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Nauts - Second Run [OsuMania]

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tangjinxi
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tangjinxi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月 at 0:36:16

Artist: Nauts
Title: Second Run
Source: Talesweaver
Tags: Nam-Goomin,nexon
BPM: 190
Filesize: 3075kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.13 - 7Key (2.04 stars, 478 notes)
  2. Lv.21 - 7Key (3.36 stars, 1078 notes)
  3. Lv.35 - 7Key (4.28 stars, 1442 notes)
  4. Lv.5 - 7Key (1.32 stars, 288 notes)
Download: Nauts - Second Run
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For rank
Lv.5(3 mod)
Lv.13(4 mod)
Lv.21(1 mod)
Lv.35Not For Rank!
Thanks for mod~
pporse
CrabCow
Simple_Star
schwarzvgrune
victorica_db
Last edited by tangjinxi , edited 24 times in total.
pporse
362 posts
Joined October 2014
pporse
hi tangjinxi :)
from pm

second run <3 i love this piano melody ><

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

First, remember it
Modding is just suggestion. If you are not satisfied with the suggestion, reject it :)

Go!
[General]
eaSY OD,HP - change to 7.0
song setup - turn off winscreen support and letterbox
metadata
- Source : Talesweaver
- Tag : 테일즈위버, Nam-Goomin, 남구민, nexon


[eaSY]
00:15:275 - add note
00:15:433 (15433|4) - delete

00:16:538 (16538|3,16538|1,16538|4) - delete one of three notes
3 chord is too hard for easy player

00:17:959 (17959|2) - delete

00:20:485 (20485|1,20801|2,21117|3) - Ctrl+H
those notes are decreasing

00:21:748 (21748|5) - delete or move to 2nd column
00:22:222 (22222|2,22380|1) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

00:31:854 (31854|2) - move to 7th column
actually 00:31:854 (31854|2,32012|3,32169|4,32327|5) - The stairs are confusing with only piano sound.
but first note is not piano sound. it's drum sound.
so u can avoid the confusion by moving the note.
(in fact, 00:21:748 - same reason)

00:35:959 - delete one of three notes
3 chord is too hard for easy player
this diff is easy :3 i recommend that u use only 1 or 2 chord :)

00:38:485 (38485|0) - move to 5th column and
00:38:327 (38327|1,38643|1,38801|2,38801|5,39275|4) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

00:39:906 (39906|5) - delete
if u want to use it, 00:39:433 - 00:39:591 - 00:39:748 - add notes
but i think..'delete' is better.

00:40:064 (40064|6) - move to 5th column
00:40:696 (40696|5) - move to 1st or 2nd column
00:41:327 (41327|4) - move to 6th column
for pitch

00:43:222 (43222|5) - move to 5th column
00:43:538 (43538|3) - move to 3rd column
00:43:854 (43854|0) - move to 6th column
00:44:327 (44327|1) - move to 4th column
00:44:801 (44801|2) - move to 2nd column
just suggestion for pitch

00:46:064 (46064|5) - move to 5th column
00:46:380 (46380|4) - move to 6th column

00:54:906 (54906|4) - move to 6th column
00:55:222 (55222|5) - move to 2nd column

00:56:485 (56485|2) - move to 5th column
00:56:959 (56959|1) - move to 4th column
00:57:433 (57433|3) - move to 3rd column

01:07:380 (67380|5) - move to 4th column
01:07:696 (67696|3) - move to 6th column
01:07:854 (67854|5) - move to 3rd column

01:08:643 (68643|0,68801|1,68959|2,69117|3) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

[nOrMal]
00:05:327 (5327|1) - change to normal note
it's not main piano sound. so i don't think that LN is necessary

00:08:012 - add note and
00:08:012 (8012|0,8169|1,8169|3,8327|4,8327|2) - Ctrl+H
those notes are decreasing

00:09:748 (9748|6) - move to 1st or 2nd column
this note has low sound.

00:11:801 (11801|5) - move to 3rd column
this note has low sound.

00:16:538 - add note

00:16:696 - hmm...idk such notes are necessary..;_;

00:19:222 (19222|0,19222|1) - delete

00:22:064 (22064|3,22064|5,22222|2,22222|4,22380|0,22380|1,22380|3) - Ctrl+H
those notes are increasing

00:39:906 (39906|5) - delete
same as easy diff

00:40:696 (40696|3) - move to 2nd column
00:41:327 (41327|5,41327|2) - swap each other
for pitch

00:44:327 (44327|3,44327|1) - move to 4th(LN) & 6th(note) column
00:46:064 (46064|5) - move to 4th column
00:46:380 (46380|1) - move to 5th column

00:54:906 (54906|2) - move to 7th column

00:56:485 (56485|0) - delete
00:56:485 (56485|1,56959|2,57433|3) - move to left one block and if u accept it,
00:56:169 (56169|1,56169|6,56327|2,56327|5,56485|4,56485|0,56959|1,56959|5,57433|6,57433|2) - Ctrl+H
for pitch

01:10:380 - add note

01:44:801 (104801|4) - move to 7th column

01:45:748 (105748|1,105748|5,106538|0) - swap each other
01:45:748 (105748|5) - move to 1st or 2nd column
01:45:748 (105748|1,106538|0) - move to 6th & 5th column

i think..u should pay more attention to the pitch.
pitch..i mean, high and low notes is important for piano map.
cuz people can find easily high and low notes :)
So if you put a note in the wrong place, people will find easily it T^T
then they will feel awkward it.
for this reason, i pointed out about pitch :)

next time, i'll mod rest (hard, MaX)
tangjinxi
57 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
tangjinxi
Dear pporse~~~
First , i got to say "i love you ~~ pporse :) " ,because i really didn't think you would mod this so attentively :roll: ,i'm very move by this.
If you need me help you to do something,i will try my best to finish 8-) .Thank you ~~~ :)
And,i just read your opinion,that was amazing! It was the best mod what i saw.I have accepted all of your opinion,and update.
All in all,Thank you~
-Rebecca-
Former osu!mania 4K Champion: 2015
64 posts
Joined August 2014
-Rebecca-
Beautiful tune, I'll give a go at modding normal difficulty.

I don't know how to make a fancy mod post ^~^

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Normal
SPOILER
00:33:117 (33117|4) - remove

00:33:529 (33529|6) - move to column 2
00:33:748 (33748|5) - move to column 3
00:34:064 (34064|2) - move to column 5
00:34:222 (34222|1) - move to column 6
Just for pitch reasons.

01:25:380 (125380|4) - extend LN that ends here to 01:25:538 (125538)

I agree on the comment by pporse on pitch. A lot of it seems good so far but as I mentioned, there are a couple notes that I think should be changed to promote a better pitch flow.

I will try the Hard difficulty when I get more free time.
tangjinxi
57 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
tangjinxi

CrabCow wrote:

Beautiful tune, I'll give a go at modding normal difficulty.

I don't know how to make a fancy mod post ^~^

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Normal
SPOILER
00:33:117 (33117|4) - remove

00:33:529 (33529|6) - move to column 2
00:33:748 (33748|5) - move to column 3
00:34:064 (34064|2) - move to column 5
00:34:222 (34222|1) - move to column 6
Just for pitch reasons.

01:25:380 (125380|4) - extend LN that ends here to 01:25:538 (125538)
(thanks for you find this wrong :))

I agree on the comment by pporse on pitch. A lot of it seems good so far but as I mentioned, there are a couple notes that I think should be changed to promote a better pitch flow.

I will try the Hard difficulty when I get more free time.
To be honest , I don't agree your pitch :D sorry :| but the last suggestion is a real problem ,thank you~
Marirose
1,121 posts
Joined September 2012
Marirose
先马
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce
如果Hard要改简单的话有这些建议:
1.前面音乐比较柔和的地方 舍弃掉一个音 单键就可以
2.00:41:327 - ~ 01:00:275 - 这里其实算是一个休息的地方吧 做的有点难了 我的建议只取主音就可以了 稍微少一点物件
3.kiai部分有些条子和MAX其实差不多 略微删减一些 只用单长音就可以
4.总体来说点用了稍微多一些 稍微改简单一点就行
5.最后unsnap的地方有点多 好好再听一下吧<--所有难度都注意看一看

加油哟 推荐改到3.5星左右为适中的程度
tangjinxi
57 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
tangjinxi

Simple_Star wrote:

如果Hard要改简单的话有这些建议:
1.前面音乐比较柔和的地方 舍弃掉一个音 单键就可以
2.00:41:327 - ~ 01:00:275 - 这里其实算是一个休息的地方吧 做的有点难了 我的建议只取主音就可以了 稍微少一点物件
3.kiai部分有些条子和MAX其实差不多 略微删减一些 只用单长音就可以
4.总体来说点用了稍微多一些 稍微改简单一点就行
5.最后unsnap的地方有点多 好好再听一下吧<--所有难度都注意看一看

加油哟 推荐改到3.5星左右为适中的程度
感谢小星姐~我会找时间修改的了，其实unsnap是什么意思？？
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce

tangjinxi wrote:

Simple_Star wrote:

如果Hard要改简单的话有这些建议:
1.前面音乐比较柔和的地方 舍弃掉一个音 单键就可以
2.00:41:327 - ~ 01:00:275 - 这里其实算是一个休息的地方吧 做的有点难了 我的建议只取主音就可以了 稍微少一点物件
3.kiai部分有些条子和MAX其实差不多 略微删减一些 只用单长音就可以
4.总体来说点用了稍微多一些 稍微改简单一点就行
5.最后unsnap的地方有点多 好好再听一下吧<--所有难度都注意看一看

加油哟 推荐改到3.5星左右为适中的程度
感谢小星姐~我会找时间修改的了，其实unsnap是什么意思？？
音没对准 放错地方了 不过我觉得不只是unsnap吧 可能最后变过BPM 你可以问问别人
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : HD and OD suggestions
Easy 7 and 6.5
NM 7 and 7
HD 7.5 and 7.5
Insane 8 and 8
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ cannot confirm it now, but based on a quick search on the internet there are some inconsistencies / incomplete information on your tag and metadata, please consult an expert metadata checker for this
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)？ its better if you utilise custom hitsound as it would make your beatmap more interesting to play


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )


EZ 7K
1/4 placing is extremely discouraged (or not allowed) on NM, especially since the BPM is not really low. in fact its 190.
readjust the whole diffs, here are some examples of 1/4 placement
00:03:275 (3275|1,3354|2,3433|3) -
01:51:906 (111906|1,111985|2,112064|3) -

00:08:012 (8012|6,8012|3,8169|5,8169|2,8327|1,8327|4,8485|0,8485|3) - this is for NM, not an EZ pattern, revamp
01:17:801 (77801|1,78748|6,78748|0,78906|5,78906|2,79064|4,79064|0,79222|3) - overdiff ^^

00:09:748 (9748|4,9748|3,10222|5) - both of them utilise the same chord patterning, why its 2 notes then 1? keep the chord consistent if you're reflecting certain parts of the song

00:35:327 (35327|3,35327|4,35643|4,35643|5,35959|5,35959|6) - heavy on the right hand, readjust and balance it.
01:15:117 (75117|5,75275|4) - 2/4 on 190BPM LN is too difficult for NM, please readjust




across the whole song i noticed that you ignored PR on some parts of the song, i strongly recommend you to follow PR since this song is focused on the piano
NM 7K
you overused 3 note chord across the whole diffs, please readjust, or you can rename your diffs to NM+
here is some exmaple
00:08:485 (8485|5,8485|6,8485|3,9748|1,9748|3,9748|4,11643|0,11643|1,11643|3) -


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
tangjinxi
57 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
tangjinxi

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : HD and OD suggestions
Easy 7 and 6.5
NM 7 and 7
HD 7.5 and 7.5
Insane 8 and 8
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ cannot confirm it now, but based on a quick search on the internet there are some inconsistencies / incomplete information on your tag and metadata, please consult an expert metadata checker for this
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)？ its better if you utilise custom hitsound as it would make your beatmap more interesting to play


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )


EZ 7K
1/4 placing is extremely discouraged (or not allowed) on NM, especially since the BPM is not really low. in fact its 190.
readjust the whole diffs, here are some examples of 1/4 placement
00:03:275 (3275|1,3354|2,3433|3) -
01:51:906 (111906|1,111985|2,112064|3) -

00:08:012 (8012|6,8012|3,8169|5,8169|2,8327|1,8327|4,8485|0,8485|3) - this is for NM, not an EZ pattern, revamp
01:17:801 (77801|1,78748|6,78748|0,78906|5,78906|2,79064|4,79064|0,79222|3) - overdiff ^^

00:09:748 (9748|4,9748|3,10222|5) - both of them utilise the same chord patterning, why its 2 notes then 1? keep the chord consistent if you're reflecting certain parts of the song

00:35:327 (35327|3,35327|4,35643|4,35643|5,35959|5,35959|6) - heavy on the right hand, readjust and balance it.
01:15:117 (75117|5,75275|4) - 2/4 on 190BPM LN is too difficult for NM, please readjust




across the whole song i noticed that you ignored PR on some parts of the song, i strongly recommend you to follow PR since this song is focused on the piano
NM 7K
you overused 3 note chord across the whole diffs, please readjust, or you can rename your diffs to NM+
here is some exmaple
00:08:485 (8485|5,8485|6,8485|3,9748|1,9748|3,9748|4,11643|0,11643|1,11643|3) -


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
虽然我一堆看不懂，但是还是修改了很多不好的地方，thank for mod~
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
不好意思原來是正在摸摸國人的圖 QAQ

那加油咯 o(≧v≦)o~~
Spy
2,538 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy
Mark，不好意思放生了快半年，還弄不弄 ?
tangjinxi
57 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
tangjinxi

Spy wrote:

Mark，不好意思放生了快半年，還弄不弄 ?
QAQ间谍哥你终于来了，必须弄呀
Spy
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Joined November 2011
Spy
挖起來叫我
[Emiria]
1,010 posts
Joined November 2012
[Emiria]
首先说最主要的几点吧
EZ NM HD全部减少LN
下降难度
尽量不要在NM中使用太多的双阶梯 最好把变速删了 新手并不能玩
用LN的时候考虑音乐结合手感
并不是所有的钢琴都必须都要用LN来写出来
低难度注意音的取舍不要全部取
另外最高难度
你全程都是LN 虽然我不能玩 但是我还是想说几句 玩的时候的感觉固然重要 也要多多注意整个音乐的衔接
不要为了堆难度 强行多很多note
希望你能够注意一下 mapper作图的思路不能总跟着这样的玩家的想法。我怎么打起来爽那就怎么放，我比较死板 我喜欢的是那种谱面能让我很清晰的知道你在写什么 你做整个图的思路是什么，最好每个note都有它所对的音。我是我现在比较希望看到的图
你也不用说LN是你的style 或者说什么黑星谱面 我都知道了，我也算是蛮理解玩家的感受的。适度的使用长条能增加趣味性 过分的使用长条破坏整个谱面，
多看看lieselotte的图
如果你还要我继续细致的摸的话 你在发我一次PM
tangjinxi
57 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
tangjinxi

victorica_db wrote:

首先说最主要的几点吧
EZ NM HD全部减少LN
下降难度
尽量不要在NM中使用太多的双阶梯 最好把变速删了 新手并不能玩
用LN的时候考虑音乐结合手感
并不是所有的钢琴都必须都要用LN来写出来
低难度注意音的取舍不要全部取
另外最高难度
你全程都是LN 虽然我不能玩 但是我还是想说几句 玩的时候的感觉固然重要 也要多多注意整个音乐的衔接
不要为了堆难度 强行多很多note
希望你能够注意一下 mapper作图的思路不能总跟着这样的玩家的想法。我怎么打起来爽那就怎么放，我比较死板 我喜欢的是那种谱面能让我很清晰的知道你在写什么 你做整个图的思路是什么，最好每个note都有它所对的音。我是我现在比较希望看到的图
你也不用说LN是你的style 或者说什么黑星谱面 我都知道了，我也算是蛮理解玩家的感受的。适度的使用长条能增加趣味性 过分的使用长条破坏整个谱面，
多看看lieselotte的图
如果你还要我继续细致的摸的话 你在发我一次PM
谢谢DB哥指点QAQ，前3个难度我会好好改得了，最后一个难度我不打算rank了，不管了QAQ
nelquaza
11 posts
Joined July 2013
nelquaza
why isnt lv.35 up for rank? its a really good map
tangjinxi
57 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
tangjinxi

nelquaza wrote:

why isnt lv.35 up for rank? its a really good map
Thank you~But this diff. have too many LN ，althought i love LN,but BN,Modder don't think so T_T
nelquaza
11 posts
Joined July 2013
nelquaza
But....... LN IS LIFE!!!! YOU GOTTA RANK IT :)
tangjinxi
57 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
tangjinxi

Spy wrote:

挖起來叫我
间谍哥你被ban了？！
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