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[Sallad's Hard]I think you should rename this to Insane, or to "Another" or something of the like, this diff is the hardest difficulty of the set and also has the highest max score of the set.
Bah... cant find anything else >_>
[Insane]Now this one plays more like a Hard, yeah you probably should swap the names of this and Sallad's diff
00:11:648 (7) - This slider looks very weird, try making the curve less pressed like that or just dont use bezier, if you want to use bezier, you could always try making a more smooth curve like so:
00:16:448 (2) - This slider could use a less sudden curve at the start, here's a suggestion:
00:21:591 (3) - Could look better, for instance you could try using 2 slider waypoints instead of 1, and make a much more rainbowish curve or something, like so:
00:27:077 (1) - Same comment as 00:11:648 (7)
[Hard]Bigger circles please?
00:08:048 (2,3) - Try to avoid making the sliders' curves look so sudden it doesnt look pretty at all, you can take some of my suggestions for [Insane] in regards to that.
00:09:763 (2) - ^
00:11:648 (5,1,2) - ^ specially (1)
00:37:818 (5) - Might as well just make it linear, if you are going to do something like this
[Normal]00:06:848 (1,2) - Could look better, is there any reason why you want the sliders start and end points so close? almost on top of each other? this is a good example of something that could look better:
Alternatively you could put 2 stacked notes on each. or lower down slider velocity so you can make better sliders.
00:07:877 (3) - Squarish waypoint patterns arent necessarily good. for example this looks ways better if you ask me:
--Repeat both for the copy pasted pattern---
00:23:477 (6) - Could be better, i've made a lot of examples on how to fix theese already so i'll let you decide what to use if you want to fix.
00:27:077 (3) - ^
00:33:212 (1) - It is overlapping (2), try to rearrange this slider and/or it's waypoints so to avoid overlapping (2)?
01:07:752 (3) - Curve is too sudden at the start, try to make the curve smoother like so:
[Easy]More sliders that dont look very appealing, for instance sliders like 00:11:648 (3) and 00:16:106 (3) Could really be better, i've already pointed out many suggestions to make them better through the other difficulties.
00:20:734 (2,3) - Might as well stack them, since they are too close to each other.
Well, pretty much i'll recheck this later for a star, but those sliders dont look very appealing to me, Good Luck!~