00:26:254 (5,1) Maybe you should move (1) up so it blanks with (5) I'd like to not have them blanket as I feel like that'd make it look a bit too crowded
00:42:553 (2,3) I think they should start on the white tick I'm following the vocals with those so starting them on the red tick should be fine
01:37:592 (4) You should move this one, its too close to the hp bar moved the whole section down a bit c:
00:20:348 (3,4,5) Too hard for a normal. Try one 1/2 slider and 1 circle there instead
00:34:994 (3) Move this one a bit up done c:
00:41:608 (2,4) Im unsure about this overlap I honestly don't think that this one is too ugly, though I'd agree that having stuff overlap is not optimal
00:45:624 (1) - 00:56:962 (1) That part is a bit more like a Normal. Delete some circles, then it should be okay
01:00:742 (1) - 01:10:191 (1) ^
01:26:962 (8) Delete this one for a little break great idea!
01:28:380 (2,3,4) Same as 00:20:348 (3,4,5)
01:53:655 (1) - 02:04:994 (1) Too hard
02:08:773 (1) - 02:36:884 (1) ^
02:53:892 - 03:07:829 ^
I'm just gonna shorten this down a bit by saying that I disagree with the 'too hard' part of your mod. I do realise that the not density is quite high for a normal, essentially making it a Normal+ but I'm fine with that. I had looooots of people testplay this (including very new players too) and none of them had a problem with the note density.