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Super Junior-M - Super Girl (Chinese Version)
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[General]
[Easy]
/me shoots a star.
- 02:14:785 ---> 02:26:305 这一段可以跟着节奏来加clap / whistle
[Easy]
- All fine.
- 01:14:545 ---> 01:19:825 跟着鼓点加soft-whistle?
- 03:11:425 & 03:11:905 add clap (和03:07:345这个加的效果一致，而且听起来感觉还不错)
- 00:40:705 (1) - 往前移1/2 beat能落在鼓点上比较迎合节奏(如果需要，也可以在这一点上简单的加个circle来凑紧节奏)
- 01:12:625 (4) - add clap?
- 03:04:825 (3) - 节奏有点突兀，在前面1/4拍前叠加个circle会比较好(后面的几个3/4 beat玩起来比较顺手，就是这个总感觉不舒服XD)
/me shoots a star.
这首歌曲还有Korean版的，不如改歌曲名字为↓↓↓
Super Girl (Chinese ver.) 或 Super Girl (Chinese Version)
不过这个不怎么重要
Easy
nice
Normal
01:00:625(6) - 减短一个往返
01:01:105(6) - clap
其余
Hard
00:48:025(5) - 向下移动
00:56:305(2) - 换个朝向
starrr
No kds
很明显..我应该直接star这个图就可以了,图已经很完善了...
Super Girl (Chinese ver.) 或 Super Girl (Chinese Version)
不过这个不怎么重要
Easy
nice
Normal
01:00:625(6) - 减短一个往返
01:01:105(6) - clap
其余
SPOILER
03:03:505(5) - end at 03:03:985 再在后面(1)加finish
03:11:185(6) - ^ end at 03:11:665
03:11:185(6) - ^ end at 03:11:665
Hard
00:48:025(5) - 向下移动
00:56:305(2) - 换个朝向
starrr
No kds
很明显..我应该直接star这个图就可以了,图已经很完善了...
EnakoRin
This is mod for "Super Girl(Super Junior-M) - JauiPlaY"
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General
offset = 3974
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EASY
00:40:454 (1,2) - 建议给分开，我看我同学（新手）打，遇上重叠在一起的就要出错
01:15:494 (2,1) - 分开一下吧，这样会被前面打出的300挡住不太好看出来
01:22:694 (4) - 左右两端不够平- -重新画下？（这属于nazi，不喜欢可以54之）
01:26:534 (4) - 这货在打的时候挨到HP条了，如果可以的话给往下移一点（这也是nazi）
01:46:694 (3) - new combo？
01:50:534 (3) - 同上
01:54:374 (4) - 同上
02:14:534 (3) - new combo？
02:15:014 (1) - 去掉new combo？
02:22:214 (3) - new combo？
02:22:694 (1) - 去掉new combo？
03:15:974 (3) - new combo？
做得不错
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Normal
00:28:945 (4) - new combo
00:42:385 (1) - 会不会有点出来得太快了呢
00:45:265 (5) - new combo,总感觉听起来有点怪- -
00:49:105 (5) - new combo
00:55:585 (5,1) - 重叠上吧，我感觉不好看
01:28:465 (7) - new combo
01:43:825 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:46:225 (4) - 加上clap
01:47:665 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:50:065 (4) - 加上clap
01:51:505 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:53:425 (3) - 同上
01:57:025 (5,1) - 重叠上吧，我感觉不好看
02:43:105 (1) - 多一个spinner出来，和easy不一样呢
02:56:785 (1) - 加上finish试试看，我觉得不错
03:02:545 (4) - new combo
03:06:385 (4) - new combo
03:10:225 (5) - new combo
03:14:065 (5) - new combo
03:15:985 (7) - new combo
这个也挺赞的
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Hard
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01:01:585 (1,2) - new combo,关掉GS和DS，把这俩的结尾重叠在一起比较好看
01:02:545 (3,4) - 同上
01:03:985 (3,4) - 同上
01:10:705 (4) - 这货在打的时候挨到HP条了，如果可以的话给往下移一点（这也是nazi）
02:12:625 (1) - 没有完全重叠好，仔细看看
02:43:105 (1) - 多一个spinner出来，和easy不一样呢
02:59:905 (7) - new combo
说实话这个HARD不够难啊！
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总体来说非常不错！STAR~！
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EasyModder Beta2
Program By Weiren
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General
offset = 3974
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EASY
00:40:454 (1,2) - 建议给分开，我看我同学（新手）打，遇上重叠在一起的就要出错
01:15:494 (2,1) - 分开一下吧，这样会被前面打出的300挡住不太好看出来
01:22:694 (4) - 左右两端不够平- -重新画下？（这属于nazi，不喜欢可以54之）
01:26:534 (4) - 这货在打的时候挨到HP条了，如果可以的话给往下移一点（这也是nazi）
01:46:694 (3) - new combo？
01:50:534 (3) - 同上
01:54:374 (4) - 同上
02:14:534 (3) - new combo？
02:15:014 (1) - 去掉new combo？
02:22:214 (3) - new combo？
02:22:694 (1) - 去掉new combo？
03:15:974 (3) - new combo？
做得不错
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Normal
00:28:945 (4) - new combo
00:42:385 (1) - 会不会有点出来得太快了呢
00:45:265 (5) - new combo,总感觉听起来有点怪- -
00:49:105 (5) - new combo
00:55:585 (5,1) - 重叠上吧，我感觉不好看
01:28:465 (7) - new combo
01:43:825 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:46:225 (4) - 加上clap
01:47:665 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:50:065 (4) - 加上clap
01:51:505 (1) - 最后一个圈圈加上clap
01:53:425 (3) - 同上
01:57:025 (5,1) - 重叠上吧，我感觉不好看
02:43:105 (1) - 多一个spinner出来，和easy不一样呢
02:56:785 (1) - 加上finish试试看，我觉得不错
03:02:545 (4) - new combo
03:06:385 (4) - new combo
03:10:225 (5) - new combo
03:14:065 (5) - new combo
03:15:985 (7) - new combo
这个也挺赞的
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Hard
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01:01:585 (1,2) - new combo,关掉GS和DS，把这俩的结尾重叠在一起比较好看
01:02:545 (3,4) - 同上
01:03:985 (3,4) - 同上
01:10:705 (4) - 这货在打的时候挨到HP条了，如果可以的话给往下移一点（这也是nazi）
02:12:625 (1) - 没有完全重叠好，仔细看看
02:43:105 (1) - 多一个spinner出来，和easy不一样呢
02:59:905 (7) - new combo
说实话这个HARD不够难啊！
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总体来说非常不错！STAR~！
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EasyModder Beta2
Program By Weiren
=。= 趁还能给星的时候给个好了...
Topic Starter
okay~修改了一些地方并且更正了名字 補充了tags
感謝gdeath,TTTTTTTTTTTT和Weiren的mod以及炮姐,wa747wzp和犀利哥Selee的star~
謝謝你們的支持!
感謝gdeath,TTTTTTTTTTTT和Weiren的mod以及炮姐,wa747wzp和
謝謝你們的支持!
Can't quite stand the song, sorry. Just ran a real quick look through the maps...
[General]
Why so much normal-whistle D: it doesn't fit the song imo...... well whatever, I don't like this song anyway.
[Hard]
00:34:465 (9) - move to 00:34:585
00:44:785 - add note here
00:48:625 - ^
00:52:465 - ^
00:56:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this looks quite bad imo
02:49:105 (1,2,3,4) - hide the ends of 3,4 properly under the starts of 1,2
02:51:985 (3) - hide the end of 3 properly under 2
03:14:785 (6) - move to 03:14:905
[Normal]
00:54:865 (3,4,5) - why would you do this to me ;_; delete 4 please, it doesn't fit the song.
01:55:345 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern look like random to me. also delete 4 please, ^
[Easy]
I think it's fine...
/me stars
[General]
Why so much normal-whistle D: it doesn't fit the song imo...... well whatever, I don't like this song anyway.
[Hard]
00:34:465 (9) - move to 00:34:585
00:44:785 - add note here
00:48:625 - ^
00:52:465 - ^
00:56:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this looks quite bad imo
02:49:105 (1,2,3,4) - hide the ends of 3,4 properly under the starts of 1,2
02:51:985 (3) - hide the end of 3 properly under 2
03:14:785 (6) - move to 03:14:905
[Normal]
00:54:865 (3,4,5) - why would you do this to me ;_; delete 4 please, it doesn't fit the song.
01:55:345 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern look like random to me. also delete 4 please, ^
[Easy]
I think it's fine...
/me stars
forgive my poor English.So,I will use Chinese....
so,I've no mod experience....you don't need to think about too much.
don't forget my Mod~
so,I've no mod experience....you don't need to think about too much.
SPOILER
自我吐槽:都是些可以无视的建议[General]
多加点音效会更好，试试这个：http://up.ppy.sh/files/bass-dry.wav
空白的地方太多了，再填满点？
[Hard]
00:40:105(1)~(6)这段的分布顺序有问题，重新改了一下(参考)
[attachment=0:39af0]1.jpg[/attachment:39af0]
00:40:705(1) 这里放spin会不会奇怪啊？分明是歌的部分
00:57:745(1)~(2)把slider比率调慢
01:05:425(1)^
01:14:545~01:19:345:24白线加上clap音效
01:59:185(1)~(2)把slider比率调慢
02:06:865(1)^
02:26:305(1)spin移到02:27:745，然后中间填点东西～
02:45:265(1)还是调慢比率
02:52:945(1)~(2)^
[Normal]
woshenmedoubuzhidao
[Easy]
woshenmedoubuzhidao
多加点音效会更好，试试这个：http://up.ppy.sh/files/bass-dry.wav
空白的地方太多了，再填满点？
[Hard]
00:40:105(1)~(6)这段的分布顺序有问题，重新改了一下(参考)
[attachment=0:39af0]1.jpg[/attachment:39af0]
00:40:705(1) 这里放spin会不会奇怪啊？分明是歌的部分
00:57:745(1)~(2)把slider比率调慢
01:05:425(1)^
01:14:545~01:19:345:24白线加上clap音效
01:59:185(1)~(2)把slider比率调慢
02:06:865(1)^
02:26:305(1)spin移到02:27:745，然后中间填点东西～
02:45:265(1)还是调慢比率
02:52:945(1)~(2)^
[Normal]
woshenmedoubuzhidao
[Easy]
woshenmedoubuzhidao
don't forget my Mod~
Topic Starter
okay fixed some.
9你的mod真的很不錯...真的
但是有一些地方改起來會非常非常麻煩...而那些也并不是一定要改的
所以很抱歉那些我就留著沒改了!(逃
9你的mod真的很不錯...真的
但是有一些地方改起來會非常非常麻煩...而那些也并不是一定要改的
所以很抱歉那些我就留著沒改了!(逃
Normal
00:42:385 (1) - too soon after spinner
01:54:385 (4) - hitburst from (3) partially covers the repeat of (4). I think this should be fine though, so you don't have to change it
00:42:385 (1) - too soon after spinner
01:54:385 (4) - hitburst from (3) partially covers the repeat of (4). I think this should be fine though, so you don't have to change it
Topic Starter
oops i forgot, sry. 
thx!ouranhshc wrote:
Normal
00:42:385 (1) - too soon after spinnerguess it's fine since the spinner is easy to complete.
01:54:385 (4) - hitburst from (3) partially covers the repeat of (4). I think this should be fine though, so you don't have to change itso i do not change.
Hi~
~General~
- Not saying you should change anything, but playing from the easiest diff to the hardest, [Hard] felt really fast compared to [Normal]. It might be because the AR difference is a bit high (5 - 8) or it might just be me...
~Easy~
01:15:505 (2,1) - Nice symmetry, though the overlap looks a bit ugly ;~;
~Normal~
00:40:705 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier (white tick)?
01:54:385 (4) - You should move this slider away, the repeat arrow is almost hidden (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87574) and I don't like it being in a Normal :/
02:12:145 (3) - I'd move this one away too, but I'll leave this one to you since it's not as bad.
03:15:025 (6) - ^ (you love to do this, don'tchu x3)
~Hard~
00:40:705 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier (white tick)?
Fun~ :3 *star*
~General~
- Not saying you should change anything, but playing from the easiest diff to the hardest, [Hard] felt really fast compared to [Normal]. It might be because the AR difference is a bit high (5 - 8) or it might just be me...
~Easy~
01:15:505 (2,1) - Nice symmetry, though the overlap looks a bit ugly ;~;
~Normal~
00:40:705 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier (white tick)?
01:54:385 (4) - You should move this slider away, the repeat arrow is almost hidden (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87574) and I don't like it being in a Normal :/
02:12:145 (3) - I'd move this one away too, but I'll leave this one to you since it's not as bad.
03:15:025 (6) - ^ (you love to do this, don'tchu x3)
~Hard~
00:40:705 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier (white tick)?
Fun~ :3 *star*
Topic Starter
SPOILER
all fixed. thx a lot!Beuchi-chan wrote:
Hi~
~General~
- Not saying you should change anything, but playing from the easiest diff to the hardest, [Hard] felt really fast compared to [Normal]. It might be because the AR difference is a bit high (5 - 8) or it might just be me...AR-1 so should be fine now.
~Easy~
01:15:505 (2,1) - Nice symmetry, though the overlap looks a bit ugly ;~;i guess not so ugly now...
~Normal~
00:40:705 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier (white tick)?ok.
01:54:385 (4) - You should move this slider away, the repeat arrow is almost hidden (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87574) and I don't like it being in a Normal :/^
02:12:145 (3) - I'd move this one away too, but I'll leave this one to you since it's not as bad.^
03:15:025 (6) - ^ (you love to do this, don'tchu x3)^ (no i'm not, i don't know why i mapped this way actually.
~Hard~
00:40:705 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier (white tick)?ok.
Fun~ :3 *star*thx!
Awesome
BUBBLED!!
BUBBLED!!
Topic Starter
thanks a lot Beuchi-chan!
OK Fine.
Gratz
Congra~
0 0 基片鸭神MAPPER受妮姆芙一拜
grats~~~
Topic Starter
谢谢abalee以及各位的支持!
thanks to abalee and all you guys!
说我是神mapper的以后不给mod(炸
thanks to abalee and all you guys!
说我是神mapper的以后不给mod(炸