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Niko-nyan
Hi from

General~
Fine

Inner Oni
  1. 00:04:906 - kk ?
  2. 00:11:995 - seharusnya kddk deh gak fit dkkd
  3. 01:12:304 (9,10) - swap?

sisanya
Disini~
12:08 Nishizumi: hai niko
12:08 Niko-nyan: owo langsung ke summon
12:08 Niko-nyan: bentar
12:09 Nishizumi: hehe ok
12:09 Niko-nyan: k
12:09 Niko-nyan: itu yg di forum baru dikit ;w;
12:10 Niko-nyan: entah mood langsung ilang sejenak
12:10 Nishizumi: iya tau, udah cek kok
12:10 Niko-nyan: 00:05:009 - pas kan?
12:10 Nishizumi: yah
12:10 Nishizumi: inner ?
12:10 Nishizumi: boleh juga sih
12:10 Niko-nyan: iya
12:10 Niko-nyan: itu gak pas kalau kd
12:11 Nishizumi: yang kamu post semuanya aku ubah, kecuali yang swap
12:12 Niko-nyan: itu yg swap btw bisa fit bisa nggak
12:12 Niko-nyan: tergantung kamu ngikutin yg mana
12:12 Niko-nyan: 01:00:386 - k ? (142)
12:13 Nishizumi: aku ngikutin kddkddkdk aja
12:13 Nishizumi: lebih enak ddd
12:13 Niko-nyan: yg swap kddkddkdkdddkkkdk
12:14 Niko-nyan: D:
12:14 Niko-nyan: pas "mi" nada agak turun dikit
12:14 Nishizumi: oh kamu bilangnya (9),(10) =_=
12:15 Niko-nyan: itu pas awal2
12:15 Niko-nyan: pas kamu bilang gak mau aku ubah lagi
12:15 Niko-nyan: ._.
12:16 Nishizumi: ok changed
12:18 Niko-nyan: 01:18:879 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - aku bingung patternya
12:18 Niko-nyan: kalau 60 k ngikutin instrumen
12:19 Nishizumi: aku cuma buat ngeramein doang disitu
12:19 Nishizumi: lol
12:19 Niko-nyan: lel
12:21 Niko-nyan: 01:25:454 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - ketemu beatnya akhirnya ;w;
12:21 Niko-nyan: kdkdkkddk
12:21 Niko-nyan: atau kdkdkkkdk
12:22 Nishizumi: kddkdkkd aja deh
12:22 Nishizumi: tapi terlalu sederhana =_=
12:23 Nishizumi: eh belakangnya k ya
12:23 Nishizumi: =_=
12:23 Niko-nyan: ._. iya
12:23 Niko-nyan: belakang k dapet
12:23 Nishizumi: kdkdkkkdk
12:23 Nishizumi: changed
12:24 Niko-nyan: 01:50:317 - ada yg lupa?
12:24 Niko-nyan: 1/6 stream please o3o 4 notes
12:26 Nishizumi: lebih cocok 1/4 menurutku
12:26 Nishizumi: ;w;
12:26 Niko-nyan: ;w;
12:27 Niko-nyan: ending timenya kok aneh :<
12:27 Niko-nyan: 01:57:509 - udah gak ada musik ini
12:28 Nishizumi: aneh kenapa
12:29 Niko-nyan: biasa ga ada musik udah selesai
12:29 Nishizumi: kok menurutku malah cocok di 01:58:536
12:29 Nishizumi: 01:58:536 -
12:30 Niko-nyan: oke *tenga2*
12:30 *Niko-nyan runs*
12:30 Nishizumi: hah ? =_=
12:30 Niko-nyan: 00:04:906 - Oni - k
12:32 Nishizumi: changed
12:32 Niko-nyan: 01:01:413 (225,226) - swap?
12:33 Nishizumi: changed
12:34 Niko-nyan: 01:17:235 - k lebih fit kayaknya
12:35 Nishizumi: menurutku lebih pas d
12:36 Niko-nyan: atau gak kkdk kayak inner *harus fit sama diff lain jg sih)
12:36 Nishizumi: nah kkdk
12:38 Nishizumi: tapi emang oni sama inner harus sama ya ? ga boleh variasi gitu ?
12:39 Niko-nyan: dari kantan-inner oni penempatan biasa sama sih
12:39 Niko-nyan: variasinya paling dikit
12:39 Niko-nyan: tapi terserah sih
12:40 Niko-nyan: 00:25:249 - Muzukashii - k
12:40 Nishizumi: hm ok
12:41 Nishizumi: changed
12:42 Niko-nyan: 00:27:509 - k
12:42 Niko-nyan: 00:28:742 (85,89) - k
12:46 Niko-nyan: 01:49:804 - delete (maap dc)
12:47 Niko-nyan: 01:49:804 - delete (maap dc)
12:48 Niko-nyan: kayaknya cuma itu aja :')
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Niko-nyan wrote:

Hi from

General~
Fine

Inner Oni
  1. 00:04:906 - kk ?
  2. 00:11:995 - seharusnya kddk deh gak fit dkkd
  3. 01:12:304 (9,10) - swap?

sisanya
Disini~
12:08 Nishizumi: hai niko
12:08 Niko-nyan: owo langsung ke summon
12:08 Niko-nyan: bentar
12:09 Nishizumi: hehe ok
12:09 Niko-nyan: k
12:09 Niko-nyan: itu yg di forum baru dikit ;w;
12:10 Niko-nyan: entah mood langsung ilang sejenak
12:10 Nishizumi: iya tau, udah cek kok
12:10 Niko-nyan: 00:05:009 - pas kan?
12:10 Nishizumi: yah
12:10 Nishizumi: inner ?
12:10 Nishizumi: boleh juga sih
12:10 Niko-nyan: iya
12:10 Niko-nyan: itu gak pas kalau kd
12:11 Nishizumi: yang kamu post semuanya aku ubah, kecuali yang swap
12:12 Niko-nyan: itu yg swap btw bisa fit bisa nggak
12:12 Niko-nyan: tergantung kamu ngikutin yg mana
12:12 Niko-nyan: 01:00:386 - k ? (142)
12:13 Nishizumi: aku ngikutin kddkddkdk aja
12:13 Nishizumi: lebih enak ddd
12:13 Niko-nyan: yg swap kddkddkdkdddkkkdk
12:14 Niko-nyan: D:
12:14 Niko-nyan: pas "mi" nada agak turun dikit
12:14 Nishizumi: oh kamu bilangnya (9),(10) =_=
12:15 Niko-nyan: itu pas awal2
12:15 Niko-nyan: pas kamu bilang gak mau aku ubah lagi
12:15 Niko-nyan: ._.
12:16 Nishizumi: ok changed
12:18 Niko-nyan: 01:18:879 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - aku bingung patternya
12:18 Niko-nyan: kalau 60 k ngikutin instrumen
12:19 Nishizumi: aku cuma buat ngeramein doang disitu
12:19 Nishizumi: lol
12:19 Niko-nyan: lel
12:21 Niko-nyan: 01:25:454 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - ketemu beatnya akhirnya ;w;
12:21 Niko-nyan: kdkdkkddk
12:21 Niko-nyan: atau kdkdkkkdk
12:22 Nishizumi: kddkdkkd aja deh
12:22 Nishizumi: tapi terlalu sederhana =_=
12:23 Nishizumi: eh belakangnya k ya
12:23 Nishizumi: =_=
12:23 Niko-nyan: ._. iya
12:23 Niko-nyan: belakang k dapet
12:23 Nishizumi: kdkdkkkdk
12:23 Nishizumi: changed
12:24 Niko-nyan: 01:50:317 - ada yg lupa?
12:24 Niko-nyan: 1/6 stream please o3o 4 notes
12:26 Nishizumi: lebih cocok 1/4 menurutku
12:26 Nishizumi: ;w;
12:26 Niko-nyan: ;w;
12:27 Niko-nyan: ending timenya kok aneh :<
12:27 Niko-nyan: 01:57:509 - udah gak ada musik ini
12:28 Nishizumi: aneh kenapa
12:29 Niko-nyan: biasa ga ada musik udah selesai
12:29 Nishizumi: kok menurutku malah cocok di 01:58:536
12:29 Nishizumi: 01:58:536 -
12:30 Niko-nyan: oke *tenga2*
12:30 *Niko-nyan runs*
12:30 Nishizumi: hah ? =_=
12:30 Niko-nyan: 00:04:906 - Oni - k
12:32 Nishizumi: changed
12:32 Niko-nyan: 01:01:413 (225,226) - swap?
12:33 Nishizumi: changed
12:34 Niko-nyan: 01:17:235 - k lebih fit kayaknya
12:35 Nishizumi: menurutku lebih pas d
12:36 Niko-nyan: atau gak kkdk kayak inner *harus fit sama diff lain jg sih)
12:36 Nishizumi: nah kkdk
12:38 Nishizumi: tapi emang oni sama inner harus sama ya ? ga boleh variasi gitu ?
12:39 Niko-nyan: dari kantan-inner oni penempatan biasa sama sih
12:39 Niko-nyan: variasinya paling dikit
12:39 Niko-nyan: tapi terserah sih
12:40 Niko-nyan: 00:25:249 - Muzukashii - k
12:40 Nishizumi: hm ok
12:41 Nishizumi: changed
12:42 Niko-nyan: 00:27:509 - k
12:42 Niko-nyan: 00:28:742 (85,89) - k
12:46 Niko-nyan: 01:49:804 - delete (maap dc)
12:47 Niko-nyan: 01:49:804 - delete (maap dc)
12:48 Niko-nyan: kayaknya cuma itu aja :')
thanks for the mod :3
kouzuki_karen
Hi, queue request

General

for all diffs:


Kantan

HP,OD: 2 --> 3

01:06:550 (78) - remove finish? I think all notes in this area are similar tone

Futsuu

HP,OD: 3 --> 4

00:20:112 (30) - delete, I think this is unnecessary
00:20:317 (30,31) - ctrl+g?
00:20:934 (32) - if you did ^ you could move this 1/2 forward, has a good mirror effect
01:26:276 (171) - I think you should add finisher, to make it more consistent with 01:13:125 (139) - and 01:32:851 (186) -

Muzukashii

00:09:016 (13) - use d? You used d in Kantan, Futsuu and Oni .__.
00:50:112 (146) - you could probably delete this, doesn't really match anything here and also it makes 00:50:317 (146,147,148,149) - better
01:11:893 (224) - this should be at 01:11:790
01:12:304 - add a k here or move the one at 01:12:304 (226) - to here, my best guess is that you were trying to follow the electronic instruments at this part
01:38:194 (318) - move to 01:38:091 , follow vocal or else it sounds bad
01:38:605 (319) - move to 01:38:399 , same thing
01:38:708 - insert k here

Oni

nice diff w

Inner Oni

00:30:386 (169) - remove finish?

fripside <3
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi, queue request

General

for all diffs:


Kantan

HP,OD: 2 --> 3

01:06:550 (78) - remove finish? I think all notes in this area are similar tone

Futsuu

HP,OD: 3 --> 4

00:20:112 (30) - delete, I think this is unnecessary
00:20:317 (30,31) - ctrl+g?
00:20:934 (32) - if you did ^ you could move this 1/2 forward, has a good mirror effect
01:26:276 (171) - I think you should add finisher, to make it more consistent with 01:13:125 (139) - and 01:32:851 (186) -

Muzukashii

00:09:016 (13) - use d? You used d in Kantan, Futsuu and Oni .__.
00:50:112 (146) - you could probably delete this, doesn't really match anything here and also it makes 00:50:317 (146,147,148,149) - better
01:11:893 (224) - this should be at 01:11:790
01:12:304 - add a k here or move the one at 01:12:304 (226) - to here, my best guess is that you were trying to follow the electronic instruments at this part
01:38:194 (318) - move to 01:38:091 , follow vocal or else it sounds bad
01:38:605 (319) - move to 01:38:399 , same thing
01:38:708 - insert k here

Oni

nice diff w

Inner Oni

00:30:386 (169) - remove finish?

fripside <3
thanks for the mod :3

fripside <3
Intelli
Hey, from q.

d = don
k = katsu
D = Big don
K = Big katsu

As always, my mods are subjective. It's your map bro.

Kantan:
  1. 00:21:345 (24,25,26,27,28) - d k kdk fits better with the music, probably

  2. 01:27:098 (109,110) - k d, for the same reason.

  3. 01:45:180 (136,137,138) - dkd
Very well thought out map.

Futsuu:
  1. 01:19:084 (153) - Remove

  2. 01:25:454 (168,169,170,171,172) - http://gyazo.com/78604865f0c6b4efd31e0313baecc469

  3. 01:30:386 (180) - k

  4. 01:33:673 (187-195) - http://gyazo.com/1625225ace3159b1826877cf906859d0

  5. 01:43:947 (209,210,211) - dkd

  6. 01:50:112 (223 on) - I would consider making this more like the song.
Excellent, but watch that last half. Seemed a bit sloppy imo.

Muzu:
  1. 00:22:988 (64) - d

  2. 00:26:687 (78) - k

  3. 00:36:550 (106,107,108) - kdd

  4. 01:22:167 (262,263,264,265,266) - kddkd

  5. 01:27:098 (280,281,282) - ddk
A little repetitive at times, but good nonetheless.

Oni:
  1. 00:00:000 (0) - 1.4 star jump from the Muzu...might want to add a difficulty in betweenm make the "in between" one Oni, this Inner, and Inner into Ura or something. Cos this feels like an Inner

  2. 00:23:810 (37) - k

  3. 00:26:276 (50) - K maybe?

  4. 00:29:358 (67) - k

  5. 01:25:454 (363) - Reconsider this stream
Feels much more like an Inner to me than a regular Oni imo.

Inner Oni:
  1. 00:27:406 (154) - k
Hella good difficulty, sir.

GLHF with ranking! Please consider my suggestion with the mapset ;)
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

IntelliTroodon wrote:

Hey, from q.

d = don
k = katsu
D = Big don
K = Big katsu

As always, my mods are subjective. It's your map bro.

Kantan:
  1. 00:21:345 (24,25,26,27,28) - d k kdk fits better with the music, probably

  2. 01:27:098 (109,110) - k d, for the same reason.

  3. 01:45:180 (136,137,138) - dkd
Very well thought out map.

Futsuu:
  1. 01:19:084 (153) - Remove

  2. 01:25:454 (168,169,170,171,172) - http://gyazo.com/78604865f0c6b4efd31e0313baecc469

  3. 01:30:386 (180) - k

  4. 01:33:673 (187-195) - http://gyazo.com/1625225ace3159b1826877cf906859d0

  5. 01:43:947 (209,210,211) - dkd

  6. 01:50:112 (223 on) - I would consider making this more like the song.
Excellent, but watch that last half. Seemed a bit sloppy imo.

Muzu:
  1. 00:22:988 (64) - d

  2. 00:26:687 (78) - k

  3. 00:36:550 (106,107,108) - kdd

  4. 01:22:167 (262,263,264,265,266) - kddkd

  5. 01:27:098 (280,281,282) - ddk
A little repetitive at times, but good nonetheless.

Oni:
  1. 00:00:000 (0) - 1.4 star jump from the Muzu...might want to add a difficulty in betweenm make the "in between" one Oni, this Inner, and Inner into Ura or something. Cos this feels like an Inner

  2. 00:23:810 (37) - k

  3. 00:26:276 (50) - K maybe?

  4. 00:29:358 (67) - k

  5. 01:25:454 (363) - Reconsider this stream
Feels much more like an Inner to me than a regular Oni imo.

Inner Oni:
  1. 00:27:406 (154) - k
Hella good difficulty, sir.

GLHF with ranking! Please consider my suggestion with the mapset ;)
some modified. thanks for your mod :3

updated~
SKSalt
hi~ Nishizumi~ Taiko mod request from my queue~

  1. d=Don
  2. D=Big Don
  3. k=Katsu
  4. K=Big Katsu
[general]

OK~

[Kantan]
  1. change Slider Velocity to 1.2. When density of map is depopulated, the person who lowered Slider Velocity has good look.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:30:386 - change to k, i think is better.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:15:797 - change to k, i think is better.
[Oni]
  1. 01:49:701 ~ 01:49:906 - change to kkd, I think that you should do it here in 1/4 to touch the difference share of the degree of difficulty because 1/6 is used in Inner Oni.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:49:701 ~ 01:49:906 - umm... I felt that I should not use "1/6". I entrust it to your judgment here.
translation sorry(:_;) good luck :)
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

SKSalt wrote:

hi~ Nishizumi~ Taiko mod request from my queue~

  1. d=Don
  2. D=Big Don
  3. k=Katsu
  4. K=Big Katsu
[general]

OK~

[Kantan]
  1. change Slider Velocity to 1.2. When density of map is depopulated, the person who lowered Slider Velocity has good look.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:30:386 - change to k, i think is better.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:15:797 - change to k, i think is better.
[Oni]
  1. 01:49:701 ~ 01:49:906 - change to kkd, I think that you should do it here in 1/4 to touch the difference share of the degree of difficulty because 1/6 is used in Inner Oni.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:49:701 ~ 01:49:906 - umm... I felt that I should not use "1/6". I entrust it to your judgment here.
translation sorry(:_;) good luck :)
all changed except inner oni. i guess 1/6 would better.thanks for the mod SKSalt :3

updated~
Raiden
Hey there!! Raiden from my mod queue.


Kantan
  1. 00:50:934 - Add a kat?
  2. 00:58:331 (67) - Change for don ?
  3. 01:27:098 (110) - Change for kat?

Futsuu


  • 00:10:249 (8) - Change for don?

    00:56:276 (102,103,104) - Change k k d to d d k?

    01:43:947 (210,211,212) - Chagne d d k to d k d?

Muzukashii

  • 00:20:112 (53,54) - Change the don for a kat and add one kat in the middle? (kkk triplet)

    00:33:262 - Add a don?

    00:34:906 - ^

    00:38:194 - ^

    01:05:831 - Add a don? (ddd triplet)

    Add don to 01:11:687 and 01:11:79? (triplet ddd)

    01:12:098 - Add a don?

    01:12:304 (228) - Switch to kat?

    01:12:509 - Add a don?

    01:16:105 - Add a don? (ddd triplet)

    01:27:201 - Add a don? (ddd triplet)

    01:27:509 (287) - Switch to kat?

Oni


  • 00:10:454 (33,34) - Change both to dons? (kdddkdddd)

    The stream 00:15:591 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - kddkkdkkddddk instead of kddkddkdddkkd?

    00:23:194 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - Change from ddkdkdd to ddkkddk?

    00:52:577 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184) -stream: change 00:53:091 (181) - to kat and remove 00:53:297 (183)?

    01:11:482 (277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285) - Reverse it? (make ddddkkkkd instead of kkkkddddk)

I really liked the Inner Oni version, so no extra suggestions by me C:

Awesome map overall
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Raiden wrote:

Hey there!! Raiden from my mod queue.


Kantan
  1. 00:50:934 - Add a kat?
  2. 00:58:331 (67) - Change for don ?
  3. 01:27:098 (110) - Change for kat?

Futsuu


  • 00:10:249 (8) - Change for don?

    00:56:276 (102,103,104) - Change k k d to d d k?

    01:43:947 (210,211,212) - Chagne d d k to d k d?

Muzukashii

  • 00:20:112 (53,54) - Change the don for a kat and add one kat in the middle? (kkk triplet)

    00:33:262 - Add a don?

    00:34:906 - ^

    00:38:194 - ^

    01:05:831 - Add a don? (ddd triplet)

    Add don to 01:11:687 and 01:11:79? (triplet ddd)

    01:12:098 - Add a don?

    01:12:304 (228) - Switch to kat?

    01:12:509 - Add a don?

    01:16:105 - Add a don? (ddd triplet)

    01:27:201 - Add a don? (ddd triplet)

    01:27:509 (287) - Switch to kat?

Oni


  • 00:10:454 (33,34) - Change both to dons? (kdddkdddd)

    The stream 00:15:591 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - kddkkdkkddddk instead of kddkddkdddkkd?

    00:23:194 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - Change from ddkdkdd to ddkkddk?

    00:52:577 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184) -stream: change 00:53:091 (181) - to kat and remove 00:53:297 (183)?

    01:11:482 (277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285) - Reverse it? (make ddddkkkkd instead of kkkkddddk)

I really liked the Inner Oni version, so no extra suggestions by me C:

Awesome map overall
some modified, thanks for the mod :3

updated~
Sylphi
I like this song <3

[General]
  1. Hitsound volume is a bit low imo. how about increasing by 10%?
[Kantan]
  1. 01:02:851 (73) - k that follow the melody.
  2. 01:07:372 - I think it would be easier to catch rhythm that adding d.
  3. 01:09:016 - Same as above. How about adding k?
  4. 01:11:893 (85,86) - It would fit more the music that removing 01:11:893 (85) and moving 01:12:304 (86) to 01:12:098.
  5. 01:39:016 (127) - How about k that follow vocal?
  6. 01:33:673 (120,121) - Swap these for consistency.
  7. 01:43:536 (134,135) - How about swapping these? i think it would be better feeling.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:20:523 (32,33,34,35) - I think it would be natural that changing to this.
  2. 00:25:454 (42) - k for consistency.
  3. 00:26:071 (44) - d would sound better.
  4. 00:34:084 (57) - Remove this for consistency.
  5. 00:48:879 (85) - I think it should be d. just feeling say that. /me runs
  6. 00:53:399 (97,98) - It would be not bad feeling that adding finish.
  7. 00:55:043 (99) - d?
  8. 01:12:304 (137) - Same as Kantan difficulty. move to 01:12:098.
  9. 01:38:605 (198) - It would be natural that moving to 01:38:399 cuz strong sound is there.
  10. 01:44:153 (210,211) - How about swapping these that follow the melody?
  11. 01:48:057 (218,219) - Swap these?
  12. 01:51:756 (226) - Same reason as 01:38:605. How about moving to 01:51:550?
[Muzukashii]
  1. How about increasing HP, OD by 1?
  2. 00:11:482 (22) - k that follow vocal melody.
  3. 00:13:125 (28,29,30) - k d k that follow vocal melody.
  4. 00:15:591 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - How about this that follow vocal.
  5. 00:22:577 (62) - Move to 00:22:475. melody is there.
  6. 00:27:509 (80) - Same reason above. move to 00:27:406.
  7. 00:28:331 (83) - Also, move to 00:28:228.
  8. 00:39:838 (116) - Remove for consistency.
  9. 01:02:646 (192) - Remove?
  10. 01:11:482 (223,224,225,226,227,228) - It is a bit awkward to play. i'd recommend this rhythm that follow melody.
  11. 01:15:591 (240,241,242) - d d k that follow vocal.
  12. 01:16:208 (243) - I think this note is not necessary. How about removing this?
  13. 01:49:290 (363,364,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:27:509. It would be natural to play that changing to this.
[Oni]
  1. 00:09:427 - Add note that follow drum(?) sound. it would be easier to read.
  2. 00:10:351 (22) - How about k?
  3. 00:13:434 (36) - k for consistency.
  4. 00:14:564 (3) - d that follow vocal.
  5. 00:15:386 (6,7) - I think it would fit more vocal sound that swapping these.
  6. 00:16:413 (10,11,12,13,14) - How about changing to dkddk that follow vocal?
  7. 00:21:139 (20) - k that follow melody.
  8. 00:24:119 - How about adding d that follow string sound?
  9. 00:28:742 (58) - I think it would be better feeling that removing clap.
  10. 00:49:393 (142) - It doesn't match the music imo. removing this would be better.
  11. 00:52:167 (157,158) - Swapping these that follow vocal.
  12. 00:52:577 (159,160,161,162) - How about kkd k?
  13. 00:55:968 - How about adding k that follow string sound?
  14. 01:01:927 (207,208) - Swapping these that follow vocal.
  15. 01:04:906 (221) - k that follow vocal?
  16. 01:05:728 (224) - Same as above.
  17. 01:22:167 (31) - k that follow the melody.
  18. 01:29:050 (64,65) - Swapping these. it would fit more the melody.
  19. 01:30:180 (69,70,71,72) - ddkk would be better imo.
  20. 01:49:290 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - It is a bit weird. How about this rhythm?
  21. 01:51:242 (169) - d?
  22. 01:52:269 (173,174) - I think it would be better that removing these for emphasizing strong sound.
Sorry for poor mod.
guineaQ
Oh yikes, I'm gonna wait till you apply Ufw's mod. (I don't like modding maps that has pending mods to be applied)
Konpaku Sariel
inner
00:03:879 (3) - d
00:04:084 (4) - K

00:05:728 (13) - K
00:05:934 (14,15) - ctrl + G
00:06:345 (16) - k

00:08:194 (26,27) - ctrl + G
00:08:502 (28) - k
00:08:708 (29,30) - ctrl + G

00:09:016 ~ 00:10:660

drum rhythm
O___o___o__oo_o_

00:10:043 (39) - d
00:10:557 (44) - d

00:26:584 (149,150) - dk

00:27:201 (153) - add d
00:27:304 (154,155) - move to 00:27:406 (153,154) -
00:27:612 (156) - delete

00:27:817 (157,158) - kd

00:28:742 (164) - d
00:29:667 (167) - k

00:34:290 (186) - d

01:13:125 ~ 01:39:427
lyrics rhythm

o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o__o__o___o_o_o_

o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o__o__o_o__o__o_
o__o__o___o_o_o_

o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o__o__o___o_o_o_

o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o__o__o_o__o__o_
o__o__o__o__o___

i recommend

k_k_d_k_kddk_ddd
k_k_d_k_kddk_dkd
d_k_k_d_dkdk_kdd
kddkddkdddkdkkdd

k_k_d_k_kddk_ddd
k_k_d_k_kddk_ddd
d__dk_d_d__dk_d_
kddkddkdddkdkdkd

k_k_d_k_kkdk_ddd
k_k_d_k_kkdk_dkd
d_k_k_d_dkdk_ddd
kddkddkdddkdkkdd

k_k_d_k_kkdk_ddd
k_k_d_k_kkkd_kdd
d__k__ddd__k__dd
kddkddkddkddkdkk

01:52:475 (16) - add d
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Underflow wrote:

I like this song <3
mod
[General]
  1. Hitsound volume is a bit low imo. how about increasing by 10%?
[Kantan]
  1. 01:02:851 (73) - k that follow the melody.
  2. 01:07:372 - I think it would be easier to catch rhythm that adding d.
  3. 01:09:016 - Same as above. How about adding k?
  4. 01:11:893 (85,86) - It would fit more the music that removing 01:11:893 (85) and moving 01:12:304 (86) to 01:12:098.
  5. 01:39:016 (127) - How about k that follow vocal?
  6. 01:33:673 (120,121) - Swap these for consistency.
  7. 01:43:536 (134,135) - How about swapping these? i think it would be better feeling.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:20:523 (32,33,34,35) - I think it would be natural that changing to this.
  2. 00:25:454 (42) - k for consistency.
  3. 00:26:071 (44) - d would sound better.
  4. 00:34:084 (57) - Remove this for consistency.
  5. 00:48:879 (85) - I think it should be d. just feeling say that. /me runs
  6. 00:53:399 (97,98) - It would be not bad feeling that adding finish.
  7. 00:55:043 (99) - d?
  8. 01:12:304 (137) - Same as Kantan difficulty. move to 01:12:098.
  9. 01:38:605 (198) - It would be natural that moving to 01:38:399 cuz strong sound is there.
  10. 01:44:153 (210,211) - How about swapping these that follow the melody?
  11. 01:48:057 (218,219) - Swap these?
  12. 01:51:756 (226) - Same reason as 01:38:605. How about moving to 01:51:550?
[Muzukashii]
  1. How about increasing HP, OD by 1?
  2. 00:11:482 (22) - k that follow vocal melody.
  3. 00:13:125 (28,29,30) - k d k that follow vocal melody.
  4. 00:15:591 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - How about this that follow vocal.
  5. 00:22:577 (62) - Move to 00:22:475. melody is there.
  6. 00:27:509 (80) - Same reason above. move to 00:27:406.
  7. 00:28:331 (83) - Also, move to 00:28:228.
  8. 00:39:838 (116) - Remove for consistency.
  9. 01:02:646 (192) - Remove?
  10. 01:11:482 (223,224,225,226,227,228) - It is a bit awkward to play. i'd recommend this rhythm that follow melody.
  11. 01:15:591 (240,241,242) - d d k that follow vocal.
  12. 01:16:208 (243) - I think this note is not necessary. How about removing this?
  13. 01:49:290 (363,364,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:27:509. It would be natural to play that changing to this.
[Oni]
  1. 00:09:427 - Add note that follow drum(?) sound. it would be easier to read.
  2. 00:10:351 (22) - How about k?
  3. 00:13:434 (36) - k for consistency.
  4. 00:14:564 (3) - d that follow vocal.
  5. 00:15:386 (6,7) - I think it would fit more vocal sound that swapping these.
  6. 00:16:413 (10,11,12,13,14) - How about changing to dkddk that follow vocal?
  7. 00:21:139 (20) - k that follow melody.
  8. 00:24:119 - How about adding d that follow string sound?
  9. 00:28:742 (58) - I think it would be better feeling that removing clap.
  10. 00:49:393 (142) - It doesn't match the music imo. removing this would be better.
  11. 00:52:167 (157,158) - Swapping these that follow vocal.
  12. 00:52:577 (159,160,161,162) - How about kkd k?
  13. 00:55:968 - How about adding k that follow string sound?
  14. 01:01:927 (207,208) - Swapping these that follow vocal.
  15. 01:04:906 (221) - k that follow vocal?
  16. 01:05:728 (224) - Same as above.
  17. 01:22:167 (31) - k that follow the melody.
  18. 01:29:050 (64,65) - Swapping these. it would fit more the melody.
  19. 01:30:180 (69,70,71,72) - ddkk would be better imo.
  20. 01:49:290 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - It is a bit weird. How about this rhythm?
  21. 01:51:242 (169) - d?
  22. 01:52:269 (173,174) - I think it would be better that removing these for emphasizing strong sound.

I'll finish modding by this time tomorrow.

+ Sorry for poor mod in advance.
some modified, thanks. :3 okay i'm waiting for you XD kudos soon if you finishing it all.

guineaQ wrote:

Oh yikes, I'm gonna wait till you apply Ufw's mod. (I don't like modding maps that has pending mods to be applied)
okay XD

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

inner
00:03:879 (3) - d
00:04:084 (4) - K

00:05:728 (13) - K
00:05:934 (14,15) - ctrl + G
00:06:345 (16) - k

00:08:194 (26,27) - ctrl + G
00:08:502 (28) - k
00:08:708 (29,30) - ctrl + G

00:09:016 ~ 00:10:660

drum rhythm
O___o___o__oo_o_

00:10:043 (39) - d
00:10:557 (44) - d

00:26:584 (149,150) - dk

00:27:201 (153) - add d
00:27:304 (154,155) - move to 00:27:406 (153,154) -
00:27:612 (156) - delete

00:27:817 (157,158) - kd

00:28:742 (164) - d
00:29:667 (167) - k

00:34:290 (186) - d

01:13:125 ~ 01:39:427
lyrics rhythm

o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o__o__o___o_o_o_

o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o__o__o_o__o__o_
o__o__o___o_o_o_

o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o__o__o___o_o_o_

o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o_o_o_o_oo_o__o_
o__o__o_o__o__o_
o__o__o__o__o___

i recommend

k_k_d_k_kddk_ddd
k_k_d_k_kddk_dkd
d_k_k_d_dkdk_kdd
kddkddkdddkdkkdd

k_k_d_k_kddk_ddd
k_k_d_k_kddk_ddd
d__dk_d_d__dk_d_
kddkddkdddkdkdkd

k_k_d_k_kkdk_ddd
k_k_d_k_kkdk_dkd
d_k_k_d_dkdk_ddd
kddkddkdddkdkkdd

k_k_d_k_kkdk_ddd
k_k_d_k_kkkd_kdd
d__k__ddd__k__dd
kddkddkddkddkdkk

01:52:475 (16) - add d
i don't understand what you mean at 01:13:125 - ~ 01:39:427 - but i won't change the stream style (?)
anyway thanks for the mod sariel :3
Sylphi
Oh, i forgot to mod Inner Oni.

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:20:934 (116,117) - Swapping these that follow the melody?
  2. 00:28:125 (159,160,161,162,163,164) - dk dddk would fit more the melody imo.
  3. 00:33:673 (184) - Remove clap? i don't know what to follow.
  4. 00:34:906 (188) - How about k that follow unknown sound?
  5. 00:52:167 (285) - k that follow vocal sound.
  6. 01:04:084 (365,366) - Swapping these that follow vocal melody?
  7. 01:05:214 (371,372,373) - k d k?
  8. 01:13:742 (20,21,22,23,24) - If you follow the melody, it would be better that changing to ddkk k.
  9. 01:18:673 (52,53) - It would fit more the music that swapping these imo.
  10. 01:21:550 (73) - d for consistency.
  11. 01:27:098 (114,115) - k that follow the melody.
  12. 01:28:742 (126) - How about k?
  13. 01:32:440 (151) - k that follow vocal melody.
  14. 01:34:495 (167) - k for consistency.
  15. 01:37:783 (1) - k? it is similar sound as 01:38:091 (4).
  16. 01:40:660 (25,26) - Swap these for consistency.
  17. 01:49:495 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This stream is really not matched the music. it would suffice that changing to this rhythm imo.
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Underflow wrote:

I like this song <3

[General]
  1. Hitsound volume is a bit low imo. how about increasing by 10%?
[Kantan]
  1. 01:02:851 (73) - k that follow the melody.
  2. 01:07:372 - I think it would be easier to catch rhythm that adding d.
  3. 01:09:016 - Same as above. How about adding k?
  4. 01:11:893 (85,86) - It would fit more the music that removing 01:11:893 (85) and moving 01:12:304 (86) to 01:12:098.
  5. 01:39:016 (127) - How about k that follow vocal?
  6. 01:33:673 (120,121) - Swap these for consistency.
  7. 01:43:536 (134,135) - How about swapping these? i think it would be better feeling.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:20:523 (32,33,34,35) - I think it would be natural that changing to this.
  2. 00:25:454 (42) - k for consistency.
  3. 00:26:071 (44) - d would sound better.
  4. 00:34:084 (57) - Remove this for consistency.
  5. 00:48:879 (85) - I think it should be d. just feeling say that. /me runs
  6. 00:53:399 (97,98) - It would be not bad feeling that adding finish.
  7. 00:55:043 (99) - d?
  8. 01:12:304 (137) - Same as Kantan difficulty. move to 01:12:098.
  9. 01:38:605 (198) - It would be natural that moving to 01:38:399 cuz strong sound is there.
  10. 01:44:153 (210,211) - How about swapping these that follow the melody?
  11. 01:48:057 (218,219) - Swap these?
  12. 01:51:756 (226) - Same reason as 01:38:605. How about moving to 01:51:550?
[Muzukashii]
  1. How about increasing HP, OD by 1?
  2. 00:11:482 (22) - k that follow vocal melody.
  3. 00:13:125 (28,29,30) - k d k that follow vocal melody.
  4. 00:15:591 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - How about this that follow vocal.
  5. 00:22:577 (62) - Move to 00:22:475. melody is there.
  6. 00:27:509 (80) - Same reason above. move to 00:27:406.
  7. 00:28:331 (83) - Also, move to 00:28:228.
  8. 00:39:838 (116) - Remove for consistency.
  9. 01:02:646 (192) - Remove?
  10. 01:11:482 (223,224,225,226,227,228) - It is a bit awkward to play. i'd recommend this rhythm that follow melody.
  11. 01:15:591 (240,241,242) - d d k that follow vocal.
  12. 01:16:208 (243) - I think this note is not necessary. How about removing this?
  13. 01:49:290 (363,364,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:27:509. It would be natural to play that changing to this.
[Oni]
  1. 00:09:427 - Add note that follow drum(?) sound. it would be easier to read.
  2. 00:10:351 (22) - How about k?
  3. 00:13:434 (36) - k for consistency.
  4. 00:14:564 (3) - d that follow vocal.
  5. 00:15:386 (6,7) - I think it would fit more vocal sound that swapping these.
  6. 00:16:413 (10,11,12,13,14) - How about changing to dkddk that follow vocal?
  7. 00:21:139 (20) - k that follow melody.
  8. 00:24:119 - How about adding d that follow string sound?
  9. 00:28:742 (58) - I think it would be better feeling that removing clap.
  10. 00:49:393 (142) - It doesn't match the music imo. removing this would be better.
  11. 00:52:167 (157,158) - Swapping these that follow vocal.
  12. 00:52:577 (159,160,161,162) - How about kkd k?
  13. 00:55:968 - How about adding k that follow string sound?
  14. 01:01:927 (207,208) - Swapping these that follow vocal.
  15. 01:04:906 (221) - k that follow vocal?
  16. 01:05:728 (224) - Same as above.
  17. 01:22:167 (31) - k that follow the melody.
  18. 01:29:050 (64,65) - Swapping these. it would fit more the melody.
  19. 01:30:180 (69,70,71,72) - ddkk would be better imo.
  20. 01:49:290 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - It is a bit weird. How about this rhythm?
  21. 01:51:242 (169) - d?
  22. 01:52:269 (173,174) - I think it would be better that removing these for emphasizing strong sound.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:20:934 (116,117) - Swapping these that follow the melody?
  2. 00:28:125 (159,160,161,162,163,164) - dk dddk would fit more the melody imo.
  3. 00:33:673 (184) - Remove clap? i don't know what to follow.
  4. 00:34:906 (188) - How about k that follow unknown sound?
  5. 00:52:167 (285) - k that follow vocal sound.
  6. 01:04:084 (365,366) - Swapping these that follow vocal melody?
  7. 01:05:214 (371,372,373) - k d k?
  8. 01:13:742 (20,21,22,23,24) - If you follow the melody, it would be better that changing to ddkk k.
  9. 01:18:673 (52,53) - It would fit more the music that swapping these imo.
  10. 01:21:550 (73) - d for consistency.
  11. 01:27:098 (114,115) - k that follow the melody.
  12. 01:28:742 (126) - How about k?
  13. 01:32:440 (151) - k that follow vocal melody.
  14. 01:34:495 (167) - k for consistency.
  15. 01:37:783 (1) - k? it is similar sound as 01:38:091 (4).
  16. 01:40:660 (25,26) - Swap these for consistency.
  17. 01:49:495 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This stream is really not matched the music. it would suffice that changing to this rhythm imo.
Sorry for poor mod.
why you don't edit your post thanks for the mod and stars :3
FlamingRok
Hello once more, from the priority modding queue! Your map was the highest onto the priority, and as a result, I am here, modding the map. Just remember that anything that I say here is not necessary to add to your map, and that they are purely suggestions. Basically, feel free to opt out onto altering your map to my demands. But with that said, let us begin.

d=don
k=kat
D=large don
k=large kat

[Kantan]
00:24:632 (29) Change to k to match the high pitched chime.
00:27:098 (32) (33) (34) Change from d d k to k k d, as the pitches in the music suggest that it starts high, and ends low.
01:16:413 (93) Maybe change to a k? Your call here really.
Yeah, that's it for Kantan, didn't see a whole lot that needed to be fixed here.

[Futsuu]
00:11:071 (11) (12) ctrl+g these notes, as the higher pitch occurs after the low pitch, not before.
00:12:714 (14) Maybe a d would suit this pitch better.
00:15:591 (21) k might suit the high pitch.
00:16:413 (22) ^
00:59:153 (109) This note is higher pitched than the other two notes. A k may suit it better.
01:06:550 (126) Hm, D might fit best for the increase in volume in the voice, but again, this is your call.
01:22:988 (161) (162) crtl+g these notes, as the higher pitch occurs after the low pitch, not before.
01:23:810 (163) Change to d, because this note is pitched lower than the previous note.
01:43:947 (208) (209) (210) ctrl+g these notes around as well, as this set of notes ends on a low pitch.

[Muzukashii]
00:15:591 (37) Change to k to match (38) and (39)
00:16:516 (40) ^
00:36:345 Add a d here to match the piano.
00:36:756 (107) Change to d to match the piano.
01:38:399 (317) (318) ctrl+g these notes to match the voice's changes in pitch.
Fun Muzukashii!

[Oni]
00:36:345 Add a d here to match the piano.
00:36:756 ^
00:37:167 (87) Change to a k to match voice.
00:37:783 (90) Change to a d for ^
01:26:173 (50) Change to k to match the ongoing voice.
01:32:543 (83) Maybe change to k for ^, but this one's again, your call.
01:38:708 (108) Change to k to match the previous notes.
01:39:119 (110) Is there a reason this is a d? I think k suits it better.
01:42:509 (129) Personally, I believe d to work best here.
01:43:536 (134) ^
01:44:358 (137) This should be d to match the lower pitched noise.

I can't mod Inner Oni, I'm not good enough. Anyways, that's my mod, good luck onto this map, it's looking great so far!
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

FlamingRok wrote:

Hello once more, from the priority modding queue! Your map was the highest onto the priority, and as a result, I am here, modding the map. Just remember that anything that I say here is not necessary to add to your map, and that they are purely suggestions. Basically, feel free to opt out onto altering your map to my demands. But with that said, let us begin.

d=don
k=kat
D=large don
k=large kat

[Kantan]
00:24:632 (29) Change to k to match the high pitched chime.
00:27:098 (32) (33) (34) Change from d d k to k k d, as the pitches in the music suggest that it starts high, and ends low.
01:16:413 (93) Maybe change to a k? Your call here really.
Yeah, that's it for Kantan, didn't see a whole lot that needed to be fixed here.

[Futsuu]
00:11:071 (11) (12) ctrl+g these notes, as the higher pitch occurs after the low pitch, not before.
00:12:714 (14) Maybe a d would suit this pitch better.
00:15:591 (21) k might suit the high pitch.
00:16:413 (22) ^
00:59:153 (109) This note is higher pitched than the other two notes. A k may suit it better.
01:06:550 (126) Hm, D might fit best for the increase in volume in the voice, but again, this is your call.
01:22:988 (161) (162) crtl+g these notes, as the higher pitch occurs after the low pitch, not before.
01:23:810 (163) Change to d, because this note is pitched lower than the previous note.
01:43:947 (208) (209) (210) ctrl+g these notes around as well, as this set of notes ends on a low pitch.

[Muzukashii]
00:15:591 (37) Change to k to match (38) and (39)
00:16:516 (40) ^
00:36:345 Add a d here to match the piano.
00:36:756 (107) Change to d to match the piano.
01:38:399 (317) (318) ctrl+g these notes to match the voice's changes in pitch.
Fun Muzukashii!

[Oni]
00:36:345 Add a d here to match the piano.
00:36:756 ^
00:37:167 (87) Change to a k to match voice.
00:37:783 (90) Change to a d for ^
01:26:173 (50) Change to k to match the ongoing voice.
01:32:543 (83) Maybe change to k for ^, but this one's again, your call.
01:38:708 (108) Change to k to match the previous notes.
01:39:119 (110) Is there a reason this is a d? I think k suits it better.
01:42:509 (129) Personally, I believe d to work best here.
01:43:536 (134) ^
01:44:358 (137) This should be d to match the lower pitched noise.

I can't mod Inner Oni, I'm not good enough. Anyways, that's my mod, good luck onto this map, it's looking great so far!
okay no problem, thanks for your mod :3

updated~
Numbers 596108
Mod request by Nishizumi (Modding Queue)

[Kantan]

Notes :

00:15:591 (16) - O
00:21:345 (24) - o
00:46:002 - Add a o
00:56:687 (66) - Slider is better?
01:44:769 - Add a o

[Futsuu]

Notes :

00:05:523 - Add a note.
00:07:167 - Add a note.
00:10:249 (8) - Move to 00:10:146
00:17:030 (24,25) - oo
00:23:810 (39) - o
00:28:742 (49) - O
00:56:482 (102,103) - oo
01:17:646 - Add a o
01:33:262 - Add a o

[Muzukashii]

00:02:441 ~ 00:03:673 - Use spinner as beginning is better :3
00:15:591 (37,38,39,40,41) - OOOOO
00:35:728 (103) - o
00:36:961 (108) - o
00:40:865 - Add a note.
00:41:482 - Add a note.
00:41:687 - Add a note.
01:10:762 (219,220) - OO
01:36:139 (311) - O
01:36:961 (313) - O
01:45:694 - Add a o
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod request by Nishizumi (Modding Queue)

[Kantan]

Notes :

00:15:591 (16) - O
00:21:345 (24) - o
00:46:002 - Add a o
00:56:687 (66) - Slider is better?
01:44:769 - Add a o

[Futsuu]

Notes :

00:05:523 - Add a note.
00:07:167 - Add a note.
00:10:249 (8) - Move to 00:10:146
00:17:030 (24,25) - oo
00:23:810 (39) - o
00:28:742 (49) - O
00:56:482 (102,103) - oo
01:17:646 - Add a o
01:33:262 - Add a o

[Muzukashii]

00:02:441 ~ 00:03:673 - Use spinner as beginning is better :3
00:15:591 (37,38,39,40,41) - OOOOO
00:35:728 (103) - o
00:36:961 (108) - o
00:40:865 - Add a note.
00:41:482 - Add a note.
00:41:687 - Add a note.
01:10:762 (219,220) - OO
01:36:139 (311) - O
01:36:961 (313) - O
01:45:694 - Add a o

[Oni]

Notes :

00:10:865 (25) - o
00:11:584 - Add note.
00:13:228 - Add note.
00:14:769 (4) - O
00:23:810 (33) - o
00:27:406 (51) - o
00:28:228 (56) - o
00:59:975 (197) - o
01:37:783 (105,106,107,108) - OOOO
01:50:934 (167,168,169,170,171) - OOOOO

[Inner Oni]

Notes :

00:09:324 (33) - o
00:27:714 (156) - o
00:39:016 (208) - o
00:59:975 (339) - o
01:06:550 (379) - o
01:16:208 (37) - o
01:16:413 (39) - o
01:46:002 (55) - o
thanks for the mod~ :3 whyyoudon'tedityourpost
Numbers 596108
Sorry, Some wrong at that day D:

[Oni]

Notes :

00:10:865 (25) - o
00:11:584 - Add note.
00:13:228 - Add note.
00:14:769 (4) - O
00:23:810 (33) - o
00:27:406 (51) - o
00:28:228 (56) - o
00:59:975 (197) - o
01:37:783 (105,106,107,108) - OOOO
01:50:934 (167,168,169,170,171) - OOOOO

[Inner Oni]

Notes :

00:09:324 (33) - o
00:27:714 (156) - o
00:39:016 (208) - o
00:59:975 (339) - o
01:06:550 (379) - o
01:16:208 (37) - o
01:16:413 (39) - o
01:46:002 (55) - o

That's all, sorry. D:
guineaQ
I am busyyyy studying for exams (I thought it was 2 weeks laterrr)

[Kantan]
  1. 00:22:167 (26,27,28,29,30) - should be k d k d k if you are following the chimes which you did for 00:26:276 (33,34,35,36,37) -
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:21:756 (38,39,40) - d k d, the middle one's pitch is higher than others
  2. 00:23:399 (42,43,44) - k d k
  3. 01:15:591 (160,161,162,163,164) - d k d k d
  4. 01:41:071 (220,221,222,223,224) - should be k d k d k if you are following the chimes
  5. 01:49:495 (241) - having this note to capture the sound at 3/4 isn't really working so well, I would look for different alternative or remove it :<
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:25:249 (73,76) - imo just d is better
  2. 00:27:920 (82) - k
  3. 00:29:050 (86,87,88,89) - either all big dons, or just make only 00:29:358 (87) - big kat and 00:30:386 (90) - make this big kat as well if you are going to make 00:29:975 (89) - a big don
  4. 00:34:084 (99) - d
  5. 00:42:714 (119,120,121,122) - invert the colors for consistency with 00:28:742 (85,86) - (you used big dons for this certain sound last time, better do it the same for consistency :3)
  6. 00:45:591 (130) - d
  7. 00:52:372 (154) - the sound here is kinda weak, better off removing it
  8. 00:59:975 - would have been better if you started using 3/4s starting from here (new verse line)
  9. 01:06:550 (203,204,205) - why doesn't this pattern have 3/4? owo?
Can't mod oni and above ;w;
GL (~ =w=)~
and sorry for being late lol
inb4 another "whyyoudon'tedityourpost"
Senritsu
try replying to every single mod given by modder
it will help them improve their mod quality :D

also i will wait until you applied guinea's mod then i will mod it~
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

guineaQ wrote:

I am busyyyy studying for exams (I thought it was 2 weeks laterrr)

[Kantan]
  1. 00:22:167 (26,27,28,29,30) - should be k d k d k if you are following the chimes which you did for 00:26:276 (33,34,35,36,37) -
not changed, but i change it to d d d k k

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:21:756 (38,39,40) - d k d, the middle one's pitch is higher than others changed
  2. 00:23:399 (42,43,44) - k d k changed
  3. 01:15:591 (160,161,162,163,164) - d k d k d changed
  4. 01:41:071 (220,221,222,223,224) - should be k d k d k if you are following the chimes changed
  5. 01:49:495 (241) - having this note to capture the sound at 3/4 isn't really working so well, I would look for different alternative or remove it :<
not removed

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:25:249 (73,76) - imo just d is better changed
  2. 00:27:920 (82) - k changed
  3. 00:29:050 (86,87,88,89) - either all big dons, or just make only 00:29:358 (87) - big kat and 00:30:386 (90) - make this big kat as well if you are going to make 00:29:975 (89) - a big don not changed
  4. 00:34:084 (99) - d changed, i swap it with 00:34:290 (100) -
  5. 00:42:714 (119,120,121,122) - invert the colors for consistency with 00:28:742 (85,86) - (you used big dons for this certain sound last time, better do it the same for consistency :3) not changed
  6. 00:45:591 (130) - d changed
  7. 00:52:372 (154) - the sound here is kinda weak, better off removing it
  8. 00:59:975 - would have been better if you started using 3/4s starting from here (new verse line) changed
  9. 01:06:550 (203,204,205) - why doesn't this pattern have 3/4? owo?
changed

Can't mod oni and above ;w;
GL (~ =w=)~
and sorry for being late lol
inb4 another "whyyoudon'tedityourpost"
no problem XD thanks for the mod, sorry i can't explain why it's not changed ;w;

Senritsu wrote:

try replying to every single mod given by modder
it will help them improve their mod quality :D

also i will wait until you applied guinea's mod then i will mod it~
aku bingung jelasinnya gimana ;w; bahasa inggrisku jelek
udah tuh :3
10nya
maaf telat, m4m from the queue

[General]
  1. you can add eroge to the tags since this visual novel is an eroge
  2. gatau offset -10 kok cocok di gue, currently feels too late imo
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:714 - : remove? keanya kebanyakan buat diff kantan soalnya previous notenya udah banyak banget (yg 00:09:016 5,6,7,8,9 - )
  2. 00:20:112 - : pindah ke 00:20:934 - ? lebih pas imo
  3. 00:22:988 - : swap jadi k d? lebih pas buat pianonya
  4. 00:24:632 - : sama sih reasonnya, kantan sebenernya less notes malah lebih bagus, soalnya kalo 5 notes di garis putih itu lebih cocok ke Futsuu. gimana kalo disini remove aja?
  5. 00:54:221 (65,66) - : swap jadi d k ? boring sih k d k mulu, dibuat variasi disini juga gapapa kok soalnya piano di 00:54:221 - masih sama kea yg di 00:53:399 -
  6. 01:16:002 - : kalo ngikutin pattern didepannya, gimana ini di move ke 01:16:824 - ? ngebuat variasi juga
  7. 01:16:824 (135,136) - : swap jadi d k ? lebih pas :3
  8. 01:50:934 (148) - : D ? agak sepi aja udah end kok ngga ada big notesnya, also support music juga sih
  9. Nice kantan!
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:11:071 (11,12) - : d k sounds better
  2. 00:20:317 - : remove? patternnya susah lol nonstop 1/2 takutnya ngga kekejar sama futsuu player
  3. 00:48:262 - : ^
  4. 00:52:988 - : remove, penuh amat kasian playernya ;w;
  5. 00:56:276 - : d?
  6. 01:16:208 - : remove, patternnya kea muzu, disini juga ngga ada musik yg bisa diikutin
  7. 01:25:660 - : ^
  8. 01:42:714 - : d ? lebih enak patternnya imo
  9. 01:49:495 - : remove, sebenernya ini ada buat di garis biru 1/4 sih :D jd remove aja
[Muzu]
  1. 00:40:249 (115,116) - d k ?
  2. 00:41:893 (117) - : buat variasi gimana? add k di 00:41:482 - terus move ini ke 00:41:687 -
[Oni]
  1. 00:11:995 - : pindah ke 00:11:893 - follow musik sama vocal >< terus next patternnya dibiarin jadi buat variasi
  2. 00:57:304 - : disini kosong tbh, move ke 00:57:406 - atau remove
  3. 01:14:461 - : move 01:14:358 -
  4. nice
inner is seems good for me
good mapset, star and good luck
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

10nya wrote:

maaf telat, m4m from the queue

[General]
  1. you can add eroge to the tags since this visual novel is an eroge added
  2. gatau offset -10 kok cocok di gue, currently feels too late imo
wew lebih pas, okay changed

[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:714 - : remove? keanya kebanyakan buat diff kantan soalnya previous notenya udah banyak banget (yg 00:09:016 5,6,7,8,9 - ) removed
  2. 00:20:112 - : pindah ke 00:20:934 - ? lebih pas imo not moved, lebih pas di sebelumnya, sekalian kasih jeda/renggangin buat 5 circle di 00:22:157 -
  3. 00:22:988 - : swap jadi k d? lebih pas buat pianonya not changed, soalnya menurutku kalo k pasnya di 00:22:773 - dan 00:22:998 - lebih cocok d
  4. 00:24:632 - : sama sih reasonnya, kantan sebenernya less notes malah lebih bagus, soalnya kalo 5 notes di garis putih itu lebih cocok ke Futsuu. gimana kalo disini remove aja? okay, removed
  5. 00:54:221 (65,66) - : swap jadi d k ? boring sih k d k mulu, dibuat variasi disini juga gapapa kok soalnya piano di 00:54:221 - masih sama kea yg di 00:53:399 - okay, bagian 00:55:033 - doang aku ganti jadi k
  6. 01:16:002 - : kalo ngikutin pattern didepannya, gimana ini di move ke 01:16:824 - ? ngebuat variasi juga not changed, malah aneh menurutku kalo dipindahin kesitu
  7. 01:16:824 (135,136) - : swap jadi d k ? lebih pas :3 no, disini aku kosongin
  8. 01:50:934 (148) - : D ? agak sepi aja udah end kok ngga ada big notesnya, also support music juga sih added
  9. Nice kantan!
thanks~!

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:11:071 (11,12) - : d k sounds better not changed, ga cocok 00:11:472 - dikasih k. soalnya kalo bagian k cocoknya di 00:11:574 -
  2. 00:20:317 - : remove? patternnya susah lol nonstop 1/2 takutnya ngga kekejar sama futsuu player removed
  3. 00:48:262 - : ^ no, tapi 00:48:458 - pindah ke 00:48:663 -
  4. 00:52:988 - : remove, penuh amat kasian playernya ;w;
  5. 00:56:276 - : d? no, d lebih cocok di 00:56:163 - ,bukan disitu
  6. 01:16:208 - : remove, patternnya kea muzu, disini juga ngga ada musik yg bisa diikutin hmm.. okay changed terkesan maksa ya
  7. 01:25:660 - : ^ changed
  8. 01:42:714 - : d ? lebih enak patternnya imo changed
  9. 01:49:495 - : remove, sebenernya ini ada buat di garis biru 1/4 sih :D jd remove aja
changed

[Muzu]
  1. 00:40:249 (115,116) - d k ? changed
  2. 00:41:893 (117) - : buat variasi gimana? add k di 00:41:482 - terus move ini ke 00:41:687 -
okay changed, tapi 00:41:482 - tambahinnya d dan 00:42:088 - juga unchanged, dibagian itu mau ngikutin musiknya aja

[Oni]
  1. 00:11:995 - : pindah ke 00:11:893 - follow musik sama vocal >< terus next patternnya dibiarin jadi buat variasi orz malah jadi aneh menurutku, not changed
  2. 00:57:304 - : disini kosong tbh, move ke 00:57:406 - atau remove removed, kalo dipindahin jadi aneh
  3. 01:14:461 - : move 01:14:358 - not changed, jadi aneh =_=
  4. nice
thanks :3

inner is seems good for me
good mapset, star and good luck
thanks for the mod and star tennya :3

update soon if i have connection on my lappy ;w; updated~ :3
tasuke912
Hi, from m4m request.
[ General]

  1. You must unify the Offset to one side.
    Kantan, Futsuu

    Muzukashii, Oni, Inner Oni
I will give a full mod at a later date. :)
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi, from m4m request.
[ General]

  1. You must unify the Offset to one side.
    Kantan, Futsuu

    Muzukashii, Oni, Inner Oni
I will give a full mod at a later date. :)
omg i forgot to change offset, thanks.

okay :)
tasuke912
Hi. continued

[ Kantan]
  1. 00:22:157 (25,26,27,28,29) Why are these notes dddkk? I think ddkkd is better for beginner player. Try this.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:663 (94) move to 00:48:458 and, 00:48:458 (94,95) ctrl+G
    Although you might want to follow the vocals, I think 4/4 kick also should follow, because 4/4 kicks stand out in this song.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:04:074 ~ 00:10:650 follow the kick. See below.
    Ex. (1,2,3,4,5,6) are Finish.
  2. 01:52:362 (12) It doesn't sound here. Delete, or move to 01:52:567 and add Finish.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:04:074 ~ 00:10:650 same as Muzukashii. but you can put more notes than Muzu.
  2. 00:11:472 (28,29,30,31,32) Why are these notes dk-d-kd ? I think you should also follow 4/4 kicks.
    00:13:115 (38,39,40,41,42) ^
    01:13:937 (274,275,276,277,278) ^
    01:15:581 (284,285,286,287,288) ^
    01:20:513 (23,24,25,26,27) ^
    01:22:157 (33,34,35,36,37) ^ (Omitted below)
[ Inner Oni]
  1. same as Oni. follow the kicks.
Good luck. 8-)
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. continued

[ Kantan]
  1. 00:22:157 (25,26,27,28,29) Why are these notes dddkk? I think ddkkd is better for beginner player. Try this.
changed
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:663 (94) move to 00:48:458 and, 00:48:458 (94,95) ctrl+G
    Although you might want to follow the vocals, I think 4/4 kick also should follow, because 4/4 kicks stand out in this song.
moved, but i don't swap it
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:04:074 ~ 00:10:650 follow the kick. See below.
    Ex. (1,2,3,4,5,6) are Finish.
    changed, but i don't add finish (2,4)
  2. 01:52:362 (12) It doesn't sound here. Delete, or move to 01:52:567 and add Finish.
no changed, i feel there have sound.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:04:074 ~ 00:10:650 same as Muzukashii. but you can put more notes than Muzu.
  2. 00:11:472 (28,29,30,31,32) Why are these notes dk-d-kd ? I think you should also follow 4/4 kicks. no changed, because 00:12:088 - low pitch and dk d kd is more fit in this part
    00:13:115 (38,39,40,41,42) ^ changed
    01:13:937 (274,275,276,277,278) ^ not changed
    01:15:581 (284,285,286,287,288) ^ changed
    01:20:513 (23,24,25,26,27) ^ not changed
    01:22:157 (33,34,35,36,37) ^ (Omitted below)
[ Inner Oni]
  1. same as Oni. follow the kicks.
not changed

Good luck. 8-)
thanks for your modding :3
Senritsu
WARNING WALL OF TEXT

SET
/dies/

kalo eroge aja tennya cepet ya


[General]
  1. aaaaaaaa
[Kantan]
  1. I forgot how to kantan aaaaaaaa
  2. SV 1.40 unless you have a really good reason for this 1.30
  3. 00:16:809 (17) - pendapat gw aja sih ya, enakan diremove biar player" yang baru bisa nyiapin buat not selanjutnya yang ada finishernya.. optional sihnevermind remove it. nggak ada musik yang pantes buat dikasih kat di sana, dan buat emphasize 00:17:220 (17) -
  4. 00:24:617 ~ 00:27:905 coba gini
    uhh how to explain
    00:24:617 (29) - buat konsistensi sama 00:18:042 (18) -
    00:26:261 (31,32,33,34) - konsistensi juga sama sebelumnya.
    I have reason to ask you remove 00:27:494, liat mod futsuu yeh
  5. 00:11:467 (10) - d consistency with other diffs
  6. 00:53:384 (62) - coba kasih finish di sini, karena di 'tsu' vokalnya lumayan neken di sini
    saran gw sih vokalnya di sana diemphasize tapi 00:54:206 (63) - diremove lalu kasih finish di 00:55:028 (64) - .. cuma saran, gak usah diikutin juga gapapa /slapped/
  7. 01:04:069 (76) - ganti k dong buat ngikutin diff laennya
  8. 01:11:056 (84) - rem, yea gw tau km ngikutin drumnya, tapi kalo gitu berarti kudu kasih not juga di 01:10:645 - dan 01:11:056 - karna ada drumnya di situ. sudden note yang sekarang bikin jantungan imo
  9. 01:14:754 (89) - gapapa dikasih finish di sini, toh musiknya juga kenceng dan ngecrash
  10. 01:21:330 (100) - ^ vokal keraas
  11. 01:39:001 (127) - alasan sama kaya 01:11:056 (84) - juga di sini (lagi) gw tau lu ngikut vokalnya, but same reason as above
  12. 01:27:905 (111) - ganti K buat emphasize musiknya dan ngikutin diff lain yang pake k di sini
  13. 01:30:371 (115) - ganti ke d for same reason as above
  14. 01:32:836 (120) - missing finish? yes.
  15. 01:33:658 (121,122) - swap for same reason as consistency with another diff and finish 01:34:480 (122) -
  16. Cute
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:07:357 - ~ 00:09:412 -
    Kantan
    Futsuu
    Muzukashii
    Kantan ke futsuu sama 100%, sedangkan futsuu ke muzukashii bedanya jauh banget
    kasih beberapa not di sini, dan kurangin beberapa not di muzukashii juga. jagain biar muzu ke oni sama muzu ke futsuu nggak terlalu besar jaraknya
  2. oh God
  3. 00:09:001 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - daerah sini juga sama, dari kantan ke futsuu cuma nambah 1, tapi futsuu ke muzu nambah banyak
    aa eniwei lanjut
  4. 00:11:056 ~ 00:12:289 ganti ke sini, reason explained at muzu
  5. 00:14:960 (20) - ini bisa diremove kok, kasih jarak sekalian, masa habis 1/2 1/1 panjang 1/2 lagi ;v; rip beginner
  6. 00:14:343 (18) - cuma saran, ini bisa diremove juga buat emphasize musiknya.. .w.
  7. 00:17:015 (23) - bisa diremove juga buat emphasize 00:17:220 (24) -
  8. 00:22:562 kenapa di sini kosong padahal ada not di kantan? harusnya diff yang lebih susah juga isinya kurang lebih sama / ditambahin juga. but it's better if you remove the note at the kantan instead bcs break current futsuu needs breaks
  9. 00:44:960 (79) - dipindah aja ke 00:44:754 biar ritmenya sama kaya
  10. 00:48:864 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) -
  11. 00:53:384 (103,104) - finish buat emphasize vokalnya .w.
  12. 01:19:480 (164) - bisa diganti ke d ini, soalnya vokalnya turun
  13. 01:36:124 (204,205,206,207) - finish buat emphasize vokal .w.
    Personal opinion sih ya, 1/2nya terlalu banyak. kalo gw pribadi gak suka duplet bertumpuk gitu..
    contohnya kaya 00:43:932 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - , 00:44:960 (79,84) - bisa diremove buat kasih break (lalu nanti di muzu baru appear note di sana, itu baru gapapa)
    sisanya terserah nishi aja deh, kalo gw sebutin semua ntar jadi map gw lol xD
[Muzukashii]
  1. Oh yeah i wont do full mod di sini karena spreadnya kaya yang gw SS'in di futsuu tadi ngg.. nggak balance.
  2. Contohnya part 00:11:056 (18,19,20,21,22) - , muzunya padet, tapi futsuu sama kantannya kosong dan cuma 1 not di tempat yang sama alias persis banget. futsuunya bisa dibuat yang kaya gw suggest tadi
  3. Contoh lain ada di part 00:27:083 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - , bisa diisi futsuunya dan disimply sedikit muzunya .v. (Futsuu bisa dibuat dk di 00:27:905) mungkin 00:28:727 (83,84,85,86,87) - terlalu susah di muzu, biarin aja di oni, jadi di sini bisa dikurangin not 00:29:652 (86) - diremove YOU HAVE TO OBEY ME
    Dan part" lainnya yang sekiranya bisa keliatan di mata :")
  4. 00:42:699 (118,119,120,121) - this is hard.
    tbh udah bagus muzunya, cuma ya spreadnya imbalance sama futsuu
[Oni]
  1. Part awalnya kenapa padet bangeett
    Part awal (pas vokalnya)
    Kantan ke futsuu gak nambah, futsuu ke muzukashii nambah satu, kenapa muzukashii ke oni nambahnya sekampung :') diremove aja, sesuaiin. ntar di innernya baru gila"an tapi masuk akal gapapa
  2. depends on how you remap the muzu, remap the oni too so the spread will also be balanced. (kalo kesusahan PM gw aja gpp)
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:08:693 (29,30) - hapus 29, ganti 30 ke k aja biar ngefollow vokalnya lebih enak
  2. 00:09:720 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2981335 better like that, if you ask me. emphasize vokal dan streamnya ngeflow sama lagunya. current one gw gak paham ngikutin apa ovo
  3. 00:18:145 bisa dibikin kaya http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2981342 (k dk) yang sekarang musik di dnya kosong kalo menurutku atau remove aja dnya ww
  4. 00:21:535 (116) - 00:24:823 (132) - remove buat emphasize pianonya
  5. 00:23:179 (122,123) - ^
  6. 00:30:371 (160) - gw baru nyadar ini gak usah difinish juga gapapa karna musiknya nggak keras kok di situ
  7. 00:32:631 (176) - remove emphasize vokal
  8. 00:33:864 (180) - 00:38:898 (202) - ^
  9. 00:40:028 (206,207,208,209) - kkd 00:40:439 (209) - remove ^
  10. 00:49:378 (254,255) - bisa di remove, terus 00:49:994 (258) - juga biar keemphasize tuh musiknya. kalo yang sekarang sih kaya random stream gitu.. optional sih w
  11. 01:12:391 (10) - 01:32:323 (148) - remove buat break lols
  12. 01:25:542 (100) - ^ sumpah mereka bertiga ini (ini sama atasnya) kosong lol
  13. 01:39:104 (14) - ^ sama, buat misah vokalnya dan break
  14. 00:16:912 (88) - lupa yang ini lol ^
  15. need more emphasize here and there. i know inner oni itu kesannya orang pasti waw mapnya susah pasti dapet pp banyak, eh tapi kalo gak enak dimainin mah sama aja boong imo. di tempat" yang kosong ya biarin kosong aja, gapapalah kasih break gitu, daripada gakjelas itu atau ini ngikutin apa? tapi overall udah bagus kokk
good luck for rank o/
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Senritsu wrote:

WARNING WALL OF TEXT

SET
/dies/

kalo eroge aja tennya cepet ya


[General]
  1. aaaaaaaa
[Kantan]
  1. I forgot how to kantan aaaaaaaa
  2. SV 1.40 unless you have a really good reason for this 1.30 oke ganti sebenernya sih alasannya cuma biar lebih nyantai mainnya karena gerak notnya pelan
  3. 00:16:809 (17) - pendapat gw aja sih ya, enakan diremove biar player" yang baru bisa nyiapin buat not selanjutnya yang ada finishernya.. optional sihnevermind remove it. nggak ada musik yang pantes buat dikasih kat di sana, dan buat emphasize 00:17:220 (17) - changed
  4. 00:24:617 ~ 00:27:905 coba gini
    uhh how to explain
    00:24:617 (29) - buat konsistensi sama 00:18:042 (18) -
    00:26:261 (31,32,33,34) - konsistensi juga sama sebelumnya. changed, bingung sama bagian sini
    I have reason to ask you remove 00:27:494, liat mod futsuu yeh
  5. 00:11:467 (10) - d consistency with other diffs changed, lupa ._.
  6. 00:53:384 (62) - coba kasih finish di sini, karena di 'tsu' vokalnya lumayan neken di sini
    saran gw sih vokalnya di sana diemphasize tapi 00:54:206 (63) - diremove lalu kasih finish di 00:55:028 (64) - .. cuma saran, gak usah diikutin juga gapapa /slapped/ 00:53:384 - added finish 00:54:206 - removed tapi 00:55:028 - no added finish
  7. 01:04:069 (76) - ganti k dong buat ngikutin diff laennya changed, lupa lagi
  8. 01:11:056 (84) - rem, yea gw tau km ngikutin drumnya, tapi kalo gitu berarti kudu kasih not juga di 01:10:645 - dan 01:11:056 - karna ada drumnya di situ. sudden note yang sekarang bikin jantungan imo deleted
  9. 01:14:754 (89) - gapapa dikasih finish di sini, toh musiknya juga kenceng dan ngecrash no added, kurang neken banget musik, vokal dsb nya
  10. 01:21:330 (100) - ^ vokal keraas ^
  11. 01:39:001 (127) - alasan sama kaya 01:11:056 (84) - juga di sini (lagi) gw tau lu ngikut vokalnya, but same reason as above
  12. 01:27:905 (111) - ganti K buat emphasize musiknya dan ngikutin diff lain yang pake k di sini ganti ke k
  13. 01:30:371 (115) - ganti ke d for same reason as above changed, lupa lagi...
  14. 01:32:836 (120) - missing finish? yes. yes. changed
  15. 01:33:658 (121,122) - swap for same reason as consistency with another diff and finish 01:34:480 (122) - changed, but not for adding finish
  16. Cute
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:07:357 - ~ 00:09:412 -
    Kantan
    Futsuu
    Muzukashii
    Kantan ke futsuu sama 100%, sedangkan futsuu ke muzukashii bedanya jauh banget
    kasih beberapa not di sini, dan kurangin beberapa not di muzukashii juga. jagain biar muzu ke oni sama muzu ke futsuu nggak terlalu besar jaraknya okay *baru tau
  2. oh God
  3. 00:09:001 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - daerah sini juga sama, dari kantan ke futsuu cuma nambah 1, tapi futsuu ke muzu nambah banyak
    aa eniwei lanjut okay nanti gw ubah muzunya
  4. 00:11:056 ~ 00:12:289 ganti ke sini, reason explained at muzu changed
  5. 00:14:960 (20) - ini bisa diremove kok, kasih jarak sekalian, masa habis 1/2 1/1 panjang 1/2 lagi ;v; rip beginner ini aku pindahin ke 00:15:371
  6. 00:14:343 (18) - cuma saran, ini bisa diremove juga buat emphasize musiknya.. .w. removed
  7. 00:17:015 (23) - bisa diremove juga buat emphasize 00:17:220 (24) - no removed, lebih enak gini menurutku dan pas bgt bua ngikutin musiknya.
  8. 00:22:562 kenapa di sini kosong padahal ada not di kantan? harusnya diff yang lebih susah juga isinya kurang lebih sama / ditambahin juga. but it's better if you remove the note at the kantan instead bcs break current futsuu needs breaks oke bagian kantannya aja yang aku hapus
  9. 00:44:960 (79) - dipindah aja ke 00:44:754 biar ritmenya sama kaya
  10. 00:48:864 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98) - moved
  11. 00:53:384 (103,104) - finish buat emphasize vokalnya .w. added
  12. 01:19:480 (164) - bisa diganti ke d ini, soalnya vokalnya turun no, gw ngerasanya sama kaya 01:19:275
  13. 01:36:124 (204,205,206,207) - finish buat emphasize vokal .w.changed
    Personal opinion sih ya, 1/2nya terlalu banyak. kalo gw pribadi gak suka duplet bertumpuk gitu..
    contohnya kaya 00:43:932 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - , 00:44:960 (79,84) - bisa diremove buat kasih break (lalu nanti di muzu baru appear note di sana, itu baru gapapa)
    sisanya terserah nishi aja deh, kalo gw sebutin semua ntar jadi map gw lol xD
okay lol XD

[Muzukashii]
  1. Oh yeah i wont do full mod di sini karena spreadnya kaya yang gw SS'in di futsuu tadi ngg.. nggak balance. ...
  2. Contohnya part 00:11:056 (18,19,20,21,22) - , muzunya padet, tapi futsuu sama kantannya kosong dan cuma 1 not di tempat yang sama alias persis banget. futsuunya bisa dibuat yang kaya gw suggest tadi
  3. Contoh lain ada di part 00:27:083 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - , bisa diisi futsuunya dan disimply sedikit muzunya .v. (Futsuu bisa dibuat dk di 00:27:905) mungkin 00:28:727 (83,84,85,86,87) - terlalu susah di muzu, biarin aja di oni, jadi di sini bisa dikurangin not 00:29:652 (86) - diremove YOU HAVE TO OBEY ME
    Dan part" lainnya yang sekiranya bisa keliatan di mata :")
  4. 00:42:699 (118,119,120,121) - this is hard.
    tbh udah bagus muzunya, cuma ya spreadnya imbalance sama futsuu
okay udah aku mudahin

[Oni]
  1. Part awalnya kenapa padet bangeett
    Part awal (pas vokalnya)
    Kantan ke futsuu gak nambah, futsuu ke muzukashii nambah satu, kenapa muzukashii ke oni nambahnya sekampung :') diremove aja, sesuaiin. ntar di innernya baru gila"an tapi masuk akal gapapa
  2. depends on how you remap the muzu, remap the oni too so the spread will also be balanced. (kalo kesusahan PM gw aja gpp)
lol emang bingung disini, kok jaraknya jauh amat =_= chat ingame aja deh nanti kalo lu lagi on

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:08:693 (29,30) - hapus 29, ganti 30 ke k aja biar ngefollow vokalnya lebih enak aku swap
  2. 00:09:720 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2981335 better like that, if you ask me. emphasize vokal dan streamnya ngeflow sama lagunya. current one gw gak paham ngikutin apa ovo diganti, beberapa
  3. 00:18:145 bisa dibikin kaya http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2981342 (k dk) yang sekarang musik di dnya kosong kalo menurutku atau remove aja dnya ww removed
  4. 00:21:535 (116) - 00:24:823 (132) - remove buat emphasize pianonya removed
  5. 00:23:179 (122,123) - ^ngga, buat peramai aja @_@
  6. 00:30:371 (160) - gw baru nyadar ini gak usah difinish juga gapapa karna musiknya nggak keras kok di situ no, kesannya kayak nanggung bignotenya, mending diakhirin dibagian situ
  7. 00:32:631 (176) - remove emphasize vokal
  8. 00:33:864 (180) - 00:38:898 (202) - ^
  9. 00:40:028 (206,207,208,209) - kkd 00:40:439 (209) - remove ^ removed, tapi ga aku ganti ke kkd
  10. 00:49:378 (254,255) - bisa di remove, terus 00:49:994 (258) - juga biar keemphasize tuh musiknya. kalo yang sekarang sih kaya random stream gitu.. optional sih w emang sengaja random stream lol
  11. 01:12:391 (10) - 01:32:323 (148) - remove buat break lols bingung antara dihapus atau ngga, untuk saat ini aku ga remove dulu XD
  12. 01:25:542 (100) - ^ sumpah mereka bertiga ini (ini sama atasnya) kosong lol nggak kosong kok, ada suara musiknya =_=
  13. 01:39:104 (14) - ^ sama, buat misah vokalnya dan break no :/
  14. 00:16:912 (88) - lupa yang ini lol ^ okay semua saran buat penjeda di stream ga aku remove dulu
  15. need more emphasize here and there. i know inner oni itu kesannya orang pasti waw mapnya susah pasti dapet pp banyak, eh tapi kalo gak enak dimainin mah sama aja boong imo. di tempat" yang kosong ya biarin kosong aja, gapapalah kasih break gitu, daripada gakjelas itu atau ini ngikutin apa? tapi overall udah bagus kokk
tapi gw ga mikir map ini buat pp ;w; senritsu jahat mentang" gw farmer pp/slapped tapi dari apa yang aku dengar dan rasa itu nadanya begitu. dan buat stream panjang itu mungkin nantinya bisa aku ubah, entah dikasih jeda atau apa. :/

good luck for rank o/
makasih senrichuu >w< masih bingung sama diff oni, nanti w chat ingame ya ;w;
Chromoxx
Hey, heres my mod for your map. Today I'll be modding the Oni and Inner Oni diffs ;)

Oni
After testplaying and looking at this map several times i couldnt find anything in particular that i would change about it. There is only the fact that 3.3 Stars is a little bit on the easy sisde to call it a Oni. I would suggest maybe adding some more dd kk dk kd doubles or something to sllightly raise the difficulty or maybe raising the OD to 6. Otherwise I have no more suggestions. Solid mapping that plays well ;)

Inner Oni
Again I found no flaws in the mapping after playing and looking over the map several times. If you raise the Oni diff's OD to 6 as I advised, I would also raise this diffs OD to 6. Thats all. This was a solid map that played very well and was enjoyable. Good work!

Sorry for not being able to give any advice on improving the map itsself, but I seriously couldnt find anything specific. I hope the advice I managed to come up with was helpful anyways.
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

Chromoxx wrote:

Hey, heres my mod for your map. Today I'll be modding the Oni and Inner Oni diffs ;)

Oni
After testplaying and looking at this map several times i couldnt find anything in particular that i would change about it. There is only the fact that 3.3 Stars is a little bit on the easy sisde to call it a Oni. I would suggest maybe adding some more dd kk dk kd doubles or something to sllightly raise the difficulty or maybe raising the OD to 6. Otherwise I have no more suggestions. Solid mapping that plays well ;) i was deliberate to make it a bit easier.actually my target star diff is 3.40 oni OD 6 ? are you kidding me ? it's too hard to oni player imo. so no one changed

Inner Oni
Again I found no flaws in the mapping after playing and looking over the map several times. If you raise the Oni diff's OD to 6 as I advised, I would also raise this diffs OD to 6. Thats all. This was a solid map that played very well and was enjoyable. Good work! i think OD 5 was enjoyable than OD 6 and i'm not like OD 6 btw so no changed ;w;

Sorry for not being able to give any advice on improving the map itsself, but I seriously couldnt find anything specific. I hope the advice I managed to come up with was helpful anyways.
okay, thanks for the mod.
Renka
Hi,from forum.

Kantan
00:09:823 - change d? - .I think that it dbetter sounds.
01:19:275 - delete? - Pattern is dkd k kdk d, I look better.
01:29:138 - delete? -Pattern is kdd k d dkk, I look better.
01:32:425 - delete? - ^

Futsuu
00:09:823 - same as kantan.
00:09:412 - delete,00:09:001 - change D? I put a break, I get a sense of unity,Proposition.
01:22:973 - change D? I think that it better sounds.
01:29:549 - ^
01:40:850 - delete? Has placed here only 5 Notes,I think that it looks better, combined to the other 3 Notes.

Muzukashii
00:09:823 - same as kantan.
01:22:973 - same as futsuu.
01:29:549 - ^

Oni
good map.

Inner Oni
Setting
OD = 6?
Because it is the inner was I think OD6 is appropriate.Proposition.

I like fripSide! I need map of more fripSide! Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

chaica wrote:

Hi,from forum.

Kantan
00:09:823 - change d? - .I think that it dbetter sounds. no, k is more fit with the music
01:19:275 - delete? - Pattern is dkd k kdk d, I look better. i follow the vocal sound
01:29:138 - delete? -Pattern is kdd k d dkk, I look better. ^
01:32:425 - delete? - ^ ^

Futsuu
00:09:823 - same as kantan. same as kantan reason
00:09:412 - delete,00:09:001 - change D? I put a break, I get a sense of unity,Proposition. no, because pressure of the music is not so hard.
01:22:973 - change D? I think that it better sounds. hmm, you're right. changed
01:29:549 - ^ ^
01:40:850 - delete? Has placed here only 5 Notes,I think that it looks better, combined to the other 3 Notes. no, but changed to k

Muzukashii
00:09:823 - same as kantan. same as kantan reason
01:22:973 - same as futsuu. changed
01:29:549 - ^ ^

Oni
good map. thanks :)

Inner Oni
Setting
OD = 6?
Because it is the inner was I think OD6 is appropriate.Proposition. OD 5 is enough i guess or maybe i'll change it to OD 6 ?

I like fripSide! I need map of more fripSide! Good Luck!
me too, thanks for the mod :3
streeteelf
From SEE's Taiko Modding Queue

[General]

  1. Nothing
[Kantan]

  1. 00:13:521 (13) - delete
  2. 00:26:261 (31,32,33) - IMO better dkd here
  3. 01:19:275 (99,100) - Ctrl+G
  4. 01:27:905 (114,115,116,117,118) - Change to dkkkd
[Futsuu]

  1. 01:02:015 (127,128) - Ctrl+G
  2. 01:06:946 (140,141) - ^
  3. 01:20:508 (173,174,175) - dkk and if you do so 01:21:330 (176) - d
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:23:795 (56) - IMO better k, w/o finish
[Oni]

  1. 00:26:056 (51) - d
  2. 01:11:467 (238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - IMO you could make it more constant, like kkddkkdkd
Overall, nice mapset. I wrote you parts which I would change to make it more intuitive to play w/o changing the difficulty. I'd be happy seeing it ranked soon. Good luck~ :3
Nitrousdragon
from modding queue

[Kantan]
00:33:658 (39) - imo I think this should be changed to a kat just by the way the piano sounds.

[Futsuu]
00:46:193 - I sense a beat here, i dunno why you didn't add a don here.

[Muzukashii]
I sense a pattern on the fourth notes, no idea why you even skipped mapping these.

[Oni]
Looks fine to me. :)

I love fripSide, and i would love to see this get ranked!! :D
Gemu-
Hi, from my queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[ Kantan]

00:13:521 - Change to k for the rhythm.
00:20:097 - Change to k and here 00:21:741 - Change to k to follow the combination.
00:26:672 - Change to k.

[ Futsuu]

00:12:289 - Change to k and here 00:12:699 - Change to d for the combination of patterns.
00:13:316 - Change to d.
00:13:521 - Change to k.
00:17:631 - Change to k and here 00:18:042 - Change to d.
00:18:453 - Change to k.
00:20:097 - ^
00:22:562 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
01:35:508 - Change to k.

[ Muzukashii]

00:59:549 - Change to k.
01:11:261 - ^

[ Oni]

00:11:775 - Change to k.
00:16:501 - Add a d? is better.
01:14:241 - Change to k.
01:47:425 - Change to d.

Sorry but I can't mod Inner Oni, I'm very noob for mod this diff.

Nice Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Topic Starter
Nishizumi

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[ Kantan]

00:13:521 - Change to k for the rhythm. no
00:20:097 - Change to k and here 00:21:741 - Change to k to follow the combination. not fit
00:26:672 - Change to k. no

[ Futsuu]

00:12:289 - Change to k and here 00:12:699 - Change to d for the combination of patterns.it's k and d there
00:13:316 - Change to d. no because vocal pitch
00:13:521 - Change to k. same as above
00:17:631 - Change to k and here 00:18:042 - Change to d. no
00:18:453 - Change to k. no
00:20:097 - ^ ^
00:22:562 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.i feel it's not fit
01:35:508 - Change to k. hmm okay, sounds good

[ Muzukashii]

00:59:549 - Change to k. no
01:11:261 - ^ ^

[ Oni]

00:11:775 - Change to k. no, the vocal sound is lower
00:16:501 - Add a d? is better. no, i guess triplet are better
01:14:241 - Change to k. no
01:47:425 - Change to d. no

Sorry but I can't mod Inner Oni, I'm very noob for mod this diff.

Nice Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
thanks for your mod, also the star
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