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Izayoi Miku (CV:Chihara Minori) - My Treasure

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In April
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In April
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 23, 2015 at 11:26:23 PM

Artist: Izayoi Miku (CV:Chihara Minori)
Title: My Treasure
Source: Date A Live 2
Tags: DAL Izayoi Miku Seirei Stage Piano Instrumental Concert
BPM: 80
Filesize: 3016kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Concerto (2.32 stars, 239 notes)
  2. Lullaby (1.12 stars, 92 notes)
  3. Resonance (1.82 stars, 147 notes)
Download: Izayoi Miku (CV:Chihara Minori) - My Treasure
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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*some slight fixes with sliders, circles placement, replacing object to better fit the tempo.
*Hard increased almost all distances between objects
*Hard slider tick to 2
*improved offset
*more distribution tweaks
*aesthetical and geometrical improvements

after a month of being dead this isnt dead anymore, will continue to support this :lol:
*overhauled the general pacing, updated offset and improved comboing
*did some hitsounding
*oko histsounding done compeletely, as well as some other things

SUMONE MOD ME PLEASE ;w; ;-; >_<
Last edited by In April , edited 31 times in total.
ChenYa0Ayase
21 posts
Joined November 2013
ChenYa0Ayase
I'm not a good taster but try to find some strange to give you suggestion, I just can finish the Hard because the low BPM



00:25:663 (3,4) - a little strange , the note is follow the Vocal or BGM
00:31:663 (1) - same as the problem
00:58:663 (1,2,1,2) - here I prefer to use a slider to follow the Vocal
02:12:538 (3,4) - Strange tampo try to use the slider?

Thanks you for your testing :D
In April
26 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
In April

ChenYa0Ayase wrote:

I'm not a good taster but try to find some strange to give you suggestion, I just can finish the Hard because the low BPM

00:25:663 (3,4) - a little strange , the note is follow the Vocal or BGM
00:31:663 (1) - same as the problem
00:58:663 (1,2,1,2) - here I prefer to use a slider to follow the Vocal
02:12:538 (3,4) - Strange tampo try to use the slider?

Thanks you for your testing :D
thx for helping even though your english isnt perfect (>w<) , you made me notice some sharp points I missed for some reason
00:25:663 (3,4) - removed the three and moved slider one tick early+ extended it by one tick, looks good now
00:31:663 (1) - not sure what you mean previous(pink) combo is for piano and translates into this(orange) vocals
00:58:663 (1,2,1,2) - changed the first 2 notes to slider for now (will let it be unless increase in star rating is required), replaced next 2 circles into slider (for 2 piano accords) and made smooth translation for next circles into slider sequence.
02:12:538 (3,4) - noticed this slider was really off. moved it up instead of 3rd cirlce, and added a circle after for a smooth x3
thank you for your assistance, cheers
Feerum
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Joined August 2014
Feerum
Hi! From #modreqs

I love this song so i give you a (maybe only little) Mod :3

General:

Not my strenght but all look's fine!

Easy

Easy song's are not my strenght but i try it :3
tryed and nothing found. For me it is great!

Normal

Not sure about this one 01:01:851 (4) - . My suggestion: Make a slider from 01:01:663 - to 01:02:038 -
Thats all!


Hard

00:15:913 - maybe add here? It follow's great the Piano :)
00:28:663 (4) - this one maybe to a reverse?
Thats all! No other problems found :3

WoW... it was realy a little Mod.. sorry :(
BUT! Take my Star! Love this song!
Wish you good luck!
In April
26 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
In April

Feerum wrote:

Hi! From #modreqs

Easy

Easy song's are not my strenght but i try it :3
tryed and nothing found. For me it is great!

Normal

Not sure about this one 01:01:851 (4) - . My suggestion: Make a slider from 01:01:663 - to 01:02:038 -
Thats all!


Hard

00:15:913 - maybe add here? It follow's great the Piano :)
00:28:663 (4) - this one maybe to a reverse?
Thats all! No other problems found :3

WoW... it was realy a little Mod.. sorry :(
BUT! Take my Star! Love this song!
Wish you good luck!
good to see there are fans of DaL Miku here XD, maybe Ill map her other songs from the anime

Normal

01:01:851 (4) - this is actually a pretty big flaw by me. deleted 4 and replaced 3 into a smooth slider.

Hard

00:15:913 - replaced after slider sequence into 4x4 circles placed as 2 rhombus and transitioning into each other and slider next smoothly
00:28:663 (4) - interrupts smoothness a bit but its hard diff so I did it for now. will look out for further replies on this one.

Since you noticed quite big flaws of my bad detail awareness I still count your work as big for me :P thx and cheers
ChenYa0Ayase
21 posts
Joined November 2013
ChenYa0Ayase


retry no problem

GOOD!! :D
2015/2/19 PM 4:42 UTC+8
lehmakari
lehmakari
Easy :
00:25:857 - Make it a Long Slider The tone is not good


Normal :

00:28:669 - Add Clap
00:28:857 - Add Clap





HARD :


00:35:288 to 00:37:294


MAKE IT JUMPS


00:07:294 - Add Clap.
00:08:794 - Add Clap ..
00:10:294 - Add Clap ...

00:17:044 - Add Whistle hmm.

00:17:794 - Add Clap!


02:29:802 - Add Finish..

STR /Slider Tick Rate : 2


ON HARD DIFFICULTY!
In April
26 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
In April

lehmakari wrote:

Easy :
00:25:857 - trying that out, will see future feedback


HARD :

00:35:288 to 00:37:294

MAKE IT JUMPS - Increased the overall spacing of hard to pump up difficulty a bit

02:29:802 - cant, beacuse thats the last actual beat, after that music fade sout

STR /Slider Tick Rate : 2 - dont feel its nessessary
Regarding all the additional hitsounds suggestions - this is a calm and quiet song, and all defaut hitsounds seem more like a disturbance, so I decline for now
Thank you for you help, cheers
lehmakari
lehmakari
No problem ;) everytime!
AndRay2014
28 posts
Joined December 2014
AndRay2014
Hi, from mod 4 mod. Sorry 4 the lag.
Please note (as my signature says) EVERYTHING I'll post here is only a personal opinion or a wiki guideline (or something like that)
Please answer this mod so I can improve my modding abilities

General Topics:
-You should place some hitsounding. You can add custom hitsounds if you think these doesn't match
(if you don't know how to do it feel free to ask me and I'll send a link with a tutorial)
-Hard is too low Star Rating, so you should re-name it "Normal +" or something, or make it more difficult.

Easy
00:12:538 (1) - Maybe making this slider more symmetrical?

01:06:538 (1,2) - These two may sound better shifted 1/2 beat earlier
01:11:788 - Add a note here?

01:42:538 (1) - In this point maybe it's better to make something that reflects the up's and down's of the tone
Suggestion: A group of circles on the high points

02:00:538 (3,4,5) - Perhaps a better alignment?
Normal
00:08:419 - Maybe add a note here?

00:21:544 (4) - I would instead use curving to mark variation on tone etc. A single curve is fine here.

00:45:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section is also nice but maybe respect Distance Snapping

01:13:669 (4) - This slider might sound better 1/4 beat longer

01:59:044 (1,2) - This might confuse beginners. Maybe a Ctrl+G?
Hard
00:12:538 (1,3) - Maybe not making them angulous...

01:13:669 (2) - This slider sounds too short, same as Normal

01:33:169 (5,6,7) - This section sounded somewhat stange (mostly personal opinion) Maybe fusing 6 and 7...

Thanks for reading and good luck on ranking! ;)
In April
26 posts
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Topic Starter
In April

AndRay2014 wrote:

General Topics:
-You should place some hitsounding. You can add custom hitsounds if you think these doesn't match (im considering it, but like I said before, Its quite a slow slow and not that loud, so Ill think about it)
-Hard is too low Star Rating, so you should re-name it "Normal +" or something, or make it more difficult. (this song itself is a bit restrictive on how far can I extend it, but im planning to up the hard rating atleast by 0.10)

Easy
00:12:538 (1) - Maybe making this slider more symmetrical? (it is, relevant to next slider after it)

01:06:538 (1,2) - These two may sound better shifted 1/2 beat earlier (good note, moved them to red ticks, will tweak ending points)
01:11:788 - Add a note here? (did that and added circles overall in chorus, feels smoothly now despite being easy)

01:42:538 (1) - In this point maybe it's better to make something that reflects the up's and down's of the tone
Suggestion: A group of circles on the high points (did that for now, will see how other people react)

02:00:538 (3,4,5) - Perhaps a better alignment?(tweaked slightly)

Normal
00:08:419 - Maybe add a note here?(agree, did that)

00:21:544 (4) - I would instead use curving to mark variation on tone etc. A single curve is fine here. (the sound waving here is very slight, dont think there is a need to do that)

00:45:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section is also nice but maybe respect Distance Snapping(for me the distances here seem good enough not to be late, so Ill wont change it for now)

01:13:669 (4) - This slider might sound better 1/4 beat longer(I tried different variants, but this one still looks perfect to me)

01:59:044 (1,2) - This might confuse beginners. Maybe a Ctrl+G?(the second slider is a part of its own sequence, its not following up the slider from combo before)[/b]

Hard
00:12:538 (1,3) - Maybe not making them angulous... [b](not sure if thats a real issue, I will see if I can make them wavy and if it will feel good)

01:13:669 (2) - This slider sounds too short, same as Normal (once again, extending by one tick makes it even weirder for me)

01:33:169 (5,6,7) - This section sounded somewhat stange (mostly personal opinion) Maybe fusing 6 and 7 (moved the slider up by tick instead of 6)...


Thanks for reading and good luck on ranking! ;)
thanks for help, cheers
kunka
1,566 posts
Joined July 2012
kunka
From Mod Queues～^^

General
※Artist:change.誘宵美九(Izayoi Miku (CV:茅原実里))."Go Sakabe" is the composer.
※Rhythm:triple measure(3/4)??I think it's quadruple measure(4/4)^^;
※Please the Kiai time.What do you say to this time?↓
　start 01:36:544 - end 01:47:794 ,and start 02:00:544 - end 02:11:794
※Please hit sound.
Easy
※CS3.8 → 3
※Song setup → Design → Letterbox during breaks unavailable.
※Slider Verocity:It think too late.0.5 → 0.8.
※Check in "Ai Mod" using the Distance Snap.Please try to check it with a "check mark."

00:17:794 (3) - slider end point 00:19:294 ,and add slider 00:20:044 (4) - start 00:20:794 - end.
I think the one who picked up a little more sound becomes a good feeling.

00:21:544 (5) - reverse change.and 00:24:544 (6) - delete.

00:25:669 (1,1) - It is a little boring.What do you say to this position?↓
00:25:294 (7) - add circle
00:25:669 (1) - move 00:26:044 (1) - end 00:26:794
00:27:544 (2) - add slider 00:29:044 - end.
00:29:794 (3) - add circle.


00:37:669 (1) - slider change 00:38:419 - end.

00:44:794 (5) - add circle.

00:48:544 (5) - slider change 00:49:294 - end.
It is easy to go to the next 00:49:669 (1)

00:49:669 (1) - Here also I think a little boring.I will in the same manner as described above or end point change 00:53:044

00:54:544 (3) - slider change 00:55:294 - end.

01:06:169 (1,2) - Please shift to 1/2 beat right.

01:17:044 (4) - slider change 01:17:794 - end.

01:18:544 (1) - Change is want.change 4 beat reverse.and add slider 01:22:294 (2) - end 01:23:044
01:23:044 (2) - delete.


02:05:794 (6) - add circle.

02:06:169 (1) - move 02:06:544 (1) - end 02:07:294
I think here in the 1/2 beat snap does not match.
Normal
※HP5 → 4,AR5 → 4,OD5 → 4."5" I think it was certainly out of the standard.http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
※Song setup → Design → Letterbox during breaks unavailable.and Widescreen Support unavailable.
※Check in "Ai Mod" using the Distance Snap.Please try to check it with a "check mark."
※Because you are in accordance with the rhythm of song, 1/4 beat start and end are noticeable.
　That pointed out is a lot.It does not matter to ask them to ignore if it is not necessary.

00:18:544 (2) - slider change 00:18:544 - end

00:20:794 (4) - add 1/2 beat slider.

00:25:294 (2) - add circle,and 00:25:669 (3) - Please shift to 1/2 beat right.
It is easy to go into rhythm.

00:40:294 (6) - add circle,and 00:40:669 (1) - Please shift to 1/2 beat right.end point 00:42:544

00:58:857 (4) - slider change 00:59:794 - end.

01:00:544 (3) - end point 01:02:044

01:04:857 (4) - slider change 01:05:794 - end.

01:13:669 (4) - end point 01:14:044

01:19:669 (2) - ^ 01:20:044

01:30:919 (2) - add 1/2 beat slider.
Rhythm is the easy take.

01:37:669 (3) - add circle,and 01:38:044 (4) - 1 beat slider change,and 01:38:794 (5) - delete.
Rhythm is the easy take.


01:40:669 (2) - ^

02:12:544 (3) - 1 beat slider change.
Hard
※Song setup → Design → Letterbox during breaks unavailable.and Widescreen Support unavailable.

00:14:419 (1) - NC delete.00:15:544 (4) - NC,and 00:15:919 (1) - NC delete.
Sound is is hard to take.Change please.

00:34:857 (6) - slider change 00:35:419 - end,and 00:35:419 (1) - delete.
It is easy to go into rhythm.

00:38:794 (8) - 1/2 beat slider change,and 00:39:544 (9) - add 1 beat slider.


01:04:857 (6) - slider change 01:05:794 - end.

01:37:669 (5,1) - Let's change a little difficult.01:37:669 (5,6) - add circle,and 01:38:044 (7) - 1/2 beat slider.


02:12:357 (3) - add circle.

02:14:044 (6) - 1 beat slider change,and 02:14:794 (1) - delete.


I think there is room for overall improvement still.Good luck. :)
shioty
31 posts
Joined January 2015
shioty
Can i Guest Diff

If you allowed me to i will name the diff Amiel's Treasure
In April
26 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
In April

Amielits wrote:

Can i Guest Diff

If you allowed me to i will name the diff Amiel's Treasure
Sure why not (>w<) pm me for details
Exa
445 posts
Joined January 2015
Exa
Modding done:[size=150][/size]

[Concerto]

- Suggested custom, silent slider rolling sounds.
01:14:048 - Suggested for a slider to be expanded.
02:07:673 - Suggested for the 3 to be moved so the distance between it, 2 and 4 is equal.
02:17:048 - Same as the above for the 4.
- Provided own opinion.

All modding was provided using the in-game chat.

Chat log:
SPOILER
13:12 Exahilosys: Alright, first this part 00:14:423 - is too hard for a player of this level >.<
13:12 Exahilosys: better use a slider there
13:12 In April: which will further decrease SR and will end up in a never ending circle XD
13:14 Exahilosys: I also don't think the sr will decrease that much from that
13:14 Exahilosys: let me see
13:15 In April: 2.32>2.27
13:15 Exahilosys: yeah, I just saw, still if it is over 2.25 it is considered a normal dif.
13:15 Exahilosys: so its ok
13:16 In April: except sr is really inacurate and not that important
13:16 In April: atleast thats the though for half of moderinos
13:16 Exahilosys: Well, it is importanit if you are planning on getting it ranked
13:16 Exahilosys: the map
13:17 Exahilosys: actually, this is considered a hard dif.
13:17 Exahilosys: over 2.25 is hard
13:17 In April: well duh
13:17 Exahilosys: and below 3.75
13:17 Exahilosys: XD
13:18 In April: this is already much easier than I would want it to be
13:18 Exahilosys: oh, ok then better keep that part
13:18 In April: but the song itself doesnt allow for much crazy stuff
13:18 Exahilosys: Um, why not put a silent background for the sliders by the way?
13:19 In April: you mean the "rolling"
13:19 Exahilosys: yup
13:19 In April: didnt think about it
13:19 In April: maybe
13:19 Exahilosys: Do you know how to do it?
13:20 In April: I guess it involves things similar to custom sounding
13:20 Exahilosys: yup
13:20 Exahilosys: its not that hard
13:20 In April: then I ll figure it out
13:20 Exahilosys: Do you want me to help you with it?
13:20 In April: nah
13:20 Exahilosys: ok :)
13:20 In April: I researched sounding a bit
13:21 Exahilosys: alright then
13:21 In April: please continue
13:21 In April: time is honey
13:21 Exahilosys: and for here 01:14:048 - no matter the singning, I think the slider sould end here
13:21 Exahilosys: it still matches the vocalist so..
13:22 In April: o_o
13:22 Exahilosys: ?
13:23 In April: youre right
13:23 Exahilosys: :)
13:23 In April: in a sense
13:23 Exahilosys: and try moving that 3 02:07:673 - so the distance between it, 2 and 4 is equal
13:24 In April: yus
13:25 Exahilosys: same goes for the 4 here - 02:17:048 try making the spacing between it as big as the spacing between the and of 2 and 3
13:25 Exahilosys: even though their times are further away
13:25 Exahilosys: 02:17:048 -
13:26 In April: certainly
13:26 Exahilosys: And thats all I had to point out :D
13:26 Exahilosys: As for my opinion, this map is a vert relaxing one, it also has pretty good spacing
13:27 In April: well
13:27 In April: despite being my first srs one
13:27 In April: I redid like 50% after a minth
13:27 In April: month*
13:27 Exahilosys: And it came out pretty good so.. its alright :p
walaowey
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walaowey
Hi >w</
As I have promise earlier :D

Shot a for you ;)
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