1. -Famous-'s Insane (4.19 stars, 307 notes)
2. Hard (3.12 stars, 298 notes)
3. Normal (1.52 stars, 132 notes)

WildOne94 wrote:

Hey there owo/
From JBhyperion and Wild's mod queue

Since only asked for one diff mod i may as well :3

General
BG is wrong size. it should be 1366x768 or 1024x768 normally
Kiai's are not snapped!
Preview conflicts with Famous's insane

Hard

you use all circle notes at the start and should vary with sliders too. Also create some jumps too because this is sooo easy for a hard

00:22:545 - Drag the start of the break to here
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00:37:454 (2,3,1,2) - spread these out more instead of being stacked
00:40:727 (1,2) - make into a slider starting and ending at these points as you have a lot of circle notes
00:43:272 (9,10,11) - spread out more
00:45:818 (6,7) - you don't need to make these so short. you can extend to the blue tick and have them go like this. it's so much smoother!


00:46:545 (1) - add a timing point here and lower the volume to like 40% and add a finish
00:48:181 (6,7) - to make this star shape better move these 2 to x:112 y:144
00:49:090 (9,10) - and then these 2 to x:312 y:128
00:52:363 (1,2) - same as 00:40:727 (1,2) -
00:53:636 (5) - on this section you miss some quite nice piano noises. Try this


00:55:636 (1) - remove the clap in the middle
00:57:454 (6,7) - same as 00:45:818 (6,7) -
00:58:181 - add circle note here and do the timing point with the finish again
01:00:727 - add circle note
01:03:636 - ^
01:06:545 - ^
01:15:636 (1,2) - slider again
01:18:181 (9,10,11) - spread out
01:18:909 (1) - remove middle clap
01:19:636 (2,3) - just a thought but as i came here i thought this would be nice if the volume was down again but with whistles
01:20:727 (6,7) - i think you know by now
01:27:272 (1,2) - slider again
01:29:818 (9,10,11) - spread out
01:32:363 (6,7) - you know >w<
01:33:090 (8) - finish with low volume.
01:35:636 - add circle note
01:41:454 - ^
01:44:727 (1) - finish and volume
01:50:545 (1,2) - slideeeer
01:53:090 (9,10,11) - spread (all the same things x3)
01:55:636 (6,7) - extend again
02:02:181 (1,2) - slider
02:04:727 (9,10,11) - spread
02:07:272 (6,7) - extend again
02:08:000 (1) - shhhh lower the volume of this finish so the pokemon can sleep better ;w;!

Hope this helped :3
Goodluck

Sukida Ahri wrote:

[I like the background, it's very cute~]

Overall~

Don't repeat the same patterns over and over please~
The main problem I have with this map is that the same patterns are being repeated over, and over many times. And for more variety and creativity I think it would be better if you changed it. But you can also just ask others for their opinions and see what happens. ^^ But every so often doing the same thing is fine. But not for a whole map. c:

Normal~

00:00:27 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - You should try to change the pattern of the notes, despite it being the same rhythm.
01:05:454 (2,3) - Change for more variety
Basically, this whole difficulty is all repeated rhythm, but you should change how you map it.

Hard~

Same as Normal, but just with the mapping of hard.

-Famous-'s Insane~

I actually have no problems with this difficulty. <3