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ISHIDA YOKO - COLORFUL BOX

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Del05
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 23, 2015 at 8:43:33 PM

Artist: ISHIDA YOKO
Title: COLORFUL BOX
Source: SHIROBAKO
Tags: Opening P.A. Works Aoi Miyamori Ema Yasuhara Shizuka Sakaki Misa Tōdō Midori Imai
BPM: 161
Filesize: 16882kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.36 stars, 102 notes)
  2. Hard (2.94 stars, 199 notes)
  3. Insane (3.88 stars, 276 notes)
  4. Normal (1.75 stars, 139 notes)
Download: ISHIDA YOKO - COLORFUL BOX
Download: ISHIDA YOKO - COLORFUL BOX (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1

SHIROBAKO Opening

Finally Ranked - Special thanks to Flower for bubble it and Guy for qualified it

Mod History
  1. -Hanashi-(test play and mod in chat)
  2. -Famous- (test play and mod in chat)
  3. Suzuno Kamduki (test play and mod in chat)
  4. Kyle Y (test play and mod in chat)
  5. m1223961117 (test play and mod)
  6. Suzuya Jyuzo (test play and mod)
  7. jloughman14
  8. Tarrasky
  9. Chocox
  10. Tenseki
  11. Fort
  12. Chaoslitz
  13. Haruto_Aizawa
  14. Milan-
  15. baraatje123
  16. imaikiseta
  17. Guy
  18. Mako Sakata
  19. Flower Bubble
  20. Tari
  21. Guy (IRC mod) qulified
  22. Desperate-kun disqulified
  23. Flower Re-Bubble
  24. Guy Re-qulified

[Map Set]

Easy by me : Done
Normal by me : Done
Hard by me : Done
Insane by me : Done
Tarrasky
mod req from my queue

Easy

00:05:702 (4) - add NC
add finish in 00:07:192 -and in 00:08:683 -
00:12:410 (4) - (nazi) you can improve this blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2866323
00:13:341 (5) - maybe add NC
00:13:900 - add clap
00:19:490 (1,3) - maybe blanket
00:26:385 (2) - move from x:235 y:132
00:31:416 - add clap
00:40:360 (5) - 00:43:341 (3) - 00:49:304 (5) - add NC and remove NC in 00:41:851 (1) -
finish this spin 00:52:658 (1) - in 00:54:149 -
00:56:757 - add clap
00:58:993 - add clap

Normal

00:05:702 (4) - add NC maybe
00:13:528 (4) - move from x:328 y:172
remove clap in 00:20:049 - and add in 00:20:236 -
:arrow: after 01:03:279 (7) - you use distance 1,0x to map, and before you use 0,9x, increase of distance are not allowed in Normal/Easy difficulties
add finish in 01:12:782 - maybe
01:18:745 - add finish

Hard

00:12:969 (4,5) - well, this overlap is a bit strange :c
01:00:857 - add finish
hmm, i prefer 01:13:900 (3) - in x:372 y:200

Insane

00:01:230 (1,2) - stack?
00:24:708 (4) - Ctrl + G
00:42:969 - remove clap and add in 00:43:341 -
00:45:950 - add finish
add finish in 01:14:087 -. 01:18:745 - and 01:14:832 -
stack 01:20:608 (2) - in 01:19:863 (4) -
01:26:198 - add finish


Very nice map, congrats and good luck >w<
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi Tarrasky!
Thanks for the mod
Mod

Tarrasky wrote:

mod req from my queue

Easy

00:05:702 (4) - add NC Fixed
add finish in 00:07:192 -and in 00:08:683 - Fixed
00:12:410 (4) - (nazi) you can improve this blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2866323 Fixed
00:13:341 (5) - maybe add NC Nope
00:13:900 - add clap Fixed
00:19:490 (1,3) - maybe blanket Will consider it
00:26:385 (2) - move from x:235 y:132 Will consider it
00:31:416 - add clap Fixed
00:40:360 (5) - 00:43:341 (3) - 00:49:304 (5) - add NC and remove NC in 00:41:851 (1) - Fixed
finish this spin 00:52:658 (1) - in 00:54:149 - Fixed
00:56:757 - add clap Fixed
00:58:993 - add clap Fixed

Normal

00:05:702 (4) - add NC maybe Fixed
00:13:528 (4) - move from x:328 y:172 Will consider it
remove clap in 00:20:049 - and add in 00:20:236 - Fixed
:arrow: after 01:03:279 (7) - you use distance 1,0x to map, and before you use 0,9x, increase of distance are not allowed in Normal/Easy difficulties Fixed
add finish in 01:12:782 - maybe Fixed
01:18:745 - add finish Fixed

Hard

00:12:969 (4,5) - well, this overlap is a bit strange :c ???? i think not but Will consider it
01:00:857 - add finish Fixed
hmm, i prefer 01:13:900 (3) - in x:372 y:200 Fixed

Insane

00:01:230 (1,2) - stack? Fixed
00:24:708 (4) - Ctrl + G Fixed
00:42:969 - remove clap and add in 00:43:341 - Fixed
00:45:950 - add finish Fixed
add finish in 01:14:087 -. 01:18:745 - and 01:14:832 - Fixed
stack 01:20:608 (2) - in 01:19:863 (4) - Fixed
01:26:198 - add finish Fixed


Very nice map, congrats and good luck >w< Thanks
Loughje
Hey from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team!
General
Not sure how I feel about tiny grid size for this, but hey, its working well for you so im not complaining.
Different combo colors.
Easy
00:09:987 - (Recommendation) Reverse slide one more time then have a slider start here 00:10:546 and end here 00:10:919
01:04:211 (5) - Have this more symmetrical to the slider before it.
01:27:503 - Spinner could start here.
Normal
AR 5.0
OD 4.0
Pretty good, just don't like the way the beginning is a lot like the previous difficulty.
Hard
AR 7.5-8.0
OD 6.0
Awesome looking hard, but without those above it just feels really easy for a hard.
Insane
HP 7.5
00:01:602 - Circle here
00:01:975 - Circle here
Pretty awesome beatmap, just pay attention to the difficulty settings a bit more! Good luck on ranksing! :D Please vote on how good my modding was on my queue page. My Modding Queue
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for the mod

jloughman14 wrote:

Hey from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team!
General
Not sure how I feel about tiny grid size for this, but hey, its working well for you so im not complaining.
Different combo colors. Will fix it later
Easy
00:09:987 - (Recommendation) Reverse slide one more time then have a slider start here 00:10:546 and end here 00:10:919 Fixed
01:04:211 (5) - Have this more symmetrical to the slider before it. Fixed
01:27:503 - Spinner could start here. Fixed
Normal
AR 5.0 Fixed
OD 4.0 Fixed
Pretty good, just don't like the way the beginning is a lot like the previous difficulty.
Hard
AR 7.5-8.0 Fixed
OD 6.0 Fixed
Awesome looking hard, but without those above it just feels really easy for a hard.
Insane
HP 7.5 Fixed
00:01:602 - Circle here Will consider it
00:01:975 - Circle here Will consider it
Pretty awesome beatmap, just pay attention to the difficulty settings a bit more! Good luck on ranksing! :D Please vote on how good my modding was on my queue page. My Modding Queue Thanks and i will pay some attention to the difficulty in next map
DreaM117er
IRC sound fix
17:15 Del05: Hi! Can i ask for test play
17:44 Del05: for this map
17:44 *Del05 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/653779 Ishida Youko - COLORFUL BOX (TV Size)]
17:57 m1223961117: wait a minute
17:57 m1223961117: downloading
18:10 m1223961117: You should fix this
18:10 m1223961117: http://puu.sh/gDUrB/0cab8edd7c.png
18:10 m1223961117: I can't find what happened.
18:11 Del05: i will change it then
18:11 Del05: later
18:11 Del05: thanks
18:11 m1223961117: OK
18:14 m1223961117: 00:16:136 - finish
18:14 Del05: for hard ?
18:14 m1223961117: yes
18:14 Del05: okay
18:15 m1223961117: 00:22:099 - same
18:15 Del05: fixed
18:15 m1223961117: 00:25:080 - ^
18:15 m1223961117: 00:34:025 - ^
18:16 m1223961117: 00:38:310 - ^
18:16 Del05: fixed
18:16 m1223961117: 00:45:950 - ^
18:17 Del05: fixed
18:17 m1223961117: 00:48:931 - ^
18:17 Del05: fixed
18:17 m1223961117: 00:51:913 - ^
18:17 m1223961117: 00:57:875 - ^
18:18 m1223961117: 01:02:907 - ^
18:18 Del05: fixed
18:19 m1223961117: 01:03:838 - ^
18:19 m1223961117: 01:05:143 - ^
18:19 Del05: fixed
18:19 m1223961117: 01:06:820 - ^
18:20 m1223961117: 01:08:310 - ^
18:20 Del05: fixed
18:21 m1223961117: 01:15:764 - ^
18:22 Del05: fixed
18:22 m1223961117: 01:20:236 - ^
18:22 m1223961117: 01:23:031 - ^
18:22 Del05: fixed
18:23 m1223961117: 01:24:615 - remove clap
18:24 m1223961117: add whistle
18:24 Del05: fixed
18:24 m1223961117: 01:26:198 - Finish
18:25 Del05: fixed
18:25 m1223961117: OK, Hard looks fine^^
18:25 m1223961117: Insane
18:25 Del05: thanks
18:26 m1223961117: 00:07:192 - finish
18:26 Del05: fixed
18:26 m1223961117: 00:12:969 - ^
18:27 Del05: fixed
18:27 m1223961117: 00:16:136 - ^
18:27 m1223961117: 00:22:099 - ^
18:28 m1223961117: 00:25:080 - ^
18:28 Del05: fixed
18:28 m1223961117: 00:28:062 - ^
18:28 m1223961117: 00:31:043 - ^
18:28 Del05: fixed
18:28 m1223961117: 00:34:025 - ^
18:29 Del05: fixed
18:29 m1223961117: 00:37:006 - ^
18:29 m1223961117: 00:38:310 - ^
18:30 Del05: fixed
18:30 m1223961117: 00:47:441 - ^
18:30 m1223961117: 00:48:931 - ^
18:31 Del05: fixed
18:31 m1223961117: 01:02:161 - ^
18:32 m1223961117: 01:03:838 - ^
18:32 Del05: fixed
18:32 m1223961117: 01:05:143 - ^
18:32 m1223961117: 01:06:820 - ^
18:33 Del05: fixed
18:33 m1223961117: 01:20:236 - ^
18:33 m1223961117: 01:23:031 - ^
18:34 Del05: fixed
18:34 m1223961117: 01:24:242 (4,6,8) - remove clap, add whistle
18:34 m1223961117: 01:24:708 - finish
18:35 Del05: fixed
18:35 m1223961117: OK
18:35 Del05: thanks
18:35 m1223961117: Easy
18:36 m1223961117: 00:07:192 - finish
18:36 Del05: fixed
18:36 m1223961117: 00:09:987 - ^
18:36 m1223961117: 00:12:969 - ^
18:37 m1223961117: 00:16:136 - ^
18:37 Del05: fixed
18:37 m1223961117: 00:22:099 - ^
18:37 m1223961117: 00:34:025 - ^
18:38 m1223961117: 00:39:987 - ^
18:38 Del05: fixed
18:38 m1223961117: 00:45:950 - ^
18:39 Del05: fixed
18:39 m1223961117: 00:48:931 - ^
18:40 Del05: fixed
18:41 m1223961117: spinner start 00:51:913 - end 00:53:217 - ??
18:42 m1223961117: 00:57:875 - finish
18:42 Del05: fixed for the spinner
18:42 m1223961117: 01:00:857 - finish
18:43 Del05: fixed
18:43 m1223961117: 01:03:838 - ^
18:43 m1223961117: 01:09:801 - ^
18:43 Del05: fixed
18:43 m1223961117: 01:12:782 - ^
18:43 m1223961117: 01:14:087 - ^
18:44 m1223961117: 01:15:764 - ^
18:44 Del05: fixed
18:44 m1223961117: 01:18:745 - ^
18:44 m1223961117: 01:24:708 - ^
18:44 m1223961117: 01:26:198 - ^
18:45 m1223961117: Normal
18:45 Del05: thanks
18:46 m1223961117: 00:16:136 - finish
18:46 m1223961117: 00:22:099 - ^
18:47 m1223961117: 00:28:062 - ^
18:47 Del05: fixed
18:47 m1223961117: 00:34:025 - ^
18:48 Del05: fixed
18:49 m1223961117: 00:37:379 - miss clap
18:49 Del05: fixed
18:49 m1223961117: 00:38:310 - finish
18:49 Del05: fixed
18:49 m1223961117: 00:39:987 - ^
18:49 Del05: fixed
18:49 m1223961117: 00:45:950 - ^
18:50 m1223961117: 00:48:931 - ^
18:50 m1223961117: 00:51:913 - ^
18:50 Del05: fixed
18:51 m1223961117: 00:53:776 - fix volume to 45%, I can't hear anything
18:51 m1223961117: 00:54:894 - finish
18:51 Del05: fixed
18:52 m1223961117: 00:57:875 - ^
18:52 m1223961117: 01:00:857 - ^
18:52 m1223961117: 01:02:161 - ^
18:52 m1223961117: 01:02:907 - ^
18:52 Del05: fixed
18:52 m1223961117: 01:05:143 - ^
18:53 m1223961117: 01:06:820 - ^
18:53 m1223961117: 01:09:801 - ^
18:53 Del05: fixed
18:53 m1223961117: 01:15:764 - ^
18:53 Del05: fixed
18:53 m1223961117: 01:20:236 - ^
18:54 Del05: fixed
18:54 m1223961117: 01:24:708 - ^
18:54 Del05: fixed
18:54 m1223961117: 01:26:198 - ^
18:54 Del05: fixed
18:54 m1223961117: OK
18:54 Del05: thanks
18:55 m1223961117: that's all
18:55 Del05: thank you for your time and mods
18:55 m1223961117: Nice map
18:55 Del05: thank you
18:55 m1223961117: ^_^
18:55 Del05: btw can you copy this chat to forum

Good Job :)
Suzuya Jyuzo
Hard
00:14:459 (7,8) - overlap
00:33:279 (6,7) - ^
00:42:596 (6,1) - ^
01:10:919 (3,4) - ^
Insane
00:26:385 (5) - Slide bar is not in the rhythm
00:26:757 (6) - ^
00:27:130 (7) - ^
00:50:981 (5,6,7) - Jump distance consistent(personal advice)
00:51:354 (7,8,9) - ^
00:52:844 (4,5,6) - ^distance limit to 3,Jump higher than 00:51:354 (7,8,9)
Xinying
Red = Probably unrankable , - = sub mod (under one specific error)
mod
Insane
00:03:838 (5) - try this http://puu.sh/gGxG4/599145c7b1.png , just ctrl+c , ctrl+v 00:02:348 (2) and ctrl+g
00:41:478 (1,2,3,4) - this looks really messy , maybe try http://puu.sh/gGxXm/4281789830.png (the note might be out of play area but I think it's still rankable)
- so 00:42:223 (3,4) change blanket
- 00:41:851 (2) stack with 00:40:733 (3)
- 00:43:900 (7) stack with 00:42:223 (3)
00:46:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - expand this star , try http://puu.sh/gGypw/6e6e2f9a83.png
- so 00:46:882 (4,2) stack
- 00:47:254 (6,3) - stack
- 00:48:559 (4,1) - shift this up , try http://puu.sh/gGyqx/53cc44e9f5.png
00:51:540 (8,3) - stack
00:53:776 (1,2,3) - these is a little messy to me , try http://puu.sh/gGysy/dcc06a3385.png
- so 00:54:149 (2) stack with 00:51:354 (7)
- 00:54:521 (3) stack with 00:53:217 (6) (flow looks better too)

Hitsounding
I'll just point the major mistakes
00:55:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - All these starting at the chorus is hitsounded wrongly
- so 00:55:267 (1) - head is clap , tail is whistle
- 00:55:826 (2) - whistle
- 00:56:012 (3) - head is clap , tail is whistle
- 00:56:385 (4) - head is whistle , tail is clap
- 00:56:944 (5) - tail is whistle
- 00:57:316 (6) - head is whistle , tail is clap
Tenseki
[General]
You must uncheck all things


This modding, you should fix all things i think.
[Easy]
00:13:341 (5,6) - make blanket perfectly
00:22:472 (1,2) - nc swap
00:30:298 (4,5) - make blanket perfectly
01:05:702 (1,2) - nc swap
01:18:000 (5,1) - ^
01:21:726 (5,1) - ^
01:25:080 (9) - nc
01:25:080 (1) - make it 1/1, more better than imao
01:27:503 (1) - move to 01:27:689 cuz you must follow about spin guidelines.

[Normal]
00:12:782 (2,3) - ctrl +g, cuz rhythms, and you must change placements
00:14:459 (6,1) - nc swap
00:16:136 (3) - nc
00:17:627 (1) - del nc
00:19:118 (1) - nc
00:21:354 (1) - del nc
00:22:472 (3) - nc
00:23:962 (1) - del nc
00:25:080 (3) - nc
00:39:242 (5) - ^
00:40:360 (1) - del nc
00:42:223 (4,1) - nc swap
00:45:205 (5,1) - ^
00:47:813 (3,4) - one circle and slider
and 00:49:304 (1) - move ot 00:48:931 and 00:49:770 (2) - move to 00:49:677
you must change Inherited time at 00:49:304
00:55:267 (4,1) - nc swap
00:58:248 (4,5) - rhythm error
change to
01:01:602 (4) - nc
01:13:528 (6,1) - nc swap
01:15:764 (4) - nc
01:17:627 (1,2) - nc swap
01:20:608 (1,2) - ^
01:23:031 (5,1) - ^
01:25:080 (1) - nc
01:27:503 (1) - move to 01:27:689 cuz you must follow about spin guidelines.

[Hard]
00:02:348 (2,3,4,1) - I think these parts should be based on vocals. feels empty
00:09:987 (3) - nc
00:11:478 (6,1) - nc swap
00:12:969 (4) - nc
00:15:018 (8) - ctrl +g and move to x77 y92 . Cuz flows are more better
00:15:018 (8,1) - and blanket plz with 1 slider
[img[http://puu.sh/gGNO4/42fc4f6d46.jpg[/img]
00:29:552 (4) - better rhythms

00:56:571 (4) - set a same DS plz
01:26:944 - add circle, i can hear a beat

[Insane]
00:03:838 (5) - make a slider body down.( Down beat )
00:06:633 (4,5,6,7,1) - my suggestion
228,160,6633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,6820,2,0,L|192:352,1,68
98,259,7192,2,0,P|128:200|200:184,1,136,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,266,7751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,266,7938,6,0,L|431:186,1,68,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:13:900 (8) - make it 1/2 sldier
and add circle at 00:14:273
00:16:882 (3) - make it body up ( upbeat )
00:24:708 (4) - make it 3/4 slider and add 1/2 slider at 00:25:080
00:42:596 (4) - why dont you change to 3 circles?
00:42:969 (6,7) - move them to 00:42:969
and add circle at 00:43:714 cuz of rhythms
01:08:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - make it jumpy?
01:20:608 (2,3) - ctrl +g ? cuz rhytms
01:21:354 (5,6) - ^ and 01:21:726 (6) - change to 3/4
01:22:844 (4) - change to 2 circle and make jump between 4,5 cuz accent@_@
01:27:503 - add circle and spin?

Good Song and Good luck!
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for the mod
For hard i didn't know what you mean so i not did it
and for insane all fixed

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

Hard
00:14:459 (7,8) - overlap
00:33:279 (6,7) - ^
00:42:596 (6,1) - ^
01:10:919 (3,4) - ^
Insane
00:26:385 (5) - Slide bar is not in the rhythm Fixed
00:26:757 (6) - ^ Fixed
00:27:130 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:50:981 (5,6,7) - Jump distance consistent(personal advice) Fixed
00:51:354 (7,8,9) - ^ Fixed
00:52:844 (4,5,6) - ^distance limit to 3,Jump higher than 00:51:354 (7,8,9) Fixed
Suzuya Jyuzo

Del05 wrote:

Hi !
Thanks for the mod
For hard i didn't know what you mean so i not did it
and for insane all fixed

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

Hard
00:14:459 (7,8) - overlap
00:33:279 (6,7) - ^
00:42:596 (6,1) - ^
01:10:919 (3,4) - ^
Insane
00:26:385 (5) - Slide bar is not in the rhythm Fixed
00:26:757 (6) - ^ Fixed
00:27:130 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:50:981 (5,6,7) - Jump distance consistent(personal advice) Fixed
00:51:354 (7,8,9) - ^ Fixed
00:52:844 (4,5,6) - ^distance limit to 3,Jump higher than 00:51:354 (7,8,9) Fixed
Hard
i mean : Two slider overlap,without overlap them.Looks better,What do you think?
Insane
i mean :Note and note keep same distance,about these three note 00:50:981 (5,6,7), these 00:51:354 (7,8,9),and these 00:52:844 (4,5,6)
I am poor at english, hope you can understand, :)
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mods and for hitsounding, i made some mistake sorry :cry: but i already fix it according to your mod :lol:
And for make it short i will just quote the main mod (if fixed the sub mod are fixed too)

Chocox wrote:

Red = Probably unrankable , - = sub mod (under one specific error)
mod
Insane
00:03:838 (5) - try this http://puu.sh/gGxG4/599145c7b1.png , just ctrl+c , ctrl+v 00:02:348 (2) and ctrl+g Fixed
00:41:478 (1,2,3,4) - this looks really messy , maybe try http://puu.sh/gGxXm/4281789830.png (the note might be out of play area but I think it's still rankable) I think it is okay but will consider your pattern flow
00:46:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - expand this star , try http://puu.sh/gGypw/6e6e2f9a83.png Will consider it cause i cant make the bigger and better star :P
00:51:540 (8,3) - stack Fixed
00:53:776 (1,2,3) - these is a little messy to me , try http://puu.sh/gGysy/dcc06a3385.png Fixed

Hitsounding
I'll just point the major mistakes
00:55:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - All these starting at the chorus is hitsounded wrongly Fixed
Topic Starter
Del05
If that what you mean with overlap i think there are no problem so nope. But for insane i already fix it

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

Hard
i mean : Two slider overlap,without overlap them.Looks better,What do you think?
Insane
i mean :Note and note keep same distance,about these three note 00:50:981 (5,6,7), these 00:51:354 (7,8,9),and these 00:52:844 (4,5,6)
I am poor at english, hope you can understand, :)
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for mod
for general mod, thanks i forgot about it :D thank you for remind me

Tenseki wrote:

[Easy]
00:13:341 (5,6) - make blanket perfectly Fixed
00:22:472 (1,2) - nc swap Fixed
00:30:298 (4,5) - make blanket perfectly Fixed
01:05:702 (1,2) - nc swap Fixed
01:18:000 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:21:726 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:25:080 (9) - nc Fixed
01:25:080 (1) - make it 1/1, more better than imao Fixed
01:27:503 (1) - move to 01:27:689 cuz you must follow about spin guidelines. Fixed

[Normal]
00:12:782 (2,3) - ctrl +g, cuz rhythms, and you must change placements Fixed
00:14:459 (6,1) - nc swap Fixed
00:16:136 (3) - nc Fixed
00:17:627 (1) - del nc Fixed
00:19:118 (1) - nc Fixed
00:21:354 (1) - del nc Fixed
00:22:472 (3) - nc Fixed
00:23:962 (1) - del nc Fixed
00:25:080 (3) - nc Fixed
00:39:242 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:40:360 (1) - del nc Fixed
00:42:223 (4,1) - nc swap Fixed
00:45:205 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
00:47:813 (3,4) - one circle and slider Will consider it
and 00:49:304 (1) - move ot 00:48:931 and 00:49:770 (2) - move to 00:49:677 Will consider it
you must change Inherited time at 00:49:304 Sorry i dont know what you mean (still new mapper :cry: )
00:55:267 (4,1) - nc swap Fixed
00:58:248 (4,5) - rhythm error I think no. So, nope
change to
01:01:602 (4) - nc Fixed
01:13:528 (6,1) - nc swap Fixed
01:15:764 (4) - nc Fixed
01:17:627 (1,2) - nc swap Fixed
01:20:608 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:23:031 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:25:080 (1) - nc Fixed
01:27:503 (1) - move to 01:27:689 cuz you must follow about spin guidelines. Fixed

[Hard]
00:02:348 (2,3,4,1) - I think these parts should be based on vocals. feels empty Fixed
00:09:987 (3) - nc Fixed
00:11:478 (6,1) - nc swap Fixed
00:12:969 (4) - nc Fixed
00:15:018 (8) - ctrl +g and move to x77 y92 . Cuz flows are more better Fixed
00:15:018 (8,1) - and blanket plz with 1 slider Fixed
[img[http://puu.sh/gGNO4/42fc4f6d46.jpg[/img]
00:29:552 (4) - better rhythms Fixed

00:56:571 (4) - set a same DS plz Fixed
01:26:944 - add circle, i can hear a beat Fixed

[Insane]
00:03:838 (5) - make a slider body down.( Down beat ) Fixed
00:06:633 (4,5,6,7,1) - my suggestion Fixed
00:13:900 (8) - make it 1/2 sldier
and add circle at 00:14:273
00:16:882 (3) - make it body up ( upbeat )
00:24:708 (4) - make it 3/4 slider and add 1/2 slider at 00:25:080 Fixed
00:42:596 (4) - why dont you change to 3 circles? nope
00:42:969 (6,7) - move them to 00:42:969
and add circle at 00:43:714 cuz of rhythms nope
01:08:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - make it jumpy? Fixed
01:20:608 (2,3) - ctrl +g ? cuz rhytms Fixed
01:21:354 (5,6) - ^ and 01:21:726 (6) - change to 3/4 Fixed
01:22:844 (4) - change to 2 circle and make jump between 4,5 cuz accent@_@ Fixed
01:27:503 - add circle and spin? Fixed

Good Song and Good luck!
Tenseki
DS means Distance
and if you have a question about my modding.
free to ask me in-game pm :)
Topic Starter
Del05

Tenseki wrote:

DS means Distance
and if you have a question about my modding.
free to ask me in-game pm :)
Oh... DS mean distance snap. okay i already change it
Ciyus Miapah
hi from mod queue

Insane:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline)
00:27:503 (8,9,10) - im sure this triplet is very not recommended in here (especially on AR8 because the previous slider is hiding this pattern and make this triplet hard to read, consider make this one clearly visible)
00:29:366 (5) - im not sure for this stacks, try this maybe http://puu.sh/gKkxG/6c129fabbc.jpg
01:21:726 (6,1) - this one very sudden i think, make circle or triplet better gameplay
01:23:031 (5,1) - antijump after highjump very awkward things i guess (and looks 01:23:217 (1) - this notes didnt sound off for any beat)
01:25:826 (5) - oh god this stacks

hope this helps
Chaoslitz


[Easy]
  1. Not suggested to use 1/2 slider with reverse in Easy diff
  2. 00:09:428 (1) - Avoid to reverse two times, it is not suitable for an Easy diff
  3. 00:11:292 (3) - Start at 00:11:478
  4. 00:14:273 (6) - Start slider at 00:14:459, remove reverse, and then add a note at 00:15:391
  5. 00:30:298 (4,5) - Exchange in timezone
  6. 00:34:770 (5,6) - Try this:
  7. 00:55:639 (2) - This slider is not really following the rhythm, reverse at 00:56:012 instead and add a note at 00:56:757
  8. 00:58:993 (6) - ^ same not suitable
  9. 01:04:211 (5,6) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:782 (2) - Fix ds
  2. 00:12:969 (3) - ^
  3. 01:24:149 (3) - note + slider instead
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:385 (4,5,6) - Same ds
  2. 01:24:149 (7,1) - Dont overlap this completely
  3. looks good
[Insane]
  1. 00:40:733 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use create polygon circle
  2. 00:46:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
  3. 00:56:012 (3) - Try curve slider?

good luck~
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mods
And for any problem with stacking or overlap i decided to change AR to 9 so it can be more clearly to see now (in my opinion)
Hope you like it !

Fort wrote:

hi from mod queue

Insane:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline) Will fixed later cause it means i must check it again :P
00:27:503 (8,9,10) - im sure this triplet is very not recommended in here (especially on AR8 because the previous slider is hiding this pattern and make this triplet hard to read, consider make this one clearly visible) AR change to 9
00:29:366 (5) - im not sure for this stacks, try this maybe http://puu.sh/gKkxG/6c129fabbc.jpg Fixed
01:21:726 (6,1) - this one very sudden i think, make circle or triplet better gameplay Fixed
01:23:031 (5,1) - antijump after highjump very awkward things i guess Fixed (and looks 01:23:217 (1) - this notes didnt sound off for any beat) I follow vocal
01:25:826 (5) - oh god this stacks AR change to 9

hope this helps
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mods.
For easy i think i will remap it when i have time

Chaoslitz wrote:



[Easy]
  1. 00:09:428 (1) - Avoid to reverse two times, it is not suitable for an Easy diff Still think for nice slider
  2. 00:11:292 (3) - Start at 00:11:478 Fixed
  3. 00:14:273 (6) - Start slider at 00:14:459, remove reverse, and then add a note at 00:15:391 Fixed
  4. 00:30:298 (4,5) - Exchange in timezone Fixed
  5. 00:34:770 (5,6) - Try this: Will consider it
  6. 00:55:639 (2) - This slider is not really following the rhythm, reverse at 00:56:012 instead and add a note at 00:56:757 Fixed
  7. 00:58:993 (6) - ^ same not suitable Fixed
  8. 01:04:211 (5,6) - ^ Fixed for 5 but 6 nope
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:782 (2) - Fix ds Fixed
  2. 00:12:969 (3) - ^ Fixed
  3. 01:24:149 (3) - note + slider instead Sorry i dont know what you mean
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:385 (4,5,6) - Same ds Fixed
  2. 01:24:149 (7,1) - Dont overlap this completely Will consider it
  3. looks good Thanks
[Insane]
  1. 00:40:733 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use create polygon circle I think my star is good :D
  2. 00:46:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ I think my star is good :D
  3. 00:56:012 (3) - Try curve slider? Fixed

good luck~
Adol Christin
No kudosu
There is no such a "TV Size" in the album and the "TV Size" is not published officially. Due to the Ranking Criteria, you have to remove "(TV Size)" from your title.
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Del05

Adol Christin wrote:

No kudosu
There is no such a "TV Size" in the album and the "TV Size" is not published officially. Due to the Ranking Criteria, you have to remove "(TV Size)" from your title.
Good luck~
Okay
Removed

Thanks
Haruto
Hi! sorry for the Long Delay! ^^
Here's the mods :3
  1. RedMeans : Unrankable
  2. BlueMeans : Highly Recommended
  3. Black Means : Normal Mods

General


  1. Please dont Use any Bright Combo Color
  2. Make the Distance Spacing 1,1x
  3. you can make the AR 4 in Easy
  4. Also, The OD too

Easy


  1. 00:05:702 (1,3) - Ovelapped
  2. 00:20:608 (3,5) - Overlapped too
  3. 00:22:844 (1,3) - Overlapped o.o
  4. 00:34:397 (4) - NC also, (4) is overlapping (1)
  5. 00:35:515 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 01:04:211 (1) - NC ?
  7. 01:04:584 (1) - This Slider style can be Blanket with 01:03:093 (4) - Here's The Example http://puu.sh/gXoVa/ee1a4e4820.jpg
  8. 01:07:192 (1) - Could You make This Blanket with 01:05:702 (7) - ? Example : http://puu.sh/gXoYy/1bc244bff9.jpg
  9. 01:07:938 (2) - Make it Like This http://puu.sh/gXp0N/a8652b5cf0.jpg to Avoid Overlaps
  10. 01:08:683 (3,4) - Blanket?
  11. 01:10:174 (1) - Stack Blanket with 01:09:056 (4) -
  12. 01:12:037 (4,5) - Fix Blanket
  13. 01:13:528 (1,2) - Blanket this?
  14. 01:21:726 (2) - in the Playfield, this would be overlap the HP bar, Fix this Please
  15. 01:26:944 (5) - Can you Blanket this with (4) ?

Normal


  1. 00:26:385 (3) - Overlap
Err... I dont Find any Problems on this Diff :roll:

Hard


Seems Fine for me :)

Insane


  1. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - DS is Too BIG X(
  2. 01:03:279 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  3. 01:21:726 (6,7,1) - ^ This Look Overmapped
  4. 01:24:149 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  5. 01:27:130 (2,3,4) - ^
  6. 01:27:596 (1) - Spinner Must Start Here 01:27:689 -
Those streams really looks Difficult, please make the stream easier, this map is a Slow Song :(, so please make those streams More Near ;)
GOOD LUCK! ^o^
Milan-
hiii

[insane]
  1. This is the only diff with slider tick 2. would be cool to be constant and change it to 1 :3.
  2. Holy.. increase your overall hitsound volumen around 10-15% pls, i cant hear sht
  3. 00:02:348 (2) - 00:05:329 (2) - drum finish on head sounds better imo
  4. 00:03:838 (5) - ^drum clap here
  5. 00:06:447 - 00:06:820 - 00:09:428 - 00:14:273 (9) - add clap or something pls
  6. 00:07:192 (3) - finish on head, no tail
  7. 00:07:938 (1) - ^, and cancel clap, sounds bad
  8. 00:08:683 (3) - clap on head?
  9. 00:10:546 (1) - 00:12:037 (1) - 00:13:528 (5) - add clap on head
  10. 00:11:292 (3) - clap instead of whistle. and cancel whistle on 00:11:385 (4) - sounds really bad heh
  11. 00:14:646 (1) - this beat doesnt really follow something, thus a 1/1 sliders between 00:14:459 (10,2) - feels/plays a lot better i think
  12. 00:15:391 (5) - finish on head and whistle on tail sounds ok to me
  13. 00:15:298 - there's a triple here, if you wanted to map this lol
  14. 00:18:745 (4,1) - this rhythm doesnt follow anything here >< vocals start at 00:18:931 - , so start the slider from there instead, i guess(and also you should try to avoid mapping strong beat with slider tails, like you did here or 00:02:348 (2,5) - etc). 00:30:670 (8) - this is fine tho uhm.
  15. 00:21:726 (5) - ^
  16. 00:24:708 (4) - this should be 1/2, vocals are at 00:24:894 - , not on the blue tick.
  17. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - i'd use drum clap/finish here. Cuz how drummy this sounds, normal hit doesnt fit at all.
  18. 00:37:752 (3) - finish cuz you added to 00:37:006 (1) -
  19. 00:39:521 (5) - delete this note, cuz there's nothing here lol. Also 00:39:428 (4,5) - these shouldn't normalsampleset >< (5) should have whistle tho. Same goes to 01:18:186 (4,5,6) -
  20. 00:41:105 (5,6) - whistles. Well this whole section is missing whistles.
  21. 00:48:931 (1,2,3) - missing claps, you know where>w<
  22. 00:53:217 (6) - finish sounds better than clap
  23. 00:54:521 (3) - add normal sampleset on head or something(?
  24. 01:03:466 (6) - 01:04:956 (5) - 01:06:074 (3) - add clap
  25. 01:06:540 - 01:18:652 - there's a beat here too, if you want to map it lol
  26. 01:15:764 (1) - 01:27:503 (5) - finish on head
  27. 01:21:354 - 00:42:596 -drum finish sounds better
  28. 01:21:820 (7) - there's nothing here... i'd delete this

Fort wrote:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline)
gl <3
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mod
Mod

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Hi! sorry for the Long Delay! ^^
Here's the mods :3
  1. RedMeans : Unrankable
  2. BlueMeans : Highly Recommended
  3. Black Means : Normal Mods

[box=]

General


  1. Please dont Use any Bright Combo Color
  2. Make the Distance Spacing 1,1x
  3. you can make the AR 4 in Easy Fixed
  4. Also, The OD too Fixed

Easy


  1. 00:05:702 (1,3) - Ovelapped Fixed
  2. 00:20:608 (3,5) - Overlapped too Fixed
  3. 00:22:844 (1,3) - Overlapped o.o Fixed
  4. 00:34:397 (4) - NC also, (4) is overlapping (1) Fixed
  5. 00:35:515 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
  6. 01:04:211 (1) - NC ? Fixed
  7. 01:04:584 (1) - This Slider style can be Blanket with 01:03:093 (4) - Here's The Example http://puu.sh/gXoVa/ee1a4e4820.jpg Fixed
  8. 01:07:192 (1) - Could You make This Blanket with 01:05:702 (7) - ? Example : http://puu.sh/gXoYy/1bc244bff9.jpg Will consider it
  9. 01:07:938 (2) - Make it Like This http://puu.sh/gXp0N/a8652b5cf0.jpg to Avoid Overlaps Will consider it
  10. 01:08:683 (3,4) - Blanket? It's already blanket
  11. 01:10:174 (1) - Stack Blanket with 01:09:056 (4) - Sorry i dont know what you mean
  12. 01:12:037 (4,5) - Fix Blanket Fixed
  13. 01:13:528 (1,2) - Blanket this? Will consider it
  14. 01:21:726 (2) - in the Playfield, this would be overlap the HP bar, Fix this Please In mine is not, so nope
  15. 01:26:944 (5) - Can you Blanket this with (4) ? Will consider it

Normal


  1. 00:26:385 (3) - Overlap Fixed
Err... I dont Find any Problems on this Diff :roll:

Hard


Seems Fine for me :)

Insane


  1. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - DS is Too BIG X( I think it is fine
  2. 01:03:279 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ I think it is fine
  3. 01:21:726 (6,7,1) - ^ This Look Overmapped I think it is fine
  4. 01:24:149 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ I think it is fine
  5. 01:27:130 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
  6. 01:27:596 (1) - Spinner Must Start Here 01:27:689 - Fixed
Those streams really looks Difficult, please make the stream easier, this map is a Slow Song :(, so please make those streams More Near ;)
GOOD LUCK! ^o^
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mod
Mod

Milan- wrote:

hiii

[insane]
  1. This is the only diff with slider tick 2. would be cool to be constant and change it to 1 :3. Fixed
  2. Holy.. increase your overall hitsound volumen around 10-15% pls, i cant hear sht Fixed
  3. 00:02:348 (2) - 00:05:329 (2) - drum finish on head sounds better imo Fixed
  4. 00:03:838 (5) - ^drum clap here Fixed
  5. 00:06:447 - 00:06:820 - 00:09:428 - 00:14:273 (9) - add clap or something pls Some of it Fixed
  6. 00:07:192 (3) - finish on head, no tail Fixed
  7. 00:07:938 (1) - ^, and cancel clap, sounds bad Fixed
  8. 00:08:683 (3) - clap on head? Fixed
  9. 00:10:546 (1) - 00:12:037 (1) - 00:13:528 (5) - add clap on head Fixed
  10. 00:11:292 (3) - clap instead of whistle. and cancel whistle on 00:11:385 (4) - sounds really bad heh Fixed
  11. 00:14:646 (1) - this beat doesnt really follow something, thus a 1/1 sliders between 00:14:459 (10,2) - feels/plays a lot better i think Fixed
  12. 00:15:391 (5) - finish on head and whistle on tail sounds ok to me Fixed
  13. 00:15:298 - there's a triple here, if you wanted to map this lol Fixed
  14. 00:18:745 (4,1) - this rhythm doesnt follow anything here >< vocals start at 00:18:931 - , so start the slider from there instead, i guess(and also you should try to avoid mapping strong beat with slider tails, like you did here or 00:02:348 (2,5) - etc). 00:30:670 (8) - this is fine tho uhm. Will consider it for the rhythm and i will remember your message
  15. 00:21:726 (5) - ^ same
  16. 00:24:708 (4) - this should be 1/2, vocals are at 00:24:894 - , not on the blue tick. Will consider it
  17. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - i'd use drum clap/finish here. Cuz how drummy this sounds, normal hit doesnt fit at all. Fixed
  18. 00:37:752 (3) - finish cuz you added to 00:37:006 (1) - Fixed
  19. 00:39:521 (5) - delete this note, cuz there's nothing here lol. Also 00:39:428 (4,5) - these shouldn't normalsampleset >< (5) should have whistle tho. Same goes to 01:18:186 (4,5,6) - Fixed
  20. 00:41:105 (5,6) - whistles. Well this whole section is missing whistles. Fixed
  21. 00:48:931 (1,2,3) - missing claps, you know where>w< Fixed
  22. 00:53:217 (6) - finish sounds better than clap Fixed
  23. 00:54:521 (3) - add normal sampleset on head or something(? Fixed. i add normal
  24. 01:03:466 (6) - 01:04:956 (5) - 01:06:074 (3) - add clap Fixed
  25. 01:06:540 - 01:18:652 - there's a beat here too, if you want to map it lol Some fixed
  26. 01:15:764 (1) - 01:27:503 (5) - finish on head Fixed
  27. 01:21:354 - 00:42:596 -drum finish sounds better Fixed
  28. 01:21:820 (7) - there's nothing here... i'd delete this Fixed

Fort wrote:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline) Fixed
gl <3
Bara-


[Easy]
00:17:627 (3,4) - Try to improve blanket, you can move (3) to 183:257, then you need to change distance of the previous note (2), so the distance keeps 1.00
00:39:242 (4) - This shape can be improved to make the blanket better, move the red node a little down, and you'll see what to do
01:03:093 (4) - Move to 40:189 to improve blanket
01:07:192 (1,2) - They seem to go too high, so they hit the HPBar, which is unrankable, can you check if it happens for you as well. If it does, move it down a little

Solid diff

[Normal]
00:04:211 (3) - NC for consistency with Easy, also, it feels better having a few NC in the begin
00:38:869 (4,1) - Improve blanket, you need to change the slider shape to do this, set time to 00:38:683 to make a good blanket
00:43:341 (2,3) - Improve blanket, the slider needs to go down a little
01:19:490 (4) - Shape feels really weird, Try making it have just 1 grey point, to make it blanket the previous note

Also a solid diff

[Hard]
00:12:969 (1) - Move to 280:186 to improve the stack
00:23:590 (4,7) - Try stacking the end of (4) with the start of (7) (Move (7) to 339:165 to achieve this)
00:56:012 (3,4,5) - Try to keep the distance in this part the same, it'll make it look better
01:12:596 (8,1) - Improve blanket; Move (8) to 321:225 to achieve this
01:26:944 (2,3,4,5,6) - Have you gone inssane? This doesn't even belong in an extra difficulty, make it an even spaced stream

[Insane]
00:09:801 (4,5,1) - Improve blanket, move (5) to 164:172
00:33:652 (8) - Move to 296:151 to improve blanket (You might need to change some other parts to make the star look nice)


This mapset is really good
I think you can ask around for BN to mod it, to get the good quality mods in order to get it ranked
Good Luck!!!!
Star~~
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi baraatje123 !
Thanks for the mods
Mod

baraatje123 wrote:



[Easy]
00:17:627 (3,4) - Try to improve blanket, you can move (3) to 183:257, then you need to change distance of the previous note (2), so the distance keeps 1.00 Fixed
00:39:242 (4) - This shape can be improved to make the blanket better, move the red node a little down, and you'll see what to do Fixed
01:03:093 (4) - Move to 40:189 to improve blanket Fixed
01:07:192 (1,2) - They seem to go too high, so they hit the HPBar, which is unrankable, can you check if it happens for you as well. If it does, move it down a little Fixed

Solid diff Thanks

[Normal]
00:04:211 (3) - NC for consistency with Easy, also, it feels better having a few NC in the begin Fixed
00:38:869 (4,1) - Improve blanket, you need to change the slider shape to do this, set time to 00:38:683 to make a good blanket Fixed
00:43:341 (2,3) - Improve blanket, the slider needs to go down a little Fixed
01:19:490 (4) - Shape feels really weird, Try making it have just 1 grey point, to make it blanket the previous note Fixed

Also a solid diff Thanks

[Hard]
00:12:969 (1) - Move to 280:186 to improve the stack Fixed
00:23:590 (4,7) - Try stacking the end of (4) with the start of (7) (Move (7) to 339:165 to achieve this) Fixed
00:56:012 (3,4,5) - Try to keep the distance in this part the same, it'll make it look better Fixed
01:12:596 (8,1) - Improve blanket; Move (8) to 321:225 to achieve this Fixed
01:26:944 (2,3,4,5,6) - Have you gone inssane? This doesn't even belong in an extra difficulty, make it an even spaced stream Fixed

[Insane]
00:09:801 (4,5,1) - Improve blanket, move (5) to 164:172 Fixed
00:33:652 (8) - Move to 296:151 to improve blanket (You might need to change some other parts to make the star look nice) Fixed


This mapset is really good Thanks
I think you can ask around for BN to mod it, to get the good quality mods in order to get it ranked
Good Luck!!!!
Star~~ Thanks
h1b1k11



  • 01:27:689 (1) - All spinners should start here
Insane
00:24:708 (4) - Slider ends here
00:41:851 (2) - Fix this properly if it's going behind 00:40:733 (3)
Before

After

00:42:596 (4) - ^^
00:53:776 (1) - Remove for circle
00:54:149 (2) - ^^
01:21:913 (2) - Remove
01:22:099 (3) - Slider should end here
^^01:22:472 - Add a circle
If you were to do this, I think it fits more with the singing.

Hard
00:04:956 (4) - Maybe put this under slider 5

01:06:261 (2,3,4) - Replace for a slider

Normal
00:07:938 (4) - Ctrl+G and move it down here because it seems more easier for the player

Easy
00:14:273 (6) - Slider should end here
^^00:15:018 - Add a slider ending 00:15:391 with reverse
01:05:702 (3) - Slider should end here
^^01:06:820 - Add circle?
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for the mods

imaikiseta wrote:




  • 01:27:689 (1) - All spinners should start here All spinner start at that time already
Insane
00:24:708 (4) - Slider ends here Sorry i dont know what you mean
00:41:851 (2) - Fix this properly if it's going behind 00:40:733 (3) Fixed
Before

After

00:42:596 (4) - ^^ Fixed
00:53:776 (1) - Remove for circle I think nope
00:54:149 (2) - ^^ I think nope
01:21:913 (2) - Remove Fixed
01:22:099 (3) - Slider should end here I think nope
^^01:22:472 - Add a circle
If you were to do this, I think it fits more with the singing.

Hard
00:04:956 (4) - Maybe put this under slider 5 I think nope

01:06:261 (2,3,4) - Replace for a slider I think nope

Normal
00:07:938 (4) - Ctrl+G and move it down here because it seems more easier for the player Fixed

Easy
00:14:273 (6) - Slider should end here Fixed
^^00:15:018 - Add a slider ending 00:15:391 with reverse
01:05:702 (3) - Slider should end here I think nope
^^01:06:820 - Add circle?
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