Mr.Kitty - Neverending Nights · forum

Mortem

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mortem 2015-03-24T14:01:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6. června 2015 at 21:51:31

Artist: Mr.Kitty
Title: Neverending Nights
Tags: D_E_A_T_H DEATH synthpop goth -Bakari-
BPM: 120
Filesize: 8143kb
Play Time: 04:32
Difficulties Available:

Bakari's Light (1,59 stars, 274 notes)
Dark (2,73 stars, 405 notes)

Download: Mr.Kitty - Neverending Nights
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------

#6

Mapset

Light - Bakari

Dark - Pjecoo

Storyboard - Pjecoo & Wafu

Last edited by Mortem 2018-12-16T12:46:27+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

Peachtrees

815 posts

Joined May 2013

Peachtrees 2015-03-27T21:29:57+00:00

PM'd you in game, I tried :c

00:54:069 (3,4) - try moving 3 up for better flow? imo the blanket doesn't really look all that nice anyways so why not go for something that flows nicely. Not that it currently feels weird or anything, i just feel like this would play slightly better

01:07:069 (6,7) - feels like the repeat should start on the white tick. Additionally, the sudden hault in music feels kind of w

01:08:069 (1,2) - these look to curved :c

01:22:069 (6,8) - overlap which is noticeable in-game, looks kind of ugly

01:24:069 (1,2) - try moving this below 1 for nicer flow

01:26:069 (6,7) - perhaps see if you can have 7 go parallel to the wiggly shape of 6?

01:31:569 (8,9,1) - instead of stacking 8 and 9, try stacking 9 and 1? felt a tad bit nicer without the sudden hault in movement

01:39:069 (5,1) - just being curious why the spacing between this is 1.6 when it is 1.1 for the rest of the slow part. I don't see how this particular one stands out

02:17:069 (3,4) - try increasing the spacing between these two a bit? they seem very close together while playing, it just doesnt look good to me ><

02:23:319 (4,1) - having the same distance between this and 02:28:069 (1,2) - feels kind of weird since the first one feels much much stronger

02:34:069 (1,2,3) - try making a nicer curve between these three for a nicer flow?

03:09:069 (3,4,5) - I think this might look a bit ugly without proper blankets

03:15:319 (8,9) - try moving this up a little to avoid them being this close together

03:17:069 (3,4,5) - doesnt flow too well :/

04:06:069 (1) - try moving this down and to the right a bit to catch the sliders movement for better flow

04:15:569 (5,6,1) - this felt REALLY awkward.

I'm by no means an expert, so if you don't feel like this was usefull enough to mod my map back that's fine!

Mortem

690 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mortem 2015-03-27T22:26:49+00:00

Peachtrees wrote:
PM'd you in game, I tried :c

00:54:069 (3,4) - try moving 3 up for better flow? imo the blanket doesn't really look all that nice anyways so why not go for something that flows nicely. Not that it currently feels weird or anything, i just feel like this would play slightly better - I moved it little bit up and fixed the blanket.

01:07:069 (6,7) - feels like the repeat should start on the white tick. Additionally, the sudden hault in music feels kind of w - Leaving like it is.

01:08:069 (1,2) - these look to curved :c - I know. This is on purpose.

01:22:069 (6,8) - overlap which is noticeable in-game, looks kind of ugly - Leaving like it is.

01:24:069 (1,2) - try moving this below 1 for nicer flow - Flow is good here imo. Leaving like it is.

01:26:069 (6,7) - perhaps see if you can have 7 go parallel to the wiggly shape of 6? - I'll keep it in mind.

01:31:569 (8,9,1) - instead of stacking 8 and 9, try stacking 9 and 1? felt a tad bit nicer without the sudden hault in movement - Okay, fixed.

01:39:069 (5,1) - just being curious why the spacing between this is 1.6 when it is 1.1 for the rest of the slow part. I don't see how this particular one stands out //shrugs - maybe I forgot about it. For now, leaving like it is.

02:17:069 (3,4) - try increasing the spacing between these two a bit? they seem very close together while playing, it just doesnt look good to me >< - Fixed.

02:23:319 (4,1) - having the same distance between this and 02:28:069 (1,2) - feels kind of weird since the first one feels much much stronger - Leaving like it is.

02:34:069 (1,2,3) - try making a nicer curve between these three for a nicer flow? - Nope...blanket.

03:09:069 (3,4,5) - I think this might look a bit ugly without proper blankets - I think it's okay.

03:15:319 (8,9) - try moving this up a little to avoid them being this close together - Leaving like it is.

03:17:069 (3,4,5) - doesnt flow too well :/ - Fixed.

04:06:069 (1) - try moving this down and to the right a bit to catch the sliders movement for better flow - Leaving like it is.

04:15:569 (5,6,1) - this felt REALLY awkward. - Rearranged.

I'm by no means an expert, so if you don't feel like this was usefull enough to mod my map back that's fine! - Thanks!

Shadren

Featured Artist

531 posts

Joined March 2011

Shadren 2015-03-28T18:03:31+00:00

[General]

Enable "display epilepsy warning"

[Storyboard]

Will try to help you reduce the CPU load.
There is no need black.jpg because Osu could work with Fade, so delete this from directory and storyboard.
Also, add bg.jpg and Fade to bg.jpg at the begining and move it to "Background" directory under all of other objects (http://puu.sh/gTaNy/fffa2ea800.png), and it won't use in storyboard throughout the song:
```
Sprite,Background,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
 F,0,0,,1
```
Working with bgbw.jpg
1. Remove all points bellow 00:26:069 - or this from .osb file:
```
M,0,0,,320,240
 F,0,0,26069,1,0
```
2. 00:26:069 - add here point Fade with 0%
3. 00:32:069 - add here point Fade with 100%
4. Change some code in .osb file from:
```
 F,0,64069,159944,0
```
  To:
```
 F,0,64069,,0
```
5. Change some code in . osb file from:
```
 F,0,176069,271944,0
```
  To:
```
 F,0,176069,,0
```
6. 04:32:069 - add here point Fade with 100%
7. 05:08:069 - add here point Fade with 0%
Working with bgkiai.jpg
Change some code in . osb file from:
```
 F,0,160194,239194,0
```
To:
```
 F,0,160194,,0
```

If nothings works, try to use complete version: http://puu.sh/gTfKh/aa0c974c56.osb But don't forget to delete black.jpg in folder, it's not need
[Bakari's Light]

00:43:069 (2,4) - blanket
01:23:069 (2) - Ctrl-H ?
02:20:069 - На таких моментах я бы уделял внимание вокалу и поставил бы тут слайдер
02:36:069 - ^
04:20:069 - ^
02:58:819 - Посмотри DS между объектами
03:10:069 - вокал меняется на этом моменте, может перестроить паттерн? Как вариант продлить слайдер до того момента, а (3) убрать
03:28:569 - Сюда бы кружок
03:38:069 (3) - Этот слайдер у игроков, имеющих экран 4:3 уйдёт за границы поля. Подвинуть бы его
04:23:319 (6) - можно заменить на репит слайдер 1/2
04:32:069 - Сюда можно спиннер на 8/1

[Dark]

01:03:069 (5) - I think this circle not need
01:19:319 - Imo, there must be circle or begining of slider because this sound must be clickable
02:20:569 (1,2) - it's so strange, i think there must be similar slider
02:28:069 (1,2) - Imo, there is no need jump, because it's could confuse players
02:39:319 (4) - Try to remove one repeat and place circle: http://puu.sh/gTimu/4edfba1083.jpg http://puu.sh/gTit6/ce83678dda.jpg

It's all, nice song and map
Just want to wish luck

Mortem

690 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mortem 2015-03-29T09:58:12+00:00

Shadren wrote:
[General]
Enable "display epilepsy warning" - Enabled & Storyboard fixed.
[Dark]
01:03:069 (5) - I think this circle not need - Removed.
01:19:319 - Imo, there must be circle or begining of slider because this sound must be clickable - I'll keep it in mind.
02:20:569 (1,2) - it's so strange, i think there must be similar slider - If more people mention it, I'll rearrange it. For now, leaving like it is.
02:28:069 (1,2) - Imo, there is no need jump, because it's could confuse players Fixed.
02:39:319 (4) - Try to remove one repeat and place circle: http://puu.sh/gTimu/4edfba1083.jpg http://puu.sh/gTit6/ce83678dda.jpg - Fixed.
It's all, nice song and map
Just want to wish luck - Thanks! c:

YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-03-30T14:11:03+00:00

hi~
mod via in-game request

Bakari's Light

01:45:569 - не совсем понятно, зачем тебе здесь пропуск, сбивает немного с толку, ибо до этого их не было вообще
01:48:569 - ^
02:19:069 (5) - 488;236 - для чуть лучшего бланкета о3о/
02:30:569 (4) - я бы сделал так - http://puu.sh/gVaxu/68beeb0548.jpg
03:08:569 (2) - http://puu.sh/gVaC2/ad545fe2d0.jpg
03:28:569 очень сюда кружок хочется о3о
03:41:069 ^
03:35:569 ^
03:36:569 - ^
03:41:069 ^ ^^ ^ ^ ^^ там же есть биты ты че
03:51:569 (4) - 352;208 pls
that's all ~~sieg hiel~~

Dark
03:03:069 (7,8,9) - u should make triangle from these http://puu.sh/gVbaZ/b726582bae.jpg
03:11:819 (8) - 360;56 for a triangle owo/
03:18:069 (5) - 56;172 ^ (if u did, check spacing then for next objects)
03:20:069 (1,3) - idk why but i suddenly didn't like these for location (my example - http://puu.sh/gVbxf/d2c7abe1bc.jpg)
ok that's all ~~kil me~~

nice mapset, good luck with it~

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2015-03-30T14:12:06+00:00

Shadren wrote:
[General]

[Bakari's Light]
00:43:069 (2,4) - blanket whoops
01:23:069 (2) - Ctrl-H ? net o3o не вписывается
02:20:069 - На таких моментах я бы уделял внимание вокалу и поставил бы тут слайдер
02:36:069 - ^
04:20:069 - ^ Я не знаю, мне как-то не очень хочется туда слайдеры. :c
02:58:819 - Посмотри DS между объектами ой :C
03:10:069 - вокал меняется на этом моменте, может перестроить паттерн? Как вариант продлить слайдер до того момента, а (3) убрать пофиксил тут как-то по-своему о3о
03:28:569 - Сюда бы кружок да
03:38:069 (3) - Этот слайдер у игроков, имеющих экран 4:3 уйдёт за границы поля. Подвинуть бы его а вот и нет
04:23:319 (6) - можно заменить на репит слайдер 1/2 она с предыдущегг киая перекочевала, пусть живет и там, и тут
04:32:069 - Сюда можно спиннер на 8/1 I'll have a spinner here only when Pjecoo places spinner in his diff ;3;
It's all, nice song and map
Just want to wish luck

Cпасибо! :3

Пофиксил все, кроме той штуки с большим количеством 1/2. это се таки самая легкая дифа, да и трек спокойный @YellowManul

Спасибки :3

code

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 128069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Neverending Nights
TitleUnicode:Neverending Nights
Artist:Mr.Kitty
ArtistUnicode:Mr.Kitty
Creator:Pjecoo
Version:Bakari's Light
Source:
Tags:D_E_A_T_H DEATH synthpop goth -Bakari-
BeatmapID:666744
BeatmapSetID:296993

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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Mortem

690 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mortem 2015-03-30T14:31:06+00:00

YellowManul wrote:
Dark
03:03:069 (7,8,9) - u should make triangle from these http://puu.sh/gVbaZ/b726582bae.jpg - Fixed.
03:11:819 (8) - 360;56 for a triangle owo/ - Fixed.
03:18:069 (5) - 56;172 ^ (if u did, check spacing then for next objects) - Fixed.
03:20:069 (1,3) - idk why but i suddenly didn't like these for location (my example - http://puu.sh/gVbxf/d2c7abe1bc.jpg) - Leaving like it is.
ok that's all ~~kil me~~

nice mapset, good luck with it~
Thank you! c:

Moo-Chan

408 posts

Joined November 2013

Moo-Chan 2015-04-02T09:50:28+00:00

so, i hope this makes up the mod i never did

[General]

you need to enable epilepsy warning due to your sb

[Bakari's Light]

00:43:069 (2,4) - these could be blanketed
00:49:069 (5,1) - fix blanket
00:52:069 (3,4) - i feel like you could blanket these as well (sorry for nazi)
01:20:069 (5) - imo there should be a nc here
01:21:069 (7,1) - blankets off
01:43:569 (4,2) - you should stack these two notes
01:58:069 (4,5) - the small blanket could be fixed on this
02:03:069 (5,1) - blankettt
02:29:569 (2,4) - ^
03:38:069 (4) - uhm, this slider goes off grid a lot. idk if thats rankable but imo you should move it else where
03:58:069 (3) - nc maybe?
04:12:569 (2,3) - blanket fix

[Dark]

00:50:819 (5,6) - fix blanket
01:03:319 (5) - i think you should make a nc here since this stream sounds different from the previous note
01:08:069 (1,2) - blanket fix
01:13:069 (2,4) - ^
01:16:569 (2,3) - ^ (and so on. not gonna point them all out)
01:17:069 (3,4) - i feel like the flow from 3 to 4 feels pretty awkward to play. i think you could move 4 down some so 3 could flow into it
01:26:069 (6,7) - fix the blanket
01:28:069 (1,2) - ^
01:35:319 (7) - again, i think you should nc this cause the stream sounds different than the note before
02:07:319 (2) - nc?
02:26:069 (1,2) - blanket
02:56:069 (1,2) - ^
02:59:069 (8,9) - ^
03:04:069 (1,2) - this not being linear makes the flow of it pretty awkward. either you could curve the slider, or have the note after it more underneath the slider. or, you could ctrl - h the slider, then move it back to around where it was
03:10:069 (5,7) - im a nazi for stacks too, so could you perfectly stack 7's tail under 5's tail? 03:11:319 (7) - would be moved to x:282 y:213
03:13:069 (3,4) - the blanket nazi strikes again
03:18:069 (5,6) - again with the non-linear flow >.<
03:25:819 (4) - you should move this to x:364 y:188
03:30:569 (4) - you should move this to x:288 y:92 because it breaks flow from the previous notes, and moving this would basically make the whole combo symmetrical
03:59:319 (2) - nc?
04:11:569 (4) - i would ctrl - g this slider
04:12:069 (1,2) - the blanket is off here
04:31:319 (5) - nc?

so, thats all i could find.
goodluck with the mapset and very nice song choice ♥

Mortem

690 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mortem 2015-04-02T10:45:20+00:00

Moo-Chan wrote:

so, i hope this makes up the mod i never did - yes.

[General]
you need to enable epilepsy warning due to your sb
- I did it already.

[Dark]
00:50:819 (5,6) - fix blanket - Fixed.
01:03:319 (5) - i think you should make a nc here since this stream sounds different from the previous note - No. Leaving like it is. Player should know where the next note should be ('cause of stream).
01:08:069 (1,2) - blanket fix - Fixed.
01:13:069 (2,4) - ^ - Fixed.
01:16:569 (2,3) - ^ (and so on. not gonna point them all out) - Fixed.
01:17:069 (3,4) - i feel like the flow from 3 to 4 feels pretty awkward to play. i think you could move 4 down some so 3 could flow into it - Moved little bit down.
01:26:069 (6,7) - fix the blanket - Fixed.
01:28:069 (1,2) - ^ - Fixed.
01:35:319 (7) - again, i think you should nc this cause the stream sounds different than the note before - Same as above.
02:07:319 (2) - nc? - Nope.
02:26:069 (1,2) - blanket - This one is actually ok.
02:56:069 (1,2) - ^ - Fixed.
02:59:069 (8,9) - ^ - Fixed.
03:04:069 (1,2) - this not being linear makes the flow of it pretty awkward. either you could curve the slider, or have the note after it more underneath the slider. or, you could ctrl - h the slider, then move it back to around where it was - I'll keep it in mind. But for now, leaving like it is.
03:10:069 (5,7) - im a nazi for stacks too, so could you perfectly stack 7's tail under 5's tail? 03:11:319 (7) - would be moved to x:282 y:213 - Moved.
03:13:069 (3,4) - the blanket nazi strikes again - Fixed.
03:18:069 (5,6) - again with the non-linear flow >.< - Same as above.
03:25:819 (4) - you should move this to x:364 y:188 - Fixed.
03:30:569 (4) - you should move this to x:288 y:92 because it breaks flow from the previous notes, and moving this would basically make the whole combo symmetrical - Fixed.
03:59:319 (2) - nc? - Nope.
04:11:569 (4) - i would ctrl - g this slider - I wouldn't.
04:12:069 (1,2) - the blanket is off here - Fixed.
04:31:319 (5) - nc? - Nope.
so, thats all i could find.
goodluck with the mapset and very nice song choice ♥ - Thanks.

riffy

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riffy 2015-04-03T04:17:53+00:00

Thank you!

Didn't change: The slider is okay, as long as it's not offscreen. NCs follow drums and my own comboing pattern, adding extra NCs would hurt it. Blankets were mostly fine
Changed: A couple of blankets.

code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: neverendingnights.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 128069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Neverending Nights
TitleUnicode:Neverending Nights
Artist:Mr.Kitty
ArtistUnicode:Mr.Kitty
Creator:Pjecoo
Version:Bakari's Light
Source:
Tags:D_E_A_T_H DEATH synthpop goth -Bakari-
BeatmapID:666744
BeatmapSetID:296993

[Difficulty]
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68,32,207319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,52,207569,2,0,L|172:48,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,208069,5,4,0:0:0:0:
300,28,208569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,36,209069,2,0,P|420:76|416:136,1,100
336,208,210069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,152,210569,2,0,P|180:148|96:252,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,340,212069,6,0,P|184:348|256:344,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,244,213569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,176,214069,2,0,P|324:184|440:76,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,76,215569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,24,216069,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,124,216569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,220,217069,2,0,L|124:328,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,360,218069,2,0,P|-4:308|108:112,1,300
212,112,220069,6,0,L|316:104,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,208,221069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,308,221569,2,0,L|292:304,2,100,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,232,223069,2,0,P|488:208|488:136,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,100,224069,6,0,P|348:124|276:132,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,184,225069,2,0,P|176:236|172:288,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,360,226069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,324,226569,2,0,P|416:280|336:228,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,228069,6,0,P|276:136|336:112,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,200,229569,2,0,L|48:196,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,244,231069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,212,231569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,180,232069,6,0,L|452:288,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,104,233569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,156,234069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,180,234569,2,0,P|136:180|152:56,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,236069,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,192,236569,2,0,L|280:304,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,136,238069,2,0,L|404:344,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,356,239319,2,0,P|308:360|252:328,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,240069,6,0,L|108:280,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,232,241569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,292,242069,2,0,P|424:244|416:184,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,243069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,243569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,228,244069,6,0,L|32:208,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,245569,2,0,L|300:264,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,284,246069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,196,246569,2,0,P|416:152|412:88,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,56,247319,2,0,P|360:36|272:28,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,60,248069,6,0,P|212:76|140:80,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,128,249069,2,0,L|44:244,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,250069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,172,250569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,228,251069,2,0,L|336:220,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,300,252069,5,0,0:0:0:0:
496,236,252569,2,0,P|494:186|477:139,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,196,254069,2,0,P|374:149|373:99,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,228,255319,2,0,L|244:216,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,252,256069,5,4,0:0:0:0:
140,164,256569,2,0,P|132:132|140:56,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,156,258069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,136,258569,2,0,L|352:204,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,236,259069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,296,259569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,264,260069,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,260569,2,0,P|112:144|116:116,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,261069,2,0,L|264:88,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,36,262069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,262569,2,0,P|420:160|404:236,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,263319,2,0,L|252:244,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,264069,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,220,264569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,176,265069,2,0,L|20:296,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,348,266069,2,0,L|156:352,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,316,266569,2,0,P|168:276|104:248,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,268069,6,0,P|332:308|360:248,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,160,269069,2,0,P|280:148|248:120,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,176,270069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,104,270569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,68,271069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,84,271319,2,0,L|232:76,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,104,272069,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-04-04T07:09:08+00:00

M4M from your modding queue

[Bakari's Light]

00:49:069 (5,1) - Double blanket them better.
00:51:069 (2) - blanket
01:50:069 (4) - make this straight. It look weird when having that slider curvet while 01:49:069 (3) is straight
01:58:069 (4) - make the slider a better blanked shaped to 01:59:569 (5)
03:16:069 (1) - move this a bit to the right. Newbies who just started playing osu will miss this note for sure since they'll put more notice to (2) than (1) If you put (1) in a way that they'll notice that (1) is there and they should go to it first.
Something like this
03:32:069 (1) - blanket

[Dark]

00:51:069 (6) - blanket
02:26:069 (1) - ^
03:17:069 (3) - ^

This was all I could mod. This is a well made map, good luck with ranking it

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-04-04T07:09:51+00:00

wait for me :3 to mod it

Mortem

690 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mortem 2015-04-04T07:29:37+00:00

nadapan wrote:
M4M from your modding queue

[Dark]
00:51:069 (6) - blanket - Fixed
02:26:069 (1) - ^ - ^
03:17:069 (3) - ^ - ^

This was all I could mod. This is a well made map, good luck with ranking it - Thank you.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-04-04T08:04:20+00:00

yo :3

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General

We clarified about SB files and they're used

I think soft-hitnormal have a little delay. Try this instead soft-hitnormal.wav

Bakari's Light

CS 3.3 ; AR 5 ; HP 4 ; OD 4
00:32:819()- I hear the instruments here which are ignored. Would be better if you'll add a 1/2 slider and also you can add a note on 00:33:569()- because there's strong beat
00:36:069(4,5)- Why you not try this instead http://puu.sh/h0YKM/43675a2c1c.jpg ? The current one looks untidy and it looks like a bad overlap
00:40:069(4)- Would be better if you add NC here because I hear new instruments
00:48:069(4)- ^ because new instruments
00:56:069(4)- NC again ==
01:37:569(4)- Would be better if you will move this note to 153|70 to make it equal with 01:36:569(2)- and to make a cvadruplet pattern and to improve a bit the movement of the cursor
01:59:569(5)- This note could be moved to 449|107 for a better blanket with the wave slider from 01:58:069(4)- http://puu.sh/h0ZyV/fdb2464c76.jpg
03:34:569()- I hear a strong beat here which is ignored ;w; I suggest to add a note here to not leave the strong beat empty
03:40:069(1)- I suggest to move this slider to 213|99 to make it equal with previous slider's tail and to improve the movement of the cursor a bit :3

Dark

00:55:069(4)- I suggest a ctrl+j here for a better movement of the cursor and this slider,for a better flow, it can be rotated with 4 degress

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2015-04-07T06:09:19+00:00

Fixed the curve on the long S-shaped slider, everything else looks fine @nadapan

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
yo :3

Bakari's Light
CS 3.3 ; AR 5 ; HP 4 ; OD 4 No way. I am strongly against these settings as they make absolutely no sense with BPM/SV and ppatterns used in the map.
00:32:819()- I hear the instruments here which are ignored. Would be better if you'll add a 1/2 slider and also you can add a note on 00:33:569()- because there's strong beat that'd be unrankable as there is no enough spac after spinner.
00:36:069(4,5)- Why you not try this instead http://puu.sh/h0YKM/43675a2c1c.jpg ? The current one looks untidy and it looks like a bad overlap No. The pattern you suggest completely breaks the flow and feels hardly readable for the diff. Not to mention, it looks really weird with my style
00:40:069(4)- Would be better if you add NC here because I hear new instruments
00:48:069(4)- ^ because new instruments
00:56:069(4)- NC again == each of these "missed" NCs follow a strict and reasonable pattern, I am not going to break it as it'd give players too much HP. besides, that'd look like random and unnecessary NC spam
01:37:569(4)- Would be better if you will move this note to 153|70 to make it equal with 01:36:569(2)- and to make a cvadruplet pattern and to improve a bit the movement of the cursor the suggestion doesn't change much. in fact, I don't see any difference but unncessary DS-fixes afterwards. gonna keep it.
01:59:569(5)- This note could be moved to 449|107 for a better blanket with the wave slider from 01:58:069(4)- okay
03:34:569()- I hear a strong beat here which is ignored ;w; I suggest to add a note here to not leave the strong beat empty if you listen closer, you can also hear vocals, which are much louder and grab more attention. that's the reason why I gave up the strong beat.
03:40:069(1)- I suggest to move this slider to 213|99 to make it equal with previous slider's tail and to improve the movement of the cursor a bit :3 nah, I'll keep the flow kinda glitchy here, it looks better, if you ask me.

Thank you for the mod.

Instead of sending the whole .osu file ou can just find and replace these two lines. @Pjecoo
Note: just to make it clear, 119569 and 120069 are location of these two objects in time

448,108,119569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,52,120069,6,0,L|244:44,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Want 2 Buy Avon

264 posts

Joined February 2014

Want 2 Buy Avon 2015-04-12T08:01:46+00:00

Returning a mod 4 mod

[Bakari's Light]

00:36:069 (4,5) - I think this is snapped wrong?
00:38:069 (1,2) - I'd say to either change the shape of 1 or make it slider linearly into 2
00:44:069 (4,5) - Snapped wrong
00:45:069 (5,1) - You could make these parallel maybe
00:58:069 (1,3) - Maybe you could blanket these
01:36:069 (1) - Snapped wrong
01:46:069 (3,4) - I'd make the three flow more linearly into 4
01:58:069 (4) - Idk if this is symetric because the anchor for the tail isn't in the center
02:03:069 (5,1) - Blanketu?
02:11:069 (5,1) - You could blanket these~
02:29:569 (2,4) - Blanket could be better
03:01:569 (2) - Snapped wrong
03:32:069 (1,2) - Blanketu~
03:36:069 (1) - Snapped wrong
03:46:569 (4,1) - Blanket could be better

[Dark]

00:52:069 (1,2) - This 1 kinda flows away from the 2 so you might want to change it's shape or angle some
01:19:069 (7,8) - Blanket maybe?
01:20:569 (2,4) - This blanket could be a bit better near the tail
01:22:819 (7,8) - blanket?
01:26:069 (6) - The anchor isn't on the tail so it's not perfectly symetrical
01:28:069 (1,2) - Fix blanket
01:29:819 (4,5) - Blanket?
02:07:319 (2) - Why make this one a repeat slider when the others are streams, this one leads into the kiai time. Making it a slider also ruins consistency
02:31:819 (6,1) - This blanket could be a tiny bit better
02:39:319 (4) - Same thing about consitency
02:56:069 (1,2) - blanket could be a lil better
02:59:069 (8,9) - I'd make these flow opposite directions like you did every other time you had sliders like these for consitency
03:01:069 (3,5) - Blanket could be better
03:09:069 (3,4,5) - blanket??
03:08:819 (2,5) - Fix blanket
03:10:819 (6,7) - ^
03:59:319 (2) - Same thing about consitency
04:00:819 (2,3) - Fix blanket
04:12:069 (1,2) - Blanket could be better
04:27:069 (3,4) - Fix blanketu
04:31:319 (5) - Consistency~

I'd say maybe make a filler diff since it goes to all like sliders and 1/2 to having streams

Good Luck getting it ranked~

fergas

769 posts

Joined August 2013

fergas 2015-04-12T23:35:50+00:00

здорово пупсики \o3o/

sb tips for lulz

02:10:694 - as suggest you can do more smuffer color transition for "city lights". exp 02:10:569 - 02:10:944 - pink-blue smuf transion but still leave clear color change on 02:11:069 - . Green color dont suit for bg ;/ .
In overall its possiable to add better demension for lyrcs and resise them after with _S - just it would looks better that this.
Also idea to use changes flashes instead oа stiatic on "bgkiai".
nad you got stacks bgs as i see 128194 - 174069somewher here as i understand and 240069 - 271069 you got double bg at the same time. unnecesary but would be great to fix.
and one last thign abotu sb: on boths kiais new bg start on diffrent spots 02:08:194 - and 04:00:069 - . If it was made not purppose maybe fix.

general

dat lines!
i dont agree to use soft-hitnormal as kick sound at all lenght. Exp you are force own kick on places with hihat 01:05:819 - . Maybe replace soft-hn with normal-hn and use custom soft-hn. As i know its easy to put hs on every beat with program whichbakari got.
00:28:319 - start first spinner on that time? on boths diffs

Bakari's Light

time to learn languages. will mode your maps on english
01:01:069 (5,6) - guess it would placed somewhere 100/47 it may suits better for map.
01:11:069 (4,5) - 2 x 1\2 more exepted to see here for my point of view
01:20:069 - that beat should be supported with nc, you know. maybe add 01:16:069 - adn remove 01:14:069 - . I dont think that support one lyric's string by this way is good thing. and in overall after all nc went wrong 01:24:069 - . i belive its mistake and didnt made on purpose
01:50:069 (4) - i am not surre that looks good. Maybe rotate 5? only suggestion
02:28:069 (1) - same rotate to 5, for my point of view it may give for a little better flow
02:58:069 (4) - again it could better flow. or nvm
03:11:069 (3,4) - was same situation b4. 2 x 1\2 sliders or reverse + cricel would suit better for my ppoint of view
03:25:069 (2) - mayeb rotate 10? for me it looks much better
03:27:319 (3,4,1) - i think it may a bit hard rhythm to read ._. maybe rever like you did on 02:07:319 (5) - and 01:35:319 (2) - or maybe just one slider like on 03:59:319 (4) -
i dont like some flows on this map but still they wroks and readable. just pointed things that can be fixed without any problems

Dark

00:46:069 (4) - additing curve to this slider would make it more interesting for my poit of view
00:55:069 (4) - flow works better for my point of view
01:07:319 (7,1) - 01:23:819 (9,1) - i dont like that jumps. cant expain why just transition works very strange for me caus eof the lyricks. you decrease for a little(around 1.5) or make equal ds or ignore
01:09:319 (4,6) - i think its better make them more spaced like you did on 01:06:069 (4,5) -
01:19:069 (7,8) - better to emphasize that place somehow. jumps or special flow need here
01:33:069 (3,4) - i dont like that sliders... they are... mmm will talk about it later
02:31:569 (5,6,1) - bad useage of jump. You leave clap + kick 02:31:319 (4,5) - without support and than focus on kick 02:31:819 (6) - . better place jump on 02:31:569 - or make equal ds around that as another variant
04:15:319 (4,5,6) - you need more such jumps in the map. its kind uniq pattern for one sound which is not good
sry but i didnt understand that diff. 01:22:819 (7,8) - 01:29:819 (4,5) - 02:20:569 (1,2) - 02:22:069 (1,2) - you are following vocal but at the same you can just lose focus and star mapping for beat 01:24:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:31:069 (3,4,5,6) - . Just when i was playing got feeling that just press objects with music at bakcgroud. Said abotu jumps on 1:07 same thing - you are supporing vocal around that place but place jumps on big white tick which jenerally support music and vocal starts on red later. maybe i am wrong(hope so) and everything is ok but still cant understand logic of placed objects.
Also remove that one 1/4 sliders. it loos useless if alone. Add some if you want keep it.

Good luck

Mortem

690 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mortem 2015-04-20T16:19:54+00:00

Xellie wrote:

Returning a mod 4 mod

[Dark]
00:52:069 (1,2) - This 1 kinda flows away from the 2 so you might want to change it's shape or angle some - No, leaving like it is.
01:19:069 (7,8) - Blanket maybe? - Fixed.
01:20:569 (2,4) - This blanket could be a bit better near the tail - Moved it little bit.
01:22:819 (7,8) - blanket? - Nah.
01:26:069 (6) - The anchor isn't on the tail so it's not perfectly symetrical - Moved squares little bit.
01:28:069 (1,2) - Fix blanket - Fixed.
01:29:819 (4,5) - Blanket? - Meh.
02:07:319 (2) - Why make this one a repeat slider when the others are streams, this one leads into the kiai time. Making it a slider also ruins consistency - It's still better than stream. Leaving like it is.
02:31:819 (6,1) - This blanket could be a tiny bit better - Fixed.
02:39:319 (4) - Same thing about consitency - Same thing.
02:56:069 (1,2) - blanket could be a lil better - I think it's okay.
02:59:069 (8,9) - I'd make these flow opposite directions like you did every other time you had sliders like these for consitency - Leaving like it is.
03:01:069 (3,5) - Blanket could be better - Leaving like it is.
03:09:069 (3,4,5) - blanket?? - Fixed.
03:08:819 (2,5) - Fix blanket - Leaving like it is.
03:10:819 (6,7) - ^ - Leaving like it is.
03:59:319 (2) - Same thing about consitency - Leaving like it is.
04:00:819 (2,3) - Fix blanket - Fixed.
04:12:069 (1,2) - Blanket could be better - Fixed.
04:27:069 (3,4) - Fix blanketu - Fixeduuuu.
04:31:319 (5) - Consistency~ - Please...
I'd say maybe make a filler diff since it goes to all like sliders and 1/2 to having streams

Good Luck getting it ranked~ - Thanks.

- I'll take a look on fergas's mod later.

Mortem

690 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Mortem 2015-04-23T14:02:32+00:00

fergas wrote:
здорово пупсики \o3o/

sb tips for lulz
02:10:694 - as suggest you can do more smuffer color transition for "city lights". exp 02:10:569 - 02:10:944 - pink-blue smuf transion but still leave clear color change on 02:11:069 - . Green color dont suit for bg ;/ .
In overall its possiable to add better demension for lyrcs and resise them after with _S - just it would looks better that this.
Also idea to use changes flashes instead oа stiatic on "bgkiai".
nad you got stacks bgs as i see 128194 - 174069somewher here as i understand and 240069 - 271069 you got double bg at the same time. unnecesary but would be great to fix. - going to fix it later.
and one last thign abotu sb: on boths kiais new bg start on diffrent spots 02:08:194 - and 04:00:069 - . If it was made not purppose maybe fix. - fixed.
general
dat lines!
i dont agree to use soft-hitnormal as kick sound at all lenght. Exp you are force own kick on places with hihat 01:05:819 - . Maybe replace soft-hn with normal-hn and use custom soft-hn. As i know its easy to put hs on every beat with program whichbakari got. - I'll fix it later.
00:28:319 - start first spinner on that time? on boths diffs - 'kay.
Dark
00:46:069 (4) - additing curve to this slider would make it more interesting for my poit of view - Heh, yea. Fixed.
00:55:069 (4) - flow works better for my point of view - Fixed.
01:07:319 (7,1) - 01:23:819 (9,1) - i dont like that jumps. cant expain why just transition works very strange for me caus eof the lyricks. you decrease for a little(around 1.5) or make equal ds or ignore - Ignoring, 'cause these kind of jumps are everywhere in the map. I don't want to make constant DS on Hard.
01:09:319 (4,6) - i think its better make them more spaced like you did on 01:06:069 (4,5) - - Fixed.
01:19:069 (7,8) - better to emphasize that place somehow. jumps or special flow need here - I'll leave it like it is.
01:33:069 (3,4) - i dont like that sliders... they are... mmm will talk about it later
02:31:569 (5,6,1) - bad useage of jump. You leave clap + kick 02:31:319 (4,5) - without support and than focus on kick 02:31:819 (6) - . better place jump on 02:31:569 - or make equal ds around that as another variant - I'll leave it like it is.
04:15:319 (4,5,6) - you need more such jumps in the map. its kind uniq pattern for one sound which is not good - I used the same method before in 02:31:569 (5,6,1) -
sry but i didnt understand that diff. 01:22:819 (7,8) - 01:29:819 (4,5) - 02:20:569 (1,2) - 02:22:069 (1,2) - you are following vocal but at the same you can just lose focus and star mapping for beat 01:24:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:31:069 (3,4,5,6) - . Just when i was playing got feeling that just press objects with music at bakcgroud. Said abotu jumps on 1:07 same thing - you are supporing vocal around that place but place jumps on big white tick which jenerally support music and vocal starts on red later. maybe i am wrong(hope so) and everything is ok but still cant understand logic of placed objects.
Also remove that one 1/4 sliders. it loos useless if alone. Add some if you want keep it.
Good luck - Thanks for your time & mod.

riffy

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riffy 2015-04-25T10:00:00+00:00

Most of the wrongly snapped stuff were actually fine, I fixed a few untidy patterns and the balnkets. If you want more detailed reply, just ask me via in-game! Thank you @Xellie

fergas wrote:
привет о3о/
Bakari's Light
time to learn languages. will mode your maps on english sure
01:01:069 (5,6) - guess it would placed somewhere 100/47 it may suits better for map. moved around in a different way
01:11:069 (4,5) - 2 x 1\2 more exepted to see here for my point of view yush
01:20:069 - that beat should be supported with nc, you know. maybe add 01:16:069 - adn remove 01:14:069 - . I dont think that support one lyric's string by this way is good thing. and in overall after all nc went wrong 01:24:069 - . i belive its mistake and didnt made on purpose alright
01:50:069 (4) - i am not surre that looks good. Maybe rotate 5? only suggestion nah, it's cool, imo. typical flow I use
02:28:069 (1) - same rotate to 5, for my point of view it may give for a little better flow yeah
02:58:069 (4) - again it could better flow. or nvm fixed
03:11:069 (3,4) - was same situation b4. 2 x 1\2 sliders or reverse + cricel would suit better for my ppoint of view yes
03:25:069 (2) - mayeb rotate 10? for me it looks much better yeah
03:27:319 (3,4,1) - i think it may a bit hard rhythm to read ._. maybe rever like you did on 02:07:319 (5) - and 01:35:319 (2) - or maybe just one slider like on 03:59:319 (4) - I think it's cool + it represents the music in a nice way and gives some variety
i dont like some flows on this map but still they wroks and readable. just pointed things that can be fixed without any problems
Good luck

Thank you!

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Wafu

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Wafu 2015-04-25T12:13:48+00:00

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soft-hitnormal má spoždění větší než 5ms. Opravil jsem to asi tak co nejvíc to šlo, tak tady máš kdyžtak link
Když už jsme u těch hitsoundů, doporučuju použít soft-hitclap jako slidertick, protože tady bylo pár míst, kde se ten clap hodil na místo, kde zrovna byl slidertick. Hlavně by se to hodilo na Bakariho obtížnost. Zkus to zvážit, jeho obtížnost nemá tak hodně hitsoundů a docela by to zaplnilo ty prázné místa.
Je to na tobě, ale myslím, že na obou obtížnostech se hodí tu pauzu ukončit na 02:54:069 - protože je tam slyšet basa, takže je to trochu lepší, když ten screen zase ztmavne spíš na nějakém zvuku, než někde na 02:55:194 - kde není nic tak výrazného.
Offset je trochu mimo. Dá se toho všimnout např. na 04:02:069 - můžeš to zkusit na 25% speed. Rozhodně jde slyšet, že then kick drum zazní dřív, než metronom. 59 offset podle mě sedí o dost líp.
V kiai jde dost dobře slyšet, že je hudba hlasitější, hodně doporučuju zvednout volume o takových 10-15%, zní to rozhodně líp a logicky to sedí víc do songu.

Dark

01:27:319 (8) - Tady dej clap, protože je i v songu a vymaž ho z 01:27:819 (10) - asi si to nějak prohodil, ale tady clap není.
01:33:069 (3,4) - Rytmus je mimo song, takže se to hraje trochu hůř. Obvzlášť by se to hrálo i špatně na taiku, ale to už je vedlejší, 2 noty si do songu přidal a jednu ignoroval. Doporučil bych jednoduše tenhle rytmus:
SPOILER
02:04:069 (6) - Doteď to bylo poprvé co si neměl konzistentní comba. Mazat to další NC na té krátké pauze není potřeba, na 03:56:069 - si to vyřešil pěkně.
02:20:569 (1,2) - Taky se to nehraje zrovna nejlíp, když 02:20:694 - je v songu prázdné. Nicméně, je tady alespoň zvuk na 02:20:944 - , který by is mohl namappovat podobným patternem. Zkusit tohle by bylo rytmicky o něco korektnější a docela se to nabízí.
SPOILER
03:26:069 (1) - Nejsem si úplně jistý, jestli by tady vážně měl být spinner. Za prvé tady není žádný zvuk, který by se táhl tak dlouho, že by se hodil na spinner a pak na 01:34:069 - si to namappoval docela hezky i bez spinneru a to je to úplně stejná část. Navíc ten přechod ze streamu do klidné části se tady hodil víc.
01:11:819 - Doporučuju smazat clap, není v songu.
02:15:819 (5) - To samé co předchozí.
02:31:819 (6) - Stejný případ
03:03:819 - Na konci toho slideru by ze stejného důvodu neměl být clap.
03:19:819 - Stejný případ
04:07:819 (5) - Stejný případ
04:23:819 (6) - Stejný případ
Asi bych snížil všechno nastavení kromě velikosti circlů o 0,5 ať je to líp vyvážené s Bakariho obtížností. Teď je tam rozdíl 3 mezi všema nastaveníma a myslím, že je to docela skok. Snížení o 1 se nehodí z toho důvodu že AR 6 by tady bylo trochu dívné, ale když všechno snížíš o polovinu grom CS, mělo by to být ještě okay a trochu víc by se to mělo vybalancovat. S AR 6.5 se mi taky zdá, že je ta mapa taková plynulejší, ale to už je jen můj pohled na věc.

Bakari's Light

00:34:069 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whole this part's combos are a bit out of place. That's caused by gap on 00:32:069 - if you did map this part, you would normally put NC after each 2 downbeats as you do whole map, but because it is not mapped, it is moved by one combo. Respectively, on 00:36:069 - there is something like new sound, which is quite major in this song, while 00:38:069 - seems to be a continuing part of it. It should take just a minute to fix this, but you should remove all NCs and put your first NC on 00:36:069 (4) - and then put it in same pattern, after each 2 downbeats as you just did before. You can also check that Pjecoo's NCs look slightly better with music, but I think you already know what do I talk about.
01:14:069 - You did the same as above here. You shortened one combo by one downbeat and that caused you to place them on wrong downbeats. For example 01:20:069 (5) - is really more significant place for a NC than 01:18:069 - and so on. On 01:34:069 (1,2) - you again used different length of combo, thus after this it seems to fit music again pretty well.
Already stated in general, but not in english. Anyway, I recommend to use soft-hitclap for some of sliderticks, because your diff had quite many places where was a clap, but in map, there was a slidertick, so why not using this opportunity. It sometimes sounds a bit empty, so using tick hitsounds would make it feel a bit better with music.

Conclusion: Rankable

I don't think I have to mention anything else. Map is overally cool, tho I didn't like the NC problem on Bakari's diff, but that might happen. I think this could move forward very soon. Have my star guys and good luck~!

Mortem

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Mortem 2015-04-25T14:58:21+00:00

Wafu wrote:

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soft-hitnormal má spoždění větší než 5ms. Opravil jsem to asi tak co nejvíc to šlo, tak tady máš kdyžtak link - Ok, díky.
Když už jsme u těch hitsoundů, doporučuju použít soft-hitclap jako slidertick, protože tady bylo pár míst, kde se ten clap hodil na místo, kde zrovna byl slidertick. Hlavně by se to hodilo na Bakariho obtížnost. Zkus to zvážit, jeho obtížnost nemá tak hodně hitsoundů a docela by to zaplnilo ty prázné místa. - Zní to už poněkud živěji. Ok, opraveno.
Je to na tobě, ale myslím, že na obou obtížnostech se hodí tu pauzu ukončit na 02:54:069 - protože je tam slyšet basa, takže je to trochu lepší, když ten screen zase ztmavne spíš na nějakém zvuku, než někde na 02:55:194 - kde není nic tak výrazného. - Opraveno.
Offset je trochu mimo. Dá se toho všimnout např. na 04:02:069 - můžeš to zkusit na 25% speed. Rozhodně jde slyšet, že then kick drum zazní dřív, než metronom. 59 offset podle mě sedí o dost líp. - Já si popravdě nebyl moc jistý s tím offsetem. Všichni říkali, že je to v pohodě...T_T - opraveno.
V kiai jde dost dobře slyšet, že je hudba hlasitější, hodně doporučuju zvednout volume o takových 10-15%, zní to rozhodně líp a logicky to sedí víc do songu. - Ok, opraveno.

Dark

01:27:319 (8) - Tady dej clap, protože je i v songu a vymaž ho z 01:27:819 (10) - asi si to nějak prohodil, ale tady clap není. - Je to možné. Opraveno.
01:33:069 (3,4) - Rytmus je mimo song, takže se to hraje trochu hůř. Obvzlášť by se to hrálo i špatně na taiku, ale to už je vedlejší, 2 noty si do songu přidal a jednu ignoroval. Doporučil bych jednoduše tenhle rytmus: - Opraveno.
SPOILER
02:04:069 (6) - Doteď to bylo poprvé co si neměl konzistentní comba. Mazat to další NC na té krátké pauze není potřeba, na 03:56:069 - si to vyřešil pěkně. - Aha. Opraveno.
02:20:569 (1,2) - Taky se to nehraje zrovna nejlíp, když 02:20:694 - je v songu prázdné. Nicméně, je tady alespoň zvuk na 02:20:944 - , který by is mohl namappovat podobným patternem. Zkusit tohle by bylo rytmicky o něco korektnější a docela se to nabízí. - Opraveno.
SPOILER
03:26:069 (1) - Nejsem si úplně jistý, jestli by tady vážně měl být spinner. Za prvé tady není žádný zvuk, který by se táhl tak dlouho, že by se hodil na spinner a pak na 01:34:069 - si to namappoval docela hezky i bez spinneru a to je to úplně stejná část. Navíc ten přechod ze streamu do klidné části se tady hodil víc. - Spinner jsem odstranil a něco jsem tam tedy namapoval.
01:11:819 - Doporučuju smazat clap, není v songu.
02:15:819 (5) - To samé co předchozí.
02:31:819 (6) - Stejný případ
03:03:819 - Na konci toho slideru by ze stejného důvodu neměl být clap.
03:19:819 - Stejný případ
04:07:819 (5) - Stejný případ
04:23:819 (6) - Stejný případ - Vše opraveno.
Asi bych snížil všechno nastavení kromě velikosti circlů o 0,5 ať je to líp vyvážené s Bakariho obtížností. Teď je tam rozdíl 3 mezi všema nastaveníma a myslím, že je to docela skok. Snížení o 1 se nehodí z toho důvodu že AR 6 by tady bylo trochu dívné, ale když všechno snížíš o polovinu grom CS, mělo by to být ještě okay a trochu víc by se to mělo vybalancovat. S AR 6.5 se mi taky zdá, že je ta mapa taková plynulejší, ale to už je jen můj pohled na věc. - Dobře. Dík moc za mód.

riffy

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riffy 2015-04-25T17:05:51+00:00

This diff sucks 20% less now. Thank you!

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208,252,256069,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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112,220,264569,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Sieg

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Sieg 2015-05-15T15:57:02+00:00

SWEET

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Sieg 2015-06-01T12:23:03+00:00

general:
hitsounds are unaudible, you must raise volume level significantly

dark:
01:19:059 (7,8) - stress snares here, this will be more logical http://puu.sh/i8jE6/47a80eb6ba.jpg
01:31:809 (9,1) - should be 01:31:559 (8,9) - stacked instead to follow your jump to downbeat patterns?
02:22:559 (2,3) - ctrl+g to follow lyric\music better
02:26:059 (1,2) - blanket
02:26:059 (1,3,1) - would be great if you make them by copy-pasting
02:31:559 (5,6) - jump to weak beat from strong 02:31:559 (5) which makes little sense
02:34:059 (1) - move this a bit from 02:33:559 (4) to be consistent with your downbeat jumps? http://puu.sh/i8jUZ/06f8ef653b.jpg

light:
01:58:059 (4) - ну я вообще не одобряю такие штуки c слайдертиками, особенно если они использованны всего ппару раз за 4х минутную карту

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riffy 2015-06-01T15:46:46+00:00

We've discussed things and changed stuff. It's cool.

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Mortem

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Mortem 2015-06-01T15:53:53+00:00

@Sieg
Fixed everything you mentioned. Thanks! c:

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Sieg 2015-06-04T07:11:24+00:00

~~find me ingame~~
to next bn: recheck hitsounds volume level :3

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meii18 2015-06-06T12:48:33+00:00

Hi Pjecoo :3

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asdf - important

General

00:00:059 - ; 02:40:059 - ; 04:32:059 - On these points,for safe,you can increase the volume from 40% to 50% on all diffs don't worry it will fit the calm part

-Bakari-

01:34:059(4)- On reverse I hear drums from music background but their feel empty because on reverse you forgot to add clap also making it inconsistent with other clap hitsounds.Add the clap here for consistency with other clap hitsounds and to emphasize the drums audible on reverse
01:58:059(4)- Instead using this slider snapped on 01:59:059 - which ignore the drums from 01:58:559 - where a clap is required,you can snap it to 1/1 I mean to 01:58:559 - and then to emphasize the drums,add the clap on tail and on 01:59:059 - you can add a note to reflect the music background much better
02:04:059(1)- As I said on 01:58:059(4)- you can move the slider's tail to 02:04:559 - to add the clap on tail where are the drums and then you can add a note for reflecting the music background
02:16:059(1)- You ignore the drums from 02:16:559 - so you can snap it to 1/1 I mean to 02:16:559 - and then a note for the reflect of the music background as you did at 02:08:059(1)-
02:28:059(1)- I don't know why you added drum sampleset because it doesn't reflect the music background.Much better would be if you'll remove the drum sampleset from whole slider because the music will be reflected much better without drum sampleset
02:29:559(2)- The blanket with this note and with 02:30:559(4)- feels a bit unpolished.This blanket could be polished much better if the note I mean 2 will be placed with just 1 pixel to left on 315|172
03:12:059(1)- Seems you ignore the drums again here so I suggest again == to move the slider's tail to 03:12:559 - where are the drums then you can add a note after to reflect the music background
03:34:059(3,4)- This blanket feels a bit unpolished.To polish it much better,the note can be moved with a pixel to left on 331|76

Dark

01:03:309(5,6,7,8,9,10)- Instead using a stream which it can destroy the gap I think you can use 2 1/2 sliders with a repeat like >>here<< also they will reflect the music background same as the stream
01:04:809 - A note could be added here for reflecting the music background and also to improve the playability during gameplay
01:08:559(2,3)- The flow between these sliders seems to be poor and weird flow.The tail of 2 seems it goes to down and the flow could be broken since the next slider's head is up and not down.Place the last anchor of 2 to 149|192 and then move the slider to 48|239 to don't destroy the pattern with 01:08:059(1)- and then move 3 to 215|178 for a better and polished flow and also you should move some objects to don't have DS errors
01:12:809 - Here too a note would be better to be placed here to reflect the music background and to improve the playability
01:15:309(7)- The symmetry between this note and 01:14:809(5)- doesn't so good and better polished.If you want to polish much better this symmetry,my suggestion is to move 7 with 2 pixels to up on 357|57 for a better symmetry
01:17:059(3,4)- Here the flow seems unpolished and weird.The tail of 3 goes to down while 4's tail is placed up which broke the flow.My suggestion is to move the last anchor of 3 to 188|88 and then move the slider to 101|130 to keep the pattern with previous slider
01:20:559(1,2)- Too flow issue.1'tail goes to up but 2 is placed down instead up which could broke the flow.To polish the flow much better,I suggest to move 2 to 217|41 to be placed up like previous slider's tail
01:23:309(8)- Seems the slider's tail touch 01:22:059(6)- sliderbody and seems this is not an intentional overlap as I can see :/ Move 8 to 373|82 to avoid that overlap with 6
01:35:309(7,8,9,10,11,12)- As I said on 01:03:309(5,6,7,8,9,10)-,you can use 2 1/2 sliders with a reverse instead using streams which can destroy the spread.Also they will reflect the music like the streams
03:27:309(7,8,9,10,11,12)- Again the stream can be replaced with 2 1/2 sliders with a repeat just for safe to not destroy the spread.These sliders will reflect the song like that stream
04:29:559(1)- I think there shouldn't be NC since there's same lyric.The NC will fit on 04:30:309(2)- so I suggest to swap NC between 1 and 2

That's all from now

no kds I have it already from this map

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Sieg

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Sieg 2015-06-06T13:20:02+00:00

@ByBy_ChAn there is no soft-hitnormal.wav, please
always delete and redownload beatmap before mod

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meii18 2015-06-06T13:58:53+00:00

Sieg wrote:
@ByBy_ChAn there is no soft-hitnormal.wav, please
always delete and redownload beatmap before mod

yeah thanks I forgot ;_;

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riffy 2015-06-06T14:41:10+00:00

I'm not changing the 2/1 sliders. They're following vocals and I believe it is perfectly fine to let them do it. Hitsounds are up to Pjecoo.

Thank you for checking!

Edit: No additional changes, the blankets are fine to me. :c

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meii18 2015-06-06T16:05:30+00:00

p/4225240 >> finished the mod sorry for taking so long ;_;

Mortem

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Mortem 2015-06-06T17:23:12+00:00

@ByBy_ChAn Fixed only your important suggestion & NC at the end. Thanks.

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meii18 2015-06-06T19:59:08+00:00

It's time to take away this mapset from the pending section (:

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Sieg 2015-06-07T16:46:13+00:00

grats (:

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Gordon123 2015-06-08T07:27:31+00:00

wow gratz~~

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Mortem 2015-06-13T19:35:12+00:00

Sieg wrote:
grats (:

Gordon123 wrote:
wow gratz~~

Thanks~ ♥

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