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Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia
[notice]General
  1. Why is Accel World a tag... Its the mapper of GD
  2. Add "(TV Size)" to the title? Im not sure if its necessary
  3. Maybe set 00:50:780 as preview point ok
Insane
  1. 00:02:547 (1) - Why the NC fixed
  2. 00:58:901 (2) - Fix stack fixed
  3. 01:08:017 (1) - ^ fixed
Damn, this is some amazing mapping. Have my stars.[/quote]
thx for your modding and stars :)
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
M4M from my queue

[General]
  1. Why ? I don't know if it's unrankable, but please fix it.
  2. Please disable countdown, widescreen support and letterbox during breaks in all difficulties.
  3. Please check 01:26:083 (1) - in all diffs, I think it doesn't end at 01:27:244 - but a bit later.
[Easy]
  1. 01:12:326 - I think give it a beat is better, but it may cause dq in easy, so I prefer change 01:11:498 (5) - to a note and make 01:11:829 - 01:12:326 - a slider.
The rest is fine to me.

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:862 (5,6) - Unreasonable rhythm, change it to 2*1/2 slider.
  2. 00:50:282 - Why do you miss the vocal? It's really obvious that this vocal is more important than drumbeat here.
  3. 00:54:757 (2,3) - Not recommend to stack in Normal because of ds.
  4. 01:09:509 (5,1) - blanket
  5. 01:13:984 (5,6) - suggest to combine them to a 3/2 slider
[AW's Hard]
  1. 00:26:415 (1) - not recommend slider here because 00:26:581 - is also a stress.
  2. 00:26:415 (1,2,3) - And reduce the distance between these.
  3. 00:39:675 (3) - NC and 00:42:326 (5) - 00:48:956 (6) -
  4. 01:27:244 (1) - Meaningless spinner, delete it.
[Insane]
  1. Tags conflict with other diffs.
  2. 00:03:542 (1) - There isn't any 1/8 here, please use 1/4 reverse slider.
  3. 00:11:001 (3,6) - stack better?
  4. 00:14:481 (1,3) - 3/4 doesn't fit the song here. Change to 1/2 please.
  5. 00:28:901 (1,2,3) - remove triplets here
  6. 00:51:111 (2,3) - hard to read here.. Please overlap a bit.
  7. 01:04:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - slider
  8. 01:27:326 (1) - I consider deleting the spinner and add two notes at 01:27:326 - and 01:27:409 - better.
Good luck.
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia

[Teichan] wrote:

M4M from my queue

[General]
  1. Why ? I don't know if it's unrankable, but please fix it.fixed
  2. Please disable countdown, widescreen support and letterbox during breaks in all difficulties.fixed
  3. Please check 01:26:083 (1) - in all diffs, I think it doesn't end at 01:27:244 - but a bit later.there is voice on 01:27:244，so ii choose this time to end
[Easy]
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:757 (2,3) - Not recommend to stack in Normal because of ds.hard to fix and maybe it could be accepted.
    others all fixed
[Insane]
  1. Tags conflict with other diffs fixed
  2. 00:03:542 (1) - There isn't any 1/8 here, please use 1/4 reverse slider.1/8 is better and there is the same rthyme in ranked map,so i think its ok
  3. 00:11:001 (3,6) - stack better?fixed
  4. 00:14:481 (1,3) - 3/4 doesn't fit the song here. Change to 1/2 please.hard to fix ,give me time to think
  5. 00:28:901 (1,2,3) - remove triplets herei think this can be accepted
  6. 00:51:111 (2,3) - hard to read here.. Please overlap a bit.i want to persist it,see others how to say
  7. 01:04:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - sliderreverse?i think not good here
  8. 01:27:326 (1) - I consider deleting the spinner and add two notes at 01:27:326 - and 01:27:409 - better.really want to add a spinner in my map;w;
Good luck.
thx for your modding :)
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:857 (4) - 00:19:785 (4) - 00:30:393 (4) - 01:10:172 (4) - NC
  2. 00:08:846 (1,2) - 00:32:050 (1,2) - 00:34:702 (1,2) - 00:54:260 (4,1) - 00:56:912 (3,1) - 01:07:520 (5,1) - 01:14:813 (1,2) - 交换NC
  3. 00:11:498 - 有拖沓感，和下一根大白线分隔开好些
  4. 00:12:824 (1) - 你成功扑杀了一群红线鼓orz，你看下这样咋样
    00:12:161 -
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:851 (3) - 可以试下一拍接个圈
  2. 00:10:669 - 我觉得滑条停顿这里挺好的
  3. 01:19:785 (3,4) - 可以换下次序
  4. 01:22:105 (3) -
[AW's Hard]
  1. 01:05:531 (6) -
[Insane]
  1. 01:06:194 (1) - 后面这部分短跳可以再发散些
  2. 美丽
挺好的，gl
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia

AIR wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:857 (4) - 00:19:785 (4) - 00:30:393 (4) - 01:10:172 (4) - NC fixed
  2. 00:08:846 (1,2) - 00:32:050 (1,2) - 00:34:702 (1,2) - 00:54:260 (4,1) - 00:56:912 (3,1) - 01:07:520 (5,1) - 01:14:813 (1,2) - 交换NC fixed
  3. 00:11:498 - 有拖沓感，和下一根大白线分隔开好些 这两个没改，感觉可以接受的程度，改起来好麻烦;w;
  4. 00:12:824 (1) - 你成功扑杀了一群红线鼓orz，你看下这样咋样
    00:12:161 -
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:851 (3) - 可以试下一拍接个圈 all fixed
  2. 00:10:669 - 我觉得滑条停顿这里挺好的
  3. 01:19:785 (3,4) - 可以换下次序
  4. 01:22:105 (3) -
[Insane]
  1. 01:06:194 (1) - 后面这部分短跳可以再发散些稍微加大了点间距（应该是这个意思吧..）
  2. 美丽
挺好的，gl
thx for your modding :)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
M4M
[Easy]
  1. 00:48:956 (1) - 拆成一个折返+单点更符合这里的节奏
  2. 00:50:945 - 加个滑条？没鼓点的时候可以空着，但是这有鼓点啊
  3. 01:02:879 - 这里重音，滑条从这里开始感觉更好，前面放圈
  4. 01:20:780 (4,5) - 好丑，做个blanket吧
  5. 01:29:067 - 这绿线干啥的
  6. 00:34:702 (1) - 就这一个滑条为何NC..

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:868 (3) - 调一下放在下面那个滑条头尾的中间
    挺好

低难度NC太乱了，有的到7和8都不NC 有的2就NC了，最简单粗暴的方法就是两条大白线一个nc。

[ZJ's Hard]
  1. 00:35:034 (2,3,1) - 这间距太近了的感觉
  2. 00:44:978 (1,1) - 这俩可以用3/4滑条更贴合音乐
  3. 00:53:100 (2,3) - 这俩ctrl+g试试，然后00:53:431 (4) - 叠在1上，00:52:603 (4,1,2) - 这个flow我个人不喜欢
  4. 01:23:597 - 这个音听起来听关键的，建议不要漏了，可以把这个滑条变成折返

[Insane]
  1. 00:26:912 (4,5,6,1) - 这节奏真的很奇怪，00:27:244 - 这里是个超重音后面怎么还加个二连，一般三连二连都是最后一个note是重音的，就跟00:38:017 (5,6,7) - 这里差不多，推荐这个节奏：
    SPOILER
  2. 00:42:989 (3,4) - 这里应该做跳啊，怎么间距反而比前面还小
  3. 00:52:934 (1,2) - 多适合放跳的地方...俩滑条带过浪费了
  4. 01:03:542 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:14:150 (1,1) - 交换下NC
感觉还行，再加点油改改可以起飞。
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
zj0924

Kagamine Ren wrote:

M4M
[ZJ's Hard]
  1. 00:35:034 (2,3,1) - 这间距太近了的感觉 用了反跳，让玩家注意力在vocal上，你可以听一下我配的音效。好像间距是有点近了拉到0.8了
  2. 00:44:978 (1,1) - 这俩可以用3/4滑条更贴合音乐理由同上，用反跳瞬间减速，再加速，没有必要3/4，因为我这里跟的是乐器，我很少会跟vocal的
  3. 00:53:100 (2,3) - 这俩ctrl+g试试，然后00:53:431 (4) - 叠在1上，00:52:603 (4,1,2) - 这个flow我个人不喜欢，嗯是的，作图的时候疏忽了，我测试的时候也觉得这里卡手，想等别人说了再改，改法正合我意XD
  4. 01:23:597 - 这个音听起来听关键的，建议不要漏了，可以把这个滑条变成折返 不了，理由很简单：因为是新的长白线重音要用长滑条来表示，这是我的作风。请仔细听一下，我这里跟的bass，觉得不违和的，01:23:597这个音可以相当于乐器版的vocal，然后我不怎么喜欢跟vocal。况且如果用了折返滑条结构就会整体受影响，因为后面那个重音也是长滑条
感觉还行，再加点油改改可以起飞。
谢人格摸~ :)
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia

Kagamine Ren wrote:

M4M
[Easy]
  1. 00:48:956 (1) - 拆成一个折返+单点更符合这里的节奏 改了
  2. 00:50:945 - 加个滑条？没鼓点的时候可以空着，但是这有鼓点啊 easy舍弃的节拍还行吧
  3. 01:02:879 - 这里重音，滑条从这里开始感觉更好，前面放圈 同上
  4. 01:20:780 (4,5) - 好丑，做个blanket吧 好
  5. 01:29:067 - 这绿线干啥的忘记删了。 fixed
  6. 00:34:702 (1) - 就这一个滑条为何NC.. fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:868 (3) - 调一下放在下面那个滑条头尾的中间normal还是避免遮挡吧edit:之前看错了，但感觉差不多就不改了
    挺好

低难度NC太乱了，有的到7和8都不NC 有的2就NC了，最简单粗暴的方法就是两条大白线一个nc。改了一点

[Insane]
  1. 00:26:912 (4,5,6,1) - 这节奏真的很奇怪，00:27:244 - 这里是个超重音后面怎么还加个二连，一般三连二连都是最后一个note是重音的，就跟00:38:017 (5,6,7) - 这里差不多，推荐这个节奏： 把连打去了
    SPOILER
  2. 00:42:989 (3,4) - 这里应该做跳啊，怎么间距反而比前面还小 fixed
  3. 00:52:934 (1,2) - 多适合放跳的地方...俩滑条带过浪费了 感觉还行吧，不太想改了
  4. 01:03:542 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:14:150 (1,1) - 交换下NCfixed
感觉还行，再加点油改改可以起飞。
谢谢ren哥被mu啦好开心啊
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h1b1k11
261 posts
Joined April 2014
h1b1k11


Insane
00:03:873 (1) - Just pointing this out but, I don't like sliders that end/starts in blue ticks, it's a ODC of mine (I should say?) I'll try my best to mod though! :D
00:15:807 (1) - Better flow if the slider ending here?
00:21:442 (1) - Err...Slider should end here
01:08:017 (1) - ^^
01:15:061 (4) - Remove?

ZJ's Hard
00:56:912 (1) - Ctrl+G?
01:17:962 (4) - Put this circle on top of 01:18:128 (1)
01:26:083 (1) - Spinner starts here

Normal
00:06:028 (5) - Slider starts here OR 00:06:194 (5)
00:29:730 (4) - Add reverse so remove 00:30:061 (5)
01:19:951 (4) - Slider starts here

Easy
00:27:244 (2) - I still think slider should start here
01:07:520 (1) - Slider should end here (on white tick preferred)
Suzuya Jyuzo
34 posts
Joined February 2014
Suzuya Jyuzo
MOD
[Insane]
滑条,跳什么的都摆的好好
不开DS什么的有些地方我完全摆不出来,排版方面没什么可说的，像↓这条,类似的就不说了
00:11:001 (3,4,5,6,1) - 把这5个往上面移一下,2 3 4一条线 间距相等看起来好一些 ？强迫症
00:50:697 (5,6,7) - 这边我没听出有音连打
01:12:492 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这边有点怪,4这边是没音的
overmap我也不是很懂还是注意下好了
没什么可摸的了

[ZJ's Hard]
排列上有些地方可以修的好看一点,没什么问题
00:05:034 (4,1) - DS不与前面保持一致吗
00:11:166 (3,4,1) - 这边有点不舒服 , 3个击打点可以摆个等边3角型出来
01:22:603 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - - 可以摆的好一点,1,3,5 2,4,6没在直线上

[Normal]

00:05:862 (4,5) - 像这里这种1/2单点会不会对新人读图不太友好,觉得叠在一起比较好读,后面也有一样的
00:52:934 (3,4,5) - 感觉也不太友好,类似这种地方用1/1滑条替换比较好,后面也有一样的不说了

[Easy]

01:16:139 (5) - 滑条拉到1/16上面去了

没了

good luck :)
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
zj0924

imaikiseta wrote:



ZJ's Hard
00:56:912 (1) - Ctrl+G? great
01:17:962 (4) - Put this circle on top of 01:18:128 (1) nope,I want to emphasize 01:18:128 (1)
01:26:083 (1) - Spinner starts here?already starts here

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

MOD
[ZJ's Hard]
排列上有些地方可以修的好看一点,没什么问题
00:05:034 (4,1) - DS不与前面保持一致吗 oops，本来想强调距离故意拉远的，忘了这边有个圈就不需要了
00:11:166 (3,4,1) - 这边有点不舒服 , 3个击打点可以摆个等边3角型出来 看着不舒服吗？打起来我觉得没问题啊，因为flow需要所以这样摆的，后面那个红描点滑条不能靠的太近了加上这片整体性较强，不方便动了
01:22:603 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - - 可以摆的好一点,1,3,5 2,4,6没在直线上 稍微做了点改动，把ds改成一致的了，这里是打算往下微弯一点，我觉得直线第一不好做，第二打起来死板，没有旋转的感觉（这里是想要做个顺时针逐渐旋转的跳）

good luck :)
Thx for modding :)
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia
[quote="imaikiseta"]

Insane
00:03:873 (1) - Just pointing this out but, I don't like sliders that end/starts in blue ticks, it's a ODC of mine (I should say?) I'll try my best to mod though! :D I know your mean but maybe, if i fixed the 3/4 slider,the map would be a little dull ,so no change more and thanks for your modding
[quote="Suzuya Jyuzo"]
MOD
[Insane]
滑条,跳什么的都摆的好好
不开DS什么的有些地方我完全摆不出来,排版方面没什么可说的，像↓这条,类似的就不说了
00:11:001 (3,4,5,6,1) - 把这5个往上面移一下,2 3 4一条线 间距相等看起来好一些 ？强迫症照顾2到3的间距，所以不改
00:50:697 (5,6,7) - 这边我没听出有音连打
01:12:492 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这边有点怪,4这边是没音的
overmap我也不是很懂还是注意下好了几个overmap的地方效果感觉不错所以还是待定看看别人这么说
没什么可摸的了

[Normal]

00:05:862 (4,5) - 像这里这种1/2单点会不会对新人读图不太友好,觉得叠在一起比较好读,后面也有一样的待定
00:52:934 (3,4,5) - 感觉也不太友好,类似这种地方用1/1滑条替换比较好,后面也有一样的不说了

[Easy]

01:16:139 (5) - 滑条拉到1/16上面去了fixed

没了
thx for your modding :)
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Hello

[Insane]

00:03:873 (1,2) - Do not apply this technique, because no stronger beat here: 00:04:122 - Please, use 1/2 slider here: 00:03:873 -
00:06:525 (7,8) - Same as, and fix all similar parts ^
00:20:780 (5) - If don't use 00:03:873 (1,2) - (similar) suggestions, move 00:20:780 (5) - slider here: x: 33 y: 211. Perfect symmetry: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNFQVR
00:24:757 (6) - Move slider here: x: 180 y: 252 Better overlay.
00:28:901 (1,2) - It's overmapped, because no stronger beat here: 00:28:984 - Please, follow vocal, use similar: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNFAVR
00:32:879 (1,2,3) - Same as ^ Use 1/1 slider here: 00:32:879 -
00:50:697 (5,6,7,1,2) - It's overmapped, because this part is not 1/4. Use this similar: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNFwVR
01:04:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't use 1/4 circles. Please, follow vocal. It's overmapped.
01:10:503 (1) - One circle better than 1/4 slider. It's not 1/4.

[Hard]

01:03:542 (1) - I think, two circle better than 1/2 slider here.
01:04:205 (3,4) - And i think, use 1/1 slider. Better fits the vocal. Timeline: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNGQVR

[Normal]

00:58:072 (2,3) - I think, follow vocal. Use this: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNGAVR
01:06:194 (4,5,6,7) - It's bit hard for normal. Use 1/1 sliders: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNQAVR
01:11:166 (3) - Long slider is weird here. Use 1/1 slider, follow the vocal: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNQwVR


[Easy]

It's ok.

Good luck.
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia

Kazuya wrote:

Hello

[Insane]

00:20:780 (5) - If don't use 00:03:873 (1,2) - (similar) suggestions, move 00:20:780 (5) - slider here: x: 33 y: 211. Perfect symmetry: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNFQVRfixed
00:24:757 (6) - Move slider here: x: 180 y: 252 Better overlay.fixed
01:10:503 (1) - One circle better than 1/4 slider. It's not 1/4.fixed
Others no change now,let me think over more

[Normal]

00:58:072 (2,3) - I think, follow vocal. Use this: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNGAVRhard to fix ,so no change now
01:06:194 (4,5,6,7) - It's bit hard for normal. Use 1/1 sliders: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNQAVRi think its okey
01:11:166 (3) - Long slider is weird here. Use 1/1 slider, follow the vocal: http://imagerz.com/QBUSUEtvAwMMXwlNQwVRnot good

Good luck.
thanks for modding :)
z1085684963
327 posts
Joined August 2012
z1085684963
[Insane]
00:08:349 (2) - 尾巴叠到2上
00:15:144 (3,4) - 节奏错了
00:33:708 (1) - 五角星plz
00:43:652 (1) - 修一下，有点丑
00:56:249 (1) - 既然上面是三角形，那下面着这样好了
01:04:454 - 这么响的三连……

排列很好啊，加油
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia

z1085684963 wrote:

[Insane]
00:08:349 (2) - 尾巴叠到2上 照顾到间距所以没改
00:15:144 (3,4) - 节奏错了 这里挺轻的让我再想想吧
00:33:708 (1) - 五角星plz fixed
00:43:652 (1) - 修一下，有点丑 fixed
00:56:249 (1) - 既然上面是三角形，那下面着这样好了 照顾到间距稍微改了下
01:04:454 - 这么响的三连…… fixed

排列很好啊，加油
thx for your modding :)
Ortlinde
255 posts
Joined January 2015
Ortlinde
Hi!
Here's my mod. Feel free to not use them :lol:

Easy
00:14:481 (2) - Consider put the red anchor in the tick (the little white dot in the slider)
00:21:774 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow
01:07:520 (1) - Ctrl+G too

Normal
00:21:940 (3,4) - Why don't swap these two notes?
01:17:465 (1) - Don't NC this. Instead, NC this 01:18:128 (1) -
01:22:603 (4) - Move to (x:140,y:304)
SoGa
236 posts
Joined June 2013
SoGa
水 IRC we discuss some minor stuff about the Hard diff

2015-05-09 23:41 Hyasalia: hi
2015-05-09 23:41 SoGa: 不接，testplay接
2015-05-09 23:41 SoGa: hi
2015-05-09 23:41 Hyasalia: 。。。
2015-05-09 23:41 Hyasalia: 至少等我说了，在拒绝呀;w;
2015-05-09 23:42 SoGa: 什么歌
2015-05-09 23:42 SoGa: 好听的我今天给你搞定，前提是tv
2015-05-09 23:42 Hyasalia: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/656505 Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary]
2015-05-09 23:42 Hyasalia: 之前你看过的
2015-05-09 23:42 SoGa: 还在弄这个啊
2015-05-09 23:42 SoGa: 真是辛苦你了
2015-05-09 23:43 Hyasalia: 我也是弄弄停停
2015-05-09 23:43 Hyasalia: 昨天为了spread加了个hard
2015-05-09 23:43 SoGa: 我昨天撸了几个小时，弄了个垃圾出来
2015-05-09 23:43 SoGa: 整个人都不好了
2015-05-09 23:43 SoGa: 人家是越map越好进步
2015-05-09 23:43 SoGa: 我是越map越垃圾退步
2015-05-09 23:44 Hyasalia: ins做慢点啊，多想点梗啊
2015-05-09 23:44 SoGa: 我很快的
2015-05-09 23:45 SoGa: 昨天2小时到不知道多少，今天1小时到1:17
2015-05-09 23:46 Hyasalia: 我做个hard要花了3个多小时;w;
2015-05-09 23:46 Hyasalia: 还是不求质量的速成品
2015-05-09 23:46 SoGa: 我没做过hard
2015-05-09 23:48 Hyasalia: 能不能抽出点时间稍微给个摸啊，就摸hard也行
2015-05-09 23:49 SoGa: 我没做过hard
2015-05-09 23:49 SoGa: ，也没摸过hard。
2015-05-09 23:50 Hyasalia: ;w;好吧，抱歉打扰了
2015-05-09 23:52 SoGa: 哪个nm
2015-05-09 23:52 SoGa: gd的那个？
2015-05-09 23:52 SoGa: hd*
2015-05-09 23:52 SoGa: 看了下，没啥好摸的，打起来也正常
2015-05-09 23:52 Hyasalia: 我的hard
2015-05-09 23:53 SoGa: 简单irc
2015-05-09 23:53 SoGa: 可以吗
2015-05-09 23:53 Hyasalia: 行
2015-05-09 23:54 SoGa: 00:01:222 (1,2,3,1) - 
2015-05-09 23:54 SoGa: 不好看
2015-05-09 23:54 Hyasalia: 2稍微弯一点？
2015-05-09 23:54 SoGa: 00:02:547 (3,1) - 没有overlap的必要
2015-05-09 23:56 SoGa: 打了下
2015-05-09 23:56 SoGa: 感觉不是很成熟
2015-05-09 23:56 Hyasalia: 毕竟速成品Orz
2015-05-09 23:56 SoGa: 00:10:835 (2) - 不知道为啥想del这个
2015-05-09 23:57 SoGa: 00:15:807 (1) - 这个，第一个红点换成白点会好看点
2015-05-09 23:57 Hyasalia: 删了会不会不太好打啊
2015-05-09 23:57 SoGa: 会么
2015-05-09 23:58 SoGa: 00:10:669 (1,2) - 这两个比较相似，中间那个，啊随便了
2015-05-09 23:58 SoGa: 你keep吧
2015-05-09 23:58 SoGa: 00:21:774 (2,3,4,5) - 
2015-05-09 23:58 SoGa: 爷爷这种不好玩
2015-05-09 23:58 SoGa: 顺着去
2015-05-09 23:59 SoGa: 大部分HD单点都是用 正方顺着或者是五星顺着
2015-05-09 23:59 SoGa: 不是很建议拜这种
2015-05-09 23:59 Hyasalia: 那我换个梗
2015-05-09 23:59 SoGa: 00:23:266 (3) - Ctrl G?
2015-05-10 00:00 SoGa: 00:27:575 (4,1) - 这2个stack
2015-05-10 00:00 Hyasalia: 后面的flow行吗
2015-05-10 00:00 SoGa: 00:32:879 (2,3,4) - 这个没必要三点，感觉
2015-05-10 00:00 SoGa: 哪里的flow
2015-05-10 00:01 Hyasalia: 00:23:266 (3) - 这个ctrlg，后面的flow
2015-05-10 00:01 SoGa: 00:36:360 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面提到的一样，很恐怖，我刚刚dt打了我打这个像连打一样打
2015-05-10 00:01 SoGa: 没大碍吧，应该
2015-05-10 00:03 SoGa: 00:48:956 (1,2,3,4) - 然而我觉得这样摆并不是太爽
2015-05-10 00:03 SoGa: 00:48:459 (9) - 这个可以试试折返
2015-05-10 00:03 SoGa: 00:55:255 (4,1) - 感觉跳有点大了
2015-05-10 00:04 SoGa: 照普通ds做就好了，hd不是很需要强调finish去跳
2015-05-10 00:05 Hyasalia: 不可能一直连在一起的啊，不然都挤在一起拉
2015-05-10 00:05 SoGa: 01:12:989 (3,4,5,1) - 
2015-05-10 00:05 SoGa: weird
2015-05-10 00:05 SoGa: 我看mei做的时候他不会跳那种
2015-05-10 00:05 Hyasalia: 这个滑条跳不大的吧
2015-05-10 00:06 SoGa: 不知道
2015-05-10 00:06 SoGa: 我去试试
2015-05-10 00:08 SoGa: 还不错
2015-05-10 00:10 Hyasalia: 差不多直线的flow所以应该没什么问题
2015-05-10 00:12 Hyasalia: 没了吗
2015-05-10 00:12 SoGa: 嗯
2015-05-10 00:12 SoGa: 其他都还好
2015-05-10 00:12 SoGa: 其实我重新看了我给你的摸，什么问题都没
2015-05-10 00:13 SoGa: 话说你要试图吗，失败品
2015-05-10 00:13 Hyasalia: 好，你说的几个连续单点的确打起来不太好要改
2015-05-10 00:14 SoGa: 其实挺好打的
2015-05-10 00:14 SoGa: 我刚刚试打了下，都能昏过去
2015-05-10 00:14 Hyasalia: 我再改简单点
2015-05-10 00:14 Hyasalia: 你发个post啊
2015-05-10 00:15 SoGa: 啊
2015-05-10 00:15 SoGa: 发上thread？
2015-05-10 00:15 Hyasalia: 嗯
2015-05-10 00:15 SoGa: 哦，好
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa
[hard]
怎么说呢 感觉你这个hard没啥必要啊。 那个GD的hard就做的很不错的 难度也适中 节奏也很好 排列也很舒展
你这个就是节奏有的地方有点别扭 排列看着挺整齐 但是有点放不开。打起来感觉远没有那个hard好
00:12:989 (2) - 这个换成滑条好一点，这里空一排感觉很别扭。 其实最好是00:12:989 (2,3,4) - 三个都做成1/2的滑条 因为音乐也是这三个一组， 然后00:13:984-这里放歌note
00:17:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段节奏我没看懂为啥这么下 你追的是什么轨能说一下么
00:27:244 (3,4,1) - 这里节奏摆放都不舒服 给人感觉是00:27:575 (4,1) - 这俩也应该是1/1间距才对 然后突然是1/2
01:02:879 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个梗怎么说呢 看起来感觉挤成了一团有点放不开的感觉
01:26:001 (1) - 转盘结束时间为啥和insane不一样。

看了看你insane做的不错啊！感觉能轻松1st了 :)
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
zj0924
过来围观新hard，送个摸

[Hard]
  1. 首先AR7.5：物件密度略大，AR7增加读图难度
  2. 00:03:873 (1,2) - 跳略大，角度有点正。而且00:03:210 (1,1) - 略近，所以往右拉一点
  3. 00:10:338 (4,1) - 保持1.2-1.3ds？否则一下子后面三个连点有些仓促
  4. 00:14:150 (5,1) - 这个大跳肯定不行，flow也太...
  5. 00:18:956 (6) - 稍微有点起伏，没必要折返箭头都map
  6. 00:21:442 (4) - 这flow总觉得怪怪的
  7. 00:21:774 (5,6,7,8) - 换成滑条和我的diff区别开来？目前这个排列感觉不好看而且对00:22:437 (9) - flow也一般。可以降低星数不信你试试
  8. 00:25:752 (3) - remove finish
  9. 00:25:089 (1,2) - 跳还是太大，尽量少用这种组合，前辈们称之为坑娘滑条，打起来非常奇怪
  10. 00:29:730 (7,8) - 物件间距变大？没有理由啊
  11. 00:30:393 (1,2) - ^这个还很难打，究其原因还是这种1滑条1单点的组合，以后不要这样处理。把00:31:221 (2,3) - 换成1/2滑条
  12. 00:40:172 (2) - 为何要用折返滑条不理解
  13. 00:50:282 (1) - spinner？are you kidding怎么看都不合曲吧，还是用滑条单点套餐吧
  14. 00:53:431 (8,9) - 这个flow不好，因为连续的钝角
  15. 01:08:017 (1,2) - 节奏上看ctrl+g会更好
  16. 01:10:835 (3) - 既然你后面选择三连更节奏，那这里也要map鼓而不是vocal否则会有点违和的
  17. 01:26:001 (1) - whistle

只是粗略的撸了一遍，感觉问题还是有点的，把我提的这些建议改一改应该差不多了，搞不懂的irc找我
我想要KD owo
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia

Etdah wrote:

Hi!
Here's my mod. Feel free to not use them :lol:

Easy
00:14:481 (2) - Consider put the red anchor in the tick (the little white dot in the slider) not necessary
00:21:774 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow fixed
01:07:520 (1) - Ctrl+G too fixed

Normal
00:21:940 (3,4) - Why don't swap these two notes? no change
01:17:465 (1) - Don't NC this. Instead, NC this 01:18:128 (1) - fixed
01:22:603 (4) - Move to (x:140,y:304) not good

thx for modding :)

kamisamaaa wrote:

[hard]
怎么说呢 感觉你这个hard没啥必要啊。 那个GD的hard就做的很不错的 难度也适中 节奏也很好 排列也很舒展
你这个就是节奏有的地方有点别扭 排列看着挺整齐 但是有点放不开。打起来感觉远没有那个hard好 为了spread才做的Orz
00:12:989 (2) - 这个换成滑条好一点，这里空一排感觉很别扭。 其实最好是00:12:989 (2,3,4) - 三个都做成1/2的滑条 因为音乐也是这三个一组， 然后00:13:984-这里放歌note 想空点节奏的，所以先留着了
00:17:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段节奏我没看懂为啥这么下 你追的是什么轨能说一下么 的确有点串了，应该是跟鼓的
00:27:244 (3,4,1) - 这里节奏摆放都不舒服 给人感觉是00:27:575 (4,1) - 这俩也应该是1/1间距才对 然后突然是1/2 应该行的吧，bn说不行我再改了
01:02:879 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个梗怎么说呢 看起来感觉挤成了一团有点放不开的感觉 拉开了点
01:26:001 (1) - 转盘结束时间为啥和insane不一样。 开头不一样啊
看了看你insane做的不错啊！感觉能轻松1st了 :)
谢谢摸，rank好难啊;w;

zj0924 wrote:

过来围观新hard，送个摸

[Hard]
  1. 首先AR7.5：物件密度略大，AR7增加读图难度 ok
  2. 00:03:873 (1,2) - 跳略大，角度有点正。而且00:03:210 (1,1) - 略近，所以往右拉一点
    fixed
  3. 00:10:338 (4,1) - 保持1.2-1.3ds？否则一下子后面三个连点有些仓促 fixed
  4. 00:14:150 (5,1) - 这个大跳肯定不行，flow也太... fixed
  5. 00:18:956 (6) - 稍微有点起伏，没必要折返箭头都map fixed
  6. 00:21:442 (4) - 这flow总觉得怪怪的 fixed
  7. 00:21:774 (5,6,7,8) - 换成滑条和我的diff区别开来？目前这个排列感觉不好看而且对00:22:437 (9) - flow也一般。可以降低星数不信你试试 好
  8. 00:25:752 (3) - remove finish ok
  9. 00:25:089 (1,2) - 跳还是太大，尽量少用这种组合，前辈们称之为坑娘滑条，打起来非常奇怪 改了
  10. 00:29:730 (7,8) - 物件间距变大？没有理由啊 fixed
  11. 00:30:393 (1,2) - ^这个还很难打，究其原因还是这种1滑条1单点的组合，以后不要这样处理。把00:31:221 (2,3) - 换成1/2滑条
  12. 00:40:172 (2) - 为何要用折返滑条不理解 fixed
  13. 00:50:282 (1) - spinner？are you kidding怎么看都不合曲吧，还是用滑条单点套餐吧 这个没问题的吧
  14. 00:53:431 (8,9) - 这个flow不好，因为连续的钝角 改了节奏
  15. 01:08:017 (1,2) - 节奏上看ctrl+g会更好 改了节奏
  16. 01:10:835 (3) - 既然你后面选择三连更节奏，那这里也要map鼓而不是vocal否则会有点违和的 还行吧，先不改了
  17. 01:26:001 (1) - whistle add

只是粗略的撸了一遍，感觉问题还是有点的，把我提的这些建议改一改应该差不多了，搞不懂的irc找我
我想要KD owo
thx for modding :)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
槽點好多

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Found unused .wav files : soft-slidertick27.wav
  2. Your diff kiai time are not consistent,check hard diff the last kiai part to fix it.
  3. soft-hitclap27 have a serious delay 5ms (it almost mute in the front part),this pic show you need to improve the wave :

    SPOILER
  4. soft-sliderslide and soft-slidertick can't be silence in the same time,make the one set need to have a audible
  5. Widescreen cancel in hard diff (Hard and zj's diffmissed video ,too)sound.
  6. 以上需要全Fix.
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:824 (1) - Compare with normal rhythm,this too simple,suggest change this to balance :
    SPOILER
  2. 00:19:785 (1) -
    SPOILER
  3. 00:36:360 (2) - Have a heavy downbeat in reverse,why not add finish hitsound?
  4. 00:45:310 (2,3) - Same above. (N and H are same part too)

    發現每個diff都忘了加好多finish音效啊，這樣下去會寫很多也沒什麼意義，有些聽起來像finish的地方可以加finish反而都沒加，你把Ins diff好好的加一遍在使用我用PM給你的音效copy程式，如果不確定用法再問我。(順便一提Zj的diff加的finish都幾乎正確的位置，但是這音量表達太小了算是可惜的地方)
  5. 01:16:139 (5) - Combo a bit long,seems you forgot add NC for here
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:222 (1) - You can reduce this reverse and add note at big white line,make rhythm various with easy diff.
  2. 00:08:680 (5) - Not a heavy downbeat,suggest remove this sound and add clap (the same in hard diff ) here
  3. 00:23:763 (3,4,5) - Well ,this pattern looks so weird (keep curve better),because at nowdays didn't see this kind pattern in normal

    diff,this is truth.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:39:675 (2) - Why this rhythm so simple than easy? Should use a bit harder rhythm than easy diff imo.
  5. 00:43:652 (5) - Forgot NC here (Too simple rhythm too :
    SPOILER
  6. 00:57:244 (1,2) - Same as 00:23:763
  7. 01:00:724 (3) - This head and end have downbeat recommened add finish
  8. 01:26:083 (1) - Forgot whistle in end.
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:448 (3) - Why this head add whistle?
  2. 00:42:326 (3,4) - It is a questionable jumping ditance (3.49x in hard is too far will become dq issue),need to reduce a bit DS (to
    2.5x is better)
  3. 00:47:630 (5) - Forgot NC
  4. 00:52:934 (5) - Same above
  5. 00:57:409 (6) - Same above
  6. 01:05:365 (2) - Add a note make various rhythm with Normal
  7. 01:19:454 (6) - Forgot NC
[ZJ's Hard]
  1. Looks good,but seems have a dq issue at 01:01:884 (3) - here,this is previous post : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4056848
    So,move a bit make 01:02:216 (1) - can be see clear the number imo
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:542 (1) - Same as ZJ's Hard
  2. 00:45:973 (2) - Make pattern consistent with 00:44:978 (1) - this,don't all cover at slider.
  3. 00:47:630 (1) - Ctrl+g
  4. 01:08:017 (1,1) - Forgot finish in head,the vocal so heavy why not add?
  5. 01:23:929 (6,3) - Same above
  6. 01:27:326 (1) - Feel this not a end time here ,suggest remove this spinner make end time keep consistent
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
zj0924

smallboat wrote:

槽點好多

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Found unused .wav files : soft-slidertick27.wav my fault,already asked hyasalia removing this
  2. soft-hitclap27 have a serious delay 5ms (it almost mute in the front part),this pic show you need to improve the wave : Fixed and also turn down 1db
    Edit Wave

    SPOILER
  3. Widescreen cancel in hard diff (Hard and zj's diffmissed video ,too)sound.fixed
  4. 以上需要全Fix.

[ZJ's Hard]
  1. Looks good,but seems have a dq issue at 01:01:884 (3) - here,this is previous post : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4056848
    So,move a bit make 01:02:216 (1) - can be see clear the number imo
    Well,since qat is more and more screw nowadays,have to fix it without any reason :o 這年頭什麼東西都要拿出來dq
謝船業 :)
Hyasalia
89 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Hyasalia

smallboat wrote:

槽點好多;w;

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Found unused .wav files : soft-slidertick27.wav delete
  2. Your diff kiai time are not consistent,check hard diff the last kiai part to fix it. fixed
  3. soft-sliderslide and soft-slidertick can't be silence in the same time,make the one set need to have a audible delete the slidertick
  4. Widescreen cancel in hard diff (Hard and zj's diffmissed video ,too)sound. fixed
  5. 以上需要全Fix.
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:824 (1) - Compare with normal rhythm,this too simple,suggest change this to balance :
    SPOILER
  2. 00:19:785 (1) -
    SPOILER
  3. 00:36:360 (2) - Have a heavy downbeat in reverse,why not add finish hitsound?
  4. 00:45:310 (2,3) - Same above. (N and H are same part too)

    發現每個diff都忘了加好多finish音效啊，這樣下去會寫很多也沒什麼意義，有些聽起來像finish的地方可以加finish反而都沒加，你把Ins diff好好的加一遍在使用我用PM給你的音效copy程式，如果不確定用法再問我。(順便一提Zj的diff加的finish都幾乎正確的位置，但是這音量表達太小了算是可惜的地方) 参考zj的diff给ins加了点fin，然后复制给了其他几个难度，这次应该好点了
  5. 01:16:139 (5) - Combo a bit long,seems you forgot add NC for here fixed all
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:222 (1) - You can reduce this reverse and add note at big white line,make rhythm various with easy diff.
  2. 00:08:680 (5) - Not a heavy downbeat,suggest remove this sound and add clap (the same in hard diff ) here
  3. 00:23:763 (3,4,5) - Well ,this pattern looks so weird (keep curve better),because at nowdays didn't see this kind pattern in normal

    diff,this is truth.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:39:675 (2) - Why this rhythm so simple than easy? Should use a bit harder rhythm than easy diff imo.
  5. 00:43:652 (5) - Forgot NC here (Too simple rhythm too :
    SPOILER
  6. 00:57:244 (1,2) - Same as 00:23:763
  7. 01:00:724 (3) - This head and end have downbeat recommened add finish
  8. 01:26:083 (1) - Forgot whistle in end. fixed all
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:448 (3) - Why this head add whistle?
  2. 00:42:326 (3,4) - It is a questionable jumping ditance (3.49x in hard is too far will become dq issue),need to reduce a bit DS (to
    2.5x is better)     fixed this and some similar problems in this diff
  3. 00:47:630 (5) - Forgot NC
  4. 00:52:934 (5) - Same above
  5. 00:57:409 (6) - Same above
  6. 01:05:365 (2) - Add a note make various rhythm with Normal
  7. 01:19:454 (6) - Forgot NC fixed all


[Insane]
  1. 00:03:542 (1) - Same as ZJ's Hard
  2. 00:45:973 (2) - Make pattern consistent with 00:44:978 (1) - this,don't all cover at slider.
  3. 00:47:630 (1) - Ctrl+g
  4. 01:08:017 (1,1) - Forgot finish in head,the vocal so heavy why not add?
  5. 01:23:929 (6,3) - Same above
  6. 01:27:326 (1) - Feel this not a end time here ,suggest remove this spinner make end time keep consistent fixed all
谢谢船业>.<
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