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Demetori - Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura ~ Border of L

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jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on May-10-15 at 10:37:53 PM

Artist: Demetori
Title: Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura ~ Border of Life
Source: 東方Project
Tags: captin1 Giralda Nyquill RLC Touhou ZUN 如臨深遠 ～雨縒煙柳～東方妖々夢　～ Perfect Cherry Blossom 西行寺 幽々子 Yuyuko Saigyouji collaboration c71 Tokunan 徳南 Kyuuhouji 九宝時 Sinen ni Nozomu ga Gotoshi Bloom Nobly
BPM: 175
Filesize: 9897kb
Play Time: 05:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra Stage Collab (5.03 stars, 1313 notes)
Download: Demetori - Yuuga ni Sakase, Sumizome no Sakura ~ Border of Life
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Community Mapping Mentorship 2015 Proudly Presents:



優雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ～ Border of Life

Brought to you by: captin1 | Giralda | jonathanlfj | Nyquill | RLC
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Giralda
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Joined August 2012
Giralda
FIRST

hype hype hype
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
second owo
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
third owo
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
dude nice
only person in this collab that isn't chinese help
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Nyquill
This is the fifth reply to this topic

5 collab members
5 petals on a cherry blossom
5 star difficulty
song is 5 minutes long
map submitted 5pm
sb load is 1.3FIVE
MAP WAS SUBMITTED ON MARCH 15 2015
MY HAND HAS 5 FINGERS
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
Nyquill's real name has 5 letters
ILLUMINATI CONFIRMED
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Nathan
Beatmap Nominator
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Nathan
5
Luna-
811 posts
Joined June 2012
Luna-
hype
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2011
Nyquill
ALL SHALL BOW DOWN TO OUR LORD ANS SAVOIR 5
Kinshara
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Joined November 2013
Kinshara
Amazing.

Good luck to you guys on the mentorship~
RLC
Elite Mapper
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RLC
nyquill you are 二百五
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Callum
112 posts
Joined March 2013
Callum
uhh, 12th?
Some1
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Joined May 2012
Some1
21st

13th slide
Adol Christin
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Adol Christin
14th post, and 5th star~
captin1
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2011
captin1
can we like, not turn this thread into a forum game
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
HI!

  1. 01:10:281 (1) - i think it would flow better from the previous pattern if the slider was curved the other way (like a u shape) oh and consider adding a normal whistle along the slider :D
  2. 01:15:252 (4,5,1) - i feel like the jump should occur from 5->1 rather than from 4->5 due to the sudden change in pitch, and it would feel more dramatic !!
  3. 01:15:767 (1) - normal whistle? :D
  4. 01:21:252 (1) - i don't think a soft whistle fits here, but a normal whistle does! More normal whistles giralda!
  5. 03:40:452 (2) - what about putting the circle on the other side of (3)??? I think it would flow a bit better from 1 but idk
  6. 03:59:138 (5) - add NC for consistency?
  7. 04:51:939 (3,4,5,6,7) - consider this rhythm: http://puu.sh/gHjPM/96d513c566.jpg
hahaha i didn't find anything significant GOOD JOB
this song is like one of my favs from the album
goodluck with the map :D
VINXIS
Featured Artist
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VINXIS
what is a circle -RLC and Uzzi 2015

le pm m4m
general
41230366.jpg
leniancy stack .5 mmmmmm
add collab and collaboration to tags (and possibly, c71 or comiket 71 or w/e lol idk ayy lmao)
ya metadata is fine idk lol
sb
names are offgrid, so for some players that actually play w. storyboard on which is like no1 l o l they won't see it if they play in potato res or smth lma o. I'd suggest putting in in the grid instead of just outside lmao

also you can make the names flash too by making a fade pulse with a white version of the names 2 u kno. That'd be sik lol (but then you'll have to turn on the display epilepsy thing so lol)

o ya y did u make them diff specific, theres only 1 diff and havin a .osb insteadio wouldn't be so bad lol. idk not a big deal either way tbh
le map
ez 2 fc

lfj

  1. 00:14:910 (3,4) - since ur following the guitar I think replacing this with a slider would be more justifiable with the guitar strum instead lol idk
  2. 00:21:767 (7,8) - if u rlly care, they aren't parallel
  3. 01:50:224 (1) - wao not evn abreak 2/10 kappa
  4. 02:11:652 (9,10) - u sure u dont wanna just make 2 1/4 circles on the slider instead lol

captin of only 1 ship grill

  1. 00:29:138 (1,2,3) - ylol. idk having a triple at the start of a measure or starting at the big white tick instead of ending it sounds really eh. Doesn't sound justifiable either idkk (also slider end on a big white tick ughu)
  2. 02:35:652 (2,3,4,5) - y doesn't sound justified imo lol they do play fine tho so
  3. 02:41:652 (4) - ^
  4. 02:54:167 (5,6) - i feel like the flow is shouting for these to ctrl+g lol idk
  5. 02:55:595 (2) - O (couldnt u just make one repeat on the previous slider and make another slider that goes to the slider's end that is there right now to the circle or do u rlly want dat repeat consistency)
  6. 04:13:881 (4,1) - omg fullscreen jump tho cri evrytim
  7. 04:17:652 (3,4,1) - le new kanshou no maternou (not that it's bad or anythign lol its g)
  8. 04:23:138 (3,4,5,1) - asgsfhasfhasfhasvfhascjhasc these jumps tho rip

sleep medicine

  1. 01:29:481 (1) - is this a possible offscreen in any res or am i high on nyquill lmao. That's in 768p fullscreen btw
  2. 01:45:938 (5) - nc for new measure and combo consistency
  3. 01:46:795 (7,8) - maybe stack instead??? idklol
  4. 01:47:824 (2,3) - eghhhhhhhh make the space between them wider so they don't overlap 01:48:681 (1) - cuz it looks kinda ugly rn :S
  5. 02:17:652 (1,3) - asfgdfgadsfasfasdsa bad overlappo to read tbh
  6. 02:27:595 (2,3) - plays fine but y u do dis overmappio doe
  7. 02:28:110 (5,6) - rip jump
  8. 02:33:081 (6) - nc for new "measure"/"rhythm change or w/e idk i feel like it's shoutin for 1
  9. 03:59:138 (5) - asdfasdasdas myquill nc for new measure

arr ell see

  1. 00:44:224 (2,1,2) - idk awkward flo i think but it was mostly ok 2 play so
  2. 00:57:424 (4,5,6) - y dont u stak instead it would be better 2 play
  3. 01:02:567 (2) - idk i dont feel that anti-flo in the song so I'd say adding a circle on the red tick right after but it's not bad 2 play
  4. 03:21:938 (3) - u wanna rotate that or neh
  5. 03:25:538 (3,4) - le blanket nazimod pls (it prolly isn't even a blanket tho)
  6. 03:27:081 (1) - tbh u sudn't need a nc for this lo l
  7. 03:36:510 (1,3) - if u rlly care they dont parallel lmao
  8. 05:29:652 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - y did u do this only once lol

Giroldo

  1. 01:07:538 (5,1) - switch nc. since ur mapping with the guitar, might as well follow the comboing with th eguitar u feel
  2. 01:12:852 (6,1) - compared to the guitar I think using a circle instead and moving the slider one red tick to the right would sound better because it sounds awks like as if the slider end is on the end of the measure or smth lmao
  3. 01:18:510 (5,1) - same thign about hte nc
  4. 01:27:767 (5,6) - i almost broke here ajfgbsdjgsdjkgnsdjkgvmaklmfblndsgv; cud u ctrl+G the second slider or smth pl s
  5. 02:56:052 (1) - I'd say the SV change might cause misreads but it honestly shouldn't be an issu e lo l
  6. 03:10:795 (5,1) - aghhh do u rlly want that jump mm
  7. 04:42:682 (5) - i'd put this on the left of 04:42:511 (4) - so that the spacing between 04:41:996 (3,4) - and 04:42:682 (5,1) - is similar (not congruent so to s a y)
  8. 04:55:024 (13) - replace with 1/4 slider ekekekek (srsly tho, imo that'd be nice and cool and it literally is the kick ur mapping too s o)
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
你好，这里是灌水狂魔Adol。随手水一发摸，见笑了。x)
Translation: Greeting. Here is newbie mapper Adol. Just tried my best, hope this can help a bit. x)

既然大家都是国人，那我就不客气地用英文了。(me run >.<)

Extra Stage Collab

  1. Suggest you add the information in your front page to show which part for each mapper. This would provide convenience for other modders. (After the map ranked you can remove it. )
  2. In my opinion the color of mappers' name in storyboard is so close to the background image.
[jonathanlfj]
  1. 00:11:824 (2) - Suggest to change the slider to this. Flow would be smoother.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:04:967 (2) - Missing Normal whistle on the body?
  3. 01:53:995 (4) - I think this slider curves too much, looks not fine. What about this?
    SPOILER
[captin1]
  1. 00:25:195 (3) - This slider curves too much. Comparing with 00:22:452 (1) - , 00:25:195 (3) - looks not that good imo.
  2. 00:25:195 (3) - , 00:26:738 (2) - tail, 00:29:652 (4) - head, 00:35:138 (3) - , 00:37:710 (2) - tail and 00:40:452 (2) - tail. Try adding additional whistle on these point (without removing clap), sounds nice. (My personal taste)
  3. 02:32:567 (5) - NC
  4. 02:40:452 (3) - Suggest you change this into 2 circles, would be better. Current slider tail covers the clap sound.
  5. 02:55:367 (1) - Due to the drum sound in the music, this 1/6 slider is overmapped. This slider makes the next circle really tricky. Change it to 1/3 slider please.
  6. 04:13:538 (3) - ctrl+g. There's no strong beat here, therefore a jump-back flow does not make good sense imo.
[RLC]
  1. 00:45:252 (5) - Missing whistle on the head.
  2. 01:01:367 (2) - ctrl+g, I don't think it's necessary to make the flow juggling here.
  3. 03:19:538 (3,6,9) - Extend these circles into 1/4 sliders, cuz guitar sound is in continuous 1/4 rhythm.
  4. 03:20:395 (1) - Whistle on the head.
  5. 03:25:024 (5) - Change the Soft addition into Auto. This hitsound should have been a default Normal whistle, right?
  6. 03:31:710 (1) - 03:33:938 (4) - Same.
[Giralda]
  1. 01:23:995 (1) - Remove the whistle on the head.
  2. 03:13:195 (4,5) - Suggest you not line them up. Looks better imo.
  3. 03:17:138 (3,4) - Move the NC from 4 to 3.
  4. 04:49:711 (1) - Normal whistle on the body?
  5. 04:52:452 (6) - Normal whistle?
  6. 04:56:052 (4,5,6,7) - I hear 5 hits of drum sound for 1/4 each, and the last one is downbeat. Therefore 5 1/4 circle would be better imo. Current triplet (4,5,6) starts with white tick and end with red tick.
[Nyquill]
  1. 01:29:138 (3,1) - Blanket
  2. 01:31:024 (1,3) - Blanket. To make it easier just stack 3 with 01:30:510 (4) -
  3. 01:36:852 (2) - head and 01:37:195 (4,5) - Suggest to add whistle on these points.
  4. 02:20:395 (1,2,3) - Line them up.
  5. 02:24:338 (1,2) - Blanket. (wtf so many nazi mod? me run >.<)

That's all my mod. The map is really smooth for me. Good luck~ :D
Giralda
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Giralda
VINXIS

VINXIS wrote:

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Giroldo

  1. 01:07:538 (5,1) - switch nc. since ur mapping with the guitar, might as well follow the comboing with th eguitar u feel
  2. 01:12:852 (6,1) - compared to the guitar I think using a circle instead and moving the slider one red tick to the right would sound better because it sounds awks like as if the slider end is on the end of the measure or smth lmao Not what I was looking to emphasize
  3. 01:18:510 (5,1) - same thign about hte nc
  4. 01:27:767 (5,6) - i almost broke here ajfgbsdjgsdjkgnsdjkgvmaklmfblndsgv; cud u ctrl+G the second slider or smth pl s That's Nyquill's pattern, not mines.
  5. 02:56:052 (1) - I'd say the SV change might cause misreads but it honestly shouldn't be an issu e lo l Not my issue. That one is captin's part.
  6. 03:10:795 (5,1) - aghhh do u rlly want that jump mm yes. slider leniency allow this slider to be hit normally and perfect fine.
  7. 04:42:682 (5) - i'd put this on the left of 04:42:511 (4) - so that the spacing between 04:41:996 (3,4) - and 04:42:682 (5,1) - is similar (not congruent so to s a y) not quite what I was going for here
  8. 04:55:024 (13) - replace with 1/4 slider ekekekek (srsly tho, imo that'd be nice and cool and it literally is the kick ur mapping too s o) I'd rather not do something that cause people to break and then suddenly find out I hid a 1/4 slider there so no.

Adol Christin
[Giralda]
  1. 01:23:995 (1) - Remove the whistle on the head.
  2. 03:13:195 (4,5) - Suggest you not line them up. Looks better imo. but they aren't
  3. 03:17:138 (3,4) - Move the NC from 4 to 3.
  4. 04:49:711 (1) - Normal whistle on the body?
  5. 04:52:452 (6) - Normal whistle?
  6. 04:56:052 (4,5,6,7) - I hear 5 hits of drum sound for 1/4 each, and the last one is downbeat. Therefore 5 1/4 circle would be better imo. Current triplet (4,5,6) starts with white tick and end with red tick. Uh that's not what I hear lol

No reply=fixed thanks
Fixed all from Raose

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474,188,183251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,188,183423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,294,183595,2,0,P|258:298|208:255,1,135.000005149842,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,143,184109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,206,184280,6,0,L|112:270,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,195,184623,2,0,L|307:131,1,67.5000025749208
454,113,184967,2,0,L|434:249,1,135.000005149842,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,332,185480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,289,185652,5,2,0:0:0:0:
205,290,185824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,344,185995,2,0,L|110:271,1,67.5000025749208
161,215,186338,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,138,186510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
143,70,186681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,85,187024,6,0,L|457:175,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,228,187366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,80,187537,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,127,187709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,178,187880,5,0,0:0:0:0:
385,29,188051,1,8,0:0:0:0:
462,184,188223,1,2,0:0:0:0:
262,99,188395,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,127,188567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,225,188738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,52,188910,2,0,P|264:11|339:55,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,255,189424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,99,189595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,127,189766,6,0,L|472:119,1,90
238,225,190109,2,0,L|146:217,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,172,190451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,366,190624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,303,190795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
23,172,190967,6,0,L|12:82,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,235,191481,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,167,191652,2,0,P|208:116|290:143,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,238,192167,2,0,L|380:327,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,128,192510,6,0,L|458:39,1,90
239,207,192852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
342,155,193024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,61,193195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,207,193367,2,0,P|250:250|259:294,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,328,193710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,235,193881,6,0,P|77:190|88:147,1,90
185,61,194224,2,0,L|276:51,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,47,194567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,114,194738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,179,194910,2,0,L|222:268,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,216,195252,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,206,195424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,322,195595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,330,195767,1,2,0:0:0:0:
203,196,195938,5,0,0:0:0:0:
123,285,196110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,358,196281,1,8,0:0:0:0:
289,271,196452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
289,271,196538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,271,196624,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,121,196795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,300,196967,5,8,0:0:0:0:
195,297,197052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,295,197138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,197,197310,1,8,0:3:0:0:
43,168,197395,5,0,0:0:0:0:
35,137,197480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,105,197566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,75,197652,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Part 3
297,178,274624,6,0,B|266:198|219:177|219:177|180:198|180:198|143:169|94:188,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,359,275139,2,0,B|40:301|21:229|21:229|50:274|88:269,1,215.999993408203,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,230,275653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
203,325,275825,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,186,275996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,328,276168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
121,348,276339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,167,276511,2,0,L|312:157,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,115,276853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,272,277025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
481,318,277196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
470,153,277368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
330,355,277539,2,2,P|271:271|324:183,1,215.999993408203,2|10,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
193,302,278053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,302,278139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,302,278225,2,0,L|81:290,1,107.999996704102,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,178,278568,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,55,278739,1,2,0:1:0:0:
238,156,278911,6,0,P|290:169|344:173,1,107.999996704102
479,58,279253,2,0,P|425:61|372:75,1,107.999996704102,10|0,2:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,302,279596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,55,279768,1,4,0:0:0:0:
141,55,280111,6,0,L|157:271,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,262,280625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,340,280796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,156,280968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,213,281139,2,0,P|440:265|423:316,1,107.999996704102,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,156,281482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,85,281653,5,0,0:0:0:0:
357,262,281825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,304,281996,2,0,B|162:299|162:299|117:253|117:253|41:246,1,215.999993408203,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,84,282511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,162,282682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
203,78,282853,6,0,L|418:61,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,125,283368,1,8,0:0:0:0:
375,275,283539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,172,283711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
493,169,283882,5,8,0:0:0:0:
289,248,284053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,62,284225,1,4,0:0:0:0:
419,236,284396,5,0,0:0:0:0:
419,236,284482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,236,284568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,128,284739,2,0,L|172:120,1,107.999996704102
47,309,285082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,181,285253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
29,192,285425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
154,298,285596,6,0,P|261:287|369:280,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,206,286111,2,0,P|484:257|489:311,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,188,286453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,104,286625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,36,286796,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,212,286968,5,0,0:0:0:0:
459,63,287138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,104,287311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,315,287482,2,0,P|433:264|422:211,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,188,287825,2,0,L|165:181,1,107.999996704102
231,287,288168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,104,288339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,239,288511,6,2,P|396:290|405:343,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
231,287,288853,2,0,P|221:233|206:182,1,107.999996704102,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,47,289196,2,2,P|444:98|435:151,1,107.999996704102,2|2,2:1|2:1,2:1:0:0:
299,329,289539,1,10,0:1:0:0:
229,77,289711,6,0,P|313:21|398:77,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,157,290225,2,2,L|119:49,1,107.999996704102,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,186,290568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,233,290739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,116,290911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,334,291082,6,2,P|313:325|197:319,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
98,248,291596,2,0,P|82:299|74:353,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,233,291939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,319,292111,1,2,0:1:0:0:
95,148,292282,1,8,0:0:0:0:
183,223,292452,2,0,L|193:115,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,181,292796,6,0,L|389:293,1,107.999996704102,0|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
284,233,293139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
481,130,293311,2,0,L|492:242,1,107.999996704102,2|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
396,112,293653,1,10,0:0:0:0:
342,297,293824,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,264,293910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,221,293995,5,0,0:0:0:0:
358,181,294081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,147,294167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,104,294253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,64,294338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,39,294424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,38,294510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,58,294595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,96,294681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
467,139,294767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,174,294852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,190,294938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,181,295024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,70,295195,6,2,B|206:125|206:125|225:165|225:165|205:199|205:199|229:237|216:272,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
401,190,295710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,332,295881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,327,296052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
471,327,296138,1,4,0:3:0:0:
471,327,296224,1,4,0:3:0:0:
316,216,296395,1,4,0:0:0:0:
George
George
---General---
I'm not really good at trying to mod fast and jumpy maps like this so I might miss things or not understand certain things about it
---Actual Mod---
01:13:195 (1,2) - Maybe add a circle between these or make it a short slider (idk what to do here or if there is anything to be done)
01:27:767 (5,6,1) - I think these would do better if they were spaced out more
01:48:681 (1) - I think this would look better if the slider border wasnt visible
02:11:652 (9,10) - This might look better as a triplet and a circle (idk if it really needs changed, I just dont like it)
03:19:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I dont understand why you went to triplets here instead of continuing the simulation of a machine gun
05:51:338 - I think you can try ending the spinner here
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
random mod

00:45:595 (1) - stack the tail on 00:44:224 (2) -

01:02:567 (2) - make this into a 1/2 slider? it feels weird without anything there

01:13:195 (1,2) - I feel like this stack hinders the flow a bit maybe separate them a bit?

01:31:881 (2) - stack on head of 01:30:681 (5) -

02:24:852 (2) - stack the tail with 02:23:652 (2) -

02:27:081 (1,2,3,4) - flow here feels a little weird to me

02:32:567 (5) - I can here drum beats at the same time as the slider, I feel like those should be focused more

02:43:195 (5,6) - space these more to be consistent like 02:43:024 (4,5) -

04:21:424 (2) - blanket this with 04:20:910 (1) -

04:35:996 (5,1) - make into a slider?

05:14:224 (4) - you can make this blanket better

great map~
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1

VINXIS wrote:

le map

captin of only 1 ship grill

  1. 00:29:138 (1,2,3) - ylol. idk having a triple at the start of a measure or starting at the big white tick instead of ending it sounds really eh. Doesn't sound justifiable either idkk (also slider end on a big white tick ughu) it is in the music, and I think it's fine actually since the white tick isn't a significant beat here
  2. 02:35:652 (2,3,4,5) - y doesn't sound justified imo lol they do play fine tho so again, it is in the music
  3. 02:41:652 (4) - ^
  4. 02:54:167 (5,6) - i feel like the flow is shouting for these to ctrl+g lol idk i'd disagree
  5. 02:55:595 (2) - O (couldnt u just make one repeat on the previous slider and make another slider that goes to the slider's end that is there right now to the circle or do u rlly want dat repeat consistency) I think what I have is the best way to do this gameplay wise
  6. 04:13:881 (4,1) - omg fullscreen jump tho cri evrytim hm, don't remember it being this large lol
  7. 04:17:652 (3,4,1) - le new kanshou no maternou (not that it's bad or anythign lol its g) uh
  8. 04:23:138 (3,4,5,1) - asgsfhasfhasfhasvfhascjhasc these jumps tho rip they fit
"Adol Christin"
[captin1]
  1. 00:25:195 (3) - This slider curves too much. Comparing with 00:22:452 (1) - , 00:25:195 (3) - looks not that good imo. stylistic choice, I like it as is
  2. 00:25:195 (3) - , 00:26:738 (2) - tail, 00:29:652 (4) - head, 00:35:138 (3) - , 00:37:710 (2) - tail and 00:40:452 (2) - tail. Try adding additional whistle on these point (without removing clap), sounds nice. (My personal taste) applied some of them
  3. 02:32:567 (5) - NC this isn't my part lol
  4. 02:40:452 (3) - Suggest you change this into 2 circles, would be better. Current slider tail covers the clap sound. alright
  5. 02:55:367 (1) - Due to the drum sound in the music, this 1/6 slider is overmapped. This slider makes the next circle really tricky. Change it to 1/3 slider please. this is definitely 1/6
  6. 04:13:538 (3) - ctrl+g. There's no strong beat here, therefore a jump-back flow does not make good sense imo. this is done more for the circular flow than the back and forth
"Its Depths"
02:43:195 (5,6) - space these more to be consistent like 02:43:024 (4,5) - intentional decrease in spacing for the effect

04:21:424 (2) - blanket this with 04:20:910 (1) - intentionally didn't blanket, it'd be clear if I wanted to

ty

1
392,220,22452,6,0,B|425:170|425:170|419:31,2,180,4|8|2,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,185,23310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,91,23481,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,275,23652,6,0,L|312:372,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,201,23995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,346,24167,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,219,24338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,204,24424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,189,24510,2,0,L|267:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,79,24852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,235,25024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
4,235,25110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,235,25195,2,0,P|79:277|155:236,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,147,26052,2,0,L|272:145,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,270,26395,6,0,P|378:263|330:248,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,42,26738,2,0,L|370:155,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,332,27081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,339,27167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,346,27252,2,0,L|153:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,202,27595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
214,128,27767,2,0,L|217:179,1,45
256,244,27938,6,2,B|215:268|215:268|147:257|138:172,1,180,6|8,2:0|2:0,1:0:0:0:
335,146,28452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,320,28624,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,170,28795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,219,28967,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,149,29138,6,0,L|89:58,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,41,29395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,22,29481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,233,29652,2,0,L|230:324,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,218,29995,2,0,L|9:227,2,45,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,125,30338,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,320,30510,5,0,0:0:0:0:
305,320,30595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,320,30681,2,2,B|436:337|436:337|403:289,1,180,2|8,2:0|2:0,1:0:0:0:
269,176,31195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,292,31367,2,0,L|125:352,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,197,31538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,280,31710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
14,254,31881,6,2,B|3:210|3:210|6:162,1,90,6|0,2:0|2:0,1:0:0:0:
210,13,32224,2,0,B|212:57|212:57|201:101,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,67,32567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,53,32652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,48,32738,1,8,0:3:0:0:
283,223,32910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,166,33081,2,0,P|75:161|14:161,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,75,33424,6,0,P|370:118|452:88,2,180,4|8|2,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,21,34281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,214,34452,1,8,0:0:0:0:
217,125,34624,6,0,P|152:117|115:120,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,276,34967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,283,35138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
39,180,35310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
31,163,35395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,146,35481,2,0,L|29:48,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,30,35824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,212,35995,5,0,0:0:0:0:
249,229,36081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,245,36167,2,0,L|59:257,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,324,37024,2,0,P|436:317|489:304,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,147,37367,6,0,P|267:138|223:134,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,358,37710,2,0,B|268:320|268:320|269:272,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,82,38052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Giralda
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Giralda
George

George wrote:

01:13:195 (1,2) - Maybe add a circle between these or make it a short slider (idk what to do here or if there is anything to be done) mmm probably not.

Its Depths

Its Depths wrote:

random mod
01:13:195 (1,2) - I feel like this stack hinders the flow a bit maybe separate them a bit? this is done to emphasize the far placement of 01:13:538 (3) -
04:35:996 (5,1) - make into a slider? putting the drums in the background as priority here
jonathanlfj
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jonathanlfj
VINXIS:
00:14:910 (3,4) - I prefer circles here since there is a triple drum sound in the background
02:11:652 (9,10) - sliders are cool man

Adol Christin:
00:04:967 (2) - a whistle doesnt really fit here

George:
02:11:652 (9,10) - prefer sliders here
05:51:338 - the white tick fits the whistle sound on the spinner better

everything else was fixed on my end, the sb names are only blocked in editor; its visible in both 3:4 and 16:9 playing mode. I made the names more visible though hope that helps readibility

will update once RLC makes his changes
RLC
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RLC
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00:57:424 (4,5,6) - I think it's nicer this way D: (VINXIS)
01:02:738 - added note for consistency with previous similar pattern (self)
03:21:938 (3,4) - I think the current angle balances (4) well (VINXIS)
03:36:681 (2,3) - but these are parallel! (1 is just a reflection of 2) (VINXIS)
05:29:652 - b-but I did it more than once ;_; unless you're referring to the 05:29:995 (3,3) - thing? (VINXIS)
01:00:852 (1,2) - the current direction puts just the right amount of emphasis on 01:01:367 - for me (Adol Christin)
anything not mentioned was fixed (either as suggested or some other way)
thanks!
jonathanlfj
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updated weeeee
Pho
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Pho
Such professionalism.
Thanks for putting the names for the SB right where the timeline is so i have to look up in the design tab every time.

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. I just post this in case somewhat needs metadata clarification later on. From the official website: http://www.kawachi.zaq.ne.jp/demetori/ :
    SPOILER
  2. I didn't know Nyquill was written with 3 l's.
    Consider also adding the following tags: 'Tokunan 徳南 Kyuuhouji 九宝時 collab Sinen ni Nozomu ga Gotoshi'
    Also, shouldn't 西行寺幽々子 have a whitespace between the two names? (meaning: 西行寺 幽々子)
    You still might wanna someone check the tags again, i'm no adept to japanese language.
[lfj]
  1. 02:04:967 (5,6) - Pretty optional, but Ctrl+g'ing these would be more consistent to 02:04:624 (4) - as both sliders would then follow the same notes on the e-guitar.
  2. 05:13:881 (3) - Curve this slightly more.
[captin]
  1. 02:41:652 (4) - Trifle, but moving the revers-earrow up would make for a better flow transition between 02:41:310 (3,4) -
  2. 02:53:995 (4,5) - idk, this feels a bit trolly to be honest lol. Consider ctrl+g'ing 4:
    SPOILER
  3. 04:31:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The following rhythm seems more plausible to me as it follows percussions better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2966970
    You decide.
  4. 04:34:024 (3) - This plays pretty awkward imo, backslider on a blue tick ugh. It'd be nice if you could change this up a bit:
    SPOILER
[Giralda]
  1. 02:58:624 - The gap feels a bit disruptive here considering the melody is continuing. You could map gap out or consider 02:58:110 (4,5) - merging this into a slider for a smoother play (I prefer the latter).
    It'd synergize really well with 03:00:852 (3) - and 03:03:595 (4) - too.
  2. 03:04:109 (5) - Clap.
  3. 03:07:024 - to 03:15:252 - It'd be nice if you could recheck this section again. There are a lot of triples by the drum clearly audible in the track which you seem to have missed out on purpose.
    Is there any reason why you had to leave all out? You don't have to map them all, but some would be really neat at this part imo.
  4. 03:17:652 (8) - Just an idea, but maybe use an extended slider to follow the e-guitar and make for a more fluid transition to RLC's part.
    http://puu.sh/gZPXS/3e545dcfe2.jpg
  5. 04:37:025 (5,6,1) - Kinda odd how you give 04:37:368 (1) - a stronger emphasis than 04:37:196 (6) - although the latter is more dominant. Balance out the distances a bit.
  6. 04:44:652 - 04:48:081 - 04:56:310 - Missed notable beats again. ;-;
[RLC]
Give the most intense part to RLC allright.
  1. 03:26:224 (1) - Could 1/4 slider here.
  2. 03:34:195 (6) - This combo in general sounded so overmapped on first glance lol. I guess it's fine, only mentioned note sounds additional.
  3. 03:36:510 (1) - Maybe push this up slightly, it feels slightly overemphasized.
  4. 03:38:567 (1,2,3) - This is somewhat tricky and confusing since you suddenly jump into a 1/3 slider section after a heavy 1/4 beat-oriented section. Might give players some time to reorientate and switch this up with 2 backsliders instead.
  5. 05:27:852 - How about setting a beat here, this sounds pretty noticeable to me.
[Nyquill]
  1. 01:41:995 (1,2,3) - Maybe preference, but these sliders look somewhat awkward to me and the flow is not the most optimal one either.
    Their shape don't seem to really fit the overall image of this set imo, just a suggestion from me here:
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  2. 01:48:681 (1) - I'm a bit disappointed that you didn't map out this section as the drums are pretty noticeable. Setting a break here is fine, but considering the next section is already slow-paced, it seems like a better decision to me to map this out.
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    Up to you. If not, consider this: The 'bulge' of this slider looks somewhat imbalanced, might wanna fix this up a bit:
    SPOILER
  3. 02:17:652 (1,2,4) - This looks like unnecessary overlap to me, scale 02:18:167 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern up a little bit to avoid it.
  4. 02:25:366 (5) - Change this up with 2 circles instead to avoid offbeat slider.
  5. 02:20:052 (8) - Consider to change this into a slider instead, there's a weak beat at the next red tick to follow.
  6. 02:28:110 (5,6) - This feels slightly over the top, i don't think it need that much emphasis even w3ith the drumclap in the track. Might decrease it a bit.
  7. 02:32:567 (5) - Consider doing this for the drums:
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  8. 03:45:938 (2) - 03:56:910 (2) - optional, but backslider instead? There's a beat to cover at the blue ticks too.
  9. 03:58:795 (4) - Consider cropping this by 1/4 beat and set a circle on it's current end, extended slider feels bad here since the e-guitar chord already ends at 03:58:967 -
  10. 04:00:338 (7) - I have a feeling this is snapped wrong. Starting at 04:00:510 - , this is the point where the rhythm changes to 1/3 beats already, so snapping it on a red tick seems not right as there is no clear beat in the track fitting here.
    I don't think it's a good idea to follow the e-guitar here anyway but orz Might be acceptable.
Not much wrong here, this looks pretty fine already.
I will come back later this day or tomorrow to check NC placement and hitsounding again. Good luck
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