Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Wow I'm here just after unbubbled
will work for this later

Keada wrote:

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Wow I'm here just after unbubbled
will work for this later

Hype <3 Im not Home so ;D tyt :>

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Hi, From my queue's mod!
It's a nice song, for approved

Dawn

Well basically your map lacks consistency, because you just mainly focused on streams.
so in my opinion, it should be added some more jump sliders (or other better shapes), and also expand many parts of notes.
also check all NCs and be sure they're all in good standing

1. 00:06:336 (1,2) - try this two:
   
   image

   
   
2. 00:11:124 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - compare this two transistions:
   
   your way

   
   My suggestion

   
3. 00:13:604 (1) - continue combo, 00:13:965 (4) - NC here
4. 00:14:959 - a circle here
5. 00:21:194 (1,2) - more distance
6. 00:22:279 (8,9) - ^
7. 00:25:170 (1) - continue combo, 00:25:532 (4) - NC here
8. 00:46:134 (5,1) - more distance
9. 00:47:218 (5,1) - ^
10. 01:19:206 (1,2,3,4) - Well, these doubles are unexpected, because of low consistency. Two way to go: delete them, or add more doubles.
11. 01:59:959 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - expand them
12. 02:10:079 (6) - considering NC
13. 02:33:573 (1) - Don't let the slider ends on 1/4 lines.
14. 02:33:573 (1) - breaktime?
15. 03:39:356 (4) - far more
16. 03:54:175 (1,2) - blanket
17. 03:55:079 (3) - Why it's not in 1/8?
18. 05:08:271 - Add a spinner in breaktime?
19. 05:47:307 (9) - NC

Good Luck!

rhalp10 wrote:

Sorry My Queue For STDHas Been Closed I Can't Handle That Mode Anymore ..

donten wrote:

hellu.

shittymod incoming. mostly suggestions

SPOILER

General: you might wanna rename the BG to something "better" :p

00:51:916 (4,5) - would recommend to space this like you did here 00:50:471 (1,2) - no?
00:53:362 (6,7) - ^
01:03:844 (1,2,3) - very short spacing between 2 and 3 (you are doing this later on aswell for no real reason)
01:05:290 (3,4,5) - ^
01:09:627 (1,2,3) - I think 2 and 3 are in the slider by a little.
01:45:953 (4) - I am far to bad for this map but this slider could take ppl by surprise who don't know the song.
01:53:453 (1,2,3) - make the slider mirror
02:16:224 (1) - CTRL+G
02:27:790 (6) - ^
02:31:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - would wait with the spaced streams until the end.
03:02:127 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - no need to curve them.
03:05:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:10:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:42:247 (3) - CTRL+G
04:46:404 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - decide on a spacing here i don't feel like here is changing anything

You could work on some streampatterns since you use the same ones quite often. I recommend you to look at map
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/697546
some delicious streams. :p
Didn't take a look at the hitsounds since I am bad at it ):

Good Luck <3 would love to see 1 more Demetori Ranked APP !