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AIR

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello! Ticket used from my queue!

I found this map quite great! So ... ~
[> General <]
  1. - Timing Check: I think the BPM is actually 125BPM, it'd still be the same as you've made. 124.990 more appropriate imo ;w;
  2. - Just Easy and Normal? Nothing harder?cant make hard for this song Orz
  3. - I don't think soft-hitclap and soft-hitfinish sounds fitting to the song like this one. But maybe you could try another softer custom hitsounds unlike this one.
[> Easy <]
  1. 00:30:291 (2,1,2) - Are you planning to make a blanket here? or not? done
  2. 00:38:931 (2,1) - Is this overlap on purpose? fixed
  3. 00:47:573 (2,3) - Maybe you should try another pattern than this one, sth like blanket or circularize. done
  4. 01:35:096 (2,1) - Same as 00:38:931 (2,1) - fixed
  5. 01:59:578 (1,3) - A little recorrect blanket. done
  6. 02:04:378 (3,1) - I think you could make a double blanket here a bit?
  7. - Some overlaps doesn't like okay to me, but most i found are quite amazing!
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:57:173 (5,2) - Stack or sth? fixed stack
  2. 01:14:934 (1,3,4) - ^
  3. 02:03:418 (3,4) - Recorrect blanket or sth? done
  4. - Perfection.

Get me back when you're done! B)
thanks!update
Cerulean Veyron
Checked everything, i'm not sure if this Easy diff you have is fine with those slider-border overlapping and few stacks. I hope it's not a big deal...

Normal is fine, less the same reason with Easy. But i feel this map is good to go! Bubbled ~ :3/
Topic Starter
AIR
\o/
meii18
hype o3o
Rizia
preview time不放在任何一段副歌前?
另外normal的widescreen support應該要關的
其實我覺得所有diff的letter box和widescreen support都可以全關了
Topic Starter
AIR

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

preview time不放在任何一段副歌前?
另外normal的widescreen support應該要關的
其實我覺得所有diff的letter box和widescreen support都可以全關了
改了
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Rizia
qualified.
Kamio Misuzu
闷声起飞,恭喜恭喜
meii18
Gratz ~
Garven
Hi AIR,

We need to disqualify your map set due to the severely overlapping sliders in the Easy difficulty. Please make sure that your sliders have a very clear and unobfusticated path - this is especially needed in lower-level difficulties.


Another general issue that should be fixed is overlapping patterns with ambiguous flow as far as an Easy level map is concerned. See curling flows and overlaps such as 01:09:175 (1,2) - and 01:04:855 (2,1) -

Please contact BNs to help you get your mapset back to a rankable state, thanks.
Cerulean Veyron
.... I knew it
Myxo
Nice set, good luck with the requalify!
Cerulean Veyron
Came back for recheck, as told... no kudosu

[> Easy <]
  1. 00:30:291 (2) - Maybe you could remake this slider better? e.g. > http://puu.sh/hcfWc/78f1107314.png
  2. 00:51:894 (1,2) - Idk but recorrect blanket? change pattern? or sth...
  3. 01:33:656 (1) - Kinda like the same reason as 00:30:291 (2) -
  4. 02:22:620 (1,2) - Same as 00:51:894 (1,2) -
  5. 02:26:940 (1) - Remove NC, since the previous combo is really short. ofc..
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:49:012 (1) - I guess this might also counts as what Garven said from this dq, you'd better change this. Since it's a Normal diff, at least... A simple blanket.
  2. 00:54:773 (1) - ^
  3. - There are others, so find them...
  4. 01:07:254 (2,3) - Try curving more of these two slider, or maybe might perform double blanket.
  5. 01:16:855 (3,4) - Fix the stack or sth.
  6. 01:36:056 (6,1) - Why spacing differed here?
  7. 02:19:740 (1,2,1) - ^

Get me back when you're done, so i can bubble this... again mfmfmf
Topic Starter
AIR

Gray Veyron wrote:

Came back for recheck, as told... no kudosu

[> Easy <]
  1. 00:30:291 (2) - Maybe you could remake this slider better? e.g.
    > http://puu.sh/hcfWc/78f1107314.png
  2. 00:51:894 (1,2) - Idk but recorrect blanket? change pattern? or sth...
  3. 01:33:656 (1) - Kinda like the same reason as 00:30:291 (2) -
  4. 02:22:620 (1,2) - Same as 00:51:894 (1,2) -
  5. 02:26:940 (1) - Remove NC, since the previous combo is really short. ofc..
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:49:012 (1) - I guess this might also counts as what Garven said from this dq, you'd better change this. Since it's a Normal diff, at least... A simple blanket.
  2. 00:54:773 (1) - ^
  3. - There are others, so find them...
  4. 01:07:254 (2,3) - Try curving more of these two slider, or maybe might perform double blanket.
  5. 01:16:855 (3,4) - Fix the stack or sth.
  6. 01:36:056 (6,1) - Why spacing differed here? slight error for better flow Orz
  7. 02:19:740 (1,2,1) - ^

Get me back when you're done, so i can bubble this... again mfmfmf
fixed, thanks!
Cerulean Veyron

AIR wrote:

Gray Veyron wrote:

[> Normal <]
  1. 01:36:056 (6,1) - Why spacing differed here? slight error for better flow Orz
Just for the flow? stack as well eh?? Are you really sure about this? ughh :< ... It looks major to me, might lead to 2nd dq better you not break spacings over Easy/Normal diffs ;n;
Topic Starter
AIR

Gray Veyron wrote:

fine, you are right, fixed them, although i dont know any rules about cant make stack at Normal diff
thanks!
Cerulean Veyron
Stacks are still okay on Normal diffs.. I'm not offended lol >u>

Well then, let's bring this forward right now
meii18
hi AIR

[Easy]
  1. 00:44:693(2)- Ooops bad stack.Place this slider to 122|205 for a better stack with 00:42:773(3)-
  2. 01:04:855(2)- I suggest to make ctrl+j and then place it to 137|241 for a better flow and movement of the cursor
  3. 01:40:856(2)- Bas stack again.Place it with just 1 pixel to left for a better stack
  4. 01:48:057(1)- Rotate this slider with 6 degress then move the last gap to 299|356 for a better flow and to the cursor arrive perfectly on next note
  5. 02:05:338(1)- Another bad stack ==.For a better stack , place this slider to 85|337
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:613(3,4)- This really doesn't look so good. Try this instead http://puu.sh/hg9d2/d45e243f09.jpg I curved (4)- to make a blanket with the previous slider
  2. 01:01:493(3)- Ctrl+j for a better flow and movement of the cursor
Good mapset and a beautiful and magical song ~

Call me back ~
Topic Starter
AIR

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

SPOILER
hi AIR

[Easy]
  1. 00:44:693(2)- Ooops bad stack.Place this slider to 122|205 for a better stack with 00:42:773(3)-
  2. 01:04:855(2)- I suggest to make ctrl+j and then place it to 137|241 for a better flow and movement of the cursor
  3. 01:40:856(2)- Bas stack again.Place it with just 1 pixel to left for a better stack
  4. 01:48:057(1)- Rotate this slider with 6 degress then move the last gap to 299|356 for a better flow and to the cursor arrive perfectly on next note
  5. 02:05:338(1)- Another bad stack ==.For a better stack , place this slider to 85|337
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:613(3,4)- This really doesn't look so good. Try this instead http://puu.sh/hg9d2/d45e243f09.jpg I curved (4)- to make a blanket with the previous slider
  2. 01:01:493(3)- Ctrl+j for a better flow and movement of the cursor
Good mapset and a beautiful and magical song ~

Call me back ~
thanks, update
meii18
Too many qualified maps today ;w; We should wait till tomorrow

Here is :3



Such a beautiful song....Good job
DarknessAngel
地方的精靈世紀需要Hard

gratz :>
chu yin dou zi
楼主加油,等了那么久终于出这首了 :) :)
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