just ruins the bursts completely i suggest changing the pattern pattern suggestion : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326420
    rearrange a bit
  16. 01:59:935 - Maybe add an LN here i'm not sure, i think it would give it a nice feel
    i rather not
  17. 02:07:081 - This can be changed to play out more nicely than what you used, i would give you a pattern suggestion but i want you to learn to make good patterns so experiment
    gotta keep those
  18. 02:26:793 (146793|1,146951|1,147108|1,147265|1,147422|1,147579|1,147736|1) - Avoid doing these anchors please
    rearrange a bit
  19. 02:41:872 (161872|2) - Consider moving to 1
    nope
  20. 03:43:835 (223835|2,223992|2,224149|2,224307|2) - Hmm, maybe swap around the LNs to prevent this anchor on col 3
    this time i'll keep those
  21. 03:58:521 - There is 1 note or 2 that you haven't added a chord for the loud drum yet, maybe add it
    didn't heard any drum here
  22. 04:12:108 (252108|2,252265|2,252422|2,252579|2,252736|2,253050|2,253207|2,253364|2,253521|2,253678|2,253835|2,253992|2,254149|2,254307|2) - Theres alot of ways you can improve this bursts pattern, i suggest asking a mod from verify-chan or skalim for it
    gotta keep those
  23. 04:36:689 - I would suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326495
    made this for more challenging so gotta keep those
Deleted mods = accepted

Thanks for the mod
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