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[ Renaissance (Gray Another) ]
00:04:683 (4683|2,4997|2) - Song don't warrant 3 1/1 jacks here. Move to 4,3
00:05:626 (5626|4) - Remove, soft piano don't exist here
00:10:023 - Missing note for soft piano
00:10:338 (10338|2) - Triple is too strong here I guess. Remove one note
00:13:322 - Add note, as sounds like this are having 3 notes around.
00:33:898 (33898|3) - Move to 2 as bells are in different pitch
00:39:238 (39238|3) - Move to 2 for pitch
00:43:950 (43950|1) - Move to 0 as bells are in different pitch
00:49:762 (49762|1,49919|0) - Violin isn't right here. The sounds should be at 00:49:840 - and 00:50:037 - (You may want to use 25% playback to confirm this, especially because the latter one is on 1/8 which even me would suspect)
00:54:474 (54474|1) - Move to 3 for pitch
00:59:657 (59657|3,60285|4) - Swap for pitch
01:00:913 (60913|0,61071|1,61228|2,61385|3) - With above, Ctrl-H and move 01:01:542 (61542|1) - to 2
01:03:741 (63741|0,63976|2) - Violin isn't right here. What I found is at 01:03:544 - 01:03:780 - 01:04:035 - 01:04:251 - . But those are 1/8 and even 1/16 You definitely want to check with 25% playback. In fact the song is slowing down and may even suggest that there are genuine BPM changes warranting uninherited timing sections here.
01:09:133 (69133|1,69186|2) - No sound here, and...
01:09:238 (69238|3,69290|4,69343|0,69395|1,69448|2,69500|3,69552|4,69631|3) - What I get in 25% playback is 1/4s.
01:15:050 - Add note for cymbal
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Ctrl-H
01:16:620 - Add note for cymbal
01:19:526 - Missing note
01:19:762 - Add note for cymbal
01:22:275 - ^
01:24:788 - ^
01:26:987 (86987|2) - Move to 4 to prevent 3 jacks?
01:35:154 (95154|3) - move to 4
01:47:406 - Add note for cymbal?
01:59:029 - 01:59:971 - Ctrl-H all notes but keep LN (i.e. move resultant note onto 1-4
02:05:311 - Add note
02:06:411 - Add note at 0
02:06:882 - 02:07:196 - piano is present but notes are missing
02:17:249 (137249|4,137249|3) - Move 1/4 earlier and change to 2,3
02:23:924 (143924|1,144003|0,144081|3,144238|0,144317|4,144395|1) - Piano are absent here. Remove.
02:24:160 - And add note here
02:28:872 - Add note for cymbal?
02:40:966 - You use double stream here but 02:43:636 - is single stream... Not sure what you want tho.
03:00:128 (180128|0) - Move to 1
03:06:568 - Add note for cymbals
03:08:139 - Extraneous note?
03:08:924 - Add note for cymbals
03:17:406 (197406|1,197563|0) - Violin isn't right here, I got is 03:17:484 - 03:17:681 - Again, check with 25% playback
03:23:845 (203845|0) - Move to 3 for pitch?
03:40:416 - Add note at 4 and move 03:40:495 (220495|4) - to 1
03:51:411 (231411|2) - Why jack here? move to 3.
03:59:343 - Add note
04:01:856 - Missing piano. Add 2 notes
04:07:196 - Add note for strong piano
04:07:667 - ^
04:09:395 - Add note for cymbal
04:12:144 (252144|2) - Triples are off-beat. Intentional?
04:12:537 (252537|2) - Misplaced note? Move 1/4 later.
04:21:018 - Missing note
04:24:945 - Add note for cymbal
04:26:044 - ^
04:36:961 (276961|3) - Move 1/4 later
Also PM'ed you about GD stuff. I always find this a great song. Good luck!
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[ Renaissance (Gray Another) ]
00:04:683 (4683|2,4997|2) - Song don't warrant 3 1/1 jacks here. Move to 4,3
00:05:626 (5626|4) - Remove, soft piano don't exist here
00:10:023 - Missing note for soft piano
00:10:338 (10338|2) - Triple is too strong here I guess. Remove one note
00:13:322 - Add note, as sounds like this are having 3 notes around.
00:33:898 (33898|3) - Move to 2 as bells are in different pitch
00:39:238 (39238|3) - Move to 2 for pitch
00:43:950 (43950|1) - Move to 0 as bells are in different pitch
00:49:762 (49762|1,49919|0) - Violin isn't right here. The sounds should be at 00:49:840 - and 00:50:037 - (You may want to use 25% playback to confirm this, especially because the latter one is on 1/8 which even me would suspect)
00:54:474 (54474|1) - Move to 3 for pitch
00:59:657 (59657|3,60285|4) - Swap for pitch
01:00:913 (60913|0,61071|1,61228|2,61385|3) - With above, Ctrl-H and move 01:01:542 (61542|1) - to 2
01:03:741 (63741|0,63976|2) - Violin isn't right here. What I found is at 01:03:544 - 01:03:780 - 01:04:035 - 01:04:251 - . But those are 1/8 and even 1/16 You definitely want to check with 25% playback. In fact the song is slowing down and may even suggest that there are genuine BPM changes warranting uninherited timing sections here.
01:09:133 (69133|1,69186|2) - No sound here, and...
01:09:238 (69238|3,69290|4,69343|0,69395|1,69448|2,69500|3,69552|4,69631|3) - What I get in 25% playback is 1/4s.
01:15:050 - Add note for cymbal
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Ctrl-H
01:16:620 - Add note for cymbal
01:19:526 - Missing note
01:19:762 - Add note for cymbal
01:22:275 - ^
01:24:788 - ^
01:26:987 (86987|2) - Move to 4 to prevent 3 jacks?
01:35:154 (95154|3) - move to 4
01:47:406 - Add note for cymbal?
01:59:029 - 01:59:971 - Ctrl-H all notes but keep LN (i.e. move resultant note onto 1-4
02:05:311 - Add note
02:06:411 - Add note at 0
02:06:882 - 02:07:196 - piano is present but notes are missing
02:17:249 (137249|4,137249|3) - Move 1/4 earlier and change to 2,3
02:23:924 (143924|1,144003|0,144081|3,144238|0,144317|4,144395|1) - Piano are absent here. Remove.
02:24:160 - And add note here
02:28:872 - Add note for cymbal?
02:40:966 - You use double stream here but 02:43:636 - is single stream... Not sure what you want tho.
03:00:128 (180128|0) - Move to 1
03:06:568 - Add note for cymbals
03:08:139 - Extraneous note?
03:08:924 - Add note for cymbals
03:17:406 (197406|1,197563|0) - Violin isn't right here, I got is 03:17:484 - 03:17:681 - Again, check with 25% playback
03:23:845 (203845|0) - Move to 3 for pitch?
03:40:416 - Add note at 4 and move 03:40:495 (220495|4) - to 1
03:51:411 (231411|2) - Why jack here? move to 3.
03:59:343 - Add note
04:01:856 - Missing piano. Add 2 notes
04:07:196 - Add note for strong piano
04:07:667 - ^
04:09:395 - Add note for cymbal
04:12:144 (252144|2) - Triples are off-beat. Intentional?
04:12:537 (252537|2) - Misplaced note? Move 1/4 later.
04:21:018 - Missing note
04:24:945 - Add note for cymbal
04:26:044 - ^
04:36:961 (276961|3) - Move 1/4 later
Also PM'ed you about GD stuff. I always find this a great song. Good luck!