Momizi wrote:

hello ,MOD from my queue,sry for so long
[Imperishable]
00:20:593 (1,2) - move down,make it dont touch the edge of00:21:225 (1) - Fixed!
00:51:541 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - with piano i think use SC:1 is better Fixed!
01:10:330 (5) - touch the edge of blood,and i think here can be a bigger jump from4 to 5,as the llyric so~ra？I like it more like this, i might move it a bit down tho
01:19:015 (4,1) - ths distance maybe read as 1/2，make the distance more small or more big。Fixed!
01:56:751 (4) - how about move 4 stack with 2 Bad flow
02:14:436 (2) - I think nc is better，because 02:13:646 (1,2) - is 1/2 but here 02:14:120 (1,2) - is 1/1，use same color maybe read as 1/2 somewhere like here will not mention again. It makes more sense like this, because there's a new rhythm which is 1/4
02:30:699 (1) - dont need nc Fixed!
03:49:646 (3) - I think here can use a slider Feels bad and random

good luck

1. Title: 永夜 「Imperishable Challengers」
2. Romanized Title: Eternal Night 「Imperishable Challenger」

1. Why Marisa for the BG lol
2. 00:55:646 (1,2) - I think if you unstack this and make the spacing the bigger it would play better (hey, you actually did that at 03:12:067 (2,3,4) !)
3. 01:19:172 - add a note here? there's still a violin sound
4. 01:37:804 (4,5) - prefer a circle here. the intensity doesn't pick up until 01:38:120 -
5. 01:59:988 (2) - either unstack or the entire triplet on (1)
6. 02:40:172 to 02:50:278 - what instrument are you following in this section? I think it would be nice if you continue to follow the violin and use similar rhythms to the beginning of the song
7. 04:03:383 (6) - i prefer moving this to [288, 88] to maintain the back and forth flow that's going on
8. 04:59:120 - I'm not familiar with how storyboarding works, but I think it would be cool if you slowly zoomed into the BG during the entire break time and then go back to the original size at 05:19:330 along with the flash

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~
[General]
Where did you get the metadata from? On the wiki page and in the actual album, it's

1. Title: 永夜 「Imperishable Challengers」
2. Romanized Title: Eternal Night 「Imperishable Challenger」

Also, for tags, I recommend some of the following: "奉"-album, "Diao ye zong"-romanized circle, "凋叶棕"-circle, "Night" for imperishable night, "th8", "月見草" kanji for evening primrose, "竹取飛翔" kanji for flight of the bamboo cutter (might as well add those too lol), "東方永夜抄" japanese title for imperishable night, "蓬莱山" and "輝夜" which are part of kaguya's name Fixed all this

[Imperishable]

1. Why Marisa for the BG lol Fixed!
2. 00:55:646 (1,2) - I think if you unstack this and make the spacing the bigger it would play better (hey, you actually did that at 03:12:067 (2,3,4) !) The parts are not the same (only the pattern) in rhythm, so it would be weird.
3. 01:19:172 - add a note here? there's still a violin sound The sound is too weak, and it would be awkward..
4. 01:37:804 (4,5) - prefer a circle here. the intensity doesn't pick up until 01:38:120 - Already considered this, but i will consider it again.
5. 01:59:988 (2) - either unstack or the entire triplet on (1) This play well, and fits the map imo
6. 02:40:172 to 02:50:278 - what instrument are you following in this section? I think it would be nice if you continue to follow the violin and use similar rhythms to the beginning of the song Have you tried to delete the notes and hear what im mapping to? xD The hitsounds fits so good that u can't hear it lol
7. 04:03:383 (6) - i prefer moving this to [288, 88] to maintain the back and forth flow that's going on Fixed!
8. 04:59:120 - I'm not familiar with how storyboarding works, but I think it would be cool if you slowly zoomed into the BG during the entire break time and then go back to the original size at 05:19:330 along with the flash Fixed!

But holy shit... this map was amazing. Have some stars and hope you get this ranked soon!

deathmarc4 wrote:

the proper romanized title is Eiya [Imperishable Challengers] according to the ranking criteria

• 
  [Imperishable]
  
  
  
  

1. dat same greenline,
   
2. Found unused .wav files:
   - soft-hitclap2-gammel1.wav
   - normal-hitclap2.wav
   - normal-hitfinish2.wav
   - normal-hitclap-gammel1.wav
   - normal-hitnormal2.wav
   
3. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
4. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
   
5. increase ar9.4 ~ 9.5 is more comfortable for playing
   
6. 00:41:120 - duplicate green line
   

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

7. 01:13:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to follow same NC partten in same part
   like this 03:09:541 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
   
8. 02:08:909 (2,3,4,5) - i noticed this stream is unique stream which have clap sound.
   idk it's intentional or not.
   
9. 03:29:593 (3,4,5,6,1) - since this part is a bit silence than ( 03:29:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - )
   this DS is so huge. imo.
   
10. 04:04:251 (4,6) - not sure, i guess overmapped. according to 02:06:699 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
    
11. 04:47:436 (1) - i can't find this note follow what.
    just try once time myself for fitting music.
    
    
12. 05:56:120 (2) - overlap with 05:55:015 (3) - ?
    because you use overlapping at 05:56:278 (3,1) -
    
13. 06:18:383 (7) - remove finish?, i listen only three finish in 06:17:436 - ~ 06:18:541 -
    but my ear is not good. orz

SkinnyJommy wrote:

Hi! m4m from your queue!!

[Imperishable]

1. 00:43:646 (9) - Would you like to mute this slider end? Because the point of an extended slider is replicate a held vocal or instrument, so the hitsound at the end should be muted as there is no drum kick or snare there, unless there actually is but i dont hear it
   
2. 00:46:172 (6) - ^
   
3. 00:56:593 (1,2) - You could fix this blanket by moving the center white anchor up one pixel, lel im a blanket freak ;-;
   
4. 01:02:751 (3,3,4) - This overlap is ugly, so consider moving the entire stream over to the right more! I did this on purpose to get a stable spacing, if you know what i mean.. The stream will be too far away if i move it.
   
5. 01:07:804 (4,7) - Really noticable blanket fix here
   
6. 01:14:909 (4,4) - Bad overlap from the head and tail ends of these sliders! so move 01:16:015 (4) - to 304, 204 You won't even really notice this ingame lol.
   
7. 01:23:278 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern overlaps with the previous sliders, so I suggest moving this pattern to 132, 266 by just selecting the 4 notes and moving it there. Kinda fixed it, and not. I changed the jump.
   
8. 01:21:541 (9) - mute slider end
   
9. 01:24:067 (1) - Okay I'll stop mentioning muting slider ends xD
   
10. 01:31:804 (8) - move this to 336, 247 to create a better looking pattern!
    
11. 01:36:857 (4) - move this to 278, 270 for the same reason as ^ I'll keep this, since it's not really a pattern.
    
12. 01:45:699 (5,7) - maybe you should try to blanket these? I think it would make sense I already blanket the 1/1 slider with another slider, so nah.
    
13. 01:56:436 (2) - I would move this to 98, 74 because if you look at 01:55:646 (5,6) - it would be right smack dab in the middle of them, also i think it feels better to play, flows better because you have the previous slider as a 1/1 using the a curving motion so i think the extra distance going to the left with 2 feels really good to play Nice suggestion, but i think i will keep my way because i think it looks and plays better.
    
14. 01:57:857 (1) - hmm i would move this to 287, 58 so that its not extremely close to 01:57:225 (1) - and also it looks better with the upcoming slider 01:58:488 (1) - so overall it just feels like a better note placement to me
    
15. 01:58:015 (2,2) - stack! Too random for me D:
    
16. 01:58:804 (2,5) - this slight overlap is ugly :C
    
17. 01:59:436 (5,5) - same thing here with the same circle LOL LOL, you won't really notice it ingame.
    
18. 02:01:330 (3,6) - stack!!!
    
19. 02:03:857 (4,4) - another ugly slight overlap, always try to avoid these Same as before, you won't notice it ingame when u play, so it's not necessary to avoid it.
    
20. 02:07:172 (7,3) - hmm i would stack these
    
21. 02:08:593 (1,6) - ugly overlap
    
22. 02:07:962 (3,4) - stack please!
    
23. 02:16:015 (8,4) - ugly overlap ;-;
    
24. 02:15:857 (7,5) - ^ This is something that shouldn't necessarily be changed, only if u want to keep it more "clean"
    
25. 02:16:962 (6,1) - jeeze they are everywhere
    
26. 02:20:909 (7) - move this to 364, 317 to prevent the overlap with 3 and also it creates a nice pattern out of 02:19:962 (1,3) - these notes! I like my jump more.
    
27. 02:22:488 (1) - this 1/4 slider after the stream on a big white tick seems really off to me, when i first saw i was like 'wait wut' doesnt really fit imo
    
28. 02:33:541 (7,2) - bleh overlap Shouldn't necessarily be changed, only if u want to keep it more "clean"
    
29. 02:53:896 - Shouldn't there be a note here? Nope.
    
30. 04:18:699 (1) - Another weird 1/4 slider at the end of a stream on a white tick ;-;
    
31. 04:28:804 (1) - ^
    
32. 04:26:909 (5,1) - ugly overlap
    
33. 05:22:804 (5,2) - stack!
    
34. 05:23:751 (3,1) - meh overlap
    
35. 05:24:383 (1) - YOU MUTED A SLIDER END HOLY MOLY I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS :^)
    
36. 05:30:383 (6,1) - Maybe stack the end of 1 onto 6?? you'd have to adjust the upcoming notes
    
37. 05:39:540 (1) - This isn't a 1/4 slider?? you are full of surprises
    
38. 05:47:120 (1) - but then theres one here EXPPLAIN YOUR THOUGHT PROCESS PLEASE hi

well thats it for my mod, sick map dude, really awesome actually!!! i love it

good luck with this!

Frey wrote:

M4M check

• General

1. Source: 東方Project
2. Unused hitsounds:
   - soft-hitclap2-gammel1.wav
   - normal-hitnormal2.wav
   - normal-hitclap2.wav
   - normal-hitclap-gammel1.wav
   - normal-hitfinish2.wav
3. Write _Gezo_ in Tags
4. Unify the preview time of the diffs.
   
   
   Storyboard
5. 06:21:225 - Two Kaguya in the picture at the moment? ;w; The fading one is a ghost òwó
   
   
   Imperishable
6. 00:41:120 - Two inherited points at the same time, delete one.
7. 00:49:962 (4) - isn't better to move it to x324 y36 for a smoothier flow? I don't think so.
8. 03:34:804 (2,3) - make them into 4 circles to stress the increase of the volume? Not necessary.

Good luck m8

09kami wrote:

Hi! m4m from your queue!!
my link : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/388036

nicccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccce!!!!
I love 凋叶粽 very much!!
I did a lot of beatmaps!
I'm actually doing this song！lol

soft-hitwhistle.wav very harsh. maybe you can change a sound effect But it like it ;w;

[Imperishable]

00:42:383 (4,5,6,7) - ummmm....this Pentacle not set good I want to keep this, it plays well

01:23:909 (5) - try to move it to this I fixed this in another way =w=


01:36:067 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - try to move it to this Same as above.


01:42:383 (3) - this sound is very heavy,so mabey you should put it away I don't think it's heavy ;w;

02:04:015 (1,2,3,4) - try to move it to this I fixed this in another way


02:26:278 (1,2,3) - Why is there such a small point of view? What do you mean?

02:30:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - try to move it to this The pattern looks good, but plays bad D: So I will keep mine


02:32:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to move it to this I like the "M" pattern more, because it describes the artist, and flow well.


03:27:778 (8,1,2) - Very easy to make a mistake

04:09:225 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - try to move it to this,note that I have changed my position. I like my way better.


06:17:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Increase its distance!

Lami wrote:

im noob anytime

• 
  [Imperishable]
  
  

1. dat same greenline,
   
2. Found unused .wav files:
   - soft-hitclap2-gammel1.wav
   - normal-hitclap2.wav
   - normal-hitfinish2.wav
   - normal-hitclap-gammel1.wav
   - normal-hitnormal2.wav
   
3. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
4. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks: I don't think this should be changed since it shouldn't be in Taiko...
   
5. increase ar9.4 ~ 9.5 is more comfortable for playing I like the current AR more.
   
6. 00:41:120 - duplicate green line
   

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

7. 01:13:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to follow same NC partten in same part
   like this 03:09:541 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
   
8. 02:08:909 (2,3,4,5) - i noticed this stream is unique stream which have clap sound.
   idk it's intentional or not.
   
9. 03:29:593 (3,4,5,6,1) - since this part is a bit silence than ( 03:29:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - )
   this DS is so huge. imo.
   
10. 04:04:251 (4,6) - not sure, i guess overmapped. according to 02:06:699 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I will might change this. I won't change it know because it's not same vocal, the "overmapped" parts is a longer word that's the same letter, unlike the not overmapped part.
    
11. 04:47:436 (1) - i can't find this note follow what.
    just try once time myself for fitting music. There's no sound at the previous white tick.
    
    
12. 05:56:120 (2) - overlap with 05:55:015 (3) - ?
    because you use overlapping at 05:56:278 (3,1) -
    
13. 06:18:383 (7) - remove finish?, i listen only three finish in 06:17:436 - ~ 06:18:541 -
    but my ear is not good. orz I'll keep it because it fits.

eINess wrote:

sorry for deley

[General]

1. pls fix this >> http://puu.sh/m5QKM/93008a63a0.png
2. AR can be higher I think 9.5 better now
3. uuuu.. BG looks Kowai x-x xD

[Imperishable]

1. 00:20:593 (1,2,3,4) - Starting with intricate patterns'd better refrain. Fixed in another way.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:41:278 (6) - hmm.. that's can be ctrl+g owo
3. 00:51:541 (1,2,3,4,5) - over mapping is fine if the song goes but this is not stream-place I fixed it in some way..
4. 00:52:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In a calm piano parts, that's no sence with 1/4 slider jumps. I'll keep this because it's not calm xD
5. 01:57:857 (1,1) - no need NCs here. It looks better = easier to read.
6. 03:55:015 (2) - try symmetry with 03:54:699 (1) - I like mine more!
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 05:53:278 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - are you sure this follow is best? try this. I think that's better to playable.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   well.. some piano parts are missing in your map. If that's you're style, we can't point out about this. but try more catch rhythem. that's make more sence to mapping.
   and... some follow issue so simple try make vibrant follow :3
   
   I think you copy some parts orz I never do lol

not bad
GL !!

deathmarc4 wrote:

the proper romanized title is Eiya [Imperishable Challengers] according to the ranking criteria

NekoLumi wrote:

M4M o/

General Settings

• 
  Offset "1010" recommended That's off
  
  AR 9,4 is a bit high for 190 bpm, i strongly suggest to reduce it to 9,2 or lower. Changed to AR 9.3 AGAIN
  OD 7,5 or 8. It's not under 6 stars so it would be a bit weird to have OD 7-8 on this.
  HP can however, be increased a bit, like 6,5 or 7. This map is pretty hard and long and you can easily miss and fail, so it would be too hard.

• Eternal Night

  
  00:41:120 (5,6,1) - With such low sv, i'm not sure theses stream jumps are a good idea, i suggest to make a full stream instead. I like it liek this, also because it should be a bit interesting
  00:43:488 (8) - Flow killer, move it to 42/76 This is intentional, and fits imo
  00:46:015 (5,6) - Better idea that don't kill the flow > http://puu.sh/m86o4.jpg ^
  00:50:593 (6) - Flow Killer, move it to 0/206 ^
  00:51:857 (4,1) - The slider-end doesn't face the stream direction, i'll suggest this as recommended > http://puu.sh/m86C1.jpg I did it on purpose to make it easier so you don't get sliderbreak.
  01:03:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move a bit that stream to avoid an overlap with the start of 01:02:751 (3) - > http://puu.sh/m86GI.jpg [color=#FF0000This is intentional and not a big deal.[/color]
  01:18:541 (3) - 184/35 and perhaps you have to rotate it to face the next hitcircle, wich is a bit too far for 1/4 spacing (with the slider end direction on the top of the screen, it's not looking good) Nah, i like it best like it already is.
  01:19:330 (1) - overlaps with 01:18:541 (3) - it's ugly imo, move 01:19:330 (1) - to 106/154 Again, this is intentional, and it's not a big deal since it's allowed.
  01:37:330 (2,3) - stack theses, like you did with 01:35:593 (1,2) - because it can make any player going to miss it. (Spacing issue) WEll, many things can make players miss, and this isn't the worst thing since it's a part of the improving to the read ability, which is a good thing. So yeah, i'll keep this like it is.
  01:53:436 (1) - 213/277 to avoid further misses Uh, oh... it's better like it is now.
  02:18:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - Guessing there will be somes misses here too, as i see the huge 1/4 spacing :/ Strongly recommended to fix it by making a stream at least of theses sliders : 02:19:330 (4,5) - and with the same spacing of the upcoming stream already placed here : 02:19:646 (6,7,8,9,1) - My way fits the music the most imo.
  02:29:436 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Too much spacing wich can be confused to 1/3 + remove NC for 02:29:751 (1) - Only NC WHEN something new happens like 1/3, or just new big white tick or something. This map fits for most players under 50k, so they're aware of this being a 1/4 part.
  02:35:199 (1) - add a break here That's too empty, also the slider fits with the vocal.
  02:41:278 - missing note here (remember you're in a extra diff, so you can map everything you hear if needed) This part is slow and calm and there's several beats to map to. I mapped to the "tick" sound, not the other sounds.
  02:43:172 - ^
  02:43:804 - ^
  02:46:330 - ^
  02:46:962 - ^
  02:48:225 - ^
  02:48:857 - ^
  02:49:488 - ^
  02:50:278 (1) - add a break after this hitcircle People will think that it's a long break and might even miss lol, not necessary.
  02:55:330 (1) - ^ (I insist on this because of the HR players, and the very fast HP it has) Already tested it with all mods a hum can paly this with lol, and it's no problemo.
  03:11:436 (4) - Flow Killer, move it to 119/374 Same as the other parts. A flow shouldn't always be flowing, there can be stops for the cursor too, to make it more interesting.
  03:11:593 (1) - can go out of screen, just add some height to it, like 210/372 The play area is actually longer down, it's we're just mapping to the actual box of it.
  03:26:436 (2,3) - too much spaced :\ Fixed this.
  03:39:699 (2,3) - ^ Plays well imo.
  03:49:330 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
  04:04:172 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream is just overmapped, i hear just 1/2 notes and vocals here. And the vocal is the one it's mapped to which is a long stretched word.
  04:15:541 (4,5,6) - too much spaced :/ It's kiai time, what do you expect?
  04:28:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overmapped too... Same as the other stream.
  04:30:304 (2) - 356/82 to avoid misses on a triplet This fits where it is, also because it's stacked with something.
  04:31:330 (1) - add a break No need, would only confuse the player.
  05:26:672 (5) - 298/107 to avoid misses on a triplet Same as the other.
  05:28:172 (1,2) - can be high spaced, but not that much please move 05:28:330 (2) - to 278/227 Plays fine like this.
  05:29:672 (2) - 70/359 This is something that's shouldn't be change since it's the most common thing most mappers do.
  05:31:646 (6,7,1) - too much spaced (again) :\ (also, overlap, 05:31:330 (3,4,5,7) - isn't looking good) Oh well... It's the kiai time.. It SHOULD be a bit exciting and all.
  05:35:593 (1) - stack the slider end to 05:36:383 (6) - you guess it's about 1/4 spacing Bad flow from the previous note.
  05:37:172 (2) - 297/91 This is blanketed to something....
  05:43:567 (2) - remove or adjust 05:43:330 (1) - to reduce the spacing with 05:43:567 (2) - This is because of the big spacing, and it's flowing good.
  05:49:172 (2) - 260/289 Blanketed to something, not gonna ruin it.
  05:49:330 (3,4,5,6,1) - can be confused to 1/3, reduce it's spacing ...
  05:52:330 (2,4) - move both selected to 319/292 It flows best my way.
  05:54:382 (1,2,3,4,1) - remove first NC and adjust it's spacing Spacing change in a stream needs NC, and gonna keep the spacing since it fits with the music.
  06:04:093 (4) - 315/147 This is perfectly placed imo, not necessary to change.

Sorry if i sound a bit rude, but i did not mod really often, so i just hope my suggestions helps. :')
Nice map however.

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. Here I am as per your request. Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

Note that when playing this my speed has gone down and I have not played a lot of AR9+ songs, so my mod may not be accurate.

General
When searching for this song on youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RcAFRguM9Jw, I found some extra information that you can put into tags if you want. More tags will help with finding the song but if you do not want to that is fine.

Song title: 永夜 「Imperishable Challengers」
Arrangement: RD-Sounds
Vocals: Meramipop
Original song: Evening Primrose (Ending theme) / Flight of the Bamboo Cutter ~ Lunatic Princess (Kaguya Houraisan's Theme)
Source: Touhou Eiyashou ~ Imperishable Night
Circle: RD-Sounds
Album: 奉 -Sasage-
Added some.


1) I am curious as to why use AR 9.3? For me it is easier when I play with AR9, but that is due to my speed dropping. However, considering that the music is calm, a lower AR will suit it, but if other people are fine with this AR, then do not change it. The AR suits very well for the song and most in the kiai parts, it will be too slow for those jumps if it's under AR 9.3 imo.

2) 00:31:330 (1,2,3,4) - While this rhythm is fine, compared to the start of the song, which uses this pattern 00:21:225 (1,2,3), I prefer the latter rhythm. The reason is that 00:21:857 (3) fits really well with the stringed instrument that is playing at that time. I do know that you may be thinking that copying the same pattern will be probably be boring for the player. Just as your last sentence said, it would be boring to have the same rhythm pattern, also the bass starts where the new pattern starts, which i map to.

3) 01:19:330 (1,3) - I was thinking you can make these sliders parallel, but that is a small thing so you may not want to change it. Fixed!

4) 01:23:278 (1,2,1,2,3) - Instead of a back and forth pattern you may try a star pattern or a pentagon pattern. If you do decide to do that I would use ctrl+shift+d as a guide for creating the said shape. The current pattern fits better with the music.

If you do decide to keep the back and forth jump, I was thinking for 01:23:593 (1,2,3) - To increase the distance between 2 and 3 just to make it a little bit more challenging. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4296512 Hmm, i don't think it should be necessary to make it more challenging before kiai time.

5) 02:14:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I am not a big fan of the jumps but that is because I like to follow the vocals, which would then lower the difficulty of this part and hence the overall difficulty of this map. That said however, when I first played this at parts such as 02:16:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - I did not expect to change direction from 2 to 3 to 3 to 4. I also feel the jumps to be pretty large, though this is an extra diff so you can get away with it. Well yeah, this is a jumpy map. It's good to make jumps change directions so the flow is too circular.

6) 02:41:278, 02:43:172, 02:43:804, 02:46:330, 02:46:962, 02:48:225, 02:48:857, 02:49:488. These are strong beats, so I am curious as to why you do not have a note there? Add notes there please. Here's my reason: Delete all notes, listen to the music. After that u can hear that there's 3 different rhythms to follow, and i followed the "tick" sound rhythm, so the map isn't always same rhythm which can be boring.

7) 02:50:278 to 02:52:488 Perhaps consider adding a section with lower slider velocity and follow the vocals here. The reason is that here the vocals are prominent and to me it is a waste if you do not use it. I assume you are trying some effect, though in today's map people do this all the time, which I do not like.
Applies to 02:55:409 A player needs a small break after those jumps.

8) 03:25:488 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I do know that you are following that guitar bit at the back, and I do like your idea of changing the volume to match that. I do suggest that you add more timing points if you do desire a smoother increase/decrease in the volume. I can try.

9) 05:26:436 (4,5,6) - Shouldn't you angle slider 4 down so it flows neatly into 5 and 6? Well, the stacked double makes it unnecessary.

Final Thoughts

Despite my slow speed, I did enjoy the hitsounds and sb and I did like most of the map. Some of the changes are personal niggles, such as the AR being too high and my aversion to the relatively huge jumps.

Good luck with the mapset. Thank you!

Nwolf wrote:

ich mag FLUGZEUGE

[General]

04:59:120 - is this... the sb? Seems rather pointless to me, sorry. Unless you wanna see naked girl legs I don't get it Legs is the correct answer!

[Gezo's Oni]

baka glitch caused 1.96 SV wh

y u no use big notes on spots like 01:14:278 (179) - when a new start begins even with the drums in song :< (even more 01:18:383 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208) - here cause you followed drums) because no to finisher supermarket and also because i want to try something else and because lol at keyboard choking them

01:18:857 (206) - Maybe change this to a don so 01:19:015 (207) - becomes more noticeable nu, its a sner
Ok so 02:50:278 - here you have the slow down ON the note, which causes a little bit of overlap, while 00:54:146 - here you placed the slowdown after the note. Why isn't this consistent? I'd recommend moving the one I mentioned first to be also slightly laterffdsgFdhfbgkujdhgfj,ngo
03:16:409 (842) - remove pls thanks i luv u wat r u tolkien abut
03:20:067 (873,875,877) - idk if you should keep this, I mean it's already hard to change snap since there's only a few a notes that are not 1/4 here so THEYRE 1/3 WOTS also the stream is easy
03:20:067 (873) - this one is the most confusing. Don't forget that background instruments still follow the normal snapping so it becomes even more confusing. WOTS its clear 1/3
03:42:225 (982) - How come this is a slider while 01:46:015 (355) - 01:48:541 (364) - 03:44:751 (988) - aren't? the two last arent sustained as much
03:58:015 (1075,1076,1077,1078,1079,1080) - Same as last kiai (that sneaky copy-paste)
06:17:436 - is a stream really appropriate, it's still 1/2 only like everywhere else :> still LOUDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER than the rest so i put stream (it's an easy one it's not like kdddkdddkdddk which would make ekoro choke)


also one last more general thing at the end: 01:54:699 - to 02:04:804 - looks fine, it looks very structured (mainly looking at the beginning of every bar, but the structure goes further too), while 02:04:804 - to 02:14:909 - looks pretty random, switching between triplets and doublets and 3/4+doublet in a more inconsistent way. removed quads but 3/4 breaks will remain


Generally nice map tho, good luck!

skayweed wrote:

Resubmit! a really fun map!

i627758395 wrote:

i love this map and song

Kibbleru wrote:

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kinda a shame that the storyboard isnt made for widescreen but oh well.
05:13:833 - for this part of the storyboard, it would be better if you panned it more so that the girl's face actually shows near the end.
NVM U GOTTA ENABLE WIDESCREEN SUPPORT FOR THIS MAN!
u do NOT need an epilepsy warning. this is nowhere close to strobing lol. I will keep it so people know that there's something flashing.

00:49:962 (4) - http://puu.sh/mQ9xd/00f552dd37.jpg seems to fit ur style better this way tbh Fixed!
00:49:962 (4) - i think u can use just the default soft hitnormal for this part. Nah, it sounds better with custom hitsounds.
02:52:804 - ^ The custom hitsound fits with the piano, but i muted the sliderends to 10% since they're annoying to listen to lol.
04:36:383 - ^ The soft custom sound actually fits here.
01:19:330 (1) - shouldnt this be stacked on 01:19:015 (4) - ? Fixed!
01:25:804 (2) - optional, u could stack it on 01:25:015 (3) - instead or something Fixed!
01:50:278 (3) - sorta touches the accuracy bar thing. i dont think its unrankable but uhh Fixed!
02:13:646 (1,2,1,2) - troll ;_;, can u maybe expose 02:14:436 (2) - a bit more if ur gunna do this xd Fixed!
02:29:436 (3,4,5,6,1) - make this part lower spacing if u want to let the players be able to actually feel the buildup effect. Fixed!
02:43:172 - eh why skip this? theres a kick here which even follows ur hitnormal. it seems like ur pretty consistent with this so.. im not sure what ur going for but if its good to u then go with it I'm actally going for the custom soft hitnormal im using at this part lol
04:25:962 (5) - nc for consistency with previous kiai Fixed!

nice map. u have great consistency something that other people really need to start learning.

XinCrin wrote:

Enable Widescreen Support
16:9 images and storyboard
Disable the background in the unnecesary parts also, extra sb load

-Tochi wrote:

XinCrin wrote:

Enable Widescreen Support
16:9 images and storyboard
Disable the background in the unnecesary parts also, extra sb load

I will when my PC gets fixed!

Disabled.

Kibbleru wrote:

oops. i actually meant 00:54:067 - this part for the first hitsound suggestion thing

Haganenno wrote:

[Eternal Night]
00:40:488 - Slider fits better IMO Feels kinda random to but a slider here tbh
00:50:751 (7,8,9) - really unneccessary jumpscare-degree effect volume increase. It makes no sense since it's a silent and slower part of the map before even a more silent part in the song. The only way this would work is if you make this a pattern and add it to parts like 00:43:172 (7,8,9) - and such The sound here is clearly getting higher and more intense, and then back to normal by the white tick. So the best way to map this part is by making it intense on that small part too.
01:59:436 (5,6,7,8) - this is the only very big problem I have in this map. The map is very flowey and has the pattern to curve streams into jumps. This is anti-flow. Ctrl+J is needed. Nice idea, but - I really prefer this stream to be like this ;;
02:07:015 (5,6,7,8) - same
02:29:751 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'd have this curved a little bit more Fixed!
02:37:330 - insert break time or add something like this Fixed!
03:12:857 (7) - delete. Music doesn't require this and sounds better without it. There's a sound there.
03:15:383 - hitcircle can be put there for more drive, though it's very subjective. Prefer not to add one
03:40:488 (6,7,8,9) - ctrl+h pls Same as the previous, i really prefer this to be anti
03:55:646 (5,6,7,8) - might as well make it flat Do u mean straight? if then, then - Not really, this is the kinda streams u wanted lol
04:25:962 (1,2,3,4,1) - should be curved more won't be a great idea in this part, it will just be a burden to play.
04:33:857 (1) - this pattern would work here well The sound here are too low to map to lol - but i added a spinner.
05:49:330 (3,1) - make these form a bigger curve, huge jumps demands them. That's what i wanted too, but there's no space for it, it would be cramped and look weird i did it.

A very good map which has fun patterns and is fun to play. Good luck getting it approved.

havkz wrote:

Hi. I've checked your beatmap but I couldn't seem to find that much stuff to improve. It's a good map!

04:00:255 - Remove the new combo, because it's pointless It solves the confusion tho..
05:38:909 - From there the new combo has a different distance from the other combo, which looks weird IMO, I'd move it so the stream is connected I added a NC there so it was more obvious.

these two things are literally the only stuff that could be improved in my opinion. Good job anyways

Kuki wrote:

eternal night

00:52:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - tbh the hitsounds here seem lacking, and the also override the music somewhat with their volume, maybe try a different custom? a softer hitsound would be nice here since it is a softer section. Fixed!

01:43:646 (3) - making this just a hitcircle would make a bit more sense imo, it leads onto 01:43:804 (4,5) - quite nicely too as it prepares them for the gaps in timing, i feel like the two sliders is too much overmap. Fixed!

02:47:751 (1) - i feel like this slider is too curved, it would play much nicer like this or something like that, i tested it and it's works well imo. I find the curvy one better ybh.

03:19:804 (7) - this is much more fun to play ctrl+g, i think it would be a nice addition to spice things up here as i think it's too similar to 03:19:646 (6) - atm. I don't like the way it flows :<

03:58:015 (8) - this also ctrl+g is more fun to play, and i think it differentiates it nicely from 03:57:541 (7) - as it looks to me at the moment like they are a bit too similar and it sticks out a bit to me, not in a good way. Same as above.

04:19:330 (5) - small fix, snap to fix stack. Fixed!

05:24:383 (1,2) - i feel like these could line up a bit better. Too close to each other.

05:30:383 (6,7,1) - while testing this really stuck out as something that was uncomfortable to me. i think you should try something more like the ctrl+g version, and experiment with some more ideas here to improve this. though it does mean you'll need to move some other things around i think it would be better off being changed. This looks completely fine to me.

06:10:488 (4,5) - just like what i said a little bit above, i think these could do with lining up a bit better too. Same as i said xD

06:19:646 (1) - i think this could be really cool as a 1/1 slider, mapping the strings here. you could even just copy 06:18:541 (1) - if you wanted, as well as making the sliderend silent. Hmmmm.... I think i'll keep it like this.

overall pretty beautiful map + hitsounds dude, i am genuinely looking foward to being able to set a score on this when it's ranked!