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xi! <3

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[ Renaissance (Gray Another) ]
00:04:683 (4683|2,4997|2) - Song don't warrant 3 1/1 jacks here. Move to 4,3
00:05:626 (5626|4) - Remove, soft piano don't exist here
00:10:023 - Missing note for soft piano
00:10:338 (10338|2) - Triple is too strong here I guess. Remove one note
00:13:322 - Add note, as sounds like this are having 3 notes around.
00:33:898 (33898|3) - Move to 2 as bells are in different pitch
00:39:238 (39238|3) - Move to 2 for pitch
00:43:950 (43950|1) - Move to 0 as bells are in different pitch
00:49:762 (49762|1,49919|0) - Violin isn't right here. The sounds should be at 00:49:840 - and 00:50:037 - (You may want to use 25% playback to confirm this, especially because the latter one is on 1/8 which even me would suspect)
00:54:474 (54474|1) - Move to 3 for pitch
00:59:657 (59657|3,60285|4) - Swap for pitch
01:00:913 (60913|0,61071|1,61228|2,61385|3) - With above, Ctrl-H and move 01:01:542 (61542|1) - to 2
01:03:741 (63741|0,63976|2) - Violin isn't right here. What I found is at 01:03:544 - 01:03:780 - 01:04:035 - 01:04:251 - . But those are 1/8 and even 1/16 :| You definitely want to check with 25% playback. In fact the song is slowing down and may even suggest that there are genuine BPM changes warranting uninherited timing sections here.
01:09:133 (69133|1,69186|2) - No sound here, and...
01:09:238 (69238|3,69290|4,69343|0,69395|1,69448|2,69500|3,69552|4,69631|3) - What I get in 25% playback is 1/4s.
01:15:050 - Add note for cymbal
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Ctrl-H
01:16:620 - Add note for cymbal
01:19:526 - Missing note
01:19:762 - Add note for cymbal
01:22:275 - ^
01:24:788 - ^
01:26:987 (86987|2) - Move to 4 to prevent 3 jacks?
01:35:154 (95154|3) - move to 4
01:47:406 - Add note for cymbal?
01:59:029 - 01:59:971 - Ctrl-H all notes but keep LN (i.e. move resultant note onto 1-4
02:05:311 - Add note
02:06:411 - Add note at 0
02:06:882 - 02:07:196 - piano is present but notes are missing
02:17:249 (137249|4,137249|3) - Move 1/4 earlier and change to 2,3
02:23:924 (143924|1,144003|0,144081|3,144238|0,144317|4,144395|1) - Piano are absent here. Remove.
02:24:160 - And add note here
02:28:872 - Add note for cymbal?
02:40:966 - You use double stream here but 02:43:636 - is single stream... Not sure what you want tho.
03:00:128 (180128|0) - Move to 1
03:06:568 - Add note for cymbals
03:08:139 - Extraneous note?
03:08:924 - Add note for cymbals
03:17:406 (197406|1,197563|0) - Violin isn't right here, I got is 03:17:484 - 03:17:681 - Again, check with 25% playback
03:23:845 (203845|0) - Move to 3 for pitch?
03:40:416 - Add note at 4 and move 03:40:495 (220495|4) - to 1
03:51:411 (231411|2) - Why jack here? move to 3.
03:59:343 - Add note
04:01:856 - Missing piano. Add 2 notes
04:07:196 - Add note for strong piano
04:07:667 - ^
04:09:395 - Add note for cymbal
04:12:144 (252144|2) - Triples are off-beat. Intentional?
04:12:537 (252537|2) - Misplaced note? Move 1/4 later.
04:21:018 - Missing note
04:24:945 - Add note for cymbal
04:26:044 - ^
04:36:961 (276961|3) - Move 1/4 later

Also PM'ed you about GD stuff. I always find this a great song. Good luck! :)
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xi! <3

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[ Renaissance (Gray Another) ]
00:04:683 (4683|2,4997|2) - Song don't warrant 3 1/1 jacks here. Move to 4,3
00:05:626 (5626|4) - Remove, soft piano don't exist here
00:10:023 - Missing note for soft piano
00:10:338 (10338|2) - Triple is too strong here I guess. Remove one note
00:13:322 - Add note, as sounds like this are having 3 notes around.
00:33:898 (33898|3) - Move to 2 as bells are in different pitch
00:39:238 (39238|3) - Move to 2 for pitch
00:43:950 (43950|1) - Move to 0 as bells are in different pitch
00:49:762 (49762|1,49919|0) - Violin isn't right here. The sounds should be at 00:49:840 - and 00:50:037 - (You may want to use 25% playback to confirm this, especially because the latter one is on 1/8 which even me would suspect)
00:54:474 (54474|1) - Move to 3 for pitch
00:59:657 (59657|3,60285|4) - Swap for pitch
01:00:913 (60913|0,61071|1,61228|2,61385|3) - With above, Ctrl-H and move 01:01:542 (61542|1) - to 2
01:03:741 (63741|0,63976|2) - Violin isn't right here. What I found is at 01:03:544 - 01:03:780 - 01:04:035 - 01:04:251 - . But those are 1/8 and even 1/16 :| You definitely want to check with 25% playback. In fact the song is slowing down and may even suggest that there are genuine BPM changes warranting uninherited timing sections here.
01:09:133 (69133|1,69186|2) - No sound here, and...
01:09:238 (69238|3,69290|4,69343|0,69395|1,69448|2,69500|3,69552|4,69631|3) - What I get in 25% playback is 1/4s.
01:15:050 - Add note for cymbal
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Ctrl-H
01:16:620 - Add note for cymbal
01:19:526 - Missing note
01:19:762 - Add note for cymbal
01:22:275 - ^
01:24:788 - ^
01:26:987 (86987|2) - Move to 4 to prevent 3 jacks?
01:35:154 (95154|3) - move to 4
01:47:406 - Add note for cymbal?
01:59:029 - 01:59:971 - Ctrl-H all notes but keep LN (i.e. move resultant note onto 1-4
02:05:311 - Add note
02:06:411 - Add note at 0
02:06:882 - 02:07:196 - piano is present but notes are missing
02:17:249 (137249|4,137249|3) - Move 1/4 earlier and change to 2,3
02:23:924 (143924|1,144003|0,144081|3,144238|0,144317|4,144395|1) - Piano are absent here. Remove. I can heard some
02:24:160 - And add note here
02:28:872 - Add note for cymbal?
02:40:966 - You use double stream here but 02:43:636 - is single stream... Not sure what you want tho.
03:00:128 (180128|0) - Move to 1
03:06:568 - Add note for cymbals
03:08:139 - Extraneous note?
03:08:924 - Add note for cymbals
03:17:406 (197406|1,197563|0) - Violin isn't right here, I got is 03:17:484 - 03:17:681 - Again, check with 25% playback
03:23:845 (203845|0) - Move to 3 for pitch? nope
03:40:416 - Add note at 4 and move 03:40:495 (220495|4) - to 1
03:51:411 (231411|2) - Why jack here? move to 3.
03:59:343 - Add note
04:01:856 - Missing piano. Add 2 notes
04:07:196 - Add note for strong piano
04:07:667 - ^
04:09:395 - Add note for cymbal
04:12:144 (252144|2) - Triples are off-beat. Intentional?
04:12:537 (252537|2) - Misplaced note? Move 1/4 later.
04:21:018 - Missing note
04:24:945 - Add note for cymbal
04:26:044 - ^
04:36:961 (276961|3) - Move 1/4 later

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Also PM'ed you about GD stuff. I always find this a great song. Good luck! :)
thanks for the mod :)
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA-HALCYOOOOOON

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

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Rest of shite
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Metadata: seems fine

Timing: Mass of wrong stuff, I've written some of them below
00:00:914 - 95,5 BPM here, metronomes are working well on every second line now so it should be halved BPM here. Adjust SV accordingly
00:02:170 - Another 95,5 BPM red line here for metronome reset (BPM should start here, but you can't do that due to notes before)
00:10:966 - Pretty sure there's slower BPM here, I don't know by how much tho, I suck at timing. Aske Zenny, Blocko or just someone good with piano timing for exact timing
00:12:379 - 95,5 BPM again
00:18:348 - those notes sound off already so another timing error here
00:26:359 - 95,5 BPM
01:03:741 - Pretty sure that BPM slows down here
01:08:767 - 181 BPM
01:09:709 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM
01:30:128 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM

basically exact same problems occur throughout the map. Don't KD this post, call me back after you've fixed timing and I'll do a proper mod on it

EDIT 12/04: done IRC modding on stuff
2015-04-12 11:49 -Kamikaze-: a
2015-04-12 11:49 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 11:51 -Kamikaze-: SV on the calm part is total banana
2015-04-12 11:51 -Kamikaze-: like, why it's moving so much
2015-04-12 11:51 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 11:52 JamesHappy15: i liek it ;w;
2015-04-12 11:52 -Kamikaze-: I can guarantee that it will piss pepole off
2015-04-12 11:52 -Kamikaze-: because it moves for no reason
2015-04-12 11:52 -Kamikaze-: and it's like altmirrorbell
2015-04-12 11:53 JamesHappy15: ok ;w;
2015-04-12 11:53 -Kamikaze-: just keep it stable
2015-04-12 11:55 -Kamikaze-: are you ready/in editor/a
2015-04-12 11:55 JamesHappy15: yeah
2015-04-12 11:55 JamesHappy15: b
2015-04-12 11:56 -Kamikaze-: ok
2015-04-12 11:56 -Kamikaze-: psure that notes on the beggining are not on right pitches
2015-04-12 11:56 -Kamikaze-: but idk, I suck at pitches
2015-04-12 11:57 JamesHappy15: < same here
2015-04-12 11:57 -Kamikaze-: 00:05:311 - delete one note
2015-04-12 11:57 -Kamikaze-: 00:05:626 - same here
2015-04-12 11:57 -Kamikaze-: one of instruments is missing in those spots and doubles feel awkward
2015-04-12 11:57 -Kamikaze-: 00:06:254 - same
2015-04-12 11:58 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 11:58 JamesHappy15: done
2015-04-12 11:58 -Kamikaze-: 00:09:081 - s a m e
2015-04-12 11:58 -Kamikaze-: 00:09:709 - 00:10:028 - a
2015-04-12 11:59 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 11:59 -Kamikaze-: 00:13:321 - this totally doesn't warrant 3 notes
2015-04-12 11:59 -Kamikaze-: 00:15:834 - so does this
2015-04-12 12:00 -Kamikaze-: and here you have 2 notes for the same sound 00:18:391 -
2015-04-12 12:00 JamesHappy15: d o n e
2015-04-12 12:00 -Kamikaze-: practically same I know that pitches and shit
2015-04-12 12:00 -Kamikaze-: lel
2015-04-12 12:00 -Kamikaze-: 00:20:057 - 1/16
2015-04-12 12:00 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:01 -Kamikaze-: 00:26:359 (26359|1) - remove
2015-04-12 12:02 JamesHappy15: i thought 1/12 fk headphone
2015-04-12 12:02 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:02 -Kamikaze-: 00:30:128 (30128|0,30442|1,30756|2,31071|3,31385|1,31385|4) - ctrl+h cuz pitch'n shit
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: or just, you know what
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: 00:30:128 (30128|0,30442|1,30756|2,31071|3) - ctrl+j
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: 00:31:385 (31385|4) - to 3rd or 4th
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: idk
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: and move 00:31:385 (31385|1) - away
2015-04-12 12:04 JamesHappy15: oh my
2015-04-12 12:04 -Kamikaze-: if you've done this then 00:31:856 (31856|1,32327|0) - ctrl+h
2015-04-12 12:05 JamesHappy15: ^ not doing the ctrl+h thing
2015-04-12 12:05 -Kamikaze-: pitch
2015-04-12 12:06 -Kamikaze-: and a lot of awkwardness on left hand
2015-04-12 12:06 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:06 -Kamikaze-: after earlier suggestion
2015-04-12 12:06 JamesHappy15: so like reverse
2015-04-12 12:06 -Kamikaze-: kinda
2015-04-12 12:06 -Kamikaze-: 00:36:411 (36411|1) - move to 1st cuz easier to hit
2015-04-12 12:07 -Kamikaze-: 00:40:180 (40180|2,40495|3) - why are those 1/2
2015-04-12 12:07 -Kamikaze-: instruments are 1/4
2015-04-12 12:07 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:07 -Kamikaze-: also missing bell on 00:40:180 -
2015-04-12 12:07 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:07 -Kamikaze-: I feel like this mod will take long
2015-04-12 12:08 -Kamikaze-: since we're not even in the fast parts
2015-04-12 12:08 JamesHappy15: because marathon thing
2015-04-12 12:08 -Kamikaze-: 00:41:437 (41437|3,41437|4) - why is this double LN and 00:41:908 (41908|1,42379|1) - single
2015-04-12 12:08 -Kamikaze-: a
2015-04-12 12:08 JamesHappy15: strong violin
2015-04-12 12:09 -Kamikaze-: yeah, but those sounds are like, the same
2015-04-12 12:09 JamesHappy15: on double LN
2015-04-12 12:09 -Kamikaze-: and next LNs are singles
2015-04-12 12:09 JamesHappy15: owell doubled
2015-04-12 12:09 -Kamikaze-: 00:46:463 - delete one note like before
2015-04-12 12:10 -Kamikaze-: 00:49:290 (49290|4,49448|3,49605|2,49840|1,50076|0) - imo you should scramble this pattern a bit because of awkward snaps
2015-04-12 12:10 -Kamikaze-: it's going to be painful to time when it's a stair
2015-04-12 12:10 JamesHappy15: pitch ;w;
2015-04-12 12:11 -Kamikaze-: 300g-300g-200-100-200
2015-04-12 12:11 -Kamikaze-: this is what you'll get on sight
2015-04-12 12:11 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:12 JamesHappy15: i got like 300-300-300g-200-200
2015-04-12 12:12 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-04-12 12:12 -Kamikaze-: 200-200 was because of mistiming on LNs
2015-04-12 12:12 -Kamikaze-: and that's because of weird snaps
2015-04-12 12:13 JamesHappy15: yeah
2015-04-12 12:13 -Kamikaze-: 00:52:432 - [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3004376 I find this more accurate with pitches]
2015-04-12 12:15 -Kamikaze-: 01:08:767 - add here to emphasize deep beat
2015-04-12 12:16 -Kamikaze-: 01:09:866 - lol why is this single, this sound like double minijack for piano
2015-04-12 12:16 JamesHappy15: one note is enough
2015-04-12 12:17 -Kamikaze-: I don't understand why you layer kicks like 01:10:023 - with 3 notes when piano is the most impactful instrument in this whole song
2015-04-12 12:17 JamesHappy15: ayy
2015-04-12 12:17 -Kamikaze-: and piano gets like 1
2015-04-12 12:17 JamesHappy15: blame "resnap all notes"
2015-04-12 12:18 -Kamikaze-: besides, you have a) a lot of missing little kicks b) constant 1/4 sounds to map
2015-04-12 12:18 -Kamikaze-: is this seriously because of resnapping
2015-04-12 12:18 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:18 JamesHappy15: well yeah
2015-04-12 12:19 -Kamikaze-: so you need to revamp it before I go any further
2015-04-12 12:19 JamesHappy15: that's why i re-arranged all notes
2015-04-12 12:19 JamesHappy15: hmm
2015-04-12 12:19 -Kamikaze-: tbh I totally don't understand most of what's happening here
2015-04-12 12:19 -Kamikaze-: it's spiky as hell
2015-04-12 12:20 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: it feels undermapped apart from some pattern
2015-04-12 12:20 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: example
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: 01:52:745 -
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: dafuq is this empty space
2015-04-12 12:20 JamesHappy15: someone said overmapped
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: seriously
2015-04-12 12:21 -Kamikaze-: go smack them really hard
2015-04-12 12:21 -Kamikaze-: there are freakin kicks
2015-04-12 12:21 JamesHappy15: i feel like facepalming
2015-04-12 12:21 -Kamikaze-: so they made you ignore little kicks and leave only bigger ones
2015-04-12 12:21 -Kamikaze-: wow
2015-04-12 12:22 -Kamikaze-: best modding 2015
2015-04-12 12:22 JamesHappy15: well the truth is I didn't hear any little kicks before changing mp3
2015-04-12 12:23 JamesHappy15: that's why some parts are feel empty
2015-04-12 12:23 -Kamikaze-: okay
2015-04-12 12:23 JamesHappy15: oh the old one has a crappy quality
2015-04-12 12:23 -Kamikaze-: well that explains it
2015-04-12 12:23 -Kamikaze-: so you need to relayer most of map
2015-04-12 12:23 -Kamikaze-: damn
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: I'll go over some important bits then
2015-04-12 12:24 JamesHappy15: yeah
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: and leave rest to you
2015-04-12 12:24 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:24 JamesHappy15: i'll call you later then
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: 02:09:080 - this feels too fast for just 1/8
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: idk
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: nah, I want to get over it asap
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: xD
2015-04-12 12:25 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:25 JamesHappy15: btw not gonna change
2015-04-12 12:25 -Kamikaze-: if snaps are wrong then you'll have to
2015-04-12 12:26 JamesHappy15: hmm
2015-04-12 12:26 -Kamikaze-: 02:13:792 (133792|0,133871|1,133949|2,134028|0,134107|1,134185|2) - I don't hear any instruments suitable for those notes
2015-04-12 12:26 -Kamikaze-: maybe on white ticks
2015-04-12 12:26 -Kamikaze-: piano stair starts around being hearable 02:14:264 -
2015-04-12 12:27 -Kamikaze-: and it certanly doesn't sound like 1/4
2015-04-12 12:27 -Kamikaze-: 02:16:620 - this is more like 1/8 or 1/12
2015-04-12 12:27 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:28 -Kamikaze-: 02:17:169 (137169|3,137169|2) - move to 02:17:143 - (1/3
2015-04-12 12:29 -Kamikaze-: 02:17:405 (137405|0,137405|3) - move to 02:17:326 - (1/12)
2015-04-12 12:30 -Kamikaze-: 02:23:923 (143923|1,144002|0,144080|3) - delete those notes unless you're accenting something else than piano
2015-04-12 12:30 -Kamikaze-: 02:29:813 - 1/8
2015-04-12 12:31 -Kamikaze-: 02:30:520 - missing note
2015-04-12 12:31 JamesHappy15: done
2015-04-12 12:31 -Kamikaze-: 02:31:384 - add 2 more cuz a many crash
2015-04-12 12:32 -Kamikaze-: you should add more notes on crashes like 02:36:724 -
2015-04-12 12:32 JamesHappy15: ah dem lags
2015-04-12 12:32 -Kamikaze-: ayy lmao
2015-04-12 12:33 JamesHappy15: wtf my ram
2015-04-12 12:33 -Kamikaze-: 02:50:232 - pianos like this one are more impactful but they're mapped with single stairs, idk doublestair maybe?
2015-04-12 12:33 -Kamikaze-: btw those are general suggestions
2015-04-12 12:33 -Kamikaze-: I prolly won't use same ones for similar stuff
2015-04-12 12:34 -Kamikaze-: 02:56:515 (176515|2,176672|2,176829|2) - to 4th for better pattern
2015-04-12 12:34 JamesHappy15: i'll try double stairs
2015-04-12 12:35 -Kamikaze-: 1,0x sv from here
2015-04-12 12:35 -Kamikaze-: because those patterns are omg
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: oh and this part startles me the most
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: like
2015-04-12 12:36 JamesHappy15: where
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: oh shit forgot timeline
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: 03:33:269 -
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: this is some ayylmao density on a pretty calm part
2015-04-12 12:37 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:38 JamesHappy15: lel
2015-04-12 12:38 -Kamikaze-: I don't even hear instruments for some notes lol
2015-04-12 12:38 -Kamikaze-: also it seems like you've forgotten to do bpm for this part
2015-04-12 12:39 -Kamikaze-: also notice how this is the hardest part of the whole map
2015-04-12 12:39 -Kamikaze-: :V
2015-04-12 12:39 JamesHappy15: :^)
2015-04-12 12:40 -Kamikaze-: next level difficulty progression
2015-04-12 12:40 JamesHappy15: mfw i can heard that part better than other parts
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: the startling thing is that it's a calm part
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: I know there is some shit going on which isn't going on in the first calm part
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: but wow
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: it's twice as hard as first fast part
2015-04-12 12:41 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: and it's harder than fast part at the end
2015-04-12 12:42 -Kamikaze-: oh and also, this pattern
2015-04-12 12:42 -Kamikaze-: 04:57:300 -
2015-04-12 12:42 -Kamikaze-: ayylmao max
2015-04-12 12:43 -Kamikaze-: this is some helix shit right there
2015-04-12 12:43 JamesHappy15: heh
2015-04-12 12:43 -Kamikaze-: 04:59:421 (299421|3,299499|2,299578|1) - delete those notes for bigger impact on SV and stuff
2015-04-12 12:44 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-04-12 12:44 -Kamikaze-: you should totally use this constant 1/4 on fast parts
2015-04-12 12:44 -Kamikaze-: you can hear it in background
2015-04-12 12:44 -Kamikaze-: and generally put more emphasis on crashes/pianos
2015-04-12 12:44 JamesHappy15: gotta review this well
2015-04-12 12:45 -Kamikaze-: whee I've done something
2015-04-12 12:45 JamesHappy15: wat a mod
2015-04-12 12:45 -Kamikaze-: I hope you're not mad cuz this is a lazy mod
2015-04-12 12:45 JamesHappy15: :^)
2015-04-12 12:45 JamesHappy15: i'm not ofc
2015-04-12 12:45 -Kamikaze-: o/
2015-04-12 12:45 -Kamikaze-: gotta post in thread den
2015-04-12 12:46 JamesHappy15: o
posted

-Kamikaze- wrote:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA-HALCYOOOOOON

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

Metadata: seems fine

Timing: Mass of wrong stuff, I've written some of them below
00:00:914 - 95,5 BPM here, metronomes are working well on every second line now so it should be halved BPM here. Adjust SV accordingly
00:02:170 - Another 95,5 BPM red line here for metronome reset (BPM should start here, but you can't do that due to notes before)
00:10:966 - Pretty sure there's slower BPM here, I don't know by how much tho, I suck at timing. Aske Zenny, Blocko or just someone good with piano timing for exact timing
00:12:379 - 95,5 BPM again
00:18:348 - those notes sound off already so another timing error here
00:26:359 - 95,5 BPM
01:03:741 - Pretty sure that BPM slows down here
01:08:767 - 181 BPM
01:09:709 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM
01:30:128 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM

basically exact same problems occur throughout the map. Don't KD this post, call me back after you've fixed timing and I'll do a proper mod on it
oh yeah thx maki for the timing

owait not 191 BPM?
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aaaaa, my mistake, 181 -> 191, anyway, you still need to find someone to get your timing exactly right
posted
thx 4 the memes maki
posted
I haven't download the file, maybe my mod will come this evening/tomorrow..
Short mod for now ok ?

Add "yama_ko" and "Lyrical Signal" to the tags..

Btw, i recommend you to use this BG..
That's for now ^^

NO KUDOSU

posted
GG HENTI PERSON.
5k henti indeed.
420weedsmokingshrek4life.
#shappy4life.

Black And White Renaissance:

00:05:311 (5311|2) - after replaying and replaying i still feel that this part is currently the same as 00:04:683 (4683|2,4683|0,4997|3,4997|1) - but just a little a little milder. otherwise its still loud. add nota plox
00:05:940 (5940|2) - this has some deep sound, deep sound + high sound = 1 note, gg m8 please no 420noscopperino. add note. prefferably on thee 1st column.
00:09:395 (9395|0) - not sure about this for just being a 1 noted only. Its not deep but its already high to put another note, its not deep as 00:09:395 (9395|0) - but its still high enough, consider this.
00:07:824 (7824|3,9081|2) - not sure to leave these parts 1 noted only. idunno rethink just mentioning this.
00:22:948 (22948|0) - could be double noted.
00:26:359 (26359|4,28872|2) - - ayy lmao. please http://puu.sh/hfYlQ/adb4568543.jpg
00:31:385 (31385|2) - in here you could still remix this 420weedsmokin. there's a slight pause between 00:31:699 until 00:31:804 im quite sure about this. leaving as suggestion if youd like to noscope the players. also 1/12
00:31:385 (31385|2) - wrong ending of ln please 00:31:856 (31856|3) - wrong start please. wat u du in life. more precise and correct, > http://puu.sh/hfYeE/7e9c9b7d08.jpg its 1/12 im definitely right in here i cant be deaf.
00:33:898 (33898|2) - ayyyyy http://puu.sh/hfYqJ/ad9cc24746.jpg
00:32:327 (32327|4,35154|3) - http://puu.sh/hfYxC/7806cf87c5.jpg wat u mop wit ot hidsit? plox henti-sama
00:36:254 (36254|3,36411|0,36411|4) - http://puu.sh/hfYDO/8750b21130.jpg
00:40:023 (40023|1,40180|3,40180|4) - definitely SOUNDthing is wrong in here,"badumtsss" please re cheeeack it henti.
00:41:437 (41437|4,41437|3,41908|1,41908|0,42379|0,42379|1) - ''^w^ http://puu.sh/hfYSs/abf3abf17a.jpg

from here on. not gonna FIX and POINT everything that is missed beat, i felt that this is kinda your job as the creator of this map, There are still more im pretty sure for example, 00:43:950 (43950|2) - sort of advice, as a mapper you have to take time and review the map you made, for example by making time for it, cause im gonna suggest you to check your map in 25% play back rate. youll see what you need to see, infact if this is not solved immediately as i see that you are currently planning for rank. "THIS" problems will make your headhurt finally when your about to get 420smonoscoped. seriously so make time to this map specially, THO WHY DOES ANY BODI HAS POINTED THIS KIND OF PROBLEM, PEOPLE WHY PLOX. also jamesu nyan becareful specially in this parts, from here 00:25:706 (25706|0) - - to - 01:08:767 (68767|0) - i want you to reviewww revieewww this part cause this is where mostly the problem you will see. but take note to take a look at the other parts too.

00:39:238 (39238|2) - i would prefer that you would move this to 2nd column (or) another idea is to move 00:38:924 (38924|2) - to 5th, the pattern atm looks weird if youd ask me.
00:40:809 (40809|4) - this ln should be moved, to the 4th column, in here 00:39:866 (39866|0,40023|1,40180|3,40338|0,40495|2,40652|0) - im getting your idea or i already got it lmao. highly suggested since 00:40:180 (40180|3,40809|4) - also! i just found that, 00:40:495 (40495|2) - i the same sound so im suggesting that you move 00:40:180 (40180|3,40495|2,40809|4) - in "one" column only regardless of the pattern were talking about $$$$$$ here.
00:48:976 (48976|1) - id double note if youd ask me. cause of the BIG bell sound.
00:48:976 (48976|1,50233|3,50547|2,50861|1,51175|0) - regarding here if you'd ask me. ID PREFER TO FOLLOW THE PR HERE CAUSE IT FLOWS BETTER AND PLAY BETTER IN THIS WAY. more or less, ctrl g it and find a better pattern in 00:51:489 (51489|2,51489|1,51961|3,52432|2,52589|1) - .
00:55:259 (55259|3,55259|1) - id ctrl h this for better flow of your 420 patturn.
00:56:516 (56516|1) - youd either place this note in the 1st or 3rd column got no other option m8 1st or 3rd or get rekt.
00:59:029 (59029|2,59657|4) - move 00:59:029 (59029|2) - in the 5th column and then 00:59:657 (59657|4) - to 1st for better 420 pattern
01:01:517 (61517|0) - id add another note here, for much stronger presence of the sound. 01:02:811 (62811|1) - here too. 01:04:271 (64271|4) - same.
01:08:767 (68767|0) - my hmm suggestion you add another note cus of the weird deep sound
01:09:238 (69238|0,69316|1,69395|2,69473|3,69552|4,69630|3,69709|1,69709|2,69709|0) - could do something more fancy here mr. smartpants http://puu.sh/hfZYw/f4a477a9b7.jpg just my opinion i liked this pattern it connects to the next pattern youre having and it felt nice to play.
01:11:122 (71122|4,71122|3,71436|4,71436|2) - should have 3 noted these guys or else delete 01:10:808 (70808|2,70808|3,70808|0) - one of your bae totally inconsistent and feels empty.
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1) - add another note please cause of 01:12:536 (72536|2,72536|1,72536|0,73321|3,73321|2,73321|0,73792|2,73792|1,73792|0) -
01:14:578 (74578|1,74578|4) - these is where id prefer put my 3 notes the fact that it is loud it suits here the most.
01:22:431 (82431|3,82431|1) - dont really know what is the reason behind this 2 notes that has to be here. delete you could continue stream instead!
01:37:667 (97667|0) - add another note.
01:46:148 (106148|4,106227|3,106306|1,106306|2,106384|3,106463|4,106463|1,106463|0,106541|3,106620|1,106698|2,106777|1,106777|3,106855|2,106934|3,106934|1,107012|2,107091|3,107091|0,107091|4,107169|2,107248|3,107248|1,107326|2,107405|0,107405|1,107405|3) - for me these felt messy could have polished this more.
01:49:447 (109447|3,109525|1,109604|3) - delete this is not needed imo and oh! look it is much more neat!
01:52:038 (112038|4,112274|0) - dont know whyd you suddenly jump with these 2 lns.
02:32:484 (152484|3,152484|2,152484|0) - this sound is catchy, ive seen this before hmm check my past mod, AGAIN THIS IS CATCHY OMFG WHYD YOU SUDDNLY 02:32:798 (152798|1,152798|3,152955|0,152955|2,153112|4,153112|1) - bruh
03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - in my ways, if youd do something crazy as 03:49:604 (229604|2,229604|4,229682|0,229682|3,229761|4,229761|1,229840|0,229840|2,229918|1,229918|3,229997|2,229997|0,230075|1,230075|3,230154|0,230154|2,230232|1,230232|4,230311|3,230311|0,230389|4,230389|2,230468|3,230468|1,230546|2,230546|0,230546|4) - you wouldnt follow 03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - these sounds anymore "^w^ it just makes the pattern look messy get rid of it or i rekt u. just concentrate on your stream it will play better!
03:49:054 (229054|2,229054|1,229290|3,229290|2,229290|1,229447|2,229447|1,236201|4,236515|4,236829|4,237771|1) - id prefer if youd delete this, should've followed the pattern more.
04:25:573 (265573|3,265573|1) - this part is MORE stronger than 04:25:415 (265415|4,265415|2,265415|0) - and yet you gave it a 2 notes only? i felt bad for the part :(


Hi Hello! Jamesu nyan. A little sort of thingy advice thingy? as a mapper, you stated to me that you didnt need another diff oke. In this case this is a marathon right? which needs only 1 diff right as you said please. in this case [2] you should have reviewed and checked this more often if youd really plan on ranking this, cause one of the biggest pros of mapping marathon is having only 1 diff, therefore which means you only have 1 diff to give a shit at, and that doesnt mean to slack of no! you should have checked it more often and fixed it more often the fact that you only have "This" diff and yet the song isnt that really really really long i think you should give time to this awesome map that you made if your really aiming for rank. Review the parts,ask someone's opinion,ask more mods,ask more mods!, annoy bns to check it ( lmao dont lol jk) , play it more , and make time to it more, cause i know this map has a potential and i would be glad to see this in the ranked section soon : ^)


this is yuno nyan signing off.
posted

YunoFanatic wrote:

GG HENTI PERSON.
5k henti indeed.
420weedsmokingshrek4life.
#shappy4life.

Black And White Renaissance:

00:05:311 (5311|2) - after replaying and replaying i still feel that this part is currently the same as 00:04:683 (4683|2,4683|0,4997|3,4997|1) - but just a little a little milder. otherwise its still loud. add nota plox
00:05:940 (5940|2) - this has some deep sound, deep sound + high sound = 1 note, gg m8 please no 420noscopperino. add note. prefferably on thee 1st column.
00:09:395 (9395|0) - not sure about this for just being a 1 noted only. Its not deep but its already high to put another note, its not deep as 00:09:395 (9395|0) - but its still high enough, consider this.
00:07:824 (7824|3,9081|2) - not sure to leave these parts 1 noted only. idunno rethink just mentioning this.
00:22:948 (22948|0) - could be double noted.no thx
00:26:359 (26359|4,28872|2) - - ayy lmao. please http://puu.sh/hfYlQ/adb4568543.jpg nope
00:31:385 (31385|2) - in here you could still remix this 420weedsmokin. there's a slight pause between 00:31:699 until 00:31:804 im quite sure about this. leaving as suggestion if youd like to noscope the players. also 1/12 no thx
00:31:385 (31385|2) - wrong ending of ln please 00:31:856 (31856|3) - wrong start please. wat u du in life. more precise and correct, > http://puu.sh/hfYeE/7e9c9b7d08.jpg its 1/12 im definitely right in here i cant be deaf. no change (listen closely at 25% playback.)
00:33:898 (33898|2) - ayyyyy http://puu.sh/hfYqJ/ad9cc24746.jpg yuno plz. no change
00:32:327 (32327|4,35154|3) - http://puu.sh/hfYxC/7806cf87c5.jpg wat u mop wit ot hidsit? plox henti-sama no thx
00:36:254 (36254|3,36411|0,36411|4) - http://puu.sh/hfYDO/8750b21130.jpg I repeated many times but i didn't hear anything 1/12 here so no change
00:40:023 (40023|1,40180|3,40180|4) - definitely SOUNDthing is wrong in here,"badumtsss" please re cheeeack it henti. no change plox
00:41:437 (41437|4,41437|3,41908|1,41908|0,42379|0,42379|1) - ''^w^ http://puu.sh/hfYSs/abf3abf17a.jpg again

from here on. not gonna FIX and POINT everything that is missed beat, i felt that this is kinda your job as the creator of this map, There are still more im pretty sure for example, 00:43:950 (43950|2) - sort of advice, as a mapper you have to take time and review the map you made, for example by making time for it, cause im gonna suggest you to check your map in 25% play back rate. youll see what you need to see, infact if this is not solved immediately as i see that you are currently planning for rank. "THIS" problems will make your headhurt finally when your about to get 420smonoscoped. seriously so make time to this map specially, THO WHY DOES ANY BODI HAS POINTED THIS KIND OF PROBLEM, PEOPLE WHY PLOX. also jamesu nyan becareful specially in this parts, from here 00:25:706 (25706|0) - - to - 01:08:767 (68767|0) - i want you to reviewww revieewww this part cause this is where mostly the problem you will see. but take note to take a look at the other parts too. i'm being doing this everytime yu no

00:39:238 (39238|2) - i would prefer that you would move this to 2nd column (or) another idea is to move 00:38:924 (38924|2) - to 5th, the pattern atm looks weird if youd ask me.
00:40:809 (40809|4) - this ln should be moved, to the 4th column, in here 00:39:866 (39866|0,40023|1,40180|3,40338|0,40495|2,40652|0) - im getting your idea or i already got it lmao. highly suggested since 00:40:180 (40180|3,40809|4) - also! i just found that, 00:40:495 (40495|2) - i the same sound so im suggesting that you move 00:40:180 (40180|3,40495|2,40809|4) - in "one" column only regardless of the pattern were talking about $$$$$$ here.
00:48:976 (48976|1) - id double note if youd ask me. cause of the BIG bell sound.
00:48:976 (48976|1,50233|3,50547|2,50861|1,51175|0) - regarding here if you'd ask me. ID PREFER TO FOLLOW THE PR HERE CAUSE IT FLOWS BETTER AND PLAY BETTER IN THIS WAY. more or less, ctrl g it and find a better pattern in 00:51:489 (51489|2,51489|1,51961|3,52432|2,52589|1) - . no thx
00:55:259 (55259|3,55259|1) - id ctrl h this for better flow of your 420 patturn.
00:56:516 (56516|1) - youd either place this note in the 1st or 3rd column got no other option m8 1st or 3rd or get rekt.
00:59:029 (59029|2,59657|4) - move 00:59:029 (59029|2) - in the 5th column and then 00:59:657 (59657|4) - to 1st for better 420 pattern
01:01:517 (61517|0) - id add another note here, for much stronger presence of the sound. 01:02:811 (62811|1) - here too. 01:04:271 (64271|4) - same.no thx
01:08:767 (68767|0) - my hmm suggestion you add another note cus of the weird deep sound no thx
01:09:238 (69238|0,69316|1,69395|2,69473|3,69552|4,69630|3,69709|1,69709|2,69709|0) - could do something more fancy here mr. smartpants http://puu.sh/hfZYw/f4a477a9b7.jpg just my opinion i liked this pattern it connects to the next pattern youre having and it felt nice to play.
01:11:122 (71122|4,71122|3,71436|4,71436|2) - should have 3 noted these guys or else delete 01:10:808 (70808|2,70808|3,70808|0) - one of your bae totally inconsistent and feels empty.
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1) - add another note please cause of 01:12:536 (72536|2,72536|1,72536|0,73321|3,73321|2,73321|0,73792|2,73792|1,73792|0) -
01:14:578 (74578|1,74578|4) - these is where id prefer put my 3 notes the fact that it is loud it suits here the most.
01:22:431 (82431|3,82431|1) - dont really know what is the reason behind this 2 notes that has to be here. delete you could continue stream instead!
01:37:667 (97667|0) - add another note.
01:46:148 (106148|4,106227|3,106306|1,106306|2,106384|3,106463|4,106463|1,106463|0,106541|3,106620|1,106698|2,106777|1,106777|3,106855|2,106934|3,106934|1,107012|2,107091|3,107091|0,107091|4,107169|2,107248|3,107248|1,107326|2,107405|0,107405|1,107405|3) - for me these felt messy could have polished this more. re-arranged
01:49:447 (109447|3,109525|1,109604|3) - delete this is not needed imo and oh! look it is much more neat!
01:52:038 (112038|4,112274|0) - dont know whyd you suddenly jump with these 2 lns. violin plox
02:32:484 (152484|3,152484|2,152484|0) - this sound is catchy, ive seen this before hmm check my past mod, AGAIN THIS IS CATCHY OMFG WHYD YOU SUDDNLY 02:32:798 (152798|1,152798|3,152955|0,152955|2,153112|4,153112|1) - bruh
03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - in my ways, if youd do something crazy as 03:49:604 (229604|2,229604|4,229682|0,229682|3,229761|4,229761|1,229840|0,229840|2,229918|1,229918|3,229997|2,229997|0,230075|1,230075|3,230154|0,230154|2,230232|1,230232|4,230311|3,230311|0,230389|4,230389|2,230468|3,230468|1,230546|2,230546|0,230546|4) - you wouldnt follow 03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - these sounds anymore "^w^ it just makes the pattern look messy get rid of it or i rekt u. just concentrate on your stream it will play better!
03:49:054 (229054|2,229054|1,229290|3,229290|2,229290|1,229447|2,229447|1,236201|4,236515|4,236829|4,237771|1) - id prefer if youd delete this, should've followed the pattern more. repatterned
04:25:573 (265573|3,265573|1) - this part is MORE stronger than 04:25:415 (265415|4,265415|2,265415|0) - and yet you gave it a 2 notes only? i felt bad for the part :(my bad

Rest of the mod applied

Hi Hello! Jamesu nyan. A little sort of thingy advice thingy? as a mapper, you stated to me that you didnt need another diff oke. In this case this is a marathon right? which needs only 1 diff right as you said please. in this case [2] you should have reviewed and checked this more often if youd really plan on ranking this, cause one of the biggest pros of mapping marathon is having only 1 diff, therefore which means you only have 1 diff to give a shit at, and that doesnt mean to slack of no! you should have checked it more often and fixed it more often the fact that you only have "This" diff and yet the song isnt that really really really long i think you should give time to this awesome map that you made if your really aiming for rank. Review the parts,ask someone's opinion,ask more mods,ask more mods!, annoy bns to check it ( lmao dont lol jk) , play it more , and make time to it more, cause i know this map has a potential and i would be glad to see this in the ranked section soon : ^)


this is yuno nyan signing off.
a
thx u henti

Kazamastar11 wrote:

I haven't download the file, maybe my mod will come this evening/tomorrow..
Short mod for now ok ?

Add "yama_ko" and "Lyrical Signal" to the tags..

Btw, i recommend you to use this BG..
That's for now ^^

NO KUDOSU

added tags but i prefer not to change the BG.
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From Kazamastar's Queue


[General]
1. Metadata
  1. I've mention this on the first mod


2. Design
  1. I think you must resize the BG to 1366x768


3. BG
  1. Resize to 1366x768


4. Timing / BPM
  1. Huh ? Where's the Kiai ?
  2. 01:09:709 - Start
  3. 01:19:133 - End
  4. 01:19:761 - Start
  5. 01:29:813 OR 01:30:127 - End
  6. 01:49:918 - Start
  7. 02:08:766 - End
  8. 02:31:384 - Start
  9. 02:40:808 - End
  10. 02:41:436 - Start
  11. 02:51:175 - End
  12. 02:51:489 - Start
  13. 03:00:913 - End
  14. 03:01:541 OR 03:01:855 - Start
  15. 03:10:337 - End
  16. 03:34:211 - Start
  17. 03:53:374 - End
  18. 03:54:316 - Start
  19. 04:14:421 - End
  20. 04:16:934 - Start
  21. 04:26:358 - End
  22. 04:26:986 - Start
  23. 04:36:724 - End
  24. 04:37:038 - Start
  25. 04:46:463 - End
  26. 04:47:091 - Start
  27. 04:59:970 - End


5. Hitsound
  1. No problem


6. Difficulty
  1. Cruel, but ok
LN : Long notes / Hold notes
PR : Pitch Relevancy
Stair : 0,1,2,3 / 3,2,1,0 (Ascending / Descending notes)
Trill : 0,1,0 / 3,2,3 (Like > / <)
Hammer (Jackhammer) : Notes on one column 0,0,0 / 1,1,1 (Spam on one column)

COLUMN

4K : |0|1|2|3|
5K : |0|1|2|3|4|
6K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|
8K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Renaissance (Gray Another)]
00:15:834 (15834|3) - Here, i know you're following the pitch, well it's up to you but i prefer if you move this to 1
00:22:948 - 2 notes ?

01:29:813 (89813|1) - Move to 0
01:30:128 (90128|3) - Move to 4
01:41:593 (101593|3) - Move to 0/1 for PR
01:46:463 until 01:49:840 - I think it's overmapped
02:21:332 until 02:30:127 - ^
02:49:447 until 02:51:489 - ^
02:54:787 (174787|1) - Move to 2
03:01:855 until 03:05:154 - Overmap
03:08:609 (188609|1) - Move to 0
03:11:436 (191436|1,191515|0) - Move them to the next column
03:11:593 (191593|4,191672|3,191751|2,191829|1,191908|3,191986|2,192065|1,192143|0,192222|4,192300|3,192379|1,192457|0,192536|1,192536|2,192536|4,192614|3,192693|2,192771|1) - Ctrl+H
03:34:211 until 03:53:059 - Overmap woah
03:58:086 (238086|1) - Move to 3
03:59:342 (239342|1) - ^
04:01:463 (241463|3) - Move to 1/2
04:02:169 until 04:14:421 - Overmap
04:16:934 (256934|3) - Move to 4
04:22:745 (262745|1) - Move to 0
04:46:148 (286148|2) - Move to 3
04:47:405 until 04:50:703 - Overmap
04:56:201 until 04:58:086 - ^
Reduce some notes on the overmapped part, or it'll prevent fire to come (?)

Really short mod :(
I'm sorry.. Take my star anyway ^^

I almost MM this song on Cytus (playing with thumb and forget the 3 hold note at the ending)
Good luck~

Feedback about my mod :
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Hi Jamesu~
mod request from

hope it will help :3

Collumn 5K = 1/2/3/4/5

[Gray Another]
00:08:139 (8139|0) - move to 5 to avoid jacku
00:14:263 (14263|2,14577|3) - Ctrl+J for pitch relevancy
00:22:948 (22948|0) - You could make this 1/1 LN imo , since it does sound abit longer tham other sounds
00:29:500 (29500|0,29735|2,29971|4) - This should be 1/3 snap ^^b
00:49:605 (49605|3,49840|0,50076|2) - ^ should be 1/3
00:55:259 (55259|1) - (optional) move to 1
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1,71279|3) - you used 3 notes here and only 2 here l 01:13:792 (73792|0,73792|1) - you may keep consistent amount of notes to the same sounds
^ I suggest to use 2 only for snares here or make all of it 3 notes if you want super hard diffu
01:18:661 (78661|2) - ^same reason for concistency reason you should make this 2 notes
01:33:190 (93190|4) - add note (drum sound here )
01:39:866 (99866|2) - add one more note for cymbal sound
01:43:243 (103243|4) - add note for drum sound
01:48:269 (108269|2) - add to 3 (drum sound here too )
01:57:300 (117300|4) - I suggest to move it to 3 ( even tho both placement make it shielding with another LN ) I think it's better to make shield at end of LN tham the start of it in term of difficulty
^basically Easy = move to 3 Hard = don't move
=^)
02:07:667 (127667|1) - add one more note to 5 ( louder drum sound here imo)
02:12:143 (132143|3) - Move to 02:12:117 (132117|3) - (this is actually 1/3 snap )
02:12:222 (132222|0) - move to 02:12:326 (132326|0) -
( if you were actually following drum then ) 02:12:143 (132143|3) - only this one need to be moved
02:31:855 (151855|4) - add one more note imo

special mention :
03:01:855 (181855|2,181855|3) - this part looks awesome *w*

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03:08:452 (188452|4) - add 2 notes to for an example 1 and 5
03:17:248 (197248|2,197484|1,197680|0) - this notes are 1/3 even it's reallllyy smallll gap it's 1/3
03:37:196 (217196|2,217353|1,217588|0) - same this notes are 1/3
04:01:698 (241698|4,241698|1,241698|2,241698|3) - I think 3 notes would be fine ,4 seems abit too much
04:40:651 (280651|2,280651|0,280651|1,280651|4,280887|1,280887|0,280887|2,280887|3,281122|1,281122|4,281122|3,281122|2,281279|0,281279|2,281279|1,281279|3,281515|3,281515|4,281515|1,281515|2) - wow I like this :O
04:46:148 (286148|2,286148|0) - should be 3 notes imo
04:54:002 (294002|4,294002|0) - add 2 notes

Also On a side note only one thing that I find pretty special even i can't really say if i'm wrong
The piano part from here 03:34:211 (214211|1,214211|0) - to the end of the piano section after the whole wall of chords
some people might consider it as OVER map but tbh '' sound '' ''key pressed '' hmmm =^) trying to make hard stuff I like that tho i doubt being abble to pass this . First I thought hmm maybe it's not 1/4 but 1/3 but nope it does really sound like 1/4 so err
tl:dr : Consider nerfing that part if too much people complain about it (( consider )) (lol) x)


Sugoi diff , hope it will help Good Luck Jamesu~ ^^/ take a stawwy and have a nice day desu~ !
As my opinion I consider nothing as Overmap atleast not when keys are pressed when it does have sounds actually legit to me xD
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Kazamastar11 wrote:

From Kazamastar's Queue


[General]
1. Metadata
  1. I've mention this on the first mod


2. Design
  1. I think you must resize the BG to 1366x768


3. BG
  1. Resize to 1366x768


4. Timing / BPM
  1. Huh ? Where's the Kiai ?
  2. 01:09:709 - Start
  3. 01:19:133 - End
  4. 01:19:761 - Start
  5. 01:29:813 OR 01:30:127 - End
  6. 01:49:918 - Start
  7. 02:08:766 - End
  8. 02:31:384 - Start
  9. 02:40:808 - End
  10. 02:41:436 - Start
  11. 02:51:175 - End
  12. 02:51:489 - Start
  13. 03:00:913 - End
  14. 03:01:541 OR 03:01:855 - Start
  15. 03:10:337 - End
  16. 03:34:211 - Start
  17. 03:53:374 - End
  18. 03:54:316 - Start
  19. 04:14:421 - End
  20. 04:16:934 - Start
  21. 04:26:358 - End
  22. 04:26:986 - Start
  23. 04:36:724 - End
  24. 04:37:038 - Start
  25. 04:46:463 - End
  26. 04:47:091 - Start
  27. 04:59:970 - End


5. Hitsound
  1. No problem


6. Difficulty
  1. Cruel, but ok
LN : Long notes / Hold notes
PR : Pitch Relevancy
Stair : 0,1,2,3 / 3,2,1,0 (Ascending / Descending notes)
Trill : 0,1,0 / 3,2,3 (Like > / <)
Hammer (Jackhammer) : Notes on one column 0,0,0 / 1,1,1 (Spam on one column)

COLUMN

4K : |0|1|2|3|
5K : |0|1|2|3|4|
6K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|
8K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Renaissance (Gray Another)]
00:15:834 (15834|3) - Here, i know you're following the pitch, well it's up to you but i prefer if you move this to 1 no thanks
00:22:948 - 2 notes ?

01:29:813 (89813|1) - Move to 0
01:30:128 (90128|3) - Move to 4
01:41:593 (101593|3) - Move to 0/1 for PR
01:46:463 until 01:49:840 - I think it's overmapped nope
02:21:332 until 02:30:127 - ^ I think you didn't heard very well on piano and some small kicks
02:49:447 until 02:51:489 - ^ small kicks
02:54:787 (174787|1) - Move to 2 nope
03:01:855 until 03:05:154 - Overmap NOPE
03:08:609 (188609|1) - Move to 0
03:11:436 (191436|1,191515|0) - Move them to the next column
03:11:593 (191593|4,191672|3,191751|2,191829|1,191908|3,191986|2,192065|1,192143|0,192222|4,192300|3,192379|1,192457|0,192536|1,192536|2,192536|4,192614|3,192693|2,192771|1) - Ctrl+H
03:34:211 until 03:53:059 - Overmap woah nerf it a bit
03:58:086 (238086|1) - Move to 3
03:59:342 (239342|1) - ^ nope
04:01:463 (241463|3) - Move to 1/2
04:02:169 until 04:14:421 - Overmap nope
04:16:934 (256934|3) - Move to 4 nope
04:22:745 (262745|1) - Move to 0
04:46:148 (286148|2) - Move to 3
04:47:405 until 04:50:703 - Overmap same
04:56:201 until 04:58:086 - ^ same
Reduce some notes on the overmapped part, or it'll prevent fire to come (?)
rest of the mods applied
Really short mod :(
I'm sorry.. Take my star anyway ^^

I almost MM this song on Cytus (playing with thumb and forget the 3 hold note at the ending) oh
Good luck~

Feedback about my mod :
Not bad. Hope you can get better at modding

Eternalie wrote:

Hi Jamesu~
mod request from

hope it will help :3

Collumn 5K = 1/2/3/4/5

[Gray Another]
00:08:139 (8139|0) - move to 5 to avoid jacku
00:14:263 (14263|2,14577|3) - Ctrl+J for pitch relevancy
00:22:948 (22948|0) - You could make this 1/1 LN imo , since it does sound abit longer tham other sounds nope
00:29:500 (29500|0,29735|2,29971|4) - This should be 1/3 snap ^^b
00:49:605 (49605|3,49840|0,50076|2) - ^ should be 1/3
00:55:259 (55259|1) - (optional) move to 1
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1,71279|3) - you used 3 notes here and only 2 here l 01:13:792 (73792|0,73792|1) - you may keep consistent amount of notes to the same sounds
^ I suggest to use 2 only for snares here or make all of it 3 notes if you want super hard diffu
01:18:661 (78661|2) - ^same reason for concistency reason you should make this 2 notes
01:33:190 (93190|4) - add note (drum sound here )
01:39:866 (99866|2) - add one more note for cymbal sound
01:43:243 (103243|4) - add note for drum sound
01:48:269 (108269|2) - add to 3 (drum sound here too ) this time nope
01:57:300 (117300|4) - I suggest to move it to 3 ( even tho both placement make it shielding with another LN ) I think it's better to make shield at end of LN tham the start of it in term of difficulty
^basically Easy = move to 3 Hard = don't move
=^)
02:07:667 (127667|1) - add one more note to 5 ( louder drum sound here imo)
02:12:143 (132143|3) - Move to 02:12:117 (132117|3) - (this is actually 1/3 snap )
02:12:222 (132222|0) - move to 02:12:326 (132326|0) - this one followed the drum
( if you were actually following drum then ) 02:12:143 (132143|3) - only this one need to be moved
02:31:855 (151855|4) - add one more note imo

special mention :
03:01:855 (181855|2,181855|3) - this part looks awesome *w* thx

----
03:08:452 (188452|4) - add 2 notes to for an example 1 and 5 no thanks
03:17:248 (197248|2,197484|1,197680|0) - this notes are 1/3 even it's reallllyy smallll gap it's 1/3
03:37:196 (217196|2,217353|1,217588|0) - same this notes are 1/3
04:01:698 (241698|4,241698|1,241698|2,241698|3) - I think 3 notes would be fine ,4 seems abit too much
04:40:651 (280651|2,280651|0,280651|1,280651|4,280887|1,280887|0,280887|2,280887|3,281122|1,281122|4,281122|3,281122|2,281279|0,281279|2,281279|1,281279|3,281515|3,281515|4,281515|1,281515|2) - wow I like this :O
04:46:148 (286148|2,286148|0) - should be 3 notes imo
04:54:002 (294002|4,294002|0) - add 2 notes
rest of the mods applied
Also On a side note only one thing that I find pretty special even i can't really say if i'm wrong
The piano part from here 03:34:211 (214211|1,214211|0) - to the end of the piano section after the whole wall of chords
some people might consider it as OVER map but tbh '' sound '' ''key pressed '' hmmm =^) trying to make hard stuff I like that tho i doubt being abble to pass this . First I thought hmm maybe it's not 1/4 but 1/3 but nope it does really sound like 1/4 so err
tl:dr : Consider nerfing that part if too much people complain about it (( consider )) (lol) x) Nerf it


Sugoi diff , hope it will help Good Luck Jamesu~ ^^/ take a stawwy and have a nice day desu~ !
As my opinion I consider nothing as Overmap atleast not when keys are pressed when it does have sounds actually legit to me xD
Thanks for the mods and stars guys :)

pwhk wrote:

GD arrived :D

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9i8jdjpu4rr4c ... D.osu?dl=0
I'll update it later
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wogh support this /o/
awsome song and mapset! xD
#ManiaNeedsMore5Kmaps
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Kyousuke- wrote:

wogh support this /o/
awsome song and mapset! xD
#ManiaNeedsMore5Kmaps
YOU HEARD IT , Go jamesu go~
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Eternalie wrote:

Kyousuke- wrote:

wogh support this /o/
awsome song and mapset! xD
#ManiaNeedsMore5Kmaps
YOU HEARD IT , Go jamesu go~
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks guys. I'll definitely going to app this.
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Hi o/
Mod from my queue~

[Renaissance (5K Gray Another)]
00:46:463 - Add a note on 2. There's this Impulse here different than 00:36:411
01:37:824 - Add a note? It has same sound as 01:37:510
01:47:876 - ^ same sound as 01:47:562
01:56:044 - ^ same sound as 01:55:258
01:58:557 - ^
01:58:871 - Add a note there. Because of a Snare.
02:46:463 - ^ Same sound as 02:43:949
03:36:724 - ^ Because the Piano sounds louder, so I ssume there's 2 piano there.
04:31:070 - ^ same sound as 04:29:813


Great 5K Map. Good Luck there~
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MEGAtive wrote:


Hi o/
Mod from my queue~

[Renaissance (5K Gray Another)]
00:46:463 - Add a note on 2. There's this Impulse here different than 00:36:411
01:37:824 - Add a note? It has same sound as 01:37:510
01:47:876 - ^ same sound as 01:47:562
01:56:044 - ^ same sound as 01:55:258
01:58:557 - ^
01:58:871 - Add a note there. Because of a Snare.
02:46:463 - ^ Same sound as 02:43:949
03:36:724 - ^ Because the Piano sounds louder, so I ssume there's 2 piano there.
04:31:070 - ^ same sound as 04:29:813


Great 5K Map. Good Luck there~
Applied all. Thanks for the mod :)
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5k Gray Rennaisance

02:50:232 change like this. It flows better imo

04:36:724 to 04:37:038 sounds like there should be a 1/8 pattern instead 1/4. it's faster then the stairs before it


7k pw's Black Another

It's best if I leave this map to more experienced modders, This diff is both difficult for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me :? )

just a couple of suggestions:

There is too much broken stairs mixed in, it's good in some places but it messes up uniformity and readability.

A little less spacing with some notes might improve readability for less experienced players. For one such as myself who play crazy maps like these for fun, it's not fun when you can't even read it. (fyi I play with scrolling at 23 fixed)

no kd

EDIT 1: added 7k mod
EDIT 2: Good luck <3
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