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Caramella Girls - Cheerleaders (Radio Mix)

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Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Y-yes.. it's needed
Fixed the spinner~
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Gero
Updated ~

Just waiting for Lexia.
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Great map, gonna mod it someday! :D

Bakari's Easy

  1. 00:07:434 I would love if you add a circle here since there are a strong beat
  2. 00:27:148 (5) What about to move this slider to x:256 y:96?. The current spacing between (4) and (5) is not really good :P
    SPOILER
Hard

  1. 00:04:220 (6,7,1) Gero plox, el triplet no encaja muy bien con la voz para nada, considera removerlo por favor y si me dices que hay una especie de redoble al inicio de su voz, el triplet debería ser de 1/6 no de 1/4 xD
  2. 00:27:148 (2) Que opinas con respecto a un CTRL G en este slider?. Haría un interesante jump y patrón divertido de jugar
  3. 00:30:148 (1) El Normal Finish le da un mejor toque a la primera nota del estribillo, considera usarlo!
GeroVersible's Insane

  1. 00:04:327 (5) Lo mismo que dije en la Hard, la primera parte es muy pacífica y es puro vocal, asi que el triplet no va muy bien que digamos
  2. 00:17:291 (1,2) The flow between these two objects aren't really good because of slider shapes, maybe you should try something "better"
  3. 00:21:363 (1) What are you trying to follow with this slider?. Plays very bad imo, and the NC should not be necessary here
That's all for me, good luck with your map! :D
Last edited by XinCrin , edited 3 times in total.
Gero
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Gero

XinCrin wrote:

Hard

  1. 00:04:220 (6,7,1) Gero plox, el triplet no encaja muy bien con la voz para nada, considera removerlo por favor y si me dices que hay una especie de redoble al inicio de su voz, el triplet debería ser de 1/6 no de 1/4 xD Pero yo escucho algo en 1/4, voy a esperar por mas opiniones si no te importa.
  2. 00:27:148 (2) Que opinas con respecto a un CTRL G en este slider?. Haría un interesante jump y patrón divertido de jugar Cierto, arreglado.
  3. 00:30:148 (1) El Normal Finish le da un mejor toque a la primera nota del estribillo, considera usarlo! Nah, prefiero soft acá.
GeroVersible's Insane

  1. 00:04:327 (5) Lo mismo que dije en la Hard, la primera parte es muy pacífica y es puro vocal, asi que el triplet no va muy bien que digamos Lo mismo que mencione en la hard.
That's all for me, good luck with your map! :D
Thanks Xin.

Updated ~
ErunamoJAZZ
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ErunamoJAZZ
ingame request o/

[easy]
00:05:291 (3) - may be following the arrow(next note)??: http://puu.sh/hbJ0s/1aaff73273.jpg
00:19:434 - you are losting this note... the song is very short, i think is good idea to use this xD, also, lyrics listen here.


[normal]
00:28:434 (1,1) - :!: unrankable time snap for a normal diff???


[hard]
irc chat
18:32 Gero: me ignoraste :c
18:33 ErunamoJAZZ: no te dije que sí?
18:33 ErunamoJAZZ: a.. no te pasé el stream y olvidé decir que sí
18:33 Gero: no
18:33 Gero: o.o
18:33 ErunamoJAZZ: perdón D:
18:34 ErunamoJAZZ: pero pasa el mapa
18:34 *Gero is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/665369 Caramella Girls - Cheerleaders]
18:34 Gero: es este
18:40 ErunamoJAZZ: ese slider lento es dificil de leer
18:41 Gero: tiene NC por eso mismo
18:41 ErunamoJAZZ: mehh, por spread se ve bien, creo xD
18:42 Gero: yep
18:42 ErunamoJAZZ: y si le pones alguna forma?
18:44 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/hbICF/919144a509.jpg
18:44 Gero: que feo :c
18:44 ErunamoJAZZ: xD, http://puu.sh/hbIEk/1885fced82.jpg
18:45 Gero: sigue siendo feo xD
18:45 ErunamoJAZZ: es el mismo xD, osea, la cosa es que los nodos rojos con cuerdan con el eh-eh-eh
18:45 ErunamoJAZZ: igual es una sugerencia
18:46 Gero: lo cambie por otra cosa
18:53 ErunamoJAZZ: ok, ya posteo. Está cortico el map... gero speed ranker (?

[collab]
looks fine

good luck o/
Gero
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Topic Starter
Gero
Thanks a lot Erunamo o/

Updated ~
Krfawy
1,374 posts
Joined March 2012
Krfawy
Hello Cuties, it's Krfawy as requested by Gero the Perv. \o3o/

Lexia's Normal
  1. 00:10:863 (4) - I don't think this difficulty is a good place for 1/4 sliders even if they seem easy. Can't you simply use 1/2, please? : /
  2. 00:21:577 (1,1) - Dat overlap. Can't you stack it, please? NO, I don't use stacking in editor.
  3. 00:28:434 (1,1) - Don't you think it's a bit too short for a Normal diff, really? I highly recommend to make a longer recovery break from the spinner to another object.
  4. 00:43:006 (3,4) - 1/4 reversed sliders, please. #YouKnowWhatIMean
Pornoversible's Hentai Festival
  1. AR8.5-8.7 should be better. AR9 is a bit an overkill and there's is nothing that heavy-patterned to use 9 IMO and it plays better with lower AR. #ProfessionalEasyDiffPlayer
  2. 00:22:863 (1,1) - Irre, pls. I know it's Insane diff, but can't you CTRL + G so it's easier to play, like really. It's just a bit hardcore to play if you ask me. D:
I am wondering if the gap between Normal and Hard isn't a bit too big because of triple circles and jumps in Hard + that stream at the end of that difficulty. I think you should get some feedback from medium and light insane players, since we all map for them not for mappers.

Hard and Easy seem fine, I can't find anything to change.

LVU Krfawy \o3o/
Dariano
215 posts
Joined July 2010
Dariano
Hello

[General]

- Consider adding some audio lead in, the start feels sudden imo.

[Jump Festival]

00:10:434 (3) - Why don't you use this 00:05:291 (3) - slider again, the one you're using looks uglier.
00:17:291 (1) - I don't think NC its necessary here.
00:21:363 (1) - o_o wouldn't a 1/4 still feel better since there's like 0% volume there anyway? (This one too 00:34:863 (7) - )
00:35:506 - Pointless inherited point I think, it doens't change SV, volumen, kiai or audio so... i think you can delete it :o
00:37:327 (2,3) - Kind of nazi but noticeable though, grab each circle and they'll place themselves in a grid, making the DS 0.33x like previous streams.
Ex: 00:30:470 (2,3) -
00:36:898 (7) - Nazi, if you move this one grid down the distance will be similar to 00:36:148 (4,5) -.

[Hard]

Can you make a mistake please?

[Lexia's Normal]

00:21:577 (1,1) - Overlap please.
00:28:434 (1,1) - I don't think this little gap is rankeable in a normal. Source: t/241019
00:31:648 (4) - Little nazi, take grid snap off and place this note somewhere like x257 y120 so that it looks better.
00:36:791 (4) - This circle is too close to the sliders compared to every other circle in the map.

[Bakari's Easy]

00:37:863 (4) - Why don't you make a straight line and move this circle to x76 y360? If you do that, remember to fix the spacing with 00:38:720 (1) - .

Nice map, good job everyone! ~Star~
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Makyu
A short mod for a short song.

Good luck with the set

SPOILER
2015-04-17 00:57 Makyu: 00:01:006 - yo le subiria el volumen un poco mas a la primera nota, solo a la primera nota
2015-04-17 00:57 Makyu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/665369 Caramella Girls - Cheerleaders [Geroversible's Jump Festival]]
2015-04-17 00:58 Gero: tienes razón, listo
2015-04-17 00:58 Makyu: 00:37:006 (1,2,3) -  lo alejaria un poco mas, un salto, para el cambio de mapper en el collab
2015-04-17 00:59 Makyu: 00:42:148 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - un poco de menos volumen quiza?
2015-04-17 00:59 Gero: todo aplicado
2015-04-17 00:59 Makyu: no mucho quiza -5% or so
2015-04-17 00:59 Makyu: solo eso para la Insane, esta bastante divertida
2015-04-17 01:00 Gero: y la hard la vez bien?
2015-04-17 01:01 Makyu: 00:23:291 (1,2) -  quiza en esas partes que los sliders esten totalmente pegados no se vea tan bien como si estuvieran un poquito separados como generalmente se hace
2015-04-17 01:01 Makyu: osea, totalmente stackeado xD
2015-04-17 01:02 Makyu: 00:34:434 (4) - ctrl + g? obvialmente el triplet que viene antes lo ponen en head donde queda
2015-04-17 01:02 Makyu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/666498 Caramella Girls - Cheerleaders [Hard]]
2015-04-17 01:02 Makyu: hablo de la hard
2015-04-17 01:02 Gero: okay
2015-04-17 01:02 Gero: listo
2015-04-17 01:03 Makyu: 00:39:363 (3,4,5) - quiza no querias que se tocaran, (3) se esta tocando con (1), por estetica nomas
2015-04-17 01:03 Makyu: just that
Irreversible
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Irreversible

XinCrin wrote:

GeroVersible's Insane

  1. 00:04:327 (5) Lo mismo que dije en la Hard, la primera parte es muy pacífica y es puro vocal, asi que el triplet no va muy bien que digamos
  2. 00:17:291 (1,2) The flow between these two objects aren't really good because of slider shapes, maybe you should try something "better" well.. plays good for me sorry :/
  3. 00:21:363 (1) What are you trying to follow with this slider?. Plays very bad imo, and the NC should not be necessary here vocals
Thanks for the check anyway!

Krfawy: Fixed, also decreased 00:26:720 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - spacing here.
Dariano: Fixed the NC .. want to keep the 1/8 because it emphasizes the "squeaky" sound good.

http://puu.sh/hhpJ2/a30d34c38c.txt
Gero
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Topic Starter
Gero
ErunamoJAZZ
[normal]
00:28:434 (1,1) - :!: unrankable time snap for a normal diff??? Already fixed.

good luck o/

Krfawy
Hello Cuties, it's Krfawy as requested by Gero the Perv. \o3o/ o/

Lexia's Normal
  1. 00:10:863 (4) - I don't think this difficulty is a good place for 1/4 sliders even if they seem easy. Can't you simply use 1/2, please? : / is perfectly fine imo.
  2. 00:21:577 (1,1) - Dat overlap. Can't you stack it, please? NO, I don't use stacking in editor. Fixed.
  3. 00:28:434 (1,1) - Don't you think it's a bit too short for a Normal diff, really? I highly recommend to make a longer recovery break from the spinner to another object. Yes, you're right.
  4. 00:43:006 (3,4) - 1/4 reversed sliders, please. #YouKnowWhatIMean As I said before, is perfectly fine.
Pornoversible's Hentai Festival
  1. AR8.5-8.7 should be better. AR9 is a bit an overkill and there's is nothing that heavy-patterned to use 9 IMO and it plays better with lower AR. #ProfessionalEasyDiffPlayer I talked with Irreversible and we prefer to keep it as is.
  2. 00:22:863 (1,1) - Irre, pls. I know it's Insane diff, but can't you CTRL + G so it's easier to play, like really. It's just a bit hardcore to play if you ask me. D: >Irreversible.
I am wondering if the gap between Normal and Hard isn't a bit too big because of triple circles and jumps in Hard + that stream at the end of that difficulty. I think you should get some feedback from medium and light insane players, since we all map for them not for mappers. Added some jumps on hard so now the gap would be good to go.

Hard and Easy seem fine, I can't find anything to change. Yay ~

LVU Krfawy \o3o/

Dariano
Hello

[General]

- Consider adding some audio lead in, the start feels sudden imo.

[Jump Festival]

00:10:434 (3) - Why don't you use this 00:05:291 (3) - slider again, the one you're using looks uglier. You're right, fixed.
00:17:291 (1) - I don't think NC its necessary here. >Irreversible.
00:21:363 (1) - o_o wouldn't a 1/4 still feel better since there's like 0% volume there anyway? (This one too 00:34:863 (7) - ) >Irreversible.
00:35:506 - Pointless inherited point I think, it doens't change SV, volumen, kiai or audio so... i think you can delete it :o Fixed.
00:37:327 (2,3) - Kind of nazi but noticeable though, grab each circle and they'll place themselves in a grid, making the DS 0.33x like previous streams.
Ex: 00:30:470 (2,3) - Nah, I prefer to keep it as is.
00:36:898 (7) - Nazi, if you move this one grid down the distance will be similar to 00:36:148 (4,5) -. Fixed a bit.

[Hard]

Can you make a mistake please? Huehuehue.

[Lexia's Normal]

00:21:577 (1,1) - Overlap please. Fixed.
00:28:434 (1,1) - I don't think this little gap is rankeable in a normal. Source: t/241019 Fixed.
00:31:648 (4) - Little nazi, take grid snap off and place this note somewhere like x257 y120 so that it looks better. Fixed.
00:36:791 (4) - This circle is too close to the sliders compared to every other circle in the map. Fixed.

Nice map, good job everyone! ~Star~

Thanks a lot for the mods.

Updated ~
Suimya
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Joined February 2011
Suimya
Place holder for my mod <3
Avena
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Joined December 2012
Avena

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Place holder for my mod <3
ok after sekai bubbles i'll qualify no one else shall take dis from me
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Hey Gero =w=/

General:
  1. About the title, I think you should add "(Radio Mix)" just like it says here o.o

Bakari's Easy:
  1. 00:13:006 (4) - how about adding a nc here, like what you did here 00:01:006 (1,2) -
  2. 00:21:577 (1) - how about removing the sampleset normal here, and just use soft finish here, it'll follow the music nicely imo o.o


Lexia's Normal:
  1. 00:02:506 (3,1) - I don't like how you used the whistles here, I really think it's a bit noisy and don't fit with music imo, same goes here 00:05:934 (3,1) - , I really think you should just placed them on white ticks where they should be =3=/
  2. 00:10:863 (4) - The normal sampleset on slider's tail totally don't fit with music ;w; you should just remove it


Geroversible's Jump Festival:
  1. 00:13:006 (1,2,3,4) - Don't you think this kinda boring to play? since it's all liner sliders and maybe it's just me, but I really think you should do something with this boring part, make them curved or something like that =3=
  2. 00:21:363 (1) - how about just replace this with 1/4 triples, since i don't think this 1/8 slider follows anything in the music ;w;
  3. 00:26:934 (1,1,1,1) - it'll be much better if you remove these nc, it'll play much better really ></
  4. 00:34:863 (7) - same as i said here 00:21:363 (1) -


Call me back o3o/
Gero
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Topic Starter
Gero

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey Gero =w=/ \=w= Hey Sekai.

General:
  1. About the title, I think you should add "(Radio Mix)" just like it says here o.o Fixed.

Bakari's Easy:
  1. 00:13:006 (4) - how about adding a nc here, like what you did here 00:01:006 (1,2) - Fixed.
  2. 00:21:577 (1) - how about removing the sampleset normal here, and just use soft finish here, it'll follow the music nicely imo o.o I don't think so since I hitsounded everything by myself so all of them are consistent.


Lexia's Normal:
  1. 00:02:506 (3,1) - I don't like how you used the whistles here, I really think it's a bit noisy and don't fit with music imo, same goes here 00:05:934 (3,1) - , I really think you should just placed them on white ticks where they should be =3=/ But it follow the vocals, what's wrong with it?
  2. 00:10:863 (4) - The normal sampleset on slider's tail totally don't fit with music ;w; you should just remove it Same.


Geroversible's Jump Festival:
  1. 00:13:006 (1,2,3,4) - Don't you think this kinda boring to play? since it's all liner sliders and maybe it's just me, but I really think you should do something with this boring part, make them curved or something like that =3= Neh =3=
  2. 00:21:363 (1) - how about just replace this with 1/4 triples, since i don't think this 1/8 slider follows anything in the music ;w; @Irreversible.
  3. 00:26:934 (1,1,1,1) - it'll be much better if you remove these nc, it'll play much better really ></ @Irreversible.
  4. 00:34:863 (7) - same as i said here 00:21:363 (1) - @Irreversible.
Call me back o3o/
Thanks Sekai.

Updated ~
Irreversible
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Irreversible

Gero wrote:

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Geroversible's Jump Festival:
  1. 00:13:006 (1,2,3,4) - Don't you think this kinda boring to play? since it's all liner sliders and maybe it's just me, but I really think you should do something with this boring part, make them curved or something like that =3= Neh =3=
  2. 00:21:363 (1) - how about just replace this with 1/4 triples, since i don't think this 1/8 slider follows anything in the music ;w; @Irreversible. Not in my opinion, it follows the really high tone of the vocals really good.
  3. 00:26:934 (1,1,1,1) - it'll be much better if you remove these nc, it'll play much better really ></ @Irreversible. How does NC affect the gameplay? This part should be especially emphasized imo, and it looks way cooler with that!
  4. 00:34:863 (7) - same as i said here 00:21:363 (1) - @Irreversible.
Same.
Thanks for your check :)
Suimya
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Suimya
nuked
Avena
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Joined December 2012
Avena
I'd be happier if the spinner thingies on Easy were fixed, but it's fine as it is.
Qualified~
Sure
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Sure
Congerots!
ErunamoJAZZ
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ErunamoJAZZ
congrats! :3
grumd
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grumd
is it 2010 again?
Irreversible
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Irreversible

grumd wrote:

is it 2010 again?
ofc, didn't you know?


gimme dat 2010
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