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sadly the mapset is most likely full i wouldve liked to make a gd
but anyway free mod
[extra]
00:52:548 (1,2,3) - the 1/2 here feels a little weird since you can clearly hear 1/4 drums in the back
00:53:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this stream can be improved in shape
00:54:600 - the rhythm placement in the image might be better here since the 1/4 actually starts at 00:54:758 -
01:00:758 - from here on out toward 01:04:548 - , the music gets more intense, but the map doesnt quite reflect it back since 1/4 have been changed to 1/2 jumps which felt very weird to me, also the sudden transition to the jumps doesnt feel right because it starts on a red tick, if you want to keep this you should probably make it transition on downbeat (big white tick)
01:03:758 (6,1,2) - the spacing increases as should at (6) and (1) but as the music grows more intense 01:04:074 (2,3) - suddenly has less spacing
01:05:495 (4,5) - another big spacing that should probably be a bit less considering the kiai part
01:31:864 (3,1) - can blanket
01:38:653 (3) - rotate clockwise -70° perhaps
[loli's redemption]
00:23:653 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - maybe add finishes here instead of claps
01:58:864 (1,2) - wat
03:03:443 - im a bit against this super high diff spike at the end-thing, it makes playing this quite tedious since its this long and there'd be a high chance you'd miss at the end, but thats all up to you
The rest seems well mapped besides another and the light insane, these have a good amount of problems and would probably need remapping of some sections
but anyway free mod
[extra]
00:52:548 (1,2,3) - the 1/2 here feels a little weird since you can clearly hear 1/4 drums in the back
00:53:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this stream can be improved in shape
00:54:600 - the rhythm placement in the image might be better here since the 1/4 actually starts at 00:54:758 -
01:03:758 (6,1,2) - the spacing increases as should at (6) and (1) but as the music grows more intense 01:04:074 (2,3) - suddenly has less spacing
01:05:495 (4,5) - another big spacing that should probably be a bit less considering the kiai part
01:31:864 (3,1) - can blanket
01:38:653 (3) - rotate clockwise -70° perhaps
[loli's redemption]
00:23:653 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - maybe add finishes here instead of claps
01:58:864 (1,2) - wat
03:03:443 - im a bit against this super high diff spike at the end-thing, it makes playing this quite tedious since its this long and there'd be a high chance you'd miss at the end, but thats all up to you
The rest seems well mapped besides another and the light insane, these have a good amount of problems and would probably need remapping of some sections
Topic Starter
THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE MOD!!!!!!!!Lazer wrote:
sadly the mapset is most likely full i wouldve liked to make a gd
but anyway free mod
[extra]
00:52:548 (1,2,3) - the 1/2 here feels a little weird since you can clearly hear 1/4 drums in the back I can't hear 1/4th in the back
00:53:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this stream can be improved in shape fixed
00:54:600 - the rhythm placement in the image might be better here since the 1/4 actually starts at 00:54:758 - fixed01:00:758 - from here on out toward 01:04:548 - , the music gets more intense, but the map doesnt quite reflect it back since 1/4 have been changed to 1/2 jumps which felt very weird to me, also the sudden transition to the jumps doesnt feel right because it starts on a red tick, if you want to keep this you should probably make it transition on downbeat (big white tick) agreed and fixed to keep the jumps. i'll probably change it to keep the stream going later.
01:03:758 (6,1,2) - the spacing increases as should at (6) and (1) but as the music grows more intense 01:04:074 (2,3) - suddenly has less spacing fixed
01:05:495 (4,5) - another big spacing that should probably be a bit less considering the kiai part phiksed
01:31:864 (3,1) - can blanket done
01:38:653 (3) - rotate clockwise -70° perhaps nah
i'll probably do a full check tommorow but uh shouldn't source be just "RWBY"?
Topic Starter
probably[ Space ] wrote:
i'll probably do a full check tommorow but uh shouldn't source be just "RWBY"?
Really sucks this is now graveyarded D:
Such a good map to not be ranked, or even qualified.
Such a good map to not be ranked, or even qualified.
I don't normally mod maps anymore but this song is too fucking good I'll make an exception. Although it seems like throughout most difficulties the main problem i see is rhythm choice so keep that in mind
[Loli's Retribution]
00:01:390 (6,7,1) - consider moving this stack to the right a bit more to avoid overlap with 00:00:285 (1) -
00:37:390 (3) - this slider looks way different than the others, it would be justified if it emphasized a certain sound but it doesn't, it could easily give the same message with a straight slider, etc
00:44:337 (1) - here there is a reason to use a slider with anchors etc due to the change in music, although wouldnt making 00:46:863 (1) - match 00:44:337 (1) be more reasonable due to them being the same sound because you do it here as well 00:49:390 (1) -
01:00:127 (3) - why is this curved when all the others are straight? There is no distinct sound separating them
01:34:390 (3) - ^
01:58:864 (1,2) - these just dont sound right, but idk how you could find a better solution
02:33:285 (2,3) - this overlap is kinda random, there is no distinct sound necessary for such a change
02:38:495 (3,4) - ^
02:41:811 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - consider lowering the DS slightly since this is the calmest part of the song
[Extra]
overall work on your rhythm choices because at times they make no sense
00:04:390 (2) - this is a rather ugly slider imo
00:27:916 (5,3,4) - Normally you want the player to click the important sounds in a slider, but consistently throughout the map you have the sliders end on important sounds which isn't very good imo, might want to consider changing that 00:27:127 (2,3) - are correct while 00:27:916 (5) - isnt
01:00:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a very sudden change, the song hasn't stopped the whole part which you mapped a stream, it's very weird to play because you expect the stream to finish but it abruptly changes into a jump section?
01:43:706 (2,3) - i understand that there is a sound during 2 but it really doesnt play well, you could try replacing 2 with a slider into 3 or making 3 start where two is
01:50:337 (3) - there is really no need for this to be a slider? it's fine as a circle
01:56:495 - 01:57:600 I find it strange that this isnt mapped
00:01:390 (6,7,1) - consider moving this stack to the right a bit more to avoid overlap with 00:00:285 (1) -
00:37:390 (3) - this slider looks way different than the others, it would be justified if it emphasized a certain sound but it doesn't, it could easily give the same message with a straight slider, etc
00:44:337 (1) - here there is a reason to use a slider with anchors etc due to the change in music, although wouldnt making 00:46:863 (1) - match 00:44:337 (1) be more reasonable due to them being the same sound because you do it here as well 00:49:390 (1) -
01:00:127 (3) - why is this curved when all the others are straight? There is no distinct sound separating them
01:34:390 (3) - ^
01:58:864 (1,2) - these just dont sound right, but idk how you could find a better solution
02:33:285 (2,3) - this overlap is kinda random, there is no distinct sound necessary for such a change
02:38:495 (3,4) - ^
02:41:811 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - consider lowering the DS slightly since this is the calmest part of the song
[Extra]
overall work on your rhythm choices because at times they make no sense
00:04:390 (2) - this is a rather ugly slider imo
00:27:916 (5,3,4) - Normally you want the player to click the important sounds in a slider, but consistently throughout the map you have the sliders end on important sounds which isn't very good imo, might want to consider changing that 00:27:127 (2,3) - are correct while 00:27:916 (5) - isnt
01:00:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a very sudden change, the song hasn't stopped the whole part which you mapped a stream, it's very weird to play because you expect the stream to finish but it abruptly changes into a jump section?
01:43:706 (2,3) - i understand that there is a sound during 2 but it really doesnt play well, you could try replacing 2 with a slider into 3 or making 3 start where two is
01:50:337 (3) - there is really no need for this to be a slider? it's fine as a circle
01:56:495 - 01:57:600 I find it strange that this isnt mapped
Topic Starter
[Extra]
overall work on your rhythm choices because at times they make no sense
00:04:390 (2) - this is a rather ugly slider imo sexiest slider ive ever seen
00:27:916 (5,3,4) - Normally you want the player to click the important sounds in a slider, but consistently throughout the map you have the sliders end on important sounds which isn't very good imo, might want to consider changing that 00:27:127 (2,3) - are correct while 00:27:916 (5) - isnt remapped
01:00:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a very sudden change, the song hasn't stopped the whole part which you mapped a stream, it's very weird to play because you expect the stream to finish but it abruptly changes into a jump section? will fix later
01:43:706 (2,3) - i understand that there is a sound during 2 but it really doesnt play well, you could try replacing 2 with a slider into 3 or making 3 start where two is fits imo
01:50:337 (3) - there is really no need for this to be a slider? it's fine as a circle tru but i'll keep it as a slider for now
01:56:495 - 01:57:600 I find it strange that this isnt mapped i dont
overall work on your rhythm choices because at times they make no sense
00:04:390 (2) - this is a rather ugly slider imo sexiest slider ive ever seen
00:27:916 (5,3,4) - Normally you want the player to click the important sounds in a slider, but consistently throughout the map you have the sliders end on important sounds which isn't very good imo, might want to consider changing that 00:27:127 (2,3) - are correct while 00:27:916 (5) - isnt remapped
01:00:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a very sudden change, the song hasn't stopped the whole part which you mapped a stream, it's very weird to play because you expect the stream to finish but it abruptly changes into a jump section? will fix later
01:43:706 (2,3) - i understand that there is a sound during 2 but it really doesnt play well, you could try replacing 2 with a slider into 3 or making 3 start where two is fits imo
01:50:337 (3) - there is really no need for this to be a slider? it's fine as a circle tru but i'll keep it as a slider for now
01:56:495 - 01:57:600 I find it strange that this isnt mapped i dont
just some fixes that could make top diff better:
00:07:863 (1) - this slider is kinda weird, maybe make it horizontal like 00:07:074 (2,3) - too?
00:13:232 (2,4) - blanket (you should look at whole map and fix some of them, will take you like 5-10mins)
00:15:916 (2,3,4) - here you followed song, 00:14:021 (1,2) - here vocal. I feel like you could follow vocal here too, especially that next part is double copy-paste that fits well.
01:25:548 (4,1) - I think you will know what I mean here
*there are also some sliders that art could get improved: 01:32:337 (1) - / 01:51:285 (1) -
01:58:864 (1) - this slider should end on 01:59:495 - and you can also add circle here 02:00:127 (4) - rhythm won't be weird anymore here.
02:49:390 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - and there are also some unnecessary overlaps that could get fixed
this map is really fun to play, but look through the whole map and fix some ugly sliders/blankets/overlaps.
good luck, hope you can rank it :^)
00:07:863 (1) - this slider is kinda weird, maybe make it horizontal like 00:07:074 (2,3) - too?
00:13:232 (2,4) - blanket (you should look at whole map and fix some of them, will take you like 5-10mins)
00:15:916 (2,3,4) - here you followed song, 00:14:021 (1,2) - here vocal. I feel like you could follow vocal here too, especially that next part is double copy-paste that fits well.
01:25:548 (4,1) - I think you will know what I mean here
*there are also some sliders that art could get improved: 01:32:337 (1) - / 01:51:285 (1) -
01:58:864 (1) - this slider should end on 01:59:495 - and you can also add circle here 02:00:127 (4) - rhythm won't be weird anymore here.
02:49:390 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - and there are also some unnecessary overlaps that could get fixed
this map is really fun to play, but look through the whole map and fix some ugly sliders/blankets/overlaps.
good luck, hope you can rank it :^)
it's getting modded heaps because that's a really old map of mine LOL, I've already moved on from this set
can we get this thing moved
Topic Starter
I GIVE UPpuxtu wrote:
can we get this thing moved
If you ever revive this set, call me to remap my diff. It's pretty bad now against my current mapping skills LOL
Loved Soon! TM
Well I guess i'll have to live with that easy forever then XD
Well I guess i'll have to live with that easy forever then XD