GAMI wrote:

I was do that on a long time ago but the pattern before the offset 3270 become like this and I don't know how to fix that since i'm super noob at it. that's why I still stand on offset 2470... ;w;

ZiRoX wrote:

GAMI wrote:

I was do that on a long time ago but the pattern before the offset 3270 become like this and I don't know how to fix that since i'm super noob at it. that's why I still stand on offset 2470... ;w;

1670 can do then.

No492_Shaymin wrote:

GAMI's request

[Salad]

Cheer up!


[Platter]

00:14:270 (4) - Ctrl G.ok
00:30:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing re-edit at this part
01:36:070 (1,2) - exchange the timing with 01:36:870 (1,2). If so, 01:37:670 (1) doesn't have hdash. make hdash umm, not changed at this part , sorry

Far
00:07:670 (5) - make become HDash
00:13:870 (3) - not change
00:21:270 (5) - make become HDash
00:34:870 (3) - not change
01:10:870 (2) - ^
02:09:470 (1) - make it kinda closer


[Rain]

00:04:070 (1,2,3) - Confusing pattern @_@ reduce the distance between 1 and 2 ok
00:05:670 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:43:470 (1,2,3,4) - How about Ctrl G it will be weird for next pattern so sorry ;w;
00:47:070 (2,3) - Make hdash or reduce the distance between 2 and 3 ok
01:10:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing beat. I recommend -> not changed on this part , sorry :<
01:17:970 (4) - move to x224 umm sorry
01:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - Considering flow with 01:22:670 (5) , Ctrl H is more better. wow! thank you
and why 01:23:970 (7,8) is vertical? idk lol
02:00:370 (2) - XD plz...move to the x288. this was too far moved to 308
02:07:670 (6,7,1) - quite hard. 02:07:870 (7) - has to move to the left a little ok
02:13:570 (7,8) - same with 01:23:970 (7,8) ok
02:27:970 (6) - TOO far... not changed sorry

gl

1. Comparing the Ryuuta plate with your other skin elements it looks very diligent. Could you try to modify it as blurred as your other skin elements?
2. Add an epilepsy warning concerning the rapidly changing storyboard and its colours.
3. AiBat points out plenty of missing SB elements, which I think is a bug. I want you to double-check your story board (Just in case).
4. Offset ~1671 or ~3271. Matter of preference.
5. This mapset has a few spread issues. You proceed from almost no jumps in your Salad to plenty of HDashes in your Platter. The difference is intense. In order to solve this, you'll have to work on the spread in general. I will focus on that in any further modding steps.

1. In order to provide a better spread between your Salad and Platter I will point out notes where you can/should add more space between notes.
   
   Gap rearrangement suggestions

   1. 00:03:270 (2) - x400
   2. Select 00:04:870 (1,2) - and then CTRL+G. After that move 00:05:270 (2) - to x448
   3. 00:09:270 (5,1) - Absolutely necessary! 00:09:670 (1) - CTRL+G
   4. 00:31:470 (3) - Try something like x224 to increase the distance between 00:31:470 (3,1) - .
   5. 00:36:870 (5) - CTRL+G and then move 00:36:870 (5) - to x256 and 00:37:470 (1) - to x368
   6. 00:43:470 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm becomes louder from note to note, so please try something like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825828
   7. 00:58:870 (2,1) - Lol what is this? There is just a Kiai starting and not even a bit of a jump? Try the following: Step 1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825855
      Step 2) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825858
   8. 01:05:470 (6,1) - Same as above, this part needs a dash.
   9. Noteworthy thing: Your first kiai could be harder in general. It can be done without a single Dash and that makes it easier than the previous section. Please go through this again.
   10. 01:14:870 (4,1) - Another perfect spot for another Dash.
   11. 01:17:870 (4,5,6,1) - Try the following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825912
   12. 02:14:070 (5,6) - Implement a dash at this point, please.
2. 00:14:470 (1,2) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825769, or this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825774
3. 00:21:270 (5,6) - and 00:24:470 (3) - have the same rhythm, keep it consistent.
4. 00:27:070 (3) - I appreciate to see a reverse arrow at 00:27:270 - because it is not the same rhythm as the 2 previous sliders.
5. 00:38:070 (2) - CTRL+G for a bit of better flow. Feels weird.
6. 00:50:270 (2) - Does not really go so well with the rhythm, suggestion:
   
7. 01:10:470 (3) - Meh... Make it at least a bit more interesting by adding a reverse arrow at 01:11:070 - or something.
8. 01:21:670 (1) - Were you just lazy on this point? I think the spinner does not go well with this music, so please consider mapping it normally as you did in the other difficulties.
9. Add some note at 01:44:270 - to better follow the music
10. 01:45:470 (1) - This slider also could be more consistent with the previous section at 01:44:470 (1,2,3,4) - , please do not use single notes once and then a slider with 2 reverse arrows, it is awkward.
11. 01:52:470 (3) - Triplet could be nice: There should also be a slight jump between 01:52:670 (4,5) - then.
12. 02:11:270 (1) - I have some tricky pattern for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3825986
13. 02:28:070 (3) - x338 02:28:470 (4) - x174

1. One thing straight up: The 1.6 SV in this difficulty is really bad. Let me show you an example: 00:20:670 (4,5) - The HDash feels terrible due to the Slider Velocity, you already need to dash while catching the droplets of slider 00:20:670 (4) - .With that the resulting HDash feels forced and for many it will lead to frustration. I will point out more sections in my mod, but you will have to consider if you really want to stick with this SV.
2. 00:02:470 (1,2,3,4) - This movement is too rough for just the beginning of a song, decrease the note gaps a little, please. Some tiny 1/4 sliders with a proper hitsounding can be nice, too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826017
3. 00:11:270 (1,2,3) - The movement of these HDashes feels kinda forced in comparison to the spot before with the same rhythm. A little consistency cannot hurt, or at least not directly 2 big HDashes at this part of the song already.
4. 00:19:670 (3,4,5) - , 00:22:870 (2,3,4) - ,... and so on. Go through your map again, fully horizontal sliders do not work on this SV, as I stated above already. The movement is rough and feels unpleasant. I will not point out all of these sliders in my mod again, it is your job to go through your map again and make more use of diagonal and lopsided sliders!
5. Select 00:27:270 (1,2,3,4) - and CTRL+H for more movement at 00:26:470 (2,1) - .
6. Please mind consistency between 00:39:470 (2,3,4) - and 00:37:470 (2,3,4) - .
7. 00:41:070 -, 00:40:470 - Reverse arrows
8. 00:56:270 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Feels bland for a Platter, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826096
9. 00:58:470 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826108
10. 01:05:470 - Add note at this point and create a HDash from this note to 01:05:670 (3) - .
11. 01:24:670 - Another note here maybe and another HDash to 01:24:870 (3) -
12. 01:30:870 (1,1) - ...? I mean why is there no jump at all? Just listen to the music.. And 01:31:270 (1,2,3,4) - is boring, too. At least increase distance a bit. The music really shouts for it.
13. 01:34:470 (1) - What is this doing in a Platter, there is so much music going on and you make a 3/1 slider? Let me show you what works out fine instead:
    
14. Add notes at 01:39:070 - , 01:39:870 - . This density too low for a Platter.
15. 01:42:470 (5) - Nope, skips too many important beats again, try:
    
16. 01:47:570 (4,1) - , 01:47:970 (4,1) - Keep the 1/4 Hypers for your Rain. Also: 01:48:470 (5) - No just no, especially not after this combo, NOT in a Platter. Make the movement softer.
17. 02:11:270 (3,4) - Make them maybe a small HDash for a bit more challenge at the end of the song? Makes a good final.
18. 02:12:670 (1) - For a Platter very easy, map the notes: http://puu.sh/kNuaM/80d2aa450d.jpg or http://puu.sh/kNudD/c9f8b1f96e.jpg

1. 00:22:870 (1) - Feels very weird to play, try another shape: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826247. Also, move the slider a little more to the right to make the previous jump a little less painful.
2. 00:27:070 (1,2,3,4) - These shouldn't all be fully straight or it doesn't go well with the flow, another suggestion: Step 1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826265 Step 2) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826270
3. 00:39:470 (7) - CTRL+G for a better flow.
4. 00:49:270 (6,7,1) - The jumpy pattern feels a bit surprising because the vocals don't give too much action at this point. Please move (7) slightly to the right.
5. 01:02:270 (2) - CTRL+G, then move it 2-3 grids to the right for a better flow again.
6. 01:17:670 (3,4,5) - Feels so weird, please try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3826301
7. 01:31:270 (1,2) - Can you explain me this jump, and why it must be that extreme? I see the point of the loud guitar sounds, but this is too exaggerating and I did not feel prepared for it just after the break. Nerf this a little, please.
8. 01:55:270 (3,1) - Please no, after this Hyper you will drift to the left and you need to be super fast to reach (1) in time. You could CTRL+G 01:55:670 (1) - and then move it a bit more to the left to make this whole jump more approachable.
9. 02:06:869 (3) - x112

Sey wrote:

[*]Add an epilepsy warning concerning the rapidly changing storyboard and its colours.
[*]AiBat points out plenty of missing SB elements, which I think is a bug. I want you to double-check your story board (Just in case).
Checked with Sey on the bug, so no problems with SB

GAMI can u delete the Effect folder in the SB folder (the Effect folder should have a white dot in it) i did not use a white dot anywhere so yea
and.. input epilepsy warning ~thankss

GAMI wrote:

"Crystal's Angel" difficult is removed due overmapped issues...

Sey wrote:

@afb: It's not the many HDashes that feel bad in the Rain. Also you mentioned plenty of stuff that has been mentioned in my mod already. Lol please wait next time till my mod is applied at least. T_T
@GAMI: If anything you need to re-arrange a few patterns to provide a better flow in your Rain. Jussayin' but don't nerf the Rain down to death, please.

PatZr wrote:

tobat gw anjing ngeladur lagu loplive `-`

GAMI wrote:

for AFB & Sey ... I will check it soon after I moved to another city , will re-edit this post though

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

rip?

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

Maybe rank it with CLSW diff?

1. Difficulty Spread Issues: You may know that all the diffs has the same CS, 4. Why not try 3.5 for Platter and 3 for Salad? It'll make more sense imo
2. Also, Lower diffs, Salad, Platter and Rain, needs a lot of re-work and can be better if you try remap them because they have a lot of issues upon rhythm choices and patterns. I tried to explain the issues as many as possible so hopefully it'll be helpful

1. 00:08:470 (3,4,5) - These are snapped in a very weird way. I'd just replace them with 1/2 sliders
2. 00:43:470 (1,2,3,4) - This is pretty harsh for salad. Consider reducing the distance between 2 and 3
3. 01:48:870 (6) - Add NC here
4. 01:49:470 (8) - Move slider-tail to 01:49:670 -
5. 01:51:270 - No note here? There should be imo
6. 01:52:070 - Also missing note here
7. 01:52:870 - ^
8. 01:53:670 (5,6,7,8) - These are all snapped in a wrong way. Please make them follow the music

1. 00:06:070 (2,3) - Edge Dash. Please reduce the distance or you can make them HDash as well.
2. 00:09:270 (4,5) - This is quite a long jump for the players who play platter.
3. 00:20:670 (4,5) - SV is overall too high in this part. I find no reason to keep high SV here so mind reduce it?
4. 00:44:870 (1) - I'd just place slider here instead of spinner, which is too sudden & makes no sense at all

1. Overall, patterns are not acceptable for the rain diff and difficulty spike is severe. You should consider remapping some, or more parts to make this diff rankable. If you want more detailed suggestions, do not hesitate to contact me via online pm or forum pm.
2. 00:02:470 (1,2) - I'd put curved streams here instead of reversed sliders which is pretty difficult for the beginning of the map
3. 00:03:870 (6,1) - Putting a screen jump like this should not be tolerated for the rain diff, even when it's anti-flow
4. 00:07:070 (4) - Remove this note
5. 00:08:070 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 streams would fit here instead of slider-note jumps
6. 00:12:870 (1) - Missing note at 00:12:970 - . It should be mapped same as 00:11:270 (1,2,3) - for the sake of consistency
7. 00:11:670 (1) - NC spam here. Try not to place unneeded New Combos
8. 00:14:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - They are placed wrong. They should come 1/4 earlier to follow the music. Listen carefully and you may know that melodies are at 00:14:470 ~ 00:14:670 -, not as how you've placed them
9. 00:28:270 (4,5,1) - This jump should not be in Rain
10. 00:30:770 (2,3) - Edge dash. Please reduce the distance between notes
11. 01:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it's better replace them with a long slider, or anything. Also the 1/8 should not be a thing
12. 01:36:070 (1,2,3,4) - This is not a thing people want to see from rain diff actually. Please reduce the distances and remove some HDashes
13. 01:39:070 (5,6) - Screen jump again x_x

1. 00:39:070 (3,4) - 여기 왼쪽으로 옮기는건 어때요? anti-flow보다는 흐름에 맞는 패턴이 더 잘 어울릴 거 같습니다
2. 01:10:470 (1,2,3,4) - 이 부분 박자는 음악에 맞도록 조금 고쳐보시는 건 어떤가요? 패턴 / 박자
3. 01:17:970 - 이 부분 매핑이 안되어있어요 ㅜㅜ 노트 추가해주세요