1. Insane (4,28 stars, 1014 notes)
2. l1mi's Hard (3,64 stars, 861 notes)
3. Normal (1,81 stars, 349 notes)

Normal by me Hard by l1mi Insane by me

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ARCskieZ wrote:

I would like AR9 better.

Berezz wrote:

[General]
Maybe change the hitsound volume from the start until 00:29:238 - to be slightly lower that the current 40% (your max in this song is 50%). This is because that part is more quiet and calm. Maybe 25% until 00:29:238 - and then turn it up a notch. And then increase the volume a bit more at 00:43:783 - where the drums kick in. This would give a neat effect of raising the volume with the intensity of the song.
Mind you that the same part exists at 01:31:056 - and 03:16:510 - so you would have to match that up with the first one. (For consistency purposes)
Good point I might add that

Mod

[Normal]
I'm not that good at modding normals, but it looks good 2 me.
(LOVE this slider 01:30:147 (6) - ) Thank you

[Insane]
00:11:738 (4,1) - Maybe stack these notes, since the back and forth pattern is emphasized by the finish hitsound which alternates (but not on these 2 notes).
I dont like the flow of a stack there :/
01:01:965 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make increasing spacing from 1-5 (like you've done with 5-7)(Something like this maybe? http://puu.sh/kpYb1/be650f3f02.jpg)
Changed it
01:05:147 - I really want a single tap here (or spinner from 01:03:783 - to 01:05:147 - ) That snare sound is too heavy to ignore ^^
Added
01:13:783 (1) - Maybe increase the spacing of this note as it's a loud snare hit which you've mapped with bigger spacing on other parts.
I think its fine there. Increased spacing there would feel a bit random to me
01:19:465 (4,5,6,7,8) - Think a linear and less spaced stream (or even better a linear variable spacing stream) Fits with the drums and the transition into the next section. (example http://puu.sh/kpYCP/8af1567794.jpg of course makes it not as crooked as that ) If you do end up decreasing the spacing on that part maybe consider increasing it here 01:19:010 (1,2,3) -
I like the flow from 01:19:464 (4,5,6,7,8) - to 01:20:147 (9,1) - But I see what you mean I might change it
01:20:374 - This slider section feels sortof weird as it is now, tried changing the timings (so theres 1/8th between them) but that didnt really work itself out. Suggest to shorten the sliders (except 01:22:646 (11,12) - ) by 1/4 and jamming a regular circle in between (change the pattern and spacing accordingly of course)(example picture http://puu.sh/kpXub/fba938b1fc.jpg).
Doing it like this would make less effects on the vocals and I want to highlight them here
01:35:601 (3,4) - CTRL+J to make it interesting.
Good idea. Moved upcoming part a bit because of an overlap with 01:36:055 (4,3) -
01:43:783 (1,2,3) - Consider moving this stack closer to the neighboring hits since the part of the music its mapped to is different than previous.
Not sure what you meant but I moved it a bit closer to the upcoming slider
03:23:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - CTRL+J this so and move the pattern to its original position so that (8) is pointing next to 03:25:601 (1) - Better flow.
Done
04:18:329 (7) - I do not feel that the music justifies the difference in spacing here. Can keep if u want
Thought its a nice transtion to the sliderpart I keep it :>

1. I just stumbled upon this map and noticed that the offset is wrong, the correct offset should be 7470.

bigjoe97 wrote:

from m4m



Hard
Just in general this felt a lot more like an Insane than a Hard with the large jumps and stuff. Will try to adjust it slightly, its still a 3,79 star map and I think up to 3,75? was fine for a hard diff. Used a constant distance snap with none of those jumps you talked about in an earlier version but someone told me it was better to do it this way but, I might have done it the wrong or made them too big. When something is changed the distance will be smaller rather than bigger I can promise you that.

00:16:560 (1,2,3,4,1) - This whole pattern was very near the bottom of my screen, almost under the hit error bar. Try to move this up a bit. -Moved the whole section to avoid the hit error bar.
00:19:060 (4,5,6) - These jumps are a bit harsh for a Hard. Move them a bit closer together, perhaps around 2.5 DS. -did lower it by 0,3 but to go that much lower id have to make a whole new pattern and, there are so many similar places in the map ill wait a bit before changing it more. If more people mention it as a problem ill give up and change it more.
00:23:606 (1) - Why the different hitsound? - Removed it in the other mod just havent updated the map yet. But the answer to your question, im bad at mapping. ^^

00:25:651 (1) - End this at 00:26:560 instead, since it's such a long slider ending it on a blue tick feels really weird, especially since there's a white tick right before. - Did as you wrote.

00:29:288 (1,2) - Really like this rhythm here - try to use it more, so the map isn't just a bunch of 1/2 beat objects like it is now. Good spots would be 00:34:742 and 00:38:379. Its just a bit annoying that the end dont follow any sound, but people seem to map that way. Going to do as you said, change those two places and will try to find other later.


00:29:970 (3,4,5) - This pattern flows weirdly, perhaps round it out more. True, dont feel good to play that at all just wierd. Changed, maybe to something else just as wierd but its changed.

00:54:060 (4,5,6) - Spacing gets really big here really suddenly, caught me by surprise and also is way harsher than the rest of your map, with nothing in the music to signify it. Reduce spacing. Wow didnt notice it when playing myself, it felt so normal. Changed.

00:59:288 (7) - Maybe start at 00:59:060 to follow guitar Sure, I can put something there.


01:02:470 (2,3,4,5) - This would be really cool if the distance spacing increased with the intensity of the guitar - try something like this Aye, it dont reflect how the guittar sound at all trying to change it.


01:10:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are some huge jumps, and also might be a bit hard to read for a Hard diff. There are a lot of large 2+ DS jumps in the map so I'll stop pointing them out here but know that there are more and they feel quite harsh. Changed that specific location but as you say there are more.

01:16:333 (8,1) - Stack? Yes
01:20:879 (1,2) - Stack?Yes

01:31:056 (7,8,9,10) - All these long sliders for the next 30 seconds or so should be 1/2 beat sliders to follow the guitar. Thats the way they already are for me, they might have been messed up due to an offset change a while ago. Either way they will be the way you described.

01:57:647 (3) - A double repeat 1/2 beat slider would fit better with the guitar. Dont like those kind of reversed sliders, ill do somethinig else instead. Because, its pretty hard to see on a slider how many times it will go back and forth.

02:11:510 (2,4) - Stack? Stack.
02:16:283 (7,8,1) - Fix stack. Stack fixed.

02:17:420 (4) - Move to 180,96 for better circular flow into the streamLooks like an improvement.
02:18:101 (8) - Move to 376,280 for better circular flow into slidersSame here.


02:18:783 (2) - Ctrl+G for flow. This is a Hard map, no need to add difficulty for the sake of adding difficulty. Its not about that, I just dont feel much difference thats the problem. For me its equal hard/easy whole map through, but from someone else perspective then yes. Ill change it! better flow and smaller distance later on.

02:45:601 (7) - 1/2 beat slider fixed
02:46:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe too long of a stream for a Hard. Repeat slider instead? Wha.. youre right "silent cry"
02:55:601 (4,6) - Stack? fixed
03:00:488 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too long of a stream? (7 notes) Did something.
03:27:192 (7) - This anti-jump might be too confusing for a Hard Stacked and moved it a bit.

04:04:919 (2,3,4,5,6) - Why is this here? There's no 1/4 beat rhythm in the music. CTRL + C without listening to the music, just a guess. Ill make it reflect the actual music!

04:28:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Too long of a stream for sure. Changed it, not sure it works.
04:29:238 (1) - What's up with the weird length of these sliders? Same thing as before most likley due to an offset change where the timing / notes got moved it looks fine for me.
04:36:055 (4,5,1) - This doesn't fit the music at all Call it overmapping or something.. same thing with the rythm you liked earlier at 00:29:287 (1,2) - but I can change it. A note where nothing is playing kinda annoy me as well.
04:39:692 (4,5,1) - See above
Sending Domi the update tomorrow..

Hylocereus wrote:

hi have a mod! I like the maps in general, here are some suggestions for the easier difficulties:

Normal

1. 00:07:470 - the hitsounds are a little very too loud compared to music; consider toning down significantly or removing altogether Lowered it
2. 01:14:288 (2, 3) - combine these circles into a slider? otherwise the circles don't exactly match up with music Done
3. 01:19:515 - consider mapping this break - the song is fairly strong at this point and a break this short feels strange, especially since you have another break coming up really soon I hope its not too hard hue
4. 01:30:197 - this slider is really cool!! Thank you <3
5. 01:38:388 - hitsounds are too loud again: I'd remove them at the start and fade them in as the music grows. Lowered it and used Soft
6. 02:35:879 - map this too by symmetry Not sure what you meant but I remapped it
7. 03:02:015 (1, 2, 3, 4) - extend the break and remove these notes; the song doesn't have a strong beat here and so the red notes are a little weirdDone
8. in general just reduce the hitsounds on the quieter portions of the songI kept the volume during the kiai but lowered the rest

ThygLyfN0Scop3 wrote:

Keep up the good work.
Insane

1. hitsounds I dont know what you mean its hitsounded
2. 00:43:833 - this part is pretty great Thanks <3
3. 01:40:879 - this stack is a little strange; unstack 3 and 4 Changed it
4. 02:18:379 - I like the idea of having a star formation here, but the star is not very symmetrical Its getting mre spaced - so its not symmetrical
5. 03:52:924 - this slider's shape reminds me of a human fetus; I would change the shape euhm.. what xD
6. 04:00:197 (8, 9) - maybe change these two locations to make the star look more like a star Fixed it
7. 04:39:174 - change these short sliders into two circles (do a three-stack) I like it more this way since I used some stacks before

Battle wrote:

You need a diff in between hard and normal because the gap is too big o/

1. Below 1.5: Easy
2. Below 2.25: Normal
3. Below 3.75: Hard
4. Below 5.25: Insane

Hylocereus wrote:

Hard

Hard

1. distance spacing seems a little large for a Hard song, especially since there are many jumps. also hitsounds
   Adjusting some jumps a bit more, but it wouldnt supprise me if its still not enough.
2. 00:00:197 - hitsounds Have to be a little bit more specific, I think Domi adjusted the hitsound volume if im not mistaken. If the hitsounds are poorly placed feel free to suggest how to use them in a better way. I just placed them to give easy feedback not to improve how the music sound. Honestly got no idea where to place the hitsounds so I just place them where I want them to be myself.
   
3. 00:01:788 - clapping hitsounds in general are a little inconsistent; sometimes there are two of them at the end of a phrase and other times there are only one. further, sometimes I don't feel as if the clapsounds are augmenting my playing experience
   I agree.
   
4. 00:14:060 (6) - change this to two separate circles, because it seems like three hits are expected by the player
   Unstacking those to make "two separate circles", if I understood you correct.
   
5. 00:25:651 - changing the slider speed here seems very unexpected, especially as there are no major changes in the song
   The velocity difference shouldnt throw anyone off. The BPM might not be lower but she sing pretty long and quiet, for me it feel nice to play that slider. But ill keep it in mind.
   
6. 00:38:379 - this jump seems unnecessarily large; move them slightly closer together
   Changed the distance.
   
7. 00:42:924 (3, 4, 5) - it is very unclear as to where and when to click. I would move 4 and 5 off the sliders and maybe stack them
   Moved them off sliders and stacked them.
   
8. 01:02:015 - there doesn't appear to be any reason for the whistle sound to be here
   Its removed.
   
9. 01:02:470 (6) - the distances from 4 to 7 are a little inconsistent; maybe move 6 to somewhere like (296, 136) to make it better
   I agree, but someone told me to use an increasing distance in an earlier mod; maybe I did it in a bad way. Adjusted it somewhat.
   
10. 01:02:923 - slider velocity D:
    Exact same thing again, lovley SV!
    
11. 01:10:196 (5) - move this to be on top of 1 for symmetry
    Done.
    
12. 01:19:515 - the song doesn't do anything when 2 happens which makes timing this a little awkward, so remove 3 from this combo and move 2 to be a little closer to 1
    But the drum start playing there, maybe I just dont understand. Fixed the distance, exactly 0,77 between every note now.
    
13. 01:32:924 - this whistle sounds strange, as do some (most) of the later ones in this section
    Same thing again, ill note that a change is needed but I have no idea what to change it to. Its just a basic sound to make it easier to follow the beat. And if im not mistaken thats the main purpose of the hitsounds. If it where to improve the music they wouldnt be needed at all. But as you imply there should be a better way to use the hitsounds, question remain; how.
    
14. 01:50:424 - increase spacing on these notes to be more consistent with the previous 5 note runs
    Was trying to stack them, id make the distance zero but im not sure how to do so.
    
15. 02:25:651 - make slider longer instead of changing velocity
    If I change the other two later ill change this one as well. It shouldnt be a problem playing that slider.
    
16. 02:29:060 (7) - make this a circle instead of a slider
    Yes but shes singing from the red tic to the white thats why I used a slider but fine, changed.
    
17. 02:45:651 - shorten this slider by one tick
    Might have been fixed in the last update, looks fine for me right now.
    
18. 02:57:924 (5) - hiding this note under a slider is weird; move it out
    Moved. Think I stack notes like that when im not sure where to place the note, got to be aware of that while mapping. But those on the longer sliders are easier to see so ill leave them be. They are also placed on beats so it should be easy to play.
19. in general this section has a lot of circles that are hard to locate because they're under sliders
    
20. 03:27:242 (7) - move farther away from 6 for better distancing
    Moved further away from 6.
    
21. 03:30:879 - separate slider into two circles (same for other instances in this section), because it's hard to tell that it's actually a slider when it's so short
    Even if you pretend its a tripple and play it like that you still get a full hit, aka slidermagic. Almost impossible to miss this even if you fail to read it. However it might get removed later anyway because nothing is actually playing on the blue tic right, that alone is a reason to remove the slider I guess, not sure.
    
22. 04:29:742 - these hitsounds are drowning out the guitar, making the hits sound out of place.
    Ill leave that to Domi, he can adjust the hitsound volume as he see fit.
    
    Cant agree on that one. Pretend its a 1 minute happy30 spinner but with sliders instead.
23. 04:36:357 - ending the map here might actually be acceptable, since not much happens from this point on

1. 00:08:606 (6,7) - make this a bit more zig zag like what you did previously so it would make this plays a bit better imo
2. 00:12:015 (1) - better add finish here then delete finish here 00:12:242 (2) - it sound a bit more consistent that way
3. 00:20:197 (1,2) - 00:21:106 (4,5) - pretty confused to read here imo I thought it 1/4 when I play it lol , basically if you want manual stack here just decrease the spacing to like 0.1x-0.2x around here so that would make it looks like manual stack things more ( apply to others similiar notes too )
4. 00:24:288 (2) - better do some jumps here so that make it a bit more consistent with 00:22:697 (2,3) -
5. 00:32:924 (1,2) - not quite a good idea to do the silenced sliderend here this is like some situation that silenced sliderend just not right here imo cus it doesn't looks like you emphasis anything after the low/empty 1/4 beat tho so that's some bad iead to use silenced sliderend
6. 00:36:560 (1,2,3,4) - flow is a bit weird here imo , I would do something like this instead
   SPOILER

   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:42:015 (1,2) - , 00:42:924 (4,5) - sound overmap on 1/4 can't really hear anything on 1/4 , better use 1/2 here imo
8. 00:44:174 (2,5) - sound overmap too lol , there is no sound on 1/4
9. 00:45:992 (2,5,2) - same , consider checking 1/4 things here and onward
10. 01:59:742 (4) - try place this one around x424 y40 ? that would make flow here 01:59:288 (3,4,1) - a bit better imo
11. 02:02:470 (7,8) - can increase spacing a bit more since (8) sound pretty emphasized , increasing spacing will make things play better here imo
12. 03:08:833 (7,1) - imo would be better if this has more spacing than 03:08:606 (6,7) - since (1) sound pretty emphasized so try move (7) to around x256 y256 ?
13. 03:14:970 (1,2,3) - consistent spacing would play better here lol
14. 03:23:606 (6,1) - better make spacing here bigger than 03:23:379 (5,6) - so it make spacing a bit more consistent with the music , try move (6) to around x168 y192 ?
15. 04:12:470 (9,10,1) - consistent spacing would play better here imo
    
    I think spacing and flow can be improved a bit here
    also double check some 1/4 beat would be good , I think some 1/4 beat kinda feel overmap

• lol hard looks like light insane here with the about of jumps here

1. 00:18:605 (2,3) - ctrl+g here would make flow here 00:17:924 (1,2,3) - a bit better imo
2. 01:17:696 (2,3) - wow looks a bit too much for hard diff imo , consider lower spacing a bit
3. 01:50:423 (5,6,7,8,9) - looks a bit confusing for hard players maybe you cam try stack them all or just do the stream
4. 02:01:787 (5,1) - stack properly more better ?
5. 02:12:696 (6,1) - spacing should be bigger since (1) sound pretty emphasized
6. 02:18:378 (1,2,3,4) - flow might be a bit too hard for hard player here , consider ctrl+g 02:18:833 (2) - and 02:19:288 (3) - and then fix spacing a little bit
7. 02:23:378 (6,1) - stack properly ?
8. 02:25:196 (5,6) - looks a bit too much for hard diff imo
9. 03:59:742 (5,6,1) - would play better if spacing is a more bit consistent imo
10. 04:09:969 (3,4,5) - same
    
    mmm at the current state this diff looks much more like light insane here becasue the amout of different jumps and flow in here
    hard would need something like better spacing consistency here imo so ya

• wow just noticed that 1.6x slider velocity here which is same as insane imo you should lower the slider velocity here to something lower than the hard one , I guess lol so that it make the sv spread a bit good here and give a bit difference in slider velocity to each diffs

1. 00:07:470 (1,2) - lol better use 0.8x spacing for better consistent
2. 00:42:924 (4,5,1) - o looks like a little bit inconsistent in spacing here
3. 00:57:924 (3,1) - 0.8x spacing xd
4. 01:20:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlap like this is kinda hard for new player to read imo
5. 01:42:015 (1,2,3,4) - :s better check spacing consistency a bit , it recommended to use the same spacing on all notes in normal and lower diffs
6. 02:32:924 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as 01:20:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
7. 02:35:879 - wh why break time here when you also map this part in first kiai ?
8. 04:03:151 - same ^
9. 04:27:924 (4,1) - stack at tail ?
   
   so basically I think spacing consistency can be improved here it would be better if every notes have the same spacing here
   and also lower slider velocity a bit too kk

CelsiusLK wrote:

m4m as requested

[insane]

1. 00:08:606 (6,7) - make this a bit more zig zag like what you did previously so it would make this plays a bit better imo Done
2. 00:12:015 (1) - better add finish here then delete finish here 00:12:242 (2) - it sound a bit more consistent that way True sounds better this way
3. 00:20:197 (1,2) - 00:21:106 (4,5) - pretty confused to read here imo I thought it 1/4 when I play it lol , basically if you want manual stack here just decrease the spacing to like 0.1x-0.2x around here so that would make it looks like manual stack things more ( apply to others similiar notes too )I guess it can be confusing - fixed
4. 00:24:288 (2) - better do some jumps here so that make it a bit more consistent with 00:22:697 (2,3) -
5. 00:32:924 (1,2) - not quite a good idea to do the silenced sliderend here this is like some situation that silenced sliderend just not right here imo cus it doesn't looks like you emphasis anything after the low/empty 1/4 beat tho so that's some bad iead to use silenced sliderend Idk about that it just sound better with the silenced sliderend I removed the 5% volume but keep the soft sampleset
6. 00:36:560 (1,2,3,4) - flow is a bit weird here imo , I would do something like this instead
   SPOILER

   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
7. 00:42:015 (1,2) - , 00:42:924 (4,5) - sound overmap on 1/4 can't really hear anything on 1/4 , better use 1/2 here imo Trying to emphasise the guitar strokes and prepare for the "faster" section in the song
8. 00:44:174 (2,5) - sound overmap too lol , there is no sound on 1/4 fixed
9. 00:45:992 (2,5,2) - same , consider checking 1/4 things here and onward Tried to get more variation in but okay fixed it
10. 01:59:742 (4) - try place this one around x424 y40 ? that would make flow here 01:59:288 (3,4,1) - a bit better imo True
11. 02:02:470 (7,8) - can increase spacing a bit more since (8) sound pretty emphasized , increasing spacing will make things play better here imo Fixed
12. 03:08:833 (7,1) - imo would be better if this has more spacing than 03:08:606 (6,7) - since (1) sound pretty emphasized so try move (7) to around x256 y256 ? Good point - fixed it
13. 03:14:970 (1,2,3) - consistent spacing would play better here lol Ups my bad - fixed
14. 03:23:606 (6,1) - better make spacing here bigger than 03:23:379 (5,6) - so it make spacing a bit more consistent with the music , try move (6) to around x168 y192 ? Fixed
15. 04:12:470 (9,10,1) - consistent spacing would play better here imo Fixed
    
    I think spacing and flow can be improved a bit here
    also double check some 1/4 beat would be good , I think some 1/4 beat kinda feel overmap

[normal]

• wow just noticed that 1.6x slider velocity here which is same as insane imo you should lower the slider velocity here to something lower than the hard one , I guess lol so that it make the sv spread a bit good here and give a bit difference in slider velocity to each diffs Lowered it

1. 00:07:470 (1,2) - lol better use 0.8x spacing for better consistent 0.8x spacing? Folloowing is ~1x tho Used 1x spacing
2. 00:42:924 (4,5,1) - o looks like a little bit inconsistent in spacing here Fixed
3. 00:57:924 (3,1) - 0.8x spacing xd Fixed
4. 01:20:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlap like this is kinda hard for new player to read imo
5. 01:42:015 (1,2,3,4) - :s better check spacing consistency a bit , it recommended to use the same spacing on all notes in normal and lower diffs True
6. 02:32:924 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as 01:20:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
7. 02:35:879 - wh why break time here when you also map this part in first kiai ? Mapped it
8. 04:03:151 - same ^ Mapped
9. 04:27:924 (4,1) - stack at tail ? Not sure what you mean ?_? its (4,5) for me with (5) being the slider
   
   so basically I think spacing consistency can be improved here it would be better if every notes have the same spacing here
   and also lower slider velocity a bit too kk

good luck