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angela - Sidonia

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Topic Starter
mion_6GKM
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 April 2015 at 20:17:36

Artist: angela
Title: Sidonia
Source: シドニアの騎士
Tags: knights of sidonia opening tv size -Famous- TT Mouse
BPM: 59
Filesize: 19245kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,3 stars, 82 notes)
  2. -Famous-'s Insane (4,01 stars, 283 notes)
  3. Hard (2,92 stars, 202 notes)
  4. Normal (1,77 stars, 117 notes)
  5. Tt's Insane (3,7 stars, 246 notes)
Download: angela - Sidonia
Download: angela - Sidonia (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~Knights of Sidonia~





Easy by me

Normal by me

Hard by me

Insane by TT Mouse

2nd Insane by -Famous-

READY FOR MOD!! >U<

*If you downloaded this map before 28/03/2015, please re-download it!

-Please don't STEAL my VIDEO n BG!!!-

TtmnZk
Topic Starter
mion_6GKM

TT Mouse wrote:

done!
Tt's Insane
Thanks!! XD
RandF
From my queue~

[metadata]
  1. Title: シドニア
    Romanized title: Sidonia
  2. remove "tv size" from title. and add it for tags
    Ranking Criteria
    Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
    official site :arrow: http://style-market.com/angela/disc.html
  3. remove "angela" from tags. Basically, you should not add the words in other metadata for tags
  4. about tags, "knight of sidonia" :arrow: "knights of sidonia"
[General]
  1. combocolor 3 and 4 are too slimilar to distinguish.
[Easy]
  1. 00:08:218 (5) - I prefer to follow 00:09:235-. suggetion
  2. 00:17:879 (1,2,3) - this stack pattern is difficult for easy
  3. 00:23:886- drum finish
  4. 00:34:499 (4) - NC
  5. 00:41:029 (3) - ^
  6. 00:44:295 (1) - awkward rhythm. you should make 1/1(white line) rhythm at this part
  7. 00:49:193 (4) - NC
  8. 00:56:540 (6,7) - bad spacing. make DS 1.0x
  9. 01:02:254 (5,1) - swap NC
  10. 01:08:784 (1) - why not stack correctly on 01:06:744 (4) - ?
  11. 01:14:703 (7) - for easy, you should not use 1/4 rhythm (blue line)
  12. 01:17:356 (3) - red line rhythm is not good
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:981 (2) - delete. I feel not good
  2. 00:08:218 (1,3) - swap NC
  3. 00:19:405 (5) - SV changing is unnecessary.
  4. 00:23:886 (5,1) - confusing pattern. I recommend to make other's
  5. 00:31:642 (5,1) - swap NC
  6. 00:34:499~00:45:927- sof-hitnormal5 is not good. I think this sound on red line is very strange
  7. 00:45:927 (1,1) - too soon between spinner end and next note. check it :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3766879
    Spinner recovery time
    Depends somewhat on the BPM, but if it's 150-190, try to go for at least 4 beats of recovery time for easy, 2 beats for normal, and 1 beat for hard. There is no requirement for Insane but at least 1 beat is common courtesy especially if the object isn't near the center.
  8. 00:48:784 (2,3) - 1/1 slider is better simply
  9. 01:13:682 (3,4,5) - very hard to find rhythm. I recommend to use reverse slider
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:811 (1,2) - decrease spacing. very difficult
  2. 00:32:866 (1,2) - not good flow. how about the flow like this?
  3. 00:34:091 (1,3) - swap NC
  4. 00:48:989 (8,1) - not good flow
  5. 01:11:642 (1,2) - symmetrical pattern is better looking
  6. 01:13:274 (3,4,5,6) - too hard to find rhythm. 5 is unsnapped. in this case. 1/4 slider is better, imo
  7. 01:19:193 (4,6) - avoid this overlapping
  8. 01:25:111- add a note
[Tt's Insane]
  1. check tags!
  2. 00:48:784 (5,6) - make parallel for good flow
  3. 01:26:744 (1) - end at 01:27:968- ?
[-Famous-'s Insane]
  1. 00:40:621 (3,4,5,6) - I think this part is 1/3 rhythm
  2. 00:47:050- I suggest to follow this bass drum
~Good Luck~
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General
  1. bleh
-Famous-'s Insane
  1. 00:40:621 (3,4,5) - 1/3 beat stream?
Tt's Insane
  1. 00:19:277 (5,6) - Move this so it doesn't stack awkwardly
  2. 00:19:277 (5,6) - Not stacked properly
  3. 00:30:621 (6) - ^
  4. 00:40:009 (3) - Remove
Hard
  1. 00:35:927 (6,7,1) - Fix this
  2. 01:13:886 (4,5,6) - Needs consistent distance spacing
Topic Starter
mion_6GKM

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[metadata]
  1. Title: シドニア Done
    Romanized title: Sidonia Done
  2. remove "tv size" from title. and add it for tags allright!
    Ranking Criteria
    Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
    upss
    official site :arrow: http://style-market.com/angela/disc.html
  3. remove "angela" from tags. Basically, you should not add the words in other metadata for tags done
  4. about tags, "knight of sidonia" :arrow: "knights of sidonia"
done
[General]
  1. combocolor 3 and 4 are too slimilar to distinguish.
[Easy]
  1. 00:08:218 (5) - I prefer to follow 00:09:235-. suggetion done
  2. 00:17:879 (1,2,3) - this stack pattern is difficult for easy done
  3. 00:23:886- drum finish i forgot..
  4. 00:34:499 (4) - NC done
  5. 00:41:029 (3) - ^^
  6. 00:44:295 (1) - awkward rhythm. you should make 1/1(white line) rhythm at this part sorry
  7. 00:49:193 (4) - NC done
  8. 00:56:540 (6,7) - bad spacing. make DS 1.0x like that?
  9. 01:02:254 (5,1) - swap NC done
  10. 01:08:784 (1) - why not stack correctly on 01:06:744 (4) - ? done?
  11. 01:14:703 (7) - for easy, you should not use 1/4 rhythm (blue line) im so sorry
  12. 01:17:356 (3) - red line rhythm is not good
sounds great
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:981 (2) - delete. I feel not good sorry
  2. 00:08:218 (1,3) - swap NC ok
  3. 00:19:405 (5) - SV changing is unnecessary. right...
  4. 00:23:886 (5,1) - confusing pattern. I recommend to make other's done
  5. 00:31:642 (5,1) - swap NC done
  6. 00:34:499~00:45:927- sof-hitnormal5 is not good. I think this sound on red line is very strange done
  7. 00:45:927 (1,1) - too soon between spinner end and next note. check it :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3766879 change from spinner to slider
    Spinner recovery time
    Depends somewhat on the BPM, but if it's 150-190, try to go for at least 4 beats of recovery time for easy, 2 beats for normal, and 1 beat for hard. There is no requirement for Insane but at least 1 beat is common courtesy especially if the object isn't near the center.
  8. 00:48:784 (2,3) - 1/1 slider is better simply done
  9. 01:13:682 (3,4,5) - very hard to find rhythm. I recommend to use reverse slider ok
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:811 (1,2) - decrease spacing. very difficult done
  2. 00:32:866 (1,2) - not good flow. how about the flow like this? cool
  3. 00:34:091 (1,3) - swap NC ok
  4. 00:48:989 (8,1) - not good flow sorry
  5. 01:11:642 (1,2) - symmetrical pattern is better looking you're right
  6. 01:13:274 (3,4,5,6) - too hard to find rhythm. 5 is unsnapped. in this case. 1/4 slider is better, imo XD
  7. 01:19:193 (4,6) - avoid this overlapping change
  8. 01:25:111- add a note
done
[Tt's Insane]
  1. check tags!
  2. 00:48:784 (5,6) - make parallel for good flow
  3. 01:26:744 (1) - end at 01:27:968- ?
[-Famous-'s Insane]
  1. 00:40:621 (3,4,5,6) - I think this part is 1/3 rhythm
  2. 00:47:050- I suggest to follow this bass drum
~Good Luck~ thank you!
Topic Starter
mion_6GKM

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General
  1. bleh
-Famous-'s Insane
  1. 00:40:621 (3,4,5) - 1/3 beat stream?
Tt's Insane
  1. 00:19:277 (5,6) - Move this so it doesn't stack awkwardly
  2. 00:19:277 (5,6) - Not stacked properly
  3. 00:30:621 (6) - ^
  4. 00:40:009 (3) - Remove
Hard
  1. 00:35:927 (6,7,1) - Fix this really?
  2. 01:13:886 (4,5,6) - Needs consistent distance spacing
done
Chaoslitz
as requested ovo9

[Hard]
  1. Try to have similar ds as possible, those 2.0x are too far imo
  2. 00:01:100 (1,2) - Shorten the distance here, It is not necessary to have 3.0x here
  3. 00:03:896 (4,5,6) - Rhythm is different but use same distance here which may mislead players, put 00:05:167 (6) near 00:04:659 (5)
  4. 00:30:723 (1,2) - Move this higher
  5. 00:35:927 (4,5,1) - This distance QAQ, stack 00:35:927 (4,5) with 00:36:131 (1), dont forget to fix spacing
  6. 00:43:886 (4,5) - Not really suggesting this pattern :c
  7. 00:46:744 (2,3,4,5) - same ds
  8. 00:53:070 (6,7,1,2) - Flow is not good here :<
  9. 00:56:335 (2,3) - Same as 00:43:886 (4,5)
  10. 01:02:254 (1) - Curve up instead?
  11. 01:17:560 (1,2,3) - Same ds
[Tt's Insane]
  1. 00:35:213 - Add a note here
  2. 00:45:009 - ^
[-Famous-'s Insane]
  1. 00:42:118 (4,5) - Too far from 00:41:710 (2,3)

good luck~
Famous

Chaoslitz wrote:

[-Famous-'s Insane]
  1. 00:42:118 (4,5) - Too far from 00:41:710 (2,3) | Fixed spacing.

RandomEffect wrote:

[-Famous-'s Insane]
  1. 00:40:621 (3,4,5,6) - I think this part is 1/3 rhythm | Fixed rhythm.
  2. 00:47:050- I suggest to follow this bass drum | Fixed rhythm.
GD update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Sidonia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48580
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 10761
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Sidonia
TitleUnicode:シドニア
Artist:angela
ArtistUnicode:angela
Creator:mion_6GKM
Version:-Famous-'s Insane
Source:シドニアの騎士
Tags:knights of sidonia opening tv size -Famous- TT Mouse
BeatmapID:668239
BeatmapSetID:293486

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"knights-of-sidonia-storyart.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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180,48,59906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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84,64,60110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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TtmnZk
DahplA

DahplA wrote:

Tt's Insane

[*]00:40:009 (3) - Remove flow Trumpets [/list]
other fixed
thxs mod!

Tt's Insane
Topic Starter
mion_6GKM

Chaoslitz wrote:

as requested ovo9

[Hard]
  1. Try to have similar ds as possible, those 2.0x are too far imo sorry
  2. 00:01:100 (1,2) - Shorten the distance here, It is not necessary to have 3.0x here like that?
  3. 00:03:896 (4,5,6) - Rhythm is different but use same distance here which may mislead players, put 00:05:167 (6) near 00:04:659 (5)done
  4. 00:30:723 (1,2) - Move this higher done
  5. 00:35:927 (4,5,1) - This distance QAQ, stack 00:35:927 (4,5) with 00:36:131 (1), dont forget to fix spacing right!
  6. 00:43:886 (4,5) - Not really suggesting this pattern :c upss done!
  7. 00:46:744 (2,3,4,5) - same ds done
  8. 00:53:070 (6,7,1,2) - Flow is not good here :< sorry
  9. 00:56:335 (2,3) - Same as 00:43:886 (4,5) done
  10. 01:02:254 (1) - Curve up instead? ok
  11. 01:17:560 (1,2,3) - Same ds
done

[Tt's Insane]
  1. 00:35:213 - Add a note here
  2. 00:45:009 - ^
[-Famous-'s Insane]
  1. 00:42:118 (4,5) - Too far from 00:41:710 (2,3)

good luck~thank you XD
Topic Starter
mion_6GKM
UPDATE
Lasoki
hi, M4M from my queue.
sry took a bit long.
I'm not that good at modding insane yet, so I probably won't be able to mod it that well.

[General:]

  1. I think you should lower the volume by 20% everywhere, it's kind of loud as it is.
  2. AI mod says the tags from Tt's Insane conflict with the rest. It's because "Mouse" is written with a small "m" in Tt's Insane, please change that.
  3. Also I think you should try to get a video without any subs, their quite distracting imo.
  4. Sorry if I'm mistaken, but I think you map to the vocals, I suggest you map more to the music, especially drums, most people do that and, at least for me, my maps got much better after I started mapping to the music insteas of the vocals. And also I'm not asking you to remap this or anything, but just telling you for future reference.
[Easy:]

  1. I srsly think you shouldn't change the SV in Easy... I mean like at 00:01:100 - it's at 1.3 and at 00:21:693 - it's at 1. It's too difficult for beginners when there's a change in SV imo.
  2. Also... Please try not to stack things in Easy... Beginners have a hard time playing those when they just start and aren't even used to the approach circle.
    Here are the places where you stacked objects, please unstack them:
    00:42:254 -
    00:45:519 -
    01:18:580 -
  3. 00:06:693 (4,5) - why don't you blanket this
  4. 00:54:703 (4) - move to start at 00:54:499 - (there's a strong beat there) but keep the end at 00:55:315 -
  5. 00:57:764 - move to start at 00:57:764 - (lika above) but keep the end at 00:58:580 -
  6. 01:14:703 (7) - I think you should delete this, either that or add a note at 01:14:499 - and 01:14:091 -
  7. 01:21:437 - add a note, I feel like something is missing.
[Normal:]

  1. 00:05:167 (5) - imo you should just make this a normal curved slider.
  2. 00:13:303 (1) - I think you should end this at 00:14:320 -
  3. 00:30:417 (4) - move the third slider point to (260/96) to blanket with 00:29:601 (2) -
  4. 00:18:896 (4) - I would just put a circle here 00:18:896 - and delete this slider.
[Hard:]

  1. 00:06:693 (1,2) - I think you should just need to put circles at the starting of these sliders instead of them. If you really want those sliders then I suggest you soften the volume at the end of them.
  2. 01:17:560 (1) - I think you should curve this, doesn't really fit as it is imo.
  3. 01:20:213 (7,1) - blanket this properly.
  4. 01:22:662 (5) - I think you should make this a normally curved slider and blanket with 01:23:274 (6,7) -
  5. 01:25:315 (5,6) - blanket this too.
[Tt's Insane:]

  1. 00:38:172 (2,3) - maybe blanket this?
  2. 00:56:948 (5,1) - blanket this properly
  3. O.o this is an awesome insane!
[-Famous-'s Insane:]

  1. ... Can't find anything, too perfect lol.
  2. Love your streams btw :D
Well, that's it for me. Feel free to ask me any question (via forum PM or in game) you have to this mod, or just your map or anything.
Btw, I suggest you blanket more when you map next time especially in Easy and normal, it makes your map look nicer imo.

Good luck getting this ranked!
Topic Starter
mion_6GKM

Lasoki wrote:

hi, M4M from my queue.
sry took a bit long.
I'm not that good at modding insane yet, so I probably won't be able to mod it that well.

[General:]

  1. I think you should lower the volume by 20% everywhere, it's kind of loud as it is. ok
  2. AI mod says the tags from Tt's Insane conflict with the rest. It's because "Mouse" is written with a small "m" in Tt's Insane, please change that. forgot!
  3. Also I think you should try to get a video without any subs, their quite distracting imo. i can't find HD video :o
  4. Sorry if I'm mistaken, but I think you map to the vocals, I suggest you map more to the music, especially drums, most people do that and, at least for me, my maps got much better after I started mapping to the music insteas of the vocals. And also I'm not asking you to remap this or anything, but just telling you for future reference. thanks for advice!
[Easy:]

  1. I srsly think you shouldn't change the SV in Easy... I mean like at 00:01:100 - it's at 1.3 and at 00:21:693 - it's at 1. It's too difficult for beginners when there's a change in SV imo. sorry i can't
  2. Also... Please try not to stack things in Easy... Beginners have a hard time playing those when they just start and aren't even used to the approach circle. fixed all
    Here are the places where you stacked objects, please unstack them:
    00:42:254 -
    00:45:519 -
    01:18:580 -
  3. 00:06:693 (4,5) - why don't you blanket this fixed
  4. 00:54:703 (4) - move to start at 00:54:499 - (there's a strong beat there) but keep the end at 00:55:315 - ok
  5. 00:57:764 - move to start at 00:57:764 - (lika above) but keep the end at 00:58:580 - ok
  6. 01:14:703 (7) - I think you should delete this, either that or add a note at 01:14:499 - and 01:14:091 - ok
  7. 01:21:437 - add a note, I feel like something is missing. fixed
[Normal:]

  1. 00:05:167 (5) - imo you should just make this a normal curved slider. done
  2. 00:13:303 (1) - I think you should end this at 00:14:320 - sorry i can't
  3. 00:30:417 (4) - move the third slider point to (260/96) to blanket with 00:29:601 (2) - like that?
  4. 00:18:896 (4) - I would just put a circle here 00:18:896 - and delete this slider. sorry i can't


[Hard:]

  1. 00:06:693 (1,2) - I think you should just need to put circles at the starting of these sliders instead of them. If you really want those sliders then I suggest you soften the volume at the end of them. like that?
  2. 01:17:560 (1) - I think you should curve this, doesn't really fit as it is imo.fixed
  3. 01:20:213 (7,1) - blanket this properly.like that
  4. 01:22:662 (5) - I think you should make this a normally curved slider and blanket with 01:23:274 (6,7) - fixed
  5. 01:25:315 (5,6) - blanket this too. ok


[Tt's Insane:]

  1. 00:38:172 (2,3) - maybe blanket this?
  2. 00:56:948 (5,1) - blanket this properly
  3. O.o this is an awesome insane!
[-Famous-'s Insane:]

  1. ... Can't find anything, too perfect lol.
  2. Love your streams btw :D
Well, that's it for me. Feel free to ask me any question (via forum PM or in game) you have to this mod, or just your map or anything.
Btw, I suggest you blanket more when you map next time especially in Easy and normal, it makes your map look nicer imo.

Good luck getting this ranked! thank you so much :) !!
Nerova Riuz GX


Hi, this is from my queue's mod. sry for a little bit late.

General

  1. Uncheck Widescreen Support because you don't have any SB.

-Famous-'s Insane

There's a big DEFINITE trouble between 00:34:499 - and 00:47:560 - .
ALL notes MUST be placed in 1/3, the same as those sliders.
It's not a recommended suggestion, it's a problem you should fix.


=======================================================
Especially 00:40:621 (3,4,5,6) - , it's an obvious mistake.

Fix them pls.

  1. 00:05:167 (5) - better NC here, not 00:05:676 (1) -
  2. 00:07:201 (4) - ^
  3. 00:13:303 (3) - ^
  4. 00:15:337 (4) - ^
  5. 01:14:703 (4) - NC?
  6. 00:47:016 - There's a beat here in 1/3.
  7. 01:23:070 - There's a clear drum beat here. add something?
  8. 01:24:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - like this?

Tt's Insane

Same problem in 1/3 notes with -Famous-'s diff.

Hitsounds are a little bit too loud. I can't even hear the music in some parts.
請記住,hitsounds是作為強調用,太大聲對遊戲以及圖本身並無幫助。
I think it can be renamed as a Light Insane.
  1. 我就在這裡用中文講明好了,不然我的破英文用來解釋這些一定沒人能看懂。
    從 00:49:193 - 到 01:02:254 - 這一段 kiai time 的作圖:
    1.來回梗用太多。
    2.幾乎所有的滑條開頭都放在白線上,但是因為重疊來回的圖形導致不能強調這個重音:
    舉例
    以 00:55:315 (4,5,1) - 來說:

    4-5 之間的距離和 5-1 的距離完全相等,因為他們是一個來回並且重疊的圖形
    但是由於滑條開頭的白線音是可以被"強調"的,所以可以讓 5-1 的距離拉長一點以凸顯"這是個重音"

Hard

Need more mods.
Map in Distance Snap before 00:19:405 - .
Check all NCs. NCs should better on (or near) those long white 1/1 lines.
Sample Volume can be under 60% between 01:02:254 - and 01:15:315 - .
  1. 00:46:744 (2,3,4,5) - too hard for Hard diff.

That's all.
Good Luck for you
Sumicchi
Hihi, I don't know if I should be posting this here since I'm not actually modding the map, I just wanted to point something out that seemed very significant to me.

In -Famous-'s Insane, I had to set a local +30ms offset for the map to align closely enough with the song. I'm not sure at the moment if the other difficulties are also this way, but it's definitely something that should be considered.
I love this map so much by the way x3 can't wait 'till it's ranked!

- Sumiko
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