ShikiNoHollow wrote:

M4M

column : 1 2 3 4

open it

[Challenge]

i prefer if you used EX Up to Kagu to decide

00:25:581 (25581|1) - move to 3 changed
00:26:570 (26570|2) - move to 2 changed
00:29:043 (29043|3) - move to 3 changed
00:34:895 (34895|0,35059|0,35224|0,35389|0,35554|0) - i suggest you put 1 more note here same sound as -00:34:812 (34812|2,34812|3,34977|3,34977|2,35142|2,35142|3,35307|2,35307|3,35472|3,35472|2) - changed
00:56:900 (56900|3) - move to 2 pitch changed
01:05:307 (65307|2) - move to 4 , - 01:05:389 (65389|3) - move to 3 , - 01:05:472 (65472|2) - move to 2 , <-- pattern Up to Kagu to decide
01:05:966 (65966|2) - move to 4 Up to Kagu to decide
02:07:532 (127532|0,127614|1) - ctrl+j
02:10:169 (130169|0) - move to 4 then - 02:10:252 (130252|3,130334|3,130417|0,130499|0) - ctrl+j - your jack make player rage so bad changed
02:28:329 (148329|3) - ??? moved to correct position
02:46:103 (166103|1,166186|2) - ctrl+h avoid same hand jack for 2 times Up to Kagu to decide
02:55:994 (175994|2) - move to 1 - 02:56:076 (176076|0,176158|0,176241|2,176323|2,176406|0,176488|0,176570|2,176653|2) - ctrl+j same like before changed

you killing a modder for mod this You're welcome.

done!

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

M4M

column : 1 2 3 4

open it

[Challenge]

i prefer if you used EX Up to Kagu to decide I think challange is a fine name for this xD

00:25:581 (25581|1) - move to 3 changed
00:26:570 (26570|2) - move to 2 changed
00:29:043 (29043|3) - move to 3 changed
00:34:895 (34895|0,35059|0,35224|0,35389|0,35554|0) - i suggest you put 1 more note here same sound as -00:34:812 (34812|2,34812|3,34977|3,34977|2,35142|2,35142|3,35307|2,35307|3,35472|3,35472|2) - changed
00:56:900 (56900|3) - move to 2 pitch changed
01:05:307 (65307|2) - move to 4 , - 01:05:389 (65389|3) - move to 3 , - 01:05:472 (65472|2) - move to 2 , <-- pattern Up to Kagu to decide OK
01:05:966 (65966|2) - move to 4 Up to Kagu to decide OK
02:07:532 (127532|0,127614|1) - ctrl+j
02:10:169 (130169|0) - move to 4 then - 02:10:252 (130252|3,130334|3,130417|0,130499|0) - ctrl+j - your jack make player rage so bad changed
02:28:329 (148329|3) - ??? moved to correct position
02:46:103 (166103|1,166186|2) - ctrl+h avoid same hand jack for 2 times Up to Kagu to decide OK
02:55:994 (175994|2) - move to 1 - 02:56:076 (176076|0,176158|0,176241|2,176323|2,176406|0,176488|0,176570|2,176653|2) - ctrl+j same like before changed

done!

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

M4M

column : 1 2 3 4

open it

[EZ]

00:30:032 - missing kick? Nope. Left this empty for voice break and no hard beat
00:41:241 (41241|0) - move to 4 No, part of pattern
00:56:076 (56076|0,56406|2) - drag -> 1 clm to right OK
01:57:065 (117065|1) - move to 4 OK
02:32:999 - add note to 3 No, no hard sound
02:46:186 (166186|1) - ^ to 3 No. I has only KIAI begin as chord (kick sound), here no hard sound in relation to sounds before / after
02:47:505 (167505|3,167834|0) - ctrl+h OK
02:50:966 (170966|1) - move to 1 OK
02:51:461 (171461|0) - ^ to 4 OK
03:09:592 (189592|2) - to 1 OK

[NM]

00:40:664 (40664|3) - remove , suggest follow the guitar sound Nope, like it too much xD
00:48:494 (48494|1) - move to 4 OK
00:54:428 (54428|1) - ^ No, fits with voice pitch
00:55:087 (55087|0) - ^ balance OK
00:56:570 (56570|1) - move to 3 No. Same hand for this pattern is hard, here it fits too and is not that hard
01:49:153 (109153|0) - ^^ No, empty first column
02:31:351 (151351|0) - move to 4 OK
02:42:724 (162724|1) - move to 1 OK
02:51:296 (171296|0) - move to 3 No, would be only right side stairs, boring
03:08:603 - these pattern not following anything - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3396175 - by pitch Pich mapping in such cases is mostly boring. I keep it as it is.

[NM+]

00:30:691 (30691|1) - move to 1 OK
00:48:164 (48164|3) - move to 2 No. Pattern is OK i think.
00:48:658 (48658|2) - move to 1 OK
01:02:010 (62010|0,62175|3,62340|1,62505|3,62669|1,62834|0,62999|2,63164|3) - repattern this , do like stairs or something Stair pattern is at this point better fitting on faster streams. I rearranged a little bit.
01:39:592 (99592|3) - move to 2 v
01:40:087 (100087|2) - move to 1 Rearranged this part since its mostly the same as earlier in map
01:48:164 (108164|2,108329|0,108494|3,108658|1,108823|2,108988|0,109153|3,109318|1) - you had the same pattern as before, and these sound is different , pick stairs pattern No, i havent. See above comment
01:51:955 (111955|1) - move to 1 OK
01:53:603 (113603|3,113768|1) - ctrl+j Nope. OK as it is
02:23:109 (143109|2,143439|3) - ctrl+h No. Fits with voice pitch
02:49:647 (169647|0) - move to 2 No, part of pattern
02:51:296 (171296|0) - move to 3 Rearranged
02:55:087 (175087|0,175252|1) - drag -> clm to right , different sound OK
03:09:757 (189757|2) - move to 1 OK

[HD]

00:55:994 (55994|0) - remove , ghost note OK. rearranged following notes to better emphasis
01:48:329 (108329|1) - move to 1 OK
02:49:647 (169647|0) - move to 2 No, pattern
02:52:450 (172450|1) - move to 1 OK

[HD+]

00:28:384 (28384|0) - move to 3 No
00:32:505 (32505|0,32669|3,32834|0) - ctrl+h OK
00:33:988 (33988|2) - move to 4 OK
00:34:153 (34153|3) - ^ to 1 OK
00:46:021 (46021|0,46103|1,46186|2) - drag -> to right 1 clm OK
00:53:933 (53933|3) - move to 1 OK
01:03:164 (63164|0) - move to 4 OK
01:27:395 - add note OK
01:47:999 (107999|3,108164|1) - ctrl+j OK
02:45:362 (165362|0) - move to 2 OK

[MX]

00:22:614 (22614|3) - move to 3 then - 00:22:779 (22779|2) - to 1 OK
00:25:581 (25581|0) - move to 2 OK
00:27:559 (27559|2,27724|1,27889|2) - ctrl+h OK
00:56:735 (56735|2) - move to 4 OK
01:25:087 (85087|3) - move to 2 OK
02:32:834 (152834|0,152999|1,153164|2) - drag -> 1clm to right OK
02:56:570 (176570|2) - ??? adjust this Fixed at all occurence... was intended to avoid jack, but yes, its senseless here xD

[SC]

00:16:680 (16680|1,16735|0) - ctrl+j and then - 00:16:790 (16790|3,16845|2) - ctrl+j also -00:16:845 (16845|1) - move to 1 if change Changed here, but not all of them. SC is not intended to be easy like an MX map xD So no comment means decline in this case for this diff
00:23:384 (23384|3,23439|2) - ctrl+j
00:23:603 (23603|3) - move to 2 OK
00:46:680 (46680|1) - move to 3 OK
00:51:296 (51296|1) - move to 1 OK
00:53:933 (53933|0) - move to 4 OK
01:18:988 (78988|3) - ??? readjust this Fixed
01:32:505 (92505|2) - move to 2 OK
01:35:801 (95801|2) - ^^^ OK
01:36:790 (96790|0) - ^^^ OK
01:53:191 (113191|3) - ^^^ OK
02:23:603 (143603|2) - move to 1 OK
02:56:570 (176570|1) - ???? adjust this Fixed
03:00:527 (180527|1) - move to 1 OK
03:03:164 (183164|1) - ^^^ OK
03:11:735 (191735|2) - move to 4 OK

Havent seen this jack hammers before... thansk >.<

you killing a modder for mod this
=> And I love it!!!

done!

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi Kagu-Chan~!

I don't know if my mods can... help
It already has high star priority ) Since there some mods and "some" Kudo stars xD - But High SP dont means all issues fixed automatically, so thanks xD
M4M

mod~

[SC]
00:35:636 - add note? it's a cymbal sound after all
00:36:625 - from this to 00:39:263 make the 3 notes 2 notes only, then starting from 00:41:900 make these times a 3 note. it's for stabilizing the flow of these parts
00:43:219 - this too
00:44:538 - ^
00:46:186 - add note, cymbal sound
00:55:417 - doesn't need 4 notes imo. same pitch with the others
01:01:021 - missing note?
01:03:988 - make this 2 notes only because we'll make 01:04:318 3 notes. for pitch. the beat is stronger
01:04:977 - make this 3 notes, ^
01:05:307 - add note, drum sound
01:05:636 - 3 notes
01:06:296 - ^
01:06:955 - ^
01:40:252 - doesn't need 3 notes imo. beat is not that strong
02:02:010 - add note, for drum sound
02:07:285 - ^
02:10:911 - delete a note, differentiate the number of notes of this and 02:11:241 so that players will know it's a different sound ( optional ) Keep it as it is, all this parts (after refrain) are the same pattern
02:32:999 - make this 3 notes
02:33:164 - ^
02:33:329 - ^
02:36:955 - add note, for drum sound
02:37:614 - ^
02:38:274 - ^
02:38:603 - ^
02:42:230 - ^
02:42:889 - ^
02:44:208 - ^
02:47:505 - ^
02:57:065 - remove a note, differentiate number of notes with 02:57:395 See above
02:57:724 - ^ See above
02:58:384 - ^ See above

Accepted all but marked. Most notes was for KIAI time =>
I overworked KIAI times - it was not consistent with triple / double notes, dont ask me why (maybe i mapped while sleeping? O.o). I added triple on 3/4 beat in non-full-stream sections then (harder beat, clap), the other are at maximum double notes now on white ticks.

[MX]
these are optional No, for pattern its fine i think
00:15:527 - add note? it's a strong beat after all
00:16:845 - ^
00:18:164 - ^
00:19:483 - ^
00:20:801 - ^
00:22:120 - ^
00:23:439 - ^

00:35:966 - add note, strong beat No. Doubles only on 3/4 ticks and Guitar beats
00:36:955 - remove a note, not as strong as 00:36:625 ^
00:37:285 - add note, strong beat ^
00:38:274 - remove note ^
00:38:603 - add note ^
00:39:592 - remove ^
00:39:922 - add note ^
00:40:252 - remove ^
00:40:581 - add note OK
00:41:241 - ^ ^
00:41:900 - ^ ^
00:42:230 - remove ^
00:42:559 - add ^
00:43:219 - add ^
00:43:878 - ^ ^
00:44:538 - ^ ^
00:45:032 - http://puu.sh/j1sNX/88f476409b.jpg try this Thanks xD

[HD+]
these are optional All not changed, is pattered here. doubles on 3/4 and Flute Change, singles otherwhise. And triple to say hello to player :p
00:17:505 - add a note? strong drum sound
00:16:186 - ^
00:18:823 - ^
00:20:142 - ^
00:20:142 - ^
00:21:131 - remove a note?
00:21:461 - add note
00:22:779 - ^
00:14:867 - ^


01:19:483 - delete a note, differentiate the number of notes of this and 02:11:241 so that players will know it's a different sound. also, this part will be different with the SC one This are all for the same pattern after refrain as in other diffs. From HD+ and higher i used triples here and think its OK.
01:20:142 - ^
01:20:801 - ^
02:10:911 - ^
02:11:570 - ^
02:12:230 - ^
02:57:065 - ^
02:57:724 - ^
02:58:384 - ^


[HD]
00:35:636 - add note? cymbal sound OK
00:37:779 - http://puu.sh/j1sTd/feabc606da.jpg for hand balance OK
00:46:845 - remove? 00:49:483 and the others is 2 notes only or unless u add there Fixed booth
00:48:164 - ^
01:19:483 - delete a note, differentiate the number of notes of this and 02:11:241 so that players will know it's a different sound. also, this part will be different with the SC one. it's a large gap xD Changed for all, triples for HD+ and higher
01:19:483 - ^
01:20:142 - ^
01:20:801 - ^
02:10:911 - ^
02:11:570 - ^
02:12:230 - ^
02:57:065 - ^
02:57:724 - ^
02:58:384 - ^

Nice map overall, hope these can help doumo arigatou :3
Good luck!

TheZiemniax wrote:

Hi! Mod from Potato's Queue!

1|2|3|4

SC

00:17:092 (17092|3) - move to 3 and add 4 to the next chord
00:17:669 (17669|3) - ^, move 00:17:834 (17834|2) - to 2
00:19:153 - add 3
00:19:812 - add 4
00:20:472 - add 1
^ all of those are for chord consistency, don't change your style if the music doesn't change.
00:36:296 - add 1
00:55:911 (55911|1) - add 3-chord, the single note burst entry consists best of 4 notes IMO
00:59:043 - add 3 here for a 3-chord like in later part of the chorus.
01:00:362 (60362|1) - I would delete that, that's not strong enough for a 3-chord.
01:09:922 - add 4
01:21:461 - 3 can be added here
01:47:505 (107505|1,107505|2) - I would delete this, similar to 00:55:911
02:12:889 - 4 can be added here
02:24:592 (144592|0,144675|2,144757|3,144757|0) - just pointing that out, the sound is for 1/6, you simplisized the pattern for 1/4. But you don't really have to fear the 1/6, they're not as hard. It's ok in either version.
02:40:911 - add 1
02:59:043 - 4 can be added here
03:00:691 - add 4
03:02:010 - add 3
03:03:164 (183164|0) - move that to 2 and add 1 to the next chord
03:07:285 - add 1
03:07:614 - add 2
03:07:944 - add 3
03:10:911 (190911|0) - delete that note, this accent is really odd. It's better with just 2-chords.

Accepted nearly all for consistence and fixed other parts ike this.

4 can be added here

Not added since dont fits IMO
Also the 1/6 youve said arent 1/6, there 1/4

Challenge

Puuuhh... really nice mod here xD
I dont mark all since its much xD
For first refrain i remapped a bit. I think its better fitting now, more consistent and a bit more challenging - I added the jacks you wanted (Nice Idea IMHO) And the LN part i... improved a "bit" xD I think this LNs are fitting, but a bit boring as you said. maybe its better now, but could be that it is too much - Lets see what modders say.

Second refrain is mapped by Hydria, ill mark things for Hydria green then.

and here are the jacks! but I think they're too hard with the 3-chords, make 2-chords instead.

I dont changed this, i think its OK on this Diff (:

finally something interesting! Plays really well but it's hard to acc it xD

I like it xD But yes, hard to acc. If not so many people complain ill keep it as it is. I think it fits well, but yes, its really hard xD


00:58:136 - Ohh man! I was really dissapointed here. WHY ARE THERE NO JACKS OR EVEN TRILLS MAN WHY? IT IS A CHALLENGE
move this 00:58:219 (58219|1) - to 1 and this 00:58:548 (58548|2) - to 4, I BEG YOU. Please add similar notes to all of the matching places in choruses.
00:58:713 - here I suggest adding 3 and moving the next note to 4. I see you map 3-chord to 2-chord to 3-chord this is a special accent and it's possible here. Same for other choruses.
01:02:010 - to 01:03:329 - just a suggestion - make more trills here, music allows for this. Even jumptrills, same for other choruses (you don't have to do it though)
01:03:329 - rearrange to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400741, you may decide for lesser amount of 3-chords but I think 01:03:329 - here should be 3-chord for sure.
01:07:285 - OH MAN AGAIN I WANTED SOMETHING MORE EXCITING! this is a copy-paste from SC, same idea, but you are playing a Challenge! its BOOORIIIINGGGG
You can do Oboro trills here, I mean [13][24] trills all with LNs. You can also do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400771.
But please, not those LNs (they're not even inverting!!). And same, change them in every chorus.
01:23:274 - I like the idea, but maybe insert it somewhere else than just here?
01:28:713 (88713|3) - move to 2, 3-jack isn't necessary here
01:29:373 (89373|2) - same. Generally I would make all of the jacks 2-jacks instead of 3. fits more IMO.
01:47:505 - this is mapped in other style than previous chorus, it was a collab right? If yes it's fine, if not maybe choose one of the styles and stay with it.
This is generally the same with second chorus, if a collab then ok, if not - rearrange it like previous (I like the first chorus better). Still remember about the minijacks!
01:57:614 (117614|3,117669|2) - there is no reason for 1/6 snap. make it 1/4.
01:58:713 - I would use same ideas as 01:07:285.
02:02:834 (122834|1,122834|0,122917|1,122917|0) - this is too random. Make it in your normal style.
02:03:988 - add 1 to be chord-consistent, and move following two notes one column to the right.
02:07:669 (127669|2,127724|1,127834|2,127889|1) - I don't hear the music for 1/6 burst, this is a bad idea IMO (although it plays nicely, ghost notes ;-;)
02:09:263 - same as 01:07:285. However, uhm, those two patterns are also not-bad (at least better than the boring LNs!)
02:24:016 (144016|1,144345|3) - I like the idea. However, those are ghost notes, I'm sorry. This is about the whole fragment.
02:24:592 - 1/6 burst here? Generally add 1/6 bursts whenever possible here.
02:39:592 - oh, there are the trills!
02:44:867 - and here are the jacks! but I think they're too hard with the 3-chords, make 2-chords instead.
02:55:417 - that's a nice idea too, but I would stick to the jacks.
02:56:735 - finally something interesting! Plays really well but it's hard to acc it xD
03:08:768 - I would make those 3-chords instead for a really nice finish of the song.

Really nice map! I expected a bit more in Challenge's chorus, but overall it's good. Plus I love the song <3
Good luck!

TheZiemniax wrote:

Hi! Mod from Potato's Queue!

1|2|3|4

Challenge

01:23:274 - I like the idea, but maybe insert it somewhere else than just here? Inserted it one bar later as well.
01:28:713 (88713|3) - move to 2, 3-jack isn't necessary here
01:29:373 (89373|2) - same. Generally I would make all of the jacks 2-jacks instead of 3. fits more IMO.
01:47:505 - this is mapped in other style than previous chorus, it was a collab right? If yes it's fine, if not maybe choose one of the styles and stay with it.
This is generally the same with second chorus, if a collab then ok, if not - rearrange it like previous (I like the first chorus better). Still remember about the minijacks! The part before the first chorus and the second chorus is handled by me, the first chorus and the part before the second chorus was handled by kagu-chan.
01:57:614 (117614|3,117669|2) - there is no reason for 1/6 snap. make it 1/4. no love for the 1/6th pattern D:
01:58:713 - I would use same ideas as 01:07:285. This is handled by two different people so the choruses will be layered differently. I did notice that it was quite left hand biased though so I'll try and fix that problem for now.
02:02:834 (122834|1,122834|0,122917|1,122917|0) - this is too random. Make it in your normal style. changed
02:03:988 - add 1 to be chord-consistent, and move following two notes one column to the right. changed
02:07:669 (127669|2,127724|1,127834|2,127889|1) - I don't hear the music for 1/6 burst, this is a bad idea IMO (although it plays nicely, ghost notes ;-;) ;-;
02:09:263 - same as 01:07:285. However, uhm, those two patterns are also not-bad (at least better than the boring LNs!) Again, handled by two different people so we want to try and keep the choruses unique
02:24:016 (144016|1,144345|3) - I like the idea. However, those are ghost notes, I'm sorry. This is about the whole fragment. Man why can standard have ghost notes and we can't this ain't fair.
02:24:592 - 1/6 burst here? Generally add 1/6 bursts whenever possible here. Changed
02:39:592 - oh, there are the trills!
02:44:867 - and here are the jacks! but I think they're too hard with the 3-chords, make 2-chords instead.
02:55:417 - that's a nice idea too, but I would stick to the jacks. Whilst this is seperate mapping, I'll see what I can do to make the ending flow better.
02:56:735 - finally something interesting! Plays really well but it's hard to acc it xD
03:08:768 - I would make those 3-chords instead for a really nice finish of the song.

Really nice map! I expected a bit more in Challenge's chorus, but overall it's good. Plus I love the song <3
Good luck! Thanks~

rhalp10 wrote:

Hello again Kagu here's my M4M

Challenge

00:36:790 (36790|1) - Move to 4
00:36:461 (36461|2,36461|1,36543|1) - Ctrl+H + > 1x Nope. Would result in triple jack.
00:36:625 (36625|3,36625|2) - Move to 1x < ^
00:37:120 (37120|3,37120|2,37202|3) - ^^ ^
00:37:285 (37285|2) - Move to 4 ^
00:37:779 (37779|1,37779|2,37862|2) - Move to < 1x ^
00:37:944 (37944|1) - move to > ^

Screenshots

i can play only Sc.. i have a problem on my keyboard,

i cant suggest more , hmm your map is too beutiful xD hahah and also i like the hitsound

Frim4503 wrote:

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

M4M (you can cancel it if yo dont like my mod)

sorry for late (i forgot about your request >.<)

just mod these diff (cuz i dont have enough skill to mod crazy diff)

let's start

HD

00:24:428 (24428|3) - move to 1 then 00:24:757 (24757|0) - move to 3. easier to press
00:24:922 (24922|3,25087|0) - swap
00:25:746 (25746|3) - move to 1
01:21:131 (81131|3) - move to 2 cuz 01:21:790 (81790|3) - already in 4
01:44:867 (104867|3) - move to 3
02:37:779 (157779|1) - move to 4
02:37:944 (157944|3) - ^ 1

HD+

00:43:219 (43219|2) - move to 4
01:38:603 (98603|2) - ^4
01:41:900 (101900|1,102065|2) - move to 3,2. flow better
01:42:559 (102559|1) - ^1
01:43:384 (103384|1,103548|0) - swap col
01:43:713 (103713|2) - ,move to 1
01:44:043 - http://puu.sh/j5ATI/ee895d6f40.png
02:26:076 (146076|2) - move to 4

very hard to mod -_-

Pharos21 wrote:

KAGUUU-CHAAAN
PHAAAAAAAROOOOOOS-CHAAAAAN

HS Ill dont change much of HS since im waiting for HS mod by Lord Raika, but thanks, ill check your suggestions :3
Comfortability
L-R Coordination

Please remember that this is a collab diff, so i dont change / look about everything (:

Da MOD

okay.. i'll mod the HS First cuz i hear some of your HS Volume are too damn High

00:14:537 (14537|0,14537|3,14537|2,14537|1) - give something here please.. like Finish or Clap... 4 same HS at the same time are...... too loud
I dont know what i should do here. Ill wait for LordRaikas suggestion :3

00:23:768 - too loud... use 25% OK
00:25:087 - use 30% to normalize the HS OK
00:34:318 - too loud... make it 35 or 40% OK
00:35:636 - same... make ti 40% OK
00:40:664 - why you lowering the Taiko Sound... make it louder...
for volume 50 and 55%.. change it too 40%.. it's Loud enough Dont get it... The HS is 70% O.o

and i seen a 90% VOLUME? Reduce it please orz
please reduce Volume Biger then 40% to 40% or less Ill overwork and apply to all diffs

For chart

i dont see any major problem cuz the rhythm are fit perfectly with the Music... so i can't find any Ghost note or Unsnapped

just...

00:16:680 (16680|1,16735|3,16790|0) - why dont you make it Thrill? it's better for L-R coordination
I dont like thrills... xD Ill try what you suggest
if you want to keep the Stair pattern.... then Move the LN to 4 and move the Note on 4 to 3

00:22:010 (22010|1) - move it to 4 to make a nice Thrill
00:23:439 (23439|1) - ^ same reason too

00:35:307 (35307|2) - move the C to 4

00:37:532 - not missing any note??

00:38:191 - ^

00:41:488 - ^

00:42:807 - ^

... accepted them all xD

i found some missing note in this section... did you intend to left like that?

only that

please no kudo since i've already mod this Beatmap and this MOD are just a suggestion

1. 00:19:812 - Pattern suggest
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2. 00:49:483 (49483|1,50142|2) - Ctrl + H
3. 00:59:373 (59373|0) - move to 1 ~ Prevents create jack of 5 on column 0
4. 01:04:647 (64647|1,64977|3,65307|0,65636|2,66296|1,66955|2) - Ctrl + H ~ Keep your pettern, just better coordination
5. 02:10:911 (130911|0,131241|2,131570|1,131900|3) - ^ ~ ^
6. 02:46:186 (166186|1) - move to 2 ~ creates a gap for hand

1. 01:21:790 - Pattern suggest
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2. 02:05:636 (125636|0,125966|3,126131|0,126296|1,126461|2,126625|3) - Ctrl + H
3. 02:58:384 (178384|3) - Move to 2

1. 02:42:724 (162724|1) - move to 0
2. 02:48:329 (168329|1) - ^
3. 02:52:450 (172450|1) - ^

1. 00:30:279 (30279|3) - Add 1

Obilariated wrote:

[EZ]

1. 00:19:812 - Pattern suggest Accepted, Thanks
2. 00:49:483 (49483|1,50142|2) - Ctrl + H I may revert - follows better the voice pitch, but repeats
3. 00:59:373 (59373|0) - move to 1 ~ Prevents create jack of 5 on column 0 Oups.... Thanks
4. 01:04:647 (64647|1,64977|3,65307|0,65636|2,66296|1,66955|2) - Ctrl + H ~ Keep your pettern, just better coordination OK
5. 02:10:911 (130911|0,131241|2,131570|1,131900|3) - ^ ~ ^ OK
6. 02:46:186 (166186|1) - move to 2 ~ creates a gap for hand OK

[NM]

1. 01:21:790 - Pattern suggest
2. 02:05:636 (125636|0,125966|3,126131|0,126296|1,126461|2,126625|3) - Ctrl + H
3. 02:58:384 (178384|3) - Move to 2
   Accepted all

[NM+]

1. 02:42:724 (162724|1) - move to 0
2. 02:48:329 (168329|1) - ^
3. 02:52:450 (172450|1) - ^
   Accepted all

[HD]

1. 00:30:279 (30279|3) - Add 1
   Accepted all

1. 00:24:428 - Pattern suggestion
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2. 00:31:351 (31351|0,31516|2,31680|0) - move to 3, 0, 1
3. 00:36:543 (36543|2) - Add
4. 00:39:180 (39180|1) - Add
5. 00:39:757 (39757|1) - move to 0
6. 00:39:840 (39840|1) - Add
7. 00:40:252 - Pattern suggestion (removed 1 note, not so sure, unless it was your custom pattern, or rather this should be fine, ... and resnap 1 LN length)
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8. 00:45:114 - Add
9. 00:45:444 - Add
10. 00:45:527 - Add
11. 00:45:856 (45856|3) - This weird LN ... check this again unless it's your HS intentioned or custom pattern
12. 00:52:450 - Pattern suggestion (Pre-kiai time - This part is where you make your hand one ease, so prevents to create jacks, need more space and gap for finger)
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13. 00:53:768 - Pattern suggestion (Same reason above)
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14. 01:01:680 (61680|0,61680|1) - nudge these once to right then 01:01:845 (61845|2) - move to 0 ~ and 01:02:010 (62010|0,62092|1,62175|2) - Ctrl + H ~ Now it's better
15. 01:05:801 (65801|3,65966|0) - Ctrl + H
16. 01:21:461 - Add a LN end at 01:21:790
17. 01:23:356 - Add
18. 01:25:005 - Add
19. 01:34:235 - Add
20. 01:35:884 - Add
21. 01:36:543 - Add
22. 01:46:845 (106845|0,106845|2,107010|0,107010|2,107175|1,107175|3,107304|1,107304|3) - Ctrl + H
23. 01:49:977 (109977|3) - move to 2 then 01:50:142 (110142|2) - move to 3
24. 01:50:472 - Pattern suggestion (Also add one at 01:50:801)
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25. 01:52:120 - Pattern suggestion (This can be better I believe)
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26. 02:12:889 - Add a LN that end at 02:13:219
27. 02:32:999 - Pattern suggestion
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28. 02:59:043 - Add a LN that end at 02:59:373

Obilariated wrote:

[HD+]

1. 00:24:428 - Pattern suggestion OK
2. 00:31:351 (31351|0,31516|2,31680|0) - move to 3, 0, 1 OK
3. 00:36:543 (36543|2) - Add No. I dont want triples in this diff except markant parts - this part is intended as 1-1-1-2 - pattern (fixed one issue)
4. 00:39:180 (39180|1) - Add ^
5. 00:39:757 (39757|1) - move to 0 This would produce empty lane 1
6. 00:39:840 (39840|1) - Add ^
7. 00:40:252 - Pattern suggestion (removed 1 note, not so sure, unless it was your custom pattern, or rather this should be fine, ... and resnap 1 LN length)
8. 00:45:114 - Add
9. 00:45:444 - Add
10. 00:45:527 - Add With the pattern suggestion (Accepted) i rechecked the whole part - it was inconsistent with the triplets
11. 00:45:856 (45856|3) - This weird LN ... check this again unless it's your HS intentioned or custom pattern LN is for the "a"-sylable here
12. 00:52:450 - Pattern suggestion (Pre-kiai time - This part is where you make your hand one ease, so prevents to create jacks, need more space and gap for finger) OK
13. 00:53:768 - Pattern suggestion (Same reason above) OK
14. 01:01:680 (61680|0,61680|1) - nudge these once to right then 01:01:845 (61845|2) - move to 0 ~ and 01:02:010 (62010|0,62092|1,62175|2) - Ctrl + H ~ Now it's better Thanks - havent seen this jack
15. 01:05:801 (65801|3,65966|0) - Ctrl + H OK
16. 01:21:461 - Add a LN end at 01:21:790 No. This silable is in all diffes empty
17. 01:23:356 - Add OK
18. 01:25:005 - Add OK
19. 01:34:235 - Add OK
20. 01:35:884 - Add OK
21. 01:36:543 - Add OK
22. 01:46:845 (106845|0,106845|2,107010|0,107010|2,107175|1,107175|3,107304|1,107304|3) - Ctrl + H No ^^
23. 01:49:977 (109977|3) - move to 2 then 01:50:142 (110142|2) - move to 3 Changed
24. 01:50:472 - Pattern suggestion (Also add one at 01:50:801) Without addition
25. 01:52:120 - Pattern suggestion (This can be better I believe) Changed other way
26. 02:12:889 - Add a LN that end at 02:13:219 No - see above
27. 02:32:999 - Pattern suggestion OK
28. 02:59:043 - Add a LN that end at 02:59:373 Nope ^^

1. Rename: EZ => Easy (~ 1.3*)
2. Merge: NM & NM+ => Normal (~ 2.1*)
3. Merge: HD & HD+ => Hard (~ 2.9*)
4. Rename: MX => Insane (~ 3.7*)
5. Rename: SC => Extra (~ 4.2*)
6. Remap / Rename: Challange => Hanairo Biyori (~ 4.8*)
7. All diffs will get overworked
8. Add SV changes to higher diffs (maybe)
9. Add simple SB

Litharrale wrote:

Hello NM from my queue
1|2|3|4

I don't like how there's no way to tell that the top diff is a collab except by looking in the map description. I'd suggest changing the name, having it as the name of the song isn't that creative anyway. Have looked with others for hours for other diff name, i think its ok as it is

BG is low res, here's a better one that's still bad but infinitely better than laptop res on desktop monitors https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/cThXZDN.jpg idk if its even worth changing because of the SB but eh ill mention it anyway BG Res is ok, its standard bg size. We dont need full hd just to have highest resolution

SB related stuff: Pretty good except for the kanji in some spots (e.g 23 secondsin) super blurry and not very nice to look at. Shouldn't be that hard to make it a little prettier. I'd recommend something similar to 11ts glowtext. For example here is your 色 http://i.imgur.com/qmcHBBg.png No change / redl for simple kanji. its not the core of trhe sb, so i dont think its worth changing them

Diff names are weird in general. Looks like a standard map, I'd suggest changing them to fit mania more. I dont see any problem with diff names here

There's a bunch of hitsound issues but they've been mentioned already so i wont go into them All HS are rankable, mostly from LordRaika who is well known for HS in osu. So no change here, as well it is over my abilities

Looked over diffs and they're ok but >7 pages of mods
anything i could say has probably already been said. You read in my mod request that everything is remapped / overworked? Good luck!

imtdb1 wrote:

tbh I dont get how you placed your doubles trough this difficulty so if I say add a double and I'm wrong please tell me xd
00:14:537 - well from here you could add doubles every 1/1 if you want
00:22:779 - I think this needs to be a double because you used doubles at 00:23:768 -
00:25:746 - missing note? You added a note at 00:25:087 -
00:27:065 - ^
00:28:384 - ^ and so on trough that part
00:36:296 - double
00:41:570 - double
01:04:318 - why is this a double? If thats a dobule I think this should be too 01:04:647 -
01:09:922 - double since this is too 01:09:263 -
01:10:581 - double In first part i used doubles on each 3/4 and 1/1 (also see HS) - In chorus i have only 1/4 and 3/4 as double for pattern except special pattern (e.g. the fast sung chorus part)
01:11:241 - why did you suddenly use that LN pattern but at 01:00:691 - you only used 2 LNs to represent the vocals or something Thanks,
equalized a bit, there was issues
01:32:340 - why not make this triple? No triple chords if you mean that. But added some more doubles int eh part, thanks
01:35:636 - add a note
01:36:296 - double?
02:24:757 - triple
Good Luck '3')/

1. 00:37:532 - u miss a note here, maybe add in col4
2. 00:38:191 - ^,maybe in col2
3. 00:41:488 - 00:42:807 - miss notes
4. 00:46:845 - this should not be a triple cuz only a weak kick here, but i think 00:47:175 - should be a triple, with the crash and heavier snare sound
5. 00:47:505 - 00:48:164 - so do these two lines, make them double would be better to show the contrast in volume
6. 00:49:895 (49895|3) - ghost note, it represents no sound
7. 00:50:801 - same idea here, make this double and 00:51:131 - triple
8. 00:52:120 - just double it is enough
9. 00:53:439 - ^
10. 00:54:098 - herer the extra diff is even harder than the Hanairo Biyori diff: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647032. i suggest u to do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647053
11. 00:58:384 - u need to have a triple too cuz the sound here resembles 00:59:043 -
12. 01:01:268 (61268|3,61433|3,61598|3,61763|3) - u see this kind of pattern isnt good to play, i would suggest some rearrangement
13. 01:03:658 - need triple here like 01:04:318 -
14. 01:08:603 - here is a drum+crash sound, so one note cannot really represent so much, i would suggest u add one more note in col3 and rearrange the pattern of 01:08:768 (68768|3,68768|2,68851|1,68933|3,68933|0) - , maybe simply ctrl+h
15. 01:21:461 - i would suggest one more LN here to represent the vocal sound and the LN ends at 01:21:790 -
16. 01:22:779 - why no double here but 01:24:098 - have double here, i would suggest the previous one to make a double note too
17. 01:25:417 - double too
18. 01:28:054 - u dont need a double here cuz the drums disappear
19. 01:29:373 - 01:30:691 - 01:32:010 - ^
20. 01:37:944 - i thnk this should be a double, and 01:38:109 - this is a triple cuz this sound resembles 01:38:274 - and is much louder than the previous one
21. 01:39:098 - i would suggest this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647130 triple notes are those louder kicks
22. 01:39:757 (99757|1,99922|2,99922|3,100087|1) - ctrl+h for a better pattern
23. 01:40:746 - triple this as it has the same sound as 01:40:911 -
24. 01:41:900 - if u triple this, u will need to triple this too 01:42:559 - cuz the drums for them are the same
25. 01:47:340 - this kind of roll pattern would flow better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647153
26. 01:48:988 - here u put a triple, but considering the music u dont need to cuz theres even no drum here
27. 01:49:812 - need a triple like 01:50:472 -
28. 01:53:603 (113603|1,113686|0,113768|1,113851|0,113933|1,114016|0,114098|1) - i dont really like this pattern cuz they put too much pressure on the left hand, which makes me feel really unbalanced, try to find another patttern
29. 01:55:087 - need a triple too, same reason as above
30. 02:00:032 - add one more note in col3 reason as 01:08:603 -
31. 02:02:669 (122669|2,122999|1,123329|2,123658|1) - i wonder what are they for? suddenly they appear
32. 02:05:636 - triple as well like 02:06:296 -
33. 02:08:933 (128933|2) - to col4 for better flow
34. 02:10:581 - add one in col2 for the drum owo
35. 02:12:889 - yep, suggest add a LN, maybe in col2, extending to 02:13:219 -
36. 02:23:768 - from here to 02:32:999 - i would suggest u to delete the note amount for each drum sounds by 1 cuz here is not the kiai part, and even in kiai u seldom use triple, but here u put all in triple, which seems really inconsistent with the music iteslf imo. Ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647219
37. 02:33:658 - try this for a good flow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8647230
38. 02:35:966 - triple for heavier drum
39. 02:41:241 - ^
40. 02:46:186 - add one in col3 for the drum
41. 02:46:516 - triple for heavier drum
42. 02:48:823 (168823|2,169153|1,169483|3,169812|2) - also, what's their purpose?
43. 02:51:790 - triple
44. 02:56:735 - add one in col3 for the drum
45. 02:59:043 - add one LN in col4 ending at 02:59:373 -