M4M from my queue
General: You said there were 5 std diffs, but there's only 4.
There's weird BG proportions, try to fix that.
Normal:
00:00:377 (1) - Slider looks kind of weird, a bit like how old sliders used to be. Try using two nodes instead of one --->
http://puu.sh/guLV4/434bc94f64.jpg00:05:894 (1) - The reverse on this slider is weird, it's hitting nothing, I think the noise you wanted to hit is some kind of 1/6 etc.
00:08:652 (2) - Move one grid space to the right for a better blanket.
00:12:790 (3,5) - 5 looks bad in contrast to 3, perhaps change the shape or something.
00:16:583 (2) - You're skipping an important downbeat, I suggest you fix this.
00:16:583 (2,3,4) - Awkward rhythm and flow, and the overlap looks bad.
00:17:618 (4,1) - Better blanket.
00:24:342 (1) - Blanket better.
00:26:928 (1,1) - Sore looking overlap :/
00:44:859 (8) - A bit hard to read for normal, and feels a bit cramped.
00:48:652 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kind of bad flow, I think you're using way too much curved sliders and not enough variation.
00:49:687 (3) - Much too low, and skips an important downbeat. (Not skips, but letting the slider tail do the job for you is...not nice.)
00:50:721 (5,2) - Stack properly.
00:52:790 (3,4) - Blanket properly.
00:52:790 (3,5) - Horrible overlap.
01:02:101 (8,2) - Stack properly.
01:03:825 (3,1) - Hard reading for beginners, and looks ugly.
01:09:342 (1) - In my opinions this is too high.
01:22:790 (1) - Start spinner here instead - 01:23:135
Hard:
00:14:859 (2,3,4) - No need to stack, the three are of different frequencies.
00:15:894 (1,2) - I think you need to distance snap these.
00:17:618 (3,1) - Too close, so close they're overlapping.
00:19:687 (5) - Ctrl + G ensures better flow.
00:26:928 (1,2) - Stack properly.
00:31:411 (3,4) - Definitely don't stack!
00:34:170 (4) - During play, this goes out of the screen.
00:38:308 (7) - In my opinion this'd look good as a straight slider.
01:03:825 (1,1) - Blanket properly.
01:11:066 (4,1) - Stack properly.
01:22:790 (1) - End at the time I said in normal, it really sounds messed up, skipping that downbeat.
Insane:
AR 8.5?
I think the whole thing is extremely overmapped, apart from the chorus.
00:05:894 (1) - Weird reverse.
00:11:756 (1,2) - Blanket?
00:17:618 (6,1) - Stack.
00:20:204 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think you should make jumps, the music's too soft, how about just making them circles arranged in patterns but not undistance snapped.
00:21:928 (5,3) - Stack.
00:27:618 (4,2) - Ugly overlap.
00:57:790 (1,2,3) - I don't understand why these are here, there are no 1/4 notes :/
01:22:790 (1) - Same as in Normal & Hard.
Lily:
AR doesn't need to be so high, won't 9 suffice? And I think the rhythm is too bad to have OD 8.5, considering lowering to at least 8.
00:05:894 (1) - Same as in other diffs.
00:07:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I-I think you have to remove this :/
00:20:204 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:35:894 (1,2) - Bad sliderbow.
00:46:928 (1,1) - Space out more.
The slider speeds at the chorus are way too high, don't fit in, and are overmapped.
Overall: The mapset really really needs working on.