FIRST MOD FOR THIS DIFF, YAY On a more serious note, here's your chat log if you want to continue looking over my suggestions later:
16:57 Spicy Salsa: oi one question 16:57 Spicy Salsa: on your map 16:57 Spicy Salsa: 01:52:247 (8) - what the hell is this 16:59 Spicy Salsa: Alrighty, I'm gonna go ahead and officially start this IRC mod session because I don't really have time afterwards 16:59 Spicy Salsa: First off 17:00 Spicy Salsa: all those passages with delayed slider ends need to be 1/8 17:00 Spicy Salsa: otherwise it looks weird, feels weird and sounds weird 17:00 Spicy Salsa: at least that's my opinion 17:00 Spicy Salsa: 00:11:961 (3,4) - this for example 17:00 Nerodae: cuz yolo 17:01 Spicy Salsa: Doesn't really sound like the song 17:01 Nerodae: 01:52:247 (8) - 17:01 Nerodae: I agree! 17:01 Spicy Salsa: 1/8 would 17:03 Spicy Salsa: 00:18:133 (1) - this would fit better at the snare hit rather than the end of the vocals 17:03 Spicy Salsa: because the vocal's ends are rather vague 17:03 Spicy Salsa: and it just didn't feel right 17:07 Spicy Salsa: 00:13:676 (3,4) - I'd make those overlap because it looks nicer and those spaced solutions only work for faster maps imo 17:07 Spicy Salsa: Like this for example http://puu.sh/gv6ql/d3028b58b6.jpg 17:08 Spicy Salsa: 00:21:647 (8) - 17:08 Spicy Salsa: 00:32:704 (4,5) - 17:08 Spicy Salsa: those sliders actually don't really feel good to play and although that's kinda embedded in your mapping style 17:09 Spicy Salsa: I'd consider changing them to something more familiar to most people 17:09 Spicy Salsa: It's your decision though if you'd like to keep them 17:11 Spicy Salsa: 00:36:647 (3,4) - I don't know if that's on purpose but try actually lining those two up like the sliders before and after them 17:11 Spicy Salsa: to make it look better and play easier 17:12 Spicy Salsa: You can just copy and paste one of the sliders before and after, place a hitcircle on the beginning and end and then delete the slider 17:12 Spicy Salsa: and if needed, move the hitcircles on the timeline until they fit 17:13 Spicy Salsa: 00:40:418 (2) - Not really something exceptionally weird, it just looks kinda awkward if you do a whole lot of bent sliders and then add one straight slider 17:14 Spicy Salsa: This slider feels like it continues too far into the break, but that's probably just because of the hitsounds volume... 17:15 Spicy Salsa: I'd make an inheriting point in the middle of the slider and turn down the hitsound volume, so that you hear the beginning, but don't hear the end (or barely hear it), making it seem less disturbing to the break. 17:17 Spicy Salsa: 00:57:561 (4,1) - Those two feel weird, that's probably because they are so close and almost parallel to each other. Consider a different solution with one of them in a different angle than the other one 17:18 Spicy Salsa: http://puu.sh/gv7kI/f6b371c38a.jpg consider something like this. 17:19 Spicy Salsa: 00:59:961 (1,2,3) - again, a little too spaced for a slow part, that's your decision though. And again, 01:00:304 (2,3) - are almost parallel 17:20 Spicy Salsa: 01:14:190 (5) - I feel like this needs to be a little more spaced to 01:14:018 (4) - since it's following a long part of higher spaced hitcircles and sliders 17:21 Spicy Salsa: 01:17:790 (3,4,5) - There isn't really a musical element that suggests a triplet, consider changing it 17:22 Spicy Salsa: 01:19:847 (4,5) - feels a bit weird, consider changing 01:20:361 (5) - location 17:23 Spicy Salsa: Try this: Blanket 01:20:361 (5) - with the beginning of 01:20:533 (6) - 17:24 Spicy Salsa: Just after this, place 01:21:047 (7) - where the beginning of 01:19:847 (4) - was to get a nicer flow 17:25 Spicy Salsa: Should look like this: http://puu.sh/gv7MB/fb6d9af1c1.jpg for the first blanket 17:25 Spicy Salsa: http://puu.sh/gv7PN/b1a4f57ebe.jpg for the second blanket 17:28 Spicy Salsa: 01:32:533 (3,4,5) - Remember what I told you about lining up followpoins and the direction of sliders to create a nice flow? Please try to apply this here 17:28 Spicy Salsa: as you can see, it's way off: http://puu.sh/gv7V9/ac4f38f4b5.jpg 17:28 Spicy Salsa: 01:35:961 (4,5) - Again, spacing in between delayed sliders 17:31 Spicy Salsa: 01:36:990 (1) - This can just be my opinion, but try moving the second last sliderpoint up for a nicer shape, this bent second part doesn't really look too symmetrical and appealing to the first part of the slider 17:31 Spicy Salsa: Somewhat like this: http://puu.sh/gv8fA/fe253599e0.jpg 17:32 Spicy Salsa: Then you just need to move those 01:38:533 (2,3,4,5) - so that they fit again with the end of the slider 17:32 Spicy Salsa: The transition between 01:39:047 (5,1) - would look better too if you do that 17:33 Spicy Salsa: 01:39:047 (5) - Again, this slider goes a tad too long into the break, consider muting the hitsound with said technique from before or just shorten it 17:34 Spicy Salsa: Never mind, shortening isn't actually going to help. Either you make it as long as the break or you just delete it 17:34 Spicy Salsa: http://puu.sh/gv8rS/e2cdae0bff.jpg This could actually work though 17:36 Spicy Salsa: 01:48:304 (5,1) - Again, almost parallel and as said, this looks somewhat weird 17:36 Spicy Salsa: It's up to you, but if you'd like to change it try something like this http://puu.sh/gv8yI/f085930765.jpg 17:37 Spicy Salsa: 01:51:904 (6) - Feels weird, try to make a jump out of this hitcircle 17:37 Spicy Salsa: 01:52:247 (8) - Sorry for mentioning again, but this is bothering me so much 17:38 Nerodae: what if I make it a single tap 17:40 Spicy Salsa: Alright, either you follow through and fill the whole section between 1:52:076 and 1:52:761 or you just stop at 01:51:904 (6) - 17:40 Spicy Salsa: Otherwise it'd sound weird, stopping in the middle of a motion when the corresponding musical part hasn't ended 17:41 Spicy Salsa: That's like a spinner ending suddenly while the singing or the background is still rolling 17:41 Spicy Salsa: 01:55:504 (9) - Love the shape 17:41 Spicy Salsa: Keep this 17:42 Spicy Salsa: 02:03:733 (1) - Don't love the shape, either keep it or change it as the same slider from before that had this exact shaoe 17:42 Spicy Salsa: shape* 17:42 Nerodae: that is 17:42 Nerodae: the 17:42 Nerodae: same 17:42 Nerodae: slider 17:42 Nerodae: D: 17:42 Spicy Salsa: yeah 17:42 Nerodae: I just flipped it 17:43 Nerodae: unless you want me to unflip it 17:43 Spicy Salsa: Nah, you can keep the same slider 17:43 Spicy Salsa: I just didn't like the shape 17:43 Spicy Salsa: like I said before 17:43 Nerodae: rip ;w; 17:44 Spicy Salsa: see, it could just be me 17:44 Spicy Salsa: but the only thing I don't like 17:44 Spicy Salsa: is the end 17:44 Spicy Salsa: http://puu.sh/gv96b/b6b44cf2a3.jpg 17:44 Nerodae: but its makes a nice curved V 17:44 Nerodae: D: 17:44 *Nerodae dies 17:44 Spicy Salsa: Yeah, keep the V 17:45 Spicy Salsa: Just don't bend it too far 17:45 Nerodae: http://prntscr.com/6f9n7g 17:45 Spicy Salsa: like this 17:45 Spicy Salsa: http://puu.sh/gv9cA/2a8fffa57f.jpg 17:45 Nerodae: what about dat 17:45 Spicy Salsa: exactly 17:45 Nerodae: oh 17:45 Spicy Salsa: yeah 17:45 Nerodae: nvm 17:45 Nerodae: oh 17:45 Nerodae: ok 17:45 Nerodae: cool 17:47 Spicy Salsa: 02:24:304 (9) - This slider doesn't really match the music when you repeat it, either make it one big slider or mute the hitsound like I've shown you before 17:47 Spicy Salsa: 02:33:047 (1,2) - Followpoint and slider direction doesn't match, consider moving the slider or rotating it for a better flow 17:48 Spicy Salsa: Alrighty, that'd be it so far 17:48 Spicy Salsa: If you have any more questions, feel free to ask me 17:49 Spicy Salsa: I'm going to post this log on forums if you accidentally close the tab or don't have time to look at all suggestions and please give me feedback on what you changed and how you liked my suggestions 17:49 Spicy Salsa: As always, keep in mind that those are all only suggestions, if you don't really agree with something I said, you can always keep it the same as some suggestions were based entirely on my point of view. 17:50 Spicy Salsa: Good luck with any further mapping <3
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[Spicy's Extra] 00:20:190 (3,4,1) - This three are too fast for people to see and react 00:27:390 (6,3) - better stack 00:29:104 (1,1) - ^^^ 00:37:676 (3,3) - ^^^ 00:40:076 (1,3) - ^^^ 02:46:247 (5,6) - I don't recommend overlapping here 02:58:247 (1,2) - the flow is wrong, making people feels hard to reach 02:59:961 (3) - Too many points