DM Ashura - Elise

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Topic Starter
Streliteela
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年2月15日 at 7:06:15

Artist: DM Ashura
Title: Elise
Source: PUMP IT UP - 2013 FIESTA 2 -
Tags: Frey Infinity Beethoven Für Elise 엘리제 3/4 time waltz hard symphonic electronic remix Rhythm Master
BPM: 108
Filesize: 5339kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Frey's Light Insane (3.99 stars, 376 notes)
  2. Hard (2.98 stars, 289 notes)
  3. Insane (5.02 stars, 517 notes)
  4. Normal (1.9 stars, 163 notes)


Download: DM Ashura - Elise
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6
Remap everything after a year :3
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Light Insane by Frey =^owo^=
Timing by Charles445
Metadata checking by IamKwaN
Thanks for your help~Enjoy~:D
Spiral
好听
Narcissu


00:26:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 這些有鋼琴的地方都可以帶上whistle,相對的,雖然使用了80音量和5音量偽消音,但是soft-hitnormal打起來什麼都感覺不到,沒進edit完全看不出來……那些5%都去掉完全沒有問題

01:49:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 看得出是用跳梗強調,但是不得不說這個梗的難度和那些1/4滑條還有串比起來簡直毫無壓力,同理的其他跳梗也可以放開手去跳,跳比串難很正常但是反過來就很奇怪imo

00:02:484 - 01:31:371 - 這兩個綠線出錯了導致最後的kiai是4/4,大概因為少女在4/4的情況下設置了綠線然後更換了紅線,刪了重新下就行了
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Narcissu wrote:


良心麻婆不要打我_(X.」∠)_

00:26:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 這些有鋼琴的地方都可以帶上whistle,相對的,雖然使用了80音量和5音量偽消音,但是soft-hitnormal打起來什麼都感覺不到,沒進edit完全看不出來……那些5%都去掉完全沒有問題
嗯嗯了解,现在音效只是暂时的,确认下来音效以后会对音量进行调整~

01:49:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 看得出是用跳梗強調,但是不得不說這個梗的難度和那些1/4滑條還有串比起來簡直毫無壓力,同理的其他跳梗也可以放開手去跳,跳比串難很正常但是反過來就很奇怪imo
ahh滑条太坑啦确实XDD不过既然毫无压力的话……那我就再拉开一点距离吧哇哈哈(被踢飞

00:02:484 - 01:31:371 - 這兩個綠線出錯了導致最後的kiai是4/4,大概因為少女在4/4的情況下設置了綠線然後更換了紅線,刪了重新下就行了
好的改过来了,我好蠢一开始竟一直按4/4加的所有线;w;
为感谢摸图,系统赠送您橙武“二楼”(伪)一个,请注意查收owo
EncoreW
[General]


看了timing尿都吓出来几滴,而且Hard 就是最低难度了?


[Frey]


00:11:928 (1,2,3,4) - 这地方似乎没啥必要按BPM来放间距,四个note之间用一样的间距感觉好看一点,四个不同BPM之间都用了1.2SV感觉看上去有点奇怪,不过不动它似乎倒也影响不大

00:15:816 (1) - 这里应该是个drum 的finish 的音效吧

00:19:704 (6) - 这个的话感觉放00:18:778 (3) - 这里挺好

00:25:630 (4) - 和00:26:556 (7) - 的尾部应该叠一起吧,否则感觉不太好看

00:28:778 (9,1,2,3) - 我觉得这四个东西最好是用一个NC

00:29:149 (1) - 这里的话我觉得没1/2加大一点音量比较好比如5%,一直到00:30:260 (4) - 这里

00:43:408 (5,1) - 这两个听上去似乎是一个XXXXX X这样子的更加明显

00:48:593 (1,2,3,4) - 00:49:519 (3,6) - 00:50:815 (1,2,3,4) - 00:51:741 (3,6,1) - finish,而且音效我觉得最好强一点

01:04:519 (6,1,2,3) - 似乎不是太正

01:36:556 (3,4) - blanket


[Narcissu]


开头的音效太响了,00:31:371 - 一直到这里为止,感觉音量都太大,100%的soft直接聋了

00:44:519 (4) - 逆时针转45度左右放回原来地方

00:45:445 (3) - 这里不是两个相差1/2的circle 吗,1/4折返滑条怎么听出来的?

不知道能不能在Hard放1/8滑条,就算有我也觉得应该消音

00:46:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 为啥不放点什么梗出来就用了单纯的重叠?

01:22:482 (1) - 这个为啥又突出来一点。。

我草居然是全程100%soft,音效是没做过还是什么的?
Narcissu

tm1209 wrote:

开头的音效太响了,00:31:371 - 一直到这里为止,感觉音量都太大,100%的soft直接聋了 …… 這不是我幹的!我是全程60沒音效【喂喂喂

00:44:519 (4) - 逆时针转45度左右放回原来地方……

00:45:445 (3) - 这里不是两个相差1/2的circle 吗,1/4折返滑条怎么听出来的?……額,必然是一時興起……改了……

不知道能不能在Hard放1/8滑条,就算有我也觉得应该消音……大丈夫萌大奶,大概……

00:46:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 为啥不放点什么梗出来就用了单纯的重叠?……一堆圈放梗爆星不可避,然而滑條已經放太多了……

01:22:482 (1) - 这个为啥又突出来一点。。……額,因為前面三個是鼓這個是鋼琴

我草居然是全程100%soft,音效是没做过还是什么的?……撒……我也不知道,我上交的時候是全程60,我去問問…
Frey

tm1209 wrote:

[Frey]

00:11:928 (1,2,3,4) - 这地方似乎没啥必要按BPM来放间距,四个note之间用一样的间距感觉好看一点,四个不同BPM之间都用了1.2SV感觉看上去有点奇怪,不过不动它似乎倒也影响不大
不按BPM放第一次玩就会看不出变速,我不是很喜欢这样。

00:15:816 (1) - 这里应该是个drum 的finish 的音效吧
Drum音太违和了,在钢琴曲里面用。

00:19:704 (6) - 这个的话感觉放00:18:778 (3) - 这里挺好
暂时不变,你说的也没错。

00:25:630 (4) - 和00:26:556 (7) - 的尾部应该叠一起吧,否则感觉不太好看
Edit明显,游戏里面你察觉不到的。

00:28:778 (9,1,2,3) - 我觉得这四个东西最好是用一个NC
Fixed,在9那里用了NC

00:29:149 (1) - 这里的话我觉得没1/2加大一点音量比较好比如5%,一直到00:30:260 (4) - 这里
5%有点危险,我不敢用。我还是用这样的音效就好。

00:43:408 (5,1) - 这两个听上去似乎是一个XXXXX X这样子的更加明显
我不是很想做成连打,而且也不明显。

00:48:593 (1,2,3,4) - 00:49:519 (3,6) - 00:50:815 (1,2,3,4) - 00:51:741 (3,6,1) - finish,而且音效我觉得最好强一点
Fixed, 00:49:149 (4) - 00:51:371 (4) - 已添加

01:04:519 (6,1,2,3) - 似乎不是太正
Fixed

01:36:556 (3,4) - blanket
Fixed
感谢你的mod! :)

osu file format v14

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Title:Elise
TitleUnicode:Elise
Artist:DM Ashura
ArtistUnicode:DM Ashura
Creator:Streliteela
Version:Frey's Light Insane
Source:
Tags:Rhythm Master Pump It Up Infinity Frey Narcissu
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267,309,46927,6,0,P|225:315|184:324,1,85
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368,80,48593,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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156,192,51741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,61,52019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,61,52112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,52297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,52390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,224,52482,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,228,52574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,232,52667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,236,52760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,204,53315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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56,212,53501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,216,53593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,216,54149,6,0,P|48:148|52:100,2,85
104,288,54704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,72,55260,5,0,0:0:0:0:
215,44,55445,2,0,P|176:58|135:71,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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235,140,56001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,72,56186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,44,56371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,100,59890,2,0,P|264:112|320:116,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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356,252,61927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,62112,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,62297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,62482,6,0,B|336:52|336:104|424:76,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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364,240,63223,2,0,P|276:252|248:252,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,119,63593,2,0,P|174:64|256:76,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,248,71186,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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244,48,72390,1,0,0:2:0:0:
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240,292,75075,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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256,260,81371,2,0,P|184:272|136:276,1,85
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332,144,86464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,116,86556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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308,116,93222,2,0,P|305:73|312:31,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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60,60,104333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,140,104519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,104704,2,0,P|288:164|332:152,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,72,105074,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,140,105259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,105445,2,0,P|152:300|168:348,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,105815,5,2,0:0:0:0:
266,332,105907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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324,140,107852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,193,112852,6,0,L|240:220,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,113222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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sodarose
[I]
ar可以再高一点
01:17:667 (3) - 折返箭头有点读不清 ctrl+g
01:25:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 每串之间的间距建议跟前面不要那么大

[Frey]
感觉音效不是很够啊

神马破摸不懂
star
SnowNiNo_
From my queue
我MOD都MOD我自己打不順或卡卡的地方 ;)
由於我打了3PC都fail所以就不PO成績照了QWQ

[Insane]
00:26:927 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 問題很大 很不好讀呢=W= (第一次打FAIL在這邊)
00:28:223 (4) - 換個位子 像是 76 256
00:28:593 (2,3,4) - DS 大一點會比較好讀 因為你後面接連打
00:44:334 (3,4,5,6) - 我之後這裡剛好有beat可是這邊突然這樣擺真的很不好打
01:25:538 - 這種連打建議在8的時候就nc 然後拉ds, 而且音樂也是在9的時候要nc 會比較好讀 也比較好打 (第2次fail..)
01:30:260 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 其實這邊不必要連打...

Nice hitsound XD
祝好運 M8
give a star :3
moonlightleaf
[Normal]

00:12:927 (2) - 没啥必要 删了吧

00:40:260 (1,2) - 这倾斜度..我觉得和后面3平行好.2的话我会放前面3上,当然没啥问题就是

[Hard]

00:04:428 (2) - ctrl+g

00:25:815 (1,4) - stack ,啊 有好多差1px的 算了

01:39:889 (3,1) - 都ctrl+g一次

01:42:111 (6) - ctrl+g

01:48:037 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 不适合3连 2都删了

01:52:482 (1,2,3) - ^

[浮雷女神]

00:03:595 (2,3) - ctrl+g

00:12:231 (2,3,4) - 换红线是否需要NC

00:16:741 (3,4) - 旋转4 增加DS

00:30:815 (7,8,1) - 确切的说 7-8ds要比8-1小 1才是加DS的地方

00:52:297 (7,8,1) - 一般的 这3个是要叠一起

01:17:297 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 我觉得3开始才是正确的5连 后面不适合

[Insane]

00:16:186 (2) - ctrl+g

01:45:445 (3,4) - 试试这样?


insane 何必做那么难呢
Hollow Wings
as ur req

Insane

  1. 00:21:186 (7,1) - 这个跳太大了,还是小点。
  2. 00:48:038 (1) - 我觉得吧,那几个很轻的钢琴还是要跟一下,你在00:50:260 (1,2,3) - 都跟了,以及我第一次看你这边没跟感觉怪怪的。位置的话其实stack也无妨,你自己看吧。
  3. 01:11:001 (3) - 漏了nc吧?
  4. 01:45:630 (4) - 总觉得放在312,334那边比较好。
  5. 01:53:222 (1,2) - 再怎么说好像也太大了点。。。建议改小或者换梗。
  6. 比我上次看的好像又好了点,射个星。

Frey's Light Insane

  1. 00:36:556 (3,4) - 总觉得这个很别扭,之前都是顺flow,这边突然打逆,柑橘很怪,建议换梗。
  2. 全图基本都是在顺时针转hhhhhh,做的挺好。

Hard

  1. 00:51:371 (1,2,3,4) - 说好的正五边形呢?
  2. 01:35:259 (4,1) - 这,挡了没挡呢?建议改。
  3. 最后那段,柑橘有点难了,和norma柑橘。。。好吧mapset我也是没法拿捏,找bn书吧。。。

Normal

  1. 00:41:001 (2) - 这个显然放在00:39:149 (3) - 头上比较好吧。。。flow顺,其实没挡啊都折返了。
  2. 00:43:408 (5) - 好,既然你normal要摆这种复杂节奏,那么你做个easy是不可避了,不然一定被艹。
s爷爷那么勤快。。。有我勤快吗?hhh

good luck
TequilaWolf
these are only suggestions.

Insane-

00:29:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I would move this whole stream somewhere upper and to the right, because it's not the most fun thing to read right after the 1/2 pattern before. flows slightly better too
00:39:519 (1,1) - I feel like this can be more fun if you make the spacing gap even wider o:
00:42:390 - note?
00:46:834 - I would love a note here too o:
01:04:704 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I feel like there is a bit too much rest here, for example I would put something at 01:08:223 and so on for more variety? I understand your idea to want to keep the consistency though xD
01:13:593 (1) - same as the above part
01:25:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this is one of the hardest parts of the song for me and I think it's too..sudden. ya I understand the music is silent before that but maybe you can replace half of the first stream with some 1/4 sliders or something..? dunno
01:28:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think gradually reduce volume a lot more xD too noisy
01:30:260 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - some kind of overlap with 01:29:698 (1) - so can be hard to read especially it is immediately a very difficult jumpstream
01:45:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - my favourite pattern in this map o:

gl c:
Kalibe
As requested ~:3
  1. Change Audio Lead-In in all diffs: ( 262 ) -> ( 1000~1500 ) just to be safe.
  2. soft-hitclap3 is probably unused. I don't see any sampleset 3 on green lines tho,


Normal :
  1. You can raise HP to 4 as you did it with OD imo.
  2. 00:18:038 (3,1) - Switch NC maybe? You do that in 00:16:186 (2,1) - I think you follow every downbeat, right? OR 00:16:927 (1) - Delete this NC. Why? - because i see later you follow 2 downbeats xd.
  3. 00:25:815 (1,3) - Switch NC too .. then delete NC 00:27:297 (1) - here of course.
  4. 01:39:148 (1) - Ctrl J this slider will help gameplay a bit.
  5. 01:12:482 (3,2) - Stack these slider properly.
  6. 01:52:482 (1,3) - Switch NC according to NC stuff you here.. yup.
  7. Pretty nice !


Hard :
  1. 00:49:149 - Unnessesary green line. Feel free to delete it.
  2. 00:02:761 (2) - Add whistle on slider end? It makes emphasis with other whistles buddy. :3
  3. 00:21:001 (3,1) - I'm not a fan of this overlap.. I would change it to smth other .. tadah ? ( I stacked on (1) end if you don't see )
  4. 01:31:371 - This green line is also unnessesary. Red line gives the same volume and kiai time.
  5. Nice.


Frey's Light Insane :
  1. You sure about HP 7 ? I would change to 6, because it makes a consistent HP in all mapset. { 4,5,6,7... }
  2. 00:03:317 (1) - NC on red beats are not ok at all. Better to switch it with 00:02:484 (9) - if you can.
  3. 01:30:260 - Unnessesary green line imo.
  4. 00:44:334 (3,4,5,6) - minor - Soft sampleset is okay, but i prefer to change sampleset to drum for beats emphasis tho.
  5. 00:52:297 (7,8,1) - This looks weird to me. Why you just don't stack (1) on (7,8) ? You do that in previous triples.
  6. Cool one !


Ok, that's all. Nice song and map. Have a star ~:3
Good luck !
Frey

moonlightleaf wrote:

[浮雷女神]

00:03:595 (2,3) - ctrl+g LightInsane的话应该没必要这么做..虽然DS确实看起来很奇怪,但是这里不想用反向flow
00:12:231 (2,3,4) - 换红线是否需要NC 那换吧..
00:16:741 (3,4) - 旋转4 增加DS 意义不大
00:30:815 (7,8,1) - 确切的说 7-8ds要比8-1小 1才是加DS的地方 嘛,当时已经这么放了。我觉得不好改..算了。
00:52:297 (7,8,1) - 一般的 这3个是要叠一起 不叠感觉打起来也没什么不对的,个人。
01:17:297 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 我觉得3开始才是正确的5连 后面不适合 改完发现好像没什么差别...pass

Hollow Wings wrote:

Frey's Light Insane

  1. 00:36:556 (3,4) - 总觉得这个很别扭,之前都是顺flow,这边突然打逆,柑橘很怪,建议换梗。 fixed
  2. 全图基本都是在顺时针转hhhhhh,做的挺好。顺时针啊...大概是无意识中这么做的吧w

Kalibe wrote:

Frey's Light Insane :
  1. You sure about HP 7 ? I would change to 6, because it makes a consistent HP in all mapset. { 4,5,6,7... } ok.
  2. 00:03:317 (1) - NC on red beats are not ok at all. Better to switch it with 00:02:484 (9) - if you can. it's fine to me cuz it sounds like a start in waltz tempo
  3. 01:30:260 - Unnessesary green line imo. fixed
  4. 00:44:334 (3,4,5,6) - minor - Soft sampleset is okay, but i prefer to change sampleset to drum for beats emphasis tho. well I don't really want to use drum in this song...
  5. 00:52:297 (7,8,1) - This looks weird to me. Why you just don't stack (1) on (7,8) ? You do that in previous triples. fixed
  6. Cool one !
Thanks for your modding!

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212,160,45815,2,0,B|207:197|196:224|196:224|204:244|204:244|188:288|184:328,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,46371,2,0,P|80:192|68:152,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,160,46741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,309,46927,6,0,P|225:315|184:324,1,85
244,200,47297,2,0,P|286:205|327:214,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,92,47667,2,0,P|225:97|184:106,1,85
368,80,48038,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,80,48593,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,200,48778,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,296,48963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,49149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,49334,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,196,49426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,200,49519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,318,49704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,297,49796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,49889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,50075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,196,50167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,200,50260,1,6,0:0:0:0:
156,192,50815,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,51001,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,92,51186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,280,51371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,51556,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,51649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,51741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,61,51927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,61,52019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,61,52112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,52297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,52390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,52482,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,196,52574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,200,52667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,204,52760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,208,52853,2,0,L|192:192,3,42.5
136,168,53223,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,172,53315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,176,53408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,180,53501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,184,53593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,184,54149,6,0,P|56:116|60:68,2,85
112,256,54704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,72,55260,5,0,0:0:0:0:
215,44,55445,2,0,P|176:58|135:71,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,55815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,140,56001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,72,56186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,44,56371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,167,56556,6,0,P|164:240|172:276,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,216,56927,2,0,P|348:144|340:108,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57297,2,0,P|265:265|273:301,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,348,57667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,248,57853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,180,58038,6,0,P|268:196|160:208,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,80,58593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,180,58778,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,108,58964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,205,59149,2,0,P|176:280|96:332,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,59704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,59890,2,0,P|264:112|320:116,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,60260,6,0,P|388:128|368:48,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,116,60815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,200,61001,2,0,P|388:197|432:192,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,61371,2,0,P|211:310|168:316,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,252,61927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,62112,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,62297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,62482,6,0,B|336:52|336:104|424:76,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,188,63038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,240,63223,2,0,P|276:252|248:252,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,119,63593,2,0,P|174:64|256:76,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,243,64149,2,0,P|212:205|204:164,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,64519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,32,64704,5,6,0:2:0:0:
112,120,65075,1,2,0:2:0:0:
204,172,65445,1,2,0:2:0:0:
400,264,65815,5,2,0:2:0:0:
348,352,66186,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,308,66556,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,308,66741,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,308,66927,6,0,P|256:212|288:124,1,170,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
108,32,67667,2,0,P|108:128|76:216,1,170,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
28,280,68408,1,2,0:2:0:0:
116,336,68778,1,2,0:2:0:0:
140,328,68871,1,2,0:2:0:0:
164,320,68964,1,2,0:2:0:0:
188,312,69056,1,2,0:2:0:0:
212,304,69149,5,2,0:2:0:0:
252,212,69519,1,2,0:2:0:0:
168,152,69890,1,2,0:2:0:0:
128,248,70260,5,2,0:2:0:0:
256,356,70630,1,2,0:2:0:0:
384,248,71001,1,2,0:2:0:0:
384,248,71186,1,2,0:2:0:0:
384,248,71371,6,0,P|416:176|408:84,1,170,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
316,36,72112,1,2,0:2:0:0:
292,40,72204,1,0,0:2:0:0:
268,44,72297,1,0,0:2:0:0:
244,48,72390,1,0,0:2:0:0:
220,52,72482,6,0,L|156:40,3,42.5
252,124,72853,2,0,L|293:131,3,42.5,2|0|0|0,0:2|0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
196,180,73223,1,2,0:2:0:0:
172,176,73316,1,0,0:2:0:0:
148,172,73409,1,0,0:2:0:0:
124,168,73501,1,0,0:2:0:0:
100,164,73593,6,0,P|52:216|84:312,2,170,6|2|2,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74704,1,2,0:2:0:0:
240,292,75075,1,2,0:2:0:0:
160,224,75445,1,2,0:2:0:0:
160,224,75630,1,2,0:2:0:0:
160,224,75815,6,0,P|168:156|192:56,1,170,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,160,76556,2,0,P|344:228|320:328,1,170,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
220,344,77297,1,2,0:2:0:0:
140,280,77667,1,2,0:2:0:0:
132,256,77759,1,2,0:2:0:0:
128,232,77852,1,2,0:2:0:0:
124,208,77944,1,2,0:2:0:0:
124,184,78037,5,6,0:2:0:0:
160,88,78408,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,124,78778,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,260,79149,5,2,0:2:0:0:
352,296,79519,1,2,0:2:0:0:
388,200,79890,1,2,0:2:0:0:
388,200,80075,1,2,0:2:0:0:
388,200,80260,6,0,L|412:128|444:32,2,170,2|2|2,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,296,81186,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,260,81371,2,0,P|184:272|136:276,1,85
256,124,81741,2,0,P|328:112|376:108,1,85,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,96,82112,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,260,82482,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,256,83964,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,136,85538,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,124,85630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,85723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,124,85815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,136,85908,2,0,P|228:164|240:168,3,42.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,86278,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,86371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,144,86464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,116,86556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,88,86649,2,0,P|320:56|296:44,3,42.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,48,87019,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,64,87112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,87204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,120,87297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,148,87390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,87482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,196,87575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,87667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,252,87760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,87853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,296,87945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,88038,6,0,L|112:316,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,220,88256,2,0,L|76:276,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,184,88475,2,0,L|24:244,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,88694,6,0,L|74:61,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,177,88935,2,0,L|120:220,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,108,89185,2,0,L|182:65,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,188,89435,6,0,L|229:230,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,89698,2,0,L|360:248,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,264,89968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,264,90103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,216,90260,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,120,90445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,90630,2,0,P|264:200|216:212,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,176,91000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,80,91185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,91371,6,0,P|140:236|104:324,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,176,91926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,92111,2,0,P|212:164|248:168,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,128,92482,2,0,P|448:184|412:292,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,93037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,116,93222,2,0,P|305:73|312:31,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,128,93593,6,0,P|420:200|400:312,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,94148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,212,94333,2,0,L|336:224,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,94704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,200,94889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,292,95074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,212,95259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,112,95445,2,0,P|32:128|0:136,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,280,95815,6,0,P|168:296|252:320,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,200,96371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,96556,2,0,P|295:226|314:264,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,96926,2,0,P|264:76|196:140,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,97482,2,0,L|180:308,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,97852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,98037,6,0,L|324:7,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,27,98593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,195,98778,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,176,98963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,99148,6,0,P|148:100|80:156,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,336,99704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,195,99889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,236,100074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,336,100259,2,0,L|328:348,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,100815,2,0,P|404:244|396:192,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,101185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,132,101370,6,0,P|256:164|336:128,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,60,101926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,242,102111,2,0,L|436:160,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,102482,6,0,L|298:284,2,170,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,103593,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,260,103963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,60,104333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,140,104519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,104704,2,0,P|288:164|332:152,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,72,105074,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,140,105259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,105445,2,0,P|152:300|168:348,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,105815,5,2,0:0:0:0:
266,332,105907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,307,106000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,282,106092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,257,106185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,233,106277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,209,106370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,184,106463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,159,106556,2,0,P|243:132|252:100,3,42.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,56,106926,6,0,P|356:52|404:100,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,85,107296,2,0,L|483:78,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,212,107667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,140,107852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,276,108037,2,0,P|236:268|160:256,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,259,108408,2,0,P|116:284|84:320,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,148,108778,2,0,P|56:148|112:140,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,52,109148,6,0,P|215:52|135:36,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,109519,2,0,P|182:119|182:155,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,292,109889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,240,110259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,340,110445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110630,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,92,110815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,44,111000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,69,111092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,94,111185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,119,111277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,148,111370,6,0,P|84:176|44:188,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,187,111741,2,0,P|24:268|24:300,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,364,112111,2,0,P|218:283|218:251,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,72,112482,2,0,P|152:132|140:228,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,193,112852,6,0,L|240:220,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,113222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,113407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,244,113593,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,113685,12,0,115722,0:0:0:0:
Little
Hi.

[General]
  1. Your combo usage seems random in some places, especially in Normal and Hard. Please try to follow some kind of structure for your combos, like following the phrasing of the music.


[Normal]
  1. 00:23:593 (1,2,3) - May be better to change the rhythm to capture more of the melody: http://puu.sh/mqVpj/b89b80cdb0.jpg
  2. 00:50:260 (1,2) - Player will have a hard time reading this rhythm because you also used 1/1 stack earlier in the map. I recommend unstacking this.


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:575 (1,1) - What's the purpose of these new combos? They are not really necessary in my opinion.
  2. 01:04:704 (1) - In the section with the agitated theme, the style of mapping doesn't really capture the intensity of the music, and actually becomes kind of monotonous... If you listen to the original Für Elise, maybe you can get some concept of how this part of the music should feel. My recommendation is to place objects such that the movement speed changes to emphasize the strong notes (things like small jumps into strong notes). The things you did in Insane were good.
  3. 01:44:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This can be more exciting if you gradually increase the distance spacing.


[Frey's Light Insane]
  1. 00:02:484 (9,1) - Combo should be swapped to match the music phrasing. See 00:08:872 (6,1)
  2. 00:28:408 (7) - I think more should be done to emphasize this note in particular, as it is the peak pitch, and marks the start of the alternating minor second. Maybe you can jump to it.
  3. 01:25:538 (1) - Your streams are incorrectly grouped. The notes should be in groups of nine, as in the original Für Elise. You can see that these arpeggios are in groups of nine notes: http://puu.sh/mqY0y/ddfcd02f87.png
Well done.

[Insane]
  1. 00:12:575 (1,1) - Again, these new combos are unnecessary.
  2. 01:25:538 (1) - Your streams are incorrectly grouped. The notes should be in groups of nine, as in the original Für Elise. You can see that these arpeggios are in groups of nine notes: http://puu.sh/mqY0y/ddfcd02f87.png The notes should be groups like this, with emphasis on (1) and (7) of each combo: http://puu.sh/mqYzJ/5ff139d9c4.jpg
  3. 01:48:037 (1,2,3) - Your use of triples ruins beat emphasis. Long notes are better for emphasizing strong beats (from music theory). It would be better to use a slider on the downbeat, and place your triple on some weaker beats like http://puu.sh/mqYlA/8953dcaa60.jpg or http://puu.sh/mqYni/c73f293c8b.jpg Same for the other ones.
Frey

Little wrote:

[Frey's Light Insane]
  1. 00:02:484 (9,1) - Combo should be swapped to match the music phrasing. See 00:08:872 (6,1)
  2. 00:28:408 (7) - I think more should be done to emphasize this note in particular, as it is the peak pitch, and marks the start of the alternating minor second. Maybe you can jump to it. note: I used a NC
  3. 01:25:538 (1) - Your streams are incorrectly grouped. The notes should be in groups of nine, as in the original Für Elise. You can see that these arpeggios are in groups of nine notes: http://puu.sh/mqY0y/ddfcd02f87.png
Well done.

All fixed
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340,88,86649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,60,86741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,40,86834,2,0,P|276:28|240:32,3,42.5,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,87204,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,120,87297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,148,87390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,87482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,196,87575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,87667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,252,87760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,87853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,296,87945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,88038,6,0,L|112:316,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,220,88256,2,0,L|76:276,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,184,88475,2,0,L|24:244,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,88694,6,0,L|74:61,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,177,88935,2,0,L|120:220,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,108,89185,2,0,L|182:65,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,188,89435,6,0,L|229:230,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,89698,2,0,L|360:248,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,264,89968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,264,90103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,216,90260,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,120,90445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,90630,2,0,P|264:200|216:212,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,176,91000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,80,91185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,91371,6,0,P|140:236|104:324,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,176,91926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,92111,2,0,P|212:164|248:168,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,128,92482,2,0,P|448:184|412:292,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,93037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,116,93222,2,0,P|305:73|312:31,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,128,93593,6,0,P|420:200|400:312,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,94148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,212,94333,2,0,L|336:224,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,94704,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,200,94889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,292,95074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,212,95259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,112,95445,2,0,P|32:128|0:136,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,280,95815,6,0,P|168:296|252:320,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,200,96371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,96556,2,0,P|295:226|314:264,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,96926,2,0,P|264:76|196:140,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,97482,2,0,L|180:308,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,97852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,98037,6,0,L|324:7,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,27,98593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,195,98778,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,176,98963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,99148,6,0,P|148:100|80:156,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,336,99704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,195,99889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,236,100074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,336,100259,2,0,L|328:348,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,100815,2,0,P|404:244|396:192,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,101185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,132,101370,6,0,P|256:164|336:128,1,170,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,60,101926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,242,102111,2,0,L|436:160,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,102482,6,0,L|298:284,2,170,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,103593,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,260,103963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,60,104333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,140,104519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,104704,2,0,P|288:164|332:152,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,72,105074,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,140,105259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,240,105445,2,0,P|152:300|168:348,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,105815,5,2,0:0:0:0:
266,332,105907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,307,106000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,282,106092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,257,106185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,233,106277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,209,106370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,184,106463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,56,106926,6,0,P|356:52|404:100,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,212,107667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,140,107852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,276,108037,2,0,P|236:268|160:256,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,259,108408,2,0,P|116:284|84:320,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,148,108778,2,0,P|56:148|112:140,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,52,109148,6,0,P|215:52|135:36,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,292,109889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,110074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,240,110259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,340,110445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,69,111092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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170,119,111277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,148,111370,6,0,P|84:176|44:188,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,187,111741,2,0,P|24:268|24:300,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,364,112111,2,0,P|218:283|218:251,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,72,112482,2,0,P|152:132|140:228,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,193,112852,6,0,L|240:220,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,113222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,113407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,244,113593,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,113685,12,0,115722,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Streliteela
Update all diffs
And thanks to all modders above, really busy these days so I don't have time to reply, sorry for that :c

Metadata from wikipedia: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DM_Ashura
ZZHBOY
臭s
[General]
  1. 我草
    Found unused .wav files:
    - soft-sliderslide.wav
    - soft-hitclap.wav
  2. 你要不要考虑加点AudioLeadIn
  3. 三个颜色差别好像有点小 我觉得也许可以让他们差别明显点 至少和bg不要太接近 我test的时候很蛋疼的

[Normal]
  1. 01:31:371 - 这个绿线怎么回事 把去了
  2. 00:55:815 (1) - 这个转盘我建议延长到00:58:038 - 然后把00:58:038 (1,2) - 删了 不然感觉有点奇怪
  3. 01:03:593 (3) - 这里我觉得放1拍滑条就可以了 不然节奏听着有点乱 01:03:778 - 这个音类似音你不能全跟 我觉得都不跟不就好
  4. 01:41:000 (4,1,2,3) - 唔 虽然这几个stack打起来感觉不大 但我觉得在最低难度里会让新人反应不过来 我建议你把这里重新排列下把摆开 不要stack
  5. 01:43:963 (5,1) - 不要stack 这种我觉得对新人很不友好 建议把移开

[Hard]
  1. 00:27:667 (2,3) - 这两个音又不一样 干嘛stack
  2. 00:34:334 (1,2) - 这个太太太远了 把移近点 这个距离在hard里不合适
  3. 00:35:075 (3,4,5,6) - 为什么你这么喜欢stack啊
  4. 00:43:408 (3) - 这里放单点就可以了 那个音不明显的 而且放这个1/4我觉得打起来很违和
  5. 01:01:371 (2) - 太远了 移近点
  6. 01:03:593 (1) - 还是那个道理 这种音你跟不全干脆别跟 放一个1/4后面都是1/2感觉很违和 建议这里也放1/2的节奏就好
  7. 01:34:333 (1,2) - 太远了
  8. 01:38:778 (3) - 这里也是 跟着乐器放1/2就好
  9. 01:42:111 (6) - ^
  10. 01:52:852 (2,3) - 能不能别放这么远

[l4d]
  1. 00:04:150 (5) - 逆时针转5度如何 感觉移上去更顺一点
  2. 00:16:741 (3,4) - 这两个这么近 不违和吗
  3. 00:25:445 (3,4) - 不ctrl+g下么 不然45那么近
  4. 00:35:445 (8,1) - 不觉得有点近吗
  5. 00:52:574 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 我的建议是把这些删了 因为这里连打太多了和hard的gap会有点大 你这个diff拿来补set最好还是好好补
  6. 00:58:964 (4,5) - 是不是太近了
  7. 01:25:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 用转盘带过或者break吧 不然和hard的难度差太大了 到
  8. 01:30:260 - 再继续map我觉得会比较好
  9. 01:41:185 (7,1) - 太近了吧
  10. 01:42:482 (1) - 向左下会让flow好点吧 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4320569
  11. 01:45:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 不要有超过5的连打
  12. 01:46:926 (1) - 1/2明明有音 强行放3/4干什么
  13. 01:48:037 (5) - 01:49:148 (1) - 01:51:370 (1) - 01:52:482 (4) - ^

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在瞎跳什么 移近点
  2. 00:38:408 (1,1) - 在乱nc什么 这两个没必要nc
  3. 00:43:501 (6) - 这里后面好几个类似的音你都没跟 这里放1/4还难打 我建议把这个圈去了
  4. 01:01:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 别瞎跳 这里放的莫名其妙 跟前面一样摆近点就可以了
  5. 01:17:667 (3) - 这里我第一次打的时候没看到折返箭头 请把箭头移到下面 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4320610
  6. 01:26:278 (9,1) - 01:27:112 (9,1) - 这个间距过大了 要么每串最后两个用滑条代替要么这些overlap到 不然这个很难打的
  7. 01:30:537 (4,1) - 01:30:907 (4,1) - ^
  8. 01:32:482 (1,2,3) - 这个我建议换成1/2的滑条 01:32:574 - 这个音不是很明显 跟了反而显得很违和
  9. 01:33:408 (6,1,2,3) - 这个太难打了 顺flow去摆不然不适合这个难度
  10. 01:34:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在乱跳什么 摆近点好好摆 你自己能fc你自己的这个图吗
  11. 01:37:296 (2,3,4) - 换成一个1/2滑条比较好 道理同前
  12. 01:45:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ?
  13. 01:48:222 - 这里节奏我建议这样 或者你还是别跟这里1/4了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4320644
  14. 01:49:519 (2,3,4) - ^
  15. 01:52:482 (1,2,3) - 你这种1/4很没意思
  16. 01:53:222 (1,2) - 放这个干什么 偷偷告诉你个秘密如果把这些1/4的滑条换成等距1/2的圈pp更多 不信你自己重开个图摆一下试试 你这个连续的远距1/4滑条没任何道理


唔 如果你愿意把非黑字的全部改了就喊我吧
Little
Just wanted to say one more thing.

Insane:
01:25:538 - For these streams, it will be better to change the hitsound pattern too, placing whistle on (1,4,7) of each combo.

Good luck with your map~
Topic Starter
Streliteela

ZZHBOY wrote:

臭s 臭臭花
[General]
  1. 我草 种种草
    Found unused .wav files:
    - soft-sliderslide.wav
    - soft-hitclap.wav
    删掉了
  2. 你要不要考虑加点AudioLeadIn 听小喵说现在已经自动补Leadin了,所以应该是不用加了吧
  3. 三个颜色差别好像有点小 我觉得也许可以让他们差别明显点 至少和bg不要太接近 我test的时候很蛋疼的
    改了三个新颜色

[Normal]
  1. 01:31:371 - 这个绿线怎么回事 把去了 好删了
  2. 00:55:815 (1) - 这个转盘我建议延长到00:58:038 - 然后把00:58:038 (1,2) - 删了 不然感觉有点奇怪
    试了一下感觉更奇怪了,还是不改了嗯
  3. 01:03:593 (3) - 这里我觉得放1拍滑条就可以了 不然节奏听着有点乱 01:03:778 - 这个音类似音你不能全跟 我觉得都不跟不就好
    好,改了
  4. 01:41:000 (4,1,2,3) - 唔 虽然这几个stack打起来感觉不大 但我觉得在最低难度里会让新人反应不过来 我建议你把这里重新排列下把摆开 不要stack
    好,改了
  5. 01:43:963 (5,1) - 不要stack 这种我觉得对新人很不友好 建议把移开
    好,改了

[Hard]
  1. 00:27:667 (2,3) - 这两个音又不一样 干嘛stack 个人比较偏好用stack厚不厚啊_(:з」∠)_
  2. 00:34:334 (1,2) - 这个太太太远了 把移近点 这个距离在hard里不合适
    缩小了一些
  3. 00:35:075 (3,4,5,6) - 为什么你这么喜欢stack啊 嘛个人喜好_(:з」∠)_
  4. 00:43:408 (3) - 这里放单点就可以了 那个音不明显的 而且放这个1/4我觉得打起来很违和
    好,改了
  5. 01:01:371 (2) - 太远了 移近点 调近了一些
  6. 01:03:593 (1) - 还是那个道理 这种音你跟不全干脆别跟 放一个1/4后面都是1/2感觉很违和 建议这里也放1/2的节奏就好
    好,改1/2了
  7. 01:34:333 (1,2) - 太远了 调近了一些
  8. 01:38:778 (3) - 这里也是 跟着乐器放1/2就好
    好,改了
  9. 01:42:111 (6) - ^ 也改了
  10. 01:52:852 (2,3) - 能不能别放这么远


[Insane]
  1. 00:21:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在瞎跳什么 移近点
    哪有瞎跳!这多明显的几何跳而且试了一下我能打
  2. 00:38:408 (1,1) - 在乱nc什么 这两个没必要nc
    好,删了
  3. 00:43:501 (6) - 这里后面好几个类似的音你都没跟 这里放1/4还难打 我建议把这个圈去了
    行,去掉了
  4. 01:01:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 别瞎跳 这里放的莫名其妙 跟前面一样摆近点就可以了
    唔,想在这里下个跳的,改了一下顺序可能不那么别手了
  5. 01:17:667 (3) - 这里我第一次打的时候没看到折返箭头 请把箭头移到下面 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4320610
    好,改了
  6. 01:26:278 (9,1) - 01:27:112 (9,1) - 这个间距过大了 要么每串最后两个用滑条代替要么这些overlap到 不然这个很难打的
  7. 01:30:537 (4,1) - 01:30:907 (4,1) - ^
    上面这两个地方我是想放一点点分段连打的,又不想太难所以就把每段调近了一些。试着打了打还行,如果再不行的话那么od-1?
  8. 01:32:482 (1,2,3) - 这个我建议换成1/2的滑条 01:32:574 - 这个音不是很明显 跟了反而显得很违和
    这段是有意放了一点点三连的,因为一直用1/2滑条感觉略单调,而且之前第一段kiai已经这么处理过了,这一段想加一点点三连增加一点打击密度
  9. 01:33:408 (6,1,2,3) - 这个太难打了 顺flow去摆不然不适合这个难度
    扭了扭角度
  10. 01:34:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在乱跳什么 摆近点好好摆 你自己能fc你自己的这个图吗
    换了下顺序扭了扭角度嗯
  11. 01:37:296 (2,3,4) - 换成一个1/2滑条比较好 道理同前
    这个也不太想换了,原因和前面一样
  12. 01:45:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ?
    嗯,我知道是偶数分段连打,从这里开始到最后是难度增加的地方喵
  13. 01:48:222 - 这里节奏我建议这样 或者你还是别跟这里1/4了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4320644
    感受了一下觉得不太喜欢
  14. 01:49:519 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
  15. 01:52:482 (1,2,3) - 你这种1/4很没意思
  16. 01:53:222 (1,2) - 放这个干什么 偷偷告诉你个秘密如果把这些1/4的滑条换成等距1/2的圈pp更多 不信你自己重开个图摆一下试试 你这个连续的远距1/4滑条没任何道理
    不不不,我这里是特意想要那两个斜向滑条的轨迹的。虽然玩家打的时候可能会处理成单点,但移动轨迹会多少受两个滑条影响从而让01:53:222 (1,2,3) - 划出一个三角形的轨迹。很像3/4拍指挥的手势啊有木有1111

Little wrote:

Just wanted to say one more thing.

Insane:
01:25:538 - For these streams, it will be better to change the hitsound pattern too, placing whistle on (1,4,7) of each combo.
k fixed the hitsound issue here :3

Good luck with your map~

Really thanks for your great mod, it's really helpful! Accepted almost everything you mentioned in the previous mod, and also this one :3
Also, thanks for your star~ :)
Thanks for your modding!
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