Sohta - Ikanaide

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Bunnrei
Timing Check!

BPM: 191
Offset: 744

Also, delete the timing point at 3224 (or change it to an inherited point).
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
General
  1. Ctrl+Shift+A


Insane
  1. 00:02:908 (2) - Stack or move to x: 208 y:208
  2. 00:17:045 (1) - Fix this so it stacks on both sides
  3. 00:19:559 (1) - Blanket
  4. 00:30:553 (4) - Fix this slider
  5. 00:39:977 (5) - Smooth this slider out
  6. 00:40:920 (1) - ^
  7. 00:47:517 (1) - Not perfectly stacked
  8. 01:05:422 (3) - ^
  9. 01:06:679 (6) - ^
  10. 01:16:417 (3) - ^


Normal
  1. 00:45:632 (2) - Stack?
  2. 00:54:741 (2) - Maybe move to x:452 y: 140
  3. 00:59:139 (5) - Stack
  4. 01:04:794 (3) - Not properly stacked
  5. 01:18:636 (1) - Spinner appears too soon

Very unique mapping style. I like it!

:)
Topic Starter
annika69

bigfeh wrote:

This mod was requested in bigfeh's 24h Modding Queue.

This one sounds interesting. Let's see how it goes

Normal

• Isn't CS2 a bit high for a normal diff? Maybe try CS3? fixed
• 00:13:276(3) - You mapped every full note from here until 00:23:014 except for 00:15:475 00:20:501 and 00:21:758. Consider adding notes at these times! fixed
• 00:30:867(1,2,3) - Incorrect spacing on 1-2 2-3. Since the timing between the notes is different, so should the distance (1 should be further way from 2 than 2 is from 3) fixed
• 00:35:894(1,2) - gap between the notes feels too empty. Consider adding a note fixed
• 00:38:093(1,2) - Making these return sliders should probably be a good idea fixed
• 00:38:093(2,3,4) - Maybe add notes between these? This part feels kinda empty too fixed
• 00:55:684(4) - What about making this slider1/2 a note longer to sync with vocals? I felt that it sounded ok as it is, so i kept it.

Insane

• 00:00:709(3) - This shouldn't be here. No music for this circle fixed
• 00:16:103(1,2) - Notes are too close to each other, giving the impression they they're only a 1/4th or a 1/2 note away instead of a full beat fixed
• 00:47:517(1,2,3) - I hear the piano here and see where this is coming from. But personally, I'd still map the 1/2 notes here (drums and all) EDIT: I felt like it was better before, so i changed it back and kept it
• 01:01:025(1,2,3) - Why is there a triple here? There is absolutely zero music to justify this. Consider deleting 2,3 fixed
• 01:03:381(1,2,3) - Exact same as above fixed
• 01:06:051(1,2,3) - ^ fixed
• 01:09:820(1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't get this stream either. Sounds, smells and looks overmapped to me - a slider should be better fixed
• 01:12:490(4,5,6) - Same triple thingy as the other triple thingies fixed


I like the diffs and how clean you've kept them. A few tweaks here and there and you'll have an excellent map!
Thank you! I'm quite impressed at how you fast you managed to mod this! You also explain things so its easy to understand, so keep it up! :)

osu_gangster wrote:

Timing Check!

BPM: 191
Offset: 744

Also, delete the timing point at 3224 (or change it to an inherited point).
Thanks! 8-)

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
General
  1. Ctrl+Shift+A


Insane
  1. 00:02:908 (2) - Stack or move to x: 208 y:208 fixed
  2. 00:17:045 (1) - Fix this so it stacks on both sides fixed
  3. 00:19:559 (1) - Blanket I thought it was ok like that, so i kept it like that
  4. 00:30:553 (4) - Fix this slider fixed
  5. 00:39:977 (5) - Smooth this slider out fixed
  6. 00:40:920 (1) - ^ fixed
  7. 00:47:517 (1) - Not perfectly stacked fixed
  8. 01:05:422 (3) - ^ fixed
  9. 01:06:679 (6) - ^ fixed
  10. 01:16:417 (3) - ^ fixed


Normal
  1. 00:45:632 (2) - Stack? fixed
  2. 00:54:741 (2) - Maybe move to x:452 y: 140 fixed
  3. 00:59:139 (5) - Stack fixed
  4. 01:04:794 (3) - Not properly stacked fixed
  5. 01:18:636 (1) - Spinner appears too soon fixed

Very unique mapping style. I like it!

:)
Thank you so much! :)
Bara-


[General]
You still need a Hard difficulty for a proper spread
The Tags conflict between both diffs, fix that please

[Normal]
00:00:744 (1,2) - It is better to not stack notes in the lowest diff
00:00:744 (1,2,1) - Improve the blanket. Try to make the sliders that way, the approachcircle of the 2 first notes fall together with the sliderborder. These should be the coordinates of the final slider 96:108 Start) - 96:180 (Grey point) - 144:232 (End). To things like these I usually refer to as "Improve blanket". If I say Improve blanket, it's up to you to change it (and that'll also help you in future maps)
00:14:565 (3) - Move to 204:200 to improve blanket
00:18:021 (3,1) - Improve blanket
00:18:335 (1,2,3) - Flow here isn't the greatest. You go down after (1), but after (2) you go backwards (compared to previous movement)
00:30:900 (1,2,3,1) - Distanece is weird in this part. Please change it
00:32:785 (3,1) - You should try to not overlap in any diff, as it looks ugly. I'll refer to issues like this as "Ugly/Bad Overlap" It's up to you to change it
00:36:555 (3,1) - Ugly overlap
00:42:524 (2) - Move to 231:239 for better blanket (Select the note, click coordinates in top right of the screen)
00:44:722 (1,2) - You should not stack in lower diffs
00:52:261 (4,1) - Ugly overlap
00:56:345 (2,3) - Improve blanket
00:59:172 (5,6) - Please don't stack
01:00:429 (1) - You are NOT allowed to use (such excessive SV changes in low difficulties)
01:09:853 (5,3) - Ugly overlap
01:16:764 (1,2) - Improve blanket
Overall, the diff is good, but needs more polishing

[Insane]
00:00:744 (1,2,3) - Slider looks really ugly, as they are so curvy
00:02:942 (2) - Try to make this slider look nicer

00:13:309 (1,4) - Stack these 2 better
00:14:565 (1,5) - Ugly overlap, try to make the end of (5) stack with the start of 1
00:24:461 (2) - Slider is too curvy, it thus looks really ugly
00:24:932 (4,5) - These 2 should be blanketing, not (2,4)
00:29:016 (3,5) - Ugly overlap
00:30:272 (2,4) - ^^
00:34:827 - Add a note here, as there are vocals
00:35:770 (5,6) - Ugly overlap
00:45:508 (4,1) - ^^
00:53:833 (2,3,4) - ^^
01:00:429 (4) - New combo. If you use a SV change, the next note MUST get a New combo (NC)
01:08:911 (3,5) - Ugly overlap
01:09:696 (6,1) - Improve blanket
01:11:110 (1,3) - Ugly overlap
01:15:508 (1,3) - Improve stack
01:20:848 (1) - Try to make this slider look nicer

Screenshot taken from the begin of Insane's mod, but you will understand it :P

These are mostly the big errors. After that, try to get more modders to mod it, but know, you do need a lot of work on this, sorry to say
Nevertheless, good luck!
Topic Starter
annika69

baraatje123 wrote:



[General]
You still need a Hard difficulty for a proper spread I'm having someone working on a hard right now ..
The Tags conflict between both diffs, fix that please fixed

[Normal]
00:00:744 (1,2) - It is better to not stack notes in the lowest diff I think its alright like that and not too hard to do so im keeping it
00:00:744 (1,2,1) - Improve the blanket. Try to make the sliders that way, the approachcircle of the 2 first notes fall together with the sliderborder. These should be the coordinates of the final slider 96:108 Start) - 96:180 (Grey point) - 144:232 (End). To things like these I usually refer to as "Improve blanket". If I say Improve blanket, it's up to you to change it (and that'll also help you in future maps) fixed
00:14:565 (3) - Move to 204:200 to improve blanket fixed
00:18:021 (3,1) - Improve blanket fixed
00:18:335 (1,2,3) - Flow here isn't the greatest. You go down after (1), but after (2) you go backwards (compared to previous movement) keeping, but will change if other modders say so
00:30:900 (1,2,3,1) - Distanece is weird in this part. Please change it fixed
00:32:785 (3,1) - You should try to not overlap in any diff, as it looks ugly. I'll refer to issues like this as "Ugly/Bad Overlap" It's up to you to change it fixed
00:36:555 (3,1) - Ugly overlap It dont look that bad when i play it so keeping it
00:42:524 (2) - Move to 231:239 for better blanket (Select the note, click coordinates in top right of the screen) fixed
00:44:722 (1,2) - You should not stack in lower diffs i dont think its too hard so keeping it, again, but may change if other modders think i should
00:52:261 (4,1) - Ugly overlap keeping, as said ^^^
00:56:345 (2,3) - Improve blanket fixed
00:59:172 (5,6) - Please don't stack ^^^
01:00:429 (1) - You are NOT allowed to use (such excessive SV changes in low difficulties) fixed
01:09:853 (5,3) - Ugly overlap keeping
01:16:764 (1,2) - Improve blanket fixed
Overall, the diff is good, but needs more polishing

[Insane]
00:00:744 (1,2,3) - Slider looks really ugly, as they are so curvy fixed
00:02:942 (2) - Try to make this slider look nicer fixed

00:13:309 (1,4) - Stack these 2 better fixed
00:14:565 (1,5) - Ugly overlap, try to make the end of (5) stack with the start of 1 I don't really think it really matters, don't notice it when playing
00:24:461 (2) - Slider is too curvy, it thus looks really ugly fixed
00:24:932 (4,5) - These 2 should be blanketing, not (2,4) I think it looks alright like that, and i feel it goes better like that with the song?? but may change it if other modders think i should
00:29:016 (3,5) - Ugly overlap I think it look "cooler" ??? as it is, but again, may change
00:30:272 (2,4) - ^^ as above
00:34:827 - Add a note here, as there are vocals fixed
00:35:770 (5,6) - Ugly overlap don't think it matter, so didnt change
00:45:508 (4,1) - ^^ I dont think its too bad, so didn't change, but will if other modders think i should
00:53:833 (2,3,4) - ^^ as above
01:00:429 (4) - New combo. If you use a SV change, the next note MUST get a New combo (NC) fixed
01:08:911 (3,5) - Ugly overlap dont think it matter so much so kept it
01:09:696 (6,1) - Improve blanket fixed
01:11:110 (1,3) - Ugly overlap fixed
01:15:508 (1,3) - Improve stack
01:20:848 (1) - Try to make this slider look nicer fixed

Screenshot taken from the begin of Insane's mod, but you will understand it :P

These are mostly the big errors. After that, try to get more modders to mod it, but know, you do need a lot of work on this, sorry to say
Nevertheless, good luck!
Thank you so much for mod! :)
Krauv
Ey, just a little reminder: Put krauv in the tags :D
Topic Starter
annika69

Krauv wrote:

Ey, just a little reminder: Put krauv in the tags :D
Sorry, fixed it now! :)
Starfall9908
From chaoslitz's modding queue

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:000 (1) - blanket
  2. 00:14:565 (3) - ^
  3. 00:41:581 (1) - ^
  4. 01:01:686 (3,2) - Having these sliders like this is a bad idea to me. When the player is supposed to tap (2) so is it too late because the player didn't notice it because (3) was overlapping it in a way which made it impossible to see it.
  5. 01:16:764 (1) - blanket


[Hard]
  1. 00:56:660 (4) - cruve this a bit

Too bad so am I not on a level that I can mod insane ;_;

Good luck with ranking
Topic Starter
annika69

nadapan wrote:

From chaoslitz's modding queue

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:000 (1) - blanket
  2. 00:14:565 (3) - ^
  3. 00:41:581 (1) - ^
  4. 01:01:686 (3,2) - Having these sliders like this is a bad idea to me. When the player is supposed to tap (2) so is it too late because the player didn't notice it because (3) was overlapping it in a way which made it impossible to see it.
  5. 01:16:764 (1) - blanket

Too bad so am I not on a level that I can mod insane ;_;

Good luck with ranking
Fixed all, thank you :)
h1b1k11


00:17:079 (1,2) - Fix blanket

00:32:785 (2,1) - Make these go like this

01:05:456 (3) - Fix end properly

TO THIS

01:19:435 (2,1,2,3,4) - Star pattern maybe?

01:20:691 (4) - Remove
00:32:314 - Add a slider like this one 00:31:843 (3)
00:32:942 - ^^
01:18:649 (1) - Spinner ends there
01:20:848 - Add slider
00:32:785 (3) - Slider ends here
^^00:33:728 (1) - Move that slider here
^^00:34:356 - Add circle?
00:57:916 (4) - Slider ends here
Topic Starter
annika69

imaikiseta wrote:



00:17:079 (1,2) - Fix blanket

00:32:785 (2,1) - Make these go like this

01:05:456 (3) - Fix end properly

TO THIS

01:19:435 (2,1,2,3,4) - Star pattern maybe? naah i think its alright like that

01:20:691 (4) - Remove
blank means fixed
00:32:785 (3) - Slider ends here
^^00:33:728 (1) - Move that slider here
^^00:34:356 - Add circle?
00:57:916 (4) - Slider ends here
Uhm im sure that you were supposed to have pictures for them, but they seems to be missing, but i did add the circle and change the sliders up a bit anyway in my way soo :?
thank you so much! :)
Krauv
Ey, sorry it took me so long, but I've updated my diff with these mods.
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Don't Go ~ Kaai Yuki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61058
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3257,23361
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Ikanaide
TitleUnicode:いかないで
Artist:Kaai Yuki
ArtistUnicode:歌愛ユキ
Creator:annika69
Version:Krauv's Hard
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid Sohta Ascan Dont Don't Go Krauv
BeatmapID:670047
BeatmapSetID:295767

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:7.7
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"ikanaide.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,13509,21310
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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23361,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
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61058,-100,4,2,2,80,0,1
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292,48,40011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,80,40325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,120,40639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,84,40953,1,12,0:0:0:0:
152,84,41267,6,0,L|92:80,2,60,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,156,41738,2,0,L|208:160,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,180,42209,5,12,0:0:0:0:
192,272,42524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,260,42838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,260,43466,6,0,P|336:200|352:140,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,108,43937,2,0,P|262:162|222:209,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,44408,2,0,P|144:276|124:304,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,112,45037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,112,45194,2,0,L|80:116,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,104,45665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,88,45979,6,0,B|416:84|416:84|448:92|460:124,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,192,46450,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,264,46607,2,0,B|460:264|460:264|448:260|448:260|414:298|367:283,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,47078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,47236,2,0,P|340:220|304:300,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,271,47707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,228,48178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,228,48492,6,0,P|84:196|84:168,1,60
168,256,48806,2,0,P|176:288|176:316,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,208,49120,2,0,P|252:184|244:100,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,148,49592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,185,49749,2,0,P|117:127|156:84,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,36,50220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,36,50377,2,0,L|332:40,1,60
404,44,50691,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,44,50848,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,51005,2,0,B|388:84|408:128|408:128|456:148,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,172,51476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
442,211,51634,2,0,B|412:224|412:224|392:268|408:308,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,52262,2,0,P|272:260|264:200,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,204,52733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,204,52890,2,0,P|184:263|192:322,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,88,53518,6,0,B|356:116|356:116|348:152,1,60
324,212,53833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,212,53990,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,144,54147,2,0,B|420:180|396:200|396:200|408:256,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,88,54775,6,0,B|156:116|156:116|164:152,1,60
188,212,55090,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,212,55246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,144,55404,2,0,B|92:180|116:200|116:200|104:256,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,324,55874,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,340,56031,2,0,B|244:344|244:344|288:332|296:280,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,56503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,144,56660,2,0,L|300:24,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,176,57602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,176,57759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,176,57916,6,0,P|408:288|300:292,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,59173,2,0,P|104:288|212:292,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,60429,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,40,61058,6,0,P|256:96|204:136,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,68,61529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,96,61686,2,0,P|300:156|244:196,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,200,62157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,62314,2,0,P|288:276|364:260,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,216,62785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,216,62942,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,200,63257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,196,63414,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,196,63571,2,0,B|72:192|72:192|32:176|32:128,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,60,64042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,60,64199,2,0,B|64:60|64:60|92:52|92:52|156:52,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,52,64827,2,0,B|356:52|356:52|384:68|384:108,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,65298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,249,65456,2,0,B|388:284|416:300|416:300|476:300,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,304,66084,6,0,B|228:300|228:300|192:312,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,340,66555,2,0,P|130:295|140:268,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,124,67026,2,0,P|200:176|188:248,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,92,67812,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,88,67969,2,0,P|274:147|277:224,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,276,68440,5,0,0:0:0:0:
388,312,68597,2,0,B|400:264|400:264|408:216|380:184,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,124,69068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,124,69225,2,0,B|320:172|320:172|312:220|340:252,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,68,70168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,68,70325,2,0,L|404:64,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,70796,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,52,71110,6,0,L|252:116,1,60
196,156,71424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,156,71581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,200,71738,2,0,P|132:260|140:328,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,52,72367,6,0,L|260:116,1,60
316,156,72681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,156,72838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,200,72995,2,0,P|380:260|372:328,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,73466,6,0,L|256:280,1,60
256,136,73937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,136,74094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,136,74251,2,0,B|252:172|252:172|244:216|192:228,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,236,74880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,75194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,96,75351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,96,75508,6,0,L|200:88,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,76450,2,0,L|280:208,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,336,77393,2,0,L|360:328,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,336,78335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78649,12,4,81162,0:0:0:0:
Asfand
2015-04-13 15:54 Asfano: hei du
2015-04-13 15:54 Asfano: norsk mapper
2015-04-13 15:54 Asfano: https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
2015-04-13 15:54 Asfano: les den
2015-04-13 15:55 annika69: ooh takk
2015-04-13 15:56 Asfano: hvis du vil så kan vi ta en titt på mappet ditt
2015-04-13 15:56 annika69: jaa, det hadde vært greit!!
2015-04-13 15:56 Asfano: si ifra når du er klar
2015-04-13 15:57 annika69: hmm hvilken da
2015-04-13 15:57 Asfano: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/664357 Kaai Yuki - Ikanaide [Insane]]
2015-04-13 15:57 Asfano: fant det i en random modding queue
2015-04-13 15:57 Asfano: forleden
2015-04-13 15:57 annika69: ahh ok
2015-04-13 15:57 annika69: men er klar nå
2015-04-13 15:57 Asfano: ta insane
2015-04-13 15:58 annika69: sånn
2015-04-13 15:58 Asfano: okei
2015-04-13 15:58 Asfano: så det var veldig nice
2015-04-13 15:58 Asfano: for en av dine første maps
2015-04-13 15:58 Asfano: var veldig imponert
2015-04-13 15:58 Asfano: -pc og
2015-04-13 15:58 annika69: heh vel takk
2015-04-13 15:59 Asfano: 00:00:744 (1,2,3) -
2015-04-13 15:59 Asfano: her liksom
2015-04-13 15:59 annika69: ja?
2015-04-13 15:59 Asfano: du lager en trekant right
2015-04-13 15:59 Asfano: med slider end 1 2 og slider head 3
2015-04-13 15:59 annika69: mhm
2015-04-13 15:59 Asfano: da må du faktisk lage en trekant
2015-04-13 15:59 Asfano: 2 er for nærme 1
2015-04-13 15:59 Asfano: hvis du trykker på 2
2015-04-13 16:00 Asfano: så kan du se i høyre hjørnet
2015-04-13 16:00 Asfano: distance spacing mellom previous og next
2015-04-13 16:00 annika69: hm
2015-04-13 16:00 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hckEq/9c65fd21d8.jpg
2015-04-13 16:00 Asfano: det gule der
2015-04-13 16:00 Asfano: i hjørnet
2015-04-13 16:00 Asfano: det gjør slikt at mappet ser finere ut
2015-04-13 16:01 annika69: hm ja
2015-04-13 16:01 Asfano: sånne ting går igjen ganske ofte
2015-04-13 16:01 Asfano: 00:02:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
2015-04-13 16:01 Asfano: denne delen og
2015-04-13 16:01 Asfano: her parrer du liksom
2015-04-13 16:02 Asfano: 00:02:314 (2) - og00:02:785 (1) -
2015-04-13 16:02 Asfano: 00:02:157 (1) - 00:02:628 (4) -
2015-04-13 16:02 Asfano: men de har forskjellig spacing imellom hverandre
2015-04-13 16:02 Asfano: du kan se det
2015-04-13 16:03 annika69: det er liksom egt ment sånn at det skal liksom bli større og større spacing liksom
2015-04-13 16:03 annika69: eller
2015-04-13 16:03 annika69: ja
2015-04-13 16:03 Asfano: ved å sette 00:02:628 (4) - ved siden av 1 som dette http://puu.sh/hckNZ/ff86fd96b4.jpg
2015-04-13 16:03 Asfano: og det samme med 00:02:785 (1) - 00:02:314 (2) -
2015-04-13 16:03 Asfano: så ser du at den første har 0.77 spacing og den andre har 0.8
2015-04-13 16:03 Asfano: man legger merke til det mens man spiller
2015-04-13 16:03 Asfano: eller jeg gjorde det ihvertfall
2015-04-13 16:03 annika69: ohh
2015-04-13 16:04 Asfano: det er litt ekkel flyt
2015-04-13 16:04 annika69: hmm i see
2015-04-13 16:04 Asfano: men det var et morosomt mønster da!
2015-04-13 16:05 Asfano: 00:14:094 (4) -
2015-04-13 16:05 Asfano: om du skal stacke ting som dette
2015-04-13 16:05 Asfano: så må det faktisk være stacket og
2015-04-13 16:05 annika69: oi sann ja
2015-04-13 16:06 Asfano: det er ganske lett om du tar å flytter slideren som dette
2015-04-13 16:06 Asfano: venter på puush
2015-04-13 16:06 Asfano: sec
2015-04-13 16:06 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcl05/60eb26cae8.jpg
2015-04-13 16:06 Asfano: da kan du plassere den på sliderend perfekt
2015-04-13 16:06 Asfano: og så bare dra den tilbake til plassen sin
2015-04-13 16:07 annika69: ooh ja
2015-04-13 16:07 Asfano: 00:14:094 (4,5) - her bommer du litt med flyten imo
2015-04-13 16:07 Asfano: les den artikkel tingen
2015-04-13 16:07 Asfano: så ser du hvorfor
2015-04-13 16:08 Asfano: 5 er litt for langt nede
2015-04-13 16:08 annika69: ah
2015-04-13 16:08 annika69: hvor burde jeg flytte den da
2015-04-13 16:09 Asfano: det spørs litt
2015-04-13 16:09 Asfano: på hva du vil åpnå
2015-04-13 16:10 Asfano: hm
2015-04-13 16:10 annika69: tjaaa er ikke helt sikker selv egt ;;;
2015-04-13 16:10 Asfano: hadde sotte den på sliderhead 5
2015-04-13 16:10 Asfano: err 1
2015-04-13 16:11 Asfano: sånn her tror jeg http://puu.sh/hclhi/1877c2045d.jpg
2015-04-13 16:11 Asfano: men det ser du jo selv
2015-04-13 16:12 Asfano: 00:14:565 (1) - denne kurver for mye og
2015-04-13 16:12 annika69: oooh ja god idè
2015-04-13 16:12 Asfano: om du prøver å teppe 00:15:194 (3) -
2015-04-13 16:13 annika69: ja
2015-04-13 16:13 Asfano: et tips
2015-04-13 16:13 Asfano: du burde bruke approach sirklene
2015-04-13 16:13 Asfano: til å lage bedre tepper medsliders
2015-04-13 16:14 annika69: ty
2015-04-13 16:14 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hclpM/7c4fbd3505.jpg
2015-04-13 16:15 Asfano: se approach sirkelen til 3
2015-04-13 16:15 Asfano: bare herm etter den
2015-04-13 16:15 annika69: ja
2015-04-13 16:15 Asfano: og når du har gjort det
2015-04-13 16:15 Asfano: så må du være forsiktig med utgangen på den slideren
2015-04-13 16:15 Asfano: liksom flowen er rar
2015-04-13 16:16 annika69: mhm
2015-04-13 16:16 annika69: men vent om jeg tepper den istedet med 5
2015-04-13 16:16 annika69: er det noe god ide eller
2015-04-13 16:16 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcly2/de73ef14d6.jpg
2015-04-13 16:17 Asfano: ser du den dingsen i midten der
2015-04-13 16:17 Asfano: den skal peke mot midten av sirklen du tepper
2015-04-13 16:17 annika69: ooo ok
2015-04-13 16:19 Asfano: si ifra når du er done
2015-04-13 16:19 Asfano: så fortsetter jeg
2015-04-13 16:20 annika69: ohh men liksom tenkte om jeg kunne teppe disse noe sånn som dette eller http://puu.sh/hclLI/fbb4f12172.jpg
2015-04-13 16:21 annika69: om det blir noe bra
2015-04-13 16:21 Asfano: ta å link have du bruker
2015-04-13 16:21 annika69: what
2015-04-13 16:21 Asfano: link tiden
2015-04-13 16:21 Asfano: kopier sirklene du jobber med
2015-04-13 16:21 Asfano: og bare pase ic hatten
2015-04-13 16:22 annika69: 00:15:194 (3) -
2015-04-13 16:22 Asfano: joa
2015-04-13 16:22 Asfano: men om du endrer 5
2015-04-13 16:22 Asfano: så må du endre 00:14:565 (1) -
2015-04-13 16:22 Asfano: den og
2015-04-13 16:22 Asfano: de burde vøre like
2015-04-13 16:22 Asfano: eller nei
2015-04-13 16:22 Asfano: tror du har feil rytme her
2015-04-13 16:22 Asfano: sec
2015-04-13 16:22 annika69: y
2015-04-13 16:23 Asfano: ja det burde være sånn
2015-04-13 16:23 Asfano: venter på puush sec
2015-04-13 16:23 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hclVE/a51bd055cb.jpg
2015-04-13 16:23 annika69: ah ok
2015-04-13 16:24 annika69: men hvilken er det nå
2015-04-13 16:24 Asfano: 00:14:565 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
2015-04-13 16:24 Asfano: den delen der
2015-04-13 16:24 Asfano: burde du bytte med det jeg linka
2015-04-13 16:25 annika69: ok
2015-04-13 16:25 annika69: ooh det høres faktisk bedre ut ja
2015-04-13 16:26 Asfano: da kan du parre 1 og 7 blir det vel
2015-04-13 16:26 Asfano: slik at de har samme fasong
2015-04-13 16:26 Asfano: men går i forskjellige retninger
2015-04-13 16:26 annika69: jaa
2015-04-13 16:26 annika69: eller vent hvordan mener du
2015-04-13 16:27 Asfano: om den ene går sånn
2015-04-13 16:27 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcmgl/0e52c67942.jpg
2015-04-13 16:27 Asfano: så går den andre motsatt
2015-04-13 16:28 Asfano: nå lagde jeg bare to random sliders
2015-04-13 16:28 annika69: ahhh ja
2015-04-13 16:28 Asfano: siden det er like toner abre motsatt
2015-04-13 16:28 Asfano: ihvertfall sånn jeg hører det
2015-04-13 16:29 annika69: men hvordan kan de notene i midten gå da
2015-04-13 16:30 Asfano: uhm
2015-04-13 16:30 Asfano: det er vel opp til deg
2015-04-13 16:30 Asfano: lagde noe randomt noe som jeg ikke likte selv
2015-04-13 16:30 Asfano: hvis du vil se
2015-04-13 16:30 annika69: jaa
2015-04-13 16:31 Asfano: du burde ikke kopiere dette
2015-04-13 16:31 Asfano: var veldig dprlig
2015-04-13 16:31 Asfano: haha
2015-04-13 16:31 annika69: ohh vel alright
2015-04-13 16:31 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcmtl/f6993ef223.jpg
2015-04-13 16:32 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcmtL/97010d88dd.jpg
2015-04-13 16:32 Asfano: men du finner nok ut av noe
2015-04-13 16:32 annika69: hmm ja gjør vel det
2015-04-13 16:33 Asfano: 00:17:079 (1,2) - syntes dette flower rart
2015-04-13 16:33 Asfano: men det er opp til deg
2015-04-13 16:33 Asfano: 00:18:649 (2,3) - teppefeil
2015-04-13 16:34 annika69: ups ja
2015-04-13 16:34 Asfano: la meg bytte skin
2015-04-13 16:34 Asfano: sec
2015-04-13 16:35 Asfano: 00:19:592 (1) - denne slideren går feil vei imo
2015-04-13 16:36 Asfano: denne veien er riktigere http://puu.sh/hcmFO/28598dba9e.jpg
2015-04-13 16:36 Asfano: men sånt legger du merke til etter du leser den artikkelen jeg sendte
2015-04-13 16:36 annika69: jaa
2015-04-13 16:36 Asfano: 00:20:534 (4,5,1) - her høres det ut som om musikken går opp og ned
2015-04-13 16:36 Asfano: men du fortsetter bare nedover
2015-04-13 16:36 Asfano: det går liksom
2015-04-13 16:36 Asfano: tum tum tummm
2015-04-13 16:37 Asfano: opp ned opp
2015-04-13 16:37 Asfano: mener
2015-04-13 16:37 Asfano: ned opp ned
2015-04-13 16:37 annika69: hm
2015-04-13 16:37 Asfano: 00:20:848 (1) - den burde du endre på og syntes jeg
2015-04-13 16:38 Asfano: 00:20:848 (1,2,1,2,3) - tror dette har feil rytme
2015-04-13 16:38 annika69: hmm men hvordan ellers ville du ha gjort den daa
2015-04-13 16:39 Asfano: 00:20:848 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2015-04-13 16:39 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcmXU/c9b113d870.jpg
2015-04-13 16:41 annika69: ooh ok
2015-04-13 16:41 Asfano: 00:23:047 (8) - situational note
2015-04-13 16:41 Asfano: om du vil ha den med eller ikke
2015-04-13 16:41 Asfano: 00:23:675 (3) - hører ikke en sånn kurve
2015-04-13 16:41 annika69: men på 8 hva mener du med det
2015-04-13 16:41 Asfano: du burde være forsiktig med når du bruker sånne halvsirkel glidere
2015-04-13 16:42 Asfano: du kan ha en single note der
2015-04-13 16:42 Asfano: om du vil
2015-04-13 16:42 annika69: åjaa
2015-04-13 16:42 annika69: hmm kan kanskje gjør den 3 litt mindre kurvet
2015-04-13 16:42 annika69: eller om du ikke har noe annet
2015-04-13 16:43 Asfano: hm
2015-04-13 16:43 Asfano: det velger du sel
2015-04-13 16:43 Asfano: vet ikke hva du følger
2015-04-13 16:43 Asfano: ser ut som vokal
2015-04-13 16:43 Asfano: hvis du følger vokal er det feil rytme
2015-04-13 16:44 annika69: hmm tja det er egt litt begge deler men
2015-04-13 16:44 Asfano: dette er vokalen jeg hører
2015-04-13 16:44 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcndq/8bcfbf704d.png
2015-04-13 16:45 annika69: oo det hørtes litt bedre ut ja
2015-04-13 16:45 Asfano: 00:24:932 (4,5) -
2015-04-13 16:45 Asfano: da burde kanskje endre dette og
2015-04-13 16:46 annika69: jaa
2015-04-13 16:47 Asfano: 0http://puu.sh/hcnme/2e6c2d8c6d.png
2015-04-13 16:47 Asfano: til det
2015-04-13 16:47 Asfano: kanskje
2015-04-13 16:47 Asfano: skal linke hele vokalen
2015-04-13 16:47 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcnnO/312c45437b.png
2015-04-13 16:47 Asfano: sånn tror jeg
2015-04-13 16:47 annika69: ty
2015-04-13 16:49 Asfano: kul sang
2015-04-13 16:49 annika69: heh ja
2015-04-13 16:49 Asfano: 00:34:670 (2,3,4) - endre rytme her
2015-04-13 16:50 Asfano: 00:34:984 (4) - ikke så rund slider
2015-04-13 16:50 Asfano: 00:35:927 (7) - rund slider
2015-04-13 16:50 Asfano: gør på lydene
2015-04-13 16:50 Asfano: den ene høres rund ut
2015-04-13 16:50 Asfano: mens den andre gjør ikke det
2015-04-13 16:50 annika69: ah ja
2015-04-13 16:51 Asfano: du burde jobbe litt med de sliderne
2015-04-13 16:51 Asfano: de er den del av mange av mønstra og
2015-04-13 16:51 annika69: mhm
2015-04-13 16:51 Asfano: så det burde du justere sammen med dem
2015-04-13 16:51 Asfano: imo
2015-04-13 16:51 annika69: jaa
2015-04-13 16:51 Asfano: kan gi et eksempel på flyt osv om du vil
2015-04-13 16:51 Asfano: liksom hva jeg mener
2015-04-13 16:51 annika69: ja sikkert
2015-04-13 16:52 Asfano: så forstår du liksom hva du må endre selv
2015-04-13 16:52 annika69: ja
2015-04-13 16:52 Asfano: 00:54:775 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) -
2015-04-13 16:52 Asfano: la oss ta den delen
2015-04-13 16:53 Asfano: bruker du mus
2015-04-13 16:53 Asfano: ?
2015-04-13 16:53 annika69: nei, tablet
2015-04-13 16:53 Asfano: har du en mus
2015-04-13 16:53 Asfano: er lettere å vise da
2015-04-13 16:53 annika69: jaa
2015-04-13 16:53 Asfano: oi 2 sec
2015-04-13 16:53 Asfano: noen føkker med noe
2015-04-13 16:53 Asfano: brb
2015-04-13 16:54 annika69: np
2015-04-13 16:56 Asfano: sorry back
2015-04-13 16:56 Asfano: ok så her
2015-04-13 16:56 Asfano: 00:54:775 (1,2,3) -
2015-04-13 16:56 Asfano: om du følger med musa
2015-04-13 16:56 annika69: ja
2015-04-13 16:56 Asfano: ganske slapt igjennom
2015-04-13 16:56 annika69: mhm
2015-04-13 16:57 Asfano: 00:53:518 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-04-13 16:57 Asfano: unnskyld
2015-04-13 16:57 Asfano: herfra
2015-04-13 16:57 annika69: oi ja
2015-04-13 16:57 Asfano: nei
2015-04-13 16:57 Asfano: var et annet sted jeg fant dette
2015-04-13 16:57 Asfano: nvm
2015-04-13 16:57 Asfano: eller
2015-04-13 16:57 Asfano: nei nvm
2015-04-13 16:58 annika69: uhh ja ok
2015-04-13 16:58 Asfano: du ser hvordan du flyter
2015-04-13 16:58 Asfano: det går mot klokken
2015-04-13 16:58 annika69: mhm??
2015-04-13 16:58 Asfano: 00:53:518 (1,2) -
2015-04-13 16:58 Asfano: med klokken
2015-04-13 16:58 Asfano: 00:53:833 (2,3) - mot klokken
2015-04-13 16:58 annika69: ååh jeg ser
2015-04-13 16:58 Asfano: 00:54:147 (4) -
2015-04-13 16:58 Asfano: og med klokken
2015-04-13 16:58 annika69: tror jeg uh eh
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: det var bra
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: eller
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: du tar å setter press på 00:53:990 (3) -
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: den tar å står ut veldig
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: 00:53:990 (3,4) -
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: de to rather
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: siden det er da du bytter flow direksjon
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: 00:54:775 (1,2,3) - det er ukonsistent her
2015-04-13 16:59 annika69: ahh ok
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: er ikke samme flyt
2015-04-13 16:59 Asfano: og ikke samme rytme
2015-04-13 17:00 Asfano: selvom det er helt like deler
2015-04-13 17:00 annika69: hm
2015-04-13 17:01 annika69: tror du jeg bare kan ha liksom alla noe som det på den delen rett før der da
2015-04-13 17:01 Asfano: liksom du har potensialet til å gjøre det veldig kult
2015-04-13 17:02 Asfano: 00:55:874 (1,2,3,4,1) - denne delen går kanskje motsatt av klokka ->mot klokka ->motsatt av klokka
2015-04-13 17:02 Asfano: mens de to forrgie går mot klokka ->motsatt-> mot
2015-04-13 17:02 Asfano: det passer vldig fint med musikken
2015-04-13 17:02 annika69: hm ja
2015-04-13 17:03 Asfano: det er vel mer avanserte konsepter
2015-04-13 17:03 Asfano: du burde gjøre de andre tingene først
2015-04-13 17:03 Asfano: rytmefeil som første pri
2015-04-13 17:03 Asfano: det burde du bli litt bedre på
2015-04-13 17:04 Asfano: så burde du kanskje se litt på det om flyt osv
2015-04-13 17:04 Asfano: obs sånn teppefeil etc
2015-04-13 17:04 annika69: ja yess
2015-04-13 17:05 Asfano: 00:56:031 (2,3,4) -
2015-04-13 17:05 Asfano: den delen hade jeg mappet sånn her btw
2015-04-13 17:05 annika69: oja ja
2015-04-13 17:05 Asfano: puush......
2015-04-13 17:05 annika69: oh
2015-04-13 17:05 annika69: vel
2015-04-13 17:05 Asfano: http://puu.sh/hcoqr/a29d02fe23.jpg
2015-04-13 17:06 Asfano: sånn uten halvsirkelglidere overalt
2015-04-13 17:06 annika69: heh
2015-04-13 17:06 annika69: men ja
2015-04-13 17:06 Asfano: kan ta å poste denne loggen på threaden din
2015-04-13 17:06 Asfano: så kan du se tilbake
2015-04-13 17:07 Asfano: lykke til!!!
-PC
Hallo, norsk mapper! :D

[Generelt]
Pausen ved starten er på forskjellige tidspunkt i Normal/Insane og Hard. Antar at det går helt fint, men sier da fra uansett.

[Normal]

  • Synes egentlig hele denne banen burde bli sett gjennom et par ganger av deg selv for å fikse teppe feil, eller finne eventuelle plasser å teppe rutsjebaner.

  1. 00:03:256 (3) - Mønsteret flyter litt bedre om denne sirkelen går langs ei linje, slik:
  2. 00:20:848 (1) - Vurder å bruke et rødt punkt for å få en penere kurve og skape et teppe til 00:19:592 (3) -
  3. 00:22:105 (3) - Denne rutsjebanen ser bedre ut og er lettere å spille om den har en mindre kurve. Samtidig kan du teppe den rundt 00:21:791 (2) -
  4. 00:39:696 - til 00:40:953 - Hvorfor er det plutselig mindre sirkler og rutsjebaner på denne delen? Synes intensiteten er like sterk som den var i forrige takt.
  5. 00:46:922 - Kunne også ha vært noe her. En sirkel ville nok ha passet best tror jeg.
  6. 01:00:429 (1) - Litt mindre kurve for å få bedre flyt til 01:01:372 (2) -
  7. 01:10:796 (1) - Endre rutsjebane punktene slik at den former seg langs 01:11:738 (3) -
  8. 01:12:681 (1) - Forskjell i distanse mellom 01:11:738 (3) - og 01:12:995 (2) -
  9. 01:11:738 (3,2) - Disse burde være helt like og rutsjebaneinngangen til 01:11:738 (3) - burde ligge på rutsjebaneutgangen til 01:12:995 (2) -
  10. 01:14:565 (3) - Litt for kurvet synes jeg.


[Krauv's Hard]

  • I think this diff has too many stacks. I'll adress the ones I dislike, the rest are probably cool.
    Other than that, the map flows very well and looks neat!

  1. 00:35:141 (7,1) - Move upwards, closer to the slider. They are somewhat confusing to sightread.
  2. 00:41:738 (2) - Could move a tad further away from 00:41:267 (1) - as to avoid too much zig zag motion.
  3. 00:45:037 (4) - Stacking this is alright I guess, though it feels like another point where you'd want to map distance with the vocals.
  4. 00:53:833 (2,3,2,3) - These are cool!
  5. 00:56:660 (4) - If this is going to go straight up, move it to x: 300
  6. 00:57:602 (5,6) - These could really be spaced, perhaps by making a line or a triangle. I'd personally suggest this solution (ignore the previous bullet point if you curve the slider like this, I guess):
    keep in mind I placed a circle instead of repeating the slider though. I don't know if you'll like this and I don't expect you to really.
  7. 01:02:785 (6,7) - Would rather not have these be stacks in the kiai part. The map should feel the most interesting here in my opinion.
  8. 01:09:225 (4) - Improve blanket by adding another point.
  9. 01:13:937 (2,3) - Again, I don't feel like these fit the difficulty and kiai. Especially when there are vocals.


[Insane]
Jeg føler denne vanskelighetsgraden kunne trenge mer hopp og sprett i kiai delen. Du kan vel øke distansen litt mer mellom noen av hoppene her, og kanskje ha litt større distanse mellom sirklene i kraftigere deler av sangen.
Denne har fullt av feiljusterte tepper, så jeg kommer tilbake og modder den siden. Si fra om du ønsker mod når du føler at masse er fikset, så modder jeg vanskelighetsgraden så fort jeg har tid!!

EDIT:
2015-04-16 20:35 annika69: heei, ble ferdig med å fikse mappen min, så lurte på om du ville ta en titt på den??
2015-04-16 20:36 -PC: har 25 minutter før jeg skal stikke men kan se ^^
2015-04-16 20:36 annika69: Oja nei du trenger ikke å stresse med det altså
2015-04-16 20:36 annika69: kan vente
2015-04-16 20:36 -PC: neida, men kan se i full fart og heller fortsette senere ^^
2015-04-16 20:36 -PC: ikke så mye å gjøre på uansett lol
2015-04-16 20:36 annika69: heh ok
2015-04-16 20:37 -PC: 00:01:529 (2) - spacing er ukonsistent
2015-04-16 20:37 -PC: slå av grid snap og flytt den til den er 1.3x unna hver slider
2015-04-16 20:37 -PC: http://puu.sh/hgdmk/3da669cd42.png
2015-04-16 20:37 annika69: hmm ok
2015-04-16 20:38 -PC: kan spille den en gang først forresten
2015-04-16 20:39 -PC: ville vært litt enklere
2015-04-16 20:40 -PC: veldig ncie
2015-04-16 20:40 annika69: oooo :D
2015-04-16 20:41 annika69: ty
2015-04-16 20:41 -PC: 00:18:335 (1) - dette var litt merkelig da
2015-04-16 20:41 annika69: ahh
2015-04-16 20:44 -PC: hmm
2015-04-16 20:44 -PC: er ikke sikker
2015-04-16 20:45 -PC: 00:17:707 (3) - du kan sette denne på x:97 y:115 om du vil, så blir det en perfekt linje fra sliderend på (1)
2015-04-16 20:45 annika69: k
2015-04-16 20:45 -PC: hmmm
2015-04-16 20:46 -PC: ok
2015-04-16 20:46 -PC: hva om du gjør noe slikt http://puu.sh/hgdVK/37fcaca022.jpg
2015-04-16 20:46 -PC: vet ikke om det passer med stilen din
2015-04-16 20:46 -PC: men det er liksom (4) som er på 00:18:806 (2) - og slider (1) begynner på 00:18:963 (3) -
2015-04-16 20:46 annika69: hm vel kan se
2015-04-16 20:47 -PC: 00:18:178 (4) - denne blir litt for nær slideren bak da
2015-04-16 20:47 -PC: så er ikke helt sikker
2015-04-16 20:47 -PC: men du kunne vel ha flyttet 00:17:079 (1,2,3) - alle disse litt til venstre for å finjustere spacingen
2015-04-16 20:47 -PC: om du vil ta i bruk patternet mitt da haha
2015-04-16 20:48 annika69: hm ja
2015-04-16 20:48 -PC: er lov å bruke litt mer spacing her, spesielt mellom sliders :P
2015-04-16 20:49 -PC: 00:21:791 (4) - denne kan for eksempel være lengre unna, det ser ikke så fint ut slik den er atm
2015-04-16 20:49 annika69: ohh ja
2015-04-16 20:50 -PC: 00:25:560 (3) - x:299 y:31? eller om du liker det legg den 1.3x unna for å beholde spacing da. http://puu.sh/hgedT/7ee5e9ba53.jpg
2015-04-16 20:51 -PC: 00:23:833 (2,3) - vet ikke om du er enig med at disse burde vært omvendt etter vokalene? sirkel og så slider
2015-04-16 20:52 -PC: eller vent
2015-04-16 20:52 -PC: 00:23:833 (2) - denne kan jo starte senere og være like lang som 00:24:618 (6) -
2015-04-16 20:53 annika69: hvor sent
2015-04-16 20:53 -PC: 00:23:990 -
2015-04-16 20:53 annika69: eller nei
2015-04-16 20:53 annika69: ja
2015-04-16 20:53 -PC: til 00:24:304 -
2015-04-16 20:53 annika69: ja tror jeg har det sånt
2015-04-16 20:53 -PC: som det er?
2015-04-16 20:53 annika69: sånn ups
2015-04-16 20:54 annika69: nei som du sa
2015-04-16 20:54 -PC: oh yeah
2015-04-16 20:58 -PC: 00:37:969 (3,1) - den plutselige spacinga her ødelegger litt flowet du skapte med de sirklene før
2015-04-16 20:58 annika69: hm
2015-04-16 20:59 -PC: den rette plasseringa etter flow, såvidt jeg vet, er x:343 y:154
2015-04-16 20:59 annika69: y
2015-04-16 21:01 -PC: hm
2015-04-16 21:01 -PC: tror faktisk du har prøvd litt for mye å skape flow og slikt
2015-04-16 21:02 -PC: likte det litt bedre sånn det var før jeg haha
2015-04-16 21:02 annika69: heh vel
2015-04-16 21:02 -PC: så lenge du er fornøyd og mener det er slik du vil stilen skal være
2015-04-16 21:02 annika69: :o
2015-04-16 21:02 annika69: jaja
2015-04-16 21:03 -PC: er litt sånn småpirk og sånn, som at nesten alle sliders er forskjellige
2015-04-16 21:03 -PC: men orker liksom ikke nevne noen av de
2015-04-16 21:03 -PC: blir for tungvint
2015-04-16 21:03 -PC: og det er vel ikke noe farlig for ditt første map anyway
2015-04-16 21:03 annika69: oooh
2015-04-16 21:03 annika69: hm kan se om jeg kan fikse litt mer senere, selv da
2015-04-16 21:03 -PC: yeah
2015-04-16 21:04 -PC: 00:44:723 (1,2,3,4) - [http://puu.sh/hgf8l/0793a51f2f.jpg forslag]
2015-04-16 21:04 -PC: 00:45:351 (3) - synes ihvertfall du burde flytte denne litt lengre unna sliderend av (1) da
2015-04-16 21:06 -PC: kanskje noen av dine 1/2 slidere kunne ha flere kurver også, som 00:50:848 (1) - denne ville passet inn bedre med 00:51:162 (2) - hvis den kurvet seg litt mer nedover imo
2015-04-16 21:06 annika69: jaa
2015-04-16 21:07 -PC: 00:55:089 (7) - kanskje litt for skarp kurve. er litt mye når man kan se hvor mange polygons som er brukt i en slider haha, ser kantene på sliderborder
2015-04-16 21:08 -PC: 00:56:031 (2) - ^ kunne hatt samme form som denne perhaps
2015-04-16 21:08 annika69: hm ja
2015-04-16 21:08 -PC: 00:57:759 - kunne hatt en sirkel her
2015-04-16 21:10 -PC: 00:58:545 (3,5,2,1) - overlap alle disse bedre. slå av grid snap og distance snap og flytt de til de passer fint. antar det er slik du overappet de fra starten av og så skjedde noe perhaps
2015-04-16 21:11 -PC: 01:01:686 (4) - bedre overlapping: ctrl+g > snap til sirkel > ctrl+g
2015-04-16 21:11 annika69: ja
2015-04-16 21:11 -PC: 01:01:058 (1,2,3) - dette er litt awkward bevegelse
2015-04-16 21:12 annika69: hmm har du noen forslag til hva jeg kan gjøre der eller
2015-04-16 21:12 -PC: ^ siden det er kiai delen kan spacing være litt mer fritt imo. du kunne kanskje lage et jump på denne delen da, kanskje slik http://puu.sh/hgfFb/4287b85694.jpg
2015-04-16 21:13 -PC: da får du bevegelse opp venstre ned venstre
2015-04-16 21:13 annika69: ja
2015-04-16 21:13 -PC: 01:02:785 (5,6) - gjør noe med denne, vet ikke hva, men den trenger litt mer even spacing
2015-04-16 21:15 -PC: 01:07:340 (2) - kanskje litt for skarp kurve
2015-04-16 21:15 annika69: yuss
2015-04-16 21:16 -PC: liker egentlig resten derifra ganske godt
2015-04-16 21:16 -PC: fint map
2015-04-16 21:16 annika69: åå tusen takk :)))
2015-04-16 21:16 annika69: og tusen takk mod!!
2015-04-16 21:16 -PC: :)
Stilig sang og alle vanskelighetsgrader var gøy å spille! Trenger nok bare litt mer jobb på Insane så er den godkjent av meg haha. Lykke til!
Topic Starter
annika69

-PC wrote:

Hallo, norsk mapper! :D

[Generelt]
Pausen ved starten er på forskjellige tidspunkt i Normal/Insane og Hard. Antar at det går helt fint, men sier da fra uansett. - Jaaa, så lenge det ikke gjør det unrankable tror jeg at det ikke egt har noe å si for meg??

[Normal]

  • Synes egentlig hele denne banen burde bli sett gjennom et par ganger av deg selv for å fikse teppe feil, eller finne eventuelle plasser å teppe rutsjebaner.

  1. 00:03:256 (3) - Mønsteret flyter litt bedre om denne sirkelen går langs ei linje, slik:
  2. 00:20:848 (1) - Vurder å bruke et rødt punkt for å få en penere kurve og skape et teppe til 00:19:592 (3) -
  3. 00:22:105 (3) - Denne rutsjebanen ser bedre ut og er lettere å spille om den har en mindre kurve. Samtidig kan du teppe den rundt 00:21:791 (2) -
  4. 00:39:696 - til 00:40:953 - Hvorfor er det plutselig mindre sirkler og rutsjebaner på denne delen? Synes intensiteten er like sterk som den var i forrige takt.
  5. 00:46:922 - Kunne også ha vært noe her. En sirkel ville nok ha passet best tror jeg.
  6. 01:00:429 (1) - Litt mindre kurve for å få bedre flyt til 01:01:372 (2) -
  7. 01:10:796 (1) - Endre rutsjebane punktene slik at den former seg langs 01:11:738 (3) -
  8. 01:12:681 (1) - Forskjell i distanse mellom 01:11:738 (3) - og 01:12:995 (2) -
  9. 01:11:738 (3,2) - Disse burde være helt like og rutsjebaneinngangen til 01:11:738 (3) - burde ligge på rutsjebaneutgangen til 01:12:995 (2) -
  10. 01:14:565 (3) - Litt for kurvet synes jeg.

Fikset alt heh ^^

[Krauv's Hard]

  • I think this diff has too many stacks. I'll adress the ones I dislike, the rest are probably cool.
    Other than that, the map flows very well and looks neat!

  1. 00:35:141 (7,1) - Move upwards, closer to the slider. They are somewhat confusing to sightread.
  2. 00:41:738 (2) - Could move a tad further away from 00:41:267 (1) - as to avoid too much zig zag motion.
  3. 00:45:037 (4) - Stacking this is alright I guess, though it feels like another point where you'd want to map distance with the vocals.
  4. 00:53:833 (2,3,2,3) - These are cool!
  5. 00:56:660 (4) - If this is going to go straight up, move it to x: 300
  6. 00:57:602 (5,6) - These could really be spaced, perhaps by making a line or a triangle. I'd personally suggest this solution (ignore the previous bullet point if you curve the slider like this, I guess):
    keep in mind I placed a circle instead of repeating the slider though. I don't know if you'll like this and I don't expect you to really.
  7. 01:02:785 (6,7) - Would rather not have these be stacks in the kiai part. The map should feel the most interesting here in my opinion.
  8. 01:09:225 (4) - Improve blanket by adding another point.
  9. 01:13:937 (2,3) - Again, I don't feel like these fit the difficulty and kiai. Especially when there are vocals.


[Insane]
Jeg føler denne vanskelighetsgraden kunne trenge mer hopp og sprett i kiai delen. Du kan vel øke distansen litt mer mellom noen av hoppene her, og kanskje ha litt større distanse mellom sirklene i kraftigere deler av sangen.
Denne har fullt av feiljusterte tepper, så jeg kommer tilbake og modder den siden. Si fra om du ønsker mod når du føler at masse er fikset, så modder jeg vanskelighetsgraden så fort jeg har tid!! - Skal bare først fikse den utifra modden til Asfano. Kan ta litt tid da sidn det er noe rytme endringer og sånne greier, men kan vel si ifra når den er klar :?
Stilig sang og alle vanskelighetsgrader var gøy å spille! Trenger nok bare litt mer jobb på Insane så er den godkjent av meg haha. Lykke til! Tuuusen takk! :)
Krauv
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-PC wrote:

[Krauv's Hard]

  • I think this diff has too many stacks. I'll adress the ones I dislike, the rest are probably cool.
    Other than that, the map flows very well and looks neat!

  1. 00:35:141 (7,1) - Move upwards, closer to the slider. They are somewhat confusing to sightread. fixed that
  2. 00:41:738 (2) - Could move a tad further away from 00:41:267 (1) - as to avoid too much zig zag motion. left as is
  3. 00:45:037 (4) - Stacking this is alright I guess, though it feels like another point where you'd want to map distance with the vocals. spread out a bit
  4. 00:53:833 (2,3,2,3) - These are cool!
  5. 00:56:660 (4) - If this is going to go straight up, move it to x: 300 thanks for noticing that
  6. 00:57:602 (5,6) - These could really be spaced, perhaps by making a line or a triangle. I'd personally suggest this solution (ignore the previous bullet point if you curve the slider like this, I guess): Played around with it and ended up triangulating them a bit
    keep in mind I placed a circle instead of repeating the slider though. I don't know if you'll like this and I don't expect you to really.
  7. 01:02:785 (6,7) - Would rather not have these be stacks in the kiai part. The map should feel the most interesting here in my opinion. spread apart.
  8. 01:09:225 (4) - Improve blanket by adding another point. I moved the previous points and made blanket a bit better.
  9. 01:13:937 (2,3) - Again, I don't feel like these fit the difficulty and kiai. Especially when there are vocals. fixed that as well.
[ Eli ]
Easy:

00:30:901 (1,2,3) -



I felt it weird when I played that part, of course it is playable but.... you should add one circle there.

00:36:555 (3) - Add a little break here
This way:



00:56:660 (4) - This slider complements the voice :'V

Topic Starter
annika69
Thank you so much :)

Elikeyla wrote:

Easy:

00:30:901 (1,2,3) -



I felt it weird when I played that part, of course it is playable but.... you should add one circle there. I'm keeping it like that because its supposed to followed the kicks in the song, and it only feels natural for me

00:36:555 (3) - Add a little break here Idk i feel that its better as is because it follows the piano in the song
This way:



00:56:660 (4) - This slider complements the voice :'V Fixed!

Anohara
Thats the best song ever =^.^=
Topic Starter
annika69

Anohara wrote:

Thats the best song ever =^.^=
I know, right? haha :)
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