Demetori~
always stream maps haha!
Dawn:
00:11:822 (4) - should NC this, this pattern still have 1/3 beats
00:18:845 (4,5,6) - why you didnt make some triplet pattern in here?
00:33:845 (9) - make triplet or triplet slider (very makes sense)
00:34:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the pattern here feels off consider you change it like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2944659 (yeah just patterning, not note placement)
01:12:880 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - i suggest you to follow guitar sound, this triplets is not feel good i think
01:19:206 (1,2,3) - this should be a doublet (but triplet overmap everywhere ;_;), yeah i kno this~
02:10:621 (7) - need to delete this (its okay if you didnt map 02:10:621 - ), so players can charge stream energy for this
02:21:465 (5,9) - if you want it just NC this, i hear some drum transition in this pattern so this NCs will be makes sense to your map
02:33:573 (5) - you should NC this, no matter that slider has 1 combo you just need to do it
02:50:561 - to 02:56:344 - in this part you should keep your combo patterning at downbeat (i hear some Hats sound there)
03:02:488 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - confusing i guess
03:04:747 - why you randomly blank this one??
03:17:850 (3,1) - this flow very rigid, you can move this pattern to x228y348 (or anything else), then you can fix distance spacing for 03:17:669 (2) -
03:18:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ♥
03:20:199 (7) - should NC this
03:20:922 - to 03:26:705 - in this part you need to keep your NCs at downbeat, please check some NCs in that part (i prefer this combos because strong instrumental finish makes more sense of NCs than Guitar song or anything else)
03:35:380 - i didnt really thinking about this pattern but at least you need to map some clickable object in here (and NC it)
03:35:561 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - combo in here feels unnecessary (please follow snare sound as combo)
03:52:006 (1,2,3) - change to 2 reverse slider feels better
03:53:573 (2,3,4,5) - 1/2 + 1/3 pattern combo is bad idea, make some reverse slider in some 1/3 pattern can make readability more comfortable
04:28:151 (5) - change to triplet slider?
04:28:874 (1) - change to 1/2 slider?
05:44:686 - why? (05:44:596 (3) - make this 1/4 slider or anything else)
okay stream :3
good luck!