Giralda
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- 00:01:804 (2,4) - Since there's variation in between the first four objects in each other, it would be nice to show this variation using soft-whistles on the objects in question, due to the fact that 00:00:204 (1,3) - sounds lower than the aforementioned. sounds good
- 00:32:204 (1) - Seems like the soft-whistle should be on the head here, not on 00:31:804 (3) - , since the pitch is much higher at the slider head than compared to 00:31:804 (3). So add the whistle on the slider head, and use soft additions. softwhistle there is made not for emphasizing high pitch, but for adding some additional sound to the music, and it sounds much better there. on that slider's head it's just not audible since other sounds are pretty loud there
- 01:38:604 (4) - Since you're already working with straight sliders in this section, why not use a red slider anchor on this one too to match the impact on the music? Try something like this: http://puu.sh/iFSub/e5ff96615b.jpg i can't hear anything in the music to point it with red anchor, that sound is pretty different compared to other sounds in this part. and this slider follows 01:32:204 (4) - this one, placed on same "timelines" of the part, so it looks good being curved
- 01:18:604 (2) - This slider is touching the HP bar. Might want to lower that a bit so it doesn't http://puu.sh/iFW89/4eb161a07a.jpg sure
- 00:36:604 (2) - Inconsistent Spacing found here (1.15x) not really a big deal since visually it's pretty close to 00:35:404 (1) - this slider, and this slider can be somehow dropped a little without following it to the end
- 00:37:904 (4) - Here as well, for inconsistent spacing (1.11x) if i move it closer, it will look awful. i think newbies can catch that 0.1 inconsistence
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Tags:dubstep kloyd gamu kyubey lust
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