Hi FlamingRok!
Request from Sandwych's modding queue.
[General]
Yes yes yes! Thanks for this music, it's so good to see some Rayman 1. \:D/
Anyway
Nb :
~ = Around here
+ = And further
++ = And way further
I'm not sure if the BG size is good, i mean it's 4:3, but maybe this should be 16:9, maybe it should be a 1366 x 768 bg size.
Before modding it, i'm also not sure if the map is 1/3 because 71 is not dividable by 3. Owell nvm it seems so.
The kiai should really start at 00:20:784 and not after. Starting on a red tick is not common and logic.
[Spread (value)]
- Futsuu doesn't got enough notes. (+30 from katan, + 70 to muzukashii), maybe add around 20 notes, i'm gonna help you on further
[Kantan]
I know the map has a low bpm, but the SV is quite fast imo, also you're usiing SV change, which i bet is not really allowed on easy diff, consider at least delete this 1.30 & 1.50 SV changes.
00:19:939 : Still searching why this note. To be deleted imo.
00:21:207 : I don't know why you did use a finish, there's no difference on the sound imo even if it's a bit higher.
00:23:742 : Same.
Oh well this is the same for the others finishers so i guess do what you want. But i'm not sure this is the best choice to do. Imo 00:34:305 and this kind of big white ticks are the best place use finishers.
00:30:502 : Imo i don't find this is a suitable place for a k here, you're making non sense with the 2 next objects. My advise is to move it 1/2 earlier or simply delete it, imo you should delete it since you did a 3/2 spacing at 00:36:418.
00:41:066 : But here this is clearly a place to get a D, + you're finising you're kiai at leat put a note here.
00:48:249+ : This part gets more objects than the kiai itself (27 on 20 secs (i'm not counting the spinner) on kiai time, 17 on 10 secs on the last section), maybe delete some.
00:49:939 : Like this one, which can be deleted.
00:57:545 : Imo you should turn this to d, it sounds better.
Hard to map a kantan on this one.
[Futsuu]
Same thing as kantan about you're SV, even if it's interesting, it's confusing for new players.
00:10:221 & 00:11:911 : Kantan got some d notes here, so you should do here too.
00:14:024 : You got some notes around here on kantan, so this needs ones here imo.
00:16:559 : You should add a d here, some batterty.
00:20:784 : Imo, delete this 2 notes and adding a d here, is worth, and easier to follow since you're starting on a white line for hidden players.
00:27:122 : Well i don't like this doublet too, you should replacing this 2 kk by a d at 00:27:545, it's more east and consistent with the other patterns. Also this is a legit place for a finisher.
00:29:657 : here why not a doublet instead of 1/2? I mean the second at 00:29:939 like you did on each time.
00:30:502 : I'm not fan of this note but more like you did on katan (meaning have a d at 00:30:925).
00:31:629 : And here you can k.
00:33:038 : Really, this finishers are uncormfortable T_T
00:33:319 : And here you can add a d.
00:34:305 : This a more suitable place for a finsher than after on you're doublets and it sounds better.
00:41:066 : D, and this is a more suitable place than before for finishers.
00:41:488+ : Turn theses d to k since you did it on kantan, muzu and futsuu.
00:42:756 : Add a d here for the battery.
00:49:939 : Here you can double, fit better with the music.
00:54:164 : I advise you to delete this one and putting a finisher on the next note instead of the last one.
00:55:010 : And without finishers, this has to be turned to k.
[Muzukashii]
00:14:446 : This kind of SV change is really confuse for players, really. Imo the best way to increase the SV is to do it smothly, ticks per ticks, i invite to do look at some of my map
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/264227 -> On the Oni one, i use to make some SV change, and by this way, it's more elegant.
00:25:885 : A bit hidden spinner.
00:41:066 : Of course get a D here.
00:41:770 : Double quint out of kiaii. This a bit dumb when you dodn't use even triplets on the kiai time. xD
00:53:722 & 00:54:024 : You can add d there.
[Oni]
HP +1 since you've the same diff option than Muzukashii.
00:13:038 : You should turn this to kddkk like the previous one in order to make 2 / 2 on pattern style which is more consistent.
00:27:122 : Turn this one to k coz of the bass.
00:27:404 : You can also turn this one too, as you want.
00:41:066 : Of course get a D here.
[Spread]
00:19:094 ~ (Futsuu - Muzukashii - Oni) : You're fulling notes on this void part on Oni but neither on Futsuu and Muzu ones, you should add some on the muzu.
00:25:010 ~ (All) : Wow you got a spinner on kantan and Muzu but neither on Oni and Futsuu, there something wrong here. Maybe don't use a spinner on muzukashii and replace by notes.
00:48:390++ (Katan - Futsuu - Muzukashii) : This part is the same in terms of objetcs between katan and futsuu, which create a spread issue with muzukashii, imo you should add some notes on futsuu one.
Anyway that's all i've to say, gl hf on ranking.