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kagiii

Brian_Ex wrote:

Marked For my mod :3

Please wait until 25 march
oke i'm happy for waiting xD
Topic Starter
kagiii

Brian_Ex wrote:

Novice aja dulu yang lain nanti nyusul soalnya lagi sibuk >w<

sip oke thx dah di Fixed :)
Kyousuke-
hi kagii =w=

[General]
  1. turn off widescreen support on ADVANCED and NOVICE


others seems fine.


Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
[EXHAUST]
00:03:000 - 00:04:800 - for the opening piano, this is better for the pitch -> http://puu.sh/gNujp/34267208f6.jpg
00:05:100 (5100|2,5250|1) - move this 1 col to the right. bcs this 00:05:400 (5400|0,5550|3,5700|0,5700|2) - it's different pitch with before, so don't make stairs with it
00:06:000 (6000|2) - move to 2, ofc for pattern
00:06:000 - 00:07:200 - recommended to make this to LN, coz of long piano sound -> http://puu.sh/gNuvs/5cc1ad7f59.jpg

00:08:550 (8550|0) - move to 3, for pitch
00:08:850 (8850|3) - move to 1, for pattern like this 00:07:950 -
00:09:000 (9000|0) - move to 4, for pitch and pattern
00:09:600 - 00:10:200 - i'm sure this is better for the pattern and balance :^) http://puu.sh/gNuK3/8c0c507e48.jpg
00:11:400 - 00:12:000 - this note isn't suitable for the sound, i'm recommended to follow the piano only. and for the LN at 00:11:850 - and 00:12:150 - will be suitable http://puu.sh/gNv5A/799d9c5ced.jpg
^also for the LN pitch and snap 00:12:600 - 00:13:200 - ->http://puu.sh/gNv5A/799d9c5ced.jpg

oops for pitch suggestion 00:13:200 - 00:13:800 - http://puu.sh/gNvfN/65708f6aca.jpg
00:14:850 (14850|2) - delete, ghost sound / no sound
00:15:450 - add note at 4, 00:15:600 - add note at 1. for loud sound
00:16:200 - 00:16:800 - wrong snap, hear carefully on this 00:16:275 - and 00:16:575 - so follow this http://puu.sh/gNvvg/0c14d23bc9.jpg
^ and 00:16:950 - 00:17:850 - for pitch and the LN http://puu.sh/gNvvg/0c14d23bc9.jpg (rip explanation imma too lazy lol, so just SS it :U)

00:18:000 - 00:18:600 - make another pattern like this 00:13:200 - 00:13:800 - with LN coz you follow it before, consistent for it =w=
00:18:600 - 00:20:400 - suggestion~~ /srsly too lazy to explain lol http://puu.sh/gNvSP/b63760ac4b.jpg


i'll gonna continue it later~ i'm promise ;w;
Topic Starter
kagiii

Kyousuke- wrote:

hi kagii =w=

[General]
  1. turn off widescreen support on ADVANCED and NOVICE


others seems fine.


Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
[EXHAUST]
00:03:000 - 00:04:800 - for the opening piano, this is better for the pitch -> http://puu.sh/gNujp/34267208f6.jpg
00:05:100 (5100|2,5250|1) - move this 1 col to the right. bcs this 00:05:400 (5400|0,5550|3,5700|0,5700|2) - it's different pitch with before, so don't make stairs with it
00:06:000 (6000|2) - move to 2, ofc for pattern
00:06:000 - 00:07:200 - recommended to make this to LN, coz of long piano sound -> http://puu.sh/gNuvs/5cc1ad7f59.jpg

00:08:550 (8550|0) - move to 3, for pitch
00:08:850 (8850|3) - move to 1, for pattern like this 00:07:950 -
00:09:000 (9000|0) - move to 4, for pitch and pattern
00:09:600 - 00:10:200 - i'm sure this is better for the pattern and balance :^) http://puu.sh/gNuK3/8c0c507e48.jpg
00:11:400 - 00:12:000 - this note isn't suitable for the sound, i'm recommended to follow the piano only. and for the LN at 00:11:850 - and 00:12:150 - will be suitable http://puu.sh/gNv5A/799d9c5ced.jpg
^also for the LN pitch and snap 00:12:600 - 00:13:200 - ->http://puu.sh/gNv5A/799d9c5ced.jpg

oops for pitch suggestion 00:13:200 - 00:13:800 - http://puu.sh/gNvfN/65708f6aca.jpg
00:14:850 (14850|2) - delete, ghost sound / no sound
00:15:450 - add note at 4, 00:15:600 - add note at 1. for loud sound
00:16:200 - 00:16:800 - wrong snap, hear carefully on this 00:16:275 - and 00:16:575 - so follow this http://puu.sh/gNvvg/0c14d23bc9.jpg
^ and 00:16:950 - 00:17:850 - for pitch and the LN http://puu.sh/gNvvg/0c14d23bc9.jpg (rip explanation imma too lazy lol, so just SS it :U)

00:18:000 - 00:18:600 - make another pattern like this 00:13:200 - 00:13:800 - with LN coz you follow it before, consistent for it =w=
00:18:600 - 00:20:400 - suggestion~~ /srsly too lazy to explain lol http://puu.sh/gNvSP/b63760ac4b.jpg


i'll gonna continue it later~ i'm promise ;w;

wkwkw di mods jga =w= thx mod nya :3 , dah di Fixed :v
Verniy_Chan

Hi kagi-san >.<)/
Mod from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( )
Mapset : ( X ) minimal diff terendah yaitu dibwah 2 star, saran : reduce star utk NOVICE atau buat diff baru utk BASIC
Metadata : ( ) bisa tmbah Yuuya Yamaguchi sbg alias dari you, dan ZUN sbg composition
Timing : ( )
Audio : ( ) spertinya msih note yg blum di isi HS, coba cek kmbali
Background : ( X ) 1365 x 768 resize jadi 1366 x 768

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)


hilangin check dri Widescreen Support
00:37:800 (37800|2,37950|1) Ctrl + G
00:54:300 (54300|2) hapus? suara pasrahnya agak low dri sblumnya
01:44:025 tmbah note, konsisten dari 01:43:800
01:44:250 ^
01:47:400 tmbah note? cek 01:46:800 01:48:000 dan 01:49:800
01:48:600 ^
01:49:050 (109050|0) pindah ke 4 jika ikutin sugesti diatas
01:51:600 tmbah note atau LN high sound?
Good pattern
hilangin check dri Widescreen Support
00:33:000 (33000|3) pindah ke row balanced
00:55:200 (55200|0) ini ngikut suara apa ya?
01:51:600 tmbah 1 note atau LN high sound sperti NOVICE
wow, nice diff~
00:12:000 tmbah note high sound
00:15:450 (15450|3) hapus
00:29:925 tmbah utk lanjutan stair sound
00:33:000 (33000|1) pindah ke 1 ikutin alunan musyrik musik
00:33:075 (33075|0) pindah ke 2
00:33:150 (33150|3) pindah ke 1
00:35:700 (35700|2) hapus, 3 note aja cukup
00:42:900 ini jg
00:54:750 tmbah note cek 00:54:600
00:55:050 hpus beberapa note berlebihan skligus suara gak terlalu high
01:00:900 tmbah note, high pitch
01:02:100 ^
01:03:300 ^
01:08:250 jumlah notenya hrus sma dngan 01:08:100 krena similiar
01:09:450 hpus smua note disini, no sound yg ada stream toeng dr 01:09:300 - 01:09:600
Relax pattern~ lol
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ
Topic Starter
kagiii

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi kagi-san >.<)/
Mod from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( )
Mapset : ( X ) minimal diff terendah yaitu dibwah 2 star, saran : reduce star utk NOVICE atau buat diff baru utk BASIC
Metadata : ( ) bisa tmbah Yuuya Yamaguchi sbg alias dari you, dan ZUN sbg composition
Timing : ( )
Audio : ( ) spertinya msih note yg blum di isi HS, coba cek kmbali
Background : ( X ) 1365 x 768 resize jadi 1366 x 768

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)


hilangin check dri Widescreen Support <--- selalu lupa =w=
00:37:800 (37800|2,37950|1) Ctrl + G
00:54:300 (54300|2) hapus? suara pasrahnya agak low dri sblumnya
01:44:025 tmbah note, konsisten dari 01:43:800
01:44:250 ^
01:47:400 tmbah note? cek 01:46:800 01:48:000 dan 01:49:800
01:48:600 ^
01:49:050 (109050|0) pindah ke 4 jika ikutin sugesti diatas
01:51:600 tmbah note atau LN high sound?
Good pattern
hilangin check dri Widescreen Support <--- selalu lupa =w=
00:33:000 (33000|3) pindah ke row balanced
00:55:200 (55200|0) ini ngikut suara apa ya?
01:51:600 tmbah 1 note atau LN high sound sperti NOVICE
wow, nice diff~
00:12:000 tmbah note high sound
00:15:450 (15450|3) hapus
00:29:925 tmbah utk lanjutan stair sound
00:33:000 (33000|1) pindah ke 1 ikutin alunan musyrik<-- wkkwkwk xD musik
00:33:075 (33075|0) pindah ke 2
00:33:150 (33150|3) pindah ke 1
00:35:700 (35700|2) hapus, 3 note aja cukup
00:42:900 ini jg
00:54:750 tmbah note cek 00:54:600
00:55:050 hpus beberapa note berlebihan skligus suara gak terlalu high
01:00:900 tmbah note, high pitch
01:02:100 ^
01:03:300 ^
01:08:250 jumlah notenya hrus sma dngan 01:08:100 krena similiar
01:09:450 hpus smua note disini, no sound yg ada stream toeng dr 01:09:300 - 01:09:600
Relax pattern~ lol
Good Luck -nya~ (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ

mmm finaly mods nya =w= thx ya all FIXED
:)
Rido
mp3 udah ganti belum?
Topic Starter
kagiii

bakabakemono wrote:

mp3 udah ganti belum?
rada ribet kalo di ganti lagi :/
Rido
ya emg ribet =A=
Topic Starter
kagiii

bakabakemono wrote:

ya emg ribet =A=
tapi pake mp3 yg ini dah pas kan? =w=
-LASU-
Hi

|1|2|3|4|

EXHAUST
00:14:850 - add note 1 (ADV diff follow sound)
00:19:650 - add note (same)
00:29:400 (29400|2) - LN end 00:30:000 -
00:37:950 - add note 3
00:38:400 - add note 4
00:39:000 - add note 3
00:41:550 - ^
00:55:950 - add note
01:01:800 - add note 3
01:30:225 (90225|2) - move to 01:30:300 - and 01:30:525 (90525|3) - move to 01:30:600 -
01:32:400 - add note
01:38:400 (98400|1,98700|2,99000|1) - I think LN end white line or red line better
01:39:900 - add note
01:40:050 - ^
01:41:250 - ^
01:42:000 - add note 3
01:42:600 - add note 4
01:45:825 - add note 1 or 4
good luck
Topic Starter
kagiii

-LASU- wrote:

Hi

|1|2|3|4|

EXHAUST
00:14:850 - add note 1 (ADV diff follow sound)
00:19:650 - add note (same)
00:29:400 (29400|2) - LN end 00:30:000 -
00:37:950 - add note 3
00:38:400 - add note 4
00:39:000 - add note 3
00:41:550 - ^
00:55:950 - add note
01:01:800 - add note 3
01:30:225 (90225|2) - move to 01:30:300 - and 01:30:525 (90525|3) - move to 01:30:600 -
01:32:400 - add note
01:38:400 (98400|1,98700|2,99000|1) - I think LN end white line or red line better
01:39:900 - add note
01:40:050 - ^
01:41:250 - ^
01:42:000 - add note 3
01:42:600 - add note 4
01:45:825 - add note 1 or 4
good luck
thx for mods =w= hahah so fast :3
Bray-
MOD DONE, PLEASE CHECK MY FIRST POST


/me Shoot Star >W<)/
Topic Starter
kagiii

Brian_Ex wrote:

Marked For my mod :3

Please wait until 25 march


Hi Kagii mod ready!

00:03:300 (3300|2) - move to 1
00:03:450 (3450|0,3600|1) - move to 2,3
00:04:050 (4050|3) - delete no sound
00:05:400 (5400|0,5550|1,5700|3) - move to 4, 3, 2
00:06:600 (6600|2) - move to 1
00:08:100 (8100|1) - move to 1
00:08:550 (8550|3) - ini LN apa? ganti ke single note deh
00:09:000 (9000|0,9150|1,9300|2) - CTRL+H
00:10:500 (10500|0) - delete no sound
00:12:900 (12900|2) - move to 2
00:13:650 (13650|1) - move to 4
00:15:150 (15150|0,15300|1) - CTRL+G
00:15:450 (15450|2) - delete no sound
00:16:350 (16350|1) - move to 1
00:16:500 (16500|0) - delete
00:16:650 (16650|2,16800|1,16950|0,17100|1,17400|3,17400|0) - make like the picture below


00:21:450 (21450|1) - delete
00:21:600 - add note at 2
00:21:900 - add note at 1
00:22:200 - add note at 3

00:27:000 - add note at 2
00:27:225 - add note at 3
00:27:450 - add note at 4

00:27:600 - add note at 2
00:28:800 - add note at 1

00:52:800 (52800|1,53100|0,53400|1,53700|3,54000|2,54300|1,54600|3,54900|2,55200|1) - ini ngikutin apa? remap deh

01:24:000 (84000|3,84000|0,84150|2,84150|1) - ini double, 01:24:600 (84600|0,84600|2,84750|1) - ini ngk double sama yang lainnya, bikin double semua deh biar konsisten
00:18:600 - di buat double (loud beat)
00:19:800 - ini juga dibuat double (loud beat)
00:20:250 (20250|0) - move to 3
00:20:400 (20400|2,20400|1) - move to 1,2
00:23:400 - di buat double (loud beat)
00:23:550 - miss?
00:24:150 (24150|3) - delete (not loud beat)
00:24:300 - buat double (loud beat)
00:24:450 - delete satu (not loud beat)
00:24:600 - buat double (loud beat)
00:25:500 - buat double (loud beat)
00:25:800 - ^
00:26:100 - ^
00:26:250 - delete satu (not loud beat)
00:26:400 - buat double (loud beat)
00:26:550 - add note
00:26:850 - add note
00:28:800 - add note di 4
00:31:350 - ^
00:31:650 - ^
01:26:100 - ini kenapa triple?, aku cuma denger suara teriakan disitu ._.
01:32:400 - ini juga kenapa triple?, bunyi beatnya sama kek yang double ._.
01:34:500 - nah kalau ini cocok dibuat triple, soalnya ada suara sound voltex effect
00:04:050 (4050|0) - delete
00:04:200 - buat double
00:04:350 (4350|3) - delete
00:04:500 - buat double
00:15:150 (15150|2) - delete
00:15:600 - ini kenapa triple?, suaranya sama kek yang double
00:17:700 - kalau ini emang cocok jadi triple karena ada suara sound voltex effectnya
00:18:000 - bikin double aja
00:19:500 - double aja -_-"
00:20:100 - ^
00:23:100 - ^
00:24:900 - ^
00:26:400 - ^
00:27:450 - ini cocok juga jadi triple soalnya ada suara loud beat sama cymbalnya
00:31:200 - double ajaa
00:39:600 (39600|2,39600|3,39600|1,39600|0,39900|2,39900|0,39900|3,39900|1) - 4 notes, gile kelebihan bang =="
00:40:200 - double ajaa
00:40:500 - ^
00:45:600 (45600|1,45600|3,45600|0,45750|1,45750|2,45750|0,45900|2,45900|1,45900|3,46050|0,46050|2,46050|3,46200|3,46200|1,46200|0) - nahh ini baru masuk triplenya ^^


Hmm mungkin itu saran penggunaan triple di lagu sound voltex
perlu kamu remap dikit tuh, volume sample dibikin 0 dulu
saran aku : ingat, kalau ada sound voltex effect bikin triple, ada cymbal berbarengan dengan loud beat dibikin triple juga
tapi itu cuma saran, gk diikutin juga gapapa ><

MOD DONE GOOD LUCK
wkwk thx again mods nya >< , soal double sama triple di SOUND VOLTEX musti banyak belajar lgi =w= hehehe
ALL FIXED

BIG THANKS FOR THE STARS Brian_Ex >,<
Topic Starter
kagiii

Brian_Ex wrote:

MOD DONE, PLEASE CHECK MY FIRST POST


/me Shoot Star >W<)/
BIG THANKS FOR THE STARS Brian_Ex >,< [2]

*lel xD
Fresh Chicken
EXHAUST

00:36:000 (36000|3) - move 3
00:36:000 - input LN and finish it 00:36:300 -
00:38:250 (38250|2) - remove
00:42:450 (42450|1) - move 1 and 00:42:000 (42000|1) - finish it 00:42:450 -
00:43:050 (43050|2,43050|0) - remove
00:53:850 (53850|2) - remove
01:00:825 (60825|3) - remove
01:27:600 - ~01:28:800 - too over mapping!
01:39:750 - add one

ADVANCED

00:15:450 (15450|3) - remove
00:17:250 (17250|2) - remove
01:13:650 (73650|1) - change to LN and finish it 01:13:800 -
01:15:150 (75150|2) - remove
01:15:450 (75450|3) - remove
01:41:550 (101550|2) - change to start point 01:41:400 -
01:43:350 - add one

NOVICE

01:33:150 - add one

I like this song! :)

Here's my M4M map!: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/293235
schwarzvgrune
mod by irc chat request.
16:20 ExKagii-: yo? =w=
16:21 schwarzvgrune: ?
16:21 schwarzvgrune: yes/
16:22 schwarzvgrune: do we know each other..? ;w;
16:22 ExKagii-: can you help me for mod?
16:22 schwarzvgrune: o.o
16:22 schwarzvgrune: well..
16:22 schwarzvgrune: which map?
16:22 ExKagii-: nope xD
16:23 *ExKagii- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/664072 you - Mist Tek]
16:23 schwarzvgrune: how do you know that im online though =="
16:24 schwarzvgrune: can i just do mod via chat?
16:24 schwarzvgrune: i dont have time to do manual mods
16:24 schwarzvgrune: i mean, can i mod nnow?
16:24 ExKagii-: mmmm oke
16:24 ExKagii-: up to yyou
16:25 schwarzvgrune: have you read brian's mod?
16:25 schwarzvgrune: and also a note
16:25 ExKagii-: yu[
16:25 ExKagii-: p
16:25 schwarzvgrune: when someone mod your map please properly reply to their mods which part you implemented and which part you did not
16:25 schwarzvgrune: you didn't reply to brian's mod, as seen from the thread
16:25 ExKagii-: brian's mod has fixed
16:25 *schwarzvgrune is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/664072 you - Mist Tek [EXHAUST]]
16:26 schwarzvgrune: add a note here, you've been following them, try to stick with it consistently.
16:26 schwarzvgrune: 00:04:650 -
16:26 ExKagii-: ok
16:26 schwarzvgrune: `00:04:950 -
16:26 schwarzvgrune: note: you can reject my mod, mod is just a suggestion, but give the modder reasons if you reject their mods
16:26 schwarzvgrune: 00:05:850 - add a note too
16:27 ExKagii-: oke nex
16:27 schwarzvgrune: if you dont know where to place i can tell you, but i don't think you have issues with placing as seen from your maps, its quite well done already
16:27 ExKagii-: nope i know =w=
16:28 schwarzvgrune: 00:07:800 (7800|2,8250|3) - LN abuse, this LN should be half of its current length
16:28 schwarzvgrune: 00:08:700 (8700|1,9150|2,9300|1) - something like this length,
16:28 schwarzvgrune: please readjust.
16:29 schwarzvgrune: wait
16:29 ExKagii-: mm oke that nice
16:29 schwarzvgrune: wait
16:29 ExKagii-: ok
16:29 schwarzvgrune: your whole LN on those part are actually inconsistent
16:29 schwarzvgrune: what are you trying to express with those LN?
16:29 ExKagii-: mmmm
16:29 schwarzvgrune: the high pitched instrument right?
16:30 schwarzvgrune: i can read indonesian, you can use indonesian if you want but i cannot reply you in indonesian
16:30 ExKagii-: maybe ..
16:30 schwarzvgrune: why maybe ==
16:30 schwarzvgrune: your placing seems random to me
16:30 schwarzvgrune: i suggest you follow the pitched instrument
16:30 schwarzvgrune: because its very loud and clear
16:30 schwarzvgrune: in which case
16:31 ExKagii-: cause its a creation , in my opinion :3
16:31 schwarzvgrune: it should be something lik this
16:31 schwarzvgrune: no you cannot do that
16:31 schwarzvgrune: there cannot be notes that are just there for the sake of being there
16:31 ExKagii-: so what will i do"?
16:31 schwarzvgrune: you must express parts of the song clearly
16:31 schwarzvgrune: wait
16:31 schwarzvgrune: i'll give you some suggestions
16:31 ExKagii-: oke
16:33 schwarzvgrune: use 25% playback to recheck, this placing is accurately representing the pitched instrument, you can adjust the note placement for hand balance, but htis is what it could looks like in general,
16:34 schwarzvgrune: 00:07:800 -
16:34 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOLMk/40614ed289.jpg
16:34 ExKagii-: change the note?
16:34 schwarzvgrune: 00:09:900 - http://puu.sh/gOLNk/c04dc106ff.jpg yeah, adjust your LNs
16:34 ExKagii-: mmm i'll try
16:35 schwarzvgrune: revamp your whole LNs, to what i give you on the picture there, and you can use 25% to check, my placing consistently express the pitch, and with correct snapping as wel
16:35 ExKagii-: ok wait
16:36 ExKagii-: ok FIXER
16:37 ExKagii-: FIXED
16:38 schwarzvgrune: you abuse the LN too much across whole diffs,
16:38 schwarzvgrune: i'll try to point them out
16:38 schwarzvgrune: 00:12:000 -
16:39 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOLVU/1f13b3688e.jpg use that sdvx hitsound on those LN
16:39 schwarzvgrune: like this one, that soft-hitclap hitsound?
16:39 ExKagii-: ok ok
16:39 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOLWI/a1d4513224.jpg
16:40 ExKagii-: wait
16:40 schwarzvgrune: 00:11:700 (11700|3) - move to 3, 00:11:850 - add a note to 4.
16:40 schwarzvgrune: 00:13:350 (13350|0,13650|3) - delete
16:41 schwarzvgrune: 00:16:350 (16350|1,16650|3) -
16:41 schwarzvgrune: delete as well
16:41 schwarzvgrune: 00:18:150 (18150|3) - delete don't worry i have other suggestions
16:42 ExKagii-: okd
16:42 ExKagii-: oke
16:49 schwarzvgrune: 00:13:200 - http://puu.sh/gOMgM/ac67209ef4.jpg
16:50 schwarzvgrune: 00:17:700 (17700|2,17700|0) - use that sdvx hitsound on the LN instead, and use normal one for short note
16:50 schwarzvgrune: 00:18:900 (18900|1) - move to 400:19:050 (19050|3) - to 2
16:51 ExKagii-: oke
16:51 schwarzvgrune: 00:20:400 - add 1 more note, for emphasis because this is where the phase change
16:51 schwarzvgrune: 00:20:850 (20850|3) - delete no strong beat should be 1 note
16:52 schwarzvgrune: 00:21:000 - add 1 more note, the beat is here.. please use 25% playback when you map to make sure your placing is accurate. your LNs at the moment seems to suggest that the placing is really random and you either put those LNs out of the blue, or you're following what you want to follow inaccurately (i.e placing them 2/4 beat faster, or slower, than the actual pitch in the song)
16:52 schwarzvgrune: 00:21:450 - add a note, strong emphasis on beat
16:53 ExKagii-: ok
16:53 schwarzvgrune: 00:21:750 (21750|0,22050|3,22350|2,22500|0,22500|3) - delete this too,
16:53 ExKagii-: next
16:54 ExKagii-: mmm why?
16:54 schwarzvgrune: the length is wrong
16:54 schwarzvgrune: if you want to follow that song
16:54 schwarzvgrune: i mean
16:54 schwarzvgrune: that sdvx sound
16:54 schwarzvgrune: the length should be
16:54 ExKagii-: ok ok
16:55 schwarzvgrune: 00:21:900 - http://puu.sh/gOMrc/e1974f78b5.jpg should be 2/4. ignore the placing, you can adjust your placing.
16:55 schwarzvgrune: those LNs at 1 and 4, add sdvx hitsound for emphasis
16:56 ExKagii-: ok
16:57 schwarzvgrune: 00:27:600 (27600|0,28500|3,29400|2) - this is also wrong, if you are folowing that umm how do you call it, flying airplane's machine's sound
16:57 schwarzvgrune: it should be 4 x 4/4 beat
16:57 schwarzvgrune: sorry, wrong
16:57 schwarzvgrune: 4 x 8/4 beat
16:57 ExKagii-: mmmm i will fix
16:57 schwarzvgrune: adjust the placing, this is for example. the length is like this, but you can adjust your placement http://puu.sh/gOMwi/2f292ba0b8.jpg
16:58 schwarzvgrune: 00:31:650 (31650|3) - this is correct, but i suggest to delete it because the LN seems very random, out of nowhere, and its only 1
16:59 schwarzvgrune: 00:34:800 (34800|1,35100|2,35400|3) - this is also wrong, plaacing should be 2/4 beat earlier
16:59 schwarzvgrune: 00:33:750 (33750|2,34050|2) - like these 2, these placement is correct
17:00 ExKagii-: ok ok
17:00 schwarzvgrune: and the rest
17:00 schwarzvgrune: there are many inconsisstencies in the diffs, especially on LNs
17:00 schwarzvgrune: can you do a whole recheck first?
17:00 schwarzvgrune: i cannot point them one by one there are too many mistakes >_<
17:01 ExKagii-: mmmm oke i will re check
17:01 schwarzvgrune: style is not an excuse when you place them randomly.
17:01 schwarzvgrune: however if you place them correctly, and you decide not to use LN, but SN instead for example, then this is fine
17:01 schwarzvgrune: my suggestions on LNs are not absolute, but if you want to use LN, that is when you should place them
17:02 schwarzvgrune: if you think there are too many lns, you can just use SN to express those sound that i pointed out
17:02 ExKagii-: but i'll have found other mods to recheck it
17:02 schwarzvgrune: for example
17:02 schwarzvgrune: 00:57:600 (57600|0,57900|1,57900|2,58200|2,58350|0,58500|1) -
17:02 ExKagii-: yap
17:02 schwarzvgrune: you are following piano pitch here
17:02 ExKagii-: yes
17:03 schwarzvgrune: but this placing there is wrong after that
17:03 schwarzvgrune: 00:58:800 (58800|3,59000|2,59250|2,59250|1,59400|2,59400|3,59700|3,59700|0) - around these part
17:03 schwarzvgrune: LNs should be
17:03 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOMIM/bd51f25993.jpg
17:03 schwarzvgrune: if you're following the piano
17:04 schwarzvgrune: you just stretch them randomly, and your placing is also inaccurate
17:04 ExKagii-: but thats following 2 sound ?
17:04 schwarzvgrune: no
17:04 schwarzvgrune: its only piano
17:04 schwarzvgrune: wait
17:04 schwarzvgrune: i'll break it down
17:04 schwarzvgrune: wait
17:04 ExKagii-: oke i will rechack that
17:04 schwarzvgrune: you mean who?
17:04 schwarzvgrune: my suggestion following 2 sounds?
17:04 schwarzvgrune: or your map wants to follow 2 sounds?
17:05 ExKagii-: my suggestion
17:05 schwarzvgrune: my suggestion is only piano, LN
17:05 schwarzvgrune: here
17:05 schwarzvgrune: a pitch here 00:58:800 -
17:05 schwarzvgrune: and then a pitch here 00:59:000 - use 1/6
17:05 ExKagii-: ok will recheck it
17:06 schwarzvgrune: a pitch here 00:59:250 -
17:06 schwarzvgrune: a pitch here 00:59:400 -
17:06 schwarzvgrune: and also when you look for mod please look for people that are an expert in pitch agreement and relevancy
17:06 schwarzvgrune: to check on those things
17:06 schwarzvgrune: people who only map by pattern usually cannot spot those differences
17:06 ExKagii-: ok ok
17:07 schwarzvgrune: for example, these are correct
17:07 schwarzvgrune: 01:06:300 (66300|3,66600|2,66600|0,66900|1) -
17:07 schwarzvgrune: the placing is also correct
17:08 ExKagii-: oke , but the in correct palcing i'll check soon
17:08 schwarzvgrune: 01:06:300 (66300|3,66600|2,66600|0,66900|1) - your're mapping that shouting sound? how about using LN?
17:09 ExKagii-: mmmm
17:09 schwarzvgrune: 01:38:400 (98400|1,98700|2,99000|1) - these placing is too early, should place it 2/4 beat later, and also length should be 2/4
17:10 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOMWr/65959c793b.jpg
17:10 ExKagii-: mmm but its ok ?
17:10 schwarzvgrune: what do you mean?
17:10 ExKagii-: oke done
17:10 schwarzvgrune: your current placing is incorrect
17:11 schwarzvgrune: too early
17:11 schwarzvgrune: etc
17:11 ExKagii-: fixed
17:11 schwarzvgrune: you can do self mod and also ask for other ppl to mod
17:11 schwarzvgrune: i can recheck when its more refined
17:11 ExKagii-: ok ok
Topic Starter
kagiii

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

EXHAUST

00:36:000 (36000|3) - move 3
00:36:000 - input LN and finish it 00:36:300 -
00:38:250 (38250|2) - remove
00:42:450 (42450|1) - move 1 and 00:42:000 (42000|1) - finish it 00:42:450 -
00:43:050 (43050|2,43050|0) - remove
00:53:850 (53850|2) - remove
01:00:825 (60825|3) - remove
01:27:600 - ~01:28:800 - too over mapping!
01:39:750 - add one

ADVANCED

00:15:450 (15450|3) - remove
00:17:250 (17250|2) - remove
01:13:650 (73650|1) - change to LN and finish it 01:13:800 -
01:15:150 (75150|2) - remove
01:15:450 (75450|3) - remove
01:41:550 (101550|2) - change to start point 01:41:400 -
01:43:350 - add one

NOVICE

01:33:150 - add one

I like this song! :)

Here's my M4M map!: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/293235
thx for mods >< , just wait for my Mods :3
Topic Starter
kagiii

schwarzvgrune wrote:

mod by irc chat request.
16:20 ExKagii-: yo? =w=
16:21 schwarzvgrune: ?
16:21 schwarzvgrune: yes/
16:22 schwarzvgrune: do we know each other..? ;w;
16:22 ExKagii-: can you help me for mod?
16:22 schwarzvgrune: o.o
16:22 schwarzvgrune: well..
16:22 schwarzvgrune: which map?
16:22 ExKagii-: nope xD
16:23 *ExKagii- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/664072 you - Mist Tek]
16:23 schwarzvgrune: how do you know that im online though =="
16:24 schwarzvgrune: can i just do mod via chat?
16:24 schwarzvgrune: i dont have time to do manual mods
16:24 schwarzvgrune: i mean, can i mod nnow?
16:24 ExKagii-: mmmm oke
16:24 ExKagii-: up to yyou
16:25 schwarzvgrune: have you read brian's mod?
16:25 schwarzvgrune: and also a note
16:25 ExKagii-: yu[
16:25 ExKagii-: p
16:25 schwarzvgrune: when someone mod your map please properly reply to their mods which part you implemented and which part you did not
16:25 schwarzvgrune: you didn't reply to brian's mod, as seen from the thread
16:25 ExKagii-: brian's mod has fixed
16:25 *schwarzvgrune is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/664072 you - Mist Tek [EXHAUST]]
16:26 schwarzvgrune: add a note here, you've been following them, try to stick with it consistently.
16:26 schwarzvgrune: 00:04:650 -
16:26 ExKagii-: ok
16:26 schwarzvgrune: `00:04:950 -
16:26 schwarzvgrune: note: you can reject my mod, mod is just a suggestion, but give the modder reasons if you reject their mods
16:26 schwarzvgrune: 00:05:850 - add a note too
16:27 ExKagii-: oke nex
16:27 schwarzvgrune: if you dont know where to place i can tell you, but i don't think you have issues with placing as seen from your maps, its quite well done already
16:27 ExKagii-: nope i know =w=
16:28 schwarzvgrune: 00:07:800 (7800|2,8250|3) - LN abuse, this LN should be half of its current length
16:28 schwarzvgrune: 00:08:700 (8700|1,9150|2,9300|1) - something like this length,
16:28 schwarzvgrune: please readjust.
16:29 schwarzvgrune: wait
16:29 ExKagii-: mm oke that nice
16:29 schwarzvgrune: wait
16:29 ExKagii-: ok
16:29 schwarzvgrune: your whole LN on those part are actually inconsistent
16:29 schwarzvgrune: what are you trying to express with those LN?
16:29 ExKagii-: mmmm
16:29 schwarzvgrune: the high pitched instrument right?
16:30 schwarzvgrune: i can read indonesian, you can use indonesian if you want but i cannot reply you in indonesian
16:30 ExKagii-: maybe ..
16:30 schwarzvgrune: why maybe ==
16:30 schwarzvgrune: your placing seems random to me
16:30 schwarzvgrune: i suggest you follow the pitched instrument
16:30 schwarzvgrune: because its very loud and clear
16:30 schwarzvgrune: in which case
16:31 ExKagii-: cause its a creation , in my opinion :3
16:31 schwarzvgrune: it should be something lik this
16:31 schwarzvgrune: no you cannot do that
16:31 schwarzvgrune: there cannot be notes that are just there for the sake of being there
16:31 ExKagii-: so what will i do"?
16:31 schwarzvgrune: you must express parts of the song clearly
16:31 schwarzvgrune: wait
16:31 schwarzvgrune: i'll give you some suggestions
16:31 ExKagii-: oke
16:33 schwarzvgrune: use 25% playback to recheck, this placing is accurately representing the pitched instrument, you can adjust the note placement for hand balance, but htis is what it could looks like in general,
16:34 schwarzvgrune: 00:07:800 -
16:34 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOLMk/40614ed289.jpg
16:34 ExKagii-: change the note?
16:34 schwarzvgrune: 00:09:900 - http://puu.sh/gOLNk/c04dc106ff.jpg yeah, adjust your LNs
16:34 ExKagii-: mmm i'll try
16:35 schwarzvgrune: revamp your whole LNs, to what i give you on the picture there, and you can use 25% to check, my placing consistently express the pitch, and with correct snapping as wel
16:35 ExKagii-: ok wait
16:36 ExKagii-: ok FIXER
16:37 ExKagii-: FIXED
16:38 schwarzvgrune: you abuse the LN too much across whole diffs,
16:38 schwarzvgrune: i'll try to point them out
16:38 schwarzvgrune: 00:12:000 -
16:39 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOLVU/1f13b3688e.jpg use that sdvx hitsound on those LN
16:39 schwarzvgrune: like this one, that soft-hitclap hitsound?
16:39 ExKagii-: ok ok
16:39 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOLWI/a1d4513224.jpg
16:40 ExKagii-: wait
16:40 schwarzvgrune: 00:11:700 (11700|3) - move to 3, 00:11:850 - add a note to 4.
16:40 schwarzvgrune: 00:13:350 (13350|0,13650|3) - delete
16:41 schwarzvgrune: 00:16:350 (16350|1,16650|3) -
16:41 schwarzvgrune: delete as well
16:41 schwarzvgrune: 00:18:150 (18150|3) - delete don't worry i have other suggestions
16:42 ExKagii-: okd
16:42 ExKagii-: oke
16:49 schwarzvgrune: 00:13:200 - http://puu.sh/gOMgM/ac67209ef4.jpg
16:50 schwarzvgrune: 00:17:700 (17700|2,17700|0) - use that sdvx hitsound on the LN instead, and use normal one for short note
16:50 schwarzvgrune: 00:18:900 (18900|1) - move to 400:19:050 (19050|3) - to 2
16:51 ExKagii-: oke
16:51 schwarzvgrune: 00:20:400 - add 1 more note, for emphasis because this is where the phase change
16:51 schwarzvgrune: 00:20:850 (20850|3) - delete no strong beat should be 1 note
16:52 schwarzvgrune: 00:21:000 - add 1 more note, the beat is here.. please use 25% playback when you map to make sure your placing is accurate. your LNs at the moment seems to suggest that the placing is really random and you either put those LNs out of the blue, or you're following what you want to follow inaccurately (i.e placing them 2/4 beat faster, or slower, than the actual pitch in the song)
16:52 schwarzvgrune: 00:21:450 - add a note, strong emphasis on beat
16:53 ExKagii-: ok
16:53 schwarzvgrune: 00:21:750 (21750|0,22050|3,22350|2,22500|0,22500|3) - delete this too,
16:53 ExKagii-: next
16:54 ExKagii-: mmm why?
16:54 schwarzvgrune: the length is wrong
16:54 schwarzvgrune: if you want to follow that song
16:54 schwarzvgrune: i mean
16:54 schwarzvgrune: that sdvx sound
16:54 schwarzvgrune: the length should be
16:54 ExKagii-: ok ok
16:55 schwarzvgrune: 00:21:900 - http://puu.sh/gOMrc/e1974f78b5.jpg should be 2/4. ignore the placing, you can adjust your placing.
16:55 schwarzvgrune: those LNs at 1 and 4, add sdvx hitsound for emphasis
16:56 ExKagii-: ok
16:57 schwarzvgrune: 00:27:600 (27600|0,28500|3,29400|2) - this is also wrong, if you are folowing that umm how do you call it, flying airplane's machine's sound
16:57 schwarzvgrune: it should be 4 x 4/4 beat
16:57 schwarzvgrune: sorry, wrong
16:57 schwarzvgrune: 4 x 8/4 beat
16:57 ExKagii-: mmmm i will fix
16:57 schwarzvgrune: adjust the placing, this is for example. the length is like this, but you can adjust your placement http://puu.sh/gOMwi/2f292ba0b8.jpg
16:58 schwarzvgrune: 00:31:650 (31650|3) - this is correct, but i suggest to delete it because the LN seems very random, out of nowhere, and its only 1
16:59 schwarzvgrune: 00:34:800 (34800|1,35100|2,35400|3) - this is also wrong, plaacing should be 2/4 beat earlier
16:59 schwarzvgrune: 00:33:750 (33750|2,34050|2) - like these 2, these placement is correct
17:00 ExKagii-: ok ok
17:00 schwarzvgrune: and the rest
17:00 schwarzvgrune: there are many inconsisstencies in the diffs, especially on LNs
17:00 schwarzvgrune: can you do a whole recheck first?
17:00 schwarzvgrune: i cannot point them one by one there are too many mistakes >_<
17:01 ExKagii-: mmmm oke i will re check
17:01 schwarzvgrune: style is not an excuse when you place them randomly.
17:01 schwarzvgrune: however if you place them correctly, and you decide not to use LN, but SN instead for example, then this is fine
17:01 schwarzvgrune: my suggestions on LNs are not absolute, but if you want to use LN, that is when you should place them
17:02 schwarzvgrune: if you think there are too many lns, you can just use SN to express those sound that i pointed out
17:02 ExKagii-: but i'll have found other mods to recheck it
17:02 schwarzvgrune: for example
17:02 schwarzvgrune: 00:57:600 (57600|0,57900|1,57900|2,58200|2,58350|0,58500|1) -
17:02 ExKagii-: yap
17:02 schwarzvgrune: you are following piano pitch here
17:02 ExKagii-: yes
17:03 schwarzvgrune: but this placing there is wrong after that
17:03 schwarzvgrune: 00:58:800 (58800|3,59000|2,59250|2,59250|1,59400|2,59400|3,59700|3,59700|0) - around these part
17:03 schwarzvgrune: LNs should be
17:03 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOMIM/bd51f25993.jpg
17:03 schwarzvgrune: if you're following the piano
17:04 schwarzvgrune: you just stretch them randomly, and your placing is also inaccurate
17:04 ExKagii-: but thats following 2 sound ?
17:04 schwarzvgrune: no
17:04 schwarzvgrune: its only piano
17:04 schwarzvgrune: wait
17:04 schwarzvgrune: i'll break it down
17:04 schwarzvgrune: wait
17:04 ExKagii-: oke i will rechack that
17:04 schwarzvgrune: you mean who?
17:04 schwarzvgrune: my suggestion following 2 sounds?
17:04 schwarzvgrune: or your map wants to follow 2 sounds?
17:05 ExKagii-: my suggestion
17:05 schwarzvgrune: my suggestion is only piano, LN
17:05 schwarzvgrune: here
17:05 schwarzvgrune: a pitch here 00:58:800 -
17:05 schwarzvgrune: and then a pitch here 00:59:000 - use 1/6
17:05 ExKagii-: ok will recheck it
17:06 schwarzvgrune: a pitch here 00:59:250 -
17:06 schwarzvgrune: a pitch here 00:59:400 -
17:06 schwarzvgrune: and also when you look for mod please look for people that are an expert in pitch agreement and relevancy
17:06 schwarzvgrune: to check on those things
17:06 schwarzvgrune: people who only map by pattern usually cannot spot those differences
17:06 ExKagii-: ok ok
17:07 schwarzvgrune: for example, these are correct
17:07 schwarzvgrune: 01:06:300 (66300|3,66600|2,66600|0,66900|1) -
17:07 schwarzvgrune: the placing is also correct
17:08 ExKagii-: oke , but the in correct palcing i'll check soon
17:08 schwarzvgrune: 01:06:300 (66300|3,66600|2,66600|0,66900|1) - your're mapping that shouting sound? how about using LN?
17:09 ExKagii-: mmmm
17:09 schwarzvgrune: 01:38:400 (98400|1,98700|2,99000|1) - these placing is too early, should place it 2/4 beat later, and also length should be 2/4
17:10 schwarzvgrune: http://puu.sh/gOMWr/65959c793b.jpg
17:10 ExKagii-: mmm but its ok ?
17:10 schwarzvgrune: what do you mean?
17:10 ExKagii-: oke done
17:10 schwarzvgrune: your current placing is incorrect
17:11 schwarzvgrune: too early
17:11 schwarzvgrune: etc
17:11 ExKagii-: fixed
17:11 schwarzvgrune: you can do self mod and also ask for other ppl to mod
17:11 schwarzvgrune: i can recheck when its more refined
17:11 ExKagii-: ok ok
thx for mod yea ahah nice xD
inbee
Sedikit Mods. :)

1|2|3|4

00:04:350 - Add note di 4
00:05:100 - Add Note di 3
00:05:400 - Add Note di 4
Untuk alasan yg diatas, soalnya ane liat ada dobel note pas bunyi pianonya agak keras.

00:06:000 - Coba bikin kaya gini? http://puu.sh/gOP0f.png "cuma saran :v "
00:14:100 - Mungkin di add note, soalnya di Clap yang lain pake dobel note sih. ._.
00:16:950 - Add di 4 mungkin, biar bass lebih berasa. :v
00:20:100 (20100|3,20100|0,20250|1,20250|2,20400|2,20400|0,20400|3,20550|1,20700|1,20700|0,20700|3) - Pass ini ane gaa dapet maksudnya gimana. ._. mungkin enakan kayak gini http://puu.sh/gOPdN.jpg , atau http://puu.sh/gOPft.jpg , soalnya kalo gitu pedoman ane sih 3Clap 2Bass, dan juga bass di dalem bunyi nya sama, makanya ane recomended kayak gitu.

00:21:300 - maybee add note? ._.
00:23:400 - ^
00:24:600 - Coba kaya gini http://puu.sh/gOPmf.jpg
00:38:250 - gaa ada SV kan? mending di isi.
00:39:300 - why not dobel note?
00:43:050 - Isi
00:43:200 - mungkin kaya gini http://puu.sh/gOPy3.jpg lebih enak.
00:53:850 - Add Note ?
01:13:350 - ^
01:43:200 (103200|3,103200|0) - kaya gini? http://puu.sh/gOPJo.jpg

Sekian Dulu deh,
lagunya enak, pengen join. :o

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