Quality Assurance Team wrote:

Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

RLC's Extra

Misleading patterns, Mapping Quality

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  A few kickslider patterns in this map are misleading. The kicksliders are used directly after a stream and with a stream following afterwards, so the players will think that there is an 1/4 gap after the kicksliders even though the spacing is relatively big. It's especially confusing since the streams start on blue ticks.

1. 01:34:485 (9,1) -
2. 01:39:285 (9,1) -
   
   There are a few more questionable patterns in this map we would like to adress:
3. 02:14:085 (4,1) - The jump between these objects is too huge and breaks the flow a lot. Players will have problems to play the stream (that requires relatively slow movement) properly after a huge 1/4-jump like this one.
4. 04:01:635 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - These mid-stream jumps come rather unexpected after this intense section and have a poor flow to them. We would recommend you to avoid stream jumps here, or make them flow more smoothly.

FOUR DIMENSIONS

Sharp Stream Turns

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  The sharp stream turns used in the very high-spaced streams don't play well and are difficult to read. Some of them also happen on blue ticks, which makes them more unintuitive to play, as the players will expect the stream turns on the stronger beats.

1. 02:41:984 (3,4,5) -
2. 02:46:259 (12,13,14) -
3. 03:55:259 (4,5,6) -

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The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

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sukiNathan wrote:

RLC diff

04:01:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream is still hella harsh. I'd make them all connect, because honestly having stream jumps at the very end of a diff when they never appeared previously is just like "fuk the player xd" damn it RLC

Also for the change you made on 02:14:085 (4,1,2,3,4,5), imo you nerfed it to the point where the spacing just feels cramped. Looking at the 1/4 sliders as 1/2 circles (since that is how they're played) the turn into the stream is actually pretty tight and sharp.

yeah let me know after

Xilver wrote:

Requesting a name change from FOUR DIMENSIONS to Vertex before rerank pls

sukiNathan wrote:

1. 01:46:635 (2) - Can I suggest a Whistle on the slidertail? There's definitely a sound over there!
   
2. 02:52:635 (9) - NC cause stanza bb.

1. 00:19:034 (1) - What about stacking this note with 00:18:284 (7) - ? This is sorta of a personal preference, but the fact that this stream is circular, and then you add a circle in a very linear way looks quite iugh hah. Let me explain you this better with a picture. http://puu.sh/jvcCj/1c82821c65.jpg . You could also move both 00:19:334 (3,5) - in order to make your pattern look more logical, as you are doing something similar with (4,6).
   
2. 01:42:134 (1) - I'd use "Soft" instead. The actual Whistle sounds a bit loud for the music.
   
3. 01:46:484 (1,2,3) - I want to talk about this pattern a bit. The spacing in (1,2) may be too big, but as this is has almost 7 stars I think it could be forgiven. However, I don't think that (3,4) should have a similar spacing. Additionally, (2) and (3) have the same sound, and for that reason, I'd strongly recommend you to copy the hitsounds from (2).
   
4. 01:54:134 (4,6,8) - Aaa these finishes. Quite too much. Have you thought about Soft Whistles? I think they will sound way better. However, I think 03:03:734 (4,6,8) - it is intentional.
   
5. 02:34:634 - DUDE THIS IS NICE. Very good work.
   
6. 03:37:634 (1) - You should not add a New Combo here, especially because throughout all this section you are mapping 4-sliders-combo, so this will completely break with what you did previously.
   
7. 03:42:734 (13) - NC this so the players will know about the 1/8?
   
8. 03:43:334 (2,3,4) - I do understand the reason of emphasising (2,3)... but (3,4). It's not convincing me, it's quite exaggerated, in my opinion.

Yuii- wrote:

I don't know what I'm doing here.
Hello.
Amm... just a couple of things.

[Easy]

01:39:434 -
01:46:484 -
02:15:134 - Any reason for these green lines? Fixed all since they came from copier lol

[Akasphyxia's Normal]

01:39:434 - Green line aaaaaa Fix-desu

02:28:334 (1) -
02:42:884 (1) -
03:28:334 (1) -
03:52:484 (1) - Are these NCs intended? Especially those 1/4, there are a lot of them throughout the map that are not being NC'd, so why these ones? They are, it's for the sake of the SB, like in every other difficulty

[Hard]

01:39:434 - :greenlines: O fixed

[RLC's Insane]

Widescreen Support option is toggle on Nice, fixed

[RLC's Extra]

Why there are so many full whistles in the sliders? Some of them don't sound that good ;w; RLC's hitsound, so I'm going to keep them. They sound nice to me atleast :p

1. 01:46:635 (2) - Can I suggest a Whistle on the slidertail? There's definitely a sound over there! Ya added
   
2. 02:52:635 (9) - NC cause stanza bb. Fixed

[FREEDOM DI- FOUR DIMENSIONS]

1. 00:19:034 (1) - What about stacking this note with 00:18:284 (7) - ? This is sorta of a personal preference, but the fact that this stream is circular, and then you add a circle in a very linear way looks quite iugh hah. Let me explain you this better with a picture. http://puu.sh/jvcCj/1c82821c65.jpg . You could also move both 00:19:334 (3,5) - in order to make your pattern look more logical, as you are doing something similar with (4,6). Could work, but the current one has a better transition to 2 imo. Will ask for opinions on this
   
2. 01:42:134 (1) - I'd use "Soft" instead. The actual Whistle sounds a bit loud for the music. The sound is way, way too loud for a soft whistle imo, that's why the normal whistles. Personal preference I guess haha
   
3. 01:46:484 (1,2,3) - I want to talk about this pattern a bit. The spacing in (1,2) may be too big, but as this is has almost 7 stars I think it could be forgiven. However, I don't think that (3,4) should have a similar spacing. Additionally, (2) and (3) have the same sound, and for that reason, I'd strongly recommend you to copy the hitsounds from (2). Nerfed the jump by like 0,25, shouldn't be an issue really since the AR is very supportive towards such patterns. I also fixed the hitsound yeah
   
4. 01:54:134 (4,6,8) - Aaa these finishes. Quite too much. Have you thought about Soft Whistles? I think they will sound way better. However, I think 03:03:734 (4,6,8) - it is intentional. Wouldn't emphasize it enough with whistles so nah, personal stuff I guess c:
   
5. 02:34:634 - DUDE THIS IS NICE. Very good work. Wow thanks!
   
6. 03:37:634 (1) - You should not add a New Combo here, especially because throughout all this section you are mapping 4-sliders-combo, so this will completely break with what you did previously. Again, they're there for the sake of the SB, so keeping them
   
7. 03:42:734 (13) - NC this so the players will know about the 1/8? The last one wasn't NC'd either so nah, would break consistency. Also the slider is so small, players can distinguish it solely from that imo
   
8. 03:43:334 (2,3,4) - I do understand the reason of emphasising (2,3)... but (3,4). It's not convincing me, it's quite exaggerated, in my opinion. Ehh, the spacing should be fine considering how spaced the streams are here[

I love you, Jonny <3

Yuii- wrote:

After a small IRC mod~

Congratulations!! <3

Mazzerin wrote:

unfuckingholy satan this map got butchered so hard its like chernobyl pre/post 86

Hexas wrote:

Good one XD

Hexas wrote:

Good one XD

toybot wrote:

Hexas wrote:

Good one XD

so salty they had to talk about it in their userpage

Yuii- wrote:

congratulations, Jonny <3

Hexas wrote:

Good one XD

Jokes aside, I always thought of blue zenith as a stream map, not a jump one with overlapping turns

TheCoon324 wrote:

so that just happened
cookiezi at his best..