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kino77
Hiii~

[General]
The slow down warning better at 00:32:734,and you could try fade~

[Hard]
Kinda abused whistle,try more clap?
Normal hitsound after slow down?
00:07:877 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:13:363 (1) - ^
00:13:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is odd...try some changes?
00:20:734 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:23:477 (1) - ^
00:29:648 (1) - ^
00:34:593 (1) - ^
00:38:509 (1) - ^
00:44:958 (1) - ^
00:49:334 (1) - ^
00:53:250 (1) - ^
00:56:474 (1) - ^
00:24:334 (4) - Clap?

[Insane]
You need a better hitsound pattern

[Sallad]
00:08:820 - Add a note here?

Fine~Have a star~
Topic Starter
Zetsubou Sensei

kino77 wrote:

Hiii~

[General]
The slow down warning better at 00:32:734,and you could try fade~
Alright.

[Hard]
Kinda abused whistle,try more clap?Sure.
Normal hitsound after slow down? Nah..I prefer soft.
00:13:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is odd...try some changes? I like how it is.

[Insane]
You need a better hitsound pattern
I'll work on all my diffs.

[Sallad]
00:08:820 - Add a note here?
SALLAD!!! xP

Fine~Have a star~
Thanks~
Sallad4ever

TheVileOne wrote:

Sallad's Hard

Very well made.
Thank you very munch :)

kino77 wrote:

[Sallad]
00:08:820 - Add a note here?
well actually there's a note here before but I delete it cause I want to avoid using 1/4 for the 175 bpm, and personally I like it better this way (cause it's easier :P)

Thanks for the mod kino77 :)
Bikko

Bikko wrote:

Rule
  1. I don't care about genre. but no App, marathon, CTB, Taiko. and, no more than 4 diffs.
  2. Do me a favor and prevent me from a heart attack by refraining from posting extreme stream songs.
  3. If you disregard the rules, I will disregard you.
  4. Sometimes I won't mod your mapset and just pass it. in this case, I'll announce you why I didn't mod your mapset.
5 diffs, 175BPM streams is extream as well.

Oh, Zetsubou Sensei. plz dude. orz...
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i blame the song..... can't check the timing... sry. didn't checked video either since i don't want to download it.
unused .osb file.
not sure of the comboburst, but i don't think the width could be 500... ask someone who knows it to make sure.
SLOW DOWN doesn't fit... i mean you need a SB warning "slow down" but not picture shows over the BG.

when you want to add hitsounds to the slider's beats... don't add them on the slider since it will change the sounds of sliderslider (more noisy), click on every beat to add hitsounds plz.


[Easy]
00:12:334 (1,2,3,4) - change to 2 sliders will be much better, now the notes are too close to each other.
00:24:334 (3) - add finish to the end.
sliders... could be better...

[Normal]
00:22:620 (5,6) - this is weird.
00:46:686 (5) - should start 1/4 later. *sigh.
01:08:609 (4,5) - let them be 1/4 later.... though on blue tick it sounds not strange but you should try to play it .
need more works... still think you should pay more attention to slider's shape

[Hard]
00:13:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ...why so many circles...
00:49:334 (1) - *sigh, take this as an example. first tick: 1 grid up, second tick: 2 grids right, third tick: 1 grid left, feel better now?
01:08:266 (10) - ugly...

[Insane]
lead-in time in this diff is different from others... ok you know why, then set other diff's lead-in same as this one.
00:07:877 (1,2) - i grid left.
00:09:934 (2,3,4) - the spacing is not equal.
00:10:620 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...
00:15:077 (1,2,3) - ... spacing again and again. learn to turn off distance snap for some time.
00:33:672 (3,4,5,6,7) - ...tired.

[Sallad's Hard]
harder than insane? what the...
00:05:991 (1,2) - can't agree the spacing.... but your choice.
00:17:306 (1) - no need to new combo this... i guess it's for the double clap, but if just for this then remove it.
00:39:891 (8) - 1 grid up to keep symmetry.
nice.
Sallad4ever

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Sallad's Hard]
harder than insane? what the... Umm....well yeah it's true, but naming it insane is inappropriate imo seeing all the patterns are not on the insane category
00:05:991 (1,2) - can't agree the spacing.... but your choice. gosh I can't recall why this is happened, Fixed
00:17:306 (1) - no need to new combo this... i guess it's for the double clap, but if just for this then remove it. Ok
00:39:891 (8) - 1 grid up to keep symmetry. Done
Thanks for the mod Rin :)
Download: Nightmare - DIRTY (TV Size) (Zetsubou Sensei) [Sallad's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Zetsubou Sensei

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
unused .osb file.Fxed.
not sure of the comboburst, but i don't think the width could be 500... ask someone who knows it to make sure.
SLOW DOWN doesn't fit... i mean you need a SB warning "slow down" but not picture shows over the BG.
[/color]
when you want to add hitsounds to the slider's beats... don't add them on the slider since it will change the sounds of sliderslider (more noisy), click on every beat to add hitsounds plz.
I'll fix around.

[Easy]
00:12:334 (1,2,3,4) - change to 2 sliders will be much better, now the notes are too close to each other.I think its fine.
00:24:334 (3) - add finish to the end.Fixed.

[Normal]
00:46:686 (5) - should start 1/4 later. *sigh.Fixed...I thought i fixed that already >.<"
01:08:609 (4,5) - let them be 1/4 later.... though on blue tick it sounds not strange but you should try to play it .Fixed.

[Hard]
00:13:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ...why so many circles... I like it. Makes it hard.
00:49:334 (1) - *sigh, take this as an example. first tick: 1 grid up, second tick: 2 grids right, third tick: 1 grid left, feel better now???? Its a :D
01:08:266 (10) - ugly...Fixed.

[Insane]
lead-in time in this diff is different from others... ok you know why, then set other diff's lead-in same as this one.0.0 Fixed.
00:09:934 (2,3,4) - the spacing is not equal.Fixed.
00:10:620 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...Fixed.
00:15:077 (1,2,3) - ... spacing again and again. learn to turn off distance snap for some time.Fixed.
00:33:672 (3,4,5,6,7) - ...tired.
Fixed.

~Thanks
IceBeam
Some slider shapes are scaring me.But it's up to you.
Also,I'm against such an ending in your difficulties.Waiting for several notes after a break,w/o any lyrics,and you know...nvm.
Anyway,I'd like your map to be finished at 01:00:895,despite you won't follow this,for sure.

[Easy]
WTH? Increase OD by 2-3 ticks,and HP Drain a bit.

[Normal]
00:31:706 (1,2) - Use these notes:(00:31:706,00:32:220,00:32:734)

[Hard]
Fine...

[Insane]
00:13:363 (1,2,3) - No for this stream.It's unbeatable,and it doesn't fit with music,lyrics or etc.
00:37:357 (1,2,3) - 1 up?

[Sallad's Hard]
Rename to Insane,yeah,it's really insane,and it's the hardest diff.in this set.
00:27:763 (8) - Reverse Selection to continue the anti-jumping?
Well,it's pretty nice.

Don't have much else to say,good luck.
Star~
Topic Starter
Zetsubou Sensei

SadKangaroo wrote:

Anyway,I'd like your map to be finished at 01:00:895,despite you won't follow this,for sure.Exatly true :P

[Easy]
WTH? Increase OD by 2-3 ticks,and HP Drain a bit.
Its fine...

[Insane]
00:13:363 (1,2,3) - No for this stream.It's unbeatable,and it doesn't fit with music,lyrics or etc. Fixed.
00:37:357 (1,2,3) - 1 up?Fixed.

[Sallad's Hard]
Rename to Insane,yeah,it's really insane,and it's the hardest diff.in this set.
00:27:763 (8) - Reverse Selection to continue the anti-jumping?
Well,it's pretty nice.

Don't have much else to say,good luck.
Star~
Thanks~
Sallad4ever
R-really?
it's not that hard :o
ok let's wait for what the next modder have to say

Thanks for the mod SadKangaroo :D
Sakura
Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, please take or leave anything or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file detected, please remove and full submit

[Sallad's Hard]
I think you should rename this to Insane, or to "Another" or something of the like, this diff is the hardest difficulty of the set and also has the highest max score of the set.
Bah... cant find anything else >_>

[Insane]
Now this one plays more like a Hard, yeah you probably should swap the names of this and Sallad's diff
00:11:648 (7) - This slider looks very weird, try making the curve less pressed like that or just dont use bezier, if you want to use bezier, you could always try making a more smooth curve like so:
00:16:448 (2) - This slider could use a less sudden curve at the start, here's a suggestion:
00:21:591 (3) - Could look better, for instance you could try using 2 slider waypoints instead of 1, and make a much more rainbowish curve or something, like so:
00:27:077 (1) - Same comment as 00:11:648 (7)

[Hard]
Bigger circles please?
00:08:048 (2,3) - Try to avoid making the sliders' curves look so sudden it doesnt look pretty at all, you can take some of my suggestions for [Insane] in regards to that.
00:09:763 (2) - ^
00:11:648 (5,1,2) - ^ specially (1)
00:37:818 (5) - Might as well just make it linear, if you are going to do something like this

[Normal]
00:06:848 (1,2) - Could look better, is there any reason why you want the sliders start and end points so close? almost on top of each other? this is a good example of something that could look better:
Alternatively you could put 2 stacked notes on each. or lower down slider velocity so you can make better sliders.
00:07:877 (3) - Squarish waypoint patterns arent necessarily good. for example this looks ways better if you ask me:
--Repeat both for the copy pasted pattern---
00:23:477 (6) - Could be better, i've made a lot of examples on how to fix theese already so i'll let you decide what to use if you want to fix.
00:27:077 (3) - ^
00:33:212 (1) - It is overlapping (2), try to rearrange this slider and/or it's waypoints so to avoid overlapping (2)?
01:07:752 (3) - Curve is too sudden at the start, try to make the curve smoother like so:

[Easy]
More sliders that dont look very appealing, for instance sliders like 00:11:648 (3) and 00:16:106 (3) Could really be better, i've already pointed out many suggestions to make them better through the other difficulties.
00:20:734 (2,3) - Might as well stack them, since they are too close to each other.

Well, pretty much i'll recheck this later for a star, but those sliders dont look very appealing to me, Good Luck!~
Topic Starter
Zetsubou Sensei

Sakura Hana wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file detected, please remove and full submit Fixed.


[Insane]
00:11:648 (7) - This slider looks very weird, try making the curve less pressed like that or just dont use bezier, if you want to use bezier,
00:16:448 (2) - This slider could use a less sudden curve at the start, here's a suggestion:
00:21:591 (3) - Could look better, for instance you could try using 2 slider waypoints instead of 1, and make a much more rainbowish curve
00:27:077 (1) - Same comment as 00:11:648 (7)
Fixed.

[Hard]
Bigger circles please?
00:11:648 (5,1,2) - ^ specially (1)
Fixed.

[Normal]
00:06:848 (1,2) - Could look better, is there any reason why you want the sliders start and end points so close? almost on top of each other?
01:07:752 (3) - Curve is too sudden at the start, try to make the curve smoother like so:
Fixed.


Well, pretty much i'll recheck this later for a star, but those sliders dont look very appealing to me, Good Luck!~

~THANKS
Sonic Fumes
ZING.
Easy

Beginning Slder - Add Clap and Whistle sound.
Sallad4ever
Sorry I'm late :(

Zetsubou you can change the as sakura said but naming to insane is still pushing it, so maybe rename it to Sallad's Another or Sallad's Mix or if you have you're own idea for the name you can use it
Kiddo-Kun
SLOW DOWN.jpg is kinda ugly....W/e

Star
LesTrucsRoses
[Normal]
SPOILER
00:22:620 (5,6) - Don't overlap beats like this in a Normal.
00:31:620 (1) - To make this beat match the music, you'd have to move it back by 1 tick, However, it would be on a blue tick. If you confortable with blue ticks, move back by 1 tick.
00:48:643 (2,3) - Don't overlap beats like this in a Normal.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:16:448 (5,6,7) - Make 6 and 7 switch locations. This seems like it should be clockwise.
00:31:705 (1,2,3) - Combine these 3 beats into a repeating slider.
01:06:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too many overlapping beats. Especially since this combo would drain out your HP bar right at the end of the song.

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:31:705 (1,2,3) - Combine these 3 beats into a repeating slider.

Excellent!

Excellent map and song. Just fix SLOWDOWN.jpg
Topic Starter
Zetsubou Sensei

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal is fine...

Hard is fine...

Insane is fine..

Thanks for your mod/Star...Lol overlapping is fine xP ...

Excellent map and song. Just fix SLOWDOWN.jpg
Mafiamaster
Can we get 1 more time checker? I feel the timing is a little iffy still.

Oh yeah, mp3 is 320kbps which is unrankable. Encode it to 256kbps or lower~
lovhin456

Mafiamaster wrote:

Can we get 1 more time checker? I feel the timing is a little iffy still.

Oh yeah, mp3 is 320kbps which is unrankable. Encode it to 256kbps or lower~
Here have a 256kbps mp3 :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?1lh7bh94t2o9hb5
Offset might change
Topic Starter
Zetsubou Sensei

lovhin456 wrote:

Mafiamaster wrote:

Can we get 1 more time checker? I feel the timing is a little iffy still.

Oh yeah, mp3 is 320kbps which is unrankable. Encode it to 256kbps or lower~
Here have a 256kbps mp3 :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?1lh7bh94t2o9hb5
Offset might change
Thanks lovhin456 ... >.< i forgot about that new rule... >.> now i just need to find the offset T^T...

If anyone finds it TELL MEH! xD

(Thanks for pointing that out mafia)
Topic Starter
Zetsubou Sensei
Nevermind...I believe I found it =P
Sallad4ever
revive this please :(
don't give up
noneed
why graved ;_;
I really liked the map :( pls revive it
Renard
:)
Loire
;)
Mapian101
I love this map. <3 I wish it was not graveyarded.
skrlet13
I love this map! Congratulations, is a good work! :)
Mapian101
Still waiting hopefully for it to be ranked <3
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