1. Easy (1.34 stars, 257 notes)
2. Hard (3.2 stars, 590 notes)
3. Insane (4.04 stars, 714 notes)
4. Moway's Normal (2.23 stars, 338 notes)

1. 01:31:475 (3,4,5,6) - 距離稍微分開一些，我打了好幾次都誤認成這種連打: http://puu.sh/gNCRo/942c027fa2.jpg
   (01:33:280 (3) - 也可以調稍微開一些)
   
2. 01:16:024 - 到01:21:437 - 好難喔 Combo都是斷在這裡

m1223961117 wrote:

原來我是第一個...

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[General]

1. 只有Easy沒有打勾: http://puu.sh/gMok7/2002aae31f.png
2. For Normal, no Kiai 03:59:332 - to 04:00:234 - ?? Same as other diffs?? fixed!
   

[Normal]

• 00:11:964 (2) - blanket 00:12:866 (3) 's head fixed position
  00:19:633 (3) - change a circle?? I think ignore 00:19:859 - is fine.
  00:21:437 (6) - ^
  00:23:242 (3) - ^
  00:29:558 (2) - ^ matching the vocals
  00:35:648 - add whistle??
  00:42:866 - ^ fixed both
  00:47:152 - finish
  00:54:370 - ^
  01:08:806 - ^ I think finishes might be too loud for these parts
  01:16:024 (1) - remove this slider to make 2 white line space between spinner to next note I think this is fine in the normal since this is a slower song
  01:23:242 - finish
  01:35:874 - ^
  01:41:062 (1,1) - same as 01:16:024 (1) - or spinner end 01:42:189 - ??
  01:48:956 (5) - DS (not follow 1.3)
  01:50:310 (1) - finishsure
  01:58:656 (2) - change a circle?? I hear the noise in the background which fits the slider nicely
  02:11:513 - whistle
  02:19:182 - finish sure to both
  02:40:610 (4) - remove circle?? I think no need this sure
  03:05:197 (5,6) - Are you sure this is Normal set?? I think it is Hard↑ yeah, probably a bit hard. trying to bridge easy and hard diff though
  03:31:362 - finish don't think so
  03:45:347 (3) - I can't hear any sound here...add something?? whistle added
  03:52:114 (4) - why not make like this: 03:59:332 (5) - ?? fine like this, i think

LixRei wrote:

Oh, D.N.Angel posted in my queue. Now I can die happy xD (no, I only say this because I admire your maps; I won't really die xD)
Alright, let's get this started.

[Moway's Normal]

1. 00:11:964 (2) - I personally don't think this shape is bad or anything like that, but I feel like it might get mentioned a lot, since slider's endges aren't clear enough to allow players to read it's movement properly, so they might relase it earlier. Idk, so maybe you should wait for more opinions. Also, blanket with 00:11:964 (2,3) - seems kinda imperfect (minor thing, but meh, mentioning it anyway). moved the end down just to avoid that, also fixed blanket
2. 00:30:911 (1) - Short sliders with more than a reverse are kinda unclear to play as players for Normal diff don't know how much the slider will repeat. Maybe remove two reverses and add another 1/2 slider or two circles? I would normally not do this, but it works since there's an easier diff. I like it as a bit of a high point from the buildup
3. 00:32:716 - Alright, starting from here 'till you alter Distance Snap value, increasing it. It's practically a rule nowadays to use constant DS for Easy and Normal diffs (through it can vary during Kiai time on Normal, according to a Nominator), so change either your DS values before or after this point, and make it constant, to avoid possible issues with any Nominator/QAT in the future. the spacing changes aren't sudden or big. They fit the music, so I don't see why they don't work. Also, since the Hard has a lot of spacing changes, it makes sense spread-wise to have some in the Normal.
4. 01:13:994 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time for players to recover after spinning. This is an unwritten rule, but the distance between a spinner and the next note must be of two beats, to give players on Normal diffs enough recovery time. If you don't believe this is some kind of rule, ask a Nominator or a QAT.
5. 01:41:062 (1,1) - ^ Uh, I know the rules well enough on my own to know this is fine. It'a lower bpm song, and there's an easier diff
6. 02:22:791 (1,1,1,1) - Eh... are you sure of using 1/4 sliders on this diff, out of all things? Since this is a shorter slider than the 1/2 beat ones and they have a reverse, players won't be able to predict when they will end, making them slider-break on most cases. If I have to suggest something, it's to use 1/2 sliders or 1/1 sliders instead. This might also avoid several possible issues in the future.
7. 02:44:445 (1,3,1,3) - ^ leaving these. If I have to, I will remove, but I don't see a reason to for now.
8. 02:48:054 (1) - Alright. Slider edges here are far more unclear than any other slider on the diff. This makes it hard to play for the average player, and per se I suggest to make another easier-to-play shape. moved some of the slider ends
9. 02:54:370 (1,1) - Aaand, stacking notes pretty far away from each other on the timeline isn't a really good idea either. Second note (slider) appears when first note (circle) is still on-screen, making both notes fully overlap, even after circle was clicked (due to the hitburst), so you should unstack. moved
10. 02:58:881 (1,6) - Unclear edges. .-. 1 is fine, slider tick guides the slider. changed end of 6
11. 04:06:099 (1,1,1) - I wanna know why you need this much NCs here. looks like it'll be a secret to you forever
12. Pretty clean Normal. I only have my concerns over the weirdly-shped sliders (since they don't have really clear edges and are also pretty ugly IMO ;w;) and the 1/4 sliders. Well, hopefully that will be solved.

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1. I find the spacing 1.0x and 1.2x in this diff. for example, 00:34:069 (2,3,1) -
   Because of easy diff, you should conform DS
2. 00:03:843~ 00:18:280- I prefer to add whistle more at white line like these
   00:05:648
   00:09:257
   00:12:866
   00:16:475
3. 01:21:437 (4) - it is better to keep 1/1 rhythm. I suggest to avoid reverse slider
4. 01:43:092 (1,2,3) - make flow rounder

1. 00:09:708 (2,3) - check blanketting
2. 00:31:588 (4,1) - decrease spacing. this jump is very hard, imo
3. 00:41:964 (4) - 1/1 slider is better
4. 01:33:054 (2) - it is better to follow the vocal of 01:33:280-
5. 02:12:866 (6,7,8,9,10) - I prefer triplet pattern like 02:11:964 (1,2,3,4) - .delete02:12:979 (7) - ?

1. 00:44:445 (3,4,5) - reverse slider is easier to find rhythm because of 1/3 trhythm. and,,, add NC at 00:44:445 (3) - ?
   
2. 02:49:859 (1,2) - change their positions and move 02:50:535 (3) - to 359/338. make symmetric with 02:50:761 (4,5,6) - . that's better flow, imo

• 
  00:58:656 (2,4) - avoid this overlapping. hard to see...

1. 01:13:994 (1,1) - too sooner between spinner and next note for normal
2. 01:41:062 (1,1) - ^
3. 01:46:926 (2,3) - if following vocal, how about this?
   
4. 02:04:746 (1,2) - if you follow 1/1 rhythm, angular slider is a little confusing. I recommend to straight or curved slider like 02:06:550 (3,4) -

Near wrote:

(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ Nice song choice <3

Moway's Normal

You increased the DS at some points of the song, I wouldn't recommend to do this, it's a Normal after all. If you want to increase the DS, you can increase once or twice, but not while a whole section. I think it works here as a difficulty curve into the Hard diff, which has a lot of varying spacing. This works for me as changes to each song section, which are more intuitive to me than having quick spacing changes.

00:32:265 - Adding a circle here won't be so empty. The vocal is strong, would be a good idea :c I like the break here without the vocal since the percussive noises stop

01:13:994 (1) - Not enough time to recovery for new players. You should wait at least 1 or 2 white ticks before mapping again. tl;dr you should start here 01:16:475 - . Same happens here 01:41:062 (1) - .I don't like it, but I"ll change these

02:44:445 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Really confusing for new players, would strongly recommend to change this. My recommendation would be to not use 1/4 kick sliders, but if you really want, try something like this. It's less confusing. I think this is fine since it obeys polarity switching pretty well, so it's actually not that bad to hit.

03:24:144 (1) - Not sure why the 3/4 rhythm here. If you were trying to follow vocal, it starts on the red tick. Of course, there's a beat on the blue tick but you can't hear it properly on 100% and the strong beat is on the white tick. Would recommend to put on the white tick like you did with the rest.
I like the 3/4 here
03:25:047 (2,3,4) - The DS is really irregular here, fix it. oops, fixed

03:45:347 (1) - Add a NC here? Since you were adding on the previous patterns. sure

Good luck!

ryuu wrote:

hello
just a few suggestions

moway's normal

00:05:648 (3) - ctrl+g? (and move) because. u know 00:05:648 (3) - repeat cursor's motion of 00:03:843 (1) - and it's a bit strange for me to play I think this works ok
00:30:911 (1) - why 3 repeats? i like this
03:06:099 (1) - ctrl+j for more cool move from prev. slider sure
03:25:723 (3) - jump? o.o yeah, fixed this

mapset is pretty fine for me
good luck

Rumia- wrote:

hi DNA~
from my modding queue
[Easy]
01:15:573 (6) - whistle here ? since you use whistle with NC:2 greenline on hard and insane You mean that default hitnormal sound ? It's already there.
01:43:092 - i think should use SC:1 here as your hard and insane hitsounds , they were nice I think N:C1 is enough for this part since there are only 1/1 beat to follow.
02:53:468 (5) - nc here like you did at 02:37:227 (1) - kk
02:58:430 (3) - night use soft sample here like this one 02:54:370 (6) - sounds better
03:05:648 (3) - ^ ok use N:C2 for this part.
03:24:144 - i think its nicer to use sample NC:2 here like in your other diffs N:C1 is enough, too o:



[Hard]
i feel like ar7 felt a bit slow,especialy parts like 00:54:370 - with 3/4 beat is kinda hard to play , suggest to increase to 7.3 ~ 7.5 adjust to 7.3 now.
00:34:069 (3) - ctrl + g would make a nice flow I think how the flow works now is not bad since it connect the next jump.
00:50:310 (3) - i think this overlap can be improve hmmmm adjust a little bit
00:53:129 (2) - ^ ?? It looks good for me lol
01:02:716 (6,7) - ctrl + g ? according to flow like 01:04:520 (6,7) - and 01:06:325 (6,7) - I wanna keep this cuz it plays not really bad.
01:08:129 (6,7) - the beat should be I wanna change rhythm for the music which is nearly 01:08:806 part. Also the rhythm I use fits the music here, so no change for it.

01:19:295 (6) - lowers this object a little to make the overlap looks nicer like 01:17:152 (5,6) - done
02:12:866 (6) - nc maybe no, it would break my NC patterns if I did it
02:44:445 (1,2) - stack properly? why? it looks good for me o:

[Insane]
03:48:843 (2) - couldve made a jump instead like 03:47:039 (2) - but maybe more friendly spacing I prefer to make a "stop effect" to match the clap than make a jump here.
03:53:016 (1) - a little weird overlap , why not overlap it like 03:54:821 (1,2) - ? adjust the overlap a lttle bit, but I think it should not be a problem ;w;
00:34:069 (1) - i think not necessary to nc here
00:37:001 (1,1,1) - ^
00:41:287 (1) - ^ It's for more readable patterns now that there are many overlaps.
01:50:310 (1) - adjust a bit to the right to make it blanket with (2) ? The flow will become strange if I do that, so no /.\
02:58:656 (9) - make as 1/4 slider like 03:02:265 (11) - ? I prefer to a different pattern from 03:02:265 (11) ones.
03:07:001 (2) - kinda bad overlap fixed



pretty solid map
get around 1~2 mods for some reviews and call me back

1. 00:45:347 (5) - would be better if you move right a little bit so that it can form a straight line with previous slider?
2. 01:41:062 (1) - add a whistle?
3. 01:46:926 (2) - It's just a suggestion..Maybe you can add whistle sound on this whole slider. It might be a make up for the missing clap and emphasize the singer's long tone of "In this Dream~~~"
4. 02:05:648 (2) - the clap sounds a bit sudden for me. You might try decrease the volume of this part if you think the claps are necessary.
5. 03:05:197 (5) - why not use the same shape as 03:04:069 (4) -
6. 03:52:114 (4) - I would prefer the slider end at 03:52:565. It might influence the shape but it fit the singer better.
7. 03:53:919 (2) - nazi. move the slider head one grid right
8. 04:05:648 (1,1,1,1) - I little bit ugly for me? I think these sliders are just too curved?

1. 00:44:896 (4) - 就我个人看来把这个摆在00:43:994 (2) - 尾巴上形成两边对拉似乎更有意思一点？
2. 01:17:490 (6) - 唔好像这一连串这个尾巴的短slider听上去都挺奇怪的，改成circle会好点？不过这个大概是个人习惯，无所谓啦
3. 04:00:009 (3) - 感觉这里少了个节奏点..加个circle吧
   

1. 01:52:565 (6) - 还是和5拉开一点比较好？

Rumia- wrote:

hi DNA~
from my modding queue


[Moway's Normal]
00:05:197 (2,3) - couldve closer blanket fixed
01:36:325 (2) - would want to distant this a little bit from the sliders so it doesnt look so cramp i think this is fine
01:38:580 (6) - maybe ^ so it doesnt overlap badly adjusted rotation on this
01:32:265 - i think this break is unnecessary I generally like breaks in the lower diffs, especially since the next one isn't for another minute
01:39:934 (2) - ^
01:40:610 (4) - since you didnt overlap on other part of the song not sure about the suggestion here
01:43:092 (1,2) - i think its ok to blanket this with the slider end I like the positioning here for gameplay
01:58:656 (2) - might want adjust this slider to something like this to make it look nicer : http://puu.sh/gYx8W.jpg adjusted some here, the spacing i want to keep since 1.1 is for calmer sections
02:57:528 (4,5) - blanket here ? made iti better
03:24:144 (1,2) - might wanna fix this ds constantly since you use the same ds until 03:27:302 (6) - on the rest of the object yeah, fixed on previous mods


pretty solid map
get around 1~2 mods for some reviews and call me back

Megurine Luka wrote:

wa考试考完了来把说好的mod完ww
no kud for this post plz.

[Normal]

1. 00:45:347 (5) - would be better if you move right a little bit so that it can form a straight line with previous slider? fixed and adjusted previous sliders to do the same
2. 01:41:062 (1) - add a whistle? sure
3. 01:46:926 (2) - It's just a suggestion..Maybe you can add whistle sound on this whole slider. It might be a make up for the missing clap and emphasize the singer's long tone of "In this Dream~~~" sure, works fo rme
4. 02:05:648 (2) - the clap sounds a bit sudden for me. You might try decrease the volume of this part if you think the claps are necessary.I like the claps, so added a decrease green line
5. 03:05:197 (5) - why not use the same shape as 03:04:069 (4) - OK
6. 03:52:114 (4) - I would prefer the slider end at 03:52:565. It might influence the shape but it fit the singer better. I agree, fixed this
7. 03:53:919 (2) - nazi. move the slider head one grid right OK 8)
8. 04:05:648 (1,1,1,1) - I little bit ugly for me? I think these sliders are just too curved? decreased curve on these

\\

噫mod到一半才意识到这首是“全部俺”类型的歌...好厉害
貌似也并没有什么好多说的了~加油嗯

Megurine Luka wrote:

wa考试考完了来把说好的mod完ww 好評
no kud for this post plz.


[Hard]

1. 00:44:896 (4) - 就我个人看来把这个摆在00:43:994 (2) - 尾巴上形成两边对拉似乎更有意思一点？ 稍微擔心距離的問題，保持這樣好了
2. 01:17:490 (6) - 唔好像这一连串这个尾巴的短slider听上去都挺奇怪的，改成circle会好点？不过这个大概是个人习惯，无所谓啦 是說改成2個1/4 notes還是1個 ? 之前有看到建議我一個的，不過還是想跟背景音/.\
3. 04:00:009 (3) - 感觉这里少了个节奏点..加个circle吧 ok

[Insane]

1. 01:52:565 (6) - 还是和5拉开一点比较好？ 的確呢xD

噫mod到一半才意识到这首是“全部俺”类型的歌...好厉害 我真心佩服啊>~<b
貌似也并没有什么好多说的了~加油嗯

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

placeholder for rank :3