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ty for hitsounds vincent c:

posting this here so i can click timestamps
Some questionable hitsounds u may wanna review:
00:43:787 (1) - that head
01:09:633 (1) - 2nd/3rd circle on the slider (possible snare?)
01:41:479 (2) - possible bass+snare? (more in the same section)
01:50:594 (2) - ?
02:09:017 (2) - questionable sample
02:56:940 (2) - head
03:27:055 (4) - want to add snare for consistency or follow truly to the music?
04:42:861 (1,2,3,1,2) - /me shrugs
04:58:554 (1) - derp
05:00:400 (1,2,3,1) - bass+snare?
05:04:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - not 100% sure bout this

also applied w/e changes necessary about ur concerns
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Meow
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Woof
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Rawr
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Moo
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Nyao~
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from my queue:

found this version and just cropped to 1366x768 to avoid rescaling.
also made a horizontally flipped version, so the characters are more visible on the song select screen (i.e. not covered by song titles)
no kds
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ty ringating
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somebody give ringating Graphics Assistance Team title already
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M4M from queue

oh god, as i said in irc i won't be able to mod this sufficiently :p

[Rosenkreuz]
  1. 00:39:018 (6,7) - I recommend removing these, since there's no 1/6 beat unlike 00:40:787 (4,5,6) - . plus, removing those would accent (5) imo
  2. 00:47:133 (3,4) - these contrasting movements are pretty hard and awkward, I think. Having (4) slide upwards instead of to the left would have better flow
  3. I'm not really fond of the fact that a lot of the parts where the vocal follows half-beat half-beat, you map it as dotted-quarter dotted-quarter quarter. If you could change those patterns (01:12:402 (1,2,3,4) - , 01:17:940 (1,2,3) - , 01:28:094 (1,2,3) - , etc.) to emphasize the half beats it would prob improve rhythmically. But if you can't find any better implementation for those patterns to follow the rhythm, oh well :P
  4. 02:41:709 (2,3,4,5) - (2) leading into (3) feels a little too crowded, maybe have (3)'s slider move downwards?
  5. 03:55:554 (4,5,4,5) - I'm not really sure about these circles as a replacement for sliders. The benefit of those sliders was that you didn't have to move so far, making movement into the next slider much easier.
  6. 05:11:246 (4,5,4,5) - Same as above suggestion
  7. 04:12:400 (1) - It would be nice if you somewhat stacked this on top of the next slider's head. The angle of the jump when you place it like that feels nice :3
  8. 04:41:015 (1) - Why is this so muted? Sounds weird as a finish to such a strong part of the song


I guess this mod was okay, pro map

Good luck! ^^
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and so it begins
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toybot wrote:

M4M from queue

oh god, as i said in irc i won't be able to mod this sufficiently :p

[Rosenkreuz]
  1. 00:39:018 (6,7) - I recommend removing these, since there's no 1/6 beat unlike 00:40:787 (4,5,6) - . plus, removing those would accent (5) imo yeh i agree but it's kinda weird if i map this 00:38:018 (2) - but don't map the 1/6
  2. 00:47:133 (3,4) - these contrasting movements are pretty hard and awkward, I think. Having (4) slide upwards instead of to the left would have better flow fix did something
  3. I'm not really fond of the fact that a lot of the parts where the vocal follows half-beat half-beat, you map it as dotted-quarter dotted-quarter quarter. If you could change those patterns (01:12:402 (1,2,3,4) - , 01:17:940 (1,2,3) - , 01:28:094 (1,2,3) - , etc.) to emphasize the half beats it would prob improve rhythmically. But if you can't find any better implementation for those patterns to follow the rhythm, oh well :Paha, its just something i do :X lol but following vocals would be quite hard for this map since the vocals are so off time
  4. 02:41:709 (2,3,4,5) - (2) leading into (3) feels a little too crowded, maybe have (3)'s slider move downwards? think it seems fine tbh o-o i dont think moving 3 downards would help much, but the link was a bit weird so idk if u linked the right thing
  5. 03:55:554 (4,5,4,5) - I'm not really sure about these circles as a replacement for sliders. The benefit of those sliders was that you didn't have to move so far, making movement into the next slider much easier. well i have 2 circles instead because u can hear the kicks and stuff there
  6. 05:11:246 (4,5,4,5) - Same as above suggestion ^
  7. 04:12:400 (1) - It would be nice if you somewhat stacked this on top of the next slider's head. The angle of the jump when you place it like that feels nice :3 moved it a bit,, i wana try to keep this general shape
  8. 04:41:015 (1) - Why is this so muted? Sounds weird as a finish to such a strong part of the song oops o-o


I guess this mod was okay, pro map

Good luck! ^^
ty ^^
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Kibbleru wrote:

toybot wrote:

M4M from queue

  1. 02:41:709 (2,3,4,5) - (2) leading into (3) feels a little too crowded, maybe have (3)'s slider move downwards? think it seems fine tbh o-o i dont think moving 3 downards would help much, but the link was a bit weird so idk if u linked the right thing
Oops, i guess i need better explanation, here's picture of what I mean, same link:

(3) moving downward like that would better accent the piano imo
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Kibbleru wrote:

pishifat wrote:

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
yolo
sexy garven

[Rosenkreuz]
  1. 03:01:324 (1) - Curving this should flow slightly better, it would carry more rightward movement coming from the jump on 03:01:208 (5), basically the same thing as 02:59:362 (5,1)
  2. 03:02:939 (4) - Ctrl+g here would probably play smoother, with the current one you create momentum for the opposite direction the player needs to move to jump onto 03:03:170 (1)
  3. 04:20:361 (2) - Try this maybe
  4. 04:20:477 (3) - Maybe NC here for the 1/3?
  5. 04:51:977 (4,1) - Shouldn't the spacing here be larger than in 04:51:861 (3,4) it's much more emphasized owo


idk wat i'm doing
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sukiNathan wrote:

yolo
sexy garven

[Rosenkreuz]
  1. 03:01:324 (1) - Curving this should flow slightly better, it would carry more rightward movement coming from the jump on 03:01:208 (5), basically the same thing as 02:59:362 (5,1) uhh i think its flows well enough though
  2. 03:02:939 (4) - Ctrl+g here would probably play smoother, with the current one you create momentum for the opposite direction the player needs to move to jump onto 03:03:170 (1) breaking flow on purpose for emphasis on the violin
  3. 04:20:361 (2) - Try this maybe blah looks bad to me lol
  4. 04:20:477 (3) - Maybe NC here for the 1/3? makes sense, but ill consider this late since it seems a bit spammed to NC
  5. 04:51:977 (4,1) - Shouldn't the spacing here be larger than in 04:51:861 (3,4) it's much more emphasized owo ah, well ur right, but. idk its another one of the things i just do lol.


idk wat i'm doing
@toybot that doesn't look bad but i want the antijump since i think it works rly well

ty u guys!
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oh yeah also shouldn't the OD be higher, with this bpm the time frame to hit a note is already very small
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sukiNathan wrote:

oh yeah also shouldn't the OD be higher, with this bpm the time frame to hit a note is already very small
yeah ur probably right ill put it up a bit
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Meow! Uhh m4m from your queue

Hope this helps because this is going to be a bad mod ;-; / Most of these are my opinions btw

00:04:203 (2) - Change this long slider into this ? Sounds better , http://puu.sh/gv3Wy/13819d906d.jpg
00:14:722 (2) - Move this to here ? http://puu.sh/gv4C7/f89157e29e.jpg
00:15:555 (3) - Delete this and add a circle here instead : 00:15:822 -
00:27:175(4) - Make this into a single note and add a spinner afterwards?
00:40:210 - Add a note here?
00:44:249 (3,4) CTRL + G these two notes? http://puu.sh/gv4ZA/2958198170.jpg
00:49:210 (4) - Stack this under 00:48:748 - tail?
01:02:940 (4) - Try this ? http://puu.sh/gv5d6/cf21cd7bb0.jpg
01:12:748 (3) - The end should be clickable ? Make it into this pattern ? http://puu.sh/gv5iS/2e96a9771d.jpg
01:32:710 - Suggestion : Add a slider? And maybe change the SV ? http://puu.sh/gv5sf/c8d7239038.jpg
01:46:094 (2) - Make the tail face downwards?
02:09:517 (4) - It would be nice if you're able to blanket this with the previous slider ! Idk I was thinking about like this , http://puu.sh/gv5Da/36e12d489a.jpg
02:41:709 (3,4,5) - Turn off grid snap and restack these? I dont think its properly stacked
02:54:863 (2) - Nazii but curve this a bit ?
03:01:324 (1) - Make this slider into the one you have on 03:00:401 (1) -
03:05:247 (1,2) - Move this down a bit ?
03:17:939 (1) - Rotate this ? http://puu.sh/gv5Xk/a2c610a6ab.jpg
03:19:680 (4) - stack this on the next slider's tail ? http://puu.sh/gv60J/083e0a9a3d.jpg
03:57:613 (1) - CTRL + G ?
04:27:977 (4) - Move this to x:288 y:144 ?
05:11:246 (4,5) - CTRL + G?
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Aerous wrote:

Meow! Uhh m4m from your queue

Hope this helps because this is going to be a bad mod ;-; / Most of these are my opinions btw

00:04:203 (2) - Change this long slider into this ? Sounds better , http://puu.sh/gv3Wy/13819d906d.jpg its okay
00:14:722 (2) - Move this to here ? http://puu.sh/gv4C7/f89157e29e.jpg ^
00:15:555 (3) - Delete this and add a circle here instead : 00:15:822 - there is piano
00:27:175(4) - Make this into a single note and add a spinner afterwards? i really hate ppl using spinners retardedly.
00:40:210 - Add a note here? prefer to follow drums
00:44:249 (3,4) CTRL + G these two notes? http://puu.sh/gv4ZA/2958198170.jpg interesting okay
00:49:210 (4) - Stack this under 00:48:748 - tail? no need
01:02:940 (4) - Try this ? http://puu.sh/gv5d6/cf21cd7bb0.jpg ^
01:12:748 (3) - The end should be clickable ? Make it into this pattern ? http://puu.sh/gv5iS/2e96a9771d.jpg i dont think so
01:32:710 - Suggestion : Add a slider? And maybe change the SV ? http://puu.sh/gv5sf/c8d7239038.jpg interesting but i prefer this
01:46:094 (2) - Make the tail face downwards? nah
02:09:517 (4) - It would be nice if you're able to blanket this with the previous slider ! Idk I was thinking about like this , http://puu.sh/gv5Da/36e12d489a.jpg doesn't look good imo
02:41:709 (3,4,5) - Turn off grid snap and restack these? I dont think its properly stacked i tried
02:54:863 (2) - Nazii but curve this a bit ? k
03:01:324 (1) - Make this slider into the one you have on 03:00:401 (1) - nah
03:05:247 (1,2) - Move this down a bit ? ^
03:17:939 (1) - Rotate this ? http://puu.sh/gv5Xk/a2c610a6ab.jpg doesnt look as good, i also need flow break to indicate the 1/1
03:19:680 (4) - stack this on the next slider's tail ? http://puu.sh/gv60J/083e0a9a3d.jpg meh
03:57:613 (1) - CTRL + G ? wat the flow D:
04:27:977 (4) - Move this to x:288 y:144 ? pass
05:11:246 (4,5) - CTRL + G? ^
ty
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I'm calling major bg fight lol
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