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Mr.Kitty - Neverending Nights

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Mortem
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Joined July 2013
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Mortem

Xellie wrote:


Returning a mod 4 mod :D

[Dark]
  1. 00:52:069 (1,2) - This 1 kinda flows away from the 2 so you might want to change it's shape or angle some - No, leaving like it is.
  2. 01:19:069 (7,8) - Blanket maybe? - Fixed.
  3. 01:20:569 (2,4) - This blanket could be a bit better near the tail - Moved it little bit.
  4. 01:22:819 (7,8) - blanket? - Nah.
  5. 01:26:069 (6) - The anchor isn't on the tail so it's not perfectly symetrical - Moved squares little bit.
  6. 01:28:069 (1,2) - Fix blanket - Fixed.
  7. 01:29:819 (4,5) - Blanket? - Meh.
  8. 02:07:319 (2) - Why make this one a repeat slider when the others are streams, this one leads into the kiai time. Making it a slider also ruins consistency - It's still better than stream. Leaving like it is.
  9. 02:31:819 (6,1) - This blanket could be a tiny bit better - Fixed.
  10. 02:39:319 (4) - Same thing about consitency - Same thing.
  11. 02:56:069 (1,2) - blanket could be a lil better - I think it's okay.
  12. 02:59:069 (8,9) - I'd make these flow opposite directions like you did every other time you had sliders like these for consitency - Leaving like it is.
  13. 03:01:069 (3,5) - Blanket could be better - Leaving like it is.
  14. 03:09:069 (3,4,5) - blanket?? - Fixed.
  15. 03:08:819 (2,5) - Fix blanket - Leaving like it is.
  16. 03:10:819 (6,7) - ^ - Leaving like it is.
  17. 03:59:319 (2) - Same thing about consitency - Leaving like it is.
  18. 04:00:819 (2,3) - Fix blanket - Fixed.
  19. 04:12:069 (1,2) - Blanket could be better - Fixed.
  20. 04:27:069 (3,4) - Fix blanketu - Fixeduuuu.
  21. 04:31:319 (5) - Consistency~ - Please...
I'd say maybe make a filler diff since it goes to all like sliders and 1/2 to having streams

Good Luck getting it ranked~ - Thanks.
- I'll take a look on fergas's mod later.
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Mortem

fergas wrote:

здорово пупсики \o3o/

sb tips for lulz
  1. 02:10:694 - as suggest you can do more smuffer color transition for "city lights". exp 02:10:569 - 02:10:944 - pink-blue smuf transion but still leave clear color change on 02:11:069 - . Green color dont suit for bg ;/ .
  2. In overall its possiable to add better demension for lyrcs and resise them after with _S - just it would looks better that this.
  3. Also idea to use changes flashes instead oа stiatic on "bgkiai".
  4. nad you got stacks bgs as i see 128194 - 174069somewher here as i understand and 240069 - 271069 you got double bg at the same time. unnecesary but would be great to fix. - going to fix it later.
  5. and one last thign abotu sb: on boths kiais new bg start on diffrent spots 02:08:194 - and 04:00:069 - . If it was made not purppose maybe fix. - fixed.
general
  1. dat lines!
  2. i dont agree to use soft-hitnormal as kick sound at all lenght. Exp you are force own kick on places with hihat 01:05:819 - . Maybe replace soft-hn with normal-hn and use custom soft-hn. As i know its easy to put hs on every beat with program whichbakari got. - I'll fix it later.
  3. 00:28:319 - start first spinner on that time? on boths diffs - 'kay.
Dark
  1. 00:46:069 (4) - additing curve to this slider would make it more interesting for my poit of view - Heh, yea. Fixed.
  2. 00:55:069 (4) - flow works better for my point of view - Fixed.
  3. 01:07:319 (7,1) - 01:23:819 (9,1) - i dont like that jumps. cant expain why just transition works very strange for me caus eof the lyricks. you decrease for a little(around 1.5) or make equal ds or ignore - Ignoring, 'cause these kind of jumps are everywhere in the map. I don't want to make constant DS on Hard.
  4. 01:09:319 (4,6) - i think its better make them more spaced like you did on 01:06:069 (4,5) - - Fixed.
  5. 01:19:069 (7,8) - better to emphasize that place somehow. jumps or special flow need here - I'll leave it like it is.
  6. 01:33:069 (3,4) - i dont like that sliders... they are... mmm will talk about it later
  7. 02:31:569 (5,6,1) - bad useage of jump. You leave clap + kick 02:31:319 (4,5) - without support and than focus on kick 02:31:819 (6) - . better place jump on 02:31:569 - or make equal ds around that as another variant - I'll leave it like it is.
  8. 04:15:319 (4,5,6) - you need more such jumps in the map. its kind uniq pattern for one sound which is not good - I used the same method before in 02:31:569 (5,6,1) -
  9. sry but i didnt understand that diff. 01:22:819 (7,8) - 01:29:819 (4,5) - 02:20:569 (1,2) - 02:22:069 (1,2) - you are following vocal but at the same you can just lose focus and star mapping for beat 01:24:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:31:069 (3,4,5,6) - . Just when i was playing got feeling that just press objects with music at bakcgroud. Said abotu jumps on 1:07 same thing - you are supporing vocal around that place but place jumps on big white tick which jenerally support music and vocal starts on red later. maybe i am wrong(hope so) and everything is ok but still cant understand logic of placed objects.
    Also remove that one 1/4 sliders. it loos useless if alone. Add some if you want keep it.
Good luck - Thanks for your time & mod.
riffy
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riffy
Most of the wrongly snapped stuff were actually fine, I fixed a few untidy patterns and the balnkets. If you want more detailed reply, just ask me via in-game! Thank you @Xellie

fergas wrote:

привет о3о/
Bakari's Light
  1. time to learn languages. will mode your maps on english sure
  2. 01:01:069 (5,6) - guess it would placed somewhere 100/47 it may suits better for map. moved around in a different way
  3. 01:11:069 (4,5) - 2 x 1\2 more exepted to see here for my point of view yush
  4. 01:20:069 - that beat should be supported with nc, you know. maybe add 01:16:069 - adn remove 01:14:069 - . I dont think that support one lyric's string by this way is good thing. and in overall after all nc went wrong 01:24:069 - . i belive its mistake and didnt made on purpose alright
  5. 01:50:069 (4) - i am not surre that looks good. Maybe rotate 5? only suggestion nah, it's cool, imo. typical flow I use
  6. 02:28:069 (1) - same rotate to 5, for my point of view it may give for a little better flow yeah
  7. 02:58:069 (4) - again it could better flow. or nvm fixed
  8. 03:11:069 (3,4) - was same situation b4. 2 x 1\2 sliders or reverse + cricel would suit better for my ppoint of view yes
  9. 03:25:069 (2) - mayeb rotate 10? for me it looks much better yeah
  10. 03:27:319 (3,4,1) - i think it may a bit hard rhythm to read ._. maybe rever like you did on 02:07:319 (5) - and 01:35:319 (2) - or maybe just one slider like on 03:59:319 (4) - I think it's cool + it represents the music in a nice way and gives some variety
  11. i dont like some flows on this map but still they wroks and readable. just pointed things that can be fixed without any problems
Good luck
Thank you!

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Wafu
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  1. soft-hitnormal má spoždění větší než 5ms. Opravil jsem to asi tak co nejvíc to šlo, tak tady máš kdyžtak link
  2. Když už jsme u těch hitsoundů, doporučuju použít soft-hitclap jako slidertick, protože tady bylo pár míst, kde se ten clap hodil na místo, kde zrovna byl slidertick. Hlavně by se to hodilo na Bakariho obtížnost. Zkus to zvážit, jeho obtížnost nemá tak hodně hitsoundů a docela by to zaplnilo ty prázné místa.
  3. Je to na tobě, ale myslím, že na obou obtížnostech se hodí tu pauzu ukončit na 02:54:069 - protože je tam slyšet basa, takže je to trochu lepší, když ten screen zase ztmavne spíš na nějakém zvuku, než někde na 02:55:194 - kde není nic tak výrazného.
  4. Offset je trochu mimo. Dá se toho všimnout např. na 04:02:069 - můžeš to zkusit na 25% speed. Rozhodně jde slyšet, že then kick drum zazní dřív, než metronom. 59 offset podle mě sedí o dost líp.
  5. V kiai jde dost dobře slyšet, že je hudba hlasitější, hodně doporučuju zvednout volume o takových 10-15%, zní to rozhodně líp a logicky to sedí víc do songu.

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  1. 01:27:319 (8) - Tady dej clap, protože je i v songu a vymaž ho z 01:27:819 (10) - asi si to nějak prohodil, ale tady clap není.
  2. 01:33:069 (3,4) - Rytmus je mimo song, takže se to hraje trochu hůř. Obvzlášť by se to hrálo i špatně na taiku, ale to už je vedlejší, 2 noty si do songu přidal a jednu ignoroval. Doporučil bych jednoduše tenhle rytmus:
    SPOILER
  3. 02:04:069 (6) - Doteď to bylo poprvé co si neměl konzistentní comba. Mazat to další NC na té krátké pauze není potřeba, na 03:56:069 - si to vyřešil pěkně.
  4. 02:20:569 (1,2) - Taky se to nehraje zrovna nejlíp, když 02:20:694 - je v songu prázdné. Nicméně, je tady alespoň zvuk na 02:20:944 - , který by is mohl namappovat podobným patternem. Zkusit tohle by bylo rytmicky o něco korektnější a docela se to nabízí.
    SPOILER
  5. 03:26:069 (1) - Nejsem si úplně jistý, jestli by tady vážně měl být spinner. Za prvé tady není žádný zvuk, který by se táhl tak dlouho, že by se hodil na spinner a pak na 01:34:069 - si to namappoval docela hezky i bez spinneru a to je to úplně stejná část. Navíc ten přechod ze streamu do klidné části se tady hodil víc.
  6. 01:11:819 - Doporučuju smazat clap, není v songu.
  7. 02:15:819 (5) - To samé co předchozí.
  8. 02:31:819 (6) - Stejný případ
  9. 03:03:819 - Na konci toho slideru by ze stejného důvodu neměl být clap.
  10. 03:19:819 - Stejný případ
  11. 04:07:819 (5) - Stejný případ
  12. 04:23:819 (6) - Stejný případ
  13. Asi bych snížil všechno nastavení kromě velikosti circlů o 0,5 ať je to líp vyvážené s Bakariho obtížností. Teď je tam rozdíl 3 mezi všema nastaveníma a myslím, že je to docela skok. Snížení o 1 se nehodí z toho důvodu že AR 6 by tady bylo trochu dívné, ale když všechno snížíš o polovinu grom CS, mělo by to být ještě okay a trochu víc by se to mělo vybalancovat. S AR 6.5 se mi taky zdá, že je ta mapa taková plynulejší, ale to už je jen můj pohled na věc.

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  1. 00:34:069 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whole this part's combos are a bit out of place. That's caused by gap on 00:32:069 - if you did map this part, you would normally put NC after each 2 downbeats as you do whole map, but because it is not mapped, it is moved by one combo. Respectively, on 00:36:069 - there is something like new sound, which is quite major in this song, while 00:38:069 - seems to be a continuing part of it. It should take just a minute to fix this, but you should remove all NCs and put your first NC on 00:36:069 (4) - and then put it in same pattern, after each 2 downbeats as you just did before. You can also check that Pjecoo's NCs look slightly better with music, but I think you already know what do I talk about.
  2. 01:14:069 - You did the same as above here. You shortened one combo by one downbeat and that caused you to place them on wrong downbeats. For example 01:20:069 (5) - is really more significant place for a NC than 01:18:069 - and so on. On 01:34:069 (1,2) - you again used different length of combo, thus after this it seems to fit music again pretty well.
  3. Already stated in general, but not in english. Anyway, I recommend to use soft-hitclap for some of sliderticks, because your diff had quite many places where was a clap, but in map, there was a slidertick, so why not using this opportunity. It sometimes sounds a bit empty, so using tick hitsounds would make it feel a bit better with music.

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I don't think I have to mention anything else. Map is overally cool, tho I didn't like the NC problem on Bakari's diff, but that might happen. I think this could move forward very soon. Have my star guys and good luck~!
Mortem
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  1. soft-hitnormal má spoždění větší než 5ms. Opravil jsem to asi tak co nejvíc to šlo, tak tady máš kdyžtak link - Ok, díky.
  2. Když už jsme u těch hitsoundů, doporučuju použít soft-hitclap jako slidertick, protože tady bylo pár míst, kde se ten clap hodil na místo, kde zrovna byl slidertick. Hlavně by se to hodilo na Bakariho obtížnost. Zkus to zvážit, jeho obtížnost nemá tak hodně hitsoundů a docela by to zaplnilo ty prázné místa. - Zní to už poněkud živěji. Ok, opraveno.
  3. Je to na tobě, ale myslím, že na obou obtížnostech se hodí tu pauzu ukončit na 02:54:069 - protože je tam slyšet basa, takže je to trochu lepší, když ten screen zase ztmavne spíš na nějakém zvuku, než někde na 02:55:194 - kde není nic tak výrazného. - Opraveno.
  4. Offset je trochu mimo. Dá se toho všimnout např. na 04:02:069 - můžeš to zkusit na 25% speed. Rozhodně jde slyšet, že then kick drum zazní dřív, než metronom. 59 offset podle mě sedí o dost líp. - Já si popravdě nebyl moc jistý s tím offsetem. Všichni říkali, že je to v pohodě...T_T - opraveno.
  5. V kiai jde dost dobře slyšet, že je hudba hlasitější, hodně doporučuju zvednout volume o takových 10-15%, zní to rozhodně líp a logicky to sedí víc do songu. - Ok, opraveno.

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  1. 01:27:319 (8) - Tady dej clap, protože je i v songu a vymaž ho z 01:27:819 (10) - asi si to nějak prohodil, ale tady clap není. - Je to možné. Opraveno.
  2. 01:33:069 (3,4) - Rytmus je mimo song, takže se to hraje trochu hůř. Obvzlášť by se to hrálo i špatně na taiku, ale to už je vedlejší, 2 noty si do songu přidal a jednu ignoroval. Doporučil bych jednoduše tenhle rytmus: - Opraveno.
    SPOILER
  3. 02:04:069 (6) - Doteď to bylo poprvé co si neměl konzistentní comba. Mazat to další NC na té krátké pauze není potřeba, na 03:56:069 - si to vyřešil pěkně. - Aha. Opraveno.
  4. 02:20:569 (1,2) - Taky se to nehraje zrovna nejlíp, když 02:20:694 - je v songu prázdné. Nicméně, je tady alespoň zvuk na 02:20:944 - , který by is mohl namappovat podobným patternem. Zkusit tohle by bylo rytmicky o něco korektnější a docela se to nabízí. - Opraveno.
    SPOILER
  5. 03:26:069 (1) - Nejsem si úplně jistý, jestli by tady vážně měl být spinner. Za prvé tady není žádný zvuk, který by se táhl tak dlouho, že by se hodil na spinner a pak na 01:34:069 - si to namappoval docela hezky i bez spinneru a to je to úplně stejná část. Navíc ten přechod ze streamu do klidné části se tady hodil víc. - Spinner jsem odstranil a něco jsem tam tedy namapoval.
  6. 01:11:819 - Doporučuju smazat clap, není v songu.
  7. 02:15:819 (5) - To samé co předchozí.
  8. 02:31:819 (6) - Stejný případ
  9. 03:03:819 - Na konci toho slideru by ze stejného důvodu neměl být clap.
  10. 03:19:819 - Stejný případ
  11. 04:07:819 (5) - Stejný případ
  12. 04:23:819 (6) - Stejný případ - Vše opraveno.
  13. Asi bych snížil všechno nastavení kromě velikosti circlů o 0,5 ať je to líp vyvážené s Bakariho obtížností. Teď je tam rozdíl 3 mezi všema nastaveníma a myslím, že je to docela skok. Snížení o 1 se nehodí z toho důvodu že AR 6 by tady bylo trochu dívné, ale když všechno snížíš o polovinu grom CS, mělo by to být ještě okay a trochu víc by se to mělo vybalancovat. S AR 6.5 se mi taky zdá, že je ta mapa taková plynulejší, ale to už je jen můj pohled na věc. - Dobře. Dík moc za mód. ;)
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Sieg
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Sieg
SWEET
Sieg
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Sieg
general:
hitsounds are unaudible, you must raise volume level significantly

dark:
01:19:059 (7,8) - stress snares here, this will be more logical http://puu.sh/i8jE6/47a80eb6ba.jpg
01:31:809 (9,1) - should be 01:31:559 (8,9) - stacked instead to follow your jump to downbeat patterns?
02:22:559 (2,3) - ctrl+g to follow lyric\music better
02:26:059 (1,2) - blanket
02:26:059 (1,3,1) - would be great if you make them by copy-pasting
02:31:559 (5,6) - jump to weak beat from strong 02:31:559 (5) which makes little sense
02:34:059 (1) - move this a bit from 02:33:559 (4) to be consistent with your downbeat jumps? http://puu.sh/i8jUZ/06f8ef653b.jpg

light:
01:58:059 (4) - ну я вообще не одобряю такие штуки c слайдертиками, особенно если они использованны всего ппару раз за 4х минутную карту
riffy
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We've discussed things and changed stuff. It's cool.
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Mortem
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@Sieg
Fixed everything you mentioned. Thanks! c:
Sieg
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find me ingame
to next bn: recheck hitsounds volume level :3
meii18
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Hi Pjecoo :3

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important



General



  1. 00:00:059 - ; 02:40:059 - ; 04:32:059 - On these points,for safe,you can increase the volume from 40% to 50% on all diffs don't worry it will fit the calm part

-Bakari-



  1. 01:34:059(4)- On reverse I hear drums from music background but their feel empty because on reverse you forgot to add clap also making it inconsistent with other clap hitsounds.Add the clap here for consistency with other clap hitsounds and to emphasize the drums audible on reverse
  2. 01:58:059(4)- Instead using this slider snapped on 01:59:059 - which ignore the drums from 01:58:559 - where a clap is required,you can snap it to 1/1 I mean to 01:58:559 - and then to emphasize the drums,add the clap on tail and on 01:59:059 - you can add a note to reflect the music background much better
  3. 02:04:059(1)- As I said on 01:58:059(4)- you can move the slider's tail to 02:04:559 - to add the clap on tail where are the drums and then you can add a note for reflecting the music background
  4. 02:16:059(1)- You ignore the drums from 02:16:559 - so you can snap it to 1/1 I mean to 02:16:559 - and then a note for the reflect of the music background as you did at 02:08:059(1)-
  5. 02:28:059(1)- I don't know why you added drum sampleset because it doesn't reflect the music background.Much better would be if you'll remove the drum sampleset from whole slider because the music will be reflected much better without drum sampleset
  6. 02:29:559(2)- The blanket with this note and with 02:30:559(4)- feels a bit unpolished.This blanket could be polished much better if the note I mean 2 will be placed with just 1 pixel to left on 315|172
  7. 03:12:059(1)- Seems you ignore the drums again here so I suggest again == to move the slider's tail to 03:12:559 - where are the drums then you can add a note after to reflect the music background
  8. 03:34:059(3,4)- This blanket feels a bit unpolished.To polish it much better,the note can be moved with a pixel to left on 331|76

Dark



  1. 01:03:309(5,6,7,8,9,10)- Instead using a stream which it can destroy the gap I think you can use 2 1/2 sliders with a repeat like >>here<< also they will reflect the music background same as the stream
  2. 01:04:809 - A note could be added here for reflecting the music background and also to improve the playability during gameplay
  3. 01:08:559(2,3)- The flow between these sliders seems to be poor and weird flow.The tail of 2 seems it goes to down and the flow could be broken since the next slider's head is up and not down.Place the last anchor of 2 to 149|192 and then move the slider to 48|239 to don't destroy the pattern with 01:08:059(1)- and then move 3 to 215|178 for a better and polished flow and also you should move some objects to don't have DS errors
  4. 01:12:809 - Here too a note would be better to be placed here to reflect the music background and to improve the playability
  5. 01:15:309(7)- The symmetry between this note and 01:14:809(5)- doesn't so good and better polished.If you want to polish much better this symmetry,my suggestion is to move 7 with 2 pixels to up on 357|57 for a better symmetry
  6. 01:17:059(3,4)- Here the flow seems unpolished and weird.The tail of 3 goes to down while 4's tail is placed up which broke the flow.My suggestion is to move the last anchor of 3 to 188|88 and then move the slider to 101|130 to keep the pattern with previous slider
  7. 01:20:559(1,2)- Too flow issue.1'tail goes to up but 2 is placed down instead up which could broke the flow.To polish the flow much better,I suggest to move 2 to 217|41 to be placed up like previous slider's tail
  8. 01:23:309(8)- Seems the slider's tail touch 01:22:059(6)- sliderbody and seems this is not an intentional overlap as I can see :/ Move 8 to 373|82 to avoid that overlap with 6
  9. 01:35:309(7,8,9,10,11,12)- As I said on 01:03:309(5,6,7,8,9,10)-,you can use 2 1/2 sliders with a reverse instead using streams which can destroy the spread.Also they will reflect the music like the streams
  10. 03:27:309(7,8,9,10,11,12)- Again the stream can be replaced with 2 1/2 sliders with a repeat just for safe to not destroy the spread.These sliders will reflect the song like that stream
  11. 04:29:559(1)- I think there shouldn't be NC since there's same lyric.The NC will fit on 04:30:309(2)- so I suggest to swap NC between 1 and 2

That's all from now

no kds I have it already from this map

Call me back ~
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Sieg
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Sieg
@ByBy_ChAn there is no soft-hitnormal.wav, please
always delete and redownload beatmap before mod
meii18
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Sieg wrote:

@ByBy_ChAn there is no soft-hitnormal.wav, please
always delete and redownload beatmap before mod
yeah thanks I forgot ;_;
riffy
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I'm not changing the 2/1 sliders. They're following vocals and I believe it is perfectly fine to let them do it. Hitsounds are up to Pjecoo.

Thank you for checking!

Edit: No additional changes, the blankets are fine to me. :c
meii18
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p/4225240 >> finished the mod sorry for taking so long ;_;
Mortem
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@ByBy_ChAn Fixed only your important suggestion & NC at the end. Thanks.
meii18
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It's time to take away this mapset from the pending section (:

Qualified
Sieg
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Sieg
grats (:
Gordon123
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wow gratz~~ :) :) :)
Mortem
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Sieg wrote:

grats (:

Gordon123 wrote:

wow gratz~~ :) :) :)
Thanks~ ♥
Ritalityxx
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it's a pleasure to play, i like it... All Mr.Kitty maps so cool ;)
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