the bg disturbs me i want to die
maybe small opinion about things on infection
00:24:292 - i think for this part it's good to reduce the chords to emphasize on the arrangement change, because the kick and snare sounds are now way smaller / non-existent. maybe remove 00:24:292 (24292|2,24469|4,24822|2,24822|6,24998|4,25175|0) - and so on
00:44:410 (44410|3) - there's only one note while 00:45:116 (45116|1,45116|5) - this one has two
00:45:469 (45469|2,45469|6,45822|4,45822|0,45998|3,45998|1) - i don't think it's appropriate to use 2-note chords here, especially because it overshadows the snare notes. meanwhile you can anchor 00:45:822 - and 00:45:998 -
00:46:175 - 00:51:822 - 2 notes?
01:21:998 - tbh i'd use longer LNs instead of doublestreams like this. i think you also did that too right? i liked it
01:26:233 - ^
01:31:351 - 2 notes?
01:41:233 - why 4 notes?
01:50:233 (110233|4,110233|6,110410|3,110410|5,110586|4,110586|2) - they're actually repeating itself so it'd make sense if you just make anchors. you also did that on 01:38:939 -
02:00:116 - i prefer having 1-1-2-2-1-1-2-2 pattern instead of just 1-2-1-2
02:07:175 - ^
02:13:880 - https://i.imgur.com/0yt3ooM.png it looks nicer this way imo but there's a problem that this jacks on 02:07:880 - and 02:25:527 - are also on the right hand
lmao modding on a qualifed map but you have something else to fix anyway so w/e
maybe small opinion about things on infection
00:24:292 - i think for this part it's good to reduce the chords to emphasize on the arrangement change, because the kick and snare sounds are now way smaller / non-existent. maybe remove 00:24:292 (24292|2,24469|4,24822|2,24822|6,24998|4,25175|0) - and so on
00:44:410 (44410|3) - there's only one note while 00:45:116 (45116|1,45116|5) - this one has two
00:45:469 (45469|2,45469|6,45822|4,45822|0,45998|3,45998|1) - i don't think it's appropriate to use 2-note chords here, especially because it overshadows the snare notes. meanwhile you can anchor 00:45:822 - and 00:45:998 -
00:46:175 - 00:51:822 - 2 notes?
01:21:998 - tbh i'd use longer LNs instead of doublestreams like this. i think you also did that too right? i liked it
01:26:233 - ^
01:31:351 - 2 notes?
01:41:233 - why 4 notes?
01:50:233 (110233|4,110233|6,110410|3,110410|5,110586|4,110586|2) - they're actually repeating itself so it'd make sense if you just make anchors. you also did that on 01:38:939 -
02:00:116 - i prefer having 1-1-2-2-1-1-2-2 pattern instead of just 1-2-1-2
02:07:175 - ^
02:13:880 - https://i.imgur.com/0yt3ooM.png it looks nicer this way imo but there's a problem that this jacks on 02:07:880 - and 02:25:527 - are also on the right hand
lmao modding on a qualifed map but you have something else to fix anyway so w/e