EvilElvis wrote:

[Не хард]
00:45:340 (2) - а ты уверен что стоит пропускать красный тик? Идти под музыку это хорошо, но меня немного не вдохновляет что тут хочется джампить, но не выходит — там же после небольшой джамп идёт, а слайдер я трогать не буду
00:48:896 (2) - даже не знаю, я опять за серклы — а я нет
01:11:118 (4,5) - а как на счет, стакнуть их вместе, на отдалении от слайдера который идет до них, или можно перейти в йоло20239867326 режим и сделать медленный слайдер, вот так, например, ну и для похожих моментов, если придется по вкусу — я так никогда не сделаю
01:24:007 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - вот тут больше располагает к постепенному уменьшению спейсинга, подумай над этим — нууу не факт, на самом деле
01:39:563 - даже не знаю, хорошо это или плохо — это никак
Последние части хороши, за исключением ":(" — стёрто

[Хард]
00:16:896 (2) - не думаю что добавить 1/8 или что там репиты будет плохо для харда, а то 1/4 слишком блекло звучит как-то. Сам решишь — опасно выше 1/6 идти
03:27:563 (3,4,5,6) - я за более ромбистый ромб — а это и не ромб: http://puu.sh/hZ6b7/ff168707eb.jpg

Остальное из моего применил, из не моего — не трогал, но там есть 3-4 применённых пункта. Спасибо!

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hard

1. 00:06:664 (7) - Is just me or the spacing is different here? — I don't understand what you mean, but if that was regarding the next combo, it's totally acceptable
2. 00:13:775 (6) - ^ — ^

Fixed the rest, thanks.

Frey wrote:

About trap music, I really want to see <You know you like it (DJ Snake remix)> get mapped ;w; — I don't think I've got passion for that, unfortunately

• [General]

1. AudioLeadIn 1500 - 2000 — it's ineffective; please tell to everyone you notice advising this that osu! uses lead-in 1500 for a value which is lower than 1500 or not set, at least on cuttingedge which is eventually going to be merged with the main branch
   
2. 00:04:007 (1) - mistake. Addtions→ Auto, Sampleset→ Normal — that is harsher than I want it to be
3. 03:04:896 (2) - whistle? cuz you used whistle at trigger sound before — fixed on my parts
   
   [Easy]
4. 03:09:785 (2) - x56 y84 to unify ds — ok
   
   [Normal]
   
5. 02:16:229 (2) - x188 y292 to unify ds — ok

Thanks

20:15 *Secretpipe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/707183 SteLouse - Joyride [Easy]]
20:15 Secretpipe: 00:57:340 (1) - I just played it and it's overlapping the HP bar, careful c:
20:17 TicClick: fixed
20:19 Secretpipe: 02:58:229 (1) - Maybe you could place it at x:60 y:176 to make it toward 02:57:340 (4) - . If you do that correctly , it can be a fun triangle c: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3215452
20:19 Secretpipe: Remember that it's only a suggestion
20:20 Secretpipe: If you agree with me , consider to move the next objects like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3215452
20:20 Secretpipe: 03:16:896 (2,3,1,2,3) - Your star shaped pattern could be much improved tho ! c:
20:21 TicClick: rejected and fixed; there's not much to improve
20:21 Secretpipe: 03:19:563 (1,2,3,4,1) - That one is better but hey , you can adjust it ! c: There's the tool "create polygon circle" in case if you forgot it
20:21 TicClick: fxed
20:22 Secretpipe: Alright ! Let's move to Normal!
20:23 *Secretpipe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/707184 SteLouse - Joyride [Normal]]
20:23 TicClick: yeah
20:23 Secretpipe: 00:36:896 (2) - 's head is overlapping the HP bar!
20:23 TicClick: it doesn't overlap it
20:23 Secretpipe: And I'm curious to know if 00:37:785 (1) - is offscreen
20:23 TicClick: unless you have a non-standard overlap
20:23 TicClick: * HP bar
20:24 TicClick: no, it isn't
20:24 Secretpipe: I changed it when I changed the diff
20:24 Secretpipe: the skin
20:24 TicClick: everything that's roughly a CS 3 circle away from the grid is probably offscreen
20:24 TicClick: the rest is always fitting
20:25 Secretpipe: You're right!
20:25 Secretpipe: btw you use another DS for 1/2 patterns?
20:25 TicClick: yea
20:25 Secretpipe: Cause you use 0.9 and 1.2
20:25 TicClick: 0.9 for 1/2, 1.2 for.. yeah
20:26 Secretpipe: alright just wanted to be clear about that , these one are fine
20:30 Secretpipe: 01:39:563 (4) - Maybe you could move it a little bit in the left to make a square shaped pattern with 01:38:229 (1,2,3) - but yea it'd break the linear line made with 01:39:118 (3,4,5,1) -
20:30 TicClick: I better keep it linear
20:30 Secretpipe: yup I'd keepit anyway
20:31 Secretpipe: 02:04:896 (1) - that spinner in easy makes me curious cuz it's maybe too short
20:31 Secretpipe: idk
20:32 TicClick: it's almost 2s
20:33 Secretpipe: still , beginners are worse that u can imagine lol
20:33 Secretpipe: also
20:33 Secretpipe: 02:44:007 (1) - is not offscreen but it's really low xD I'd suggest you to move it higher by some grids maybe
20:34 Secretpipe: to be safe you know
20:34 TicClick: normal or easy?
20:34 Secretpipe: Normal now
20:34 TicClick: that;s low but not offscreen
20:35 Secretpipe: yea
20:35 Secretpipe: okay then I forgot that ayyy
20:36 Secretpipe: you can maybe some curve to 03:43:563 (2) - , even a little one like 01:02:674 (1) -
20:37 Secretpipe: or like that 03:48:896 (3) - . Slider with not many curves are the greatest!
20:37 Secretpipe: and then call me when we can move on Hard
20:38 TicClick: okay added
20:42 *Secretpipe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/664753 SteLouse - Joyride [Hard]]
20:45 Secretpipe: Wait
20:48 Secretpipe: I'm going to eat
20:48 Secretpipe: brb
20:49 TicClick: mhm
21:05 Secretpipe: I'm here!
21:05 Secretpipe: ok so forget what I told you before
21:05 Secretpipe: 00:48:896 (2) - Maybe a Ctrl G jump would fit here
21:07 Secretpipe: 01:29:785 (2,3) - maybe the blanket could be much cooler!
21:07 Secretpipe: 01:40:007 (1) - triangle could be cool to finish the pattern here c:
21:08 Secretpipe: I'm just rechecking the hard
21:08 TicClick: no / no, it's already good / I don't want this to be a triangle
21:09 Secretpipe: 03:27:118 (2,3,4,5,6) - The star could be much nicer
21:09 TicClick: that's not a star
21:10 Secretpipe: oh
21:10 Secretpipe: lol'd
21:10 Secretpipe: I thought so
21:10 Secretpipe: how to mod perfection also ;u;
21:10 Secretpipe: nothing else to metion
21:10 TicClick: that's nice
21:11 Secretpipe: Insane was fine I played it both times yesterday but lemme recheck
21:13 Secretpipe: The doubles are bothering me but it must be my lack of skill hue
21:13 Secretpipe: also don't judge my rank I'm able to play insane ahah
21:13 TicClick: doubles?
21:14 *Secretpipe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/653381 SteLouse - Joyride [Insane ft. Vass_Bass]]
21:14 Secretpipe: 01:19:563 (5,6,7,8) -
21:15 TicClick: oh