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Thank you for the mod.-Edge- wrote:
Normal :
00:25:411 (1) - I'd move this circle more "in the middle" of the two slider to make it look more "flowing" Changed -- now it looks like this
Hard :
01:10:941 (2) - feels like a little bit too far of a jump in a hard diff.
00:59:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same here
Deleted all
Other than that, it's a great map, could be ranked with some luck ^3^
eclipselotus wrote:
can i get the dropped extra diff anyway?
just curious :3
unfortunately, I lost it.
Use this BG tho
sorry, can't use that...
(the godaddy page appears)
anyways i'm making a new background
19:28 eclipselotus: minta .pngnya nano desu~
19:29 *eclipselotus slapped*
19:29 mraihani: maksudnya?
19:29 eclipselotus: file .png sb shun puu
19:32 mraihani: tunggu ya... mungkin agak lama.
19:32 eclipselotus: >,<\
19:32 mraihani: sebagian besar lyric blm dioutline.
19:34 eclipselotus: naru hodo~
19:34 mraihani: maaf ya,
19:36 eclipselotus: kalem :3
19:38 mraihani: http://puu.sh/mwzs2/65c0655ec2.zip hati-hati diklik langsung download.
19:38 mraihani: afk 10min
20:10 eclipselotus: normal & easy diff nurut AIMod aja [http://puu.sh/mwAER/7c1f87754e.jpg easy]
20:10 eclipselotus: mesti bersih listnya
20:13 eclipselotus: [http://puu.sh/mwAUh/70b4adf715.jpg ini] agak ngecoh dan kurang nyaman tbh, prefer [http://puu.sh/mwAXj/eaf617b661.jpg ini]
20:14 mraihani: tunggu ... lagi di multi
20:14 eclipselotus: kalem
20:17 eclipselotus: 00:52:058 (8,9,10) - ditumpuk aja
20:22 eclipselotus: bikin gitu biar lebih gampang dibaca
20:25 mraihani: eh ini apaan ...
20:25 eclipselotus: modding nano desu!
20:25 eclipselotus: ~*
20:25 *eclipselotus is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/875715 mraihani - Hyhenade]
20:30 mraihani: oh...
20:30 mraihani: ok thx
20:30 mraihani: jangan lupa /savelog ya
20:31 eclipselotus: mhm
20:33 mraihani: tunggu... di aimod easy di sini bersih...
20:34 eclipselotus: di centang
20:34 mraihani: ohh... ok
20:43 eclipselotus: buat [http://puu.sh/mwCe6/a47662ef32.jpg bg] biar gak plain
20:45 mraihani: yang dibilang "ini agak ngecoh" itu di diff apa di detik ke brp?
21:03 mraihani: soal bg... nanti dulu ya...
maybe he thought that i only reccomend bg xDmraihani wrote:
why somebody deny your kudosu
thank you for your modPyroBear wrote:
Hhhh this is is good
[Hard][Insane]
- 00:18:264 woah this pattern seems too hard for players this skill range, might want to go easy. Even I got caught off guard by it unpredictable isn't it?
[Another]
- 00:49:323 You can afford to push the players more considering this is an Insane diff, scaling both (4,5,6) to 1.25 seems reasonable dunno will change this or no...
- 01:03:529 move the third red point to x 188 any y 181, it makes a better blanket for (3) changed!
- 01:06:970 move (3) closer to (2)'s end, they're too far apart. changed!
mraihani album when? asap
thank you for your mod!_orange wrote:
Hi, M4M from my queue
[Easy]
00:18:352 (4) - This is quite an odd slider, you could maybe make it curve later? sure
00:24:352 (5,1) - Switch NC no... it feels odd after switching the nc
[Normal]
00:16:588 (5) - Make the spacing the same between the two sliders done
00:21:882 (3) - I don't think you need the whistle forgot to turn off that... changed
00:19:764 (1) - What's with the useless timing point removed both
00:22:588 (1) - ^
00:50:999 (2,3,4) - Spacing's off here hmm, i detect no problems here.
[Advanced]
00:52:235 (6) - Spacing's too far done
00:52:235 (6) - NC hmm ok
00:55:410 (6) - Unsnapped (moved to 00:55:411 (6) - this is should be one of the effect of copy-paste-ing the objects)
00:55:763 (7) - Unsnapped (moved to 00:55:764 (7) -, the text in pink above goes here too)
01:38:470 (3,5) - Try to avoid overlaps like this repaired
01:42:705 (3,5) - ^ repaired
01:44:470 (1,2,3,4) - This part should be more denser than this 01:41:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shouldn't it? There's also a new sound that comes in that measure this is the ending part, so i decide to make this part easier than the previous 5 objects
[Hard]
Check AIMod for unsnapped objects (Ctrl+Shift+A) changed
00:33:705 (5,2) - Stack? stacked now, and all 00:34:235 (2,3,4,5,6) - now also change their place
00:35:294 (6) - NC and add a break or=#00BF00]done[/color]
[Insane]
Why are hitsounds louder? forget to tune down the volume -- changed.
00:38:470 (2) - No need for the hitsound here I think still need i forgot to change to SOFT sampleset (instead of S:C1)
00:54:352 (3,1) - Try fixing the overlap changed by moving the (1) slightly upwards
01:43:410 (5) - Unsnapped moved to 01:43:411 (5) -
01:54:352 (2) - NC okay
[Another]
Unsnapped notes again its done now
00:20:117 (2,3) - Move these up to fix overlap
Amazing map, especially for the first, really like Insane and the lower diffs, just remember to try and avoid overlaps when you're mapping
GL!
thank you for your mod!xasuma wrote:
Hey from my m4m queue, take/leave what you choose.
InsaneSPOILER00:23:823 (1) - consider turning this into two separate notes to make the downbeat clickeable, like this maybe http://puu.sh/sPLh2/5499ffe587.jpg . Then you would make this 00:23:999 (1) - the NC. done!
00:26:117 (4) - move slightly to x 480 y 196 for better spacing consistency done!
00:26:294 (5) - try x 436 y 116 also done!
00:30:705 (4,1) - separate just a bit to look better. dunno will change or no
00:57:882 - this should probably be a clickeable sound.
01:12:705 (2,3) - you could separate these a little visually, they look too close imo. i do not think so
01:04:941 - you could probably end the break and start mapping here again, feels like too long of a break for such a short song, and this part has lots of sounds so there is nothing preventing you from it. now this part exists.
01:16:411 (2,3,7) - I think if the curvature of the cursor for these notes was a little more linear would be better. 2,3,7 only right... done.
01:22:146 (4) - I don't like how far to the right this note is. Some people might think otherwise, just my opinion. now the notes (1,2,3,4) changed their position. the pattern is linear now.
01:36:705 (7) - overlap with 01:35:294 (5) - the note 01:35:294 (5) already vanished when 01:36:705
01:39:352 (6) - move this note closer to the next slider, looks weird and the spacing should be more consistent since nothing changed. changed!
01:45:882 (1,1) - you could find a better position for this sliders, or maybe make them notes. this part is kind of monotonous anyways I think. I do not understand what you mean.
01:49:411 (3,4) - separate just a bit or change to angle of (4) to feel like they are not so close. I'm creating the (almost zigzag) pattern from (1,2,3,4) so no change.
01:52:941 (1,1) - these could be separated more then i'll ctrl+G it
hardSPOILERIn general The sliders are a bit too fast for this difficulty. And I think it is a bit overmapped.
00:18:352 (1) - this slider is not very intuitive, up until this point you only had sliders that repeated once. i do not understand
00:18:882 (3,4) - this doesn't work, please change it. This whole are could be re done imo 00:18:352 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:24:617 (4,2) - overlap, and make changes on the nearby notes to adjust the (4) vanished when (2) come.
00:26:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - thats too crouded, too much stuff. changed - so this will be easier
00:29:647 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:18:352 (1,2,3,4) - because I do not understand what should i do on 00:18:352...
00:47:823 - missing note added a circle
00:47:999 (1) - only have this slider repeat once and map the sounds here 00:48:882 - 00:49:058 - 00:49:147 - 00:49:235 - done
The comment about the break can be for all difficulties* insane only. I'll keep 'hard' and 'advanced' have a slightly long break, so its more 'noob-safe'.
01:19:588 - missing note. and there is a sound here also 01:19:676 - added 2 circles
01:19:764 (4) - make this 1/2 slider instead , since this sound is too strong to be in the sliderbody 01:19:941 - ok
01:34:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - make some sliders here. Its too much for this difficulty. now done
01:36:176 (4,5) - separate a bit ok
01:37:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - too much again edited
01:42:352 (2,1) - ugly overlap moved 01:43:058 (1,2) -
01:52:588 (2,1) - separate a bit. Don't let the distance spacing fool you, since you changed SV now this slider have distance spacing as long as its former distance spacing
advancedSPOILER00:22:588 - note here, since you were mapping the drums up until this point, this slider 00:22:764 (1) - following the high pitch noise feels unintuivtive added circle at 00:22:588
about00:22:764 (1), idk what should i do
00:25:058 - ^ added circle here
00:46:941 (2) - you are better off making this slider 2 separate notes, deleting this note 00:47:647 (4) - , and move this one 00:47:294 (3) - to 00:47:470 (3) - instead. Follows the important notes better. hmm i think i'll just change the hitsounds here
01:19:058 (3) - end at 01:19:411 - done
01:19:588 - make a note here ^
01:38:470 (3) - make the downbeat clickeable I do not understand
01:44:470 (1,2,3,4) - either change this section to be like 01:41:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - , or viceversa. i'll change 01:41:647 (1,2,3,4,5) so now this have same rhythm as 01:44:470 (1,2,3,4) did
I don't think the slowing down at the end is necesary since the song doesn't actually slow down any more past 01:41:647 - . (this applies to all difficulties also) but, why not?
I hope this helps some!
thanks for the modPachiru wrote:
[easy][normal]
- 00:33:882 (4) - for this pattern, i would recommand you to avoid things like that, because it hide the slider tail, and the player might be confused by that i'm not sure if its hidden but maybe i'll change this
- 00:49:411 (1) - this slider is too long, consider doing a reverse slide on the red tick here 00:49:941 - and then add another slider - done
- 00:57:529 - why there is no note here, and not here too 00:58:941 - i want to keep the star rating below 1.5 added note on 00:58:941 only
- 01:34:588 (1) - same as here 00:49:411 (1) - i dont do changes (for this part only); the reason is i want to keep the star rating below 1.5
- 01:37:411 (3) - here too ^
you have potential, so go for it! i'm sure you can rank it
- 00:26:117 (2,3,4) - this pattern is hard for a normal diff since they are pretty spaced... try to do a reverse, or reduce the snap converted to a lsider
- 00:46:588 (1) - don't start your slider here, because it start where the previous combo end, and it overlap and lead the player to a confusion moved
- 00:54:352 (2) - why not doing the same thing for them: 00:55:764 (4,5,6) - ? ok
- 01:26:117 (4) - why such a long slider here? converted to a doulbe slider
- 01:37:411 (1) - same as i said for the easy diff, it's pretty tricky to do it like that, so don't do patterns like this for low diff! ok
pm me if you need more help!
thank you for your mod!cute boy wrote:
hello from q
its cool u made the song and the beatmap for it
(also only 1 tag???)
not good at modding beflow 4* so heres these 2
insane:
00:30:705 (4,1) - these look too close together, just move all of this 00:31:058 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - over to the right a little
01:17:647 (1) - move up closer to the 8, spaced little too much
01:36:705 (7,8) - move over to the right a little, spacing is big
another:
00:48:529 (5) - move over to left some more, too close to previous slider/stream
00:54:705 (5) - whys there an extra anchor slider, doesnt need one done all of your mods
sry for short mod, theyre mapped pretty good
gl on rank ^^