Qrispy Joybox - licca [Osu|OsuMania] · forum

liangv587

472 posts

Joined April 2013

liangv587 2015-04-10T03:28:57+00:00

干，这么dio怎么摸

多余的绿线不删了吗

Special
01:11:650 (1) - 这组可以设计下间距，这个移到476,52，01:12:262 (1) - 移到441,132，01:13:027 (2) - 248,234，这样跳更合理一些

Hyper
00:20:221 (1,2) - 两个重音都在滑条尾手感很不好，可以模仿后面，或者http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2994857
00:22:670 (1,2) - 同理
01:23:895 (1,2) - 面对面的弯+直看着难受，都弯或者都直吧
01:25:119 (1,2) - 也是，可以前两个直这两个弯

Medium
01:16:548 (1) - 可以多加几个白点柔化一下

Basic
01:15:476 (2) - 放错位置了，时间轴上往后移1/2

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2015-04-11T12:34:07+00:00

fixed some important points

那个一堆重叠我故意的

aaaaaaaaaaaa

osu file format v14

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Sky_Demon 2015-04-13T08:37:23+00:00

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Blue - Proposal

victorica's Normal

00:32:160 (32160|0) - 移到3 同時00:32:313 (32313|1,32390|2,32466|3) - 各往左一列
01:01:548 (61548|1,61701|2) - 個人是比較喜歡 ctrl + g
01:09:201 (69201|3) - 結束應該在這裡 01:09:660 - 然後這個應該要刪除 01:09:507 (69507|2) -
^→[/color]00:59:405 - 01:01:854 - 01:04:303 -
01:26:344 - http://puu.sh/hc6kw/5b2fd371b1.jpg 改這樣會順很多

Spy's Hyper

00:59:405 - 這裡應該加上一個 note 因為這裡有 →01:09:201 (69201|1) -
01:00:017 (60017|1) - 這樣的音的結束應該是在這裡01:00:323 - (它是連續的聲音接到下一個音並不是像這樣的短音→00:59:711 (59711|1,59864|3,60323|3,60476|1) -
01:01:854 (61854|0) - 結束 01:02:160 -
01:02:466 (62466|3) - 結束01:02:772 - 因為拉長會重疊到下一個所以移到3列
01:04:915 (64915|0) - 結束01:05:221 -
01:06:752 - 重音加一顆
★01:06:905 (66905|3,67058|1,67211|3,67364|1,67517|0) - 其實我覺得這些可以不用LN來呈現他是很短的音沒有到要拉長的地步
^如果轉成Note這樣會好很多 http://puu.sh/hc6ZC/97bdfb93f1.jpg
01:09:813 (69813|3) - 結束在 01:10:119 -
01:12:262 (72262|3) - 像這裡就有結束在我所建議的地方這是好的
01:14:711 (74711|3) - 結束 01:15:017 -
01:15:323 (75323|0) - 結束01:15:630 - 同時01:15:476 (75476|2) - 這個應該要刪除這裡沒有短音的
01:17:313 (77313|3) - 放慢聽會發現這一條LN抓的音不明這裡我覺得用Note來呈現主旋律才是好的表現方法
所以可以試試這樣子的http://puu.sh/hc79U/935f0b1bbf.jpg
01:18:997 - 重音加一個為了保持與之前的抓音一致性
01:19:609 (79609|1) - 結束 01:19:915 -
01:21:446 - 重音加一個
01:24:507 (84507|3) - 結束 01:24:813 -
01:25:119 (85119|0) - 結束 01:25:425 -
★01:26:344 - 這裡開始可以考慮上面有星星標記的那一條mod建議如果怕都是一樣的打起來太無聊就無視
01:28:793 - 重音加上
01:29:405 (89405|0) - 結束 01:29:711 -
01:30:936 (90936|0,90936|2) - 突然冒出這個很違和之前的3個kiai段都沒跟到這個音
01:31:854 (91854|1) - 結束01:32:160 -
01:31:242 - 重音加上
01:33:691 - ^
01:34:303 (94303|3) - 結束 01:34:609 -
01:34:915 (94915|0) - 結束 01:35:221 -

victorica's Insane

00:26:956 - 加一個重音

想法大略上都懂就不多做建議了 Nice

Spy's Another

00:09:048 - 加一顆因為這裡有00:06:599 (6599|2,6599|3,6905|2,6905|1) -
00:36:982 (36982|1) - 移到 00:36:905 -
01:07:594 - 01:07:670 - 建議各加一個
01:11:803 - 01:12:415 - 不太明白為何要空著有很明顯的主音建議加上
01:19:150 - ^
01:21:599 - ^
01:27:186 - 01:27:262 - 建議各加上一個
01:31:395 - 01:32:007 - 原因同上上

就這樣啦~ ~~很水別打我~~

好圖好歌祝你好運!

x2

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2015-04-15T17:48:57+00:00

bla

NO KD

General

disable all diffs' widescreen support.

Special

too quiet hitnormal sample's volume is, larger it. (lower diffs has same issues imo) (and maybe hitclap as well)
01:44:558 (6) - ctrl+g can be better here, you can do ctrl+g to 01:44:864 (1,2,3) - for arranging ds if you change.
star.

yf's Another

01:42:415 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g, or it plays a bit odd. 01:44:864 (1,2,3) - as well.
star.

poke me later when you are ready.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2015-04-18T06:25:35+00:00

liangv587

liangv587 wrote:
干，这么dio怎么摸
多余的绿线不删了吗不影响，只要不是重复的没事

Special
01:11:650 (1) - 这组可以设计下间距，这个移到476,52，01:12:262 (1) - 移到441,132，01:13:027 (2) - 248,234，这样跳更合理一些我就是鬼畜www

Hyper
00:20:221 (1,2) - 两个重音都在滑条尾手感很不好，可以模仿后面，或者http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2994857 这个节奏抄的yf，其实就是想搞点不一样的，都是一样的梗有什么意思
00:22:670 (1,2) - 同理 ^
01:23:895 (1,2) - 面对面的弯+直看着难受，都弯或者都直吧我觉得还行
01:25:119 (1,2) - 也是，可以前两个直这两个弯 ^

Medium
01:16:548 (1) - 可以多加几个白点柔化一下算了

Basic
01:15:476 (2) - 放错位置了，时间轴上往后移1/2 fixed，不知道哪次移动的时候出错了……

HW

Hollow Wings wrote:
bla

NO KD NO

General
disable all diffs' widescreen support. done
Special
too quiet hitnormal sample's volume is, larger it. (lower diffs has same issues imo) (and maybe hitclap as well) hitnormal2 is used in mania, i dont know it's too quite to rank or not... but larger some of my hs valumes
01:44:558 (6) - ctrl+g can be better here, you can do ctrl+g to 01:44:864 (1,2,3) - for arranging ds if you change. nope, i like it now
star.

poke me later when you are ready.

and i personally lower dowm the sv 00:58:181 (1) - in special for safe
Waiting yfffffffffff's reply

Edit: yf让我自己看着办，我打了下，其实由于有nc的原因也是能读，并不是很奇怪的，ctrl+g了反而有点难读……
所以我就不改了，就这样~

Hollow Wings

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Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2015-04-18T17:39:31+00:00

circled.

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-04-24T13:50:55+00:00

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
Hello, requested by Minakami Yuki
Columns: |1|2|3|4|

[Spy's Hyper]
00:02:619 - add a note 我這段只追琴
00:03:078 (3078|0) - move to 00:03:385 - ^
00:04:303 (4303|2) - to 00:04:150 - ^
00:04:915 - LN starts here Fixed
00:04:915 - add Nope
00:21:752 (21752|3) - not sure if you are putting note for the bzzz sound or not because there is not sound for the instrument like 00:21:599 (21599|3) - over there 00:21:599 (21599|3,21752|3,21905|3,22058|3,22211|3) - 都是同琴音
00:21:599 (21599|3,21675|2) - Suggest to ctrl+j if you deleted 00:21:752 (21752|3) - Nope
Same things like above continues coming up on the song
00:32:313 (32313|2,32390|3) - hard to hit for hyper, something like 00:37:288 - will feel better 不覺得有點歪理嗎。。Hyper顧名思義是Hard或者Hard+以上，這種排列還好，而且還只是單note
00:34:839 - add a note to here, it is the same as 00:32:390 - Added
01:00:017 (60017|1) - ends at 01:00:323 - because it is same as 01:01:242 (61242|3) - but only different pitch and the sound actually continues 放昏頭了
01:01:854 (61854|0) - sound goes on to 01:02:160 - Alright
01:02:466 (62466|3) - same, the sound goes on to 01:02:772 - OK
01:04:915 (64915|0) - same thing OK
01:07:517 - http://puu.sh/gcIvc/72acbc1a8b.jpg Nope, 一開始就是故意這樣放的
01:09:813 (69813|3) - 01:14:711 (74711|3) - 01:19:609 (79609|1) - 01:24:507 (84507|3) - 01:25:119 (85119|0) - 01:29:405 (89405|0) - 01:31:854 (91854|1) - 01:34:303 (94303|3) - same as the ones mentioned before All fixed
01:27:262 - add LN 這樣會沒有停頓的感覺啊

[Spy's Another]
00:21:752 (21752|3) - same as hyper Nope
00:35:221 - add a note, just like 00:35:834 - Added
00:38:895 - add 都3notes了還要加什麼
01:07:670 - add 2 notes 沒感覺
01:16:242 - add a note, same as 01:15:630 - Added
01:18:691 - 01:18:844 - add note here? Hey SV changes here
01:26:038 - you had this 3 notes before Added

Good Luck

Thanks for mod

SPAS-ID

126 posts

Joined June 2014

SPAS-ID 2015-04-27T01:27:13+00:00

cmon when got ranked ? i want those PP :'( btw Spy SV is umm a little wierd :/

richardfeder

1,056 posts

Joined March 2013

richardfeder 2015-04-29T04:21:43+00:00

马~

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2015-04-29T17:28:10+00:00

我也mark一下

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-04-30T02:40:46+00:00

你們能不能等我修完再摸啊woc

pocket-Gao

275 posts

Joined August 2013

pocket-Gao 2015-04-30T14:39:23+00:00

wa. m酱的图(他们都这样叫那我也跟风好了....

std没接触给不了任何建议;w; 一下是mania的mod

Spy's Hyper

没修怎么办 ~~照样摸(by db)~~
00:30:783 (30783|2) - 空开吧
00:35:681 (35681|2) - 移到|4|如何
01:06:599 (66599|0) - 移到|3|
01:09:201 (69201|1) - 还有 01:26:344 (86344|1) - 这里抓了后面都需要抓吧(个人的话会在每段kiai开头抓一个
01:30:936 (90936|0,90936|2) - 不明(要是我就会在|2|放一个note

db's Insane

00:00:476 (476|2,630|2) - 这个jack抓音好奇怪。。 00:00:476 开始是个钢琴音 LN推荐放在|4|
00:01:089至00:05:221，乃选择了抓00:01:089 (1089|0,1242|3,1395|0) - 这几个很轻的音的话最好跟着主音抓像在00:01:548这里抓连续4个note打起来才觉得不怪
00:07:976 (7976|1) - 推荐换到|1| 对应前后的位置
就算从00:10:425开始是低潮段那00:22:058 到 00:22:670 之间的鼓点多少要抓一点吧,可以选择抓00:22:517 &594 段的鼓点
毕竟00:32:390 (32390|1) - 这里抓了

00:26:956 (26956|1,27109|2) - 感觉调到|4| jack不错相应后面那个note改改位置(理由：从00:26:497这开始音不觉得适合|1~3|的来回
00:34:150 (34150|3) - |3| 听了几遍不适合jack ，改成连贯的摆法吧
00:35:681 (35681|2) - |4|
00:37:211 加个note(? 相应前面一个note调整一下吧
00:44:252 (44252|1) - 没听出明显的音
00:44:405 (44405|2) - 如果是我就会摆成|4|到00:44:711的LN

00:47:772 (47772|0,47772|3) - 打起来的感觉来说不适合摆14 ，因为打起来有种从中间往两遍打倒八字的感觉，个人推荐|1||3|
00:59:405 加一note
00:59:405 这里开始|3|的连续jack抓音不对吧(后面的连续jack倒是抓得好) 01:00:017 (60017|2,60170|2,60323|2) - 这几个移到|4|
01:00:323 为何3note?
01:00:783 和01:00:936 音有种左右摆的感觉类似00:19:456段 01:03:385段，保留jack适当改改(?
01:07:517 (67517|2,67823|2) - 好坑人啊没发力打图容易断呢个人换到|4| 然后01:07:976调整一下(不要提啥难点....杀人不厚道....
01:20:987 (80987|1) - 应该连到01:21:446吧
01:27:186 1倍速听听
01:28:181 (88181|1) - 个人会摆在|3| 01:28:334 |2|加个note

Spy's Another - 4Key

00:08:130 (8130|1,8206|2) -没听到音如果是想打起来有种连贯的感觉,感觉还是多余的(
00:09:048 只抓了一个音的话为啥00:09:354抓了两个是不是主抓背景音而不是"登登"的音(感觉我好傻....
00:25:732 (25732|0,25732|3,25885|3,25885|0) - 和db那边一样打起来感觉不适合全部放在|1||4|
00:38:436 (38436|0) - 移到|2| 相应后面的是|1|3|4|
01:02:619 (62619|3,62772|3,62925|3,63078|3) - 听了几遍感觉不适合4个jack吧
01:04:456 加个note 感觉|4|不错(别告诉是故意不放的......
01:07:670 如果是为了间隔开感觉还是补一个note的吧 |2|之类的位置(?
01:11:803 和 01:12:415 为啥空着....
01:27:033 我耳机应该没问题吧放1倍速听听看
01:28:640 前后间隔够大了加个note吧

我的mod图是尽可能写自己的看法,但不是指都是谱面问题,是融入了一些自己的看法觉得没用可以无视;w;
以上的是我的mod 曲子和谱面都好评www

biemote

292 posts

Joined April 2011

biemote 2015-05-01T02:00:03+00:00

所以说这种直接rank都没问题的谱找我这种渣渣来干嘛啦(真心)
只是建议啦~

1234

db's NM

00:00:783 (783|2,1089|0,1242|1,1395|2,1854|1,2007|2,2160|3,2619|0,2772|2,2925|0,3385|3,3538|1,3691|3,4150|3,4303|1,4456|3,4915|3,5068|1) - 这一段对新手来说可能有点迷.....分不清对的什么音.....考虑一下去掉,就对钢琴音如何?

00:14:711 (14711|2) - 移到4?
00:15:119 (15119|2) - 移到2?

00:19:609 (19609|0,19711|1,19813|2,19915|3,20017|2,20119|1) - 会不会略坑OTZ?

00:55:732 (55732|2) - 移到4?
00:56:344 (56344|3) - 移到3?
00:56:956 (56956|2) - 移到1?

01:00:783 (60783|2) - 左移1轨
01:00:936 (60936|1,61089|0) - 右移1轨
01:01:242 (61242|1) - 移到1

01:03:078 (63078|3) - 移到2?

01:06:599 - 这里应该还有一个音

01:13:334 (73334|2) - 移到1
01:13:487 (73487|1) - 移到3

01:30:323 (90323|1,90476|0) - 右移2轨
01:30:630 (90630|2,90936|2) - 移到2.和后面的面条音高不同吧?

Spy's HYPER

00:21:599 (21599|3,21675|2,21752|3) - 这种121和434的....在another里面没问题...但是可能在hyper里面....131或者424会不会更好一点?

01:06:752 - 和 01:07:823 - 和 01:35:987 - 这里是不是应该还有个条子?
01:22:211 (82211|1) - 50%的我...没听出这个条子...

难谱就别指望我啦....
个人观点,仅供参考,摸得烂莫喷TAT

神谱get√

Spy

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Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-05-02T13:33:54+00:00

我還沒修好摸aaaaaaaaaa

richardfeder

1,056 posts

Joined March 2013

richardfeder 2015-05-02T18:32:18+00:00

你是不是要修过年啊

Bruce

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Joined January 2013

Bruce 2015-05-03T19:39:55+00:00

richardfeder wrote:
你是不是要修过年啊

他可能明年才修的好

Asahina Momoko

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Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2015-05-05T15:55:23+00:00

(∩・▽・∩)

Be sure to add skystar's name tag in all diffs

Skystar's Expert

00:11:344 (1,2) - ctrl+h them makes there flow more exciting imo
SPOILER
00:23:742 (2) - how about stack on 00:23:436 (1) - tail, like same sound at 00:28:334 (1,2) - ?
00:27:874 (8) - add NC
00:33:997 (1,2) - these sound is quiet than 00:33:385 (1,2,1,2) - , so how about make more closer them?
00:34:711 (2) - add finish on tail?
01:14:099 (3) - add finish
01:18:078 (1) - remove NC? like 00:34:915 (1,2,3,4) - 00:35:834 (1,2,3,4) - NC pattern
01:26:956 (1,2,1,2) - ^

good luck!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2015-05-05T16:08:12+00:00

irc-ed with sp3 on skystar's diff, since he doesnt want the kd and post, so i post instead.

log

2015-05-05 23:12 spboxer3: 感覺沒甚麼好mod阿
2015-05-05 23:13 spboxer3: 星爺的圖就是一種style 我mod也不太好改
2015-05-05 23:13 spboxer3: 有幾個點我看著可能會不太順 但是要我改 我也不一定能改到好的點
2015-05-05 23:14 Minakami Yuki: 随便说点什么就行 让星爷自己看吧……然后我就找hw来看
2015-05-05 23:15 spboxer3: 我可不可以直接和你IRC你再貼個log我不想要kd
2015-05-05 23:15 Minakami Yuki: 额 可以
2015-05-05 23:17 spboxer3: 00:06:446 (5,1) - 間距給人的感覺應該沒有這麼近 尤其是這兩個點00:06:599 (1,1) - 是重音的時候 少了那種移動的感覺
2015-05-05 23:17 spboxer3: 00:09:048 (1) - 一樣 這邊比前面00:08:742 (4,5) - 間距更短了點 感覺重音的位置沒凸顯出來
2015-05-05 23:18 Minakami Yuki: en
2015-05-05 23:18 spboxer3: 00:11:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這地方要我來做我會00:11:650 (1,2,3) - 縮短間距 但是00:11:956 (3,4,5) - 會放大 來跟著pitch 但是現在這樣做也不錯 只是點出來這個想法
2015-05-05 23:19 Minakami Yuki: 他这个貌似就是一个缩小一个放大
2015-05-05 23:19 spboxer3: 00:13:027 (1,2,3,1) - 這四個點音樂上聽起來應該是連貫的 但是因為你下的pattern所以分開來了 點出來 我覺得不至於到奇怪 但是和音樂有點違和
2015-05-05 23:21 spboxer3: 縮小放大... 00:14:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - 是指這個嗎 恩... 只能說和我的觀念有點不一樣 我認為高音的話間距應該放大點 可是這邊和我的想法剛好相反 不過沒什麼關係的 個人想法不同就是
2015-05-05 23:22 spboxer3: 00:20:221 (7,1) - 恩...我覺得NC應該在7的位置 (重音
2015-05-05 23:22 spboxer3: 00:22:670 (7) - ^
2015-05-05 23:22 spboxer3: 後面的幾個點我不點出來 看星爺考慮一下吧~
2015-05-05 23:22 Minakami Yuki: 嗯
2015-05-05 23:23 spboxer3: 00:30:936 (1,2,3,4) - 這個位置重複放覺得有點坑了 音高不同 可是下的位置相同 和音樂有點不合~
2015-05-05 23:25 spboxer3: 看來這段有蠻多這種的下法 恩... 我個人是覺得這種下法只能考驗player的讀圖性而已 和音樂比較不這麼契合
2015-05-05 23:25 Minakami Yuki: 星爷最近图挺多这种跳
2015-05-05 23:26 spboxer3: 00:48:232 (2) - 在我看來用個減速slider會更好 幾乎是hold在原地的那種
2015-05-05 23:27 spboxer3: 01:01:242 (6) - 這邊我會ctrl+G 更符合01:00:630 (2,3,4,5) - 2k7
2015-05-05 23:27 spboxer3: 更符合01:00:630 (2,3,4,5) - 的flow
2015-05-05 23:28 spboxer3: 可是如果改了 我會更希望連01:01:548 (1,2) - 的位置一起對調
2015-05-05 23:30 Minakami Yuki: 这个我感觉不太好说……交给兴业决定
2015-05-05 23:30 spboxer3: 01:03:691 (6) - slider走向我會希望往上方走 比較合乎音樂音高 至少這個點是在01:03:078 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這段中音高相對比較高的 可是slider走向往下讓人感覺比較沉的感覺
2015-05-05 23:30 spboxer3: 嘛~ 晚點savelog給他看吧~
2015-05-05 23:31 Minakami Yuki: 嗯 好
2015-05-05 23:34 spboxer3: 01:16:548 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這段不知道該怎麼說... 感覺01:16:548 (1) - 音樂上應該不屬於這個pattern 因為後面01:16:701 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 的鋼琴音很連貫 可是要我去修改我還真不知道該怎麼修
2015-05-05 23:35 Minakami Yuki: 当初我自己做的时候也很蛋疼
2015-05-05 23:36 spboxer3: 提供一個音效想法 在01:32:619 (3) - 加上finish (額...我也不太會說 反正就是一種感覺吧
2015-05-05 23:36 Minakami Yuki: 我自己使用1/2antijump的
2015-05-05 23:37 spboxer3: 01:46:701 (1,2) - 我的話會更喜歡ctrl+H水平翻轉
2015-05-05 23:38 spboxer3: 理由是因為01:45:936 (7,1) - 這個點是一個折返的感覺 音樂感覺和01:46:548 (2,1) - 雷同 所以這樣建議
2015-05-05 23:38 spboxer3: 好啦 mod完畢~
2015-05-05 23:38 Minakami Yuki: hao 
2015-05-05 23:38 Minakami Yuki: 谢谢薯片大大
2015-05-05 23:39 spboxer3: 不是大大啦~

spboxer3 wrote:
00:06:446 (5,1) - 間距給人的感覺應該沒有這麼近尤其是這兩個點00:06:599 (1,1) - 是重音的時候少了那種移動的感覺
00:09:048 (1) - 一樣這邊比前面00:08:742 (4,5) - 間距更短了點感覺重音的位置沒凸顯出來
00:11:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這地方要我來做我會00:11:650 (1,2,3) - 縮短間距但是00:11:956 (3,4,5) - 會放大來跟著pitch 但是現在這樣做也不錯只是點出來這個想法
00:13:027 (1,2,3,1) - 這四個點音樂上聽起來應該是連貫的但是因為你下的pattern所以分開來了點出來我覺得不至於到奇怪但是和音樂有點違和
00:20:221 (7,1) - 恩...我覺得NC應該在7的位置 (重音
00:22:670 (7) - ^ 後面的幾個點我不點出來看星爺考慮一下吧~
00:30:936 (1,2,3,4) - 這個位置重複放覺得有點坑了音高不同可是下的位置相同和音樂有點不合~看來這段有蠻多這種的下法恩... 我個人是覺得這種下法只能考驗player的讀圖性而已和音樂比較不這麼契合
00:48:232 (2) - 在我看來用個減速slider會更好幾乎是hold在原地的那種
01:01:242 (6) - 這邊我會ctrl+G 更符合01:00:630 (2,3,4,5) - 2k7 更符合01:00:630 (2,3,4,5) - 的flow, 可是如果改了我會更希望連
01:01:548 (1,2) - 的位置一起對調
01:03:691 (6) - slider走向我會希望往上方走比較合乎音樂音高至少這個點是在01:03:078 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這段中音高相對比較高的可是slider走向往下讓人感覺比較沉的感覺
01:16:548 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這段不知道該怎麼說... 感覺01:16:548 (1) - 音樂上應該不屬於這個pattern 因為後面01:16:701 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 的鋼琴音很連貫可是要我去修改我還真不知道該怎麼修
提供一個音效想法在01:32:619 (3) - 加上finish (額...我也不太會說反正就是一種感覺吧
01:46:701 (1,2) - 我的話會更喜歡ctrl+H水平翻轉，理由是因為01:45:936 (7,1) - 這個點是一個折返的感覺音樂感覺和01:46:548 (2,1) - 雷同所以這樣建議

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2015-05-05T23:14:50+00:00

2nd recheck NO KD

Hyper

00:09:048 (1) - ctl+g flows better

00:58:181 green line for no reason?

01:03:078 (1) - ctl+g

yf's Another

01:45:936 (1,2) - feels hard to read

Special

00:09:813 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - stream feels over mapped imo. I tried this rhythm and I think its better http://puu.sh/hCQ9V/a98d1ebbf9.jpg
I hear what the stream is mapped to but I feel the drum is more important.

00:18:691 (1,2,1) - this back and forth feels a bit weird to play, I think that moving 00:18:844 (2) - and stacking it on 00:18:078 (3) - is better, because the spacing is more consistent like this pattern 00:18:997 (1,2,3,4) -

00:24:507 (1) - make this extend to the next blue tic, the sound you are following end there, I believe you ended the slider early, but I could be wrong.

00:34:711 (2) - 1/3 doesn't feel right here

00:44:099 (1) - feels the same as earlier, ended early

00:59:558 (2,3) - switch the timing of these, I feel like having the jump at the start is better and emphasizes the start of the kiai time.

01:37:976 (5) - nothing wrong here, but wanted to point out that you follow the sound all the way here but ended early on the others

01:42:874 (1) - you already know what I'm gonna say here

<3 <3

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-05-06T01:47:44+00:00

SPAS-ID wrote:
cmon when got ranked ? i want those PP :'( btw Spy SV is umm a little wierd :/

Soon

asd123iii wrote:
mod request by victorica_db

[Spy's Hyper]
00:05:527 - 00:10:119 - 整段都雙note好怪...Kick + Crash
00:30:783 (30783|2) - 這裡不要放把上下段分開剛剛重聽了一下，我也這麼覺得，Removed
00:33:232 (33232|2) - ^ ^

[Spy's Another]
00:30:783 (30783|2) - 同hyper 把上下段分開 Done
00:32:237 (32237|2) - 應該沒有音 Removed
00:33:232 (33232|3) - 同hyper 把上下段分開 Done
00:36:982 (36982|1) - 應該在00:36:905 - Fixed
00:38:742 - 加note No
01:08:895 - 補上note? 這裡有SV，我才特別空出來的
01:09:048 - ^ ^
01:18:691 - ^ ^
01:18:844 - ^ ^
01:28:487 - ^ ^
01:28:640 - ^ ^
Good Luck~

Thanks for mod

Sky_Demon wrote:
抱歉啦拖有點久有點忙;w;

key: 1|2|3|4|

Color

Red - Serious mistake

Green - Reason

Blue - Proposal

Spy's Hyper
00:59:405 - 這裡應該加上一個 note 因為這裡有 →01:09:201 (69201|1) - Added
01:00:017 (60017|1) - 這樣的音的結束應該是在這裡01:00:323 - (它是連續的聲音接到下一個音並不是像這樣的短音→00:59:711(59711|1,59864|3,60323|3,60476|1) - OK
01:01:854 (61854|0) - 結束 01:02:160 - OK
01:02:466 (62466|3) - 結束01:02:772 - 因為拉長會重疊到下一個所以移到3列OK
01:04:915 (64915|0) - 結束01:05:221 - OK
01:06:752 - 重音加一顆卡手
★01:06:905 (66905|3,67058|1,67211|3,67364|1,67517|0) - 其實我覺得這些可以不用LN來呈現他是很短的音沒有到要拉長的地步
^如果轉成Note這樣會好很多 http://puu.sh/hc6ZC/97bdfb93f1.jpg 不
01:09:813 (69813|3) - 結束在 01:10:119 - 行
01:12:262 (72262|3) - 像這裡就有結束在我所建議的地方這是好的坦白說這個跟其他的有所差異
01:14:711 (74711|3) - 結束 01:15:017 -
01:15:323 (75323|0) - 結束01:15:630 - 同時01:15:476 (75476|2) - 這個應該要刪除這裡沒有短音的前者改，後者有音
01:17:313 (77313|3) - 放慢聽會發現這一條LN抓的音不明這裡我覺得用Note來呈現主旋律才是好的表現方法
所以可以試試這樣子的http://puu.sh/hc79U/935f0b1bbf.jpg 這LN沒問題啊，我用空耳聽都很明顯。。
01:18:997 - 重音加一個為了保持與之前的抓音一致性在小高的mod當中改了
01:19:609 (79609|1) - 結束 01:19:915 - OK
01:21:446 - 重音加一個 OK
01:24:507 (84507|3) - 結束 01:24:813 - OK
01:25:119 (85119|0) - 結束 01:25:425 - OK
★01:26:344 - 這裡開始可以考慮上面有星星標記的那一條mod建議如果怕都是一樣的打起來太無聊就無視不了
01:28:793 - 重音加上有加啦
01:29:405 (89405|0) - 結束 01:29:711 - OK
01:30:936 (90936|0,90936|2) - 突然冒出這個很違和之前的3個kiai段都沒跟到這個音還行吧
01:31:854 (91854|1) - 結束01:32:160 - OK
01:31:242 - 重音加上 Added
01:33:691 - ^ Added
01:34:303 (94303|3) - 結束 01:34:609 - OK
01:34:915 (94915|0) - 結束 01:35:221 - OK

Spy's Another
00:09:048 - 加一顆因為這裡有00:06:599 (6599|2,6599|3,6905|2,6905|1) - 不，後面那2個有2notes是因為他們有kick
00:36:982 (36982|1) - 移到 00:36:905 - Done
01:07:594 - 01:07:670 - 建議各加一個 Done
01:11:803 - 01:12:415 - 不太明白為何要空著有很明顯的主音建議加上前面加了，後面不加，我要的是100%聽的效果，後面那個100%聽不太出來
01:19:150 - ^ 不明顯
01:21:599 - ^ 不明顯
01:27:186 - 01:27:262 - 建議各加上一個 Added
01:31:395 - 01:32:007 - 原因同上上不明顯

就這樣啦~ ~~很水別打我~~

好圖好歌祝你好運! x2

感謝Sky的mod ~

pocket-Gao wrote:
wa. m酱的图(他们都这样叫那我也跟风好了....

std没接触给不了任何建议;w; 一下是mania的mod

Spy's Hyper
没修怎么办 ~~照样摸(by db)~~
00:30:783 (30783|2) - 空开吧 00:30:323 (30323|2,30323|3,30936|1,30936|0,31548|2,31548|3) - 這3個都一樣怎麼就這一個要空開
00:35:681 (35681|2) - 移到|4|如何不妥
01:06:599 (66599|0) - 移到|3| 放不了吧
01:09:201 (69201|1) - 还有 01:26:344 (86344|1) - 这里抓了后面都需要抓吧(个人的话会在每段kiai开头抓一个做了一點調整
01:30:936 (90936|0,90936|2) - 不明(要是我就会在|2|放一个note 要是我會改成一個LN

Spy's Another - 4Key
00:08:130 (8130|1,8206|2) -没听到音如果是想打起来有种连贯的感觉,感觉还是多余的( Removed
00:09:048 只抓了一个音的话为啥00:09:354抓了两个是不是主抓背景音而不是"登登"的音(感觉我好傻.... Kick+拍手聲
00:25:732 (25732|0,25732|3,25885|3,25885|0) - 和db那边一样打起来感觉不适合全部放在|1||4| 我覺得還好
00:38:436 (38436|0) - 移到|2| 相应后面的是|1|3|4| 坦白說實質意義不大，不過我還是改了
01:02:619 (62619|3,62772|3,62925|3,63078|3) - 听了几遍感觉不适合4个jack吧嗯，我改了一下
01:04:456 加个note 感觉|4|不错(别告诉是故意不放的...... 故意不放的，我試過擺跟不擺的效果，發現不擺好一些
01:07:670 如果是为了间隔开感觉还是补一个note的吧 |2|之类的位置(? 加啦
01:11:803 和 01:12:415 为啥空着.... 加啦
01:27:033 我耳机应该没问题吧放1倍速听听看連音吧，我不想擺
01:28:640 前后间隔够大了加个note吧大哥，有SV

我的mod图是尽可能写自己的看法,但不是指都是谱面问题,是融入了一些自己的看法觉得没用可以无视;w;
以上的是我的mod 曲子和谱面都好评www

Thanks for mod ~

biemote wrote:
所以说这种直接rank都没问题的谱找我这种渣渣来干嘛啦(真心)
只是建议啦~

1234

Spy's HYPER
00:21:599 (21599|3,21675|2,21752|3) - 这种121和434的....在another里面没问题...但是可能在hyper里面....131或者424会不会更好一点? 好

01:06:752 - 和 01:07:823 - 和 01:35:987 - 这里是不是应该还有个条子? OK
01:22:211 (82211|1) - 50%的我...没听出这个条子... 嚴格說起來這2個是同音01:22:058 (82058|3,82211|1) -

难谱就别指望我啦....
个人观点,仅供参考,摸得烂莫喷TAT

神谱get√

Thanks for mod√

richardfeder wrote:
你是不是要修过年啊

Simple_Star wrote:
richardfeder wrote:
你是不是要修过年啊
他可能明年才修的好

你們兩個怎麼不結婚算了

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2015-05-06T09:29:06+00:00

有些事情我觉得应该说下。

[General]

· 假如确定了的话，tag 里面应该加上 Amamiya Yuko 以及 Skystar

[yf's Another]

· 00:00:706 (1) - 添加finish?我看到Sampleset是Normal，我猜你也许忘记了这里的finish

[Skystar's Expert]

· 取消Widescreen Support

· 00:07:364 (2,3) - 这里是1/4，真的

· 00:32:160 (1) - 这里也是1/4，白线→红线→蓝线。你应该和Another以及Special的同一个地方保持一致~~（因为我就因为这里吃过dq）~~

· 00:37:058 (1) - 同上

其实我是蛮希望这曲子能出一个高难度的。好运

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2015-05-06T11:23:46+00:00

星爷真是事多

Skystar's Expert

00:14:711 (5,1) - nc互换啊。
00:20:221 (7,1) - nc互换啊。
00:22:670 (7,1) - nc互换啊，不墅哩后面同理，也不晓得你会不会换。
01:28:793 (2) - nc。
01:33:078 (1,2) - 忒近，起码跳半个屏幕吧，滑条耶。
既然你自己觉得蠢那我也就（

四暗刻，乃最近中了什么邪。

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2015-05-06T11:42:07+00:00

手滑点了给kd

@Frey: yf那个我觉得不要finish反而更加合适点，tags added

Depths

Depths wrote:
2nd recheck NO KD

Hyper

00:09:048 (1) - ctl+g flows better emphasize finish

00:58:181 green line for no reason? it's from special diff, but wont effect anything, may removed after next update

01:03:078 (1) - ctl+g small jump to emphasize down beat

yf's Another

01:45:936 (1,2) - feels hard to read all similar patterns wont cause confusion

Special

00:09:813 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - stream feels over mapped imo. I tried this rhythm and I think its better http://puu.sh/hCQ9V/a98d1ebbf9.jpg
I hear what the stream is mapped to but I feel the drum is more important. that's fine imo, i need some streams in this diff

00:18:691 (1,2,1) - this back and forth feels a bit weird to play, I think that moving 00:18:844 (2) - and stacking it on 00:18:078 (3) - is better, because the spacing is more consistent like this pattern 00:18:997 (1,2,3,4) - i just like make similar part different patterns, and not weird for me to play, so keep

00:24:507 (1) - make this extend to the next blue tic, the sound you are following end there, I believe you ended the slider early, but I could be wrong. we all could be wrong but i dont like extending it to blue tick, sounds weird to me

00:34:711 (2) - 1/3 doesn't feel right here that's really truly 1/3

00:44:099 (1) - feels the same as earlier, ended early ^^

00:59:558 (2,3) - switch the timing of these, I feel like having the jump at the start is better and emphasizes the start of the kiai time. that's just patterns, if map random jump, we should consider the jumpping emphasizing kiai.

01:37:976 (5) - nothing wrong here, but wanted to point out that you follow the sound all the way here but ended early on the others my way to emphasize the end lol

01:42:874 (1) - you already know what I'm gonna say here yep

<3 <3

<3 but sorry to keep all

Last edited by Koiyuki 2015-05-08T16:46:53+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

[Emiria]

1,010 posts

Joined November 2012

[Emiria] 2015-05-06T14:31:41+00:00

太多了可以不quote吗 ..
总之感谢mod

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2015-05-06T17:08:48+00:00

updated

richardfeder

1,056 posts

Joined March 2013

richardfeder 2015-05-07T03:09:37+00:00

~~真不容易终于改完了看来你还是要靠催的hhhhh~~
Edit:真是欺骗我感情我还以为你改完了你就将就着看看吧叫你不改mod(.
0|1|2|3

Normal

下面都只是些建议
00:01:089 (1089|0,1242|1,1395|2,1854|1,2007|2,2160|3,2619|0,2772|2,2925|0,3385|3,3538|1,3691|3,4150|3,4303|1,4456|3,4915|3,5068|1) - 是不是全部往前挪1/4?

01:06:599 (66599|2) - 加一个感觉好些而且也有音

01:09:507 (69507|2) - 删掉长条应该在后面的红线停
01:11:038 (71038|2) - 这个反而应该在白线就停下来然后01:11:344 - 加一个note

Hyper

前面说实话有点不大好看琴声和鼓点混在一起我觉得像00:07:364 - 1/4该取的地方适当取一点也好只是建议

00:19:609 (19609|2) - 挪到3 00:19:915 (19915|1) - 这个意义不明的note删掉啦

00:38:130 (38130|3) - 删窜音了
00:38:742 (38742|1) - 加漏了一个
我100%听出来感觉是这样的虽然50%感觉漏的那个听不出来不过我看了db的diff 他也是写了的窜音那个也不好说...你看一下吧

00:41:191 (41191|3,41267|1,41344|3,41497|3,41650|0,41650|3,41803|3,41956|1) - 干这么没有诚意好歹ctrl+H一下啊

后面条子我给负分

~~我怎么觉得这个insane改名Hyper就好了真的要4diff吗...~~
当我没说

Insane

还是感觉前面那些改往前挪1/4 =,=

01:06:446 (66446|0,66446|3) - 这样好吗琴音后面红线也有耶

01:17:313 (77313|2,77390|1,77466|0,77619|2,77696|1,77772|0) - 听不出来啦(摔

01:20:068 (80068|0,80987|1) - 01:22:517 (82517|0) - 有点服 233 但是 01:23:895 - 这个为啥不写

01:20:987 (80987|2) - 01:23:436 (83436|1) - 我觉得删掉好点

01:36:905 (96905|1,96982|2,97058|3,97211|1,97288|2,97364|3) - 同上

01:45:323 (105323|1) - 删你前面一样的地方其实只写了一个我没记错的话

是不是用了hitsound copier 好歹处理一下啊2333

Another

00:09:048 - 漏了

00:29:558 - 我觉得可以像db的难度一样再来根条子

00:30:323 (30323|1) - 说实话我感觉你这段重音听错了你可以参考下db的所有的这个位置（小结第二拍）都应该两个就够了不应该三个

00:38:742 - 謎のような空白

00:59:558 - ^ 卧槽为什么这里居然啥都没有后面好多地方都是啊啊莫名的空白

00:44:405 (44405|2) - 1/2前开始

01:01:242 (61242|2,61242|3,61242|1) - 按照你的放法这里不应该是两个条子吗

01:02:466 (62466|1,62466|2,62466|0) - 多了一个

01:05:527 (65527|2,65527|1,65527|3) - ^
我觉得后面你还是自己检查一下比较好尤其是好多该有note的地方居然是空的(感觉就是卧槽...

变速说实话我也不怎么会我试着做了一个地方感觉效果就这样233

Skystar

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Joined May 2011

Skystar 2015-05-07T09:39:36+00:00

http://puu.sh/hExwL/a56e8bceaa.osu
fixed everything from mokori and most of things from spboxer
didn't fix NCs because i don't want to, also 1/3 snappings on 00:32:160 (1) - and 00:37:058 (1) - are clearly legit, hence i'll keep them.

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-05-07T14:53:53+00:00

richardfeder wrote:
~~真不容易终于改完了看来你还是要靠催的hhhhh~~
Edit:真是欺骗我感情我还以为你改完了你就将就着看看吧叫你不改mod(.
0|1|2|3

Hyper
前面说实话有点不大好看琴声和鼓点混在一起我觉得像00:07:364 - 1/4该取的地方适当取一点也好只是建议

00:19:609 (19609|2) - 挪到3 00:19:915 (19915|1) - 这个意义不明的note删掉啦改啦，這麼大聲

00:38:130 (38130|3) - 删窜音了沒這回事吧
00:38:742 (38742|1) - 加漏了一个是要加幾個，我覺得2個已經夠了
我100%听出来感觉是这样的虽然50%感觉漏的那个听不出来不过我看了db的diff 他也是写了的窜音那个也不好说...你看一下吧刪了感覺確實好一些

00:41:191 (41191|3,41267|1,41344|3,41497|3,41650|0,41650|3,41803|3,41956|1) - 干这么没有诚意好歹ctrl+H一下啊 Ctrl+H什麼鬼，後面就擺那樣了

后面条子我给负分
我次奧敢不敢再水一點

Another
00:09:048 - 漏了我好像前面的mod就修了

00:29:558 - 我觉得可以像db的难度一样再来根条子兩個難度長的一樣多沒新意(

00:30:323 (30323|1) - 说实话我感觉你这段重音听错了你可以参考下db的所有的这个位置（小结第二拍）都应该两个就够了不应该三个行，改了

00:38:742 - 謎のような空白不明顯的音我不想加

00:59:558 - ^ 卧槽为什么这里居然啥都没有后面好多地方都是啊啊莫名的空白坦白說都是聽100%才決定放不放的，你們都覺得是空白，可是我聽起來這個連音特別小聲。。不過還是加啦

00:44:405 (44405|2) - 1/2前开始 Fixed

01:01:242 (61242|2,61242|3,61242|1) - 按照你的放法这里不应该是两个条子吗改啦

01:02:466 (62466|1,62466|2,62466|0) - 多了一个改了

01:05:527 (65527|2,65527|1,65527|3) - ^
我觉得后面你还是自己检查一下比较好尤其是好多该有note的地方居然是空的(感觉就是卧槽... 行

变速说实话我也不怎么会我试着做了一个地方感觉效果就这样233
效果好多了

Thanks for mod

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2015-05-08T14:13:44+00:00

added skystar diff and fine now. recircled.

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2015-05-12T19:23:01+00:00

Hi mania check
[vic's Normal]
OD6
00:59:711 - 其实绝大部分的这里都是有音的看你的取舍不强求

01:25:732 (85732|2) - 不太合适用键来写吧

01:27:262 - 这儿应该是漏音了吧

01:33:691 (93691|0,94303|0,94915|0) - 这里用Hold我感觉也不太合适用键更好点

[Hyper]
OD5 虽然很多但是5还是很简单的你的新Style?
希望别长懒看其实也不长
00:03:078 (3078|0,4303|2) - 抱歉这个我真的是没看懂不如不放
不过我的建议是这样的00:02:619 - 这边加一个Note
00:03:385 - 然后再加一个音之后和前面相同的地方都加个Note到00:04:915 - 为止

00:29:711 (29711|1,29813|2,29915|3) - Ctrl+J 音高是渐渐降低的而且这个也不难打

01:06:599 (66599|0) - 我只能说你这一段简直偷懒把这个删掉这里没有类似于前面能做短条的那种音然后在01:06:446 - 加个Note

01:07:517 (67517|1) - 仔细听听就能发现其实还是短条音既然你都这么放了那就放放齐算了

01:09:201 (69201|0) - 拆成两个其实这边是断开的

01:09:966 (69966|1) - 移到3 和前面的01:09:507 (69507|3,69660|1) - 不是同样的音调所以不能放一样的

01:10:425 (70425|0,70578|1) - Ctrl+J

01:11:650 (71650|1) - 也是拆成两个同上

01:12:262 (72262|3) - ^

01:14:864 (74864|1,75017|0) - 都往右移一格这个也是前面说到过的不重复了

01:17:313 (77313|3) - 别偷懒放完吧之前的放连点在4 然后01:17:772 - 这里这个放Hold

01:18:997 (78997|3) - 前面说到过的

01:21:446 (81446|0) - ^

01:27:109 (87109|0) - 拆成两个

01:28:793 (88793|3) - ^

01:31:242 (91242|0,91854|0) - ^

01:37:058 - 别急着停 01:37:211 - 这里也要一个

01:37:364 - 这里才开始Hold

[vic's Insane]
OD最少7
01:17:466 (77466|0) - 移到3更好点

01:27:415 (87415|1) - 有点奇怪而且 01:27:568 - 空掉了

01:37:058 (97058|3) - 移到2更好

[Spoet's Another]
00:07:441 - 如果你要做34连打的话音是从这边开始就要放34了

00:36:982 (36982|3) - 应该是失误难道是故意放在蓝线的?

01:08:895 - 这边开始就有音了除非你告诉我后面你都没抓这个

01:12:415 - 漏音了嗯没事已经顶难度了不需要休息了

01:17:313 (77313|3,77619|0) - Hyper有提到过连点音没结束

01:18:691 - 上面有提到过

01:21:752 - 也是漏音这边是鼓和主音都有的就算这段只抓主音的话也是漏了

01:28:487 - 前面提到过

01:32:029 - 也提到过

01:36:905 (96905|3,97211|0) - 上面提到过

改完了叫我一下
Edit:Hyper其实也还行吧不复查了··没什么时间感觉要无限跳票

Last edited by Bruce 2015-05-20T08:01:36+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Spy

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Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-05-13T03:54:13+00:00

Woc又是論文，回家修

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-05-14T01:25:12+00:00

Simple_Star wrote:
Hi mania check
[Hyper]
OD5 虽然很多但是5还是很简单的你的新Style? 不就跟VOLTEXES II差不多
希望别长懒看其实也不长
00:03:078 (3078|0,4303|2) - 抱歉这个我真的是没看懂不如不放琴
不过我的建议是这样的00:02:619 - 这边加一个Note
00:03:385 - 然后再加一个音之后和前面相同的地方都加个Note到00:04:915 - 为止不了

00:29:711 (29711|1,29813|2,29915|3) - Ctrl+J 音高是渐渐降低的而且这个也不难打行

01:06:599 (66599|0) - 我只能说你这一段简直偷懒把这个删掉这里没有类似于前面能做短条的那种音然后在01:06:446 - 加个Note 改了

01:07:517 (67517|1) - 仔细听听就能发现其实还是短条音既然你都这么放了那就放放齐算了這沒問題吧

01:09:201 (69201|0) - 拆成两个其实这边是断开的行

01:09:966 (69966|1) - 移到3 和前面的01:09:507 (69507|3,69660|1) - 不是同样的音调所以不能放一样的改了

01:10:425 (70425|0,70578|1) - Ctrl+J Done

01:11:650 (71650|1) - 也是拆成两个同上改了

01:12:262 (72262|3) - ^ 改啦

01:14:864 (74864|1,75017|0) - 都往右移一格这个也是前面说到过的不重复了改了

01:17:313 (77313|3) - 别偷懒放完吧之前的放连点在4 然后01:17:772 - 这里这个放Hold 改了，但是有點奇怪，所以我又改回來了，你這樣變成jack很奇怪，你指出的這些點很不明顯

01:18:997 (78997|3) - 前面说到过的改啦

01:21:446 (81446|0) - ^ ^

01:27:109 (87109|0) - 拆成两个 ^

01:28:793 (88793|3) - ^ ^

01:31:242 (91242|0,91854|0) - ^ ^

01:37:058 - 别急着停 01:37:211 - 这里也要一个跟前面一樣

01:37:364 - 这里才开始Hold ^

[Spoet's Another]
00:07:441 - 如果你要做34连打的话音是从这边开始就要放34了你好像看不太懂這一段 ?

00:36:982 (36982|3) - 应该是失误难道是故意放在蓝线的? 音不就是在藍線上嗎。。

01:08:895 - 这边开始就有音了除非你告诉我后面你都没抓这个到底有多少人沒看這裡有SV，woc

01:12:415 - 漏音了嗯没事已经顶难度了不需要休息了沒停頓的感覺略奇葩

01:17:313 (77313|3,77619|0) - Hyper有提到过连点音没结束改了

01:18:691 - 上面有提到过 SV

01:21:752 - 也是漏音这边是鼓和主音都有的就算这段只抓主音的话也是漏了 Added

01:28:487 - 前面提到过 SV

01:32:029 - 也提到过 Added

01:36:905 (96905|3,97211|0) - 上面提到过行，改了

改完了叫我一下 Hyper需要复查的别的还好

Thanks for mod

Bruce

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Joined January 2013

Bruce 2015-05-20T08:02:07+00:00

Bubbled

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2015-05-20T08:11:10+00:00

Thanks~

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2015-05-24T01:50:20+00:00

Bold Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
Bold Black - Highly recommended, consider to use it
Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
Gray - Personal preference

[General]

standard和mania都有Another和Hyper难度名不太好（话说RB不是用HARD的吗xD）把间谍哥的难度名改成Hard和Extra之类的?
"Skystar" tag is useless

[

yf's Another]

00:22:058 (5,1) - 就跟cymbal音感觉就够了这里跟鼓感觉没必要而且比较难打后面的一样

[

Skystar's Expert]

00:14:252 (2,3) - 感觉这里跳变大一点才更合曲
00:14:711 (5,1) - 把NC加在5上来作为一组?
00:32:160 (1) - Should be 1/4 snapping, not 1/3
00:37:058 (1) - Should be 1/4 snapping, not 1/3
00:45:017 (1) - Should be 1/4 snapping, not 1/8
01:01:548 (1,2) - Ctrl+G下flow会更舒服一点
整个kiai的1/4全是overmap 不过还蛮好玩不知道会不会因为这个被打死QAQ

Mania Column: 1|2|3|4
[

victorica's Normal]

00:10:425 (10425|0,10425|3) - 这种cymbol拍我觉得完全可以放三个啊爽 Hyper也是

[

Spy's Hyper]

00:34:839 (34839|3) - Should be 1/3 snapping, not 1/4, remove this note
01:06:752 - 在Column 1加个note?
01:07:517 (67517|1) - Hold改到01:07:823 - 结束然后在Column 2再放个hold 感觉这个长音在中间还是有断一下
01:16:548 - Add a note on Column 4, 跟01:36:140 (96140|0) - 类似
01:23:895 - Add a note on Column 3
01:26:344 - Add a 1/2 hold on Column 3
01:37:058 (97058|0) - 这个长音在01:37:364 - 有个很明显的中断所以我感觉可以断掉然后在Column 3加个短hold 顺带如果你改了这个为了一致性01:17:313 (77313|3) - 也可以改

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Spy

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Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-05-24T15:07:41+00:00

OniJAM wrote:
Bold Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
Bold Black - Highly recommended, consider to use it
Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
Gray - Personal preference
[General]
standard和mania都有Another和Hyper难度名不太好（话说RB不是用HARD的吗xD）把间谍哥的难度名改成Hard和Extra之类的? 好吧，改了，Hard跟Extra
"Skystar" tag is useless
Mania Column: 1|2|3|4
[ victorica's Normal]
00:10:425 (10425|0,10425|3) - 这种cymbol拍我觉得完全可以放三个啊爽 Hyper也是其實我也想，但是Another裡面已經這樣搞了，而且基於這種H難度，這種改了後面也要跟著改，會無意間搞出一堆jack出來，到時候又被抱怨還是說做的沒新意，還是不了
[ Spy's Hyper]
00:34:839 (34839|3) - Should be 1/3 snapping, not 1/4, remove this note ??好像是在空耳的情況下加上的，我直接刪了
01:06:752 - 在Column 1加个note? 妥
01:07:517 (67517|1) - Hold改到01:07:823 - 结束然后在Column 2再放个hold 感觉这个长音在中间还是有断一下嗯，改了
01:16:548 - Add a note on Column 4, 跟01:36:140 (96140|0) - 类似妥
01:23:895 - Add a note on Column 3 OK
01:26:344 - Add a 1/2 hold on Column 3 Sure
01:37:058 (97058|0) - 这个长音在01:37:364 - 有个很明显的中断所以我感觉可以断掉然后在Column 3加个短hold 顺带如果你改了这个为了一致性01:17:313 (77313|3) - 也可以改後者這個沒有斷，前面那個我倒是修了
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