xi - Halcyon -Long Version- [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
JamesHappy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, March 17, 2017 at 12:20:43 AM

Artist: xi
Title: Halcyon -Long Version-
Source: BMS
Tags: of fighters groundbreaking bof 2010 -the evolution of war- renaissance hardcore yama_ko Lyrical Signal Parousia Cytus
BPM: 95.5
Filesize: 8169kb
Play Time: 05:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alcyone - 5Key (5.37 stars, 3379 notes)


Download: xi - Halcyon -Long Version-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The story goes that Aeolus,
The ruler of the winds,
Had a daughter named Alcyone,
Who was married to Ceyx,
The king of Thessaly



Calm, peaceful days.
Fresh Chicken
00:21:883 (21883|4) - move to 00:21:804 -
00:23:375 (23375|0) - move to 00:23:297 -
01:03:899 (63899|0) - remove. and add LN 01:04:056 - and finish it 01:04:291 -
01:04:213 (64213|2) - change start point 01:04:291 -
01:19:684 (79684|1) - move 3
01:19:763 (79763|4) - move 2
02:36:726 (156726|2) - remove
03:17:564 (197564|2) - finish it 03:17:721 -
03:17:721 - add to LN and finish it 03:17:956 -
03:17:878 (197878|1) - remove
03:38:689 (218689|2) - move 1
03:44:579 (224579|1) - remove
03:47:092 (227092|1,227092|3) - remove
03:50:783 (230783|0) - remove
03:51:019 (231019|3) - remove
03:51:647 (231647|3) - move to 3
03:34:527 - ~ 03:54:710 - Too over mapping! you should the difficulty has to be down.
04:03:899 (243899|3) - move 5
04:05:155 (245155|3) - move 3
04:07:825 (247825|3,247904|3,248139|3,248218|3,248375|3,248454|3,248611|3,248689|3,248846|3,248925|3,249082|3,249160|3) - It is very difficult
04:12:223 - ~ 04:14:815 - you should the difficulty has to be down.
04:35:941 (275941|2) - move 4
04:37:119 (277119|4) - remove
04:57:537 (297537|3,297537|0,297616|2,297616|3,297616|1,297694|4,297694|0,297694|2,297773|1,297773|2,297773|3,297852|4,297930|1,297930|3,297930|0,298009|2,298009|4,298009|3,298087|3,298087|1,298087|0,298166|2,298166|0,298166|4,298244|2,298244|1,298244|3,298323|2,298323|0,298323|4,298401|3,298401|0,298401|1) - what is it..?;; you should the difficulty has to be down

I hope this helps. :)
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

00:21:883 (21883|4) - move to 00:21:804 -
00:23:375 (23375|0) - move to 00:23:297 -
01:03:899 (63899|0) - remove. and add LN 01:04:056 - and finish it 01:04:291 -
01:04:213 (64213|2) - change start point 01:04:291 -
01:19:684 (79684|1) - move 3
01:19:763 (79763|4) - move 2
02:36:726 (156726|2) - remove
03:17:564 (197564|2) - finish it 03:17:721 -
03:17:721 - add to LN and finish it 03:17:956 -
03:17:878 (197878|1) - remove
03:38:689 (218689|2) - move 1
03:44:579 (224579|1) - remove
03:47:092 (227092|1,227092|3) - remove Nope, loud beat
03:50:783 (230783|0) - remove
03:51:019 (231019|3) - remove
03:51:647 (231647|3) - move to 3
03:34:527 - ~ 03:54:710 - Too over mapping! you should the difficulty has to be down. i guess you didn't hear some because of the sound quality
04:03:899 (243899|3) - move 5
04:05:155 (245155|3) - move 3
04:07:825 (247825|3,247904|3,248139|3,248218|3,248375|3,248454|3,248611|3,248689|3,248846|3,248925|3,249082|3,249160|3) - It is very difficult
04:12:223 - ~ 04:14:815 - you should the difficulty has to be down. nerf it a little bit
04:35:941 (275941|2) - move 4
04:37:119 (277119|4) - remove
04:57:537 (297537|3,297537|0,297616|2,297616|3,297616|1,297694|4,297694|0,297694|2,297773|1,297773|2,297773|3,297852|4,297930|1,297930|3,297930|0,298009|2,298009|4,298009|3,298087|3,298087|1,298087|0,298166|2,298166|0,298166|4,298244|2,298244|1,298244|3,298323|2,298323|0,298323|4,298401|3,298401|0,298401|1) - what is it..?;; you should the difficulty has to be down nerf it a little bit

Rest applied

I hope this helps. :)
thanks for the mod

EDIT: Done
Remillion Cross
you should put at least..

Title : Halcyon -Long Version-
Source : groundbreaking bof 2010 -the evolution of war- renaissance hardcore

based on http://gdbg.bandcamp.com/track/halcyon-long-version or http://www.gdbg.tv/2010/download/ and http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 7&event=65

no kd
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

Remillion Cross wrote:

you should put at least..

Title : Halcyon -Long Version-
Source : groundbreaking bof 2010 -the evolution of war- renaissance hardcore

based on http://gdbg.bandcamp.com/track/halcyon-long-version or http://www.gdbg.tv/2010/download/ and http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 7&event=65

no kd
thanks RC for the metadata :)
Rizqy
ikeeee 5K now
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

Zan - wrote:

ikeeee 5K now
yeeeee need more 5K also thanks for the stars

also xi is <3
Seiryuu
hi hams i got off my lazy ass and did a mod for this (column 1l2l3l4l5)

00:41:908- do this, since it's the same sound
00:43:950 (43950|1,45207|1) - Move to 3
00:49:290- Shouldn't it be like this?
01:05:940- Add another LN here, sounds like 2 violin thingies
01:11:751 (71751|3) - I think this should be a double note, unless you aren't mapping to the beat
01:13:793 (73793|0,73793|1) - This should be a triple since theres some beat in the background
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Make it like this\
01:15:992- Add a note for the beat
01:16:620- Cymbal sound, add note
01:26:359- Add another note here, since it's the same as the part before
01:32:013- ^ (except this is the same as the part after :3)
01:42:065-^
01:46:620 (106620|1,106699|2,106777|3,106777|1,106856|2) - I have some doubts about this pattern, because it feels awkward to do 2,3,2,3 or 4,3,4,3 streams as left and right handers respectively, try to change it :3 (I'm only gonna point this out once tho)
02:09:081- Try this maybe? (actually dont)
So I'm gonna skip around 30secs because I'm too lazy to take a closer look at patterns :3
02:25:887 (145887|0,145887|4) - Move this to 3 and 4, same sound hams
02:39:866 (159866|3,159866|0,159866|2) - Why is this 3 note(?)
02:40:023 (160023|4,160023|1) - This should be 3 note instead c:
(I think you should add 1 note for every beat/bassdrop/whatever you hear)
03:01:542- The patterns at 03:01:856 should start here
03:05:468 (185468|3,185468|1) - Move to 3 and 5
03:15:992- Add another LN, double violin powa
03:16:934- Use this
03:18:819 (198819|3) - Move to 5
03:24:003 (204003|2) - Move to 1, repeated sound
03:28:557 (208557|0) - Move to 4, ^
03:29:657- Make it like this
03:31:699 (211699|4) - Move to 4
03:32:955 (212955|1) - Move to 1
03:34:055 (214055|2) - Move to 1
03:46:699 (226699|1,226699|3) - Move to 1 and 5, because of the beat OR make into 2 spacebar jacks
03:49:133 (229133|1,229133|4,229212|3,229212|0) - These should be jacks
03:51:332 (231332|2) - y u do dis hams
03:51:646 (231646|4,231646|0,231725|3,231725|1) - These should be jacks too
04:15:678 (255678|1,255992|2,256149|1,256228|3,256306|0,256385|4,256463|1,256542|3) - It would be better if these notes were LNs
04:40:652 (280652|1,280652|2,280652|4) - This should be 4 notes
04:40:652 - 04:41:751- Dammit jamesu have some variety in patterns(Not like i can say anything about it)
04:59:657- The ending SV isn't really needed and screws players up sometimes ;w;


I guess that's it from me.
Wonder where i got the idea of modding this from...
Some of the jacks feel unneeded tho, up to you to delete them hue
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

hi hams i got off my lazy ass and did a mod for this (column 1l2l3l4l5)

00:41:908- do this, since it's the same sound
00:43:950 (43950|1,45207|1) - Move to 3
00:49:290- Shouldn't it be like this?
01:05:940- Add another LN here, sounds like 2 violin thingies
01:11:751 (71751|3) - I think this should be a double note, unless you aren't mapping to the beat
01:13:793 (73793|0,73793|1) - This should be a triple since theres some beat in the background
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Make it like this\
01:15:992- Add a note for the beat
01:16:620- Cymbal sound, add note
01:26:359- Add another note here, since it's the same as the part before
01:32:013- ^ (except this is the same as the part after :3)
01:42:065-^
01:46:620 (106620|1,106699|2,106777|3,106777|1,106856|2) - I have some doubts about this pattern, because it feels awkward to do 2,3,2,3 or 4,3,4,3 streams as left and right handers respectively, try to change it :3 (I'm only gonna point this out once tho) I'm still thinking for a new pattern though
02:09:081- Try this maybe? (actually dont) Nope
So I'm gonna skip around 30secs because I'm too lazy to take a closer look at patterns :3
02:25:887 (145887|0,145887|4) - Move this to 3 and 4, same sound hams
02:39:866 (159866|3,159866|0,159866|2) - Why is this 3 note(?) Yeah my mistake
02:40:023 (160023|4,160023|1) - This should be 3 note instead c:
(I think you should add 1 note for every beat/bassdrop/whatever you hear)
03:01:542- The patterns at 03:01:856 should start here Nope
03:05:468 (185468|3,185468|1) - Move to 3 and 5
03:15:992- Add another LN, double violin powa ayy lmao
03:16:934- Use this
03:18:819 (198819|3) - Move to 5
03:24:003 (204003|2) - Move to 1, repeated sound
03:28:557 (208557|0) - Move to 4, ^
03:29:657- Make it like this
03:31:699 (211699|4) - Move to 4
03:32:955 (212955|1) - Move to 1
03:34:055 (214055|2) - Move to 1
03:46:699 (226699|1,226699|3) - Move to 1 and 5, because of the beat OR make into 2 spacebar jacks
03:49:133 (229133|1,229133|4,229212|3,229212|0) - These should be jacks
03:51:332 (231332|2) - y u do dis hams
03:51:646 (231646|4,231646|0,231725|3,231725|1) - These should be jacks too
04:15:678 (255678|1,255992|2,256149|1,256228|3,256306|0,256385|4,256463|1,256542|3) - It would be better if these notes were LNs
04:40:652 (280652|1,280652|2,280652|4) - This should be 4 notes
04:40:652 - 04:41:751- Dammit jamesu have some variety in patterns(Not like i can say anything about it) nah, i find it easier though :^)
04:59:657- The ending SV isn't really needed and screws players up sometimes ;w; Not gonna remove


I guess that's it from me.
Wonder where i got the idea of modding this from...
Some of the jacks feel unneeded tho, up to you to delete them hue
no reply = applied

thx sofa~

EDIT: Done
pwhk
xi! <3

| 0 - 4 |

[ Renaissance (Gray Another) ]
00:04:683 (4683|2,4997|2) - Song don't warrant 3 1/1 jacks here. Move to 4,3
00:05:626 (5626|4) - Remove, soft piano don't exist here
00:10:023 - Missing note for soft piano
00:10:338 (10338|2) - Triple is too strong here I guess. Remove one note
00:13:322 - Add note, as sounds like this are having 3 notes around.
00:33:898 (33898|3) - Move to 2 as bells are in different pitch
00:39:238 (39238|3) - Move to 2 for pitch
00:43:950 (43950|1) - Move to 0 as bells are in different pitch
00:49:762 (49762|1,49919|0) - Violin isn't right here. The sounds should be at 00:49:840 - and 00:50:037 - (You may want to use 25% playback to confirm this, especially because the latter one is on 1/8 which even me would suspect)
00:54:474 (54474|1) - Move to 3 for pitch
00:59:657 (59657|3,60285|4) - Swap for pitch
01:00:913 (60913|0,61071|1,61228|2,61385|3) - With above, Ctrl-H and move 01:01:542 (61542|1) - to 2
01:03:741 (63741|0,63976|2) - Violin isn't right here. What I found is at 01:03:544 - 01:03:780 - 01:04:035 - 01:04:251 - . But those are 1/8 and even 1/16 :| You definitely want to check with 25% playback. In fact the song is slowing down and may even suggest that there are genuine BPM changes warranting uninherited timing sections here.
01:09:133 (69133|1,69186|2) - No sound here, and...
01:09:238 (69238|3,69290|4,69343|0,69395|1,69448|2,69500|3,69552|4,69631|3) - What I get in 25% playback is 1/4s.
01:15:050 - Add note for cymbal
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Ctrl-H
01:16:620 - Add note for cymbal
01:19:526 - Missing note
01:19:762 - Add note for cymbal
01:22:275 - ^
01:24:788 - ^
01:26:987 (86987|2) - Move to 4 to prevent 3 jacks?
01:35:154 (95154|3) - move to 4
01:47:406 - Add note for cymbal?
01:59:029 - 01:59:971 - Ctrl-H all notes but keep LN (i.e. move resultant note onto 1-4
02:05:311 - Add note
02:06:411 - Add note at 0
02:06:882 - 02:07:196 - piano is present but notes are missing
02:17:249 (137249|4,137249|3) - Move 1/4 earlier and change to 2,3
02:23:924 (143924|1,144003|0,144081|3,144238|0,144317|4,144395|1) - Piano are absent here. Remove.
02:24:160 - And add note here
02:28:872 - Add note for cymbal?
02:40:966 - You use double stream here but 02:43:636 - is single stream... Not sure what you want tho.
03:00:128 (180128|0) - Move to 1
03:06:568 - Add note for cymbals
03:08:139 - Extraneous note?
03:08:924 - Add note for cymbals
03:17:406 (197406|1,197563|0) - Violin isn't right here, I got is 03:17:484 - 03:17:681 - Again, check with 25% playback
03:23:845 (203845|0) - Move to 3 for pitch?
03:40:416 - Add note at 4 and move 03:40:495 (220495|4) - to 1
03:51:411 (231411|2) - Why jack here? move to 3.
03:59:343 - Add note
04:01:856 - Missing piano. Add 2 notes
04:07:196 - Add note for strong piano
04:07:667 - ^
04:09:395 - Add note for cymbal
04:12:144 (252144|2) - Triples are off-beat. Intentional?
04:12:537 (252537|2) - Misplaced note? Move 1/4 later.
04:21:018 - Missing note
04:24:945 - Add note for cymbal
04:26:044 - ^
04:36:961 (276961|3) - Move 1/4 later

Also PM'ed you about GD stuff. I always find this a great song. Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

pwhk wrote:

xi! <3

| 0 - 4 |

[ Renaissance (Gray Another) ]
00:04:683 (4683|2,4997|2) - Song don't warrant 3 1/1 jacks here. Move to 4,3
00:05:626 (5626|4) - Remove, soft piano don't exist here
00:10:023 - Missing note for soft piano
00:10:338 (10338|2) - Triple is too strong here I guess. Remove one note
00:13:322 - Add note, as sounds like this are having 3 notes around.
00:33:898 (33898|3) - Move to 2 as bells are in different pitch
00:39:238 (39238|3) - Move to 2 for pitch
00:43:950 (43950|1) - Move to 0 as bells are in different pitch
00:49:762 (49762|1,49919|0) - Violin isn't right here. The sounds should be at 00:49:840 - and 00:50:037 - (You may want to use 25% playback to confirm this, especially because the latter one is on 1/8 which even me would suspect)
00:54:474 (54474|1) - Move to 3 for pitch
00:59:657 (59657|3,60285|4) - Swap for pitch
01:00:913 (60913|0,61071|1,61228|2,61385|3) - With above, Ctrl-H and move 01:01:542 (61542|1) - to 2
01:03:741 (63741|0,63976|2) - Violin isn't right here. What I found is at 01:03:544 - 01:03:780 - 01:04:035 - 01:04:251 - . But those are 1/8 and even 1/16 :| You definitely want to check with 25% playback. In fact the song is slowing down and may even suggest that there are genuine BPM changes warranting uninherited timing sections here.
01:09:133 (69133|1,69186|2) - No sound here, and...
01:09:238 (69238|3,69290|4,69343|0,69395|1,69448|2,69500|3,69552|4,69631|3) - What I get in 25% playback is 1/4s.
01:15:050 - Add note for cymbal
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Ctrl-H
01:16:620 - Add note for cymbal
01:19:526 - Missing note
01:19:762 - Add note for cymbal
01:22:275 - ^
01:24:788 - ^
01:26:987 (86987|2) - Move to 4 to prevent 3 jacks?
01:35:154 (95154|3) - move to 4
01:47:406 - Add note for cymbal?
01:59:029 - 01:59:971 - Ctrl-H all notes but keep LN (i.e. move resultant note onto 1-4
02:05:311 - Add note
02:06:411 - Add note at 0
02:06:882 - 02:07:196 - piano is present but notes are missing
02:17:249 (137249|4,137249|3) - Move 1/4 earlier and change to 2,3
02:23:924 (143924|1,144003|0,144081|3,144238|0,144317|4,144395|1) - Piano are absent here. Remove. I can heard some
02:24:160 - And add note here
02:28:872 - Add note for cymbal?
02:40:966 - You use double stream here but 02:43:636 - is single stream... Not sure what you want tho.
03:00:128 (180128|0) - Move to 1
03:06:568 - Add note for cymbals
03:08:139 - Extraneous note?
03:08:924 - Add note for cymbals
03:17:406 (197406|1,197563|0) - Violin isn't right here, I got is 03:17:484 - 03:17:681 - Again, check with 25% playback
03:23:845 (203845|0) - Move to 3 for pitch? nope
03:40:416 - Add note at 4 and move 03:40:495 (220495|4) - to 1
03:51:411 (231411|2) - Why jack here? move to 3.
03:59:343 - Add note
04:01:856 - Missing piano. Add 2 notes
04:07:196 - Add note for strong piano
04:07:667 - ^
04:09:395 - Add note for cymbal
04:12:144 (252144|2) - Triples are off-beat. Intentional?
04:12:537 (252537|2) - Misplaced note? Move 1/4 later.
04:21:018 - Missing note
04:24:945 - Add note for cymbal
04:26:044 - ^
04:36:961 (276961|3) - Move 1/4 later

rest applied

Also PM'ed you about GD stuff. I always find this a great song. Good luck! :)
thanks for the mod :)
Kamikaze
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA-HALCYOOOOOON

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

Metadata: seems fine

Timing: Mass of wrong stuff, I've written some of them below
00:00:914 - 95,5 BPM here, metronomes are working well on every second line now so it should be halved BPM here. Adjust SV accordingly
00:02:170 - Another 95,5 BPM red line here for metronome reset (BPM should start here, but you can't do that due to notes before)
00:10:966 - Pretty sure there's slower BPM here, I don't know by how much tho, I suck at timing. Aske Zenny, Blocko or just someone good with piano timing for exact timing
00:12:379 - 95,5 BPM again
00:18:348 - those notes sound off already so another timing error here
00:26:359 - 95,5 BPM
01:03:741 - Pretty sure that BPM slows down here
01:08:767 - 181 BPM
01:09:709 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM
01:30:128 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM

basically exact same problems occur throughout the map. Don't KD this post, call me back after you've fixed timing and I'll do a proper mod on it

EDIT 12/04: done IRC modding on stuff
2015-04-12 11:49 -Kamikaze-: a
2015-04-12 11:49 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 11:51 -Kamikaze-: SV on the calm part is total banana
2015-04-12 11:51 -Kamikaze-: like, why it's moving so much
2015-04-12 11:51 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 11:52 JamesHappy15: i liek it ;w;
2015-04-12 11:52 -Kamikaze-: I can guarantee that it will piss pepole off
2015-04-12 11:52 -Kamikaze-: because it moves for no reason
2015-04-12 11:52 -Kamikaze-: and it's like altmirrorbell
2015-04-12 11:53 JamesHappy15: ok ;w;
2015-04-12 11:53 -Kamikaze-: just keep it stable
2015-04-12 11:55 -Kamikaze-: are you ready/in editor/a
2015-04-12 11:55 JamesHappy15: yeah
2015-04-12 11:55 JamesHappy15: b
2015-04-12 11:56 -Kamikaze-: ok
2015-04-12 11:56 -Kamikaze-: psure that notes on the beggining are not on right pitches
2015-04-12 11:56 -Kamikaze-: but idk, I suck at pitches
2015-04-12 11:57 JamesHappy15: < same here
2015-04-12 11:57 -Kamikaze-: 00:05:311 - delete one note
2015-04-12 11:57 -Kamikaze-: 00:05:626 - same here
2015-04-12 11:57 -Kamikaze-: one of instruments is missing in those spots and doubles feel awkward
2015-04-12 11:57 -Kamikaze-: 00:06:254 - same
2015-04-12 11:58 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 11:58 JamesHappy15: done
2015-04-12 11:58 -Kamikaze-: 00:09:081 - s a m e
2015-04-12 11:58 -Kamikaze-: 00:09:709 - 00:10:028 - a
2015-04-12 11:59 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 11:59 -Kamikaze-: 00:13:321 - this totally doesn't warrant 3 notes
2015-04-12 11:59 -Kamikaze-: 00:15:834 - so does this
2015-04-12 12:00 -Kamikaze-: and here you have 2 notes for the same sound 00:18:391 -
2015-04-12 12:00 JamesHappy15: d o n e
2015-04-12 12:00 -Kamikaze-: practically same I know that pitches and shit
2015-04-12 12:00 -Kamikaze-: lel
2015-04-12 12:00 -Kamikaze-: 00:20:057 - 1/16
2015-04-12 12:00 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:01 -Kamikaze-: 00:26:359 (26359|1) - remove
2015-04-12 12:02 JamesHappy15: i thought 1/12 fk headphone
2015-04-12 12:02 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:02 -Kamikaze-: 00:30:128 (30128|0,30442|1,30756|2,31071|3,31385|1,31385|4) - ctrl+h cuz pitch'n shit
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: or just, you know what
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: 00:30:128 (30128|0,30442|1,30756|2,31071|3) - ctrl+j
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: 00:31:385 (31385|4) - to 3rd or 4th
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: idk
2015-04-12 12:03 -Kamikaze-: and move 00:31:385 (31385|1) - away
2015-04-12 12:04 JamesHappy15: oh my
2015-04-12 12:04 -Kamikaze-: if you've done this then 00:31:856 (31856|1,32327|0) - ctrl+h
2015-04-12 12:05 JamesHappy15: ^ not doing the ctrl+h thing
2015-04-12 12:05 -Kamikaze-: pitch
2015-04-12 12:06 -Kamikaze-: and a lot of awkwardness on left hand
2015-04-12 12:06 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:06 -Kamikaze-: after earlier suggestion
2015-04-12 12:06 JamesHappy15: so like reverse
2015-04-12 12:06 -Kamikaze-: kinda
2015-04-12 12:06 -Kamikaze-: 00:36:411 (36411|1) - move to 1st cuz easier to hit
2015-04-12 12:07 -Kamikaze-: 00:40:180 (40180|2,40495|3) - why are those 1/2
2015-04-12 12:07 -Kamikaze-: instruments are 1/4
2015-04-12 12:07 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:07 -Kamikaze-: also missing bell on 00:40:180 -
2015-04-12 12:07 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:07 -Kamikaze-: I feel like this mod will take long
2015-04-12 12:08 -Kamikaze-: since we're not even in the fast parts
2015-04-12 12:08 JamesHappy15: because marathon thing
2015-04-12 12:08 -Kamikaze-: 00:41:437 (41437|3,41437|4) - why is this double LN and 00:41:908 (41908|1,42379|1) - single
2015-04-12 12:08 -Kamikaze-: a
2015-04-12 12:08 JamesHappy15: strong violin
2015-04-12 12:09 -Kamikaze-: yeah, but those sounds are like, the same
2015-04-12 12:09 JamesHappy15: on double LN
2015-04-12 12:09 -Kamikaze-: and next LNs are singles
2015-04-12 12:09 JamesHappy15: owell doubled
2015-04-12 12:09 -Kamikaze-: 00:46:463 - delete one note like before
2015-04-12 12:10 -Kamikaze-: 00:49:290 (49290|4,49448|3,49605|2,49840|1,50076|0) - imo you should scramble this pattern a bit because of awkward snaps
2015-04-12 12:10 -Kamikaze-: it's going to be painful to time when it's a stair
2015-04-12 12:10 JamesHappy15: pitch ;w;
2015-04-12 12:11 -Kamikaze-: 300g-300g-200-100-200
2015-04-12 12:11 -Kamikaze-: this is what you'll get on sight
2015-04-12 12:11 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:12 JamesHappy15: i got like 300-300-300g-200-200
2015-04-12 12:12 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-04-12 12:12 -Kamikaze-: 200-200 was because of mistiming on LNs
2015-04-12 12:12 -Kamikaze-: and that's because of weird snaps
2015-04-12 12:13 JamesHappy15: yeah
2015-04-12 12:13 -Kamikaze-: 00:52:432 - [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3004376 I find this more accurate with pitches]
2015-04-12 12:15 -Kamikaze-: 01:08:767 - add here to emphasize deep beat
2015-04-12 12:16 -Kamikaze-: 01:09:866 - lol why is this single, this sound like double minijack for piano
2015-04-12 12:16 JamesHappy15: one note is enough
2015-04-12 12:17 -Kamikaze-: I don't understand why you layer kicks like 01:10:023 - with 3 notes when piano is the most impactful instrument in this whole song
2015-04-12 12:17 JamesHappy15: ayy
2015-04-12 12:17 -Kamikaze-: and piano gets like 1
2015-04-12 12:17 JamesHappy15: blame "resnap all notes"
2015-04-12 12:18 -Kamikaze-: besides, you have a) a lot of missing little kicks b) constant 1/4 sounds to map
2015-04-12 12:18 -Kamikaze-: is this seriously because of resnapping
2015-04-12 12:18 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:18 JamesHappy15: well yeah
2015-04-12 12:19 -Kamikaze-: so you need to revamp it before I go any further
2015-04-12 12:19 JamesHappy15: that's why i re-arranged all notes
2015-04-12 12:19 JamesHappy15: hmm
2015-04-12 12:19 -Kamikaze-: tbh I totally don't understand most of what's happening here
2015-04-12 12:19 -Kamikaze-: it's spiky as hell
2015-04-12 12:20 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: it feels undermapped apart from some pattern
2015-04-12 12:20 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: example
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: 01:52:745 -
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: dafuq is this empty space
2015-04-12 12:20 JamesHappy15: someone said overmapped
2015-04-12 12:20 -Kamikaze-: seriously
2015-04-12 12:21 -Kamikaze-: go smack them really hard
2015-04-12 12:21 -Kamikaze-: there are freakin kicks
2015-04-12 12:21 JamesHappy15: i feel like facepalming
2015-04-12 12:21 -Kamikaze-: so they made you ignore little kicks and leave only bigger ones
2015-04-12 12:21 -Kamikaze-: wow
2015-04-12 12:22 -Kamikaze-: best modding 2015
2015-04-12 12:22 JamesHappy15: well the truth is I didn't hear any little kicks before changing mp3
2015-04-12 12:23 JamesHappy15: that's why some parts are feel empty
2015-04-12 12:23 -Kamikaze-: okay
2015-04-12 12:23 JamesHappy15: oh the old one has a crappy quality
2015-04-12 12:23 -Kamikaze-: well that explains it
2015-04-12 12:23 -Kamikaze-: so you need to relayer most of map
2015-04-12 12:23 -Kamikaze-: damn
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: I'll go over some important bits then
2015-04-12 12:24 JamesHappy15: yeah
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: and leave rest to you
2015-04-12 12:24 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:24 JamesHappy15: i'll call you later then
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: 02:09:080 - this feels too fast for just 1/8
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: idk
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: nah, I want to get over it asap
2015-04-12 12:24 -Kamikaze-: xD
2015-04-12 12:25 JamesHappy15: a
2015-04-12 12:25 JamesHappy15: btw not gonna change
2015-04-12 12:25 -Kamikaze-: if snaps are wrong then you'll have to
2015-04-12 12:26 JamesHappy15: hmm
2015-04-12 12:26 -Kamikaze-: 02:13:792 (133792|0,133871|1,133949|2,134028|0,134107|1,134185|2) - I don't hear any instruments suitable for those notes
2015-04-12 12:26 -Kamikaze-: maybe on white ticks
2015-04-12 12:26 -Kamikaze-: piano stair starts around being hearable 02:14:264 -
2015-04-12 12:27 -Kamikaze-: and it certanly doesn't sound like 1/4
2015-04-12 12:27 -Kamikaze-: 02:16:620 - this is more like 1/8 or 1/12
2015-04-12 12:27 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:28 -Kamikaze-: 02:17:169 (137169|3,137169|2) - move to 02:17:143 - (1/3
2015-04-12 12:29 -Kamikaze-: 02:17:405 (137405|0,137405|3) - move to 02:17:326 - (1/12)
2015-04-12 12:30 -Kamikaze-: 02:23:923 (143923|1,144002|0,144080|3) - delete those notes unless you're accenting something else than piano
2015-04-12 12:30 -Kamikaze-: 02:29:813 - 1/8
2015-04-12 12:31 -Kamikaze-: 02:30:520 - missing note
2015-04-12 12:31 JamesHappy15: done
2015-04-12 12:31 -Kamikaze-: 02:31:384 - add 2 more cuz a many crash
2015-04-12 12:32 -Kamikaze-: you should add more notes on crashes like 02:36:724 -
2015-04-12 12:32 JamesHappy15: ah dem lags
2015-04-12 12:32 -Kamikaze-: ayy lmao
2015-04-12 12:33 JamesHappy15: wtf my ram
2015-04-12 12:33 -Kamikaze-: 02:50:232 - pianos like this one are more impactful but they're mapped with single stairs, idk doublestair maybe?
2015-04-12 12:33 -Kamikaze-: btw those are general suggestions
2015-04-12 12:33 -Kamikaze-: I prolly won't use same ones for similar stuff
2015-04-12 12:34 -Kamikaze-: 02:56:515 (176515|2,176672|2,176829|2) - to 4th for better pattern
2015-04-12 12:34 JamesHappy15: i'll try double stairs
2015-04-12 12:35 -Kamikaze-: 1,0x sv from here
2015-04-12 12:35 -Kamikaze-: because those patterns are omg
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: oh and this part startles me the most
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: like
2015-04-12 12:36 JamesHappy15: where
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: oh shit forgot timeline
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: 03:33:269 -
2015-04-12 12:36 -Kamikaze-: this is some ayylmao density on a pretty calm part
2015-04-12 12:37 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:38 JamesHappy15: lel
2015-04-12 12:38 -Kamikaze-: I don't even hear instruments for some notes lol
2015-04-12 12:38 -Kamikaze-: also it seems like you've forgotten to do bpm for this part
2015-04-12 12:39 -Kamikaze-: also notice how this is the hardest part of the whole map
2015-04-12 12:39 -Kamikaze-: :V
2015-04-12 12:39 JamesHappy15: :^)
2015-04-12 12:40 -Kamikaze-: next level difficulty progression
2015-04-12 12:40 JamesHappy15: mfw i can heard that part better than other parts
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: the startling thing is that it's a calm part
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: I know there is some shit going on which isn't going on in the first calm part
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: but wow
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: it's twice as hard as first fast part
2015-04-12 12:41 JamesHappy15: o
2015-04-12 12:41 -Kamikaze-: and it's harder than fast part at the end
2015-04-12 12:42 -Kamikaze-: oh and also, this pattern
2015-04-12 12:42 -Kamikaze-: 04:57:300 -
2015-04-12 12:42 -Kamikaze-: ayylmao max
2015-04-12 12:43 -Kamikaze-: this is some helix shit right there
2015-04-12 12:43 JamesHappy15: heh
2015-04-12 12:43 -Kamikaze-: 04:59:421 (299421|3,299499|2,299578|1) - delete those notes for bigger impact on SV and stuff
2015-04-12 12:44 JamesHappy15: ok
2015-04-12 12:44 -Kamikaze-: you should totally use this constant 1/4 on fast parts
2015-04-12 12:44 -Kamikaze-: you can hear it in background
2015-04-12 12:44 -Kamikaze-: and generally put more emphasis on crashes/pianos
2015-04-12 12:44 JamesHappy15: gotta review this well
2015-04-12 12:45 -Kamikaze-: whee I've done something
2015-04-12 12:45 JamesHappy15: wat a mod
2015-04-12 12:45 -Kamikaze-: I hope you're not mad cuz this is a lazy mod
2015-04-12 12:45 JamesHappy15: :^)
2015-04-12 12:45 JamesHappy15: i'm not ofc
2015-04-12 12:45 -Kamikaze-: o/
2015-04-12 12:45 -Kamikaze-: gotta post in thread den
2015-04-12 12:46 JamesHappy15: o
Topic Starter
JamesHappy

-Kamikaze- wrote:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA-HALCYOOOOOON

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

Metadata: seems fine

Timing: Mass of wrong stuff, I've written some of them below
00:00:914 - 95,5 BPM here, metronomes are working well on every second line now so it should be halved BPM here. Adjust SV accordingly
00:02:170 - Another 95,5 BPM red line here for metronome reset (BPM should start here, but you can't do that due to notes before)
00:10:966 - Pretty sure there's slower BPM here, I don't know by how much tho, I suck at timing. Aske Zenny, Blocko or just someone good with piano timing for exact timing
00:12:379 - 95,5 BPM again
00:18:348 - those notes sound off already so another timing error here
00:26:359 - 95,5 BPM
01:03:741 - Pretty sure that BPM slows down here
01:08:767 - 181 BPM
01:09:709 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM
01:30:128 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM

basically exact same problems occur throughout the map. Don't KD this post, call me back after you've fixed timing and I'll do a proper mod on it
oh yeah thx maki for the timing

owait not 191 BPM?
Kamikaze
aaaaa, my mistake, 181 -> 191, anyway, you still need to find someone to get your timing exactly right
Topic Starter
JamesHappy
thx 4 the memes maki
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