1. Extra (5,14 stars, 794 notes)
2. Hard (3,25 stars, 555 notes)
3. Insane (4,23 stars, 595 notes)
4. Normal (2,05 stars, 299 notes)

LucaSA4 wrote:

Hello , you are the next from my modding queue! ~This is a M4M Request. My active beatmap to mod: The Living Tombstone- Heavy's Pizza Song Already modded.

~Really sorry for the delay

• General/Overall

1. Tip to fix blanket: check the approach circle I didn't know that, thank you so much c:
2. Good mapset! I love DnB <3

• Hard

1. OD 7 is too high for a Hard o.O , use 6 instead
2. HP 6 is kinda too, use 5?
   00:23:873 (5,6) - I would use a 1/1 slider here because circles are used for strong melodies that are enough for themselves (hope you get what I mean) I know what you mean but I didn't change anything because it would look to similiar to the part before this
   00:29:328 (6) - This slider should start at 00:29:668 - ? add a circle on the snap b4. Unless you're not following the strong note
   00:33:248 (3) - There's a strong note here 00:33:418 - , consider moving this slider to this spot
   00:36:146 - ^
   00:37:509 - ^ I know you're following the other rhythm here but the thing is that these notes are too strong to be skipped, doesn't feels good I think you are right. I also added some hitsounds to the strong beat. But I didn't change the whole part because at the end you can't hear it that loud anymore.
   00:42:112 (3,4) - Fix blanket
   00:55:066 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/iAg1F/1438d6a546.jpg
   01:35:975 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/iAgju/2417c793aa.jpg
   01:42:793 (7,8) - Kinda weird this pattern , maybe http://puu.sh/iAgnN/ef8ca633dd.jpg
   01:54:555 (1,2) - Fix blanket
3. Try not to use sliders starting on the red snap, if you do so, add reverse arrow, the strong rhythm should always be the start of the sliders, and the strong rhythm is almost always on the white snap
   02:01:373 (5,6) - Blanket ^^
   02:39:214 (3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/iAgzq/fd303da95a.jpg
   02:51:146 (5,6) - ^
   03:15:691 (4) - This should be NC?
   03:24:896 (3,4) - Fix blanket
   03:40:918 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/iAgJ8/1337dee484.jpg
   03:43:646 (1,2) - ^ please this one D:
   

• Insane

  00:27:623 (3,4) - Fix blanket please D:

1. Same I said on easy, try to get the strong beats You mean Hard c:
   00:39:043 (3,4) - Ouch this blanket, please fix it
   00:44:157 (2,3) - ^ D:::: http://puu.sh/iAgUw/4b43e5dcb3.jpg
   00:50:805 (6,7) - ^
   00:54:725 (2,3) - ^ D::::
   01:19:100 (3) - Shouldn't this one be NC? Because the rhythm changes here, like it does with 01:21:827 (1) -
   01:26:941 (1) - Remove NC
   01:27:282 (3) - Add NC
   01:46:373 (1,3) - Blanket fix plox
   02:26:600 (3,1) - ^ this one either plox
   02:27:112 (4,2) - ^
   03:05:464 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/iAhcr/e08b4519e7.jpg
   03:49:782 (3,5) - ^ End of the slider a bit off the blanket
   03:50:464 (1,2) - ^ same end of slider
   04:00:009 - add circle?

That's it Any question spam me :p

Yoges wrote:

Here's your M4M

• General

  
  I downloaded the mp3 from the author itself. I think I'll ask a person for the solution later.
  You're also using 1/8 snap for all the diffs a thing I used to do in my newer days of mapping. You will rarely ever need this. It was only ever necessary on One of my maps
  For easy and normal diffs you should never go above 1/2 or it will be too fast for newbies. and for hards, insanes, extras & batshit crazy 7+star diffs you will rarely ever need to go above 1/4 idk why I use 1/8 xD

• Normal

1. 01:00:009 (1) - Maybe replace this with a slider ending at 01:00:350? Done
2. 03:24:896 (2) - I think this would flow better as 2 notes rather than a slider I think it makes no difference

• Extra

1. The song is actually fairly slow so no need for ar 9.5 just ar 9 will do fine Changed to AR 9
2. 00:26:430 (4) - Is there really a need for that to be outside of the stack? It just breaks the flow and throws you off Now all are stacked together
3. 00:30:009 (1,2) - 3 repeats just don't feel right for me personally. If it were me I'd do something like this I did something similiar
4. 02:09:555 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - I think you should be mapping the synth instead of the drums here since they are more prominent I replaced the first circle with a slider

Your mapping is fairly solid but.. It's most likely just the song but presonaly it's just not... fun for me. ok :c
Good luck ^^

Styx wrote:

Excellent SB! I really do like it. Also, this is an excellent song, and I'd be glad to try and map an easy for it if you need. I'm only gonna mod the normal and hard, as I am not a good enough modder to determine insane fixes.

General

1. You need a difficulty under 2 stars for the set to be rankable. I'll speak with you about this in-game
2. Your mp3 is too high of a bitrate. http://puu.sh/jD6co.mp3 Here's the mp3 in 128, as 192 kept the file size still too high. Nice, I didn't know how to fix that. Thank you c:

Normal

1. 00:26:941 - You can add a note right here, as there is a note here, with nothing mapped on it. Good idea
2. 00:31:032 - ^ ^
3. 00:32:737 (1) - Maybe extend it like this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3540406 I want to keep the beat
4. 00:34:100 (3) - This slider seems very awkward I don't think so
5. 00:37:339 (6) - Same thing here, its very oddly snapped. Maybe move to white tick and extend? Same as I said above
6. 02:05:975 (2) - You don't need this note here. I'll keep it because it fits to the sound in the background.
7. 03:29:328 (4,5) - You can map these two notes as one slider instead. I personally think that it wouldn't make a difference, but why not
8. 03:33:078 (1) - This part is very awkward to hit in a normal. You are right, replaced it with two circles

Hard

Honestly, I myself can't really see much wrong with this Hard. I really like it.

I really like this hard. Really.

-Kanzaki wrote:

Selam from my queue. Selam

General

[*]Extra diff te CS = 4, Insane de CS = 4.5 . Bu pek hoş karşılanan birşey değildir neden daha zor olan diffte CS daha büyük. I don't want the extra diff to have lesser CS, so I'll change the CS of my insane diff to 4.
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[*]Insane diff OD = 7, HP = 7 daha uygundur. Tamam

[*] -- Bu tagleri soundcloud dan buldum tag olarak bunları kullan ama "Nyte, New, Horizons" bu tagleri ekleme zaten şarkının adı olduğu için, sen drum and base yazmışsın whoops xD

Extra:

1. 00:23:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Bu pattern hoşuma gitmedi extra diff'te güzel olduğunu düşünmüyorum ama bu kişisel düşüncem genede bu extra diff olduğu için böyle bir şey dene :
   SPOILER

   OK I made something similiar
   
   00:24:564 (1,2,3,4) - Burası zaten sakin/kolay kısım yani önceki dediğim yeri yaparsan fazla zor olmaz cunku burada geri rahatlar oyuncu. I made the same
   
   
2. 00:25:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^
   
   
   
3. 00:29:336 (3,4,5,6) - Yalnız bunu gördüm eğer dediğimi yaparsan buradada aynı distance ı kullanmak zorundasın, yapmaz isen eğer gene değişmek zorundasın çünkü 00:23:711 (4,5) - bu ikisi arasındandaki uzaklık 00:28:996 (2,3) - bu ikisi arasında yok ama aynı şey bunlar aynı sesi takip etmişsin aynı şeyleri yapmalısın. ^
   
   
4. 01:01:382 - bu saniyede ki ses ile 01:01:041 - bu saniyede ki ses farklı şeyler ama aynı şekilde slider la devam etmişsin aradaki farkı göster anlamadıysa demek istediğimi 01:00:871 (3) - bu sliderla takip ettiğin ses 01:01:382 - bu saniyede yok clap tarzı bir ses var burada. Şunu dene NC 'lerede dikkat :
   SPOILER

   OK I'll try
   
   
5. 01:04:109 (1) - Buradada clap tarzı ses var slider başında ama burası bu şekilde kalsa da olur bir hata yok ancak ben olsam o clapı circle ile vurgular ve değişik bir pattern uygulardım.(sürekli aynı şeyleri takip etmiyor olmak içinde.) I have changed this part completely
   
   
6. 01:09:564 (1,2,3) - Bu jump neden anlamadım aynı şeyleri takip etmeye devam etmişsin ama bunları böyle uzağa koymuşsun neyi vurgulamak istediğini anlamadım bi fark göremedim şarkıda. ^, sry D:
   
   
7. 01:14:848 - Burada ses var boş geçince hoş olmuyor. I added a lot of notes
   
   
8. 01:20:473 (1) - No NC OK
   
   
9. 01:26:609 - Kiai time da anladığım kadarıyla DS kullanmadın çoğu zaman burayı bir daha tamamen gözden geçir bir örnek vericem anlarsın umarım.
   01:44:336 (4,5) - 01:28:655 (3,1) - Bunlar aynı şeyler değil mi bu distance farkı niye
   
   
10. 01:48:427 (1,1,1,1) - Stacklemek yerine yavaşça döndürmeye devam etsen daha güzel oluyor. Made something similiar I think
    
    
11. 02:32:746 - buradan itibaren whistle kullandıgın her yerde volume = %40 kullan bu whistle biraz fazla güçlü bir ses neyi takip ettiğini duymayı zorlaştırıyor. I changed it to 30%
    
    
12. 03:15:018 (6) - bu slider i biraz daha erken bitirip (03:15:615 - burada mesela), 03:15:700 - bu saniyeye bir circle ekle derim çünkü sondaki ses çok güçlü bence basılması gereken bir şey, slider sonu güçsüz kalıyor. OK
    
    
13. 03:18:427 (1,2) -
    Bunu dene

    Tamam
    
    
14. 03:29:337 (1,2,3,4) - Daha önce de dediğim gibi bu stackler hoş değil ayrıca ses yükseliyor ve değişyor takip edilen şey bence jump tarzı birşey yapmak daha uygun olur extra diff' e. I think these stacks are ok