ctpsky wrote:

My English is no good
My Mod is no good
然而这句话并没有什么卵用

避免ren哥吐槽通篇nazi
我还是摸下节奏排列
然而并不是很好

[Hard]
00:17:012 (3) - overlap 没对齐这种是故意错开的
我认为可以remove
00:17:326 (1) - Copy 00:16:069 (2) ok
00:18:583 (2) - 拉直换了个
00:26:754 (1) - 没包好ok
00:36:810 (5) - 往左放一些 124,232 很不错ok
00:39:953 (1) - overlap
00:47:495 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏方面我倾向于copy前面那段
00:50:166 - 然而我并没有听见有什么音这种短滑条的是vocal
01:00:066 (1) - 我认为放这里并不好
01:40:292 (1) - overlap 没对齐 怀疑CV
01:42:492 (4) - ^
01:57:891 (1,2) - 没包好ok
01:59:776 (3) - overlap没对齐
02:12:661 (4,1) - 4往右边放 1和前面的2overlap
02:16:746 (3) - 这不好吧
02:36:859 (3) - 我觉得可以拉开点


上班 normal 就不摸了

1. 01:25:835 (5) - 172,84
2. 其实你觉得两拍一个NC怎么样。。。
3. 02:50:687 (5,6) - 看起来并不流畅，5和7可以都内凹

1. 00:19:840 (1,2) - 可以试下逆九十度
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:696 (4,1) - 叠好呗，有点粗糙的感觉
4. 01:27:721 (1) - 01:40:292 (1) - 单点表现力强些
5. 01:55:376 (1) - 前后距离反了？没跳重音上
6. 02:04:804 (3) - 340,215
   玩着略卡，感觉3/4用的有点牵强
7. 其他美丽

AIR wrote:

多么残酷！587都忍不了要开queue了！

[Normal]

1. 01:25:835 (5) - 172,84ok
2. 其实你觉得两拍一个NC怎么样。。。两小节吧，现在就是
3. 02:50:687 (5,6) - 看起来并不流畅，5和7可以都内凹不用

[Hard]

1. 00:19:840 (1,2) - 可以试下逆九十度然而效果一般
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:696 (4,1) - 叠好呗，有点粗糙的感觉故意的，不然打图的时候不会分开
4. 01:27:721 (1) - 01:40:292 (1) - 单点表现力强些ok
5. 01:55:376 (1) - 前后距离反了？没跳重音上
6. 02:04:804 (3) - 340,215ok
   玩着略卡，感觉3/4用的有点牵强
7. 其他美丽

巴哩啦啦啦

imoutosan wrote:

From PM

[General]

tag和source只有这么点吗……

[Normal]

00:58:809 (3,4) - 我觉得把drumsample和soft whistle都换一下更好 后面如果有相同下法的同理然而这样并不是很好听
01:52:862 (4) - 红点变白点白点没那么弯
03:03:257 (1) - 头加normal，然后给哨子上soft然而我这是系统的加音效，只改一处不太好

[Hard]

00:39:953 (1) - 再错开点 和别的地方统一
00:59:123 (4) - 随便加个白点拉成弯的 不至于让我以为你是djpopok
01:09:180 (4) - ^ok
01:32:121 (5) - 移到4的左边做个跳 这样和前面是一致的反向跳ok
02:00:090 (1) - 建议叠在右边 这样和2不挤 至于后面的note自己调整吧
02:20:518 (1) - 拆成slider+note note放在下面
02:56:972 (3) - ^
02:56:972 (3) - 然而drum whistle并不好听

没什么好摸的 我是低难度无flow派

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Hard]
感觉很多地方视觉DS不一致 有些感觉不错有些则是瑕疵了
比如00:38:067 (3)、00:53:152 (2)、00:58:809 (3)之类
00:39:953 (1) - 没完全遮住
02:05:119 (4,5,1) - 对于弧形slider来说这样的叠法不太好看 感觉只适合于直slider像02:10:147 (5,6,1)就挺好，建议完全重叠。类似地方不再指出


[Normal]
01:05:094 (4) - 这个slider的锚点感觉可以简化一下……ok

继拯救了华语乐坛后乃又开始拯救世界名曲了233

Rakuen wrote:

As requested!

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Timing

• Offset +24+12 maybe need discuss
  
  Feel 00:57:552 - and 01:45:320 - can be good KIAI if u want ^_^the last part high passion^_^

Hitsound

• Maybe try this for soft-hitclap? http://puu.sh/gJoMS/5b1abce84c.wav , quite fit imo ;3
  
  Becoz the clap from 01:22:693 - to 01:44:691 - doesn't fit the song imoadd as normal-hitclap

Normal

1. 01:52:234 - Clapok
2. 01:54:748 - ^ok
3. 02:10:461 - Whistle?ok
4. 02:19:889 - Clapok
5. The Normal set hitsound at last part sounds a bit random
   
   Please check whole diff to prevent missing hitsounds

Hard

1. Same hitsounds as Normal, it looks like used hitsound copier OTZ
   
2. 02:32:460 (4,1) - Move this closer to 02:31:831 (3) - to be more neat?ok

Call me back!

Rakuen wrote:

Recheck!

no kd

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Offset is ok ^_^

It's up to u

Normal

1. Try slider tick rate 2? Sounds not bad since it was str 2 at fisrt, ok

Hard

1. Slider tick rate 2? since it was str 2 at fisrt, ok
2. 01:40:303 (5) - NC?ok
3. 01:42:189 - Normal add clap? (same as Normal diff)2b or not 2b it's a question, you point it out, so ok

Call me back!

1. Enya's offcial website refers to this store, where title is Trains and Winter Rains (A in the "and" is not capitalized"). Fix the title, please
2. There's an inconsistency in your kiais. Since you have no guest diffs, why don't you make them consistent?

1. Try HP drain 3, please. It'll make more sense in the easiest diff. In addition, the map is relaxing and high HP may be spoiling this relaxing feeling for some players.
2. 01:16:419 - add a circle here and emove the slider. It will make the part a little easier and emphasize the clap. example
   Note: 02:03:873 (6) - 02:23:986 (6) - 03:06:726 (6) - similar with the pattern above. example
3. 01:36:218 (5) - the circle here isn't really necessary. It lands on minor sounds which can be easily ignored in E/N diffs. So, maybe we should remove this circle?
4. 02:09:215 (7) - minor - try to avoid this kind of overlaps. As the slider gets overlapped with gameplay elements it will look untidy. :c
5. 02:15:187 - the drum sound here gets ignored, at the same time you have it mapped at 02:04:816 (7) - which is quite inconsistent. I think you should replace 02:04:816 (7) - with a circle. It will give us more reasonable and consistent rhythm.
   
   You did pretty well, I like this diff. Just a few minor things I'd like to see fixed.

1. If you agreed to drop HP Drain on Normal, drop it here as well. So, we will keep your mapset balanced.
2. 01:10:134 (1,2) - minor - you don't often use this kind of overlaps, so, this one appears a little messy to me. You can keep it if that's intended or place a jump here if you want this part to look more polished.
3. 01:26:790 (4,5) - there is a very minor beat on (4) and jumping after it makes the map feel awkward. It's better to place a jump after the strong beat like 01:27:104 - and not before it. So, I suggest something like this.
   Note: 01:31:189 (4,5) - similar thing here. Example // 01:42:503 (5,1) - and here
4. 03:22:439 (4) - minor - sorry, can we have this one placed a little higher? otherwise, it might be overlapped with the score-meter. :c
   
   Nicely done! I don't have much to complain about. (except that some white ticks like 01:56:959 (4) - were left unclickable due to the way you follow vocals. but well, it's your choice of the rhythm and I respect it)

Please, fix the metadat, call me back and we'll restrore your precious bubble.

-Bakari- wrote:

Don't panic, it's just metadata.

[General]

1. Enya's offcial website refers to this store, where title is Trains and Winter Rains (A in the "and" is not capitalized"). Fix the title, please
2. There's an inconsistency in your kiais. Since you have no guest diffs, why don't you make them consistent?

[Normal]

1. Try HP drain 3, please. It'll make more sense in the easiest diff. In addition, the map is relaxing and high HP may be spoiling this relaxing feeling for some players.
2. 01:16:419 - add a circle here and emove the slider. It will make the part a little easier and emphasize the clap. example since the diff is very easy, and i don't like this rhythm, so no chenge
   Note: 02:03:873 (6) - 02:23:986 (6) - 03:06:726 (6) - similar with the pattern above. example
3. 01:36:218 (5) - the circle here isn't really necessary. It lands on minor sounds which can be easily ignored in E/N diffs. So, maybe we should remove this circle?
4. 02:09:215 (7) - minor - try to avoid this kind of overlaps. As the slider gets overlapped with gameplay elements it will look untidy. :c
5. 02:15:187 - the drum sound here gets ignored, at the same time you have it mapped at 02:04:816 (7) - which is quite inconsistent. I think you should replace 02:04:816 (7) - with a circle. It will give us more reasonable and consistent rhythm.
   
   You did pretty well, I like this diff. Just a few minor things I'd like to see fixed.

[Hard]

1. If you agreed to drop HP Drain on Normal, drop it here as well. So, we will keep your mapset balanced.
2. 01:10:134 (1,2) - minor - you don't often use this kind of overlaps, so, this one appears a little messy to me. You can keep it if that's intended or place a jump here if you want this part to look more polished.
3. 01:26:790 (4,5) - there is a very minor beat on (4) and jumping after it makes the map feel awkward. It's better to place a jump after the strong beat like 01:27:104 - and not before it. So, I suggest something like this.
   Note: 01:31:189 (4,5) - similar thing here. Example // 01:42:503 (5,1) - and here
4. 03:22:439 (4) - minor - sorry, can we have this one placed a little higher? otherwise, it might be overlapped with the score-meter. :c
   
   Nicely done! I don't have much to complain about. (except that some white ticks like 01:56:959 (4) - were left unclickable due to the way you follow vocals. but well, it's your choice of the rhythm and I respect it)

Please, fix the metadat, call me back and we'll restrore your precious bubble.