nice map

dksslqj's Autumn
00:14:664(3) - spacing
00:22:521(2) - spacing
01:13:592(4) - spacing
01:14:628(7) - spacing(move left 2 grid lv 3)

間違えて連投しました。
ごめんなさい

vincerio wrote:

nice map

dksslqj's Autumn
00:14:664(3) - spacing
00:22:521(2) - spacing
01:13:592(4) - spacing
01:14:628(7) - spacing(move left 2 grid lv 3)

It's jump...........
all jump that you point out...

[Clare's Normal]
00:33:414 (1) - or that slider have end in 00:34:128 or spinner have start in this time.
00:46:449 (2) - remove whistle.
00:50:735 (2) - ^
01:18:414 (3) - end in 01:19:307. (that nazi)
01:24:128 (3) - end in 01:25:021. (that nazi)
02:22:164 (2) - remove whistle.

[Lunatic]
all looks so good, but one hitsounds mod:

02:38:235 (1,2) - remove whistle and add finish, imo.

[dksslqj's Autumn]
all fine about spacing and mapset.

00:01:450 - 00:12:164 please, make that sounds part like 01:02:878 - 01:13:592.
Why? Because that listen so good, and really good for playing, whistles so good for that mapping style,
please, use that advice.

Star~

>w<

fixed frill~!

Download: Sakaue Nachi - Autumn one of deep flame (Frill) [dksslqj's Autumn].osu

update.

and thank you Star ^_^

Hi :3

[General]
-Use same lead-in in all diff? (suggetion)

Well only that ;3
Star

ohaiyou~

General
- Audio lead-in seconds aren't the same on all diffs.
- Add "Clare" & "dksslgj" in tags.
- Remove hyphen symbol between "Gojou" & "kai" from tags.

Clare's
- You use different DS in a Normal diff! *cried*
00:33:414 (1) - add one return on this slider o.o
01:04:307 (3) - reverse selection then fix spacing?
02:22:521 (3) - spacing
02:27:192 (T) - at least fix this section (kiai)

Frill's
jumps are very excited, but I failed! *cried again*
00:07:700 (5) - new combo?
00:55:378 (4) - ^
01:52:342 (5) - really hard to read ;~;
02:35:735 (6) - new combo

dksslqj's
- increase OA please D: notes are hard to read with OA6
00:34:664 (6) - new combo
01:13:592 (4) - ^
01:42:074 (7) - ahh...um..i think this slider doesn't fit yet>_<
01:58:235 (5) - new combo
02:26:092 (8) - ^

Nice nachi! XD

Star

[General]:

1. use a 256Kbps mp3 next time :3 and this may get poped by any BAT after bubbled if they pointed this out.
2. if you want to change the offset, do the same change to all the time sections.
3. add dksslqj and Clare to all diffs' tags

[Clare's Normal]:

1. 00:21:450 (2) - why the second way point red?
2. 02:21:807 (1,2,3) - spacing
3. 02:41:092 (T) - let the KIAI stop here.
4. 00:36:478 (T) - what's this section for? if you wanna turn down the volume, place this at or before 00:36:449.

[Lunatic]:

1. 02:38:503 (T) - I think you want to make the volume 30?
2. Good to me

[dksslqj's Autumn]:

1. OD +1 ~ 2

star~

Frill wrote:

I

DON'T

LIKE

JUMP

...

yeah

I

agree

with

you

...

Upload~ deshita [Korean:업로드 했어요]

edit: sorry I forgot to upload
so upload

Download: Sakaue Nachi - Autumn one of deep flame (Frill) [dksslqj's Autumn].osu

xierbaliti wrote:

Frill wrote:

I

DON'T

LIKE

JUMP

...

yeah

I

agree

with

you

...

But

no

jump

is

boring

and

I hate

stream

because I using tablet

Oh, I did the above modding in lab, now let me continue after that... (no kds, thx)

[dksslqj's Autumn]:

1. 01:13:414 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing is weired. do these changes smoothly maybe better.
2. 02:41:092 (T) - end the KIAI here

that's all :3

star-!!

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
  • Tags must be the same on all diffs.
  • Music Track Lead-in: 1

[Clare's Normal]

• • 01:14:842 (2,3) - Move 1/2 later
  • 01:17:700 (2,3) - ^
  • 01:20:557 (2,3) - ^
  • 01:23:414 (2,3) - ^
  • 01:26:271 (2,3) - ^
  • 01:29:128 (2,1) - ^ (end the spinner here 01:31:449)
  • 01:31:985 (1,1) - ^ (end the spinner here 01:34:307)
  • 01:34:842 (1,2) - ^ (end the slider here 01:36:449)

[Lunatic]

• • 01:15:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some patterns.

You can catch the BAT
not beat Lol

[Clare's Normal]
00:15:735 (2) - Move the end one grid up
00:22:878 (2) - Move the middle one grid left, the end one grid down
00:33:414 (1) - Maybe add one more repeat?
01:10:378 (4,1) - Spacing?
01:35:021 (1) - I don't like the position... perhaps place at the upper left of 01:35:557 (2)?
01:54:664 (1), 02:00:378 (1), 02:06:092 (1) - These notes shocked me... Appear too fast after spinner

[Lunatic]
00:18:414 (2,3) - If you want to create a triangle, one grid right for 2 and 3.
01:17:342 (10) - Maybe delete?
01:52:164 (4,5,6) - Why not make 01:52:164 (4,5,6) diagonal?

[dksslqj's Autumn]
00:23:503 (2) - Maybe delete? Sounds bad.

Star!

♪


star

star

こんにちは

[General]
You need an easier diff, so the beginner player can play this beatmap

[Clare's Normal]
00:02:878 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
00:10:021 (2) - Move 1 grid right?
00:15:735 (2) - Make symetric?
00:21:450 (2) - Perhaps, should same shapes of slider of 00:20:021 (2)?
00:22:878 (2) - Make symetric?
00:43:949 (1,1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:235 (1,1) - ^
01:20:021 (1,2,3) - Do you copy-paste with 01:17:164 (1,2,3)?
02:06:092 (1) - A bit too far from spinner
02:20:735 (1) - The startpoint is overlapped by slider, I think it's hidden. I know you want some cute pattern
02:38:592 (1) - Silence this spinner? Like [dksslqj's Autumn]?

[Lunatic]
Lunatic? Hmm...... Basically, Lunatic must the star rating is 5,00. IMO

01:10:021 (6,8) - Reverse this?
01:18:592 (5) - Delete 01:18:503 (4) and move this slider backward to blue tick and extend?
01:19:842 (x) - Add note?
01:58:057 (1) - Move forward to next red tick and cut short?
02:38:503 (1) - Silence this spinner? Like [dksslqj's Autumn]?

[dksslqj's Autumn]
Change to "dksslqj's Hard"? Like Touhou diff? And It's seems easier than [Lunatic]

Good song
(((((っ´Θ｀)っ <- STAR

Leorda wrote:

こんにちは こんにちは

[General]
You need an easier diff, so the beginner player can play this beatmap

[Clare's Normal]
00:02:878 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
00:10:021 (2) - Move 1 grid right?
00:15:735 (2) - Make symetric?
00:21:450 (2) - Perhaps, should same shapes of slider of 00:20:021 (2)?
00:22:878 (2) - Make symetric?
00:43:949 (1,1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:235 (1,1) - ^
01:20:021 (1,2,3) - Do you copy-paste with 01:17:164 (1,2,3)?
02:06:092 (1) - A bit too far from spinner
02:20:735 (1) - The startpoint is overlapped by slider, I think it's hidden. I know you want some cute pattern
02:38:592 (1) - Silence this spinner? Like [dksslqj's Autumn]?

Fixed


[Lunatic]
Lunatic? Hmm...... Basically, Lunatic must the star rating is 5,00. IMO

Hp Drain is 1 up..Though it became crazy when is safe because is it Lunatic Lol

01:10:021 (6,8) - Reverse this? no
01:18:592 (5) - Delete 01:18:503 (4) and move this slider backward to blue tick and extend?
01:19:842 (x) - Add note? add
01:58:057 (1) - Move forward to next red tick and cut short? okay
02:38:503 (1) - Silence this spinner? Like [dksslqj's Autumn]? fixed

[dksslqj's Autumn]
Change to "dksslqj's Hard"? Like Touhou diff? And It's seems easier than [Lunatic]

Lunatic is suggestions

Good song
(((((っ´Θ｀)っ <- STAR

Thank you mod and star>.<

Leorda wrote:

[dksslqj's Autumn]
Change to "dksslqj's Hard"? Like Touhou diff? And It's seems easier than [Lunatic]

Sakaue Nachi - Autumn one of deep flame

yes, It is touhou songs

but This song's name is Sakaue Nachi - Autumn one of deep flame

.Lol

Uh.... Random mod? (Ok, I'll tell you, you modded my map, and I want to thank you by... uh... counter-modding?)
Basically it's all suggestion, because I know I'm kinda bad modder XD

Clare's Normal
Hmm... I guess you don't like normal whistle, or think normal whistle isn't that suit well with the song. If not, how about putting some?
00:30:378 (2) - how about add clap in the start of the slider?
00:51:449 (4) - how about replace to finish? (though it can be too 'heavy'....)
01:13:592 (2) - how about put finish?
01:18:592 (3) - how about put clap in the end of the slider?
01:24:307 (3) - ^, or finish?
01:48:235 (1) - how about put clap?
02:07:164 (1) - remove new combo?
02:27:192 (T) - snap this timing? let's make that fountain comes out with slider. (though unnoticable, maybe?)
02:38:235 (2) - how about replace to finish? (maybe too 'heavy' though.)

dksslqj's Autumn
(grid는 tiny 기준)
(안니버는 한국어가 더 익숙할테니까 한국어로...?)
00:05:735 (1) - 개인적으로는.... 수평? (그런데 이대로도 큰 무리는 없을 것 같은데...?)
00:11:807 (2) - 슬라이더 끝을 왼쪽 1~2칸정도 이동? (별론가...)
00:18:235 (7) - 5,6번이랑 좀 더 모양이 되도록 맞춰보시는건 어떠신지? 그러니까 슬라이더 끝이 왼쪽 아래로 향하도록 해보는거죠.
00:28:949 (6) - 슬라이더의 처음과 끝이 같은 수평선에 위치하는건 어떤가요?
00:39:128 (2) - 슬라이더 끝을 오른쪽으로 한칸?
00:42:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 히트사운드를 노멀-노멀-클랩 순으로 배열해보는건 어떤가 해서요 (별론가 ._.)
00:47:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:57:878 (3) - 클랩 추가?
00:58:057 (4) - 슬라이더 시작에도 클랩을 넣어보는 것은 어떨까요?
01:19:128 (3) - 슬라이더 끝을 왼쪽으로 한칸?
02:23:949 (3) - 슬라이더 처음과 끝을 같은 수평선 위에 놓는것은 어떤가요?
02:35:021 (3) - 슬라이더 중간을 왼쪽으로 한칸, 위로 한칸?
예, 허접스러운 모딩, 죄송합니다 ._.

Lunatic
(grid = tiny grid)
Actually, this one is kinda too hard to mod by me, as I'm really bad with playing XD
00:05:557 (4) - I think moving this to right about some grids would be better?
00:11:985 (4) - ^
01:42:878 (1,2,3) - how about arrange the end of 1, 2, and the start of 3 as linear conformation?
01:48:235 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about moving one grid right?
01:56:807 (2,4) - how about make these sliders more symestric?
02:02:878 (3) - how about arrange the start & the end of the slder to same vertical line?
02:03:949 (4) - one grid down?
02:09:128 (3) - one grid right?

Oh, thanks for reading this crappy modding post till end XD

Nice map, so I star this~

今気づいたんだけどランク譜面もペンド譜面もみんな SYNC.ART'S feat. Sakaue Nachi だから統一した方がいいのかな？

１個古い譜面でなちさんでランクしてるのあるから、大丈夫かな。多分ｗ

dksslqj wrote:

I

DON'T

LIKE

JUMP

...

yeah

I

agree

with

you

...


But

no

jump

is

boring

and

I hate

stream

because I using tablet

I

like

stream

>_>

Here's a non scratchy sounding mp3.
If you accept it, change offset to 1985 and put the hit sound volume to the max.

Download: Autumn one of deep flame.mp3

okay~ changed.

mp3 changed redownload plz

kore yabaide

star~~

What about the hit sound volume being maxed?



Edit: Bubbled!

Try offset 1998 )+13ms for all timing lines and resnap all notes )

<Lunatic>
00:40:199 (5) - new combo please Q.Q

map more Nachi`s songs

boroken bubble -.-

compare http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmVYxhuMSjs to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WTVBqmlWEww
This mp3 sounds like the first one to me, which has "Misato" as the singer, not Sakaue Nachi!
Also I found the title as "The Deep Flame of Autumn Sky" (which looks a lot better than the title you're currently using)

If I'm right, then you're ganna have to change the artist and title >.<
"SYNC.ART'S feat. Misato - The Deep Flame of Autumn Sky" or "SYNC.ART'S - The Deep Flame of Autumn Sky -misato ver.-"?

bubble

Alace wrote:

<Lunatic>Try offset 1998 )+13ms for all timing lines and resnap all notes )

00:40:199 (5) - new combo please Q.Q

map more Nachi`s songs

thank you~ fixed

dksslqj wrote:

boroken bubble -.-

Lol

Shinxyn wrote:

compare http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmVYxhuMSjs to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WTVBqmlWEww
This mp3 sounds like the first one to me, which has "Misato" as the singer, not Sakaue Nachi!
Also I found the title as "The Deep Flame of Autumn Sky" (which looks a lot better than the title you're currently using)

If I'm right, then you're ganna have to change the artist and title >.<
"SYNC.ART'S feat. Misato - The Deep Flame of Autumn Sky" or "SYNC.ART'S - The Deep Flame of Autumn Sky -misato ver.-"?

oh! Lol I got mistakes XD
change the name and arits Fixed~

Alace wrote:

bubble

thank you!

Ranked

あ、MISATOでしたか すんませんｗ

This is a really great map! I love it... 10/10 <3