GG HENTI PERSON.
5k henti indeed.
420weedsmokingshrek4life.
#shappy4life.
Black And White Renaissance:
00:05:311 (5311|2) - after replaying and replaying i still feel that this part is currently the same as 00:04:683 (4683|2,4683|0,4997|3,4997|1) - but just a little a little milder. otherwise its still loud. add nota plox
00:05:940 (5940|2) - this has some deep sound, deep sound + high sound = 1 note, gg m8 please no 420noscopperino. add note. prefferably on thee 1st column.
00:09:395 (9395|0) - not sure about this for just being a 1 noted only. Its not deep but its already high to put another note, its not deep as 00:09:395 (9395|0) - but its still high enough, consider this.
00:07:824 (7824|3,9081|2) - not sure to leave these parts 1 noted only. idunno rethink just mentioning this.
00:22:948 (22948|0) - could be double noted.
00:26:359 (26359|4,28872|2) - - ayy lmao. please
http://puu.sh/hfYlQ/adb4568543.jpg00:31:385 (31385|2) - in here you could still remix this 420weedsmokin. there's a slight pause between 00:31:699 until 00:31:804 im quite sure about this. leaving as suggestion if youd like to noscope the players. also 1/12
00:31:385 (31385|2) - wrong ending of ln please 00:31:856 (31856|3) - wrong start please. wat u du in life. more precise and correct, >
http://puu.sh/hfYeE/7e9c9b7d08.jpg its 1/12 im definitely right in here i cant be deaf.
00:33:898 (33898|2) - ayyyyy
http://puu.sh/hfYqJ/ad9cc24746.jpg00:32:327 (32327|4,35154|3) -
http://puu.sh/hfYxC/7806cf87c5.jpg wat u mop wit ot hidsit? plox henti-sama
00:36:254 (36254|3,36411|0,36411|4) -
http://puu.sh/hfYDO/8750b21130.jpg00:40:023 (40023|1,40180|3,40180|4) - definitely SOUNDthing is wrong in here,"badumtsss" please re cheeeack it henti.
00:41:437 (41437|4,41437|3,41908|1,41908|0,42379|0,42379|1) - ''^w^
http://puu.sh/hfYSs/abf3abf17a.jpgfrom here on. not gonna FIX and POINT everything that is missed beat, i felt that this is kinda your job as the creator of this map, There are still more im pretty sure for example, 00:43:950 (43950|2) - sort of advice, as a mapper you have to take time and review the map you made, for example by making time for it, cause im gonna suggest you to check your map in 25% play back rate. youll see what you need to see, infact if this is not solved immediately as i see that you are currently planning for rank. "THIS" problems will make your headhurt finally when your about to get 420smonoscoped. seriously so make time to this map specially, THO WHY DOES ANY BODI HAS POINTED THIS KIND OF PROBLEM, PEOPLE WHY PLOX. also jamesu nyan becareful specially in this parts, from here 00:25:706 (25706|0) - - to - 01:08:767 (68767|0) - i want you to reviewww revieewww this part cause this is where mostly the problem you will see. but take note to take a look at the other parts too.
00:39:238 (39238|2) - i would prefer that you would move this to 2nd column (or) another idea is to move 00:38:924 (38924|2) - to 5th, the pattern atm looks weird if youd ask me.
00:40:809 (40809|4) - this ln should be moved, to the 4th column, in here 00:39:866 (39866|0,40023|1,40180|3,40338|0,40495|2,40652|0) - im getting your idea or i already got it lmao. highly suggested since 00:40:180 (40180|3,40809|4) - also! i just found that, 00:40:495 (40495|2) - i the same sound so im suggesting that you move 00:40:180 (40180|3,40495|2,40809|4) - in "one" column only regardless of the pattern were talking about $$$$$$ here.
00:48:976 (48976|1) - id double note if youd ask me. cause of the BIG bell sound.
00:48:976 (48976|1,50233|3,50547|2,50861|1,51175|0) - regarding here if you'd ask me. ID PREFER TO FOLLOW THE PR HERE CAUSE IT FLOWS BETTER AND PLAY BETTER IN THIS WAY. more or less, ctrl g it and find a better pattern in 00:51:489 (51489|2,51489|1,51961|3,52432|2,52589|1) - .
00:55:259 (55259|3,55259|1) - id ctrl h this for better flow of your 420 patturn.
00:56:516 (56516|1) - youd either place this note in the 1st or 3rd column got no other option m8 1st or 3rd or get rekt.
00:59:029 (59029|2,59657|4) - move 00:59:029 (59029|2) - in the 5th column and then 00:59:657 (59657|4) - to 1st for better 420 pattern
01:01:517 (61517|0) - id add another note here, for much stronger presence of the sound. 01:02:811 (62811|1) - here too. 01:04:271 (64271|4) - same.
01:08:767 (68767|0) - my hmm suggestion you add another note cus of the weird deep sound
01:09:238 (69238|0,69316|1,69395|2,69473|3,69552|4,69630|3,69709|1,69709|2,69709|0) - could do something more fancy here mr. smartpants
http://puu.sh/hfZYw/f4a477a9b7.jpg just my opinion i liked this pattern it connects to the next pattern youre having and it felt nice to play.
01:11:122 (71122|4,71122|3,71436|4,71436|2) - should have 3 noted these guys or else delete 01:10:808 (70808|2,70808|3,70808|0) - one of your bae totally inconsistent and feels empty.
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1) - add another note please cause of 01:12:536 (72536|2,72536|1,72536|0,73321|3,73321|2,73321|0,73792|2,73792|1,73792|0) -
01:14:578 (74578|1,74578|4) - these is where id prefer put my 3 notes the fact that it is loud it suits here the most.
01:22:431 (82431|3,82431|1) - dont really know what is the reason behind this 2 notes that has to be here. delete you could continue stream instead!
01:37:667 (97667|0) - add another note.
01:46:148 (106148|4,106227|3,106306|1,106306|2,106384|3,106463|4,106463|1,106463|0,106541|3,106620|1,106698|2,106777|1,106777|3,106855|2,106934|3,106934|1,107012|2,107091|3,107091|0,107091|4,107169|2,107248|3,107248|1,107326|2,107405|0,107405|1,107405|3) - for me these felt messy could have polished this more.
01:49:447 (109447|3,109525|1,109604|3) - delete this is not needed imo and oh! look it is much more neat!
01:52:038 (112038|4,112274|0) - dont know whyd you suddenly jump with these 2 lns.
02:32:484 (152484|3,152484|2,152484|0) - this sound is catchy, ive seen this before hmm check my past mod, AGAIN THIS IS CATCHY OMFG WHYD YOU SUDDNLY 02:32:798 (152798|1,152798|3,152955|0,152955|2,153112|4,153112|1) - bruh
03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - in my ways, if youd do something crazy as 03:49:604 (229604|2,229604|4,229682|0,229682|3,229761|4,229761|1,229840|0,229840|2,229918|1,229918|3,229997|2,229997|0,230075|1,230075|3,230154|0,230154|2,230232|1,230232|4,230311|3,230311|0,230389|4,230389|2,230468|3,230468|1,230546|2,230546|0,230546|4) - you wouldnt follow 03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - these sounds anymore "^w^ it just makes the pattern look messy get rid of it or i rekt u. just concentrate on your stream it will play better!
03:49:054 (229054|2,229054|1,229290|3,229290|2,229290|1,229447|2,229447|1,236201|4,236515|4,236829|4,237771|1) - id prefer if youd delete this, should've followed the pattern more.
04:25:573 (265573|3,265573|1) - this part is MORE stronger than 04:25:415 (265415|4,265415|2,265415|0) - and yet you gave it a 2 notes only? i felt bad for the part
Hi Hello! Jamesu nyan. A little sort of thingy advice thingy? as a mapper, you stated to me that you didnt need another diff oke. In this case this is a marathon right? which needs only 1 diff right as you said please. in this case [2] you should have reviewed and checked this more often if youd really plan on ranking this, cause one of the biggest pros of mapping marathon is having only 1 diff, therefore which means you only have 1 diff to give a shit at, and that doesnt mean to slack of no! you should have checked it more often and fixed it more often the fact that you only have "This" diff and yet the song isnt that really really really long i think you should give time to this awesome map that you made if your really aiming for rank. Review the parts,ask someone's opinion,ask more mods,ask more mods!, annoy bns to check it ( lmao dont lol jk) , play it more , and make time to it more, cause i know this map has a potential and i would be glad to see this in the ranked section soon : ^)
this is yuno nyan signing off.
You definitely want to check with 25% playback. In fact the song is slowing down and may even suggest that there are genuine BPM changes warranting uninherited timing sections here.
