Sushi971 wrote:

As I promised, you catched my attention

[Easy]
look at this spinner : 00:22:682 (1) and this one : 01:13:152 (1) . they are mapped on the same thing, with different timings. choose one.
Made the first one start earlier

[Normal]
Same thing as Easy. choose a timing for the two spinners.
Same as normal, this time I made the first one look like the second one, though.
02:45:799 (1) - start this 1/2 beay earlier, looks better
True ;_;

[Insane]
curves!
nothing to say~


Hey, I really like the song and the map. I appreciate the work on the curves and all the stuff. Here's a star, your map deserves it

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All DIffs~
- I think you should change the combocolors... Blue and Red (this one not that much, but maybe because of the background) make a so weird contrast with the black approachcircle :/ and sometimes (like on Insane) it's hard to notice them. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11786)
AAAH, It's just that I love the curent Red/Blue/Green/Yellow color scheme >_<"! I'll try with a light Blue, please give me feedback on this one. The red color may be changed later, I'm just not sure about it >_<"

~Easy~
- Add Dusty to Tags here~
Whoops

01:13:152 (1) - Shorten 1/1 note. The next note is too close to the end of the spinner (Remember it's an Easy~ give newbies some time to recover x3) >_< My bad. I don't like how it follows the music, but this easy is hard enough for an easy.

~Normal~
02:02:917 (1) - Hmm... I'm not a fan of having jumps on Normal diffs...
02:05:741 (1) - ^
Completely readeable, I suppose <_<, Not changed, sorry
02:41:035 (1) - Flip vertically? Not done D:

~Insane~
- I'd say to decrease OD 1 tick... but meh, up to you xD Actually, the OD was one grid higher when I submitted, I must say, I'mm a fan of high ODs DX!

00:11:035 (3,4,5) - Center them with the slider (Yeah that's nazi I know ;w;)They are centered. I alredy explained this. The stack makes it look better when playing when it's spaced like that. Don't worry, it is not nazi, but it's completely different when playing XD!

Nice map!! *star*

Dusty wrote:

fixed & fixed & :p and some other stuff too

Shinxyn wrote:

Dark circles hard to see ><! oh well~
>_> <_< be safe and add an approachcircle.png too?My bad, I must say I saw this coming >_<
/me sees extra space in tags for some reason
Extra space? The full name of the song is "The Only Difference Between Matrydom and Suicide is Press Coverage", but I cannot add that long name. I've heard it as just "The Only Difference", though, so I added it like that... >_> Is that what you meant with "extra space, right?"

Easy-
00:53:741 (1) - I don't mind the claps that much, but... its the only ones like this on this diff...? <_< touché
01:38:917 (1) - ....1/2 is early, 1/4 is late... eh.. not 1/6... end on 1/8?? o_o
02:09:976 (1) - have the end quieter? or nearly silence it...? Done
02:45:976 (1) - have is gradually silence instead of instantly? :S Done
~~ Fair enough, could use some more finishes near end Added some <3

Normal-
00:10:152 (1) - clap here sound extra :< remove please I knew it >_<!"
00:50:564 (1,2,3) - this part totally ruins this map's pace! xD ...It does? How o_o" Please explain that to me Shinxyn-sama ;_;!
01:38:917 (1) - same as Easy ><? Technically, I could now say that I'm a pro, mapping on 1/8 :3
02:45:799 (1) - ^ Done
Fine, could also use finishes near end. (... like Insane has!) <3

Insane-
00:36:270 (4,5,6) - add the custom whistles?... at least on 6 ><! Done
00:47:564 (4,5,6) - ^ (same for the next two kiai times...?)
01:38:917 (1) - same as Easy/Normal?
02:03:623 (3,4) - gah, make theses new combo or spread them out a bit so it's more visible (same colour sliders aren't easy to see ><) Gah?! the hunky norwegalicous supermodel is here ?! (I'm I the only one who sees the Fairly OddParens <_<?) Oh yeah, sone
02:45:799 (1) - same as Easy/Normal... just don't overdo it like Dusty's xD Ok XD!
Great~!

Hmm, yea, willing to bubble this~

0_o wrote:

Easy
02:09:976 (1) - Shorten by 1/2 and remove the "whistle"? It sounds kinda weird ending where it does now. I'll wait on Shynxin-sama's opinion on this one. I'd keep it as it is, though.
02:21:270 (1) - This note is a little awkward since it feels like it should be 1/2 sooner. I know that it's Easy and you're trying to avoid offbeats but in this case the player has heard the chorus several times already so they would have a pretty good idea where to hit it. So I would move it 1/2 back and add a note at 02:21:623. Not done D:, sorry, this easy it's hard enough as it is now >_<
02:36:093 (1) - Maybe consider moving this from the centre? Newbies might have trouble with it since the hitburst from the spinner covers up the note. Not a huge deal though, so your call. Done

Everything else is pretty solid. Nice song too ^_^ Have a star.

Krisom wrote:

Please wait until jockey mods this, also, I don't know what Dusty-sensei may do with his mods, so I'll just wait for now...

Krisom wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

/me sees extra space in tags for some reason
Extra space? The full name of the song is "The Only Difference Between Matrydom and Suicide is Press Coverage", but I cannot add that long name. I've heard it as just "The Only Difference", though, so I added it like that... >_> Is that what you meant with "extra space, right?"
no, I literally meant there's an extra space- between "out" and "Between", no big deal, just something I saw at glance xD
Normal-
00:50:564 (1,2,3) - this part totally ruins this map's pace! xD ...It does? How o_o" Please explain that to me Shinxyn-sama ;_;! Ah, cuz the map was following a nice slow pace (notes were a beat apart), then here, suddenly it has beats 1/2 apart plus the non-distance-snap spacing, which was quite sudden :(

Krisom wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

/me sees extra space in tags for some reason
Extra space? The full name of the song is "The Only Difference Between Matrydom and Suicide is Press Coverage", but I cannot add that long name. I've heard it as just "The Only Difference", though, so I added it like that... >_> Is that what you meant with "extra space, right?"
no, I literally meant there's an extra space- between "out" and "Between", no big deal, just something I saw at glance xD
Will fix after jockey's mod. Promise D:!
Normal-
00:50:564 (1,2,3) - this part totally ruins this map's pace! xD ...It does? How o_o" Please explain that to me Shinxyn-sama ;_;! Ah, cuz the map was following a nice slow pace (notes were a beat apart), then here, suddenly it has beats 1/2 apart plus the non-distance-snap spacing, which was quite sudden Well, Im not really willing to change the 1/2 beat, but I suppose I could try harder at remaking that non-distance snap. Will fix after jockey's mod.

shinxyn-sama? D: what the?

Dusty wrote:

well, I fixed everything except the end slider

1. I understand the short name, though I'm usually picky about capitalization. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Panic!_at_the_Disco tells me "At The" shouldn't be capitalized.
2. Offset sounds more like 102.

Krisom wrote:

105 for Gens...98 for jockey

Krisom wrote:

jockeytitan