[Oni]
- 00:38:228 (8,9) - consider to move to… 00:38:041 - and 00:38:697 - eachother , and add 00:38:791 - k? the power with Hit-sound is unbalanced, comparing with 00:37:010 (1,2,3) - and 00:38:135 (7,8,9,10) - + 00:38:510 (10,11,12) - . I guess player need to play with smoothing rhythm .
- 00:44:228 - ~ , 01:50:135 - ,01:56:135 - same.
- from 00:54:447 - , I guess you can add ¼ triple… like kkd? followed to bass pitch that we can listen easily.
- 01:09:635 - add k, disunifed to follow the hihat open 01:06:635 - . and airly dense… 01:09:260 (115,116,117,118,119) - .
- on there 01:14:885 (133,134,135) - is lack of hit sounds, stalled imo. consider to add 01:15:447 - ?
- 01:18:635 - change k, 01:19:385 - change d, and 01:19:572 - ? the reason is same as above. Keeping tension and expression a little build up. I guess it seems not bad as single diff.