1. Hard (2.3 stars, 207 notes)
2. Normal (1.51 stars, 118 notes)
3. Reborn (3.32 stars, 270 notes)

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

re-boom！

sorry for late.
[General]
我觉得这曲子timing可能有点麻烦……希望是错觉 撒……

[Reborn]
建议缩短每个combo color的长度
比如在00:02:371 (6)NC 以长白-2白-长白-2白的节奏NC 唔，煮难度不用这样短吧
00:05:722 - 不要漏音 √
00:07:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 本段在00:09:393 (7) 和00:10:669 (13) NC √
其它需要NC的地方自行参考
00:15:776 (5) - 追加一次折返 不太喜欢啊……我再想想
00:20:882 (5) - ↑
00:37:797 (4) - 注意前后视觉间距 和00:38:116 (5)最短距离太近了 √
00:42:903 (3) - 和00:42:424 (2)太近 √
01:18:329 (3) - 前后间距 我怎么总是在挑间距 √
nice map

[Normal]
00:15:935 - 不要漏音 √
00:20:882 (4) - 追加一次折返（或追加一个单点 前提：难度名改为hard） 还是固定miss最后一个弱音吧
00:23:754 (4,5,1) - 不是直线有点难受 要么摆直 要么角度更大点 角度改大了
00:25:988 (4) - 同00:20:882 (4)
00:51:520 (6) - ↑
00:56:627 (4) - ↑
01:01:733 (5) - ↑
01:06:839 (6) - ↑

如妹桑所说 建议略微增加难度变为hard 这个不好增加了啊……整张remap的节奏。 改成normal+行不行qwq

[Easy]
在N改为H的前提下本难度需要略微增加难度变为N
00:16:414 (1) - 还是包好吧 包好了
01:02:052 (6,1) - 不要碰到为好 √

其实也就0.02的差距 DS稍微加大一点点或者节奏稍微密几个点就够了应该
恩已经搞定。蟹蟹谢谢owo

zxhzxhz wrote:

[ReBorn]
00:05:722 - 这里塞一个。。 √
00:06:201 (1) - NC
00:23:276 (4) - 00:23:914 (6) - 00:24:552 (2) - 好像间距不一样O.O O.O调整了下。其实是刻意想把重音间距弄大点的但是没弄好……
00:40:669 (5) - NC
00:46:893 (7) - del(虽然我知道那里有个轻轻的弦音otz) 是轻轻的鼓音orz
01:27:744 (7) - del
[Normal]
なし
[Easy]
00:01:733 (3) - 弄成直的 和下面那个对称的orz
00:16:414 (1) - blanket 恩包好惹
00:57:265 (1) - 形状如果能修正下就太好惹 修了一下虽然不知道是不是你想的那种orz
谢摸图owo

imoutosan wrote:

From irc

[General]

怎么搞了个234k的mp3 要用192k啊
最高难度的宽屏没开
orz我回头去压一下mp3……这个先用着。没用的都关掉了

[Easy]

建议改名normal orz 改
00:27:105 (2) - 缩短到00:27:584 - √
00:29:180 (4) - 去掉4头上的clap，给5加上 √
01:10:031 (4,5) - ^ √

[Normal]

建议改名hard
哭哭。normal+行不行

00:13:861 (1,2,3) - 不知道新手能不能读懂 改掉了
00:28:542 (5) - 拉开点 比如最后一个点移到x376 y268 然后调整一下后面的note √
00:44:499 (1) - 前面没有类似的节奏 这里红线空下了显得很突兀 √
00:58:542 (3,4) - 和这里用一样的节奏？00:53:435 (3,4) - √
01:33:010 (9) - nc √

[Reborn]

这个就不用改了 噗……

00:14:499 (3) - 这个很拧着啊 我觉得让它往右边走更好 √

01:08:595 (4) - x380 y268 √
01:24:551 (6) - unsnapped√
多谢辣Ouo/~

liangv587 wrote:

[General]
wildscreen和letterbox都去掉 √
clap试试这个http://puu.sh/h7kVb/46893da4a6.wav 不错诶owo，这个声音有点大，弄了个折中的

[Reborn]
ar略快，7.5怎样 厚
00:14:499 (3) - 最简单的解决办法ctrl+g √
00:14:978 (4) - 改用normal有奇效，哨音 额。。。不喜欢哨音啊= =
00:11:307 (1) - s音效太软了，头部sample N，addition S。同理00:21:520 (1) -
00:16:414 (1) - 头部sample N，addition S。同理00:26:627 (1) - 换了个鼓点，应该好些了
00:20:084 (4) - normal有奇效。同理00:25:191 (4) -
00:35:403 (3) - 00:45:616 (4) -
01:06:042 (5) - 这类都用哨音比较好
01:26:467 (4) - 应该用normal-finish √

[Normal]
00:14:339 (2,3) - 不应该接触到http://puu.sh/h8yg6.jpg √
01:18:169 (2,3) - 同理http://puu.sh/h8yju.jpg √
01:25:829 (2,3,4) - 有点难打，排直点 √

[Easy]
01:21:520 (6) - 新人看不懂的，把尾巴甩上去，又不会出界 √

最后offset-14，音效很明显的跟音乐分层了
唔，-14感觉太早了啊= = -6好像差不多。我再问问
感谢摸图owo

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[General]

1. mp3换成192，记得重新测offset 换好了~
2. 01:33:642 - kiai可以这里结束唉 √

[Normal]

1. 00:04:280 (2,3) - 这个直线逆flow有点难了，建议换一张摆法√
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:301 (1,2) - 这个也是。√
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:16:408 (1,1) - 尽量避免这类碰到的东西 √
4. 00:24:067 (1,2) - spacing error √
5. 00:31:727 (1,2) - 避免碰到 √
6. 00:40:025 (2,3) - 这也是 有点太直了，把折返换个角度好一点。 唔我还挺喜欢这里的……能留就留吧
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:20:876 (2,3) - ^ 不过这种不改也没什么关系，只是我个人不喜欢这样 ;w;

[Normal+]

1. 00:16:089 (5) - 前面同样地方的节奏用了两个短滑条，这里不如也变成滑条 前面有重鼓点。这里就不加了
2. 00:37:312 (2,3) - 跟normal差不多的意思，这个flow不好玩 是不好玩……改了
   这diff挺好，没啥问题

[Reborn]

1. 00:04:918 (6,7) - 强迫症看到这种只碰一点的东西想要去挠墙，要么不碰要么就干脆碰多一点
2. 00:12:578 (3,4,5) - ^ 事实上这个4放的位置不太好，可以放在两个滑条中间啊 本意是想让重音离远一点的……看来不行啊噗……改改改
3. 00:15:770 (5,6,1) - 隔开一点， hmm...后面类似的地方有点多，懒得一条条写了，你看着改改吧...T^T T^T
4. 01:08:589 (4) - 这个建议叠到后面滑条的头上，01:08:270 (3,4) - 这两个听起来就不是应该在一起的东西。 √

谢过~owo

Keada wrote:

Hi :> M4M here

• 
  

  General

1. first of all change the offset on all inherited points +66 and timing point offset is 516 changed
   
2. These combo colours didnt fit tbh try these: nice colours :3
   

   Combo1 : 115,115,115
   Combo2 : 89,45,0
   Combo3 : 255,206,183
   Combo4 : 145,0,0

3. and move the preview point to here 00:10:728 - set it on 00:10:570 - seems like there is a slight delay when osu play the song from preview point

• 
  

  Reborn

1. 00:00:516 (1) - try to give this a better curve like this: http://puu.sh/h9ZnT/9557277969.jpg done√
2. 00:13:123 (4) - 00:12:644 (3,4,5) - have the same DS between these, looks better too imo http://puu.sh/h9Zym/65ad9a2005.jpg √
3. 00:13:282 (5,6,1) - same here, try like this: http://puu.sh/h9ZAV/9cc2d7a0fc.jpg √
4. 00:13:921 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 00:15:836 (5,6,1) - try to have them a little bit further away from eachother so they dont overlap √
6. 00:17:750 (3,4,5) - same as above √
7. 00:18:389 (5,6,1) - ^ √
8. 00:22:857 (3,4,5) - ^ √
9. 00:23:495 (5,6,1) - ^ √
10. 00:36:740 (5) - place this at x:244 y:104 00:36:261 (4,5,1) - i put them on a straight line, so no change here
11. 00:55:250 (2,3,4) - you could make this triangle look better imo √
12. 01:00:676 (4) - try not to overlap (not important) √

The other diffs looks good to me :>
chill song thank u! X>

Flower wrote:

Hi :3
Hiii~ owo
[Overall]
check the AiMod
Kiai isn't snapped! 01:12:578 -
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 01:33:004 -
……之前换了mp3忘记改绿线了orz我该打


[Reborn]
00:22:857 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方感觉和之前环境不同，打起来有些怪怪的，所以建议圈不接触前一个滑条 √
00:45:197 (3) - 顺时针旋转20°以保持较好的pattern(?) √
00:57:165 (9,1) - 可以包的更好看一些 √
01:00:676 (4) - try this to be more haokan? 噗……好

SPOILER

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3002982

[Normal+]
00:15:038 (3,4) - 保持一条直线？√
00:37:378 (2) - don't overlap 3 to make better readability? √
01:00:516 (2,3,4) - 建议用复制和缩放来做得更整齐一些 O.O额，没太明白，不过微调了下

[Normal]
00:31:793 (1,2) - 建议不要overlap √

摸技太水了摸不出;w; 卖叒夫妻;w;

call me back when it has 12 sp. good map, good luck :3 thanks! 谢花花(*/ω＼*)

Normal
00:23:495 (2,1) unstack them please. It blocks visibility for new players

Please fix overlapping notes. Move them a little further. At least player should be able to see numbers on it. Also use 1/2 snap when mapping them if possible

List of Overlapping notes to help you navigate around

00:13:921 (1,2)
00:19:027 (1,2)
00:24:133 (1,2)
00:26:687 (1,2)
00:34:346 (1,2)
00:44:559 (1,2)
00:47:112 (1,2)
00:49:027 (1,2)
00:54:772 (1,2)
00:59:878 (1,2)
01:04:984 (1,2)
01:07:538 (1,2,3)
01:15:197 (1,2)
01:17:750 (1,2,3,4)
01:27:963 (1,2,3,4)

Normal+
00:13:602 (4,5) Remove them. Looks like it doesn't match with any rhythm
00:54:612 (5) ^
01:05:942 extend (3) to here

Reborn
00:49:665 (4,5,6) reduce jumping distance. It seems too much imo. Use 1.2x snap distance
01:31:155 (4,5,6) ^
01:32:431 (4,5) ^
01:31:953 (2) Remove it. It doesn't match with any rhythm
01:32:112 (3) ^ then replace it with note. Follow the drum
01:33:070 (1) use normal slider. No need to reflect
01:33:229 (2) move it upper right. How about x=212, y=40 ?

makemek wrote:

From MakeMEK's Modding Queue

Normal
00:23:495 (2,1) unstack them please. It blocks visibility for new players fixed

Please fix overlapping notes. Move them a little further. At least player should be able to see numbers on it. Also use 1/2 snap when mapping them if possible thanks, i'm fine with these

List of Overlapping notes to help you navigate around

00:13:921 (1,2)
00:19:027 (1,2)
00:24:133 (1,2)
00:26:687 (1,2)
00:34:346 (1,2)
00:44:559 (1,2)
00:47:112 (1,2)
00:49:027 (1,2)
00:54:772 (1,2)
00:59:878 (1,2)
01:04:984 (1,2)
01:07:538 (1,2,3)
01:15:197 (1,2)
01:17:750 (1,2,3,4)
01:27:963 (1,2,3,4)

Normal+
00:13:602 (4,5) Remove them. Looks like it doesn't match with any rhythm there are sounds here. u can hear some light drums
00:54:612 (5) ^ ^
01:05:942 extend (3) to here

hmm...no

Reborn
00:49:665 (4,5,6) reduce jumping distance. It seems too much imo. Use 1.2x snap distance kept 1.6x distance snap opened from 00:31:793 - till these 1.5x distanced notes, so i think they are good
01:31:155 (4,5,6) ^ ^
01:32:431 (4,5) ^ ^
01:31:953 (2) Remove it. It doesn't match with any rhythm it matches the main theme :3
01:32:112 (3) ^ then replace it with note. Follow the drum no change
01:33:070 (1) use normal slider. No need to reflect fixed
01:33:229 (2) move it upper right. How about x=212, y=40 ? fine with where it is now

thank u for modding!

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Insane]
00:05:463 (7,8) - DS感觉坑√

SPOILER

00:06:261 (1) - 连打这种梗太反人类了啊 bpm很低，大丈夫w
00:13:123 (4) - DS和后方00:13:761 (6) - 一致，请用1.3 √
00:34:825 (2) - 个人觉得Ctrl-G好点 好像哪个都行= = 先不改了吧
[Normal+]
00:20:942 (4,1) - =-= =-=？
00:22:857 (3) - 顺时针旋转6度左右 爷爷……太精细
00:56:687 (4,1) - 还能包好点点 唔，微调了下
00:58:602 (3,4,5) - 太挤了一点。前后都调一下空一点出来 √
[Normal]
00:37:378 (2) - 音效貌似没对，为什么sampleset要用drum？
00:47:591 (2) - ^ 难道你是故意的？ 嘛……是故意的，不过确实有点怪= =
00:24:612 (2) - 超出屏幕 √
01:07:538 (1) - ^ √
多谢摸图owo

Moecho wrote:

sorry for late m4m ;;

[Normal]
00:40:091 (2,3) - 雖然物件的實際距離一樣 但是視覺上的距離會感覺進很多 容易讀錯 早按 好吧……那还是改掉
00:56:687 (3) - 其實可以用這個一樣的 00:51:580 (4) - 因為 00:54:772 (1,2) - 這裡跟的不是鼓而是這個吹的樂器 唔。这个还是算了，不然好多地方都要改= =
01:12:006 (4,1) - 視覺上我覺得還是不建議這樣遮擋放誒... 这个还算顺吧……我再问问
01:20:942 (2,3) - 同之前說過的 改了

[Normal+]
00:24:134 (1,2,3) - 我覺得這類clap的音效音量有點違和，主要是中間這個滑條 00:24:612 (2) - 因為都是跟那個吹的樂器 但是忽然中間這個clap音效這麼大聲 建議把音效在這種地方調低一下 可能还是换回原来那个音效好点。。。
00:37:378 (2,3,4) - 雖然歌里完全有這些聲音的支持 但是在normal里我覺得打起來會有點不爽 因為不是完全能明白的節奏 改了~
01:15:197 (1,2,3) - 這個overlap不好吧 改了
01:27:963 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 這段看起來好亂啊 太接近了的感覺 擠在一起 调整了一下

[Reborn]
00:30:516 (1,2,3,4) - 搞這種逐漸加大的距離符合歌曲的確 但是打起來非常麻煩 你想keep還是把距離保持一致呢？ 就这样吧。声音也是渐渐变大的
00:31:793 - SV區別太大了... 感覺忽然太快，歌里也沒有變得這麼激烈 感覺非常違和。 01:12:644 - 這裡的SV反而挺合適，因為01:11:367 (1,2,3,4) - 這幾個滑條的逐漸變化到位了 唔。。我感觉差不多啊= =，前面的间距已经拉开很远了
00:33:548 (5,6,1) - 這裡我建議把 00:34:027 (6) - 挪到 x62 y162左右，因為會看起來更有連接的感覺 改了一点。其实放的比较远的是因为重音=.=

Reborn這裡我覺得目前有些圈之間的距離不一致導致看起來有點不好看 建議沒必要不一樣DS的就讓他們同一距離 是啊噗各种丑~待窝考完试再整体改改w
多谢摸图啦owo

good luck!

Kazuya wrote:

Hi

[Hard]

AR 8 is bit better.

00:13:921 (1) - Improve blanket √
00:19:027 (1) - ^ √
00:28:602 (5) - Hmm maybe, better overlay? Move slider here: x: 397 y: 85 http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlMGQVR (pic) √
00:36:899 (1,2,3,4,5) - My conception is better fits the violin: Timeline example: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlMGAVR (Timeline) not bad, but i still prefer drums
00:55:570 (4,5,6) - Use my suggestion, please. Currently is bit weird/random: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlMQAVR (Timeline) they follow the light drum sound
01:18:229 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:36:899 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Normal+]

It's ok, but it's rather than "light hard".

Change Circle size to 4, because so is easier to read. changed to 3.5
Change AR to 7, because so much is 1/2 objects, and dense. changed to 6
Change HP and OD to 5 √

And rename diff to "Advanced" √

[Normal]

Ok.

Good luck.
Thank u!

• 00:13:921 (1,2) - try to avoid 1/4 in normal
  00:19:027 (1,2) - ^
  01:12:006 (4,1) - overlap :/

• 00:02:431 (3) - You should put the curve right for a better flow
  00:15:836 (4,5) - changle the direction of the slider for point the circle
  00:34:346 (1,2) - change the curve.

• 00:09:133 (2,1) - Try to destack it, a jump could be better
  00:27:963 (4,5) - overlap, you can make a blanket right?
  00:55:729 (5,6) - the instrument start at 00:55:889
  01:02:431 (1,2) - blanket?

Battquif wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue

Normal :

• 00:13:921 (1,2) - try to avoid 1/4 in normal i think it's good due to the low bpm
  00:19:027 (1,2) - ^
  01:12:006 (4,1) - overlap :/ fixed

Hard :

• 00:02:431 (3) - You should put the curve right for a better flow i still prefer ones with opposite direction
  00:15:836 (4,5) - changle the direction of the slider for point the circle fixed in another way
  00:34:346 (1,2) - change the curve. ^^

Reborn :

• 00:09:133 (2,1) - Try to destack it, a jump could be better nice
  00:27:963 (4,5) - overlap, you can make a blanket right? uh..no. i like it
  00:55:729 (5,6) - the instrument start at 00:55:889 it follows a light drum sound
  01:02:431 (1,2) - blanket? fixed

So, sorry if my mod is only detail of you map. Your map is already very good and,for me, there is nothing very bad. Good luck for rank it, I think it won't be hard!~
it helps a lot, thank u for modding and thank u for the star!

1. 00:47:112 (1,2) - 让2更清楚些，往上面移一点

1. 00:30:516 (3) - 我觉得索性把这个拿出来比较好一点，特别是你这段的combo color还是深色的，不太好读
2. 01:10:091 (1,2,3,4) - ^

1. 01:09:772 (1) - remove nc?
2. 01:11:048 - 这里是不是少了点什么东西啊

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Normal

1. 00:47:112 (1,2) - 让2更清楚些，往上面移一点 改了

Hard

1. 00:30:516 (3) - 我觉得索性把这个拿出来比较好一点，特别是你这段的combo color还是深色的，不太好读 好的
2. 01:10:091 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

Insane

1. 01:09:772 (1) - remove nc? done
2. 01:11:048 - 这里是不是少了点什么东西啊 额……是什么呢= =

metadata懒得查了 恩又检查了一遍，artist的罗马音有点搞不清姓应该在前还是后，按wiki来应该没错吧
感谢M酱~

wiki wrote:

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