ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Yo :3 Sorry for late

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General

1. The combo colours are very brighter and the player will not see the objects very well with FL.Try this :
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,128,128
   Combo2 : 255,0,0
   Combo3 : 255,128,64
   Combo4 : 255,0,128 

   Fixed
   
   Looks fine the rest >w<

Easy

1. 00:13:703()- I suggest to add a note for clap and knife sound.It will sound awesome ;3 okay
2. 00:21:029(4)- Here comes another sound of the knife so I suggest to add NC here because new instrument.Maybe you forgot to add NC here :p added
3. 00:29:052()- It will be much better if you add a note here for clap and knife sound.It means you missed the beat as you did at 00:13:703()- ;w; added
4. 00:36:029()- I suggest to add a note here for knife and clap sound and to not skip the beat again okay
5. 01:01:494(1,2,3)- I would like to use 1/1 slider and 2 notes instead using a 1/1 slider with an reverse and a note to follow the instruments better http://puu.sh/gIMZP/4751671605.jpg fixed
6. 01:04:285(1)- I suggest to move the end of the spinner to 01:06:378 because there's no enough recovery time nope
7. 01:16:494(2)- For a better cursor movement I suggest to place the note to 304|236 to avoid a bad stack with 01:15:099(4)- too.Also you will obtains a blanket with (3)- okay
8. 01:30:447(2)- I don't like this shape of this slider.It looks ugly and untidy and I feel the flow is unbalanced.Try this for a balanced flow http://puu.sh/gINTj/738982e4a5.jpg :( okaaay
9. 01:41:610(2)- Same as 01:30:447(2)- Look at the picture to make a slider which balance the flow fixed
10. 02:00:099(1)- Place the first gap to 155|243 then place the slider to 155|243 then move the middle gap to 166|171 then the last gap to 224|106 to make equal with previous slider and for a better pattern.It should be like here http://puu.sh/gIOrd/5087b1a33e.jpg imo, it's looks good
11. 02:12:657(3)- Here I suggest to add NC because there's new instruments and ''nasty'' word will come and also for consistency :p I think not
12. 02:16:494()- Here you missed the beat here again.There's clap and knife so I suggest to add a note to cover that beat I mean to not skip it fixed
13. 02:22:424(1)- I suggest to move the spinner's end to 02:24:517()- because there's no enough recovery time not right now
14. 03:16:843(1)- I suggest to delete the spinner here.There's no reason to cover the beat with a spinner.You can map this part instead adding a spinner ;D nooooooo
15. 03:36:029()- You missed the beat here I mean the knife and clap sound.You can add a circle to follow it idk, I think mine pattern is good
16. 04:32:378(1)- Suggest to move the end of the spinner to 04:38:471()- because yea no enough recovery time not right now

Looks good :3

Call me back when you done the hard diff to mod it and the normal diff too you can kudos for this post but for the next with normal and hard no kudosu

Good Luck ~

Gordon123 wrote:

ia prishel shatat' tvoi truba
[General]

• 
  я не согласен с цветом первого комбо,ибо там же как на бг "кровавый(ёбта)волк" так вот ,я предлагаю его изменить > [img]http://puu.sh/ieqBK/f09019bfd2.png
  Окей, сделаю[/img]

[Easy]

• 
  01:41:610 (2) - это,тут всё норм,но чутка подогни его ещё,ибо знаешь как спускаешься по склону,таки это тоже сделай(так же)
  (всё что мне не понравилось^_а так ты +просил изи мод_а так бы я изи разобрал к херам ) Вроде как подогнал

[Normal]

• 
  01:25:738 (5) - а тут то ,совсем другое звучит ,я предлагаю сделать воть так > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3218322 Тут я пытался следовать вокалу, так что пока оставлю
  01:30:447 (3) - выгни его вот так(там же звук,как на спуске с горы) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3218324 ага
  02:05:680 (1) - ну я хз,удара то нет как нет? Есть же

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вроде всё норм! держи звезду!
Good Luck

Sgord1 wrote:

Feed me - новый псевдоним Spor'a (как Stan SB и Fox Stevenson, например), а Darkside - напрвление в dnb а, понятно

Вперед, на ранк!

Fort wrote:

hi there
put "dark" on tags, because i hear this song like dark drum and bass okay

Insane:
01:08:471 (1,2,3) - this is your first 3/4 pattern at sound like that, so please reduce distance to make this notes more clearly visible for first time playing fixed
01:22:424 (1,2,3) - i feel this flow a bit messy but dunno, up to you no changes
01:41:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this stream pattern shape more curved, like an circle (lol i cant explain this i hope you get it) fixed
01:48:064 (2,3,1) - this spacing is... made it bigger
02:02:017- hope you didnt miss this part (yeah i know this) nope, it's my choice to miss beat
03:20:331 (1) - wrong snapped problem (yeah vocal sound on 03:20:273 - so dunno if you follow instrument but it too low sound) hmm, will think about it

ok good

edit: why you put that purple on combo colour?? change to darker yellow or anything else okay

andrei7 wrote:

Приветики.
Я не моддер. Но для галочки - можно.
Бг не очень. Ну я вообще хз что с бг делать
Следи за тем, что скопировал. Да, знаю, потом ещё немного перемапаю скорее

Инсейн:
часть до 00:22:424 (1) - (да и вся в целом до брейка) заметно сложнее 01:51:726 (1) - 01:07:075 (1) - этой.
01:55:912 (1,2,3) -
04:23:820 (1,2,3) - (и раньше было что-то): Попытался сделать меньше

SPOILER

02:55:564 (6,7) - их чуть подальше друг от друга. ага

Хард:
01:30:447 (1) - лучше продлить до 01:31:668 (2) - , чтобы лучше читалось ага
01:41:610 (3) - По-ровнее, пожалуйста. Например, так. И да, ^ ага Но форму я не хочу менять

SPOILER

01:45:622 (4,5,6) - Да, много чего можно сделать лучше. Если хочешь, могу стать наци и выписать все бланкеты, оверлапы и другую фигню. Но это никому не нужно, наверное. паттерн сдвинул
03:27:134 (2,3) - не, слишком. сделай сёркл - слайдер. (Относится ли это к полярности? да, наверное) окей, сделал

SPOILER

слайдер с поворотами на 3\4 лучше отражает такой звук. Имеется в виду именно звук, если есть ударные в это время - понятно. эмм, привякзу бы

Адванцед
мда, сильно твои представления о сложности отличаются от моих. благо, звёзды есть, спасибо тому.
01:30:447 (3) - я настаиваю. Могу попытаться поподробнее объяснить, почему это прям так не читается и почему я всегда получаю сотку на сёркле после. Да, лучше объяснить
02:15:971 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - ой-ой-ой, как некрасиво. эээх, попытался сделать немного иначе. Не могу я в адвансед, всё-таки

Нормал
01:30:447 (3) - ну это же бееее Ну блин, не знаю я как ещё делать, фантазии нет. По-другому сделал немного
01:41:610 (3) - господи ^
они у тебя все весьма плохо выглядят.

кд можешь не давать.

HolyNightmare wrote:

I tried my best to mod ok ;w;

dont mind that order~

HardI really really like that patterns for example
01:33:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
they suit really well :3

oh and maybe set ar to 8. Is kinda better to play for me personally,, maybe you think same :3 will think about it

Fix that overlap maybe,, looks kinda weird to me 01:37:773 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/if2EX/e3239b943b.jpg okay

Insane
Nothing really found D:
But is very very fun to play,,, really nice flow :3 <3


Advanced

everything seems fine to me~

NormalWhy ever the game thinks its an Hard,lol.

Maybe let the slider come first,,, 01:55:389 (3,4) -
I think its easier to read then. yeah, your true

02:06:029 (2,3,4) - ^
02:11:610 (2,3,4) - ^

Easy
Seems everything ok


Hope i could help you at least a little bit.
Really like the map and the song.
Shooted a star :3

And GOOD LUCK with rank

Streliteela wrote:

Hi yooooo~~:3
Ahh this map is really great ! I can hardly find something in ez/nm/ad/hd, so I just mod the Insane diff, sorry for that
[Insane]

1. 00:20:244 (3,4,5) - flow is a little bit strange in this part, consider to move 00:20:680 (5) - to x188|y160 so that to make 3's tail, 4, and 5's head in a straight line. okay
2. 00:40:912 (2) - move this note to x439|y338; As 00:40:564 (1,2,3) - have the similar rhythm, no reason to make 00:40:564 (1,2) - further imo. okay
3. 00:43:180 (6) - stack it to 00:42:657 (3) - or move it to x366|y66 ? sry, but it's my lovely cycle jump pattern
4. 00:59:488 (4) - move to x130|y275, make 00:59:226 (3,4) - similar to 00:58:703 (1,2) - oh, okay
5. 01:12:133 (4) - stack it to the tail of 01:11:785 (3) - ? Just like 01:08:994 (3,4) - hmm, I think not
6. 01:25:215 (1) - move to x185|y215 to make 01:23:645 (6,1) - a blanket (just personal preferance _(:з」∠)_ lol, okay
7. 01:30:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (Personal opinion, FYI) As there's a obvious accent in 01:31:843 (9) - , why not try to separate 01:31:843 (9) - from other notes? See the image below:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   sry, but it's could be hard to jump in 1/4 after tiny stream
8. 01:43:005 (9) - ^ ^
9. 02:02:017 - add note? no, I think not
10. 02:09:866 (1,2,3) - ahh this pattern looks really strange XDD Try this maybe?
    
    SPOILER

    
    changed, but another way
11. 03:25:739 (3) - move to x315|y16 okay
12. 04:10:390 (3) - move to x89|y278 okay
13. 04:23:820 (1,2,3) - similar above (02:09:866 (1,2,3) - ) here, I think it's okay

Nice map! Good luck for rank~
Star!

Pjecoo wrote:

hi.

Easy:
• 02:16:494 - I really miss a note here. Please add one here. okaaay

Normal:
• 02:21:029 (4,5) - What about this? It fits better imo.
• 02:33:064 (5,6) - Same ^
• 04:35:854 (7,8) - ^
• 04:47:017 (6,7) - ^ changed all ^
• 03:00:099 (4,3) - Stack? hmm, i think not

Advanced:
• 01:37:773 (1,5) - Stack these two? hmm, okay
• 04:15:971 (7,3) - ^ but here not c:
• 04:18:238 (6,7) - Fix blanket. fixed

Other diffs seems fine.
Sorry for poor mod, but i didn't find any other issues in your mapset. This is really good beatmap.
Good Luck!

BoatKrab wrote:

Hi! :3
Notice: Sorry! I can't mod Easy Normal Advance because it's better for mod :3

[Hard]
01:54:517 (1,3) - Blanket? fixed
03:48:064 (3,4,5,6,1) - Why you does not make like this? rly, why not

03:59:750 (5,1) - Blanket? fixed
03:58:355 (3,1) - Make it stack noooo

[Insane]
00:17:889 (5) - Make it stack with 00:15:796 (2) -
00:16:494 (6) - Make it stack with 00:14:924 (4) -
00:27:657 (8) - Make it stack with 00:25:825 (3) -
00:31:145 (2) - Make it stack with 00:29:401 (1) -
02:11:785 (3) - Make it stack with 02:10:128 (2) -
02:16:145 (4) - Make it stack with 02:14:750 (4) -
04:30:099 (4) - Make it stack with 04:28:704 (4) - it's does'nt matter to stack it, because player'll don't remember where was previous object

^ Whyyy FUUUUUU :v

Good luck ._____________.

Sieg wrote:

софт хитнормал не сто миллисекунд, остальное нормально не чекал
поправь и я забаблю, а еще бы не помешал сорс с метадатой, но можно и без него

извини за задержку, не мог раньше никак

Inyuschan wrote:

gosh this is so long

[Easy]

1. 00:13:703 - missing note here? o: yeah, fixed
2. 00:55:912 (1,3,1,3) - they sound weird because if you listen carefully the end of sliders doesn't follow the music correctly, idk if you can do another stuff I just replace it to double 3/1 sliders, sounds better imo

[Normal]

1. 01:54:168 (6,4) - some patterns like these makes me think this diff is actually dense when personally these notes are dispensable, with this stuff Normal becomes harder at least for me :< check this stuff in whole map if you can because it doesn't happen only in kiai, I'd say the same for this 02:29:750 (5,6,7) - :<
   Make normal diff easier than it was, now there is no long combo starins, patterns are better

maybe Advanced should be Hard and Hard should be Light Insane o: okay

well poke me back and we'll see