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I haven't download the file, maybe my mod will come this evening/tomorrow..
Short mod for now ok ?

Add "yama_ko" and "Lyrical Signal" to the tags..

Btw, i recommend you to use this BG..
That's for now ^^

NO KUDOSU

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GG HENTI PERSON.
5k henti indeed.
420weedsmokingshrek4life.
#shappy4life.

Black And White Renaissance:

00:05:311 (5311|2) - after replaying and replaying i still feel that this part is currently the same as 00:04:683 (4683|2,4683|0,4997|3,4997|1) - but just a little a little milder. otherwise its still loud. add nota plox
00:05:940 (5940|2) - this has some deep sound, deep sound + high sound = 1 note, gg m8 please no 420noscopperino. add note. prefferably on thee 1st column.
00:09:395 (9395|0) - not sure about this for just being a 1 noted only. Its not deep but its already high to put another note, its not deep as 00:09:395 (9395|0) - but its still high enough, consider this.
00:07:824 (7824|3,9081|2) - not sure to leave these parts 1 noted only. idunno rethink just mentioning this.
00:22:948 (22948|0) - could be double noted.
00:26:359 (26359|4,28872|2) - - ayy lmao. please http://puu.sh/hfYlQ/adb4568543.jpg
00:31:385 (31385|2) - in here you could still remix this 420weedsmokin. there's a slight pause between 00:31:699 until 00:31:804 im quite sure about this. leaving as suggestion if youd like to noscope the players. also 1/12
00:31:385 (31385|2) - wrong ending of ln please 00:31:856 (31856|3) - wrong start please. wat u du in life. more precise and correct, > http://puu.sh/hfYeE/7e9c9b7d08.jpg its 1/12 im definitely right in here i cant be deaf.
00:33:898 (33898|2) - ayyyyy http://puu.sh/hfYqJ/ad9cc24746.jpg
00:32:327 (32327|4,35154|3) - http://puu.sh/hfYxC/7806cf87c5.jpg wat u mop wit ot hidsit? plox henti-sama
00:36:254 (36254|3,36411|0,36411|4) - http://puu.sh/hfYDO/8750b21130.jpg
00:40:023 (40023|1,40180|3,40180|4) - definitely SOUNDthing is wrong in here,"badumtsss" please re cheeeack it henti.
00:41:437 (41437|4,41437|3,41908|1,41908|0,42379|0,42379|1) - ''^w^ http://puu.sh/hfYSs/abf3abf17a.jpg

from here on. not gonna FIX and POINT everything that is missed beat, i felt that this is kinda your job as the creator of this map, There are still more im pretty sure for example, 00:43:950 (43950|2) - sort of advice, as a mapper you have to take time and review the map you made, for example by making time for it, cause im gonna suggest you to check your map in 25% play back rate. youll see what you need to see, infact if this is not solved immediately as i see that you are currently planning for rank. "THIS" problems will make your headhurt finally when your about to get 420smonoscoped. seriously so make time to this map specially, THO WHY DOES ANY BODI HAS POINTED THIS KIND OF PROBLEM, PEOPLE WHY PLOX. also jamesu nyan becareful specially in this parts, from here 00:25:706 (25706|0) - - to - 01:08:767 (68767|0) - i want you to reviewww revieewww this part cause this is where mostly the problem you will see. but take note to take a look at the other parts too.

00:39:238 (39238|2) - i would prefer that you would move this to 2nd column (or) another idea is to move 00:38:924 (38924|2) - to 5th, the pattern atm looks weird if youd ask me.
00:40:809 (40809|4) - this ln should be moved, to the 4th column, in here 00:39:866 (39866|0,40023|1,40180|3,40338|0,40495|2,40652|0) - im getting your idea or i already got it lmao. highly suggested since 00:40:180 (40180|3,40809|4) - also! i just found that, 00:40:495 (40495|2) - i the same sound so im suggesting that you move 00:40:180 (40180|3,40495|2,40809|4) - in "one" column only regardless of the pattern were talking about $$$$$$ here.
00:48:976 (48976|1) - id double note if youd ask me. cause of the BIG bell sound.
00:48:976 (48976|1,50233|3,50547|2,50861|1,51175|0) - regarding here if you'd ask me. ID PREFER TO FOLLOW THE PR HERE CAUSE IT FLOWS BETTER AND PLAY BETTER IN THIS WAY. more or less, ctrl g it and find a better pattern in 00:51:489 (51489|2,51489|1,51961|3,52432|2,52589|1) - .
00:55:259 (55259|3,55259|1) - id ctrl h this for better flow of your 420 patturn.
00:56:516 (56516|1) - youd either place this note in the 1st or 3rd column got no other option m8 1st or 3rd or get rekt.
00:59:029 (59029|2,59657|4) - move 00:59:029 (59029|2) - in the 5th column and then 00:59:657 (59657|4) - to 1st for better 420 pattern
01:01:517 (61517|0) - id add another note here, for much stronger presence of the sound. 01:02:811 (62811|1) - here too. 01:04:271 (64271|4) - same.
01:08:767 (68767|0) - my hmm suggestion you add another note cus of the weird deep sound
01:09:238 (69238|0,69316|1,69395|2,69473|3,69552|4,69630|3,69709|1,69709|2,69709|0) - could do something more fancy here mr. smartpants http://puu.sh/hfZYw/f4a477a9b7.jpg just my opinion i liked this pattern it connects to the next pattern youre having and it felt nice to play.
01:11:122 (71122|4,71122|3,71436|4,71436|2) - should have 3 noted these guys or else delete 01:10:808 (70808|2,70808|3,70808|0) - one of your bae totally inconsistent and feels empty.
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1) - add another note please cause of 01:12:536 (72536|2,72536|1,72536|0,73321|3,73321|2,73321|0,73792|2,73792|1,73792|0) -
01:14:578 (74578|1,74578|4) - these is where id prefer put my 3 notes the fact that it is loud it suits here the most.
01:22:431 (82431|3,82431|1) - dont really know what is the reason behind this 2 notes that has to be here. delete you could continue stream instead!
01:37:667 (97667|0) - add another note.
01:46:148 (106148|4,106227|3,106306|1,106306|2,106384|3,106463|4,106463|1,106463|0,106541|3,106620|1,106698|2,106777|1,106777|3,106855|2,106934|3,106934|1,107012|2,107091|3,107091|0,107091|4,107169|2,107248|3,107248|1,107326|2,107405|0,107405|1,107405|3) - for me these felt messy could have polished this more.
01:49:447 (109447|3,109525|1,109604|3) - delete this is not needed imo and oh! look it is much more neat!
01:52:038 (112038|4,112274|0) - dont know whyd you suddenly jump with these 2 lns.
02:32:484 (152484|3,152484|2,152484|0) - this sound is catchy, ive seen this before hmm check my past mod, AGAIN THIS IS CATCHY OMFG WHYD YOU SUDDNLY 02:32:798 (152798|1,152798|3,152955|0,152955|2,153112|4,153112|1) - bruh
03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - in my ways, if youd do something crazy as 03:49:604 (229604|2,229604|4,229682|0,229682|3,229761|4,229761|1,229840|0,229840|2,229918|1,229918|3,229997|2,229997|0,230075|1,230075|3,230154|0,230154|2,230232|1,230232|4,230311|3,230311|0,230389|4,230389|2,230468|3,230468|1,230546|2,230546|0,230546|4) - you wouldnt follow 03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - these sounds anymore "^w^ it just makes the pattern look messy get rid of it or i rekt u. just concentrate on your stream it will play better!
03:49:054 (229054|2,229054|1,229290|3,229290|2,229290|1,229447|2,229447|1,236201|4,236515|4,236829|4,237771|1) - id prefer if youd delete this, should've followed the pattern more.
04:25:573 (265573|3,265573|1) - this part is MORE stronger than 04:25:415 (265415|4,265415|2,265415|0) - and yet you gave it a 2 notes only? i felt bad for the part :(


Hi Hello! Jamesu nyan. A little sort of thingy advice thingy? as a mapper, you stated to me that you didnt need another diff oke. In this case this is a marathon right? which needs only 1 diff right as you said please. in this case [2] you should have reviewed and checked this more often if youd really plan on ranking this, cause one of the biggest pros of mapping marathon is having only 1 diff, therefore which means you only have 1 diff to give a shit at, and that doesnt mean to slack of no! you should have checked it more often and fixed it more often the fact that you only have "This" diff and yet the song isnt that really really really long i think you should give time to this awesome map that you made if your really aiming for rank. Review the parts,ask someone's opinion,ask more mods,ask more mods!, annoy bns to check it ( lmao dont lol jk) , play it more , and make time to it more, cause i know this map has a potential and i would be glad to see this in the ranked section soon : ^)


this is yuno nyan signing off.
posted

YunoFanatic wrote:

GG HENTI PERSON.
5k henti indeed.
420weedsmokingshrek4life.
#shappy4life.

Black And White Renaissance:

00:05:311 (5311|2) - after replaying and replaying i still feel that this part is currently the same as 00:04:683 (4683|2,4683|0,4997|3,4997|1) - but just a little a little milder. otherwise its still loud. add nota plox
00:05:940 (5940|2) - this has some deep sound, deep sound + high sound = 1 note, gg m8 please no 420noscopperino. add note. prefferably on thee 1st column.
00:09:395 (9395|0) - not sure about this for just being a 1 noted only. Its not deep but its already high to put another note, its not deep as 00:09:395 (9395|0) - but its still high enough, consider this.
00:07:824 (7824|3,9081|2) - not sure to leave these parts 1 noted only. idunno rethink just mentioning this.
00:22:948 (22948|0) - could be double noted.no thx
00:26:359 (26359|4,28872|2) - - ayy lmao. please http://puu.sh/hfYlQ/adb4568543.jpg nope
00:31:385 (31385|2) - in here you could still remix this 420weedsmokin. there's a slight pause between 00:31:699 until 00:31:804 im quite sure about this. leaving as suggestion if youd like to noscope the players. also 1/12 no thx
00:31:385 (31385|2) - wrong ending of ln please 00:31:856 (31856|3) - wrong start please. wat u du in life. more precise and correct, > http://puu.sh/hfYeE/7e9c9b7d08.jpg its 1/12 im definitely right in here i cant be deaf. no change (listen closely at 25% playback.)
00:33:898 (33898|2) - ayyyyy http://puu.sh/hfYqJ/ad9cc24746.jpg yuno plz. no change
00:32:327 (32327|4,35154|3) - http://puu.sh/hfYxC/7806cf87c5.jpg wat u mop wit ot hidsit? plox henti-sama no thx
00:36:254 (36254|3,36411|0,36411|4) - http://puu.sh/hfYDO/8750b21130.jpg I repeated many times but i didn't hear anything 1/12 here so no change
00:40:023 (40023|1,40180|3,40180|4) - definitely SOUNDthing is wrong in here,"badumtsss" please re cheeeack it henti. no change plox
00:41:437 (41437|4,41437|3,41908|1,41908|0,42379|0,42379|1) - ''^w^ http://puu.sh/hfYSs/abf3abf17a.jpg again

from here on. not gonna FIX and POINT everything that is missed beat, i felt that this is kinda your job as the creator of this map, There are still more im pretty sure for example, 00:43:950 (43950|2) - sort of advice, as a mapper you have to take time and review the map you made, for example by making time for it, cause im gonna suggest you to check your map in 25% play back rate. youll see what you need to see, infact if this is not solved immediately as i see that you are currently planning for rank. "THIS" problems will make your headhurt finally when your about to get 420smonoscoped. seriously so make time to this map specially, THO WHY DOES ANY BODI HAS POINTED THIS KIND OF PROBLEM, PEOPLE WHY PLOX. also jamesu nyan becareful specially in this parts, from here 00:25:706 (25706|0) - - to - 01:08:767 (68767|0) - i want you to reviewww revieewww this part cause this is where mostly the problem you will see. but take note to take a look at the other parts too. i'm being doing this everytime yu no

00:39:238 (39238|2) - i would prefer that you would move this to 2nd column (or) another idea is to move 00:38:924 (38924|2) - to 5th, the pattern atm looks weird if youd ask me.
00:40:809 (40809|4) - this ln should be moved, to the 4th column, in here 00:39:866 (39866|0,40023|1,40180|3,40338|0,40495|2,40652|0) - im getting your idea or i already got it lmao. highly suggested since 00:40:180 (40180|3,40809|4) - also! i just found that, 00:40:495 (40495|2) - i the same sound so im suggesting that you move 00:40:180 (40180|3,40495|2,40809|4) - in "one" column only regardless of the pattern were talking about $$$$$$ here.
00:48:976 (48976|1) - id double note if youd ask me. cause of the BIG bell sound.
00:48:976 (48976|1,50233|3,50547|2,50861|1,51175|0) - regarding here if you'd ask me. ID PREFER TO FOLLOW THE PR HERE CAUSE IT FLOWS BETTER AND PLAY BETTER IN THIS WAY. more or less, ctrl g it and find a better pattern in 00:51:489 (51489|2,51489|1,51961|3,52432|2,52589|1) - . no thx
00:55:259 (55259|3,55259|1) - id ctrl h this for better flow of your 420 patturn.
00:56:516 (56516|1) - youd either place this note in the 1st or 3rd column got no other option m8 1st or 3rd or get rekt.
00:59:029 (59029|2,59657|4) - move 00:59:029 (59029|2) - in the 5th column and then 00:59:657 (59657|4) - to 1st for better 420 pattern
01:01:517 (61517|0) - id add another note here, for much stronger presence of the sound. 01:02:811 (62811|1) - here too. 01:04:271 (64271|4) - same.no thx
01:08:767 (68767|0) - my hmm suggestion you add another note cus of the weird deep sound no thx
01:09:238 (69238|0,69316|1,69395|2,69473|3,69552|4,69630|3,69709|1,69709|2,69709|0) - could do something more fancy here mr. smartpants http://puu.sh/hfZYw/f4a477a9b7.jpg just my opinion i liked this pattern it connects to the next pattern youre having and it felt nice to play.
01:11:122 (71122|4,71122|3,71436|4,71436|2) - should have 3 noted these guys or else delete 01:10:808 (70808|2,70808|3,70808|0) - one of your bae totally inconsistent and feels empty.
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1) - add another note please cause of 01:12:536 (72536|2,72536|1,72536|0,73321|3,73321|2,73321|0,73792|2,73792|1,73792|0) -
01:14:578 (74578|1,74578|4) - these is where id prefer put my 3 notes the fact that it is loud it suits here the most.
01:22:431 (82431|3,82431|1) - dont really know what is the reason behind this 2 notes that has to be here. delete you could continue stream instead!
01:37:667 (97667|0) - add another note.
01:46:148 (106148|4,106227|3,106306|1,106306|2,106384|3,106463|4,106463|1,106463|0,106541|3,106620|1,106698|2,106777|1,106777|3,106855|2,106934|3,106934|1,107012|2,107091|3,107091|0,107091|4,107169|2,107248|3,107248|1,107326|2,107405|0,107405|1,107405|3) - for me these felt messy could have polished this more. re-arranged
01:49:447 (109447|3,109525|1,109604|3) - delete this is not needed imo and oh! look it is much more neat!
01:52:038 (112038|4,112274|0) - dont know whyd you suddenly jump with these 2 lns. violin plox
02:32:484 (152484|3,152484|2,152484|0) - this sound is catchy, ive seen this before hmm check my past mod, AGAIN THIS IS CATCHY OMFG WHYD YOU SUDDNLY 02:32:798 (152798|1,152798|3,152955|0,152955|2,153112|4,153112|1) - bruh
03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - in my ways, if youd do something crazy as 03:49:604 (229604|2,229604|4,229682|0,229682|3,229761|4,229761|1,229840|0,229840|2,229918|1,229918|3,229997|2,229997|0,230075|1,230075|3,230154|0,230154|2,230232|1,230232|4,230311|3,230311|0,230389|4,230389|2,230468|3,230468|1,230546|2,230546|0,230546|4) - you wouldnt follow 03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - these sounds anymore "^w^ it just makes the pattern look messy get rid of it or i rekt u. just concentrate on your stream it will play better!
03:49:054 (229054|2,229054|1,229290|3,229290|2,229290|1,229447|2,229447|1,236201|4,236515|4,236829|4,237771|1) - id prefer if youd delete this, should've followed the pattern more. repatterned
04:25:573 (265573|3,265573|1) - this part is MORE stronger than 04:25:415 (265415|4,265415|2,265415|0) - and yet you gave it a 2 notes only? i felt bad for the part :(my bad

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Hi Hello! Jamesu nyan. A little sort of thingy advice thingy? as a mapper, you stated to me that you didnt need another diff oke. In this case this is a marathon right? which needs only 1 diff right as you said please. in this case [2] you should have reviewed and checked this more often if youd really plan on ranking this, cause one of the biggest pros of mapping marathon is having only 1 diff, therefore which means you only have 1 diff to give a shit at, and that doesnt mean to slack of no! you should have checked it more often and fixed it more often the fact that you only have "This" diff and yet the song isnt that really really really long i think you should give time to this awesome map that you made if your really aiming for rank. Review the parts,ask someone's opinion,ask more mods,ask more mods!, annoy bns to check it ( lmao dont lol jk) , play it more , and make time to it more, cause i know this map has a potential and i would be glad to see this in the ranked section soon : ^)


this is yuno nyan signing off.
a
thx u henti

Kazamastar11 wrote:

I haven't download the file, maybe my mod will come this evening/tomorrow..
Short mod for now ok ?

Add "yama_ko" and "Lyrical Signal" to the tags..

Btw, i recommend you to use this BG..
That's for now ^^

NO KUDOSU

added tags but i prefer not to change the BG.
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[General]
1. Metadata
  1. I've mention this on the first mod


2. Design
  1. I think you must resize the BG to 1366x768


3. BG
  1. Resize to 1366x768


4. Timing / BPM
  1. Huh ? Where's the Kiai ?
  2. 01:09:709 - Start
  3. 01:19:133 - End
  4. 01:19:761 - Start
  5. 01:29:813 OR 01:30:127 - End
  6. 01:49:918 - Start
  7. 02:08:766 - End
  8. 02:31:384 - Start
  9. 02:40:808 - End
  10. 02:41:436 - Start
  11. 02:51:175 - End
  12. 02:51:489 - Start
  13. 03:00:913 - End
  14. 03:01:541 OR 03:01:855 - Start
  15. 03:10:337 - End
  16. 03:34:211 - Start
  17. 03:53:374 - End
  18. 03:54:316 - Start
  19. 04:14:421 - End
  20. 04:16:934 - Start
  21. 04:26:358 - End
  22. 04:26:986 - Start
  23. 04:36:724 - End
  24. 04:37:038 - Start
  25. 04:46:463 - End
  26. 04:47:091 - Start
  27. 04:59:970 - End


5. Hitsound
  1. No problem


6. Difficulty
  1. Cruel, but ok
LN : Long notes / Hold notes
PR : Pitch Relevancy
Stair : 0,1,2,3 / 3,2,1,0 (Ascending / Descending notes)
Trill : 0,1,0 / 3,2,3 (Like > / <)
Hammer (Jackhammer) : Notes on one column 0,0,0 / 1,1,1 (Spam on one column)

COLUMN

4K : |0|1|2|3|
5K : |0|1|2|3|4|
6K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|
8K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Renaissance (Gray Another)]
00:15:834 (15834|3) - Here, i know you're following the pitch, well it's up to you but i prefer if you move this to 1
00:22:948 - 2 notes ?

01:29:813 (89813|1) - Move to 0
01:30:128 (90128|3) - Move to 4
01:41:593 (101593|3) - Move to 0/1 for PR
01:46:463 until 01:49:840 - I think it's overmapped
02:21:332 until 02:30:127 - ^
02:49:447 until 02:51:489 - ^
02:54:787 (174787|1) - Move to 2
03:01:855 until 03:05:154 - Overmap
03:08:609 (188609|1) - Move to 0
03:11:436 (191436|1,191515|0) - Move them to the next column
03:11:593 (191593|4,191672|3,191751|2,191829|1,191908|3,191986|2,192065|1,192143|0,192222|4,192300|3,192379|1,192457|0,192536|1,192536|2,192536|4,192614|3,192693|2,192771|1) - Ctrl+H
03:34:211 until 03:53:059 - Overmap woah
03:58:086 (238086|1) - Move to 3
03:59:342 (239342|1) - ^
04:01:463 (241463|3) - Move to 1/2
04:02:169 until 04:14:421 - Overmap
04:16:934 (256934|3) - Move to 4
04:22:745 (262745|1) - Move to 0
04:46:148 (286148|2) - Move to 3
04:47:405 until 04:50:703 - Overmap
04:56:201 until 04:58:086 - ^
Reduce some notes on the overmapped part, or it'll prevent fire to come (?)

Really short mod :(
I'm sorry.. Take my star anyway ^^

I almost MM this song on Cytus (playing with thumb and forget the 3 hold note at the ending)
Good luck~

Feedback about my mod :
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Hi Jamesu~
mod request from

hope it will help :3

Collumn 5K = 1/2/3/4/5

[Gray Another]
00:08:139 (8139|0) - move to 5 to avoid jacku
00:14:263 (14263|2,14577|3) - Ctrl+J for pitch relevancy
00:22:948 (22948|0) - You could make this 1/1 LN imo , since it does sound abit longer tham other sounds
00:29:500 (29500|0,29735|2,29971|4) - This should be 1/3 snap ^^b
00:49:605 (49605|3,49840|0,50076|2) - ^ should be 1/3
00:55:259 (55259|1) - (optional) move to 1
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1,71279|3) - you used 3 notes here and only 2 here l 01:13:792 (73792|0,73792|1) - you may keep consistent amount of notes to the same sounds
^ I suggest to use 2 only for snares here or make all of it 3 notes if you want super hard diffu
01:18:661 (78661|2) - ^same reason for concistency reason you should make this 2 notes
01:33:190 (93190|4) - add note (drum sound here )
01:39:866 (99866|2) - add one more note for cymbal sound
01:43:243 (103243|4) - add note for drum sound
01:48:269 (108269|2) - add to 3 (drum sound here too )
01:57:300 (117300|4) - I suggest to move it to 3 ( even tho both placement make it shielding with another LN ) I think it's better to make shield at end of LN tham the start of it in term of difficulty
^basically Easy = move to 3 Hard = don't move
=^)
02:07:667 (127667|1) - add one more note to 5 ( louder drum sound here imo)
02:12:143 (132143|3) - Move to 02:12:117 (132117|3) - (this is actually 1/3 snap )
02:12:222 (132222|0) - move to 02:12:326 (132326|0) -
( if you were actually following drum then ) 02:12:143 (132143|3) - only this one need to be moved
02:31:855 (151855|4) - add one more note imo

special mention :
03:01:855 (181855|2,181855|3) - this part looks awesome *w*

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03:08:452 (188452|4) - add 2 notes to for an example 1 and 5
03:17:248 (197248|2,197484|1,197680|0) - this notes are 1/3 even it's reallllyy smallll gap it's 1/3
03:37:196 (217196|2,217353|1,217588|0) - same this notes are 1/3
04:01:698 (241698|4,241698|1,241698|2,241698|3) - I think 3 notes would be fine ,4 seems abit too much
04:40:651 (280651|2,280651|0,280651|1,280651|4,280887|1,280887|0,280887|2,280887|3,281122|1,281122|4,281122|3,281122|2,281279|0,281279|2,281279|1,281279|3,281515|3,281515|4,281515|1,281515|2) - wow I like this :O
04:46:148 (286148|2,286148|0) - should be 3 notes imo
04:54:002 (294002|4,294002|0) - add 2 notes

Also On a side note only one thing that I find pretty special even i can't really say if i'm wrong
The piano part from here 03:34:211 (214211|1,214211|0) - to the end of the piano section after the whole wall of chords
some people might consider it as OVER map but tbh '' sound '' ''key pressed '' hmmm =^) trying to make hard stuff I like that tho i doubt being abble to pass this . First I thought hmm maybe it's not 1/4 but 1/3 but nope it does really sound like 1/4 so err
tl:dr : Consider nerfing that part if too much people complain about it (( consider )) (lol) x)


Sugoi diff , hope it will help Good Luck Jamesu~ ^^/ take a stawwy and have a nice day desu~ !
As my opinion I consider nothing as Overmap atleast not when keys are pressed when it does have sounds actually legit to me xD
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Kazamastar11 wrote:

From Kazamastar's Queue


[General]
1. Metadata
  1. I've mention this on the first mod


2. Design
  1. I think you must resize the BG to 1366x768


3. BG
  1. Resize to 1366x768


4. Timing / BPM
  1. Huh ? Where's the Kiai ?
  2. 01:09:709 - Start
  3. 01:19:133 - End
  4. 01:19:761 - Start
  5. 01:29:813 OR 01:30:127 - End
  6. 01:49:918 - Start
  7. 02:08:766 - End
  8. 02:31:384 - Start
  9. 02:40:808 - End
  10. 02:41:436 - Start
  11. 02:51:175 - End
  12. 02:51:489 - Start
  13. 03:00:913 - End
  14. 03:01:541 OR 03:01:855 - Start
  15. 03:10:337 - End
  16. 03:34:211 - Start
  17. 03:53:374 - End
  18. 03:54:316 - Start
  19. 04:14:421 - End
  20. 04:16:934 - Start
  21. 04:26:358 - End
  22. 04:26:986 - Start
  23. 04:36:724 - End
  24. 04:37:038 - Start
  25. 04:46:463 - End
  26. 04:47:091 - Start
  27. 04:59:970 - End


5. Hitsound
  1. No problem


6. Difficulty
  1. Cruel, but ok
LN : Long notes / Hold notes
PR : Pitch Relevancy
Stair : 0,1,2,3 / 3,2,1,0 (Ascending / Descending notes)
Trill : 0,1,0 / 3,2,3 (Like > / <)
Hammer (Jackhammer) : Notes on one column 0,0,0 / 1,1,1 (Spam on one column)

COLUMN

4K : |0|1|2|3|
5K : |0|1|2|3|4|
6K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|
8K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Renaissance (Gray Another)]
00:15:834 (15834|3) - Here, i know you're following the pitch, well it's up to you but i prefer if you move this to 1 no thanks
00:22:948 - 2 notes ?

01:29:813 (89813|1) - Move to 0
01:30:128 (90128|3) - Move to 4
01:41:593 (101593|3) - Move to 0/1 for PR
01:46:463 until 01:49:840 - I think it's overmapped nope
02:21:332 until 02:30:127 - ^ I think you didn't heard very well on piano and some small kicks
02:49:447 until 02:51:489 - ^ small kicks
02:54:787 (174787|1) - Move to 2 nope
03:01:855 until 03:05:154 - Overmap NOPE
03:08:609 (188609|1) - Move to 0
03:11:436 (191436|1,191515|0) - Move them to the next column
03:11:593 (191593|4,191672|3,191751|2,191829|1,191908|3,191986|2,192065|1,192143|0,192222|4,192300|3,192379|1,192457|0,192536|1,192536|2,192536|4,192614|3,192693|2,192771|1) - Ctrl+H
03:34:211 until 03:53:059 - Overmap woah nerf it a bit
03:58:086 (238086|1) - Move to 3
03:59:342 (239342|1) - ^ nope
04:01:463 (241463|3) - Move to 1/2
04:02:169 until 04:14:421 - Overmap nope
04:16:934 (256934|3) - Move to 4 nope
04:22:745 (262745|1) - Move to 0
04:46:148 (286148|2) - Move to 3
04:47:405 until 04:50:703 - Overmap same
04:56:201 until 04:58:086 - ^ same
Reduce some notes on the overmapped part, or it'll prevent fire to come (?)
rest of the mods applied
Really short mod :(
I'm sorry.. Take my star anyway ^^

I almost MM this song on Cytus (playing with thumb and forget the 3 hold note at the ending) oh
Good luck~

Feedback about my mod :
Not bad. Hope you can get better at modding

Eternalie wrote:

Hi Jamesu~
mod request from

hope it will help :3

Collumn 5K = 1/2/3/4/5

[Gray Another]
00:08:139 (8139|0) - move to 5 to avoid jacku
00:14:263 (14263|2,14577|3) - Ctrl+J for pitch relevancy
00:22:948 (22948|0) - You could make this 1/1 LN imo , since it does sound abit longer tham other sounds nope
00:29:500 (29500|0,29735|2,29971|4) - This should be 1/3 snap ^^b
00:49:605 (49605|3,49840|0,50076|2) - ^ should be 1/3
00:55:259 (55259|1) - (optional) move to 1
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1,71279|3) - you used 3 notes here and only 2 here l 01:13:792 (73792|0,73792|1) - you may keep consistent amount of notes to the same sounds
^ I suggest to use 2 only for snares here or make all of it 3 notes if you want super hard diffu
01:18:661 (78661|2) - ^same reason for concistency reason you should make this 2 notes
01:33:190 (93190|4) - add note (drum sound here )
01:39:866 (99866|2) - add one more note for cymbal sound
01:43:243 (103243|4) - add note for drum sound
01:48:269 (108269|2) - add to 3 (drum sound here too ) this time nope
01:57:300 (117300|4) - I suggest to move it to 3 ( even tho both placement make it shielding with another LN ) I think it's better to make shield at end of LN tham the start of it in term of difficulty
^basically Easy = move to 3 Hard = don't move
=^)
02:07:667 (127667|1) - add one more note to 5 ( louder drum sound here imo)
02:12:143 (132143|3) - Move to 02:12:117 (132117|3) - (this is actually 1/3 snap )
02:12:222 (132222|0) - move to 02:12:326 (132326|0) - this one followed the drum
( if you were actually following drum then ) 02:12:143 (132143|3) - only this one need to be moved
02:31:855 (151855|4) - add one more note imo

special mention :
03:01:855 (181855|2,181855|3) - this part looks awesome *w* thx

----
03:08:452 (188452|4) - add 2 notes to for an example 1 and 5 no thanks
03:17:248 (197248|2,197484|1,197680|0) - this notes are 1/3 even it's reallllyy smallll gap it's 1/3
03:37:196 (217196|2,217353|1,217588|0) - same this notes are 1/3
04:01:698 (241698|4,241698|1,241698|2,241698|3) - I think 3 notes would be fine ,4 seems abit too much
04:40:651 (280651|2,280651|0,280651|1,280651|4,280887|1,280887|0,280887|2,280887|3,281122|1,281122|4,281122|3,281122|2,281279|0,281279|2,281279|1,281279|3,281515|3,281515|4,281515|1,281515|2) - wow I like this :O
04:46:148 (286148|2,286148|0) - should be 3 notes imo
04:54:002 (294002|4,294002|0) - add 2 notes
rest of the mods applied
Also On a side note only one thing that I find pretty special even i can't really say if i'm wrong
The piano part from here 03:34:211 (214211|1,214211|0) - to the end of the piano section after the whole wall of chords
some people might consider it as OVER map but tbh '' sound '' ''key pressed '' hmmm =^) trying to make hard stuff I like that tho i doubt being abble to pass this . First I thought hmm maybe it's not 1/4 but 1/3 but nope it does really sound like 1/4 so err
tl:dr : Consider nerfing that part if too much people complain about it (( consider )) (lol) x) Nerf it


Sugoi diff , hope it will help Good Luck Jamesu~ ^^/ take a stawwy and have a nice day desu~ !
As my opinion I consider nothing as Overmap atleast not when keys are pressed when it does have sounds actually legit to me xD
Thanks for the mods and stars guys :)

pwhk wrote:

GD arrived :D

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9i8jdjpu4rr4c ... D.osu?dl=0
I'll update it later
posted
wogh support this /o/
awsome song and mapset! xD
#ManiaNeedsMore5Kmaps
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Kyousuke- wrote:

wogh support this /o/
awsome song and mapset! xD
#ManiaNeedsMore5Kmaps
YOU HEARD IT , Go jamesu go~
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Eternalie wrote:

Kyousuke- wrote:

wogh support this /o/
awsome song and mapset! xD
#ManiaNeedsMore5Kmaps
YOU HEARD IT , Go jamesu go~
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks guys. I'll definitely going to app this.
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Hi o/
Mod from my queue~

[Renaissance (5K Gray Another)]
00:46:463 - Add a note on 2. There's this Impulse here different than 00:36:411
01:37:824 - Add a note? It has same sound as 01:37:510
01:47:876 - ^ same sound as 01:47:562
01:56:044 - ^ same sound as 01:55:258
01:58:557 - ^
01:58:871 - Add a note there. Because of a Snare.
02:46:463 - ^ Same sound as 02:43:949
03:36:724 - ^ Because the Piano sounds louder, so I ssume there's 2 piano there.
04:31:070 - ^ same sound as 04:29:813


Great 5K Map. Good Luck there~
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MEGAtive wrote:


Hi o/
Mod from my queue~

[Renaissance (5K Gray Another)]
00:46:463 - Add a note on 2. There's this Impulse here different than 00:36:411
01:37:824 - Add a note? It has same sound as 01:37:510
01:47:876 - ^ same sound as 01:47:562
01:56:044 - ^ same sound as 01:55:258
01:58:557 - ^
01:58:871 - Add a note there. Because of a Snare.
02:46:463 - ^ Same sound as 02:43:949
03:36:724 - ^ Because the Piano sounds louder, so I ssume there's 2 piano there.
04:31:070 - ^ same sound as 04:29:813


Great 5K Map. Good Luck there~
Applied all. Thanks for the mod :)
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5k Gray Rennaisance

02:50:232 change like this. It flows better imo

04:36:724 to 04:37:038 sounds like there should be a 1/8 pattern instead 1/4. it's faster then the stairs before it


7k pw's Black Another

It's best if I leave this map to more experienced modders, This diff is both difficult for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me :? )

just a couple of suggestions:

There is too much broken stairs mixed in, it's good in some places but it messes up uniformity and readability.

A little less spacing with some notes might improve readability for less experienced players. For one such as myself who play crazy maps like these for fun, it's not fun when you can't even read it. (fyi I play with scrolling at 23 fixed)

no kd

EDIT 1: added 7k mod
EDIT 2: Good luck <3
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Crono wrote:

5k Gray Rennaisance

02:50:232 change like this. It flows better imo

04:36:724 to 04:37:038 sounds like there should be a 1/8 pattern instead 1/4. it's faster then the stairs before it 1/6 actually. Either way I applied it


7k pw's Black Another

It's best if I leave this map to more experienced modders, This diff is both difficult for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me :? )

just a couple of suggestions:

There is too much broken stairs mixed in, it's good in some places but it messes up uniformity and readability.

A little less spacing with some notes might improve readability for less experienced players. For one such as myself who play crazy maps like these for fun, it's not fun when you can't even read it. (fyi I play with scrolling at 23 fixed)


no kd

EDIT 1: added 7k mod
EDIT 2: Good luck <3
Applied all

thanks crono :)
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Crono wrote:

5k Gray Rennaisance

02:50:232 change like this. It flows better imo

04:36:724 to 04:37:038 sounds like there should be a 1/8 pattern instead 1/4. it's faster then the stairs before it


7k pw's Black Another

It's best if I leave this map to more experienced modders, This diff is both difficult for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me :? )

just a couple of suggestions:

There is too much broken stairs mixed in, it's good in some places but it messes up uniformity and readability.

A little less spacing with some notes might improve readability for less experienced players. For one such as myself who play crazy maps like these for fun, it's not fun when you can't even read it. (fyi I play with scrolling at 23 fixed)

no kd

EDIT 1: added 7k mod
EDIT 2: Good luck <3
Basically, using continuous stairs throughout the song would be boring :o So to vary the pattern I use a lot of broken stairs :P

In fact I can read it, but I would leave other modders to decide. (btw I play with 14 scroll speed, and I admit I have get used to slow speed :lol: )
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req from astral horizon q

quoting crono w/ some changes

Crono wrote:

This Both diff is both difficult still impossible for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me :? )
Columns: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 and 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

[5K]
00:09:395 (9395|3) - different pitch from 00:08:767 (8767|3) - so why not moving to 5
00:29:186 (29186|1,29343|3) - Ctrl+H for more stair-ish pattern?
00:41:123 (41123|0) - to 3?
01:18:347 - add? you have 3 notes on cymbal sounds earlier
03:00:127 - ^

[7K]
00:10:985 - until 00:11:651 - this is the only time you don't map the background piano, so maybe add them here: 00:10:985 - , 00:11:318 - , and 00:11:651 -
00:48:505 - you missed a drum sound here
00:53:531 - ^
00:58:557 - ^
01:03:343 - ^
01:15:991 - add another note for cymbals?
01:19:133 - ^


that's all i can do, sorry. dont kd if not helpful enough

the others from the q may come to mod this

in the meantime, take this

good luck o/
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Rayz141 wrote:

req from astral horizon q

quoting crono w/ some changes

Crono wrote:

This Both diff is both difficult still impossible for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me :? )
Columns: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 and 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

[5K]
00:09:395 (9395|3) - different pitch from 00:08:767 (8767|3) - so why not moving to 5
00:29:186 (29186|1,29343|3) - Ctrl+H for more stair-ish pattern?
00:41:123 (41123|0) - to 3?
01:18:347 - add? you have 3 notes on cymbal sounds earlier
03:00:127 - ^

[7K]
00:10:985 - until 00:11:651 - this is the only time you don't map the background piano, so maybe add them here: 00:10:985 - , 00:11:318 - , and 00:11:651 - ya, noticed this before modding, added
00:48:505 - you missed a drum sound here fixed
00:53:531 - ^
00:58:557 - ^
01:03:343 - ^ All done
01:15:991 - add another note for cymbals? sure
01:19:133 - ^ done


that's all i can do, sorry. dont kd if not helpful enough

the others from the q may come to mod this

in the meantime, take this

good luck o/ Thanks!
Updated GD: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9i8jdjpu4rr4c ... D.osu?dl=0
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