[Kantan]00:27:979 (36) -
k : consist with 00:20:594 - also a bit better to follow vocal
00:18:748 - move to 00:16:902 - : consist with 00:09:056 - , 00:23:825 - , 00:31:210 -
00:53:364 (1) - add finish : this note are the first on kiai make the note stronger are better
01:08:133 - add finish : Cymbal
[Futsuu]00:35:825 (64) -
k00:36:979 (67,70) - delete : you don't really need it. that doesn't make sense just only make it harder
if you accept above and still want 1/2 pattern , add
k on 00:37:441 -
00:43:902 - add finish :
00:45:056 - move <- 1/2 and then add finish :
just make it correct
00:46:210 - , 00:48:056 - remove !! ;A: then follow this :
D k d k d k d k 00:53:364 (1) -
K : please
01:08:133 (1) - ^
[Muzukashii]reason below here just make correct with vocal and make feeling better by my own way
00:06:864 - remove this and then add finish to 00:06:979 - and 00:07:441 -
00:08:710 - remove : this note ruin the feel
00:09:748 - remove : ^
00:11:594 - move to 00:11:133 -
00:11:825 -
k00:13:902 - remove
00:17:594 - remove
00:24:056 - move to 00:23:594 -
00:26:364 - remove
00:27:633 - remove
00:28:671 - remove
00:30:748 -
k : why k ? .Additional build-up clap sound also it's the kick sound
00:32:248 - remove
00:32:364 - remove
00:32:710 - move to 00:32:941 -
00:34:117 - remove
00:34:210 - remove
00:35:248 - move to 00:34:671 -
00:35:133 - remove
00:35:594 - remove
00:35:825 - , 00:36:056 - , 00:36:287 - swap color
00:36:517 - remove
00:36:748 -
k k ddk k00:40:441 - , 00:40:671 - , 00:42:287 - , 00:42:517 - , 00:44:594 - , 00:44:825 - add finish
00:45:056 -
d01:00:517 - delete : BREAK TIME !
01:05:248 - add
d01:14:825 - delete : BREAK TIME AGAIN !
[Oni]00:04:671 - remove finish : Over-mapped
00:04:671 (18) - delete and then add finish to 00:07:441 - and 00:07:902 -
00:08:825 -
d please
00:11:825 (53) -
k00:12:287 -
k : kick sound and don't make break time over 1/1 beat unless there are some unique sound
00:15:748 -
d00:26:017 - remove finish : Over-mapped and then 00:38:825 - remove finish on this too
01:00:056 (1,2) - add finish : make player feel fresh after 2/1 break (spinner)
01:07:671 - add
k and 01:07:902 - add
d : consist with 01:00:056 - and then add finish on 01:08:133 - because cymbal
add the things like above on 01:15:056 -
idk but i think some (new Oni) player will uncomfortable with that 1/4 spam also they are awkward to me a bit :/ i have no idea with them
edit : you should change BG to be more Loli